Hoshino Gen - Koi (TV Size)

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2019年2月1日 at 23:53:27

Artist: Hoshino Gen
Title: Koi (TV Size)
Source: 逃げるは恥だが役に立つ
Tags: Nigeru ha Hajidaga Yaku ni Tatsu short ver version drama The Full-Time Wife Escapist Kamiya
BPM: 158
Filesize: 16373kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2.21 stars, 150 notes)
  2. Insane (3.39 stars, 233 notes)
  3. Kamiya's Hard (3.09 stars, 204 notes)
  4. Koi (3.97 stars, 310 notes)
  5. Normal (1.5 stars, 103 notes)


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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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大好きな君へ
夫婦を超えてゆけ!
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谢谢papapa帮忙压的视频 ;)
Hard by Kamiya
[Kamiya]
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 48518
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:Koi
TitleUnicode:恋
Artist:Hoshino Gen
ArtistUnicode:星野源
Creator:Cocytus
Version:Kamiya's Hard
Source:逃げるは恥だが役に立つ
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Melt
:3

[Easy]
  • 00:23:075 (3) - 不知道你这个clap是不是故意的,不过我觉得可能有点违和。
    类似的还有00:30:670 (1) - 00:32:569 (3) - 01:06:366 (4) -
    01:02:189 (3,4) - 虽然3是更好的压了vocal,不过我觉得ez的话节奏还是可以像00:56:113 (2,3) - 一样处理。


[Normal]
  • 其实我觉得滑条速度有点快,和Hard一样是1.4了。
    00:36:177 (1) - 这里音效换成Finish试试呢。
    00:47:284 (1) - 人声的话感觉从00:47:189就开始了,所以我觉得圈其实放在00:47:379开始比较好,然后在00:48:139结束。
    01:02:379 - 这里放个circle怎么样(
    另外感觉还是有好多随机的clap


[Kamiya's Hard]
  • SliderTick感觉改成1好些。
    00:11:493 (6) - 感觉可以跟前面的4、5放一样的音效。
    00:12:063 (1) - 这个用normal音效的话感觉音量可以稍微调小一点。
    00:14:911 (3) - 因为vocal是从这里开始的,所以我觉得这种节奏可能要好些。
    00:23:455 (6) - 感觉这个clap可以不要。
    00:27:253 (7) - 可以吧00:28:012 (1) - 的nc挪到这里来,后面也稍微调整一下。
    00:45:860 (1) - 上个Finish或者换成normal音效把whistle去掉感觉比较好。
    00:54:404 (7,8) - 其实个人觉得这两个跳的没什么道理。


[Hard]
  • 00:40:923 (4) - 其实我觉得这个还不如直接放到下面去。
    还是觉得有些clap有点奇怪,比如这个00:23:075 (1) - ,其他应该没啥。

[Insane]
  • 00:32:759 (4,5) - 个人觉得两个都弄成直滑条可能会好些。
    00:35:987 (6) - 放到[429,267]附近看看效果了。
    00:40:354 (2,3,4) - 其实我比较喜欢00:36:936 (2,3,4) - 空一拍的节奏,所以倾向于这里跟前面放一样的节奏。
    00:49:278 (2) - 放到[179,369]看看呢。
    01:22:696 (2,3,4) - 试试看这个节奏行不行。
:)
harmanjit102
Hey! Heres my part of the M4M

[Normal]
  1. 00:39:025 (6,1) - Try to avoid overlaps like this
  2. 00:43:012 (2,3) - The structure/flow of these two sliders could be improved, 00:43:582 (3) - maybe try to rotate this slider clockwise a bit
  3. 00:46:999 (2,3,1) - These notes and a sudden slider may be confusing to new players because this is a low difficulty
    Overall love the patterns that you used in this difficulty :)

[Hard]
  1. 00:15:480 (1,2,3,4,5) - The flow of these notes seems a bit messy imo, it feels a bit odd
  2. 00:16:809 (1,2) - Your distance snapping between these two notes is not the same as all your other notes

[Insane]
  1. I feel like for the insane difficulty you could map the beginning of the song, instead of having it empty? Its up to you tho :)
  2. 00:12:822 (2) - I don't see why you have a sharp end to your slider? Usually you would do this when there is a sudden change in vocals or you want to emphasize something in the vocals
  3. 00:18:139 (6,1,2,3,4) - The overlaps in these notes looks messy
  4. 00:56:113 (5,1) - You could move the end of slider 5 on top of the beginning of slider 1
  5. 00:57:822 (1,1) - ^
Love the hitsounds in all your difficulties! Anyways good luck, your map looks great!
Topic Starter
015
fixed all
S o a p
先射后摸
[Global]
,我开AIMOD看到很多物件没对齐时间轴

[Insane]
00:19:847 (7,3) - 对齐
00:51:177 (3,4) - 3的clap用个note好一点
01:03:328 (3) - ^
01:04:468 (2) - 歌曲没什么需要折返的地方,反而01:04:847 - 这个地方音调升高感觉可以放个跳
01:31:050 (5,6,7,8,9) - 歪了

[Hard]
00:40:544 (3,4) - 在给HD玩家搞事情
00:43:012 (1) - 同感觉并不是需要折返的地方(

[Advanced]
和normal一样,下NC的间隔有点大。whyyyyy
00:24:025 (1) - 对称
00:25:734 (4) - 对齐

这歌真好听哇!!11
[Kamiya]

Melt wrote:

:3

[Kamiya's Hard]
  • SliderTick感觉改成1好些。
    00:11:493 (6) - 感觉可以跟前面的4、5放一样的音效。 clear
    00:12:063 (1) - 这个用normal音效的话感觉音量可以稍微调小一点。clear
    00:14:911 (3) - 因为vocal是从这里开始的,所以我觉得这种节奏可能要好些。clear
    00:23:455 (6) - 感觉这个clap可以不要。clear
    00:27:253 (7) - 可以吧00:28:012 (1) - 的nc挪到这里来,后面也稍微调整一下。clear
    00:45:860 (1) - 上个Finish或者换成normal音效把whistle去掉感觉比较好。clear
    00:54:404 (7,8) - 其实个人觉得这两个跳的没什么道理。再考虑
:)
谢摸妹儿。

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168,240,83835,6,0,P|152:296|168:344,1,105.000004005432,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,339,84594,2,0,P|360:289|344:240,1,105.000004005432,6|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,144,85354,6,0,P|248:200|256:232,1,78.7500030040742,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,248,85734,2,0,P|272:288|264:328,1,78.7500030040742,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,352,86113,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,256,86398,1,2,0:3:0:0:
288,192,86683,1,0,1:0:0:0:
288,192,86873,2,0,P|360:168|416:192,1,140,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,352,87632,2,0,L|288:336,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,320,88012,1,2,3:0:0:0:
64,232,88392,6,0,P|40:160|64:96,1,140,6|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
216,40,89151,2,0,P|248:88|248:136,2,105,2|0|0,0:3|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
160,104,89911,2,0,L|184:248,1,140,6|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
352,256,90670,6,0,L|368:224,3,35,0|0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
360,184,91050,2,0,L|376:152,3,35,0|0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,91430,6,0,P|368:88|296:80,1,105,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,216,91809,2,0,P|288:208|328:160,1,105,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
015

S o a p wrote:

先射后摸
[Global]
,我开AIMOD看到很多物件没对齐时间轴 修好了

[Insane]
00:19:847 (7,3) - 对齐
00:51:177 (3,4) - 3的clap用个note好一点 有点怪
01:03:328 (3) - ^ 有点怪
01:04:468 (2) - 歌曲没什么需要折返的地方,反而01:04:847 - 这个地方音调升高感觉可以放个跳
01:31:050 (5,6,7,8,9) - 歪了 微调了一下

[Hard]
00:40:544 (3,4) - 在给HD玩家搞事情 嘿嘿嘿
00:43:012 (1) - 同感觉并不是需要折返的地方( 还好吧

[Advanced]
和normal一样,下NC的间隔有点大。whyyyyy 分开点好康
00:24:025 (1) - 对称 大概修好了
00:25:734 (4) - 对齐 技术性调整

这歌真好听哇!!11
谢摸图 :D
另外你的作文差了几篇了,什么时候写?
papapa213
哦哦!牛逼,喜欢这歌,先射一星

[General]
offset应该是在316

加上背景视频吧,我压了一个,这个大小应该没问题而且比较清晰了https://pan.baidu.com/s/1c2cuZj6

[Normal]
00:10:736 (2) - 我觉得不如在00:11:495 - 也用finish
00:13:963 (4) - 不如拉到00:14:533 - 然后在00:15:103 - 放个单点?我感觉这段一直1/1不是很好
00:17:571 - 像这种音我觉得都可以让滑条尾在这里停一下,很合曲而且还有点空拍,不然这一段有点塞的太满了
00:21:938 - 明显有音,改成折返吧
00:23:837 (4) - 我觉得像是这样↓

00:32:571 (3,4,5) - 三个单点给人感觉不太好,建议换个别的节奏
00:35:609 - 这里你确定要空过去吗?00:35:609 - 放个单点然后00:35:989 - 放个1/2滑条吧
00:47:571 - 00:47:951 - 我不觉得这两个音应该空掉↓

你前面从00:12:444 - 到00:35:229 - 的非kiai段没有空拍,00:51:368 - 到了kiai这里反而空了,感觉不是很好,更何况00:51:368 - 00:51:558 - 这两个音很重了,我想不到什么理由空掉这里去跟人声,00:51:179 (5) - 不如直接弄个1/2折返.
00:54:976 (1) - 这里长滑条不太好吧,前面两个地方都是1/2折返
00:59:343 (3) - 我觉得节奏应该是这样↓

01:02:191 (3,4) - 节奏一直在变不知道怎么回事,我觉得和还是前后一致了吧00:48:900 (1,2) -
呃,我建议重新改一下kiai的节奏 :(

[Advanced]
sv可能有点快了
我觉得跟轨有点乱
00:10:356 - 加个note吧 前面00:06:938 (2) - 00:08:457 (6) - 都加了,我感觉这里的趋势是加一个
00:12:444 (1) - 我觉得应该是00:12:444 - 单点然后00:12:824 - 放1/1滑条?感觉finish应该加在00:12:824 - 人声上
00:13:963 (4) - 去掉折返在00:14:534 - 加个note如何?
00:16:242 (3) - 停在00:16:432 - 如何?
00:17:381 (5,6) - 听起来感觉像是00:17:381 - 放单点,然后00:17:571 - 放1/1滑条,然后00:18:141 - 放单点
00:18:520 (1,2,3) - 如果想跟人声的话,建议00:18:520 - 单点,00:18:710 - 1/2折返,00:19:280 - 1/2滑条,00:19:660 - 单点
00:20:609 - 不论人声还是背景钢琴声我觉得都是应该在这放1/1滑条
00:26:685 (6) - 挪到00:26:685 - ,00:27:255 - 然后在这加个1/2滑条或者单点都行
00:28:394 (3) - ^
00:29:153 (4) - 呃,你前面00:16:811 (4) - 可不是这么放的,统一一下吧
00:30:672 (1,2,3) - 和前面统一,如果你改前面就把这里改成一样吧
00:32:761 (5) - 拉到00:33:141 - 吧
00:51:179 - 还是建议在这里放1/2折返
00:57:255 - 同
00:57:824 (1,3) - 这弯度不一样吧,而且我觉得这里用弯度这么大的滑条不太好看
00:58:394 (2) - 改成滑条吧,这里空着我觉得不太舒服
01:00:293 (5) - 建议用两个1/2滑条
01:02:381 - 漏了00:53:267 (4) - ?
01:03:330 - ^后面不说了
01:09:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 前面这里节奏很满,而且跟人声,01:16:052 - 这里应该顺势也加个音
01:16:052 (1) - ^
01:26:115 - 这里放个3/4折返吧,或者什么其他的,总之跟上01:26:400 - 01:26:685 - 的音
01:29:153 - ^

[Hard]
00:16:811 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得像这样↓

00:18:520 (1,2,3,4,5) - 感觉不是很好,2345是人声,1却和后面用的同一种flow,试试把1stack在2上面
00:19:849 (7) - 建议用1/1滑条
00:20:609 (3) - 建议用滑条
00:27:634 (1,4) - overlap有点难看,试试这样,顺便你这里节奏又和00:16:811 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不一样...我觉得低难度里这样不是很好
00:29:153 (1,2,3) - 钝角flow不是很舒服,建议把3放到下面
01:31:811 (1,1) - 不好打,建议改成滑条

[四萌]
00:14:913 (3) - 我觉得00:14:913 - 空掉然后在00:15:103 - 放滑条
00:17:571 (7) - 去掉折返会不会好点?感觉塞得有点满而且00:17:951 - 也没音
00:18:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 听起来像是主跟伴奏,那这样会不会好一些?↓

00:20:419 (7,8) - 间距有点过分
00:26:685 (5) - NC?
00:30:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:54:406 (7,8,1) - 7和8是1/2间距这么大然后紧接着是1/1stack,这种在hard是不是不太好,01:06:558 (7,8) - 然后这里又不跳了,建议把前面改成后面这种
01:06:748 (8,3) - 叠上呗
01:09:976 (1) - 这里没必要减速吧,这里人声声调比前面都高反而减速了我觉得不太好
01:26:115 (3,4,5) - 这不在1/2上的节奏单点有点难打,我觉得滑条或者折返滑条带过就行
01:31:432 (1,2) - hard里这种是不是有点搞事

[Insane]
00:18:710 (6) - NC
00:19:849 (11) - 和前面难度一样,建议这里用滑条
00:28:963 (6) - ^
00:38:457 (2,3) - 00:40:356 (2,3) - 00:41:685 (2,3,4) - 慢速段这种间距有点大了
00:53:457 (1,2) - 真的要这么放的话就摆的整齐一些↓

00:57:824 (1) - 可以再远一点
01:00:293 (4) - 这个音才是人声的最高音,所以在01:00:103 (3,4) - 跳达到最高值比较合适
01:18:520 (2) - 我觉得你应该再考虑一下这里
01:22:128 (8,1) - 或许应该更远一点

说的有点多,可能不是全对但是希望有一些是有用的吧,如果能帮到忙就好了 :(:(
我挺喜欢这个歌的,加油rank啊
gary00737
https://i.imgur.com/9RKA61r.png

^ 看一下...把該名字更正 不然下載的檔案永遠都開不到


[Insane]
00:17:761 (4,5) - 這間距來得太突然
01:29:438 (1,2,3,1) - 這個指法會變得好難 ,,,,因為01:29:153 (4,1) - 我會同樣按左鍵之後01:29:723 (1) - 會變成右鍵收尾 , 我會以為打錯 ((我打圖菜


[Hard]
00:25:736 (3,4) - ctrt+g 可能比較順暢
00:40:925 (4) - 放在 X:352 Y:352 可能比較好

01:26:495 (2,3,4,1) - 為什麼不跟這個一樣00:12:065 (4,5,6,7,1) - 感覺會比較好


[Kamiya's Hard]
00:30:293 (1) - 變速NC

00:20:419 (7,8) - 我覺得間距有點太大





我的結衣BB那麼可愛....送你一顆星
kanor
[Genal]
Unused hitsounds:
normal-sliderslide.wav

Hard的预览时间跟其他的diff不一样

[Normal]
00:07:128 (2,3) - 非常建议包一下
00:56:115 (2,3) - ^
01:08:267 (2,3,4,5) - 连续四个单点不是很推荐...这个在N里太难了
[Advanced]
0.9SV一下跳到了1.4....这和Hard的sv一样了,改成1.2吧
00:07:508 (4,5) - 和Normal一样的问题
[Kamiya]
00:54:786 - 这里还是跟上吧,感觉Hard的话这里没什么必要空出来
整体可以,就是有些跳看起来太大了,像是Insane的,比如00:59:153 (3,4) - 01:12:824 (3,4) - 跟整体的风格不太搭
[Hard]
直接改名叫Insane吧
00:47:191 (1) - 这里vocal明显高了起来,拉开下DS感觉是不是更合曲一点呢
00:47:191 (1) - 这里有一串鼓为什么不跟呢
Flow有点硬
[Insane]
00:35:229 (1,2,3,4) - 这里感觉是两组三连呀,怎么下的二连...
00:51:558 (4,1) - 这里如果你要叠的话最好再拉开一点,叠个3/4就可以了,现在这么看很像是你要stack又没弄好

感觉要rank的话,H和I都还要再改善一下
听这曲子莫名感觉要笑死了,意外地发现没有PP diff
GL~ :D
Yugu
emm.....打不开,你先按gary说的改,到时候我回来摸...
Ametrin
四萌找的M4M

[normal]
塞的也太满了 从00:12:444 - 到00:35:229 - 一个空拍都没有。。。你确定要拿这个做最低难度么orz
几乎全程1/1,可以搞点变化啊 比如00:13:963 (4) - 就可以拉到00:14:533 - ,00:23:837 (4) - 拉到00:24:027 - 就行
00:56:115 (2,3) - 包好
低难度建议至少塞一个转盘
摆的挺好 学不来

[Advanced]
神仙 看了十几秒觉得不会有问题(x

[Hard]
作为hard太难了
00:17:001 - 跟人声可以 但这个重音在尾巴还是难受
00:18:520 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议把1摆到2下侧 你这样连线没体现人声
顺便这个梗会不会太难了==
00:19:470 (6,7) - 节奏上ctrl+g 然后叠在滑条头上?
00:51:368 - 这个滑条尾就很尴尬了 至少把4叠在滑条尾啊
00:56:305 - 迷之空拍 你前面00:50:229 - 又没空
kiai里00:50:419 (1,2,3) - 这种部分的处理方式尽可能统一一下 老是换梗可能consistency要被说
节奏还可以在考虑下 建议少考虑点人声
摆的挺好 学不来

[Insane]
请把难度名改为Gakki my wife谢谢
00:12:824 (2) - 这个滑条画风突变?
00:17:761 (4,5) - 这个1/4间距有点大 容易出100
00:27:824 (2,4) - 强迫症雷达(
00:35:324 (2,4) - 放短滑条 别漏音
00:40:546 (3) - 空一怕
00:36:748 - 00:45:862 这一段音乐不激烈但是你节奏密度没下来
00:47:191 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这能忍……
00:51:558 (4,1) - 这种重叠的间距固定下 你看01:06:748 (4,1) - 就和前面不一样
01:14:723 - kiai断在这我也是很不懂……
01:31:432 (9) - NC
摆的挺好 学不来


学不来
Otosaka-Yu
22:00 Suzuki_1112: lai
22:00 [Kamiya]: lai
22:00 Suzuki_1112: 00:09:406 (1,2,3,4) - 整个走向往左一点会不会好点
22:00 Suzuki_1112: 00:09:027 (4,2) - 一来overlap有点难看
22:01 [Kamiya]: 我的难度?
22:01 Suzuki_1112: 对
22:01 [Kamiya]: 啥叫左一点
22:01 Suzuki_1112: 00:09:406 (1,2,3,4) - 如果往左一点,然后00:09:027 (4,2) - blanket一下
22:01 Suzuki_1112: 等我杰哥图
22:01 Suzuki_1112: 截个*
22:02 Suzuki_1112: http://puu.sh/ygPaq/01e8b2d684.jpg
22:03 Suzuki_1112: 而且对移动过程不是只往下,有多一点空间发挥
22:04 [Kamiya]: 平移吗
22:04 Suzuki_1112: 00:20:419 (7,8) - 这里的间距突然太大了
22:04 Suzuki_1112: 00:19:849 (6) - vocal的激烈程度比这个低
22:05 Suzuki_1112: 00:32:571 (7,8) - same
22:05 Suzuki_1112: 平移吗
22:05 Suzuki_1112: 对
22:06 [Kamiya]: 嗯
22:06 [Kamiya]: 好
22:07 Suzuki_1112: 00:54:786 - 这里有个音要不要补一下?
22:08 [Kamiya]: 补补补
22:08 Suzuki_1112: emm
22:08 [Kamiya]: 我还之前居然没听到
22:09 Suzuki_1112: 感觉有些位置对hard好像有点难
22:09 Suzuki_1112: 就是突然跳的一下
22:09 Suzuki_1112: 跳得有点大
22:09 [Kamiya]: 不慌
22:09 [Kamiya]: 大部分是ds
22:09 [Kamiya]: 我喜欢hard跳一哈
22:09 Suzuki_1112: 前两个我觉得还好
22:09 Suzuki_1112: 01:12:824 (3,4) - 这个我觉得好难啊
22:09 Suzuki_1112: 4 nc一下吧
22:09 Suzuki_1112: 前两个都有nc
22:10 Suzuki_1112: 01:31:432 (1,2) - 这两个我就认为太难了
22:11 Suzuki_1112: 不建议这么放
22:11 [Kamiya]: 哦
22:11 Suzuki_1112: 其他的就没什么了
22:11 [Kamiya]: 好些距离是比前一个远
22:11 [Kamiya]: 那我改单点?
22:11 [Kamiya]: 2改单点
22:11 Suzuki_1112: 可以的
22:12 Suzuki_1112: 我刚还在想这歌怎么这么耳熟
22:12 Suzuki_1112: 突然想起这是真人电视剧,电视上还做过预告
gl!
Topic Starter
015

papapa213 wrote:

哦哦!牛逼,喜欢这歌,先射一星

[General]
offset应该是在316

加上背景视频吧,我压了一个,这个大小应该没问题而且比较清晰了https://pan.baidu.com/s/1c2cuZj6

[Normal]
00:10:736 (2) - 我觉得不如在00:11:495 - 也用finish -不太好听
00:13:963 (4) - 不如拉到00:14:533 - 然后在00:15:103 - 放个单点?我感觉这段一直1/1不是很好 -试了一下感觉不太好
00:17:571 - 像这种音我觉得都可以让滑条尾在这里停一下,很合曲而且还有点空拍,不然这一段有点塞的太满了 -我好像不太习惯这样的
00:21:938 - 明显有音,改成折返吧 -nm难度我不是根据有没有音来做的
00:23:837 (4) - 我觉得像是这样↓ -其实这里蛮难改的,我想再看看

00:32:571 (3,4,5) - 三个单点给人感觉不太好,建议换个别的节奏 -换了个滑条上去
00:35:609 - 这里你确定要空过去吗?00:35:609 - 放个单点然后00:35:989 - 放个1/2滑条吧 -我觉得空着就好
00:47:571 - 00:47:951 - 我不觉得这两个音应该空掉↓ -我觉得这样对新手来说比较好理解

你前面从00:12:444 - 到00:35:229 - 的非kiai段没有空拍,00:51:368 - 到了kiai这里反而空了,感觉不是很好,更何况00:51:368 - 00:51:558 - 这两个音很重了,我想不到什么理由空掉这里去跟人声,00:51:179 (5) - 不如直接弄个1/2折返. -emmmm我再想想
00:54:976 (1) - 这里长滑条不太好吧,前面两个地方都是1/2折返 -没必要全一样
00:59:343 (3) - 我觉得节奏应该是这样↓ -难

01:02:191 (3,4) - 节奏一直在变不知道怎么回事,我觉得和还是前后一致了吧00:48:900 (1,2) - 总是会有人:“怎么前后不一致” “一个节奏太无聊”
呃,我建议重新改一下kiai的节奏 :(yada, 大丈夫 萌大奶

[Advanced]
sv可能有点快了 确实有点快
我觉得跟轨有点乱 还好啦
00:10:356 - 加个note吧 前面00:06:938 (2) - 00:08:457 (6) - 都加了,我感觉这里的趋势是加一个 -nah,这里跟前面感觉不一样的
00:12:444 (1) - 我觉得应该是00:12:444 - 单点然后00:12:824 - 放1/1滑条?感觉finish应该加在00:12:824 - 人声上 -可以是可以,但是加的地方不一样感觉也不一样,其实这两种感觉都好,我更喜欢我自己的这种
00:13:963 (4) - 去掉折返在00:14:534 - 加个note如何? -我觉得就应该是折返来着
00:16:242 (3) - 停在00:16:432 - 如何?-..nah
00:17:381 (5,6) - 听起来感觉像是00:17:381 - 放单点,然后00:17:571 - 放1/1滑条,然后00:18:141 - 放单点
00:18:520 (1,2,3) - 如果想跟人声的话,建议00:18:520 - 单点,00:18:710 - 1/2折返,00:19:280 - 1/2滑条,00:19:660 - 单点
00:20:609 - 不论人声还是背景钢琴声我觉得都是应该在这放1/1滑条
00:26:685 (6) - 挪到00:26:685 - ,00:27:255 - 然后在这加个1/2滑条或者单点都行
00:28:394 (3) - ^
00:29:153 (4) - 呃,你前面00:16:811 (4) - 可不是这么放的,统一一下吧
00:30:672 (1,2,3) - 和前面统一,如果你改前面就把这里改成一样吧
00:32:761 (5) - 拉到00:33:141 - 吧
00:51:179 - 还是建议在这里放1/2折返
00:57:255 - 同
00:57:824 (1,3) - 这弯度不一样吧,而且我觉得这里用弯度这么大的滑条不太好看 还好啦
00:58:394 (2) - 改成滑条吧,这里空着我觉得不太舒服 有点小紧张,还是算了
01:00:293 (5) - 建议用两个1/2滑条
01:02:381 - 漏了00:53:267 (4) - ? 不太明白/.\
01:03:330 - ^后面不说了
01:09:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 前面这里节奏很满,而且跟人声,01:16:052 - 这里应该顺势也加个音
01:16:052 (1) - ^
01:26:115 - 这里放个3/4折返吧,或者什么其他的,总之跟上01:26:400 - 01:26:685 - 的音
01:29:153 - ^

有些地方修过了,但是回复的时候手抽按了一下返回,一些回摸就没有了/.\ 时间有点小久,不记得自己写了啥了。。sry

[Hard]
00:16:811 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得像这样↓

00:18:520 (1,2,3,4,5) - 感觉不是很好,2345是人声,1却和后面用的同一种flow,试试把1stack在2上面 无妨
00:19:849 (7) - 建议用1/1滑条 小小拉开距离一点也没什么不好
00:20:609 (3) - 建议用滑条 感觉不是太要紧
00:27:634 (1,4) - overlap有点难看,试试这样,顺便你这里节奏又和00:16:811 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不一样...我觉得低难度里这样不是很好 前面改掉了
00:29:153 (1,2,3) - 钝角flow不是很舒服,建议把3放到下面 ……这里就是顺着上去的啊,不存在什么钝角flow
01:31:811 (1,1) - 不好打,建议改成滑条 还好吧,单点这节奏不过分的

[四萌]
00:14:913 (3) - 我觉得00:14:913 - 空掉然后在00:15:103 - 放滑条
00:17:571 (7) - 去掉折返会不会好点?感觉塞得有点满而且00:17:951 - 也没音
00:18:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 听起来像是主跟伴奏,那这样会不会好一些?↓

00:20:419 (7,8) - 间距有点过分
00:26:685 (5) - NC?
00:30:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:54:406 (7,8,1) - 7和8是1/2间距这么大然后紧接着是1/1stack,这种在hard是不是不太好,01:06:558 (7,8) - 然后这里又不跳了,建议把前面改成后面这种
01:06:748 (8,3) - 叠上呗
01:09:976 (1) - 这里没必要减速吧,这里人声声调比前面都高反而减速了我觉得不太好
01:26:115 (3,4,5) - 这不在1/2上的节奏单点有点难打,我觉得滑条或者折返滑条带过就行
01:31:432 (1,2) - hard里这种是不是有点搞事

[Insane]
00:18:710 (6) - NC
00:19:849 (11) - 和前面难度一样,建议这里用滑条 不是台币要的样子
00:28:963 (6) - ^
00:38:457 (2,3) - 00:40:356 (2,3) - 00:41:685 (2,3,4) - 慢速段这种间距有点大了 强调作用
00:53:457 (1,2) - 真的要这么放的话就摆的整齐一些↓ 00:53:837 (2) - 包 00:53:457 (1) - 的尾巴

00:57:824 (1) - 可以再远一点 差不多了
01:00:293 (4) - 这个音才是人声的最高音,所以在01:00:103 (3,4) - 跳达到最高值比较合适 不好排版
01:18:520 (2) - 我觉得你应该再考虑一下这里 找人听一下ing
01:22:128 (8,1) - 或许应该更远一点 到时候看一下

说的有点多,可能不是全对但是希望有一些是有用的吧,如果能帮到忙就好了 :(:(
我挺喜欢这个歌的,加油rank啊

gary00737 wrote:

https://i.imgur.com/9RKA61r.png

^ 看一下...把該名字更正 不然下載的檔案永遠都開不到 改了一下不知道还行不行


[Insane]
00:17:761 (4,5) - 這間距來得太突然 整体都改掉了
01:29:438 (1,2,3,1) - 這個指法會變得好難 ,,,,因為01:29:153 (4,1) - 我會同樣按左鍵之後01:29:723 (1) - 會變成右鍵收尾 , 我會以為打錯 ((我打圖菜 我感觉上不太准,到时候找人看看


[Hard]
00:25:736 (3,4) - ctrt+g 可能比較順暢 但是不太好玩
00:40:925 (4) - 放在 X:352 Y:352 可能比較好 更喜欢现在这样

01:26:495 (2,3,4,1) - 為什麼不跟這個一樣00:12:065 (4,5,6,7,1) - 感覺會比較好 那里好像没有音


[Kamiya's Hard]
00:30:293 (1) - 變速NC

00:20:419 (7,8) - 我覺得間距有點太大





我的結衣BB那麼可愛....送你一顆星

kanor wrote:

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Hard的预览时间跟其他的diff不一样

[Normal]
00:07:128 (2,3) - 非常建议包一下后面跟着的那里就没有包
00:56:115 (2,3) - ^ fixed
01:08:267 (2,3,4,5) - 连续四个单点不是很推荐...这个在N里太难了 改掉了
[Advanced]
0.9SV一下跳到了1.4....这和Hard的sv一样了,改成1.2吧
00:07:508 (4,5) - 和Normal一样的问题 ……这不是包啊,不一定都要包啊
[Kamiya]
00:54:786 - 这里还是跟上吧,感觉Hard的话这里没什么必要空出来
整体可以,就是有些跳看起来太大了,像是Insane的,比如00:59:153 (3,4) - 01:12:824 (3,4) - 跟整体的风格不太搭
[Hard]
直接改名叫Insane吧
00:47:191 (1) - 这里vocal明显高了起来,拉开下DS感觉是不是更合曲一点呢
00:47:191 (1) - 这里有一串鼓为什么不跟呢 没……没有啊……
Flow有点硬
[Insane]
00:35:229 (1,2,3,4) - 这里感觉是两组三连呀,怎么下的二连... 我听的是二连啊
00:51:558 (4,1) - 这里如果你要叠的话最好再拉开一点,叠个3/4就可以了,现在这么看很像是你要stack又没弄好

感觉要rank的话,H和I都还要再改善一下 I难度调了一下
听这曲子莫名感觉要笑死了,意外地发现没有PP diff
GL~ :D

Ametrin wrote:

四萌找的M4M

[normal]
塞的也太满了 从00:12:444 - 到00:35:229 - 一个空拍都没有。。。你确定要拿这个做最低难度么orz
几乎全程1/1,可以搞点变化啊 比如00:13:963 (4) - 就可以拉到00:14:533 - ,00:23:837 (4) - 拉到00:24:027 - 就行
00:56:115 (2,3) - 包好
低难度建议至少塞一个转盘
摆的挺好 学不来

[Advanced]
神仙 看了十几秒觉得不会有问题(x

[Hard]
作为hard太难了
00:17:001 - 跟人声可以 但这个重音在尾巴还是难受
00:18:520 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议把1摆到2下侧 你这样连线没体现人声
顺便这个梗会不会太难了==
00:19:470 (6,7) - 节奏上ctrl+g 然后叠在滑条头上?
00:51:368 - 这个滑条尾就很尴尬了 至少把4叠在滑条尾啊
00:56:305 - 迷之空拍 你前面00:50:229 - 又没空
kiai里00:50:419 (1,2,3) - 这种部分的处理方式尽可能统一一下 老是换梗可能consistency要被说
节奏还可以在考虑下 建议少考虑点人声
摆的挺好 学不来

[Insane]
请把难度名改为Gakki my wife谢谢
00:12:824 (2) - 这个滑条画风突变?
00:17:761 (4,5) - 这个1/4间距有点大 容易出100
00:27:824 (2,4) - 强迫症雷达(
00:35:324 (2,4) - 放短滑条 别漏音
00:40:546 (3) - 空一怕
00:36:748 - 00:45:862 这一段音乐不激烈但是你节奏密度没下来
00:47:191 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这能忍……
00:51:558 (4,1) - 这种重叠的间距固定下 你看01:06:748 (4,1) - 就和前面不一样
01:14:723 - kiai断在这我也是很不懂……
01:31:432 (9) - NC
摆的挺好 学不来


学不来

remap了一些地方也不知道re掉没【。】
谢谢摸图
darsparx
Just played through it on easy, I like it. Good job! :D

I randomly discovered this song on youtube a week ago and it's quickly become one of my favorite songs as of late and never seen the show keep discovering shows and maps like this ;)
Topic Starter
015

darsparx wrote:

Just played through it on easy, I like it. Good job! :D

I randomly discovered this song on youtube a week ago and it's quickly become one of my favorite songs as of late and never seen the show keep discovering shows and maps like this ;)
Thank you :D
smallboat
[Normal]

01:20:441 (2) - 這大白線加個finish音效似乎重音效果可以表達的出來 (要加的話記得給所有難度都加)

[Kamiya's Hard]

00:20:441 (7,8) - 這個距離跳需要放小一點,因為Ins沒跳得這麼遠,這樣比較一下挺懸殊的建議改一下。
01:07:909 (3) - Stack沒處理好
01:26:707 (5,6) - 如果選取這兩個然後用01:25:378 (1) - 包住,應該比較好看。

[Koi]

00:53:479 (1,2) - 感覺弧形包一下比較好,這樣看起來有點粗糙。
[Kamiya]

smallboat wrote:

[Kamiya's Hard]

00:20:441 (7,8) - 這個距離跳需要放小一點,因為Ins沒跳得這麼遠,這樣比較一下挺懸殊的建議改一下。改好了
01:07:909 (3) - Stack沒處理好改好了
01:26:707 (5,6) - 如果選取這兩個然後用01:25:378 (1) - 包住,應該比較好看。改好了
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280,344,54428,1,2,0:3:0:0:
120,304,54618,1,2,0:3:0:0:
120,304,54998,6,0,P|104:240|128:168,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
176,104,55568,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,152,55758,6,0,P|272:160|240:152,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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156,324,66770,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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71,315,67720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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160,104,68479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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232,144,69808,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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280,224,71137,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,184,72656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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216,256,73036,2,0,P|192:176|224:112,1,157.500006008148,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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smallboat wrote:

[Normal]

01:20:441 (2) - 這大白線加個finish音效似乎重音效果可以表達的出來 (要加的話記得給所有難度都加)

[Kamiya's Hard]

00:20:441 (7,8) - 這個距離跳需要放小一點,因為Ins沒跳得這麼遠,這樣比較一下挺懸殊的建議改一下。
01:07:909 (3) - Stack沒處理好
01:26:707 (5,6) - 如果選取這兩個然後用01:25:378 (1) - 包住,應該比較好看。

[Koi]

00:53:479 (1,2) - 感覺弧形包一下比較好,這樣看起來有點粗糙。
fixed all of them, 谢谢船爷! :)
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