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JapanYoshiTheGamer wrote:

Hello from my mod queue!

Personally, it was hard for me to see any faults in the map. However, I do have one minor nitpick: There's no kiai time in this map, which may make this map unrankable. If I had to choose a spot, I'd put it from 00:37:500 to 00:45:000, just so we can have some kind of final stretch.
hi~
no kiai doesnt meant its unrankable.
also since this is repeating songs, so there isn't a kiai here ^^
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o/ #modreqs Hi i'm a random modder

General


  1. 00:45:000 - You can make this note clickable in every diff.
  2. Seems like i'm modding the flows lol
  3. The difficulty spread between Easy and Normal is just... too far away...? The SV of Normal is just x2 of Easy and the whole map is like x2 of Easy too.
  4. Turn of DS to apply this mod xd (especially in hard)

Easy


  1. The setting in this diff is pretty low make this map wayyyyy easier with low bpm and half rhythm. I would bump OD to 1.5 and OD to 2.
  2. 00:03:750 (1,2) - This will look better with circular flow. Just move it down for a bit https://puu.sh/vOEVf/0c47fb4971.png
  3. 00:18:750 (1,2,3) - Move 00:20:625 (3) - up for a bit and you will have a perfect triangle :>
    If you decide to, move it together with 00:21:562 (4,1) - move change the slider tail of 00:22:500 (1) - down a bit to prevent overlap
  4. 00:21:562 (4,1) - The linear flow is a little bit... off? https://puu.sh/vOFbT/d003ab8fdb.png
  5. 00:30:000 (1) - This look like an 2010 slider hoyl https://puu.sh/vOFeB/a17925a6e5.png. You can redraw this slider to make it look nicer.
  6. 00:36:562 (4,1) - Move the slider head a bit to the right and good flow here we come https://puu.sh/vOFis/1273ee7bbd.png

Normal


  1. 00:00:000 (1,2) - Linear flow https://puu.sh/vOFBo/acb3729323.png
  2. 00:01:640 (4,1) - Circular flow https://puu.sh/vOFF6/52ddcc24a8.png
  3. 00:02:578 (2) - You can make this slider go straight or adjust it to make the circular flow with 00:01:875 (1) - (it will look nicer if you apply the mod before) It's like something you did at 00:05:625 (1,2) -
  4. 00:20:390 - Why you skip this beat
  5. 00:27:187 (3,4) - Fix blanket x d
  6. 00:27:890 (4,4) - Those are kinda overlap https://puu.sh/vOFSI/e2ad5a9a69.png
  7. 00:30:937 (3,4) - Circular flow. Select 00:31:640 (4,1) - and move them up, not only the flow at 00:30:937 (3,4) - look nicer, it can make the flow at 00:31:875 (1,2) - look nicer, too.
  8. 00:38:203 (2,3,4) - F l o w. You can rotate 00:38:437 (3) -6 degree, move them like This so you can have a good flow + an extra blanket at 00:39:140 (4,1) -
  9. 00:39:140 (4,3) - Look kinda overlap https://puu.sh/vOGb6/ce018a48c7.png
  10. 00:42:890 - Why skip this beat lul

Hard


  1. 00:00:468 (2,3,4) - I don't like how you make 00:00:468 (2,3) - go straight so imo just make them like this.
  2. 00:05:390 (4,2) - Make them overlap with 00:07:031 (4) - 's slider tail. (you can pick 00:05:390 (4,1,2) - and move them)
  3. 00:12:890 (4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Monstrata when (well they look just fine)
  4. 00:31:406 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - ^
  5. 00:36:093 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
  6. 00:15:703 (3) - Like the beginning of this diff, move 00:15:703 (3) - up.
  7. 00:17:343 (3,4) - Isn't they look toooo far away in a Hard diff?
  8. 00:19:687 (4,5) - To make them more readable move 00:20:156 (5) - down for a bit.
  9. 00:21:562 (1,2,3,4) - Hoyl far jump (but keep them is fine imo)
  10. 00:43:125 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ^
  11. 00:28:828 (4,5) - Circular flow.
  12. 00:36:562 (1,2,1) - Circular flow, rotate 00:37:500 (1) - around 20 degree
    You can move 00:38:203 (2) - to make the blanket with 00:37:500 (1) - if you rotated 00:37:500 (1) -
  13. 00:42:656 (4) - Move to the right a bit to make it more readable.
Maybe that's all! Good luck!
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Shortthu wrote:

o/ #modreqs Hi i'm a random modder

General


  1. 00:45:000 - You can make this note clickable in every diff. nah
  2. Seems like i'm modding the flows lol
  3. The difficulty spread between Easy and Normal is just... too far away...? The SV of Normal is just x2 of Easy and the whole map is like x2 of Easy too. its ok while Easy to Normal is 1* and Normal to Hard is 1.1* also SV is fine while its between Easy and HArd
  4. Turn of DS to apply this mod xd (especially in hard)lolwat

Easy


  1. The setting in this diff is pretty low make this map wayyyyy easier with low bpm and half rhythm. I would bump OD to 1.5 and OD to 2. HP2 OD2
  2. 00:03:750 (1,2) - This will look better with circular flow. Just move it down for a bit https://puu.sh/vOEVf/0c47fb4971.png Breaks DS, do something else
  3. 00:18:750 (1,2,3) - Move 00:20:625 (3) - up for a bit and you will have a perfect triangle :>
    If you decide to, move it together with 00:21:562 (4,1) - move change the slider tail of 00:22:500 (1) - down a bit to prevent overlap I dont want a triangle here :< seems too sharp
  4. 00:21:562 (4,1) - The linear flow is a little bit... off? https://puu.sh/vOFbT/d003ab8fdb.png should be better now
  5. 00:30:000 (1) - This look like an 2010 slider hoyl https://puu.sh/vOFeB/a17925a6e5.png. You can redraw this slider to make it look nicer. wat, my slider doesnt looks like that loool, fix your editor :p
  6. 00:36:562 (4,1) - Move the slider head a bit to the right and good flow here we come https://puu.sh/vOFis/1273ee7bbd.png

Normal


  1. 00:00:000 (1,2) - Linear flow https://puu.sh/vOFBo/acb3729323.png something else
  2. 00:01:640 (4,1) - Circular flow https://puu.sh/vOFF6/52ddcc24a8.png
  3. 00:02:578 (2) - You can make this slider go straight or adjust it to make the circular flow with 00:01:875 (1) - (it will look nicer if you apply the mod before) It's like something you did at 00:05:625 (1,2) -
  4. 00:20:390 - Why you skip this beat keep mapping important beat
  5. 00:27:187 (3,4) - Fix blanket x d
  6. 00:27:890 (4,4) - Those are kinda overlap https://puu.sh/vOFSI/e2ad5a9a69.png they have long gap so not problem
  7. 00:30:937 (3,4) - Circular flow. Select 00:31:640 (4,1) - and move them up, not only the flow at 00:30:937 (3,4) - look nicer, it can make the flow at 00:31:875 (1,2) - look nicer, too. Do something else
  8. 00:38:203 (2,3,4) - F l o w. You can rotate 00:38:437 (3) -6 degree, move them like This so you can have a good flow + an extra blanket at 00:39:140 (4,1) - Do something to prevent DS being broke
  9. 00:39:140 (4,3) - Look kinda overlap https://puu.sh/vOGb6/ce018a48c7.png saem as above
  10. 00:42:890 - Why skip this beat lul ^

Hard


  1. 00:00:468 (2,3,4) - I don't like how you make 00:00:468 (2,3) - go straight so imo just make them like this. triangletriangletriangletriangletriangle
  2. 00:05:390 (4,2) - Make them overlap with 00:07:031 (4) - 's slider tail. (you can pick 00:05:390 (4,1,2) - and move them) breaks spacing
  3. 00:12:890 (4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Monstrata when (well they look just fine)
  4. 00:31:406 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - ^
  5. 00:36:093 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^ kek
  6. 00:15:703 (3) - Like the beginning of this diff, move 00:15:703 (3) - up. break stack with 00:13:125 (1) -
  7. 00:17:343 (3,4) - Isn't they look toooo far away in a Hard diff? slow bpm so okay also its slowly increase spacing
  8. 00:19:687 (4,5) - To make them more readable move 00:20:156 (5) - down for a bit.
  9. 00:21:562 (1,2,3,4) - Hoyl far jump (but keep them is fine imo) [b]same as above~[/b]
  10. 00:43:125 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ^ ^
  11. 00:28:828 (4,5) - Circular flow.
  12. 00:36:562 (1,2,1) - Circular flow, rotate 00:37:500 (1) - around 20 degree
    You can move 00:38:203 (2) - to make the blanket with 00:37:500 (1) - if you rotated 00:37:500 (1) -
  13. 00:42:656 (4) - Move to the right a bit to make it more readable. did you mean left?
Maybe that's all! Good luck!
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Thanks for the aesthetic mod!
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Error- wrote:

Shortthu wrote:

Easy


  1. 00:30:000 (1) - This look like an 2010 slider hoyl https://puu.sh/vOFeB/a17925a6e5.png. You can redraw this slider to make it look nicer. wat, my slider doesnt looks like that loool, fix your editor :p



Actually i was drag out the middle point to see what kind of slider is it lol
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M4M. Sorry, I forget about modding first. :p

[Easy]
00:00:937 (2) - I maybe made here circle and then a slider, for me it sounds better, than a slider, because circle is placed on a beat and slider starts on a background sax sounds. 1
00:08:437 (3) - ^?
00:28:125 (3,4,1) - I think, there will better to make an slider reflection. I have made this reflection, imo it's will better.
00:45:000 (1) - why do not end it on 00:47:812 ?
[Normal]
00:09:375 (1,2,3) - I think this slider and some movings will be better for Normal. 1
00:33:281 (3) - move ending shape from X260 Y272 to X260 Y276 to make a parallel sliders.
00:45:000 (1) - why not ending on 00:47:812 ?
[Hard]
00:18:281 (5,6,7) - oh, we returned into 2008? I think this triple needed a changes to a slider or needed to replace the circles smh.
00:45:000 (1) - why not ending on 00:47:812 ? I really understand it, because it'll be better and all will synced with a beat.
Also too much triangles for me in the Hard.

GL with the map. Really good work.
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MasterHerobrine wrote:

M4M. Sorry, I forget about modding first. :p

[Easy]
00:00:937 (2) - I maybe made here circle and then a slider, for me it sounds better, than a slider, because circle is placed on a beat and slider starts on a background sax sounds. 1 keeping it simple
00:08:437 (3) - ^?
00:28:125 (3,4,1) - I think, there will better to make an slider reflection. I have made this reflection, imo it's will better. Something else
00:45:000 (1) - why do not end it on 00:47:812 ? end of the sound is 00:48:281
[Normal]
00:09:375 (1,2,3) - I think this slider and some movings will be better for Normal. 1 nah
00:33:281 (3) - move ending shape from X260 Y272 to X260 Y276 to make a parallel sliders. parallel with what kek
00:45:000 (1) - why not ending on 00:47:812 ?
[Hard]
00:18:281 (5,6,7) - oh, we returned into 2008? I think this triple needed a changes to a slider or needed to replace the circles smh. since when something like this is a 2008 ish, lol, anyway since its still reflect to the beat also the spacing still good for that triple, it should be fineee
00:45:000 (1) - why not ending on 00:47:812 ? I really understand it, because it'll be better and all will synced with a beat.
Also too much triangles for me in the Hard. monstrata

GL with the map. Really good work.
Thanks for the mod~
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Hello There!
Requested by MBomb

Platter
  1. 00:02:812 (4,5) - Normal dash here for consistency with 00:01:875 (1,2) - . The sounds are rather similar.
  2. 00:10:078 (3) - A bit too vertical in my opinion. It could have offered some more movement if it was more horizontal. Will also make it more consistent movement wise with 00:05:625 (1,2,3,4) - which is more intense, yet the same rhythm as here
  3. 00:13:359 (2) - Ctrl-H here would work here since the entrance to this object feels rather forced based on the sudden movement to the other direction the moment this object is reached. Moreover its pretty close to the edge so moving it a bit to the left could work nicely. Similar point here 00:43:125 (1,2) -
  4. 00:21:562 (3,4,5,6) - You could try a 2 1/2 slider pattern here instead of 4 circles so as to place more emphasis on the stronger sounds on the white ticks
  5. 00:25:312 (4,5) - Normal Dash here, pretty inconsistent with 00:24:375 (1,2) - . Even though they are the same sound, the one implies a walk and the other a dash

Nothing much to say. This diff is pretty ready
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Hello.
How to mod (My second mods).

[MBomb's Platter]
Consider to change AR/OD to 7.5 ? . It fits well IMO.
  1. 00:10:078 (3) - It feels weird to play with vertical pattern. Make it horizontal ? Agreed with Nokashi's mod .
  2. 00:48:281 (4) - I think it's not a big issue but I would put this to x=152 for consistency with 00:47:343 (2) - and also gives little movement IMO.

It's clean diff so I don't have much to say. No kds if not helpful.
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Weber wrote:

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I'm late with that mod, I know, but I don't play osu very often ....

This is a really good map, I don't have much to say.
00:19:687 (4,5) - Are you aware of that: The two notes that are played in quick succession come exactly here 00:20:156 and here 00:20:185, but you placed the end of the slider and the beginning of the new slider here 00:20:126 and here 00:20:156 so 1/16? If you are aware of it, you probably did it on purpose, so the second slider doesn't begin in the nowhere of 1/16 but on a white tick. You could also leave it like that, I just wanted you to know about it.
You could do something similar here 00:06:328 (3) and here 00:28:828 (4). Maybe with a circle just 1/16 before the slider but on the same position. I think that would fit very well.
Super small thing: 00:31:875 (1,2,3,4) - the spacing here between all the notes is perfect, but a bit smaller then before: 00:30:468 (1,2,3) - looked a bit strange when playing.

Sorry, after all this time you only get this small feedback, but I really can't find anything else.
I have zero experience in modding CtB, so I'll just say that it's a nice feeling when playing this map. There are no such things as "mistakes" here.
00:13:125 (1,2) - Just recognized that you have very few reverse sliders in your maps, but despite that fact this doesn't feel right. I'd prefer something like that: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8173792
00:20:625 (1,2) - Same here, but I would use 3 circles for the 3 same notes in the music.
When the music repeats, these two things also repeat for sure.
If you want to use more reverse sliders, I'd put one here 00:41:250 (1,2,3) - from the end of (1) with the arrow at the (2) to the beginning of the (3).
I can't find anything here. If you get in contact with a very new player let him play this map and find out where he/she struggles the most.


I hope this gets ranked, I like the original song and your map very much, don't you think you could think of some cool pun references from sans in the diff names? Good luck!
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Lone Pixel wrote:

I'm late with that mod, I know, but I don't play osu very often ....

This is a really good map, I don't have much to say.
00:19:687 (4,5) - Are you aware of that: The two notes that are played in quick succession come exactly here 00:20:156 and here 00:20:185, but you placed the end of the slider and the beginning of the new slider here 00:20:126 and here 00:20:156 so 1/16? If you are aware of it, you probably did it on purpose, so the second slider doesn't begin in the nowhere of 1/16 but on a white tick. You could also leave it like that, I just wanted you to know about it. just wanna say, use 25% speed
You could do something similar here 00:06:328 (3) and here 00:28:828 (4). Maybe with a circle just 1/16 before the slider but on the same position. I think that would fit very well. hmm, nah, no sound tho
Super small thing: 00:31:875 (1,2,3,4) - the spacing here between all the notes is perfect, but a bit smaller then before: 00:30:468 (1,2,3) - looked a bit strange when playing. nah

Sorry, after all this time you only get this small feedback, but I really can't find anything else.
I have zero experience in modding CtB, so I'll just say that it's a nice feeling when playing this map. There are no such things as "mistakes" here.
00:13:125 (1,2) - Just recognized that you have very few reverse sliders in your maps, but despite that fact this doesn't feel right. I'd prefer something like that: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8173792 I prefer the original one
00:20:625 (1,2) - Same here, but I would use 3 circles for the 3 same notes in the music.
When the music repeats, these two things also repeat for sure.
If you want to use more reverse sliders, I'd put one here 00:41:250 (1,2,3) - from the end of (1) with the arrow at the (2) to the beginning of the (3). I prefer the original one
I can't find anything here. If you get in contact with a very new player let him play this map and find out where he/she struggles the most.


I hope this gets ranked, I like the original song and your map very much, don't you think you could think of some cool pun references from sans in the diff names? lol I'm not a PUNny guy xd Good luck!
Thanks for the mod
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Nokashi wrote:

Hello There!
Requested by MBomb

Platter
  1. 00:02:812 (4,5) - Normal dash here for consistency with 00:01:875 (1,2) - . The sounds are rather similar. - Mainly kept it that way because of the pitch being lower on that one.
  2. 00:10:078 (3) - A bit too vertical in my opinion. It could have offered some more movement if it was more horizontal. Will also make it more consistent movement wise with 00:05:625 (1,2,3,4) - which is more intense, yet the same rhythm as here - Changed a bit.
  3. 00:13:359 (2) - Ctrl-H here would work here since the entrance to this object feels rather forced based on the sudden movement to the other direction the moment this object is reached. Moreover its pretty close to the edge so moving it a bit to the left could work nicely. Similar point here 00:43:125 (1,2) - - Feels nicer as a HDash with the song to me.
  4. 00:21:562 (3,4,5,6) - You could try a 2 1/2 slider pattern here instead of 4 circles so as to place more emphasis on the stronger sounds on the white ticks - Disagree with this, because of this generally being pitch mapped, the 1/2 notes are actually where the dashes are to here, so having a 4 circle pattern makes more sense.
  5. 00:25:312 (4,5) - Normal Dash here, pretty inconsistent with 00:24:375 (1,2) - . Even though they are the same sound, the one implies a walk and the other a dash - Different pitches again.

Nothing much to say. This diff is pretty ready

-Hex- wrote:

Hello.
How to mod (My second mods).

[MBomb's Platter]
Consider to change AR/OD to 7.5 ? . It fits well IMO. - I agree it's a little low, 7.2 works fine for me though.
  1. 00:10:078 (3) - It feels weird to play with vertical pattern. Make it horizontal ? Agreed with Nokashi's mod . - Didn't go with horizontal but went with a bit of a different shape.
  2. 00:48:281 (4) - I think it's not a big issue but I would put this to x=152 for consistency with 00:47:343 (2) - and also gives little movement IMO. - Prefer having a decreased distance to 4 as 3 is stronger than 4 here.

It's clean diff so I don't have much to say. No kds if not helpful.
Thanks for the mods!

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 22500
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 3.699999

[Metadata]
Title:sans.
TitleUnicode:sans.
Artist:toby fox
ArtistUnicode:toby fox
Creator:Error-
Version:MBomb's Platter
Source:UNDERTALE
Tags:OST megalovania sans the skeleton frisk character magic bomb mbomb
BeatmapID:1287353
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OverallDifficulty:7.2
ApproachRate:7.2
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posted

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

Nokashi wrote:

Hello There!
Requested by MBomb

Platter
  1. 00:02:812 (4,5) - Normal dash here for consistency with 00:01:875 (1,2) - . The sounds are rather similar. - Mainly kept it that way because of the pitch being lower on that one.
  2. 00:10:078 (3) - A bit too vertical in my opinion. It could have offered some more movement if it was more horizontal. Will also make it more consistent movement wise with 00:05:625 (1,2,3,4) - which is more intense, yet the same rhythm as here - Changed a bit.
  3. 00:13:359 (2) - Ctrl-H here would work here since the entrance to this object feels rather forced based on the sudden movement to the other direction the moment this object is reached. Moreover its pretty close to the edge so moving it a bit to the left could work nicely. Similar point here 00:43:125 (1,2) - - Feels nicer as a HDash with the song to me.
  4. 00:21:562 (3,4,5,6) - You could try a 2 1/2 slider pattern here instead of 4 circles so as to place more emphasis on the stronger sounds on the white ticks - Disagree with this, because of this generally being pitch mapped, the 1/2 notes are actually where the dashes are to here, so having a 4 circle pattern makes more sense.
  5. 00:25:312 (4,5) - Normal Dash here, pretty inconsistent with 00:24:375 (1,2) - . Even though they are the same sound, the one implies a walk and the other a dash - Different pitches again.

Nothing much to say. This diff is pretty ready

-Hex- wrote:

Hello.
How to mod (My second mods).

[MBomb's Platter]
Consider to change AR/OD to 7.5 ? . It fits well IMO. - I agree it's a little low, 7.2 works fine for me though.
  1. 00:10:078 (3) - It feels weird to play with vertical pattern. Make it horizontal ? Agreed with Nokashi's mod . - Didn't go with horizontal but went with a bit of a different shape.
  2. 00:48:281 (4) - I think it's not a big issue but I would put this to x=152 for consistency with 00:47:343 (2) - and also gives little movement IMO. - Prefer having a decreased distance to 4 as 3 is stronger than 4 here.

It's clean diff so I don't have much to say. No kds if not helpful.
Thanks for the mods!
Applied.
posted
Hard

00:16:640 (5,1,2,3,4) - Imo, this isn't a good structure. 2>3>4 gets way too big compared tot he rest of the map. Use a square structure like 00:08:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - instead. Don't use a parallelogram structure cuz it'll cause problems with spacing like what happened here.
00:15:937 (4,5,1,2) - Also when setting up the flow, something like this would work better. It's okay not to respect emphasis on the white tick sometimes if it contributes to better flow and structure. That's how I would have approached it anyways.

00:27:890 (5,1,2) - Integrate this into the structure too? 5>2 is a bit too close compared to 1>2
00:33:750 (1,2) - This spacing looks too much like your usual 1/2 jumps. Use a bigger spacing

00:37:265 (2,1) - Jump here for emphasis instead? linear flow is kinda meh too xP

Normal

00:03:281 (3,1) - Blanket.
00:07:500 (1,3) - etc..

Looks like you can improve your blankets still xP. Please go over the map again, or ask someone to mod for blankets cuz there are a bunch and it shouldn't be my job to point them out.

Easy

00:30:000 (5) - Missing NC.

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I think you need a difficulty between Easy and Normal... your Normal diff is almost fully 1/2 rhythm while your Easy is fully 1/1 rhythm. You should add a diff that uses a combination of 50% 1/1 and 1/2 for a better spread imo...

The set is good though, so you can call me back when the set is ready again!
posted

Monstrata wrote:

Hard

00:16:640 (5,1,2,3,4) - Imo, this isn't a good structure. 2>3>4 gets way too big compared tot he rest of the map. Use a square structure like 00:08:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - instead. Don't use a parallelogram structure cuz it'll cause problems with spacing like what happened here.
00:15:937 (4,5,1,2) - Also when setting up the flow, something like this would work better. It's okay not to respect emphasis on the white tick sometimes if it contributes to better flow and structure. That's how I would have approached it anyways.

00:27:890 (5,1,2) - Integrate this into the structure too? 5>2 is a bit too close compared to 1>2 hmm I guess no, since 00:28:125 (1) - 's sound is higher than 00:27:890 (5) - so made the spacing way higher.
00:33:750 (1,2) - This spacing looks too much like your usual 1/2 jumps. Use a bigger spacing

00:37:265 (2,1) - Jump here for emphasis instead? linear flow is kinda meh too xP

Normal

00:03:281 (3,1) - Blanket.
00:07:500 (1,3) - etc..

Looks like you can improve your blankets still xP. Please go over the map again, or ask someone to mod for blankets cuz there are a bunch and it shouldn't be my job to point them out.

Easy

00:30:000 (5) - Missing NC.

[]

I think you need a difficulty between Easy and Normal... your Normal diff is almost fully 1/2 rhythm while your Easy is fully 1/1 rhythm. You should add a diff that uses a combination of 50% 1/1 and 1/2 for a better spread imo...

The set is good though, so you can call me back when the set is ready again!
Thanks for the mod!
oh also, well normal is a combination os 1/1 and 1/2, even mostly 1/2 so its okay imo

also

Error- wrote:

okaay so Ill explain things

1. even through it feels like 1/2 everywhere in normal, it does often have 1/1 thingy, since I really often use 1/1 here, thats why I dont really want a 1/1 gap, instead of it, I replace it with 1/1, So doesnt really quiet, and also not really hard.

2. Its mixed both from Easy and Hard, for example 00:01:640 (4,1,2) - , this is a mix from hard's 00:01:640 (5,1,2,3) - and Easy's 00:00:937 (2,3,4) - , since Hard is a 1/2 objects, instead of it, I replace it with 2 1/1 slider 00:01:875 (1,2) - here, and so on in the beatmap.

3. Even so I only use 1/1 gap twice in the diff, it doesn't really broke the spread, as i said before, so much 1/1 slider, so that'll be stable with the 1/2 and 1/2 sliders. Also I rarely do 1/2 sliders, only some of it.

4. Keeping it not really quiet, as I said in 1, since 1/1 is pretty much quiet in this 128BPM, I tried to not to use it, except with a 1/2 gap after it.

5. If im counting between 1/1 sliders and 1/2 circles + sliders, probaly it just only around 60-65% of it, but doesnt count the 1/2 gap, so I guess its ok for a Normal diff, also this still plays good on newer players, with some testplaying.

Not really that much, But I'll recall you when its ready.
posted
-Kyu mod.
-Kyu doesnt want to post :p
so just post it here.
2017-05-26 20:49 Error-: ok im ready now
2017-05-26 20:49 -Kyu: alright
2017-05-26 20:50 -Kyu: remember,nazi mod
2017-05-26 20:50 -Kyu: 1st off
2017-05-26 20:50 -Kyu: gk ada custom hitsound di easy diff?
2017-05-26 20:50 -Kyu: yg suara click itu
2017-05-26 20:50 Error-: ada kok '-'
2017-05-26 20:50 Error-: look at the files
2017-05-26 20:50 -Kyu: yg di slidertick
2017-05-26 20:50 Error-: kan diganti pake whistle hehe
2017-05-26 20:50 Error-: jadi sama aja ^^
2017-05-26 20:51 Error-: since every 2/2 beat is clickable here
2017-05-26 20:52 -Kyu: 00:23:906 (2,4) - ada overlap kecil
2017-05-26 20:52 -Kyu: 00:25:312 (4) - dinaikin dikit
2017-05-26 20:52 Error-: ooo good eye xd
2017-05-26 20:53 -Kyu: terus 00:26:250 (1) - di gabung dgn peletakan 00:23:906 (2) -
2017-05-26 20:53 Error-: oh damn that ruins eveything
2017-05-26 20:53 Error-: plz wait
2017-05-26 20:53 -Kyu: dan,bisa juga 00:26:250 (1) - diblanket dgn 00:24:375 (3) -
2017-05-26 20:54 -Kyu: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8183334 so it will be like this]
2017-05-26 20:54 Error-: oh damn very good idea
2017-05-26 20:54 Error-: wait k
2017-05-26 20:56 Error-: ok done
2017-05-26 20:56 -Kyu: 00:33:750 (1) - why the sudden big gap
2017-05-26 20:57 Error-: DS problem, fixed
2017-05-26 20:58 -Kyu: 00:35:625 (3,4) - blanket potential
2017-05-26 20:58 Error-: broke DS
2017-05-26 20:59 Error-: also the head will be outside of the playfield
2017-05-26 20:59 -Kyu: wait which one
2017-05-26 21:00 Error-: 00:36:562 (4) -
2017-05-26 21:01 Error-: anyway thats not a bit prob too
2017-05-26 21:01 -Kyu: wait uh
2017-05-26 21:02 -Kyu: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8183416 try this]
2017-05-26 21:03 Error-: hmm probaly nah
2017-05-26 21:04 -Kyu: ok,now normal
2017-05-26 21:04 Error-: ok
2017-05-26 21:04 Error-: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1242071 toby fox - sans. [Normal]]
2017-05-26 21:05 -Kyu: 00:01:875 (1) - agak triggerred jadi gimana kalau disamakan aja dgn slider 00:00:937 (3) -
2017-05-26 21:06 Error-: keeping it 1/1 biar lebih konsisten dengan diff lainnya
2017-05-26 21:06 -Kyu: 00:01:875 (1) - agak triggerred jadi gimana kalau disamakan aja dgn slider 00:00:937 (3) -
2017-05-26 21:06 -Kyu: copy-paste
2017-05-26 21:06 -Kyu: 00:02:578 (6) - same goes to this
2017-05-26 21:06 Error-: so nah
2017-05-26 21:07 Error-: also its being patterned tho
2017-05-26 21:07 Error-: so, changing that means.. remap
2017-05-26 21:07 Error-: xd
2017-05-26 21:09 -Kyu: cuma ganti bagian itu aja
2017-05-26 21:09 Error-: ya ganti bagian itu doang ttp aja sih, bakal ancurin konsistensi
2017-05-26 21:10 -Kyu: alrighty
2017-05-26 21:10 -Kyu: 00:03:281 (7,1) - small blanket fix
2017-05-26 21:11 Error-: wait
2017-05-26 21:11 Error-: combo 7?
2017-05-26 21:11 Error-: dafaq
2017-05-26 21:11 -Kyu: 00:07:500 (1,3) - ^
2017-05-26 21:11 -Kyu: oops
2017-05-26 21:11 00:03:281 (3,1) - *
2017-05-26 21:13 Error-: ok fixed
2017-05-26 21:13 -Kyu: 00:16:875 (1) - peletakannya disamakan dgn 00:14:531 (3) -
2017-05-26 21:14 Error-: sound beda, ane miripin dengan 00:39:375 (1) -
2017-05-26 21:16 -Kyu: wait whaddya mean
2017-05-26 21:16 Error-: oh wait
2017-05-26 21:16 Error-: peletakannya?
2017-05-26 21:17 Error-: hmm I think nah, meraka beatnya jauh kok, jadi ga ada masalah
2017-05-26 21:18 Error-: dan kalo dilihat hasilnya [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8183541 ini], still looks legit
2017-05-26 21:18 -Kyu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8183545
2017-05-26 21:18 Error-: just still nah, they still looks legit even for a normal
2017-05-26 21:18 -Kyu: ok then
2017-05-26 21:19 -Kyu: 00:20:390 - no note?
2017-05-26 21:19 Error-: no
2017-05-26 21:19 Error-: for space
2017-05-26 21:19 -Kyu: part is still audible
2017-05-26 21:19 Error-: the sound is very minor, so its ok to not map it
2017-05-26 21:19 Error-: the sound is just smth like, a reflection of 00:20:156 -
2017-05-26 21:20 -Kyu: it's not an echo,it's still playing the instrument,but more lower tone
2017-05-26 21:21 Error-: yeah thats why I didnt map it ;)
2017-05-26 21:21 Error-: also it'll somehow might broke the systematics of the diff, its supposed to be stable between 1/1 and 1/2, even 60% of it its 1/2
2017-05-26 21:22 Error-: if I added those, it'll be 65-70% of it and I need to map a new diff, and somehow broke the spread
2017-05-26 21:25 -Kyu: hmm
2017-05-26 21:25 Error-: also its still acceptale xd
2017-05-26 21:26 Error-: acceptable*
2017-05-26 21:27 -Kyu: 00:40:781 (3) - this slider doesn't feels right
2017-05-26 21:27 -Kyu: beroverlapped dgn 00:38:437 (3) - dan 00:39:140 (4) -
2017-05-26 21:27 Error-: still feels like, it does zigzag on 00:40:078 (2,3,1) - so ok I guess
2017-05-26 21:27 Error-: same like the easy diff.
2017-05-26 21:28 -Kyu: well,onto hard
2017-05-26 21:29 -Kyu: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1236756 toby fox - sans. [Hard]]
2017-05-26 21:29 -Kyu: 00:03:750 (1,2) - blanket issue
2017-05-26 21:29 Error-: ok, I hope you fine with triangles
2017-05-26 21:29 -Kyu: 00:06:328 (3,4) - could be blanketed
2017-05-26 21:29 Error-: but its already blanketed .-.
2017-05-26 21:29 Error-: oh, you mean, the head only?
2017-05-26 21:30 Error-: maybe nah, I prefer this one, not making any of jump here
2017-05-26 21:30 -Kyu: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8183657 this is preferred]
2017-05-26 21:31 Error-: oh that, a no again, spacing tho
2017-05-26 21:33 Error-: omg damn it my father .-.
2017-05-26 21:34 Error-: tells me to sleep coz tomorrow.
2017-05-26 21:34 Error-: so, you wanna post it on thread, or, still want it here?
2017-05-26 21:34 -Kyu: right now?
2017-05-26 21:34 Error-: well I can play 10 min more
2017-05-26 21:35 -Kyu: no thanks
2017-05-26 21:35 -Kyu: anggap aja free mod XD
2017-05-26 21:35 -Kyu: bosen soalnya
2017-05-26 21:35 Error-: pfft gapapa kudos 1 xP
2017-05-26 21:36 -Kyu: oh 1 more thing
2017-05-26 21:36 -Kyu: 00:17:578 (4) - spacing error?
2017-05-26 21:36 -Kyu: 00:17:578 (4) - spacing error?
2017-05-26 21:36 -Kyu: triangle doesn't look that good
2017-05-26 21:36 Error-: sound is higher, more spacing.
2017-05-26 21:36 Error-: I dont even want to create a triangle lol
2017-05-26 21:36 -Kyu: 00:17:578 (4) - spacing error?
2017-05-26 21:36 -Kyu: triangle doesn't look that good
2017-05-26 21:37 Error-: whoa hang on there internet connection
2017-05-26 21:37 Error-: triple message lol
2017-05-26 21:37 Error-: ok, just that? no more thing?
2017-05-26 21:39 -Kyu: ya mungkin lanjut aja lain kali
2017-05-26 21:39 Error-: ok, just post in thread if you wanna kudos :p
2017-05-26 21:39 -Kyu: gl on the map
2017-05-26 21:39 Error-: thanks
2017-05-26 21:40 Error-: thanks for the mod btw
posted
MB requested a check on this.

  1. Personally I think AR7.2 makes things look a bit cramped, so I'd go for a slightly higher AR. I think AR7.4 is a good compromise between decomprising things a bit and keeping the AR low due to the BPM.
  2. 00:01:406 (4,1,2) - Personally I find it weird that (4,1) is considerably shorter than (1,2), but I know you'll say you're mapping to the pitch. That put aside, I think the pattern plays a bit uncomfortable due to the successive antiflow and that the dash felt a bit tight; to me the pattern plays much more comfortable if you put 00:01:875 (1) - on x:264.
  3. 00:03:750 (1,2) - This distance is rather ambiguous after the HDash, as it looks walkable due to the 1/1 spacing but that requires a fairly decent timing. Considering this is you, make it clearer by increasing the distance a bit.
  4. 00:05:859 (2,3,4) - Rather harsh considering the dash before the HDash is quite tight and antiflow. Since you can't really move (3) to the right because it will take out the HDash, I'd move (2) a bit to the left.
  5. 00:06:328 (4,5) - This dash also feels a bit tight to me. I'd move 00:07:031 (5,1) - to x:200 to decrease the dash a bit while keeping the next HDash.
  6. 00:08:906 (4,1,2) - This is inconsistent with your previous spacing, as you didn't have double dashes on similar sounds. I'd remove the (4,1) one if you want to stay loyal to your "pitch mapping" concept.
  7. 00:10:078 (3,4) - This is way too tight a dash. I'd move 00:10:546 (4,1) - to x:168.
  8. 00:11:250 (1,2) - Quite a tight distance to walk, I'd increase it a bit to make it clearer that a dash is more comfortable to reach it.
  9. 00:12:656 (4,1,2) - This pattern not only goes against your concept of pitch mapping, but has a tight dash going to an HDash that lands on an antiflow movement, the latest part being currently unrankable - whatever our thoughts on that rule. So one option would be to move (1) to the right to make (4,1) a fully walkable distance and have (1,2) being a dash instead, as I can't really find ways to keep the HDash without remapping previous parts.
  10. 00:13:359 (2,3) - Another dash that feels a bit too tight for me, I'd move (3) a couple gridspaces to the right.
  11. 00:15:000 (1,2) - Another 1/1 distance that looks walkable due to the spacing, but it's actually uncomfortable to play, so I'd increase the distance to make a clearer dash.
  12. 00:16:406 (4,1,2) - Again, the pattern feels a bit harsh due to a (a bit) tight dash landing into an HDash, all accompanied by direction changes. I found that moving 00:16:406 (4) -, in line with the previous suggestion, also solved this issue.
  13. 00:17:109 (2,3) - I'd just put these a bit closer (like x:200 for (3)) just to add some leniency to the dash in case players overshoot the HDash a bit.
  14. 00:20:156 (4,1,2) - Yet again, I think that the dash into HDash plays a bit harsh. Maybe you can move (4) to the right a bit, to make (1) into a walkable distance or, at least, a more lenient dash.
  15. 00:20:859 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern demands quite some dash control to it, so I'd reduce the distance of the normal dashes a bit to add some leniency. I'd also reduce 00:21:796 (4,5) - a bit, since players that overshoot the dash might not be able to walk it.
  16. 00:22:500 (1,2) - Again, this 1/1 distance is a bit ambiguous. I'd move 00:22:968 (2,3) - a couple gridspaces to the right.
  17. 00:24:375 (1,2) - I'd reduce the distance between these a bit, by moving (2) to x:176 or x:168.
  18. 00:26:250 (1,2) - I also found this distance to be rather ambiguous, so you know what to do.
  19. 00:28:593 (3,4) - I'd move this to x:24, to add some leniency to the dash before the HDash and also to avoid clashing into the wall, should players overshoot the dash.
  20. 00:30:000 (1,2) - Another distance that I consider ambiguous, so make it clearer by either reducing or increasing the distance.
  21. 00:31:406 (4,1,2) - Having the double dash kinda contradicts your "pitch mapping" concept, so I'd go for a walkable distance for the first pair.
  22. 00:32:578 (3,4) - I'd add some leniency to this dash by moving (4) to x:248.
  23. 00:33:750 (1,2) - Another 1/1 distance that can be considered ambiguous.
  24. 00:35:156 (4,1,2) - And another recurring issue, I'd reduce the distance of the dash a bit to add some leniency.
  25. 00:37:500 (1,2) - Another 1/1 distance that can be considered ambiguous.
  26. 00:38:906 (4,1,2) - And the same thing as mentioned for 00:35:156 (4,1,2) - and several others.
  27. 00:41:250 (1,2) - More of this ambiguous 1/1 distance.
  28. 00:42:656 (4,1,2) - And more of the demanding dash into HDash thing.
  29. 00:44:062 (3,4,5,6,1) - The same thing mentioned for 00:20:859 (2,3,4,5,6) - applies here.


Mfw most of these are recurring issues could have been mentioned in a single point but I noticed when it was too late to turn back ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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ZiRoX wrote:

MB requested a check on this.

  1. Personally I think AR7.2 makes things look a bit cramped, so I'd go for a slightly higher AR. I think AR7.4 is a good compromise between decomprising things a bit and keeping the AR low due to the BPM. - Alright sure.
  2. 00:01:406 (4,1,2) - Personally I find it weird that (4,1) is considerably shorter than (1,2), but I know you'll say you're mapping to the pitch. That put aside, I think the pattern plays a bit uncomfortable due to the successive antiflow and that the dash felt a bit tight; to me the pattern plays much more comfortable if you put 00:01:875 (1) - on x:264. - x:272 instead.
  3. 00:03:750 (1,2) - This distance is rather ambiguous after the HDash, as it looks walkable due to the 1/1 spacing but that requires a fairly decent timing. Considering this is you, make it clearer by increasing the distance a bit. - I think I'd rather leave it how it is, it's intended to be a dash but to avoid being too difficult after the HDash, and I think at this level, dash control should be able to handle letting go early here.
  4. 00:05:859 (2,3,4) - Rather harsh considering the dash before the HDash is quite tight and antiflow. Since you can't really move (3) to the right because it will take out the HDash, I'd move (2) a bit to the left. - Done.
  5. 00:06:328 (4,5) - This dash also feels a bit tight to me. I'd move 00:07:031 (5,1) - to x:200 to decrease the dash a bit while keeping the next HDash. - Disagree here, just because this one is normal flow so the slightly higher distance is fine in my opinion.
  6. 00:08:906 (4,1,2) - This is inconsistent with your previous spacing, as you didn't have double dashes on similar sounds. I'd remove the (4,1) one if you want to stay loyal to your "pitch mapping" concept. - This is different to the previous part, as 1 has that trumpet on it, which makes it stick out as stronger.
  7. 00:10:078 (3,4) - This is way too tight a dash. I'd move 00:10:546 (4,1) - to x:168. - Not sure if I'd agree with "way too tight", but it was definitely tighter than other distances, so decreased to make it more consistent.
  8. 00:11:250 (1,2) - Quite a tight distance to walk, I'd increase it a bit to make it clearer that a dash is more comfortable to reach it. - Again, I think a platter player would know to dash here, and I don't want to make it harsher, because I want to avoid it being too strong after the HDash.
  9. 00:12:656 (4,1,2) - This pattern not only goes against your concept of pitch mapping, but has a tight dash going to an HDash that lands on an antiflow movement, the latest part being currently unrankable - whatever our thoughts on that rule. So one option would be to move (1) to the right to make (4,1) a fully walkable distance and have (1,2) being a dash instead, as I can't really find ways to keep the HDash without remapping previous parts. - Going for a dash to the trumpet here, and I would say the slider isn't antiflow after a HDash due to the starting vertical motion on the slider, so that doesn't break the RC.
  10. 00:13:359 (2,3) - Another dash that feels a bit too tight for me, I'd move (3) a couple gridspaces to the right. - Again, would agree if there was antiflow, but I think this is fine with the normal flow.
  11. 00:15:000 (1,2) - Another 1/1 distance that looks walkable due to the spacing, but it's actually uncomfortable to play, so I'd increase the distance to make a clearer dash. - Made this one slightly clearer.
  12. 00:16:406 (4,1,2) - Again, the pattern feels a bit harsh due to a (a bit) tight dash landing into an HDash, all accompanied by direction changes. I found that moving 00:16:406 (4) -, in line with the previous suggestion, also solved this issue. - Fixed a different way.
  13. 00:17:109 (2,3) - I'd just put these a bit closer (like x:200 for (3)) just to add some leniency to the dash in case players overshoot the HDash a bit. - Made them a bit closer.
  14. 00:20:156 (4,1,2) - Yet again, I think that the dash into HDash plays a bit harsh. Maybe you can move (4) to the right a bit, to make (1) into a walkable distance or, at least, a more lenient dash. - Made it more lenient.
  15. 00:20:859 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern demands quite some dash control to it, so I'd reduce the distance of the normal dashes a bit to add some leniency. I'd also reduce 00:21:796 (4,5) - a bit, since players that overshoot the dash might not be able to walk it. - Hmm, I think this level of dash control should be fine to a platter player. I did reduce 4,5 slightly though.
  16. 00:22:500 (1,2) - Again, this 1/1 distance is a bit ambiguous. I'd move 00:22:968 (2,3) - a couple gridspaces to the right. - Assuming you meant left, done.
  17. 00:24:375 (1,2) - I'd reduce the distance between these a bit, by moving (2) to x:176 or x:168. - x:160 feels fine to me, I don't think it needs to be reduced anymore.
  18. 00:26:250 (1,2) - I also found this distance to be rather ambiguous, so you know what to do. - This one seems fine to me, want to avoid antiflow after the HDash being too strong.
  19. 00:28:593 (3,4) - I'd move this to x:24, to add some leniency to the dash before the HDash and also to avoid clashing into the wall, should players overshoot the dash. - Did x:16, I think x:24 is too lenient.
  20. 00:30:000 (1,2) - Another distance that I consider ambiguous, so make it clearer by either reducing or increasing the distance. - Increased slightly.
  21. 00:31:406 (4,1,2) - Having the double dash kinda contradicts your "pitch mapping" concept, so I'd go for a walkable distance for the first pair. - I think the trumpet is strong enough to imply a dash here.
  22. 00:32:578 (3,4) - I'd add some leniency to this dash by moving (4) to x:248. - Didn't reduce that much but reduced slightly.
  23. 00:33:750 (1,2) - Another 1/1 distance that can be considered ambiguous. - Again, think this one's fine to give the player a bit of reaction time leniency.
  24. 00:35:156 (4,1,2) - And another recurring issue, I'd reduce the distance of the dash a bit to add some leniency. - Done.
  25. 00:37:500 (1,2) - Another 1/1 distance that can be considered ambiguous. - Increased this one slightly.
  26. 00:38:906 (4,1,2) - And the same thing as mentioned for 00:35:156 (4,1,2) - and several others. - Reduced slightly.
  27. 00:41:250 (1,2) - More of this ambiguous 1/1 distance. - I think this one's fine to give reaction time.
  28. 00:42:656 (4,1,2) - And more of the demanding dash into HDash thing. - Done.
  29. 00:44:062 (3,4,5,6,1) - The same thing mentioned for 00:20:859 (2,3,4,5,6) - applies here. - I still think this kind of dash control is fine to expect on the "most intense" part of a platter.


Mfw most of these are recurring issues could have been mentioned in a single point but I noticed when it was too late to turn back ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Thanks for the mod!

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