YURiKA - Shiny Ray (TV Size)

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Kim Dahyun
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00:14:222 (3) - This is a different segment of the song to 00:12:911 (1,2) do you should add a NC.
00:22:583 (1) - In my opinion this spinner is too short
00:46:845 (4) - Dunno whats up with this slider. The first repeat doesnt land on any sound.
00:53:239 (3) - Why not end this at 54:878 when there's actually a sound?
00:55:698 (2) - NC, different segment of the song
00:59:468 (2,3) - Could be blanketed
Recheck your DS, some segments have 1.1x, some have 0.9x and some have 1.0x (All should be 1.0x)
00:58:485 (1,2) - could be blanketed
01:04:386 (3,4) - ^
01:06:189 (1) - This slider looks pretty bad, heres a better way you could do it
01:09:632 (5,1) - blanket
01:16:189 (3,4) - ^
00:03:403 (1,2) - blanket
00:06:026 (1,2) - ^
00:10:780 (4,5) - ^
00:15:534 (2,3) - ^
00:22:419 (1) - Remove NC, why does this have NC?
00:23:403 (2) - This should have NC
00:46:517 (2,1) - There is no sound at 2 and the beginning of 1. You could just put a circle where the slider 1 ends
00:49:140 (2) - No sound, remove this
00:07:665 (3,4,5) - This looks really weird and doesn't play well either. This is all i could think of but maybe you could do something better.
01:21:927 (5,1) - blanket
00:39:468 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - There are no 1/4 sounds in the song, there is no reason for this burst

Really like the map, good luck! :D
Hytex

MBmasher wrote:

00:03:403 (1,2) - blanket it already is blanket
00:06:026 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:10:780 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:15:534 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:22:419 (1) - Remove NC, why does this have NC? no, because after the slider it has a downbeat
00:23:403 (2) - This should have NC no
00:46:517 (2,1) - There is no sound at 2 and the beginning of 1. You could just put a circle where the slider 1 ends ok
00:49:140 (2) - No sound, remove this ^
thanks for mod!
update:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54878
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 3403,69878
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Shiny ray (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Shiny ray (TV Size)
Artist:YURiKA
ArtistUnicode:YURiKA
Creator:gottagof4ast
Version:Hytex's Hard
Source:リトルウィッチアカデミア
Tags:lwa, little witch academia, tv
BeatmapID:1253037
BeatmapSetID:584389

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Kim Dahyun

Hytex wrote:

MBmasher wrote:

00:03:403 (1,2) - blanket it already is blanket
00:06:026 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:10:780 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:15:534 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:22:419 (1) - Remove NC, why does this have NC? no, because after the slider it has a downbeat
00:23:403 (2) - This should have NC no
00:46:517 (2,1) - There is no sound at 2 and the beginning of 1. You could just put a circle where the slider 1 ends ok
00:49:140 (2) - No sound, remove this ^
thanks for mod!
update:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54878
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 3403,69878
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Shiny ray (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Shiny ray (TV Size)
Artist:YURiKA
ArtistUnicode:YURiKA
Creator:gottagof4ast
Version:Hytex's Hard
Source:リトルウィッチアカデミア
Tags:lwa, little witch academia, tv
BeatmapID:1253037
BeatmapSetID:584389

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CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:8
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I know they are already blanketed, but they could be blanketed better. Use the approach circle of the first circle to help you.
Hytex
im p sure the blankets are good enough tho, im too lazy to fix em
victorfernando
General
  1. Don't Have Video or hitsounds ?

Easy

  1. On 00:04:550 the slider start , sounds better
  2. The Slider Speed don't need be 0,6 , 0,8 is a easy on 170 bpm + , use 0,88 or 0,90 , Remake all sliders after change to 1x
Normal
  1. 00:32:583 (2)(3)(4)(5)(6) This transition isn't good , remake it to flow better is a normal not hard
  2. Check aimod
  • Insane
  1. 00:06:517 (1)(2)(3)(4) Flow better like this \;
  2. 00:31:574 (1)(2)(3)(4) ^
  3. 00:33:894 (1)(2)(3)(4) ^
  1. Arrange this better :
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MBmasher wrote:

from Q

00:14:222 (3) - This is a different segment of the song to 00:12:911 (1,2) do you should add a NC. ~fixed~
00:22:583 (1) - In my opinion this spinner is too short It was longer but i needed a larger break before placcing circles gain so that why its rather short
00:46:845 (4) - Dunno whats up with this slider. The first repeat doesnt land on any sound. Yup, the drum here is reallly weird but this was the closest I got to representing the drum with a slider
00:53:239 (3) - Why not end this at 54:878 when there's actually a sound? It feels like she stops here for me
00:55:698 (2) - NC, different segment of the song ~fixed~
00:59:468 (2,3) - Could be blanketed ~fixed~
Recheck your DS, some segments have 1.1x, some have 0.9x and some have 1.0x (All should be 1.0x) iill fix this later
00:58:485 (1,2) - could be blanketed ~fixed~
01:04:386 (3,4) - ^
01:06:189 (1) - This slider looks pretty bad, heres a better way you could do it ~fixed~
01:09:632 (5,1) - blanket ~fixed~
01:16:189 (3,4) - ^ ~fixed~
00:03:403 (1,2) - blanket
00:06:026 (1,2) - ^
00:10:780 (4,5) - ^
00:15:534 (2,3) - ^
00:22:419 (1) - Remove NC, why does this have NC?
00:23:403 (2) - This should have NC
00:46:517 (2,1) - There is no sound at 2 and the beginning of 1. You could just put a circle where the slider 1 ends
00:49:140 (2) - No sound, remove this
00:07:665 (3,4,5) - This looks really weird and doesn't play well either. This is all i could think of but maybe you could do something better. Since I am getting so many complaints about this part ill change it somehow
01:21:927 (5,1) - blanket ~fixed~
00:39:468 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - There are no 1/4 sounds in the song, there is no reason for this burst This is also a controversial part, some say make normal jumps here, some say make a stream here and than you have a group who just wants a long slider here. I think a burst here fits but if more people don't like this I'll change it again as I also don't like bursts

Really like the map, good luck! :D
Thanks for the mod :)

Also updated GD
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victorfernando wrote:

General
  1. Don't Have Video or hitsounds ?Ill search for a video, and for hitsounds I'm in a bit of trouble as I don't have a clue how they exactly work even after watching some videos on them

Easy

  1. On 00:04:550 the slider start , sounds better ~fixed~, i quite like this :)
  2. The Slider Speed don't need be 0,6 , 0,8 is a easy on 170 bpm + , use 0,88 or 0,90 , Remake all sliders after change to 1x Should be good enough SV and remapping the entire spng for a 0.2 change in SV is not really somthing I'd like to do
Normal
  1. 00:32:583 (2)(3)(4)(5)(6) This transition isn't good , remake it to flow better is a normal not hardThis should be fine as if it was a hard pattern the star rating would be a little higher. Also I use a triangle pattern like this later in the song. Then lastly, this pattern also makes the pianosounds clickable on some of the notes
  2. Check aimod I'm aware of the spacing problems and will fix it later today
  • Insane
  1. 00:06:517 (1)(2)(3)(4) Flow better like this \; Tried it but don't realley like how 12 is a really short jump and 23 a much longer one
  2. 00:31:574 (1)(2)(3)(4) ^ ~fixed~,Wasnt that large of a difference but OK
  3. 00:33:894 (1)(2)(3)(4) ^
~fixed~

  1. Arrange this better :
    I'd like to but don't know how so for now I only curved the slider for looks
Thanks alot for the mod
victorfernando
I made a video for you <3 obs : don't kive kudosu if you thanks and credit me just make me happy is medium quality if lag i make 360 p
http://www.mediafire.com/file/8rlfzorikod6j2x/315416053_mp4_h264_aac.mp4
victorfernando
I made hit sounds too http://www.mediafire.com/file/tbzsvsvbft88381/584389+YURiKA+-+Shiny+ray+%28TV+Size%29.rar
And I hit sounded easy :
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victorfernando wrote:

I made hit sounds too http://www.mediafire.com/file/tbzsvsvbft88381/584389+YURiKA+-+Shiny+ray+%28TV+Size%29.rar
And I hit sounded easy :
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victorfernando wrote:

I made a video for you <3 obs : don't kive kudosu if you thanks and credit me just make me happy is medium quality if lag i make 360 p
http://www.mediafire.com/file/8rlfzorikod6j2x/315416053_mp4_h264_aac.mp4
Thanks a ton :)
Especially wiht the hitsounds as I was getting a bit demotivated, I normally play without hitsounds so I was in a bit of trouble, i'll try the rest on my own
BryLego
Nice map!
samosita
from nm q~

neat map ooooo

[Hytex's Hard]
  1. 00:21:108 (3) - maybe fix curvature since this is too close to the slider end of 00:20:780 (2) - . (and to be consistent to the next following spacings)
  2. 00:24:386 (1,2) - blankerinno
  3. 00:47:009 (3) - move this a bit up so it would look better

[Insane]
  1. 00:49:304 (1) - remove this to give emphasis on the sound of 00:48:976 (3) -
  2. 00:50:124 (6,7) - would sound better if this were a triple since vocal starts to intensify at 00:50:288 (7) -
  3. 01:09:796 (4,5) - blankerinno
  4. 01:26:189 (1,2) - make this a triple so finish at 01:26:517 (3) - would be more spiceyy

[Shining Chariot]
  1. 00:11:763 (1,2) - adjust spacing so it's consistent with 00:11:271 (1,2) -
  2. 00:50:124 (6,7) - same as what i said in the insane diff since vocal starts to intensify at 00:50:288 (7) -
  3. 00:51:435 (6) - separate into 2 hitcircles since there are no vocals here
  4. 00:51:927 (1) - make this slider because of of the "riii" vocal.
  5. 01:14:058 (4,1) - i know you're trying to make this a jumpy part because of its building intensity, but i think you should make this a slider instead to map the really strong "kaaa" vocal of the song
  6. 01:26:189 (1,2) - same in insane. make this triple for a more spicey finish

hope this gets ranked :D GL!
Topic Starter
Stack

samosita wrote:

from nm q~

neat map ooooo Thanks!

[Hytex's Hard]
  1. 00:21:108 (3) - maybe fix curvature since this is too close to the slider end of 00:20:780 (2) - . (and to be consistent to the next following spacings)
  2. 00:24:386 (1,2) - blankerinno
  3. 00:47:009 (3) - move this a bit up so it would look better

[Insane]
  1. 00:49:304 (1) - remove this to give emphasis on the sound of 00:48:976 (3) - I can't delete this note as I still think the sound there from the drums is pretty strong
  2. 00:50:124 (6,7) - would sound better if this were a triple since vocal starts to intensify at 00:50:288 (7) - As much as I love triples, I don't think I can get away placing a note on a blue tick without sound
  3. 01:09:796 (4,5) - blankerinno ~fixed~
  4. 01:26:189 (1,2) - make this a triple so finish at 01:26:517 (3) - would be more spiceyy Same as the second comment, Love triples but had to cut alot of them that werent on sounds q_q

[Shining Chariot]
  1. 00:11:763 (1,2) - adjust spacing so it's consistent with 00:11:271 (1,2) - I want the jumps to scale so they get larger, thats why the spacing changes, that said there were some minor spacing inconsistencies here which I fixed
  2. 00:50:124 (6,7) - same as what i said in the insane diff since vocal starts to intensify at 00:50:288 (7) - Same as the inasne also, can't place a triple without a sound or sound change
  3. 00:51:435 (6) - separate into 2 hitcircles since there are no vocals here Possible but it would make the this part too jump-circle heavy also this slider is here to signify some sort of change that the spacing is going to go up
  4. 00:51:927 (1) - make this slider because of of the "riii" vocal. That would mean i'd be locked to the vocal until it ends which is on 00:52:419 (4) and thats way too long of a slider
  5. 01:14:058 (4,1) - i know you're trying to make this a jumpy part because of its building intensity, but i think you should make this a slider instead to map the really strong "kaaa" vocal of the song That would also make for a very long slider (3/2) in the middle of the jump section which doesn't fit
  6. 01:26:189 (1,2) - same in insane. make this triple for a more spicey finish can't place a triple without sound

hope this gets ranked :D GL! I hope so too, I have put quite a bit of time into it and think I have a decent amount of mods now
Thanks for the mod and the star :)
Kondou-Shinichi
I can't make good maps
I cry
Man please try to snap green lines on Easy/Normal/Hard/Insane diffs
Easy doesnt have video
Video offset on insane is 0 instead of 200
soft-sliderslide.wav
soft-sliderslide2.wav unused
Is it just me or audio seems shitty
00:05:206 (3) - I personally don't perfer ending sliders on a important beat (like a strong sound). It's just my opinion, idk what other thinks
^ applies to all other sliders that end on strong sounds
00:11:271 (1) - Would make it end on red tick since the beat is quite strong there and feels a bit strange to be missed
00:16:354 (4,1) - why makes stacks like this when no other stacks like this exist on the map, it feels a bit unneeded imo
00:30:944 (1) - no sound here. why not start it on 00:30:780 - and make 00:30:616 (4) - a circle instead
00:39:386 - I know it will be strange to have a note here playablity wise, but this beat shouldnt be missed
00:42:747 (1) - why no end it on 00:43:403 - , making it a 2 white tick long slider like sliders before this on this part
00:26:927 (7,1) - I don't suggest stacking, unless you stack all 3 notes
00:45:370 (1,2,3) - mute sliderend or smth pls, sliderend sounds quite loud
p gud
00:05:616 - do something with this beat?
00:34:550 (6) - why not make this just a circle since the blue tick doesn't really have the drum sound (atleast not really clear, maybe because of the audio quality
00:39:386 - try to do somthing with this beat?
00:40:042 - would it be a bit strange if theres a tick unmapped here, since ppl with think the sliders starts right after the stream without any tick in between
00:42:747 (1,2,1,2) - I know what you're trying to do here, but the buildup isnt really that big so Idk why that huge sv change
01:11:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - make the small>large spacing more clearer please (if it doesnt have this just add it ok)
not bad
gl on ranking this
Hytex

samosita wrote:

[Hytex's Hard]
  1. 00:21:108 (3) - maybe fix curvature since this is too close to the slider end of 00:20:780 (2) - . (and to be consistent to the next following spacings) lowered
  2. 00:24:386 (1,2) - blankerinno no way, that would make a terrible blanket.
  3. 00:47:009 (3) - move this a bit up so it would look better ok

Kondou-Shinichi wrote:

00:05:206 (3) - I personally don't perfer ending sliders on a important beat (like a strong sound). It's just my opinion, idk what other thinks
^ applies to all other sliders that end on strong sounds following the instrumentss ~~
00:11:271 (1) - Would make it end on red tick since the beat is quite strong there and feels a bit strange to be missed ^
00:16:354 (4,1) - why makes stacks like this when no other stacks like this exist on the map, it feels a bit unneeded imo fine, lowered
00:30:944 (1) - no sound here. why not start it on 00:30:780 - and make 00:30:616 (4) - a circle instead ok
00:39:386 - I know it will be strange to have a note here playablity wise, but this beat shouldnt be missed redid the part
00:42:747 (1) - why no end it on 00:43:403 - , making it a 2 white tick long slider like sliders before this on this part oh im so dumb
thanks for mods

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Topic Starter
Stack

Kondou-Shinichi wrote:

I can't make good maps
I cry
Man please try to snap green lines on Easy/Normal/Hard/Insane diffs ~fixed~, I recently upped the offset by 10ms so some were off beacause I forgot to change it
Easy doesnt have video ~fixed~
Video offset on insane is 0 instead of 200 ~fixed~
soft-sliderslide.wav
soft-sliderslide2.wav unused I'm still figuring out hitsounding as you have probably noticed, there is none
Is it just me or audio seems shitty It is but finding a better source isnt that easy
00:26:927 (7,1) - I don't suggest stacking, unless you stack all 3 notes ~fixed~, wanted to stack all 3 but made a mistake
00:45:370 (1,2,3) - mute sliderend or smth pls, sliderend sounds quite loud I'll keep this in mind when I eventually start hitsounding
p gud
00:05:616 - do something with this beat? ~fixed~, moved the triple here as the drum sound was stronger here
00:34:550 (6) - why not make this just a circle since the blue tick doesn't really have the drum sound (atleast not really clear, maybe because of the audio quality Everyone likes different things here. I prefer a 1/4 slider to reflect the drum completely stopping there
00:39:386 - try to do somthing with this beat? ~fixed~, flipped the stream and added a note on this timestamp
00:40:042 - would it be a bit strange if theres a tick unmapped here, since ppl with think the sliders starts right after the stream without any tick in between Well, after the previous change, the spacing here now is bigger so that won't be a problem
00:42:747 (1,2,1,2) - I know what you're trying to do here, but the buildup isnt really that big so Idk why that huge sv change It feels really samey if I don't up teh SV by much. If someone else also mentions this I'll change/lower it
01:11:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - make the small>large spacing more clearer please (if it doesnt have this just add it ok) ~fixed~, Upped the spacing on the star jump right before this to signify larger jumps
not bad
gl on ranking this
Thanks alot for the mod :)

Also updated GD
Lefia
Hi from my queue

[General]
- Disable Widescreen support because widescreen support will enabled when this map use storyboard

[Easy]

00:07:173 strong beat here, not at 00:07:337 (1) , just change the 1/1 slider into 3/2 slider
00:14:222 (1,2,3) how about like this
00:16:517 it's a big white thick and it have strong beat here, you must make it clickable
00:17:501 (1) not suitable, try smth like this at 00:17:665
00:25:698 (2) not suitable, how about like this (start form 00:25:534)
00:27:665 (1,2) how about like this , it follow the vocal better
00:29:632 (3) NC should be here
00:34:878 (3) ^
00:37:501 (3) ^
00:40:124 (3) ^
00:45:370 (1,2,3) i suggest you to use 3/2 slider with reverse, because this is Easy diff, newplayer wil confuse about it
00:57:009 make it clickable
00:58:485 ^
00:59:796 ^

[Hard]

Set HP into 5

00:09:796 make it clickable just like you did at 00:04:550
00:10:452 (3,4,5) how about you change the potition? 1/2 slider then 1/2 slider and cirlce, or maybe like this to follow the violin's sound better
00:12:225 make it clickable
00:15:042 make it clickable, try smth like this (start form 00:14:222)
00:57:009 make it clickable
01:25:534 (3,1,2,3) not suitable, how about like this?

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Stack

Lefia wrote:

Hi from my queue

Hytex

Lefia wrote:

Hi from my queue

[Hard]

Set HP into 5 oops forgot to hp 5

00:09:796 make it clickable just like you did at 00:04:550 ok
00:10:452 (3,4,5) how about you change the potition? 1/2 slider then 1/2 slider and cirlce, or maybe like this to follow the violin's sound better no thanks
00:12:225 make it clickable ???
00:15:042 make it clickable, try smth like this (start form 00:14:222) no thanks im following the vocals
00:57:009 make it clickable why there tho
01:25:534 (3,1,2,3) not suitable, how about like this? no the current one sounds better imo
Thanks for mod!
Fixed some minor placement errors.
osu file format v14

[General]
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Title:Shiny ray (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Shiny ray (TV Size)
Artist:YURiKA
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Creator:gottagof4ast
Version:Hytex's Hard
Source:リトルウィッチアカデミア
Tags:lwa, little witch academia, tv
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240,144,77993,6,0,B|268:152|268:152|296:144|296:144|336:156|376:144,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,92,78485,2,0,L|464:168,1,60
344,207,78812,2,0,L|360:131,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,272,79140,2,0,P|384:292|332:296,1,60
232,268,79468,6,0,L|108:260,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,204,79960,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,136,80124,2,0,L|112:68,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,24,80452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,116,80616,6,0,P|236:164|312:160,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,108,81108,2,0,L|388:180,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,244,81435,2,0,L|432:316,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,360,81763,2,0,P|320:368|284:360,1,60
220,316,82091,6,0,B|156:292|156:340|84:316,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,256,82583,2,0,L|20:184,1,60
92,120,82911,2,0,L|104:48,1,60
196,40,83239,6,0,B|240:36|240:36|252:44|252:44|284:32|332:48,1,120,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,88,83730,2,0,P|400:128|396:172,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,216,84058,2,0,P|328:256|332:300,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,360,84386,2,0,L|224:368,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,316,84714,6,0,L|144:184,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,144,85206,2,0,L|220:60,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,24,85534,2,0,L|136:100,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,196,85862,6,0,P|196:248|260:256,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,162,86352,1,2,0:0:0:0:
422,254,86518,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Moku_Hazushi
Hello, coming from the mod queue request ~

Maybe what i'll say below has already been discussed before, but sorry i do not have time to analyse the whole 6 pages of mods :c

00:18:649 (1) - Ok actually I think there is not really much to say about this diff, i find it ready for being ranked but let me go deeper in some details anyway. I understand why you're starting a NC here since the musical phrase does not really end and continue just after (as for 00:29:632 (1)). But still, the kinda long pause and the 1 tick and 1/2 long slider really trigger me to not do a NC here.

00:53:239 (1) - I wouldnt go for a NC here, the current melody ends with this slider so why not finishing the previous combo here ?

00:57:173 (5) -Personnal feeling Instead of one long slider I'd go for a coming back one at 00:57:501 to match the lyrics

Nothing else to say, very good difficulty, ready to be ranked imo
00:11:271 (1) - Personnal feeling I'd go for a coming-back slider here to match with the rythm intensifying a bit.

00:19:140 (1) - Same remark than 00:18:649 (1) (Normal), I guess it has already been agreed before to do a NC here ^^'

00:28:649 (2) - I would move this slider just a bit, I think the overlapping is a bit hard to read for a hard diff

01:05:698 (3,4,1) - Personnal feeling I'd space (3) from (4,1) a bit more here is why : (3,4) ends a musical phrase and (4,1) overlap with 1 tick far. What i want to say, is that you used the player doing fast overlap during the kiai with 00:58:157 (5,1), 01:02:747 (2,3) and 01:04:714 (4,1) so i'm pretty sure many players will fail by clicking too fast at 01:05:862 (4,1). Spacing them from 01:05:698 (3) will do a small pick of difficulty at the end of the kiai and usually you do not expect too fast circle after a jump longer than average (at least at hard level). Just personnal opinion that i wanted to point out.

Nothing more to say, i had fun playing this difficulty, hope it will get ranked soon :)
00:47:337 (1,2,3) - Personnal feeling I'd have keep the same triangle shape but in this order : 1-3-2, because just before at 00:46:845 (1,2) you're going from down to up and right to left, and by going from 1 to 3 at the triangle (from up to down and left to right) it adds a "dancing" mood i think. But its true you add some confusing overlapping by doing that, its up to you ^^'

Once more I dont know what to say else... I loved playing this difficulty, the jumps where just right not too hard not too easy, maybe i'm a bit sad there wasnt some long stream :p

Ok I don't know if this mod will be useful at all or not, in the end i mostly did personnal suggestions :c But i guess that means this map is almost ready to be ranked, i'm waiting the collab with excitement, good luck !
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