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SPOILER

1. 00:40:506 (1,2) - Remove both objects.
2. Make a slider using these notes: (00:40:506 - 00:41:224)
3. Add a circle to 00:41:583.
4. Make a slider: (00:41:763 - 00:42:302) and stack it with previous circle: (00:41:583)
5. Add 2 notes to 00:42:661 and 00:43:020 to complete the rhytm.

1. Make a reverse-slider starting at 00:46:254 with reverse at 00:46:793.
2. Add a note to 00:47:691? I'm not sure of this one because I don't really like how it sounds in the rhytm overall,but it plays much better with it,so decide by your own.
3. Add a note to 00:48:050.
4. Make 2 sliders using only red ticks: (00:48:230 - 00:48:589) & (00:48:949 - 00:49:308)

Aleks719 wrote:

General
bg2.png is unused and it's > 1.5mb, remove + full submit Whoops, forgot to delete it : Thanks !
Oh, *.osb too, if you want Ok ok
Your title must be Kawaru Mirai (TV Size), capitalize S Okay
From Official Ranking Submission Criteria :

It is recommended for the video's dimensions to not exceed 800x600

... instead of your 854x480 Fixed
Maybe set similar slidertick for all diffs? I prefer slidertick 2 Done
I guess it's opening, then add "opening" to the tags? Okay
Huh, there are objects in some diffs before prevew point. MATs don't like it. Replace it earlier? Done
2nd kiai in Tony's diff starts 1/2 later than in other diffs
There are breaks in Normal and Hard. they are too short. I'm suggesting to remove or map them. Deleted
And imo, "Insane" will be better name for your "Hard" Renamed

Hard
I'm suggesting to add hitsounds ещ the first 20sec of this diff Done

Normal
01:02:242 - add note + finish Done

Ok, star~

IceBeam wrote:

Fighteh o/ Icebeaaamu \o

Seems like Aleks pointed out all general problems in his previous post,so there's nothing to say in addition.

The only I thing I'm not sure is that 2-nd Kiai.Generally,it should start from downbeat,but lyrics seem to start 1/2 earlier,from the red tick.
And generally,Kiai should start with a note,but again,there's no object at 01:03:320 in Tony's diff,so the only solution is to both fix Kiai and start 01:03:500 (1) slider 1/2 earlier.

[Normal]
Yeah,too short unnecessary breaks,remove them. Removed
Also,I don't really like that beginning doesn't use hitsounds :< Sounds a bit monotonous. Fixed

00:06:014 (1) - Finish? Ok
00:37:631 (4,5) - These sliders are a bit boring I'd use these beats:

SPOILER

00:40:506 (1,2) - These sliders don't follow anything actually.
My suggestions are:

1. 00:40:506 (1,2) - Remove both objects.
2. Make a slider using these notes: (00:40:506 - 00:41:224)
3. Add a circle to 00:41:583.
4. Make a slider: (00:41:763 - 00:42:302) and stack it with previous circle: (00:41:583)
5. Add 2 notes to 00:42:661 and 00:43:020 to complete the rhytm.

Everything here is done

00:46:254 (1,2) - Too long slider,and repeat sounds a little awkward,you could use more interesting rhytms here
Maybe remove this slider and do like this:

1. Make a reverse-slider starting at 00:46:254 with reverse at 00:46:793.
2. Add a note to 00:47:691? I'm not sure of this one because I don't really like how it sounds in the rhytm overall,but it plays much better with it,so decide by your own. Hmm...I think I'll add it
3. Add a note to 00:48:050.
4. Make 2 sliders using only red ticks: (00:48:230 - 00:48:589) & (00:48:949 - 00:49:308)

Everything is done !

00:57:751 (7) - New combo and finish? Ok
01:02:242 - Add a note? Ok
01:06:913 (2) - Starts too early,I'd suggest to start it from 01:07:631 and add 2 more notes to 01:06:913 and 01:07:272. Ok, I've also changed some few stuff after these, I hope it's still correct

[Hard]
Remove breaks and yeah,probably rename it to Insane.
And again no hitsounds at the beginning :<

00:04:577 (1) - It starts too late,I hear a note at 00:04:398. Ok
00:06:014 (1) - Finish? Ok
00:50:745 (1) - A bit close to previous objects.It's pointed out in new combo,and feels playable,but still it may cause some issues. I know, I did it in purpose so I won't change that
00:51:823 (1) - Stack with (2)? Ok

Okay,that's it
Well done,guys!
I enjoyed it :>
Starring~

1. Le kiai commence généralement sur des white tick. Le commencer sur un red tick fait... bizarre.

1. Tick rate 2 ! Cheers. Unfortunately, due to the low slider speed, some ticks become invisible in-game. You need to set tick rate 1 until this is fixed.
2. 00:11:760 (1) - This sounds extremely weird because it ends on a blue tick. For an Easy diff, 1/4 rhythms are generally not recommended as they can be confusing and unintuitive. Here, make the slider repeat on the red tick, and delete the note after it.
3. 00:14:634 (3,4) - These two sound extremely weird as well, for the same reasons.
4. 00:27:569 (5) - I find kick sliders to be generally confusing in easies when they have more than one repeat, as the slider speed is usually low, and the cursor hides the repeat arrow... And new players wouldn't expect more than one repeat from a slider.
5. Same as above.

1. Beaucoup de notes sous des fins de sliders. C'est pas génial pour une Normal/Easy, parce que c'est moche à cause du stacking, et le rythme est pas toujours clair.
2. 00:14:814 (1) - Ce spinner est assez court pour une Normal... Essaie de le rendre plus long.
3. 00:38:347 (3,4) - Pour les premiers 1/2 de la map, j'ai tendance à préférer des sliders, parce que ça aide à retenir le rythme. Surtout, évite les stacks, parce que le rythme est pas très clair.

1. Mouais. Ca frise le Insane. Ya pas mal de 1/2 ajoutés juste pour la difficulté.
2. 01:19:305 (5,6,7,8,9) - Ce stream fait un peu "tache"... Ce sont les seuls 1/4 de toute la map et ils ne lui ajoutent rien

1. Vire le spinner de début, comme ça toutes les diffs auront le même point de départ (sauf la Taiko), ce sera mieux.
2. Cool kids make regularly spaced jumps
3. 01:06:910 (3,4,5) - A cause du stacking, ce stack apparaît moche en jeu

1. Beaucoup de notes, même pour une taiko... M'enfin. La SV est trop grande je trouve, la chanson ne me paraît pas si rapide que ça.

Aleks719 wrote:

General
bg2.png is unused and it's > 1.5mb, remove + full submit
Oh, *.osb too, if you want
Your title must be Kawaru Mirai (TV Size), capitalize S
From Official Ranking Submission Criteria :

It is recommended for the video's dimensions to not exceed 800x600

... instead of your 854x480
Maybe set similar slidertick for all diffs? I prefer slidertick 2
I guess it's opening, then add "opening" to the tags?
Huh, there are objects in some diffs before prevew point. MATs don't like it. Replace it earlier?
2nd kiai in Tony's diff starts 1/2 later than in other diffs
There are breaks in Normal and Hard. they are too short. I'm suggesting to remove or map them.
And imo, "Insane" will be better name for your "Hard"

Tony's Easy
01:23:619 (1) - add whistle

Ok, star~

IceBeam wrote:

Fighteh o/

Seems like Aleks pointed out all general problems in his previous post,so there's nothing to say in addition.

The only I thing I'm not sure is that 2-nd Kiai.Generally,it should start from downbeat,but lyrics seem to start 1/2 earlier,from the red tick.
And generally,Kiai should start with a note,but again,there's no object at 01:03:320 in Tony's diff,so the only solution is to both fix Kiai and start 01:03:500 (1) slider 1/2 earlier.

[Tony's Easy]
There're lots of claps that seem missplaced or missed at all.
Add claps to every 2-nd and 4-th white tick.Otherwise they sound too random

00:08:529 (2) - Clap.
00:11:044 (5) - Clap is missplaced,it should be at 00:10:685.
00:14:278 (2) - Clap.
00:15:715 - Clap.
00:17:152 - Clap.
00:17:512 (5) - Don't add claps on downbeats please :<

Well,and so on,you could improve hitsounds a lot.

00:21:464 - Add a note,otherwise 00:21:823 (4) looks too late.
00:32:601 (5) - Off rhytm,move it 1/1 later.
00:40:506 (6) - I hear cymbals,add finish?
00:48:050 (5) - 1/2 later maybe? Sounds better to me.
01:03:500 (1) - As said above,Kiai shouldn't start w/o a note,and it feels a bit late anyway,so start it 1/2 earlier.

Okay,that's it
Well done,guys!
I enjoyed it :>
Starring~

Odaril wrote:

As per your request. Mod in french for the frenchies.

General

1. Le kiai commence généralement sur des white tick. Le commencer sur un red tick fait... bizarre.

Tony's Easy

1. Tick rate 2 ! Cheers. Unfortunately, due to the low slider speed, some ticks become invisible in-game. You need to set tick rate 1 until this is fixed. fixed
2. 00:11:760 (1) - This sounds extremely weird because it ends on a blue tick. For an Easy diff, 1/4 rhythms are generally not recommended as they can be confusing and unintuitive. Here, make the slider repeat on the red tick, and delete the note after it. they ended on blue tick because i forgot to recalculate sliders on 1/2 snap divisor anyways fixed. thank you
3. 00:14:634 (3,4) - These two sound extremely weird as well, for the same reasons. same^^
4. 00:27:569 (5) - I find kick sliders to be generally confusing in easies when they have more than one repeat, as the slider speed is usually low, and the cursor hides the repeat arrow... And new players wouldn't expect more than one repeat from a slider.fixed :3
5. Same as above. found it :O fixed

Odaril wrote:

As per your request. Mod in french for the frenchies.

General

1. Le kiai commence généralement sur des white tick. Le commencer sur un red tick fait... bizarre.

Ouais mais bon, le vocal commence ici >.<

Normal

1. Beaucoup de notes sous des fins de sliders. C'est pas génial pour une Normal/Easy, parce que c'est moche à cause du stacking, et le rythme est pas toujours clair. J'en ai enlevé quelques un, j'espère que c'est bon
2. 00:14:814 (1) - Ce spinner est assez court pour une Normal... Essaie de le rendre plus long. J'ai essayé de le rendre un peu plus long, mais ca rend horriblement mal avec la musique je trouve...'fin bon
3. 00:38:347 (3,4) - Pour les premiers 1/2 de la map, j'ai tendance à préférer des sliders, parce que ça aide à retenir le rythme. Surtout, évite les stacks, parce que le rythme est pas très clair. Bof. J'ai unstacké les deux cercles, mais j'ai pas remplacé par des sliders, parce que les sliders minuscule en 1/2 j'aime pas du tout.

Insane

1. Vire le spinner de début, comme ça toutes les diffs auront le même point de départ (sauf la Taiko), ce sera mieux. Ok
2. Cool kids make regularly spaced jumps Meh :<
3. 01:06:910 (3,4,5) - A cause du stacking, ce stack apparaît moche en jeu J'ai legerement unstack, ca devrait etre bon comme ca

SapphireGhost wrote:

Random modding.

[General]
Check your kiai times, some of them are slightly unsnapped. Indeed, fixed.

[Tony's Easy]
This difficulty should use Tick Rate 2 like the other difficulties.

Yeah but :

Odaril wrote:

Tony's Easy
Tick rate 2 ! Cheers. Unfortunately, due to the low slider speed, some ticks become invisible in-game. You need to set tick rate 1 until this is fixed.

[Insane]
01:02:778 (1,2,3,4,5) - Well, these are the only 1/4 notes in the map and I'm not really sure why they're here. Well, I guess I should fix that.

ANYWAY this was a fail mod, have a star.

Makar8000 wrote:

Random modding from #modreqs

[Normal]
Slider tick rate 1? Nope
00:08:167 (4,5,1) - (Nazi) move right 1 grid? Ok
Good normal Thanks

[Insane]
00:13:197 (6) - New Combo?Nope
00:17:329 (1) - Remove new combo and put it on the next note? Nope, I use this new combo so players can see (or not ? ) that the spacing will change
00:26:131 (8) - New Combo? Ok
00:49:844 (9) - New Combo? Yeah, this combo is a bit too long...
00:50:742 (1) - Remove New combo if the above is done? Nope, since I use a higher spacing, I have to use a new combo
00:53:976 (1) - Remove new combo, then at 00:54:874 (8) - New combo, Done
Fun insane ^^

Nice mapset, star and good luck with the map. Sorry for only Nazi/NC mods :s Don't worry, it was useful !

Leorda wrote:

It's been a while~ Indeed

General
* Remove play-warningarrow, since there is no break time on each diff
* Remove star.png, since it's doesn't appear in beatmap
* 01:03:497 (T) - Put this timing sections to 01:03:317 for kiai

Everything has been fixed

That's all I can find Thanks for your mod !

• - The volume of soft-hitclap is too loud for non-kiai parts. And I suppose slidertick hitsound should include soft-hitnormal.
  - Here are the reduced wavs: http://puu.sh/6rN7

Reky wrote:

the source should be Kamisama no Memo chou XD

http://puu.sh/58c7

Samah wrote:

[Tony's Easy]
00:08:886 (3) - What's with the extra handles on the end of the slider? If you remove the last one and get rid of the red handle (just right click it once) it has the same shape. Well, why not lol
00:46:251 (1) - ^ ^
00:48:048 (2) - Too far from the previous slider, and it's probably not a good idea to have a red tick stacked like that for an Easy diff. Should be ok now
00:52:539 (1) - Same deal with the extra handles. Fixed
01:03:497 (1) - Handles on this could probably be a bit neater, but it doesn't affect gameplay. I won't change that, I think it's okay like that.

[Normal]
Tick rate is pretty high for SV of 0.80. Tick Rate reduced.
00:27:569 (1) - This note seems to be placed somewhat randomly, and I don't think the new combo is a good idea. Added a reverse arrow on the previous slider and deleted this new combo.
01:20:742 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move them all up one so it's properly centred. They aren't quite snapped to the grid though, so I'd do them one at a time. Done.

[Insane]
01:02:778 (8) - This slider doesn't really fit the rhythm or the vocals. It should be better now.
01:06:910 (3,4,5) - If the slight gap between these notes is intentional, I think you should make it a tiny bit farther apart (maybe one grid?) At the moment it looks more like they're just unsnapped. Yeah, it was intentional. I think it's okay now.

Lovely maps. <3 Thanks

Pokie wrote:

Hello. Here are some suggestions

General

• - The volume of soft-hitclap is too loud for non-kiai parts. And I suppose slidertick hitsound should include soft-hitnormal.
  - Here are the reduced wavs: http://puu.sh/6rN7 Yeah, they sounds much better, thanks !

Normal

01:00:622 (3,4) - this pattern may cause confusing imo, suggestion : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/157087 Fixed.



Nice map set Thank you

1. Les tags ne sont pas dans le même ordre dans la diff à Mustaash que dans les autres diffs.
2. Tu n'utilises jamais de break, donc désactives les letterboxes
3. My Anime list dis que le nom de l'anime c'est "Kamisama no Memo-chou" avec un tiret, mais bon, comme toute les autre map de cet anime on la même source que toi, je pense que c'est bon.
4. Toute les diffs n'ont pas le même tick rate, le tick rate devrait être le même sur chaque diff car il doit être choisis en fonction de la musique et non des difficultés. Met tick 2 sur la normal, par contre sur la easy, je pense qu'il faut laisser tick 1 car la slider velocity est très basse ce qui fait que ça rend les ticks un peu wxfhsdf, surtout sur les sliders qui ne sont long que de 1/1

1. AR+1, It would be more readable, AR2 is not enough

1. 00:51:820 (1) - Ce slider se termine bizarrement, essaye de suivre quelque chose de plus distinc dans la musique comme les vocales en réduisant le slider de 1/1 et en ajoutant un cercle à 00:52:539 ?

1. Renomme la en "LRJ's Taiko Oni"
2. Centre les paramètre de difficultés (HPdrain +1)
3. 01:02:778 - Tu n'as pas le droit de faire ce genre de chose avec le kiai dans les taiko diff

1. 00:12:658 (7) - Je comprend l'utilisation des clap sur les tick dans la easy, y'avait pas trop le choix, mais dans cette diff, évites quoi .__. On a l'impression que le slider se termine plus tard que ce qu'il ne doit.
   Donc, réduit ce slider de 1/2 et ajoute un cercle là où il se terminait avant.
2. 00:13:197 (8) - Je pense qu'il y a besoin d'avoir un new combo ici.
3. 00:26:670 (5) - Même remarque à propos du clap sur le tick. Termine ce slider 1/1 plus tôt et ajoute une note là où il se terminait. De plus le slider est un peu long, c'est pas super.
4. 00:40:503 (1) - Ca manque de HS dans cette partie, ajoute un whistle
5. 00:42:658 - Idem
6. 00:43:377 (5) - Idem, sur le reverse
7. 00:59:365 (5) - Même remarque pour le clap sur le tick
8. 01:02:060 (1) - La fin de ce spinner est totalement off ! Il devrait se terminer 1/2 plus tard, même si pour ça tu doit changer le pattern qui suit.

1. 00:14:724 (1) - Le whistle sonne vraiment mal ici. Il anticipe le pattern qui suit ce qui le rend bizarre.
2. 00:35:652 (4) - Même remarque que dans la diff à Mustaash pour le clap sur le tick
3. 01:06:910 (3,4,5) - Ce pattern est définitivement trop bizarre ! xD L'antijum avec le cercle au milieu n'est pas franchement intuitif, quand j'ai testplay perso, j'ai direct cru à du lol1/4. Change le please.