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sirjuyt

Chewin wrote:

Hi ~ :D

Yukiar:
  1. Circle size+1
  2. 02:31:999 (3) - New combo
  3. 02:36:799 (3) - ^
  4. 02:51:199 (4) - ^
Omg good map >.<

Normal:
  1. Circle size+1 x
  2. 00:49:999 (2,3,4) - This is a normal, don't always snap the circles. Make it in this way, it is better http://puu.sh/5Dxy not always ~ In fact I only snap circles here
  3. 02:38:749 Make something and don't use the break time, like the previous difficult. no
Nothing to say, good job.

Hard:
  1. Why the space is wrong? Use distance snap please Uh... Spacing is correct ,I use DS 1.5x at the kiai time.
  2. 03:01:399 (3) - Use new combo? um,ok
Good map btw, nothing to say.

Insane:
  1. 01:55:999 (9) - New combo
  2. 01:56:749 (1) - No new combo
  3. 01:58:399 (4) - New combo
  4. Forgot Kiai time, add it :) - 0 0;
Very good maps, I wish you good luck for ranking. o/
thx mod :)
Komeiji Yuki

Raging Bull wrote:

Yuki:
01:12:199 (5,6,1) - Can you unstack these? With the SB here and stacks, beginners might panic and press too fast.
Have called some Taiwanese friends to test and they think it's fine

02:46:399 (1) - Remove NC for consistency in your NC pattern.
Done

02:57:799 (1) - ^
Done

Chewin wrote:

Yukiar:
  1. Circle size+1
    Larger circle Size make the mapping ugly... Also it have enough time to target the notes imo bcz of low bpm
  2. 02:31:999 (3) - New combo
    No
  3. 02:36:799 (3) - ^
    ^
  4. 02:51:199 (4) - ^
    ^
Thx both modders :3

Download: Atoguru - Mr.Liar (sirjuyt) [Yukiar].osu
eikkaleyd
:D 不改,来加star的
Topic Starter
sirjuyt

eikkaleyd wrote:

:D 不改,来加star的

:) 謝謝
Kiddo-Kun
Wow, this song is really catchy~

[General]
• I think the last break on Normal and Hard are awkwardly placed and pretty useless seeing as it's near the end. The breaks on Yukiar is nice, I think you should follow them.

[Hard]
• 00:18:799 (1) - I would remove the clap on this note. It's kinda weird if (1) stands out more than (2)
• 00:35:449 (1) - Remove new combo on this note to stay consistent with 00:30:649 (4).

• 01:31:249 (4,5) - I say this would play better if it was not under (3). Try this:
• 01:51:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If I were you I would do Something like this to match the lyrics

• 01:59:449 (5) - Eh, this sounds like it has one note too many. I'd turn this into a hitcircle to fix that.
• 03:01:399 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Very awkward and frustrating pattern IMO. Change it up please. Try

[qinche]
• 00:27:199 (7) - New combo on this note to match 00:22:399 (1) -.
• 00:40:249 (1) - This note is spaced awkwardly and will trip people up on a first play through.
• 00:46:399 (6) - I'd stack this under (5) so it would be less frustrating to hit.
• 01:00:799 (7) - New combo on this note to match the lyrics better. Then move on to removing the new combo on 01:02:149 (1) - . Add a new combo on 01:03:199 (4) -. Then they live happily ever after (Because they match the lyrics/music better)
• 01:09:049 (5) - Here, I would move this a tad closer since it's pretty awkward to play as it is due to the weird flow. Try this on:

Everything else is fine as far as I can tell.
Have a star, good map.
SI BI RE RU!
Topic Starter
sirjuyt

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Wow, this song is really catchy~ agreeed :)

[General]
• I think the last break on Normal and Hard are awkwardly placed and pretty useless seeing as it's near the end. The breaks on Yukiar is nice, I think you should follow them. because I have mapped 02:19:999~02:29:449 this part , and wanna keep consistent with the same part before , so I placed the break.
[Hard]
• 00:18:799 (1) - I would remove the clap on this note. It's kinda weird if (1) stands out more than (2) yep. Removed.
• 00:35:449 (1) - Remove new combo on this note to stay consistent with 00:30:649 (4). oops. Removed.

• 01:31:249 (4,5) - I say this would play better if it was not under (3). Try this:
Nice. :) would be more fun
• 01:51:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If I were you I would do Something like this to match the lyrics
I don't know how to deal with this part (vocal is off ? ) . I'd put 4,5,6 on 1/2 imo
• 01:59:449 (5) - Eh, this sounds like it has one note too many. I'd turn this into a hitcircle to fix that. sounds better. fixed
• 03:01:399 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Very awkward and frustrating pattern IMO. Change it up please. Try
all right, changed.

[qinche]
• 00:27:199 (7) - New combo on this note to match 00:22:399 (1) -.
• 00:40:249 (1) - This note is spaced awkwardly and will trip people up on a first play through.
• 00:46:399 (6) - I'd stack this under (5) so it would be less frustrating to hit.
• 01:00:799 (7) - New combo on this note to match the lyrics better. Then move on to removing the new combo on 01:02:149 (1) - . Add a new combo on 01:03:199 (4) -. Then they live happily ever after (Because they match the lyrics/music better)
• 01:09:049 (5) - Here, I would move this a tad closer since it's pretty awkward to play as it is due to the weird flow. Try this on:

Everything else is fine as far as I can tell.
Have a star, good map.
SI BI RE RU!
^ ^ such as useful mod
thanks you :)
Breeze

General

  1. Turn off letterbox of [qinche] diff.

SB

  1. Lyric SB looked kinda blurry, but I guess you do that in purpose to fit this song, I feel black border and red font would be more better, just sayin

Yukiar

  1. Maybe rename this diff. to Yuki's Easy better?
  2. Circle Size+1?
  3. 00:48:799 (5) - Add finish?
  4. 01:46:399 (5) - ^
  5. 02:29:599 (1) - ^

Normal

  1. 01:03:199 (1) - Add finish?
  2. 02:19:999 (1) - ^
  3. 02:48:799 (1) - ^
  4. 03:00:799 (1) - ^

Hard

  1. 00:19:099 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - Both add clap sounds great IMO
  2. 00:48:799 (1) - Add finish?
  3. 01:12:799 (1) - ^
  4. 01:15:199 (1) - ^
  5. 01:16:549 (6,7) - Slider start point, finish instead of whistle + clap seems better, just my own opinion. So I won't point out the same stuff then
  6. 01:58:399 (1) - Finish?
  7. 02:34:399 (1) - ^
  8. 02:36:799 (3) - ^
  9. 03:00:799 (6) - ^

qinche

  1. 00:40:249 (1) - spacing confusing
  2. 00:58:399 (1) - Add soft finish?
  3. 01:02:149 (1) - Spacing a bit close
  4. 01:36:799 (7) - Soft finish?
  5. 01:55:999 (9) - ^
  6. 02:58:399 (2) - ^
Topic Starter
sirjuyt

Breeze wrote:

General

  1. Turn off letterbox of [qinche] diff.

SB

  1. Lyric SB looked kinda blurry, but I guess you do that in purpose to fit this song, I feel black border and red font would be more better, just sayin

Yukiar

  1. Maybe rename this diff. to Yuki's Easy better?
  2. Circle Size+1?
  3. 00:48:799 (5) - Add finish?
  4. 01:46:399 (5) - ^
  5. 02:29:599 (1) - ^

Normal

  1. 01:03:199 (1) - Add finish? 嗯 加上了
  2. 02:19:999 (1) - ^ OK.
  3. 02:48:799 (1) - ^ ^
  4. 03:00:799 (1) - ^ finish有點脆,加上去可能突兀了點

Hard

  1. 00:19:099 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - Both add clap sounds great IMO 嗯. 的確
  2. 00:48:799 (1) - Add finish? added
  3. 01:12:799 (1) - ^ ^
  4. 01:15:199 (1) - ^ 隔不到3秒就再finish一次 感覺雜了點,而且下面這段會改finish,所以加clap
  5. 01:16:549 (6,7) - Slider start point, finish instead of whistle + clap seems better, just my own opinion. So I won't point out the same stuff then 這個..單finish感覺不夠力,就clap+finish好吧
  6. 01:58:399 (1) - Finish? clap
  7. 02:34:399 (1) - ^ added
  8. 02:36:799 (3) - ^ 同樣是01:15:199這樣
  9. 03:00:799 (6) - ^ clap

qinche

  1. 00:40:249 (1) - spacing confusing
  2. 00:58:399 (1) - Add soft finish?
  3. 01:02:149 (1) - Spacing a bit close
  4. 01:36:799 (7) - Soft finish?
  5. 01:55:999 (9) - ^
  6. 02:58:399 (2) - ^
-
:) thanks for checking
Dino99
Hi~~~@@

Yukiar

Nice!!~~

Normal

AR+1?

01:16:099 (3) - 後面2個折返去掉Clap&Whistle 然後加Finish?? (改的話後面順便改改吧....)

Hard

01:17:449 & 01:17:599 - Add a note?

qinche

00:40:249 (1,2) - 間距.....?

What a nice map:3

找不出多少錯誤了@@

Star~~~!!@@
Topic Starter
sirjuyt

12BARRY21 wrote:

Hi~~~@@

Yukiar

Nice!!~~

Normal

AR+1? 打Hr圈就小了 AR還是低一點好

01:16:099 (3) - 後面2個折返去掉Clap&Whistle 然後加Finish?? (改的話後面順便改改吧....) 疏忽了lol Clap+finish

Hard

01:17:449 & 01:17:599 - Add a note? nah 沒必要

qinche

00:40:249 (1,2) - 間距.....? 這應該是有意的?

What a nice map:3 thx:)

找不出多少錯誤了@@

Star~~~!!@@
thx mod~ :)
qinche

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[qinche]
• 00:27:199 (7) - New combo on this note to match 00:22:399 (1) -. no, short combo like this isnt wise
• 00:40:249 (1) - This note is spaced awkwardly and will trip people up on a first play through.on purpose for those people who dont listen to music. i have had several test plays from good players and they all caught it
• 00:46:399 (6) - I'd stack this under (5) so it would be less frustrating to hit.thats a stress on the vocal
• 01:00:799 (7) - New combo on this note to match the lyrics better. Then move on to removing the new combo on 01:02:149 (1) - . Add a new combo on 01:03:199 (4) -. Then they live happily ever after (Because they match the lyrics/music better)again in this map im not changing combos for lyrics but rather to make them less confusing. flows better actually.
• 01:09:049 (5) - Here, I would move this a tad closer since it's pretty awkward to play as it is due to the weird flow. Try this on:
its paralleled, why else?

Breeze wrote:

General

  1. Turn off letterbox of [qinche] diff.oops, its off now

qinche

  1. 00:40:249 (1) - spacing confusingon purpose for those people who dont listen to music. i have had several test plays from good players and they all caught it
  2. 00:58:399 (1) - Add soft finish?
  3. 01:02:149 (1) - Spacing a bit close
  4. 01:36:799 (7) - Soft finish?
  5. 01:55:999 (9) - ^
  6. 02:58:399 (2) - ^
and yes to all sound adjustments.

Download: Atoguru - Mr.Liar (sirjuyt) [qinche].osu
Komeiji Yuki

Breeze wrote:

SB

  1. Lyric SB looked kinda blurry, but I guess you do that in purpose to fit this song, I feel black border and red font would be more better, just sayin
Anyway it's done so just let it go

Yukiar

  1. Maybe rename this diff. to Yuki's Easy better? Be honest , I would change difficulty name to my own diff name just like qinche . This diff name is named before I named my own diff name
  2. Circle Size+1? No bcz bpm and SV are not high so players have enough time to click the smaller notes imo
  3. 00:48:799 (5) - Add finish? Add in the end of the slider
  4. 01:46:399 (5) - ^ ^
  5. 02:29:599 (1) - ^Add


Thx for recheck

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@sirjuyt: 換了diff name 的關係,記得把舊diff刪掉,並且加新diff後full-submit


Download: Atoguru - Mr.Liar (sirjuyt) [KomeiKi].osu
Topic Starter
sirjuyt

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

@sirjuyt: 換了diff name 的關係,記得把舊diff刪掉,並且加新diff後full-submit[/color]
OK. 更新好
Breeze
Now it looked good enough for a bubble
OnosakiHito
Oh, it has been bubbled! Nice~
Topic Starter
sirjuyt

Breeze wrote:

Now it looked good enough for a bubble
oh yes. thank you :) Breeze
Komeiji Yuki
Thx you Breeze

I can't wait it gets ranked : )
Garven
[General]
Tick rate 4 sounds awesome on this song, but tick rate 2 is pretty good too.
03:03:199 - Having a note here would give a better feeling of resolution to the map.

[Storyboard]
All of your lyric images look really fuzzy and are a stark contrast compared to the sharpness of the bg image.

[Skin]
The comboburst image doesn't fit the BG's theme very well stylistically.

[KomeiKi]
00:31:999 (3) - This slider end doesn't sound intentional, but if it is, it doesn't sound too well trying to follow that lyric after following the main beat so much
01:17:599 - Extend the break to here.

02:03:199 (1) - Kind of soon after a spinner for this level of difficulty.
02:12:799 (1) - ^

[Normal]
01:17:599 - Extend break to here
02:39:199 - ^
I really don't like the placement of that last break since you have a break, play for 20 seconds, and the map is over. It's kind of disruptive.

[Hard]
00:54:199 (2) - This played so much better for me

01:17:599 - Extend break to here
01:28:249 (4,5) - Kind of a tricky rhythm to stack
01:51:199 (1) - Something similar to the last suggestion would be cool
02:39:199 - Extend break to here
02:53:599 (1) - Same rhythm suggestion

[Taiko]
01:06:949 (1) - Aww, these k's would be so much more sexy as finishes (removing the ds) but then you'd have an overlapping one at 01:07:999 - Then again, if you raised the slider speed like you did for the second and third kiai... (hint hint)
All the quick 1/4's didn't feel very good for such a swingin' song.

[qinche]
00:12:799 (8) - aaah I keep missing this slider since it's hard to see from 00:11:449 (3) - 's hitburst
Tick rate 2 for this one if you do tick 4 for the others. The normal tick sound is a bit too loud for this.

Sexy song to map. <3
Topic Starter
sirjuyt

Garven wrote:

[General]
Tick rate 4 sounds awesome on this song, but tick rate 2 is pretty good too. Don’t like ticks sound much, I’d use 2 tick rate
03:03:199 - Having a note here would give a better feeling of resolution to the map. :) Ok. Sounds great.

[Storyboard]
All of your lyric images look really fuzzy and are a stark contrast compared to the sharpness of the bg image.

[Skin]
The comboburst image doesn't fit the BG's theme very well stylistically. well,if I can't find better one,I'll delete it

[KomeiKi]
00:31:999 (3) - This slider end doesn't sound intentional, but if it is, it doesn't sound too well trying to follow that lyric after following the main beat so much
01:17:599 - Extend the break to here.

02:03:199 (1) - Kind of soon after a spinner for this level of difficulty.
02:12:799 (1) - ^

[Normal]
01:17:599 - Extend break to here Ok.
02:39:199 - ^ ^
I really don't like the placement of that last break since you have a break, play for 20 seconds, and the map is over. It's kind of disruptive.
But I want to do the break for echoing with 01:17:599~01:27:199. If it’s need, I’ll map.

[Hard]
00:54:199 (2) - This played so much better for me Yap. Do some change,

01:17:599 - Extend break to here Ok.
01:28:249 (4,5) - Kind of a tricky rhythm to stack I think it's ok.
01:51:199 (1) - Something similar to the last suggestion would be cool yees
02:39:199 - Extend break to here Ok.
02:53:599 (1) - Same rhythm suggestion ^^

[Taiko]
01:06:949 (1) - Aww, these k's would be so much more sexy as finishes (removing the ds) but then you'd have an overlapping one at 01:07:999 - Then again, if you raised the slider speed like you did for the second and third kiai... (hint hint)
All the quick 1/4's didn't feel very good for such a swingin' song.

[qinche]
00:12:799 (8) - aaah I keep missing this slider since it's hard to see from 00:11:449 (3) - 's hitburst
Tick rate 2 for this one if you do tick 4 for the others. The normal tick sound is a bit too loud for this.

Sexy song to map. <3 <3


:) yeah~
thank you checking the map, garven!
Komeiji Yuki
I think it's better now

Thx you Garven :oops:

(About the spinners , I have no idea to change it so I put them closer to the center . Wish it helps the beginners . )

Download: Atoguru - Mr.Liar (sirjuyt) [KomeiKi].osu
qinche
wow that was eh...unexpected... i dunno if i really should change it, no other had mentioned this part before...

also about the tick rate. the score spread is pretty good now, i would make it 2 at most (actually it doesnt do anything cuz i didnt use any long slider), 4 is indeed adding too many scores and is loud.

if you agree to these, then please let the mapper make the tick rate 2.
Garven
@sirj I'm still waiting to see if anything is going to happen here...
OnosakiHito
Aaah, sorry that I didn't act faster. Forgot about this because I got so many requests.

Garven wrote:

[Taiko]
01:06:949 (1) - Aww, these k's would be so much more sexy as finishes (removing the ds) but then you'd have an overlapping one at 01:07:999 - Then again, if you raised the slider speed like you did for the second and third kiai... (hint hint)
I have use K K K kd should fit good now.
All the quick 1/4's didn't feel very good for such a swingin' song. Deleted some and made them easier
Thank you once again for modding my Taiko diff Garven. Less people are doing this, so I'm pretty happy about it.
Waiting for coming mods from you~

Download: Atoguru - Mr.Liar (sirjuyt) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
sirjuyt

OnosakiHito wrote:

Aaah, sorry that I didn't act faster. Forgot about this because I got so many requests.

Garven wrote:

[Taiko]
01:06:949 (1) - Aww, these k's would be so much more sexy as finishes (removing the ds) but then you'd have an overlapping one at 01:07:999 - Then again, if you raised the slider speed like you did for the second and third kiai... (hint hint)
I have use K K K kd should fit good now.
All the quick 1/4's didn't feel very good for such a swingin' song. Deleted some and made them easier
Thank you once again for modding my Taiko diff Garven. Less people are doing this, so I'm pretty happy about it.
Waiting for coming mods from you~
:D


~~~~~~

Okey :) Garven

I think this map is ok now
Garven
[Skin]
No comboburst change then? Ah well.

[KomeiKi]
03:03:199 - Not sure if you noticed the general mod, but please consider adding a note here to give a better feeling of resolution to the map.

[Normal]
About the last break, it's not needed - just my opinion on the game play flow.

[qinche]
I am kind of perplexed with qinche's answer. I'm okay with the slider not being changed, but it seems like you're okay with the tick rate 2? Can we get this clarified please?
Also: 03:03:199 - Not sure if you noticed the general mod, but please consider adding a note here to give a better feeling of resolution to the map.
qinche

Garven wrote:

[Skin]
No comboburst change then? Ah well.

[KomeiKi]
03:03:199 - Not sure if you noticed the general mod, but please consider adding a note here to give a better feeling of resolution to the map.

[Normal]
About the last break, it's not needed - just my opinion on the game play flow.

[qinche]
I am kind of perplexed with qinche's answer. I'm okay with the slider not being changed, but it seems like you're okay with the tick rate 2? Can we get this clarified please?
Also: 03:03:199 - Not sure if you noticed the general mod, but please consider adding a note here to give a better feeling of resolution to the map.

yup, im fine with tick rate 2 and adding a note at the end

Download: Atoguru - Mr.Liar (sirjuyt) [qinche].osu
Topic Starter
sirjuyt

Garven wrote:

[Skin]
No comboburst change then? Ah well. Ah? Mabye I should do a full submission, have deleted.
[KomeiKi]
03:03:199 - Not sure if you noticed the general mod, but please consider adding a note here to give a better feeling of resolution to the map.

[Normal]
About the last break, it's not needed - just my opinion on the game play flow. Ok. Have mapped this part.

[qinche]
I am kind of perplexed with qinche's answer. I'm okay with the slider not being changed, but it seems like you're okay with the tick rate 2? Can we get this clarified please?
Also: 03:03:199 - Not sure if you noticed the general mod, but please consider adding a note here to give a better feeling of resolution to the map.
- thanks Garven :)
Garven
Rebub~
Breeze
神曲
RANKED
tutuhaha
lol!!!!
Congratulations~~~~~~~~~~
spboxer3
恭喜了~第一張Ranked map~
Pereira006
Congratz you First beatmap rank :)

Congratz, sirjuyt !! :)

good map
Kyonko Hizara
I cant dl it :/
Topic Starter
sirjuyt

Breeze wrote:

神曲
RANKED
WOWWW :)

Thank you Breeze!

a- and thank you all ~
Dino99
恭喜啦!!~~~~ :D

Nice Map!!
Akiyama Mizuki
finally ranked! congratulations :)
eikkaleyd
恭喜~终于等到这个歌ranked了~~!XDD
AIR315
:)

Congratulations~
Nymph
really good song~
OnosakiHito
Congratulation~
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