1. Extra (5.95 stars, 1832 notes)

JeromeTT wrote:

I'll try my best to mod
00:12:368 (6) - don't stack this note on the next one since there is a pause I did that specifically because there is a pause and an unexpected snapping (3/4), by having it stacked it breaks flow and forces the player to focus more on the next not to hit it right
00:15:497 - there is sound here Fixed
00:20:630 (6,1) - stream between these notes I guess there's technically sound that would suppourt a stream but when you speed it up it I really can't hear it, I might change it if more people think it should be different
00:25:523 - sound here, can make this part 00:25:443 (8,9,10,1) into 5 note stream Fixed
00:38:759 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - turn volume down I'll take note of that for when I start histsounding
01:00:577 (1) - i don't think this slider is needed I think it's fine, there is definitely a sound there
01:06:031 (4) - change into 2 circles because there is noise at slider end Fixed
01:09:721 (3) - i feel like this is more appropriate https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7805663 Yeah, what you did works better, fixed
01:11:727 - sound here, make into a stream
01:14:534 (10) - new combo? Fixed
01:14:775 - noise here Fixed, changed the previous note to a 1/4 slider
01:23:358 (11) - change into 2 quarter sliders, one on white and one on red tick ehhh, kinda on the edge about this one, if anyone else brings it up I'll change it
01:47:261 - hitsound very loud yup, I will
02:31:058 (10) - make slider repeat one more time Fixed
02:34:668 - noise here Fixed
02:35:149 - ^ Fixed
03:10:041 (1) - i would move this note higher Fixed
04:24:481 (1,2,3,4) - do the circular slider thing like you did with the other sliders in this section not sure what you mean by this
04:13:571 (4,5,6) - in these sections you use triples, but later on the song you use repeating sliders (eg 04:23:839 (3)) changed so that they both use repeaters
04:56:245 - wheres the slider? Lol, nice catch
05:12:128 - reduce volume I will
05:12:128 (2,3,4) - i would split this evenly into 3 parts or just replace with a spinner Splitting it evenly wouldn't get across what the sound is like and I don't think a spinner would either

-Roz wrote:

From my queue, some of these are the same from above, I wrote this before looking!

The rhythm in this map is pretty spot on, but everything looks slightly messy. Overall it's nice to play though.

AIMod has a bunch of unsnap errors, should check those out. File/Open AiMod

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00:11:967 (4) - Maybe a buzzslider instead, there's a fast sound

00:19:667 (2) - This is stylistic, but I would make this slider identical to 00:19:186 (9) because it's the same sound

00:20:951 (1) - Overlap this with 00:20:630 (6). It will look messy, but with some tweaking you can get it right

00:22:555 (7) - I feel like this would be better as two 1/2 sliders instead of a repeating one.

01:03:545 (5) - This short slider doesn't fit the rhythm to me, the slider end is on a louder note then the head.

01:07:796 (5) - The slider end is on a loud sound too, maybe make it a circle? http://puu.sh/vllyl/6e58adbd61.png

01:11:165 (5) - This would be better as a stream because the sound doesn't repeat in the song.

01:18:384 (1) - There's a loud snare on the second white tick of this slider.

01:31:058 (8) - Make this a 1/2 slider with two circles

01:45:176 (5) - Another stylistic change, but I would replace the slider head with a circle and the end with a looong fancy slider instead of the spinner after.

02:29:133 (2,3) - I feel like these repeating sliders throughout this section feel weird to play with the songs rhythm. Maybe use more of 02:34:267 (2,3,4,5,6,7)

03:07:073 (7) - Slightly off my monitor

03:52:678 - There's a sound here

03:56:245 - ^ Actually, this happens a lot after

TheKingHenry wrote:

Hello there mod from my queue~ M4M from your queue~

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1. I'm pretty sure goreshit shouldn't be capitalized, same with the song title here. Actually, you could just use this as a source of kind of these since it's ranked and relatively new so it's likely to be correct. Or just alternatively surf some internet ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Checked on their website and it looks like the don't capitalize their own name or their song on the site so I'll change itt
2. Check AiMod there's several objects / object ends not snapped Fixed
3. Before going to some individual points, I think overally this could be more visually appealing, it's kinda having a lot of small things that combined together kinda make it feel like little untidy. For example there are a lot of overlaps I think you could just get rid of like for example 00:29:133 (8,10,2,4,5,6) - 00:35:550 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,9) - blanketing some streams would make it look a lot tidier too since it would also remove some overlaps I'll see what I can do
4. 00:14:453 (4,5) - why is this spacing lower than the ones before lol Fixed
5. 00:15:336 (12,1,2,3,4,5) - could remove overlap Fixed
6. 01:00:577 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - could look better, first of all the stream itself doesn't look like a smooth curve (maybe that's just me) and then it also could begin nicer from the slider, not necessarily smooth if you don't want but atleast same spacing as the stream perhaps? Lol, that stream is like the only stream I made using ctrl+f but I did fix how it flowed from the slider though
7. 01:02:823 (8,1) - just btw overlaps like this are usually cool since it's clearly intended and is not just random Thanks, it was intended BTW not just getting it right by random chance
8. 01:06:513 (6,7,8) - should just space out the circle like with every other kickslider Fixed
9. space out 01:21:112 (2,3,4) - and 01:21:432 (5,6,7) - as in so that they blanket the 2 curves of 01:21:753 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - also add NCs Fixed the blanket but why add NC?
10. I don't get the reasoning behind changing the base hitsound sample like how you do here in the following sections any hitsounding done here is most likely completely accidental, I haven't put any effort into hitsounding yet. though this map is going to be tedious but pretty straight forward to hitsound
11. 01:49:668 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - definitely arrange so that 01:49:989 (7,8,9,10,11) - blankets 01:49:828 (6) - (thus it needs slightly more curve) Blanketed by increasing the spacing, I want to keep the curve relatively the same thoughout the section
12. 02:20:791 (7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - here as well (it's as if doing it already, just make the visual distance equal). Note that when the stream is longer, ofc it will only blanket for the part of it, or otherwise it will just run around the target which won't necessarily look good anymore. For example here probably couple last objects need to stray away already Fixed
13. 02:32:823 (8) - NC Fixed
14. 02:39:721 (5,6,1,2,3) - hella cramped pattern, would just arrange it differently Fixed (probably)
15. 02:48:866 (7) - NC? (actually lot of these before too, I recommend just cutting down the combos to half when they are constantly going to like 13) I mean, this is a stream map for the most part and it's not unheard of to see stream maps consistently reaching combos higher than 16 even
16. 02:56:244 (4,5) - uh, I don't think there is anything so drastically new and different that it would make sense to be mapped with stuff like this without some kind of introductory patterning My bad, must've accidentally moved it into a blanket when I was double checking the map
17. 03:51:112 - I think you are just lazing around in this section, okay it's fine to map only these sounds, but then you should map all the sounds that are the same, like, there are similar sounds at the "break" parts too. And for that matter, the sounds you were mapping are more complex than you have mapped them rhythmically. Basically it's not following anything that well, thus I feel like you are just slightly lazy here hmm, I might try it but the reason I mapped it like this is I wanted a break and it is very quite compared to the other slower sections
18. 04:11:005 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - spacing increase is cool but this sharp curve doesn't make that much sense. It's not really necessary and even if you apply it, applying it to 04:11:245 (10) - isn't terribly coherent. Also now that I'm looking at this pattern, the blanket between 04:11:005 (7) - and 04:10:523 (2,3,4,5,6) - needs slight tuning Tuned the blanket and changed it into a smooth stream with smoothly increasing spacing
19. 04:29:293 (1) - remove NC, NC 04:29:614 (3) - instead Fixed
20. 04:52:716 - similar to above, why so little things mapped? Same reason
21. Doesn't matter that much since they are kicksliders, but there are actually no distinct sounds at 05:12:529 - and 05:12:850 eh, I think I'll keep it as a lot of my kicksliders don't really have distinct sounds snapped to them
22. 01:23:197 (10,11,1,2) - anyone else bringing this up here. Ending 01:23:358 (11) - on the white tick makes pretty much no sense in any theoretical way and it's also worse off for the player. Imo ideal patterning considering the music would be having 01:23:358 (11) - as circles since they are the strong sounds. Then there are alternatives for the rest: 01:23:197 (10) - can be both circle or kickslider depending on if you want to include the sound at 01:23:277 - or make it slightly less dense. Then from the white tick 01:23:277 - you can either use kickslider or continue with circles until 01:23:678 (2) - depending on how you want it to play and emphasise the music. 01:23:678 (2) - is anyways best off as kickslider as you have already done. Probably best would be to have them as circles but have different spacing for the drum sounds at the white tick compared to the snare sounds before and at the coming red tick. Smth like this perhaps. so is your point just don't end on a white tick? if it is then Fixed by turning the repeat slider into a kickslider
23. So yeah, it needs a lot of visual tuning and polishing, especially earlier parts, middle-to-late looked better although the last not-so-dense part before the outro could also be a lot cleaner considering that it's not so dense. Rhythmics will probably need some checking as well if there are more of these kind of cases I mentioned here. Hitsounds are kinda loud sometimes, soft sliderslider bothered me the most. Also for hitsounds you could/should do some volume changes other than making them overally slightly lower.

Good luck!