00:29:228 (1,2) -
https://puu.sh/vNvwp/e269e35583.png I think visuals can be improved a bit after checking your other similar patterns.
01:00:086 (1,2,3) - Maybe you'll want to make them overlapping, consistent with other upcoming similar patterns. Also you didn't follow the 1/6 sound with slider tail of 3 this time?
01:01:800 (1,3) - You can move 3 farther, it's almost overlapping with stacking on.
01:21:228 (4) - This slider should end on 1/4 after listening over again and refering to your other snaps.
01:23:550 (1) - Maybe add a clap here it sounds cool.
01:24:728 (4) - 01:26:443 (4) - 01:36:728 (4) - I suggest you rearrange the spacing here a bit cuz 3->4 is a 1/6 gap while 4->5 is 1/4. From what I have seen, most other spacing and flow reflects that well, and so should they be.
01:34:586 (2,3,4,5,6) - I suppose you are missing some hitsounds here? Only additions are added and they seem good spots for some extra hitsounding. Also visuals can be improved imo, now it's neither linear nor in a good flow.
01:35:550 (1) - I'd say this slider looks too normal compared with other similar ones lol, the sound is also well worth addressing with a little extra modification in shape. sth like
https://puu.sh/vNx8x/3c84fc550d.png might fit your concept
01:36:514 (3) - 01:43:371 (3) - 01:45:086 (3) - slider tails should snap to 1/6
01:38:443 (4) - 04:45:407 (4) - 04:51:514 (1) - 05:19:371 (2) - slider tail should snap to 1/4
01:49:800 - drum addition finish
01:53:228 (7) - Maybe nc, slider shape and the sound itself are so special here.
02:14:978 - I feel lower volume fits better.
02:15:514 (2) - hmm Why does it end on blue tick?
02:20:086 (1,2) - Probably need some more opinions about the snapping, it sounds more like 1/4 to me..
02:21:514 - drumclapfinish where
02:26:121 - hitsounding
02:27:657 (1) - Consider snapping the tail to that 1/4 beat cuz that sounds much stronger.
02:41:550 (3) - I would personally suggest you map 02:41:657 - sound here cuz it sounds more obvious than previous bars, and also because of your rhythm choice at 02:41:121 - where you emphasize more on such sound rather than the beat.
02:46:371 (1) - Consider a whistle with around 40% volume at the spinner tail, that would sounds nice imo.
03:14:657 - Add a green line to increase volume of this tick specifically for the sound, like you did to 03:51:514 - 03:55:800 -
03:15:943 - 03:29:550 - 03:57:086 - imo you can simply adjust the breaking periods to normal ones, is their any special intention here?
05:19:371 (2) -
https://puu.sh/vNAe9/f360ea5542.png The pattern can be visually neater.
05:20:871 (1,2) - same about visual, 05:21:086 (2,3) - this one is done much better
06:00:621 (1) - I guess it was supposed to start at 06:00:514 - cuz it's clear that it should end at 06:10:371 - instead of 06:10:478 -
popped for some quality concerns, you can call me for a recheck when you think it's ready again