1. Deserving of Life (3.38 stars, 318 notes)
2. Deserving of Testing (3.43 stars, 367 notes)

1. BPM: 143
   Offset: 750

teaMblack19 wrote:

Hello. This is your timing:

1. BPM: 143
   Offset: 750

And convert audio to 192kbps please. Good luck!

HibikiDesu wrote:

Documenting a mod i performed over discord:

[Deserving of Life]
00:12:501 (5) - new combo there. The reason is that it doesn't match the other combos around it
00:31:801 (7) - try making this part of the last combo at 00:26:347 (1)
00:47:783 (5) - This needs to be a new combo. New combo on every big white tick from here until the spinner at 01:11:908 (1) - This combo pattern should be used for the majority of the song
01:02:887 (6) - Missing a clap hitsound
01:07:713 (6) - same as ^
01:11:489 (2) - optional clap hitsound here for emphasis
01:39:144 (3) - make this a repeat slider to emphasize the echo. Use a timing point to lower the hitsound volume right before the last slider end
01:42:920 (3,4) - This slider pattern is weird to read because of the sliders going back and forth over the same straight line. Rotate first slider to the side to increase the readability.
01:48:622 (6,7,1,2) - a little bit of bad flow here

This is a condensed version but covers most of what i explained minus some of the visuals and repetitiveness

Good luck with the map

1. Try using the whole editor playfield so it's more fun and open to play, it's a bit cramped now which is a common mistake for newer mappers
2. Try having your New Combo's on White Long ticks, you made up your own, if you new combo on white long ticks(aswell called a downbeat) you'll understand the song alot better!
3. Your rhythms are actually decent, i think you have a decent grasp on rhythms, just following vocals is okay i guess,
4. this sv is really slow try having a faster one later
5. 00:48:517 (5) - overmapped, try listening to the song on 25% playback rate on sections like these!
6. 01:11:908 (1) - Try shortening the spinner by 1 white tick less so it's easier to recover