Sorry, I'm a bit late :<
[General]
[General]
- "Star2.png" exceeds the max size (52x50). Re-size it, please.
- Storyboard: The pulses during the chorus are way too fast imo, consider adding a few more ms to the fade out effect.
- Tags: "Trance" Music genres shouldn't be used as tags imo, I guess you can keep it if you reeaaally want it.
- Some combo's length are way too long for [Easy] imo, 3 stanzas seems acceptable but 4 seems too much when the combo includes lots of circles and sliders. I'll point out some of them,mainly the ones that really need to split up:
- 00:45:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
- 00:53:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
- 01:22:384 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
- 01:29:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
- 02:20:899 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
Nothing else worth pointing out~
- 00:14:270 (1) - This circle would be way more intuitive here: 00:13:813 - than it's current position, consider moving it.
- 00:15:185 (3) - I wouldn't suggest to silence this slider-ends. That kind of effect tend to be a bit disorienting, even more if it's used in diffs like this one, perhaps 50~60% with soft-override?
- 00:46:270 (2) - Perhaps, NC here?, the kiai just started so there's clearly a musical change.
- 01:44:327 - This part feels a bit weird while playing, probably because all the objects are on red ticks, I strongly suggest to don't leave circles by themselves because it might be a bit hard to hit them for [Normal] players. Some easy solutions:
- 01:47:756 (1) - You should remove this circle and then add a repeat to the last slider.
- 01:50:042 (4,5) - Perhaps, replace these ones with a slider? if you don't want to break the symmetry then you can easily copy the slider and paste it here: 01:52:099 (2,3) -
- - 02:25:013 (1) - Perhaps, use an horizontal flip to improve the flow a bit?
- 02:30:042 (1) - ^
- 02:35:527 - The rhythm seems way more noticeable so I guess there's no problem here~
- 02:35:527 (1,2) - These objects felt rather normal and unexpected here Try something more intuitive, perhaps something like this?
- 00:04:441 (3,4) - (4) needs to be more spaced otherwise the spacing won't make sens and it'll kill the flow of the pattern.
- 00:13:356 (2) - A bit nazi but blankets are not supposed to overlap with the other object, try to improve it a bit like this. I'll leave the code if you want to use it.
124,56,13356,2,0,B|81:51|37:103|56:149,1,135,8|0
- 00:15:184 (2) - Same for this one ^
392,332,15185,2,0,B|428:332|460:308|472:268|460:236,1,135,8|0
- 00:29:356 (3,4) - Increase the spacing of these objects so the spacing is even and easy to follow
- 00:33:242 (2) - Is this jump really necessary? The same rhythm has played for the last patterns but you didn't use a jump for those. I strongly suggest to remove this jump, moving (1) around should be enough.
- 01:28:327 (6,7,8) - These objects completely threw me off while playing. I didn't expect sudden 1/1, those objects are killing the flow, I suggest to either keep mapping the 1/2 rhythm or increase the spacing between those objects.
- 01:35:870 (1,2,3,4) - An horizontal flip would increase the flow and avoid some objects getting hidden by hit-bursts, consider applying it.
- 01:52:099 (3) - The second repeat arrow is completely covered by the previous hit-burst, that's considered unrankable. Try unstacking it or re-arranging the pattern. (This applies even if it's a kick slider)
- 01:52:556 (4) - ^
- 01:53:927 (3) - ^
- 01:54:384 (4) - ^
- 01:56:213 (5) - ^
- 01:59:413 (3) - ^
- 01:59:870 (4) - ^
- 02:01:242 (3) - ^
- 02:01:699 (4) - ^
- 02:03:070 (2) - ^
Am I overreacting D:? If you're not sure about this, feel free to ask around to some BATs. I've already asked Derek about many issues like this one before, I don't feel like bothering him again :< - 02:19:756 (3) - Why the sudden spacing decrease D:? Increase this spacing please.
- 02:30:727 (3) - ^
- 02:34:613 (3) - The slider-track is getting covered by the previous slider, this can be easily fixed by using an Horizontal Flip (CTRL+H), try it.
- 02:48:784 (1) - This anti-jump/sudden-reduced-spacing felt quite unexpected, it throw me off a bit. Try using a Reverse Selection (CTRL+R) to fix this. (Don't forget to fix the spacing of the next objects)
- 02:49:927 - I strongly suggest to make this diff end here, the song ends here. I see that you silenced the last slider-end, you did that because there aren't beats after that point (02:49:927) so there's no reason to place a slider-end there.
- 00:06:042 (4) - This last objects is really hard to see while playing, perhaps modify the pattern a bit to make it more visible?
- 01:09:813 (7) - Perhaps, start the next NC here? This is where the musical change happens.
- 01:51:413 - Why is the spacing between the 1st and the 2nd stream wider than the one used between the 2nd and the 3rd stream? All of them are 1/4 apart so the spacing should be even, reduce the spacing between the 1st and the 2nd one please.
- 02:46:727 (1) - This slider-body is right under the last one thus this object seems like a circle at first glance, I strongly suggest to move this somewhere else.