-Aqua wrote:

From discord uwu/

newton is too fafa yamete

[nextplay]

1. Since newton asked for aesthetics mod uwu
2. 00:02:096 (3) - 00:04:690 (3) - You should make your sliders consistent, They were off by like some pixels. g
3. 00:05:988 (1) - This slider is rotated in an awkward angle imo
4. 00:08:582 (1,2,3) - Try a positioning like this, to make it organized
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5. 00:11:177 (1,2,3) - Same point above tbh,
6. 00:19:934 (3,4,1) - Make this a triangle pls :^^^
   d

   
   if u do this it would look like a fgt spinner

   
7. 00:26:744 (1) - This one is straight, 00:27:393 (2) - while this is rotated to a certain degree, would be better to copy paste tbh uwu
8. 00:28:042 (3,4,5,1) - u can blanket these
9. 00:35:826 (3,4,1) - Make a triangle :^
10. 01:31:285 (4) - 01:32:907 (3) -
    ew overlap ;/

    
11. 01:34:204 (1,2) - If you blanket this and follow point #4, this would look aesthetically clean af
12. 01:39:069 (4) - 01:36:798 (1) - ew overlap xd
13. 01:38:096 (3,4) - Blanket xd
14. 01:48:474 (3,4) - b
15. 01:52:366 (1,2,3) - Point 4
16. 02:12:961 (1,2) - b
17. 02:49:447 (1) - This isn't a wave slider :thonk:
18. needs more 2/1, also hitsounds pls

Call me back once everything is fixed!11!1

u can give me kudosu since this is remapped :^)

Monstrata wrote:

Kanan's Easy

00:12:474 (4,5) - Inconsistent spacing
00:31:934 (1,1) - I don't think this is sufficient recovery time for an Easy. Typically you want about 1 full measure of recovery on an Easy. End it on the downbeat like you do for 02:07:934 (1) - .
00:55:285 (1) - Maybe end the spinner on 00:59:015 - for the syncopated downbeat. (red tick is more important than white when concerning the main melody imo)
02:31:285 (1) - Same, I would have ended it on 02:35:015 - instead, it sounds like a better note to end on

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Monstrata wrote:

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Normal

00:25:285 (3,4) - I would extend this into a 3/2 slider. Don't use so many clicks yet, this is a calm section so use longer sliders and sparser rhythm. ok done
01:57:555 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Same idea, use simpler rhythm to distinguish the section from the previous and later section. agreed,
rhythm should be a lot less dense now

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Lasse wrote:

quick recheck

hs
00:21:555 (1) - sampleset on sliderbody should be soft like top diff (hs copier doesn't copy that usually)
00:53:988 - add a clap here on all diffs, the drums play 1/1 snares in this measure
00:54:636 - 02:29:988 - 02:30:636 - ^
00:59:177 - 02:35:501 - missing clap on all difs that have a spinner ending here
NEWTON waht have u done here D:!11111!

easy
00:00:799 - part is quite dense in comparison to intensity/other parts, easy solution would be 2/1 gaps. did something different
for example: 00:02:096 (3) - make this into a single circle I...it just fits the vocal/instrumentals better (the sliders)
00:05:663 (5) - delete k
00:21:069 - change this green line to soft cause sudden normal slide sounds pretty weird blame neeton
00:25:447 - fix break snapping: http://lasse.s-ul.eu/CyLD1Owp.mp4 // 01:24:474 - same // 02:01:123 - k

00:39:393 (1) - either actually map this to the cymbal or remove finish mapped
00:50:096 (1) - what is this following, everything is on the red tick before It follows the vocals tho
something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/20DT6uV0.jpg would make sense
01:10:853 (1) - ^ (and finish placement makes no sense either) remade this part
02:15:717 (1) - ^ ^
01:41:988 (1) - remove clap blame neeton
02:31:285 (1) - add whislte ^

slider spam in chorus is pretty lol, some suggestions to improve it:
00:41:663 (4) - delete and add circle on 00:41:988 - (fits vocals and melody) k
00:52:042 (7) - ^ circle on 00:52:366 - k
00:42:961 (2) - could be http://lasse.s-ul.eu/xe4wzXBh.jpg which fits the song much better and you use 3/2 gaps later anyways did something different?
02:21:555 (2) - delete, circle on 02:21:880 - k

Lasse wrote:

quick recheck

hs
00:21:555 (1) - sampleset on sliderbody should be soft like top diff (hs copier doesn't copy that usually) done
00:53:988 - add a clap here on all diffs, the drums play 1/1 snares in this measure applied where possible
00:54:636 - 02:29:988 - 02:30:636 - ^ roger
00:59:177 - 02:35:501 - missing clap on all difs that have a spinner ending here no snare sound on 00:59:177 - so didnt apply claps, added claps on the latter one tho


starlight
00:30:312 - a few of you stacks in this part are slightly broken whoops, fixed
02:18:636 (2) - 02:19:447 (1) - I think you intended to have that stacked like you do for most of the map? make sure you also make it fit with 02:20:582 (6) - stacked that too
02:23:826 (2,1) - slider overlap is quite off adjusted

insane
00:11:501 (2,1,2) - stacks are kinda off again fixed
00:14:907 (1,1) - also fixed

Lasse wrote:

qualified

newton- wrote:

Lasse wrote:

qualified

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newton- wrote:

Lasse wrote:

qualified

i came