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Lasse
quick recheck

hs
00:21:555 (1) - sampleset on sliderbody should be soft like top diff (hs copier doesn't copy that usually)
00:53:988 - add a clap here on all diffs, the drums play 1/1 snares in this measure
00:54:636 - 02:29:988 - 02:30:636 - ^
00:59:177 - 02:35:501 - missing clap on all difs that have a spinner ending here


starlight
00:30:312 - a few of you stacks in this part are slightly broken
02:18:636 (2) - 02:19:447 (1) - I think you intended to have that stacked like you do for most of the map? make sure you also make it fit with 02:20:582 (6) -
02:23:826 (2,1) - slider overlap is quite off

insane
00:11:501 (2,1,2) - stacks are kinda off again
00:14:907 (1,1) -

easy
00:00:799 - part is quite dense in comparison to intensity/other parts, easy solution would be 2/1 gaps.
for example: 00:02:096 (3) - make this into a single circle
00:05:663 (5) - delete
00:21:069 - change this green line to soft cause sudden normal slide sounds pretty weird
00:25:447 - fix break snapping: http://lasse.s-ul.eu/CyLD1Owp.mp4 // 01:24:474 - same // 02:01:123 -

00:39:393 (1) - either actually map this to the cymbal or remove finish
00:50:096 (1) - what is this following, everything is on the red tick before
something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/20DT6uV0.jpg would make sense
01:10:853 (1) - ^ (and finish placement makes no sense either)
02:15:717 (1) - ^
01:41:988 (1) - remove clap
02:31:285 (1) - add whislte

slider spam in chorus is pretty lol, some suggestions to improve it:
00:41:663 (4) - delete and add circle on 00:41:988 - (fits vocals and melody)
00:52:042 (7) - ^ circle on 00:52:366 -
00:42:961 (2) - could be http://lasse.s-ul.eu/xe4wzXBh.jpg which fits the song much better and you use 3/2 gaps later anyways
02:21:555 (2) - delete, circle on 02:21:880 -
nextplay

Lasse wrote:

quick recheck

hs
00:21:555 (1) - sampleset on sliderbody should be soft like top diff (hs copier doesn't copy that usually)
00:53:988 - add a clap here on all diffs, the drums play 1/1 snares in this measure
00:54:636 - 02:29:988 - 02:30:636 - ^
00:59:177 - 02:35:501 - missing clap on all difs that have a spinner ending here
NEWTON waht have u done here D:!11111!

easy
00:00:799 - part is quite dense in comparison to intensity/other parts, easy solution would be 2/1 gaps. did something different
for example: 00:02:096 (3) - make this into a single circle I...it just fits the vocal/instrumentals better (the sliders)
00:05:663 (5) - delete k
00:21:069 - change this green line to soft cause sudden normal slide sounds pretty weird blame neeton
00:25:447 - fix break snapping: http://lasse.s-ul.eu/CyLD1Owp.mp4 // 01:24:474 - same // 02:01:123 - k

00:39:393 (1) - either actually map this to the cymbal or remove finish mapped
00:50:096 (1) - what is this following, everything is on the red tick before It follows the vocals tho
something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/20DT6uV0.jpg would make sense
01:10:853 (1) - ^ (and finish placement makes no sense either) remade this part
02:15:717 (1) - ^ ^
01:41:988 (1) - remove clap blame neeton
02:31:285 (1) - add whislte ^

slider spam in chorus is pretty lol, some suggestions to improve it:
00:41:663 (4) - delete and add circle on 00:41:988 - (fits vocals and melody) k
00:52:042 (7) - ^ circle on 00:52:366 - k
00:42:961 (2) - could be http://lasse.s-ul.eu/xe4wzXBh.jpg which fits the song much better and you use 3/2 gaps later anyways did something different?
02:21:555 (2) - delete, circle on 02:21:880 - k
thanks for re-check
Topic Starter
newton-

Lasse wrote:

quick recheck

hs
00:21:555 (1) - sampleset on sliderbody should be soft like top diff (hs copier doesn't copy that usually) done
00:53:988 - add a clap here on all diffs, the drums play 1/1 snares in this measure applied where possible
00:54:636 - 02:29:988 - 02:30:636 - ^ roger
00:59:177 - 02:35:501 - missing clap on all difs that have a spinner ending here no snare sound on 00:59:177 - so didnt apply claps, added claps on the latter one tho


starlight
00:30:312 - a few of you stacks in this part are slightly broken whoops, fixed
02:18:636 (2) - 02:19:447 (1) - I think you intended to have that stacked like you do for most of the map? make sure you also make it fit with 02:20:582 (6) - stacked that too
02:23:826 (2,1) - slider overlap is quite off adjusted

insane
00:11:501 (2,1,2) - stacks are kinda off again fixed
00:14:907 (1,1) - also fixed
also went over hs on easy gd again

thanks for rechecking!
Monstrata
Okay, rebubbled~
Lasse
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Topic Starter
newton-

Lasse wrote:

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newton- wrote:

Lasse wrote:

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Fu Xuan

newton- wrote:

Lasse wrote:

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fuk grats i should've continued the gd on this
Kotori-Chan
GRATZ NEWTON !!! <33
- Neon -
Congrats boi!!
xidorn
gratz neeton!
Akitoshi
gratz
Lulu-
gratz xd
Gaia
gratz on your first!
-NanoRIPE-
gratz!
Kyouren
Gratzz for your first ranked map! :3
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