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jioyi - Platinum

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Nao
76 posts
Joined August 2015
Topic Starter
Nao
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 20 September 2017 at 22:12:06

Artist: jioyi
Title: Platinum
Source: VOEZ
Tags: electronic rhythm game slider
BPM: 182
Filesize: 6013kb
Play Time: 02:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Expert (5.37 stars, 608 notes)
Download: jioyi - Platinum
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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REDL 3/4/17

WIP (still(forever))

Originally intended for 09kami's set but it was full w

Thanks modders: Itasha_S13, -NeBu-, F1r3tar, tatatat


e 9/17: changed a stream pattern and added some other small stuff too but this map is p much dead anyway whatever
Last edited by Nao , edited 33 times in total.
ItashaS13
678 posts
Joined January 2014
ItashaS13
DON'T GIVE KUDOSU OK???




NOT A MOD
  • 00:08:529 (5,4,6) - I think that these circles should not be stacked with the next slider or circle, why? because the sound on 00:09:600 (4) - is way more loud than 00:09:682 (5) - (and the same happens everytime) I noticed while playing for first time that.. these sounds were not really emphazised with these stacks, it should be MORE fun if you make something like... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7523401 < 00:06:963 (4,5,6,1) - and... 00:08:529 (5) - stack this with 00:08:941 (1) - head? LOL maybe that would make it too hard and hard to read.. its just a suggestion tho
    00:09:600 (4,5,6,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7523422 :thinking:

    00:11:166 (5,1) - 00:13:061 (2,1) - or at least here that the song its more intense like.. move 00:13:061 (2) - to 69/357 or smth idk

    00:14:545 (1,2) - should ctrl+g these 2, I had sb on 00:14:545 (1) - like in 3 runs :|

    00:15:534 (1) - god tier slider

    00:16:523 (1) - ctrl+g?

    00:17:430 (2) - why not a triplet :< I mean something like this http://prntscr.com/ehzsma also this help to read the next sv better, because... with that kickslider.. you need to make a pause and the next slider its real fast

    00:18:996 (2) - why not just place this in the middle of 4 circles q.q?

    00:33:996 (1) - tbh I dont like this slider, the other sliders are 10/10 but this one is..

    00:36:138 (2,3,4) - come on you can make something better here, this is a mess and doesnt play good
Nao
76 posts
Joined August 2015
Topic Starter
Nao
Hi~ thanks for the mod

Denied
Maybe
Accepted



Itasha_S13 wrote:

DON'T GIVE KUDOSU OK???


  • 00:08:529 (5,4,6) - I think that these circles should not be stacked with the next slider or circle, why? because the sound on 00:09:600 (4) - is way more loud than 00:09:682 (5) - (and the same happens everytime) I noticed while playing for first time that.. these sounds were not really emphazised with these stacks, it should be MORE fun if you make something like... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7523401 < 00:06:963 (4,5,6,1) - and... 00:08:529 (5) - stack this with 00:08:941 (1) - head? LOL maybe that would make it too hard and hard to read.. its just a suggestion tho These double stacks are for aesthetic purposes, they are subtly blanketed by the curved sliders although i see where you're coming from

    00:09:600 (4,5,6,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7523422 :thinking: Again, this is the way it is mostly for aesthetics. 00:09:600 (4,5) - are being subtly blanketed by 00:08:941 (1) -

    00:11:166 (5,1) - 00:13:061 (2,1) - or at least here that the song its more intense like.. move 00:13:061 (2) - to 69/357 or smth idk I see your reasoning behind this but moving 00:13:061 (2) - would break the consistency(?) of the doubles being stacked on top of each other

    00:14:545 (1,2) - should ctrl+g these 2, I had sb on 00:14:545 (1) - like in 3 runs :| Done, thanks for the suggestion

    00:15:534 (1) - god tier slider Thank u :-D

    00:16:523 (1) - ctrl+g? Hmm, maybe. I'll think about it

    00:17:430 (2) - why not a triplet :< I mean something like this http://prntscr.com/ehzsma also this help to read the next sv better, because... with that kickslider.. you need to make a pause and the next slider its real fast A triple there would be too fast since that slider is mapped to 1/8. This pattern plays like xzx with that fast slider serving the function of a regular note. However, I'll change the sv to make the fast slider a little bit smaller. Might possibly replace with a regular note in the future though

    00:18:996 (2) - why not just place this in the middle of 4 circles q.q? Done, I didn't even notice that. Thanks!

    00:33:996 (1) - tbh I dont like this slider, the other sliders are 10/10 but this one is.. Changed this one a bit but i might change it again in the future.

    00:36:138 (2,3,4) - come on you can make something better here, this is a mess and doesnt play good ̶W̶h̶i̶l̶e̶ ̶i̶ ̶t̶h̶i̶n̶k̶ ̶t̶h̶a̶t̶ ̶0̶0̶:̶3̶5̶:̶9̶7̶4̶ ̶(̶1̶,̶2̶,̶3̶)̶ ̶-̶ ̶i̶s̶ ̶f̶i̶n̶e̶,̶ ̶i̶ ̶d̶o̶ ̶d̶i̶s̶l̶i̶k̶e̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶w̶a̶y̶ ̶0̶0̶:̶3̶6̶:̶3̶0̶3̶ ̶(̶3̶)̶ ̶-̶ ̶t̶r̶a̶n̶s̶i̶t̶i̶o̶n̶s̶ ̶i̶n̶t̶o̶ ̶0̶0̶:̶3̶6̶:̶4̶6̶8̶ ̶(̶4̶)̶ ̶-̶ ̶.̶ ̶I̶'̶l̶l̶ ̶c̶h̶a̶n̶g̶e̶ ̶0̶0̶:̶3̶6̶:̶4̶6̶8̶ ̶(̶4̶)̶ ̶-̶ ̶o̶n̶c̶e̶ ̶i̶ ̶t̶h̶i̶n̶k̶ ̶o̶f̶ ̶s̶o̶m̶e̶t̶h̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶b̶e̶t̶t̶e̶r̶.̶ Changed a bit
Last edited by Nao , edited 2 times in total.
-NeBu-
435 posts
Joined March 2014
-NeBu-
nm

00:03:007 (1) - I feel NC here, background sound makes me think that
00:21:468 (1,2,3) - maybe slightly bigger DS here? (ps. Stack Leniency can't be 0.2 if im not wrong?)
00:24:765 (1,2) - small overlap
00:43:226 (1,2,3) - blanket, slightly.
01:34:820 (1,2,1) - maybe something like this (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7731303) since those 01:34:985 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - connect as two triples so having something different 01:34:820 (1,2,1) - here would be cool
01:58:061 (3) - i would prefer ctrl+g here for better flow

damn good map, kinda like rrtyui style. I like it, good luck!
Nao
76 posts
Joined August 2015
Topic Starter
Nao

-NeBu- wrote:

nm

00:03:007 (1) - I feel NC here, background sound makes me think that
00:21:468 (1,2,3) - maybe slightly bigger DS here? (ps. Stack Leniency can't be 0.2 if im not wrong?)
00:24:765 (1,2) - small overlap
00:43:226 (1,2,3) - blanket, slightly.
01:34:820 (1,2,1) - maybe something like this (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7731303) since those 01:34:985 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - connect as two triples so having something different 01:34:820 (1,2,1) - here would be cool
01:58:061 (3) - i would prefer ctrl+g here for better flow

damn good map, kinda like rrtyui style. I like it, good luck!
Hello, thank you for the mod, I appreciate it! :-D

All accepted!
7ambda
2,560 posts
Joined January 2015
7ambda
  1. 00:24:270 (3,5) - Could definitely look better. Perhaps copy/paste 00:24:105 (2,4) and Ctrl+j?
  2. 00:26:578 (2) - Kind of looks out of place since it creates an unappealing overlap with 00:27:072 (1). Might look more appealing if you stacked on 00:27:072 (1)'s sliderhead.
  3. 00:45:534 (3) - Maybe stack with 00:44:875 (1) instead? It would be a more comfortable angle going into 00:45:864 (1).



  4. 00:48:171 (2) - Since there's a strong sound on the red tick, perhaps use two circles instead of a slider, cus making both sounds clickable would better emphasize how strong they are.
  5. 01:39:765 (4) - Would look better if you placed between (2) and (3), cus then it would form a nice linear pattern, similarly to 01:36:633 (1,2,3).
Nao
76 posts
Joined August 2015
Topic Starter
Nao
;) Hello, thank you for the mod!~

F1r3tar wrote:

  1. 00:24:270 (3,5) - Could definitely look better. Perhaps copy/paste 00:24:105 (2,4) and Ctrl+j? Denied for now but i might change it at some point in the future
  2. 00:26:578 (2) - Kind of looks out of place since it creates an unappealing overlap with 00:27:072 (1). Might look more appealing if you stacked on 00:27:072 (1)'s sliderhead. Done
  3. 00:45:534 (3) - Maybe stack with 00:44:875 (1) instead? It would be a more comfortable angle going into 00:45:864 (1).I've left this the way it is for now but I'll be changing it eventually

  4. 00:48:171 (2) - Since there's a strong sound on the red tick, perhaps use two circles instead of a slider, cus making both sounds clickable would better emphasize how strong they are. Done
  5. 01:39:765 (4) - Would look better if you placed between (2) and (3), cus then it would form a nice linear pattern, similarly to 01:36:633 (1,2,3)Also done.
tatatat
905 posts
Joined March 2015
tatatat
You should probably delete 1.png from your mapset folder unless your planning on adding another difficulty with it as the background. Your background image is 2 big. Its resolution is 2133x1199, consider cropping it or find a lower resolution background.
Please do know, if you want to rank this map you need a full diff spread. You'll need a easy and or normal, a hard, and an insane.
I don't think the pink combo color fits the map very well. Consider getting more gloomy and dark combo colors.
Wow. This map is really hard to follow. Its probably because I'm just bad though lol.
You may want to decrease the CS to 4 if others comment on it as well.
00:05:314 (1) - replace this with a spinner? It'd probably be more engaging.
00:18:171 (1,2,3,4) - Why does the 4 note pattern here turn counter-clockwise around the first circle, while the pattern at 00:23:446 (1,2,3,4) - turns clockwise around the first circle.
00:36:635 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Increase spacing of stream for more emphasis.
01:25:424 (1,2,3,4) - Stack these circles on top of each other?
01:26:743 (1,2,3,4) - same as above
02:15:864 - Spinner at the end should end around here probably.
Nao
76 posts
Joined August 2015
Topic Starter
Nao
hello, thanks for the mod!

tatatat wrote:

You should probably delete 1.png from your mapset folder unless your planning on adding another difficulty with it as the background. Your background image is 2 big. Its resolution is 2133x1199, consider cropping it or find a lower resolution background.Done. I resized the image to 1920x1080 i hope thats fine
Please do know, if you want to rank this map you need a full diff spread. You'll need a easy and or normal, a hard, and an insane. I̶'̶m̶ ̶n̶o̶t̶ ̶r̶e̶a̶l̶l̶y̶ ̶i̶n̶t̶e̶r̶e̶s̶t̶e̶d̶ ̶i̶n̶ ̶r̶a̶n̶k̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶t̶h̶i̶s̶ ̶a̶n̶y̶ ̶t̶i̶m̶e̶ ̶s̶o̶o̶n̶ ̶b̶u̶t̶ ̶i̶'̶l̶l̶ ̶m̶a̶k̶e̶ ̶m̶o̶r̶e̶ ̶d̶i̶f̶f̶s̶ ̶e̶v̶e̶n̶t̶u̶a̶l̶l̶y̶ i will not be ranking this
I don't think the pink combo color fits the map very well. Consider getting more gloomy and dark combo colors.Changed colours but not to anything dark because the bg is dark
Wow. This map is really hard to follow. Its probably because I'm just bad though lol.
You may want to decrease the CS to 4 if others comment on it as well.
00:05:314 (1) - replace this with a spinner? It'd probably be more engaging. A slider is better here. I saved spinners for calmer sounds. This sound is louder and more intense than any other sound a spinner is mapped to
00:18:171 (1,2,3,4) - Why does the 4 note pattern here turn counter-clockwise around the first circle, while the pattern at 00:23:446 (1,2,3,4) - turns clockwise around the first circle.Changed this so both the squares turn counter clockwise and made some other small changes
00:36:635 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Increase spacing of stream for more emphasis.I think the spacing here is good and reflects the music well. I have no reason to change it
01:25:424 (1,2,3,4) - Stack these circles on top of each other?I prefer having it this way. The sound is too noticeable to just have the notes stacked
01:26:743 (1,2,3,4) - same as abovesame as above
02:15:864 - Spinner at the end should end around here probably.Done


Thanks again :-D
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