Ito Kanako - Uncontrollable (TV Size)

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@dro tbh i cant believe most people (including me) didnt spot this ctrl+g error. thank you
the ds is this way because its an actual hard, since there is an advamced and more lower diffs

@chrononig keeping flow break, and the pattern here 00:42:310 (6) is mimicking the pattern from earlier, so its fine. also thew bends at the end are fine

fixed the rest ty

osu file format v14

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Title:Uncontrollable
TitleUnicode:Uncontrollable
Artist:Ito Kanako
ArtistUnicode:いとうかなこ
Creator:MadHypnofrog
Version:Mentai's Hard
Source:CHAOS;CHILD
Tags:asuka_- eeezzzeee zel mentai 5pb. nitroplus itou head op opening tv size
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hlanden
Just a random bad #modreq NM, coming because of the nice song

Chaos
  1. 00:20:738 (1,2,3) - Maybe you could try doing something like ^
  2. 01:00:024 (3,4) - ^
  3. 01:00:595 (5,2) - This also looks better after changing 5 to a straight slider
  4. 01:11:310 (2,3) - I suggest higher spacing here.
  5. 01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - ^, especially here, these are like the loudest sounds of the whole map yet you have a lot bigger jumps before these.

    This is all for this difficulty, not really much to note since I'm not very experienced with modding difficulties of this high SR anyway


Zel's Extreme
  1. 00:12:310 (3,4,5,6) and 00:11:167 (3,4,5,6) and all the 4 jumps really - could be a bit better aesthetically if you aligned those a bit but I'd understand if you just want to leave them look a bit messier.
  2. 00:22:453 (3,1) - This slider shape usage is not that good because earlier on in the map (00:10:310 (1) ) u used this shape to map quite a different sound than just normal percussion, you should change these to more smooth shapes for better visual consistency.
  3. 00:39:738 (3) - ^ . Another fix to this actually would be changing the first slider to a different, unused shape.
  4. 01:26:024 (1) - Nice slider shape! Nothing more to say about this diff :D



eze's Extra
  1. 00:47:738 (3,5) - Blanket these
  2. 00:49:167 (7,1) - This looks a bit better imo
  3. 00:54:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you need bigger spacing here, the music is getting quite intense.
  4. 01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - Again, those are the strongest sounds you can hear in the song, bigger spacing would be better.

    Nothing more to say, maybe you could make "prettier" sliders on the slow part with the lots of red anchors because it's calm but hey that's just subjective and you still do reverse emphasizing in this case so maybe this is okay.


Asuka_-'s Insane

Favourite difficulty hands down. Nothing much I can say here.

Light Insane
  1. 00:20:738 (1,2) - Why not just make them the same shape for better visuals?
  2. 00:55:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8 singletaps feels a bit too much for this difficulty and not even in the kiai part.
  3. 01:00:738 - See this sound left out here compared to the singletaps I talked about earlier means a big no no in my opinion because of inconsistency in where the actual harder stuff should be, I don't know though.
  4. 01:03:310 - ^, no point in pointing out all of those but I think they should be mapped.

    Other than that all good :)


Mentai's Hard
  1. 00:35:738 (1,2) - This looks sliiiightly off to me, not sure tho.

    Good diff here :)


And nothing to say about the easier diffs either, that's all I can contribute, hope I was helpful :)


Good luck with the map :)
Topic Starter
Jabba

hlanden wrote:

Just a random bad #modreq NM, coming because of the nice song

Chaos
  1. 00:20:738 (1,2,3) - Maybe you could try doing something like would kinda break the flow and I don't want that
  2. 00:32:595 (2,3) - [url=http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8647860'>^ ^
  3. 01:00:024 (3,4) - ^ ^
  4. 01:00:595 (5,2) - This also looks better after changing 5 to a straight slider (5) is not supposed to be straight huh, it's the same pattern I used before (00:02:881 (3,4,5) - and so on)
  5. 01:11:310 (2,3) - I suggest higher spacing here. whoosh this wasn't supposed to touch (5), I thought I fixed this
  6. 01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - ^, especially here, these are like the loudest sounds of the whole map yet you have a lot bigger jumps before these. not really, this is more of a calm-down after those jumps, especially with the spinner before

    This is all for this difficulty, not really much to note since I'm not very experienced with modding difficulties of this high SR anyway


Light Insane
  1. 00:20:738 (1,2) - Why not just make them the same shape for better visuals? different sounds first of all, and I want to blanket 00:20:310 (3) - 's body with (2)
  2. 00:55:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8 singletaps feels a bit too much for this difficulty and not even in the kiai part. should be fine, this is an intense part
  3. 01:00:738 - See this sound left out here compared to the singletaps I talked about earlier means a big no no in my opinion because of inconsistency in where the actual harder stuff should be, I don't know though. this is not even an intense part of kiai, I only skipped red ticks with almost no sounds so it shouldn't be a problem
  4. 01:03:310 - ^, no point in pointing out all of those but I think they should be mapped. ^

    Other than that all good :)



Good luck with the map :)
thanks!
hlanden

Jabba wrote:

hlanden wrote:

Just a random bad #modreq NM, coming because of the nice song

Chaos
  1. 00:20:738 (1,2,3) - Maybe you could try doing something like would kinda break the flow and I don't want that
  2. 00:32:595 (2,3) - [url=http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8647860'>^ ^
  3. 01:00:024 (3,4) - ^ ^
  4. 01:00:595 (5,2) - This also looks better after changing 5 to a straight slider (5) is not supposed to be straight huh, it's the same pattern I used before (00:02:881 (3,4,5) - and so on)
  5. 01:11:310 (2,3) - I suggest higher spacing here. whoosh this wasn't supposed to touch (5), I thought I fixed this
  6. 01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - ^, especially here, these are like the loudest sounds of the whole map yet you have a lot bigger jumps before these. not really, this is more of a calm-down after those jumps, especially with the spinner before

    This is all for this difficulty, not really much to note since I'm not very experienced with modding difficulties of this high SR anyway


Light Insane
  1. 00:20:738 (1,2) - Why not just make them the same shape for better visuals? different sounds first of all, and I want to blanket 00:20:310 (3) - 's body with (2)
  2. 00:55:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8 singletaps feels a bit too much for this difficulty and not even in the kiai part. should be fine, this is an intense part
  3. 01:00:738 - See this sound left out here compared to the singletaps I talked about earlier means a big no no in my opinion because of inconsistency in where the actual harder stuff should be, I don't know though. this is not even an intense part of kiai, I only skipped red ticks with almost no sounds so it shouldn't be a problem
  4. 01:03:310 - ^, no point in pointing out all of those but I think they should be mapped. ^

    Other than that all good :)



Good luck with the map :)
thanks!
Sorry if it wasn't very useful :D
Atomosphere
hi from mod req!
did you ask for a BN yesterday cuz i think i saw that..

Chaos

I have a few problems with this diff:

00:12:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) and 00:15:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - has uncomfortable movement and after this there is an abrupt change in flow at 00:16:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2)
00:19:738 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - The spacing is quite random in this section. There are sounds that are the exact same but have different spacing
00:39:738 (1,2) - More movement then actually needed. (aka. Make this have better flow pls)
00:58:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uncomfortable movement, you could do something similar but change the pattern a bit
01:04:453 (2,3,4,5) - ^^
01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Messy jumps make them flow better
01:07:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uncomfortable Movement
01:13:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^^
01:16:024 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Is this really necessary
01:21:453 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - messy jumble of mess pls remap this entire section, it also changes flow very abruptly

Also i think this BG would be a better choice: http://i.imgur.com/wjEevOq.jpg

It's fun but looking at a modding perspective it does have a few problems. Just fix those up and we'll see how this map goes!
Topic Starter
Jabba

Atomosphere wrote:

hi from mod req!
did you ask for a BN yesterday cuz i think i saw that..

Chaos

I have a few problems with this diff:

00:12:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) and 00:15:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - has uncomfortable movement and after this there is an abrupt change in flow at 00:16:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) disagree, 00:15:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is basically an up-and-down movement, so is 00:16:310 (1,2,3,4) - . same goes for 00:12:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , but the notes after are a bit more rotated to indicate the end of this section, while still maintaining the flow
00:19:738 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - The spacing is quite random in this section. There are sounds that are the exact same but have different spacing emphasizing the vocals huh, and even with that the changes are still quite minor so it's not even that noticeable. though 00:25:167 (5) - was off so I fixed it
00:39:738 (1,2) - More movement then actually needed. (aka. Make this have better flow pls) uhhh not at all, just a simple back-and-forth movement, since you don't really have to follow the sliders - they're not that curved
00:58:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uncomfortable movement, you could do something similar but change the pattern a bit spin your cursor in circles and you can hit those
01:04:453 (2,3,4,5) - ^^ move your cursor in an arc and you can hit those
01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Messy jumps make them flow better I could explain pretty much eveything about those jumps, but I'll just say that 01:06:453 (2,1,2) - is an intended flow break because the background music changes there. rest follows either the 1-2-3-1-2-3 or 1-2-1-2 patterns in music
01:07:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uncomfortable Movement same
01:13:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^^ same
01:16:024 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Is this really necessary uh, yes? it's another climatic part of kiai, not as strong as 01:05:453 - but still intense enough to have 6 jumps
01:21:453 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - messy jumble of mess pls remap this entire section, it also changes flow very abruptly I'm sorry if you can't do back-and-forth jumps

Also i think this BG would be a better choice: http://i.imgur.com/wjEevOq.jpg nah I'm fine with this one tbh

It's fun but looking at a modding perspective it does have a few problems. Just fix those up and we'll see how this map goes!
no offense dude, but it might be worth learning how to play before modding hard maps!
thanks!
Atomosphere

Jabba wrote:

Atomosphere wrote:

hi from mod req!
did you ask for a BN yesterday cuz i think i saw that..

Chaos

I have a few problems with this diff:

00:12:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) and 00:15:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - has uncomfortable movement and after this there is an abrupt change in flow at 00:16:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) disagree, 00:15:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is basically an up-and-down movement, so is 00:16:310 (1,2,3,4) - . same goes for 00:12:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , but the notes after are a bit more rotated to indicate the end of this section, while still maintaining the flow
00:19:738 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - The spacing is quite random in this section. There are sounds that are the exact same but have different spacing emphasizing the vocals huh, and even with that the changes are still quite minor so it's not even that noticeable. though 00:25:167 (5) - was off so I fixed it
00:39:738 (1,2) - More movement then actually needed. (aka. Make this have better flow pls) uhhh not at all, just a simple back-and-forth movement, since you don't really have to follow the sliders - they're not that curved
00:58:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uncomfortable movement, you could do something similar but change the pattern a bit spin your cursor in circles and you can hit those
01:04:453 (2,3,4,5) - ^^ move your cursor in an arc and you can hit those
01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Messy jumps make them flow better I could explain pretty much eveything about those jumps, but I'll just say that 01:06:453 (2,1,2) - is an intended flow break because the background music changes there. rest follows either the 1-2-3-1-2-3 or 1-2-1-2 patterns in music
01:07:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uncomfortable Movement same
01:13:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^^ same
01:16:024 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Is this really necessary uh, yes? it's another climatic part of kiai, not as strong as 01:05:453 - but still intense enough to have 6 jumps
01:21:453 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - messy jumble of mess pls remap this entire section, it also changes flow very abruptly I'm sorry if you can't do back-and-forth jumps

Also i think this BG would be a better choice: http://i.imgur.com/wjEevOq.jpg nah I'm fine with this one tbh

It's fun but looking at a modding perspective it does have a few problems. Just fix those up and we'll see how this map goes!
no offense dude, but it might be worth learning how to play before modding hard maps!
thanks!
so all your opinions are based off the skill of the player? OK. I guess i'll shoot kudosu at this, cause' it may actually go somewhere..
Topic Starter
Jabba

Atomosphere wrote:

so all your opinions are based off the skill of the player? OK. I guess i'll shoot kudosu at this, cause' it may actually go somewhere..
not really, but you're the first person to have problems with the flow there, since all the jumps are arranged in a pretty much simple way and even more low-ranked players were fine with those jumps. no offense, yet again, and thanks for the star!
Atomosphere

Jabba wrote:

Atomosphere wrote:

so all your opinions are based off the skill of the player? OK. I guess i'll shoot kudosu at this, cause' it may actually go somewhere..
not really, but you're the first person to have problems with the flow there, since all the jumps are arranged in a pretty much simple way and even more low-ranked players were fine with those jumps. no offense, yet again, and thanks for the star!
well people have opinions
Topic Starter
Jabba

Atomosphere wrote:

well people have opinions
true, but sometimes one's opinion is quite unpopular (considering I got a ton of testplays already), thus I don't really want to change this
CutEddie
Updated c:
Asuka_-

Noffy wrote:

[Asuka_-'s Insane]
  1. 00:05:881 (5) - Ehh... there isn't really a sound here to click to. Stacking it on top of the really strong 00:06:024 (1) - weaken's (1)'s impact in the map as well. I'd suggest figuring out a pattern where you can extend 00:05:595 (4) - to be 1/1 instead.
    okay made (4) to 1/2 reverse >w<
  2. 00:33:310 (5) - Again, there isn't really a sound here for clicking to. All of the higher difficulties even have it mapped as a sliderend!
    yea good point, but i want to keep because 00:32:881 (4,5,1) - is following vocal, 00:33:310 (5) - emphasize naxt slidervocal. i added hitsound to (5) instead.!
  3. 00:45:024 (2) - Not that it makes a difference but why the random white node in the middle? haha
    fixed~
  4. 00:56:024 (4,1) - The angle here, in my opinion, is faar smaller than it should be, and as a result makes the entirety of 00:56:310 (1,2,3,4) - more difficult to play than it would have been on its own.
    neafed them~
  5. 01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - Consider setting the combo color for these to be something else, the light blue blends in with the default spinner.
    nice
thanks!!

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Topic Starter
Jabba
did some changes to zel's and eze's diffs bcs they seem to be a lil bit dead now
Wishkey
Heyo! srry for the delay :/

General
Tuning down the volume of the clap.wav file or picking a bit softer clap would be nice, current one overtakes the music way too much instead of supporting it, the snares in the song aren't really that strong either

Chaos
  1. 00:14:595 (5,6) - pretty insane jump compared to the rest in this section, would reduce this a bit
  2. 00:26:310 (4,1) - bit awkward flow and trasition here, could maybe try something like this so you have the flow break and more impact on (1) instead of breaking earlier
  3. 00:28:595 (5) - extending like something you did here 00:10:310 (5) - would give a lot more impact for the change on the next combo then just 1/2 slider spam here
  4. 00:57:310 (6) - would really like this see this clickable at the end for that strong vocal and snare and constrast with 00:57:738 (7) - with how differernt these musically are, extended slider+circle could work here
  5. 01:17:738 (4) - 2 circles for those drums would be nice for contrast in this combo and it goes well with 01:20:024 (4,5) -
  6. Main gripe with this diff compared to the other extra's is that this really feels like a stretched out insane diff. Except for the huge jumps, the rest feels really easy to play and just a bit too simple for an extra diff with like the long and easy ccw or cw flow even on some parts like 00:17:595 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - where the music is so powerful you can go really all out in terms of emhasizing/patterning/rhythm choiche felt a bit underwhelming for a 7 star diff. This makes the jumps feel really overdone too bc of the constrast unfortunatly. This kinda boils down to mapping styles tho, in terms of rankability there isn't really anyhing major wrong with it but thats mainly due to how 'safe" the mapping style is for lack of a better word and for a 7 star diff I personally felt it could've had a lot more impact/expression at some parts but other bn's might think otherwise so I'd try your luck with others first before making any major changes since its more mapping style related than it being a bad diff


Light Insane
  1. 00:09:453 (1) - 1/2 slider + circle would fit a lot better for diff for having all those major vocals clickable and the drum intensity
  2. 01:07:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - would change to clockwise flow here since you're coming from a really ccw heavy combo's and to avoid mouse drift, control G 01:07:881 (2,4) - these indiually and place 01:08:595 (5) - on the head of (2) for example
  3. 01:16:881 (1,2) - similar to ^ changing movement direction would really benefit playability here, until 01:12:595 (2) - its full ccw until the end atm


Advanced
  1. 00:17:453 (1) - would just delete this note for this diff, feels really overmapped with what you're following after. Or you could make 00:16:881 (4,1) - into 2 1/2 sliders like 00:14:595 (4,5) - or return+circle bc 00:17:310 - is a clear finisher of this section
  2. 00:31:167 (1,2,3) - would just follow the vocals or drum here and not mix it since its rather odd to follow, mapping the vocals on red seems best compared to the rest of the map imo by moving (2) to 1/2 beat to the left
  3. 00:33:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
  4. 00:36:595 (3,1,2) - move all a bit down left with ds on to avoid the overlap at 00:37:453 (2,2) -
  5. 00:42:595 (1,1) - would change the first one into a return and next one into 1/2 slider, 00:42:595 (1) - has a lot more audible trip sound with the added bg instrument and stronger snare and 00:42:167 (4,1) - slider into slider is a bit underwhelming where a major shift/speed up is
  6. 01:03:167 (1) - Circle would be nice here for a bit of differentiation and to represent the vocal break, kinda like you did at 00:28:881 (1,2) -
  7. 01:12:310 (1) - ^
  8. 01:19:167 (3,4) - making 3 a return and adding a cirlce + NC at the current end of 4 would better resprent the vocals here, since you got the start of the new vocal stanza at tail atm



Normal
  1. 00:17:453 (1,2) - kinda missing the start off the 3/2 section here with the skipped red, I'd to for 2 3/2 sliders instead starting on 00:17:595 - 00:17:595 (5) - so you catch all the most important notes here


Overall a good set! Unfortunatly I'm personally not really a fan of how the top diff is mapped (explainaned in the mod), good luck!
Topic Starter
Jabba

Wishkey wrote:

Heyo! srry for the delay :/

General
Tuning down the volume of the clap.wav file or picking a bit softer clap would be nice, current one overtakes the music way too much instead of supporting it, the snares in the song aren't really that strong either ya made it a bit quieter

Chaos
  1. 00:14:595 (5,6) - pretty insane jump compared to the rest in this section, would reduce this a bit actually stacking (7) with (5) works even better
  2. 00:26:310 (4,1) - bit awkward flow and trasition here, could maybe try something like this so you have the flow break and more impact on (1) instead of breaking earlier
    intended to be a bit harder in terms of flow, just like 00:35:167 (4,5,1,2) - you can say that's how I emphasize the end of this section. (2)-(3)-(4) is still kind of an up-and-down movement so it shouldn't be that hard imo
  3. 00:28:595 (5) - extending like something you did here 00:10:310 (5) - would give a lot more impact for the change on the next combo then just 1/2 slider spam here yea sounds cool. I also fixed some spacing errors right after (e.g. 00:29:167 (2) - was spaced a bit too less)
  4. 00:57:310 (6) - would really like this see this clickable at the end for that strong vocal and snare and constrast with 00:57:738 (7) - with how differernt these musically are, extended slider+circle could work here yea idk even why are they the same, did smth
  5. 01:17:738 (4) - 2 circles for those drums would be nice for contrast in this combo and it goes well with 01:20:024 (4,5) - yes
  6. Main gripe with this diff compared to the other extra's is that this really feels like a stretched out insane diff. Except for the huge jumps, the rest feels really easy to play and just a bit too simple for an extra diff with like the long and easy ccw or cw flow even on some parts like 00:17:595 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - where the music is so powerful you can go really all out in terms of emhasizing/patterning/rhythm choiche felt a bit underwhelming for a 7 star diff. This makes the jumps feel really overdone too bc of the constrast unfortunatly. This kinda boils down to mapping styles tho, in terms of rankability there isn't really anyhing major wrong with it but thats mainly due to how 'safe" the mapping style is and for a 7 star diff I felt it could've had a lot more impact/expression at some parts personally but other bn's might think otherwise so I'd try your luck with others first before making any major changes if it boils down to mappying styles yea indeed I chose quite a safe style for that diff that mainly expresses the song through spacing and not flow bcs it's almost the same all through the diff. so are the patterns, I just went with a solid structure. though it still represents the song well imo, e.g. the section before kiai is quite intense and so are the jumps, so this is just your ordinary pp map xd
    pls give me other bns who would check this ;_;


Light Insane
  1. 00:09:453 (1) - 1/2 slider + circle would fit a lot better for diff for having all those major vocals clickable and the drum intensity yes
  2. 01:07:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - would change to clockwise flow here since you're coming from a really ccw heavy combo's and to avoid mouse drift, control G 01:07:881 (2,4) - these indiually and place 01:08:595 (5) - on the head of (2) for example did smth
  3. 01:16:881 (1,2) - similar to ^ changing movement direction would really benefit playability here, until 01:12:595 (2) - its full ccw until the end atm doesn't really change much imo since there's a calm part, but ctrl-h'd the end anyway


Advanced
  1. 00:17:453 (1) - would just delete this note for this diff, feels really overmapped with what you're following after. Or you could make 00:16:881 (4,1) - into 2 1/2 sliders like 00:14:595 (4,5) - or return+circle bc 00:17:310 - is a clear finisher of this section nah this one should be fine, deleting the note won't work imo bcs of 3/2 gap between objects, and given the density of other sections this is not even a diffspike
  2. 00:31:167 (1,2,3) - would just follow the vocals or drum here and not mix it since its rather odd to follow, mapping the vocals on red seems best compared to the rest of the map imo by moving (2) to 1/2 beat to the left yea I had too much fun mapping that part xd I guess I could allow myself to make the rhythm a bit more complex here by adding a note at 00:32:024 - as well
  3. 00:33:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ same
  4. 00:36:595 (3,1,2) - move all a bit down left with ds on to avoid the overlap at 00:37:453 (2,2) - guess it's impossible to fully avoid that overlap without having 00:36:167 (2) - and 00:37:453 (2) - overlapped, but I tried lo
  5. 00:42:595 (1,1) - would change the first one into a return and next one into 1/2 slider, 00:42:595 (1) - has a lot more audible trip sound with the added bg instrument and stronger snare and 00:42:167 (4,1) - slider into slider is a bit underwhelming where a major shift/speed up is made the first one into a repeat and second into 1/2 + circle
  6. 01:03:167 (1) - Circle would be nice here for a bit of differentiation and to represent the vocal break, kinda like you did at 00:28:881 (1,2) - yea why not
  7. 01:12:310 (1) - ^ ^
  8. 01:19:167 (3,4) - making 3 a return and adding a cirlce + NC at the current end of 4 would better resprent the vocals here, since you got the start of the new vocal stanza at tail atm did two circles instead



Normal
  1. 00:17:453 (1,2) - kinda missing the start off the 3/2 section here with the skipped red, I'd to for 2 3/2 sliders instead starting on 00:17:595 - 00:17:595 (5) - so you catch all the most important notes here that'd be the only 3/2 gap in the map and I don't want that tbh


Overall a good set! Unfortunatly I'm personally not really a fan of how the top diff is mapped (explainaned in the mod), good luck!
top diff went from 7.43 to 7.47 smh
thanks!
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