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Jabba

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-05-23T15:10:53+00:00

Testo wrote:
[Chaos]
00:01:453 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - этот парт должен быть менее интенсивным, я понимаю, ты мапаешь по вокалам, но всё же там не должен быть такой экшон упрощать ритм здесь особо как-то не хочется, потому что сразу задаются паттерны на всю мапу, а вот спейсинг подрезал кое-где
00:08:738 (2) - у таких слайдеров должен быть 1 угол(http://i.imgur.com/x87tkdQ.png) не уверен, что правильно тебя понял, но там середина срсли была не там где надо, фиксанул
00:09:881 (4) - раз ты выделяешь вокал, то мб сделаешь тут слайдер? пауза на 4ке, как мне кажется, лучше выделяет завершение слова
00:12:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - очень неудобно было неудобнее, поверь. переделал чутка, стало похоже теперь на 00:15:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , которые, как по мне, замечательно играются
далее ты то фолловишь вокал, то нет, тебе так делать нельзя, учитывая как у тебя мапнуто начало(игнор инструментала, всё на вокал) вот кст нифига подобного, там что в начале, что в куплете идет упор на вокалы с добавлением 1/2 там, где вокалов нет (яркий пример в начале 00:02:881 (3,4,5) - , он же 00:21:167 (2,3,4) - , немного отход от этого, т.к. там два бита до этого с вокалом 00:23:738 (4,5) - , итд
01:16:881 (1) - очень резкая смена св, учитывая что сонг не настолько затих, каких нибудь 0.8 хватит сполна а мне кажется что нормально, там и вокал достаточно медленный по сравнению с киаем, и на бэке меньше битов намного
Нужно поработать над ритмикой и эстетикой про ритмику я уже пообъяснял чутка, а с эстетикой-то что не так? практически все в паттернах, единственное на что можно обратить внимание как по мне - это слайдеры в слоупарте в середине, но там у меня нет других идей
удачи!

спасибо!

ItashaS13

678 posts

Joined January 2014

ItashaS13 2017-05-23T17:31:13+00:00

o/

Chaos
00:04:738 (1,2,3) - these should not end on white ticks. they don't play bad atm, but I think they would play a lot better and fit the song better if they started on these white ticks, will still follow the vocals and you don't miss the downbeat and the next strong beat at 00:05:453 -
00:06:024 (1) - should be 2 circles, I think it fits better since there's no vocals, so you follow vocals with sliders from 00:06:310 -
00:18:881 (3,4) - should move this closer to the end of 00:18:595 (2) - decrease spacing in these just like the music does :thinking: (ok, you just reduced SV but spacing should decrease too)
00:18:167 (5) - stack its end with 00:17:024 (6) - < so you have more spacing between 00:17:024 (6) - and then move 00:18:881 (3,4) - closer to 00:18:595 (2) -
00:19:738 (1) - should make sliders a bit slower from here, or .. why not make this slider 00:19:453 (6) - a lot faster than 00:19:738 (1) - so that sound get more emphazised
00:36:595 - something I noticed while playing was, until this point, most of the flow it's going clockwise, maybe Im been too nazi, but why not do ctrl+g on 00:25:310 (1) - 00:31:595 (4) - 00:32:167 (1) - and 00:34:453 (1) - that would add more variety in the flow :thonkung: or can ctrl+g 00:30:453 (3,4) - these two and not in 00:31:595 (4) - or w/e, it's up t you
00:44:310 (4,7) - 00:45:881 (2) - should try ctrl+g in one of these two for the same reason
01:07:881 (2,4) - ctrl+g?
01:20:595 (1) - move to 248/1127 :thinking:
some nazi stuff:
00:01:453 (1,3) - they play well stacked but, well, what if you stacked both circles to the sliderends, that would make it more interesting http://prntscr.com/fb7qz7
00:20:167 (3,4) - blanket
00:07:024 (1,2) - blanket?
00:10:310 (5,2) - blanket?
00:22:453 (3,4) -

Zel's Extreme
the beginning looks a bit overmapped but I like it more so... ¯(´・◡・｀)/¯
00:16:881 (3,5) - add more spacing between these to be more consistent in the spacing considering the other jumps liek this
01:03:453 (3,4) - too short spacing between these imo
nazi stuff:
00:23:024 (1,3) - could blank better
00:32:881 (4,5) - stack with 00:31:881 (5) -

eze's Extra
00:09:881 (4) - move this up (to.. 424/156) and move 00:09:738 (3) - to 224/316 that would play better
00:36:024 (2) - this looks a little bit messy with the previous slider because it's rotation, also, both should have more spacing since 00:36:024 (2) - have strong beat on it, so just copy paste this 00:35:738 (1) - and ctrl+g https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8161039
01:02:881 (5,1) - should move 01:03:167 (1) - closer, since the sound on it it's not really "strong" and the 5 ends on a blue tick, that spacing it's too much atm
01:05:167 (3) - stack this with end of 01:04:595 (2) - instead? a bit more spacing here since 01:05:167 (3) - has strong beat on it (and I think 01:05:024 (2) - should be stacked with 01:05:738 (3) - ) considering the spacing between 01:04:310 (1,2) - and 01:05:024 (2,3) - but both are the same sound :thinking:
01:15:881 (2,3) - I think this is... much overmapping :thinking:
nazi stuff:
00:21:453 (4) - stack its end with 00:20:738 (2) -
00:30:453 (3,1) - blanket
00:35:310 (5) - stack with 00:34:595 (1) -
00:31:453 (3,2) - stack? (and then form blanket with 00:32:595 (2,3) -
01:05:595 (2,1) - stack properly kappa
01:09:738 (4,5) - blanket

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-05-23T21:32:37+00:00

Itasha_S13 wrote:
o/

[list]Chaos
00:04:738 (1,2,3) - these should not end on white ticks. they don't play bad atm, but I think they would play a lot better and fit the song better if they started on these white ticks, will still follow the vocals and you don't miss the downbeat and the next strong beat at 00:05:453 - that is a legit way of mapping those but this way prioritizes drums over vocals and I don't want this as the whole diff focuses mainly on vocals. the 1/1 slider at 00:05:595 (4) - fits the held vocal perfectly so I don't want to change it
00:06:024 (1) - should be 2 circles, I think it fits better since there's no vocals, so you follow vocals with sliders from 00:06:310 - idk that's true that the first slider is a bit different, but I think putting a circle at 00:06:167 - which doesn't really have an audible beat won't be that much of a good idea; also those three are following the drums pretty good (wacky reasoning ikr LOL)
00:18:881 (3,4) - should move this closer to the end of 00:18:595 (2) - decrease spacing in these just like the music does :thinking: (ok, you just reduced SV but spacing should decrease too) yes, changed the pattern a bit
00:18:167 (5) - stack its end with 00:17:024 (6) - < so you have more spacing between 00:17:024 (6) - and then move 00:18:881 (3,4) - closer to 00:18:595 (2) - ^
00:19:738 (1) - should make sliders a bit slower from here, or .. why not make this slider 00:19:453 (6) - a lot faster than 00:19:738 (1) - so that sound get more emphazised nice idea, but I can't really do it now due to the slider being too low, and if I want to make it faster I'll have to change the whole patterning up to the middle of the verse. I'll do this if I come up with an idea tho
00:36:595 - something I noticed while playing was, until this point, most of the flow it's going clockwise, maybe Im been too nazi, but why not do ctrl+g on 00:25:310 (1) - 00:31:595 (4) - 00:32:167 (1) - and 00:34:453 (1) - that would add more variety in the flow :thonkung: or can ctrl+g 00:30:453 (3,4) - these two and not in 00:31:595 (4) - or w/e, it's up t you intended, the flow goes clockwise up until 00:26:024 (2,3,4) - which indicates the end of the section; the same thing is used in the 2nd half of the verse
00:44:310 (4,7) - 00:45:881 (2) - should try ctrl+g in one of these two for the same reason as for this one I never actually liked how 00:44:024 (3,4) - flows so I changed it and ctrl-j'd some of the next patterns
01:07:881 (2,4) - ctrl+g? intended, don't want to make them the same distance, so I emphasize the second 'nee' a bit more
01:20:595 (1) - move to 248/1127 :thinking: this pattern is different from (6) and I don't think that I should align them together
some nazi stuff:
00:01:453 (1,3) - they play well stacked but, well, what if you stacked both circles to the sliderends, that would make it more interesting http://prntscr.com/fb7qz7 looks nice but the intention was to make the player stop at those cause those are literally the first objects on the map
00:20:167 (3,4) - blanket not really possible imo due to DS, it's blanketed by (1) instead
00:07:024 (1,2) - blanket? I tried
00:10:310 (5,2) - blanket? not a good idea imo due to how (5) is shaped, I'd rather have (2)'s end at (5)'s anchor
00:22:453 (3,4) - I genuinely believe they were blanketed once. I didn't blanket them now cause the DS is kinda big but instead went with an equal distance between 2-3 and 3-4. also the 00:22:453 (3,1) - blanket was broken and I never noticed it lol

thanks!

Seni

713 posts

Joined August 2014

Seni 2017-05-24T13:29:06+00:00

lo

Chaos

Basically the only thing I have a problem with in this diff are the hitsounds. Your samples are a bit overpowering, so I'm really questioning if stuff like 01:02:738 (4) - or 01:11:881 (4) - are good rhythm choices. I can see that you want to emphasize vocals in places like these and trying to avoid too much 1/2 spam but when you suddenly stop following the backbeat here it sounds really empty.
I suggest you use a different rhythm or hitsounding pattern. You can look at the other harder diffs for ideas because this only happens in your extra and light insane.
01:17:738 (2) - is another good example of poor rhythm choices conflicting with the hitsounding pattern.
00:56:310 (1,2,3) - 3 claps + vocals should have way more spacing emphasis than 00:55:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - so imo switch the spacing between these two sets of jumps

Zel's Extreme

01:23:738 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't feel like these jumps should be getting smaller, or changing emphasis in any way. All 3 sets are equally strong imo they should have equal emphasis

eze's Extra

01:23:738 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Same suggestion as Zel's diff

Asuka_'s Insane

01:05:738 -
01:06:167 - I think it's really bad to ignore these ticks when you don't need to since 01:05:738 is a snare and should definitely be emphasized. You are putting too much emphasis on vocals here by undermapping and it really takes away from the music, even more so because of how strong the hitsound samples are.

Light Insane

Pretty much the same thing about hitsounds as Chaos diff.

tokiko

215 posts

Joined June 2013

tokiko 2017-05-24T15:32:41+00:00

[General]

мне кажется, что тебе нужно замапать изи, который будет состоять из одних 1/1 слайдеров (для баланса, так сказать)
некоторые диффы заканчиваются в разное время, это не так страшно, но кто-нибудь обязательно может пристать, поэтому проверь на всякий случай

[Normal]

сделай хитсаунды потише, а то этот хлопок иногда сильно бьёт по ушам (это ко всему мапсету относится)

[Advanced]
не надо мапать всё с одинаковым дс, это странно выглядит, тем более в адванседе. попробуй раздвинуть некоторые паттерны, если хочешь
01:10:024 (1,2,3) - тут лучше сделать приятный треугольничек
01:26:024 (1) - поставь эту ноту в другое место, а то как-то слишком однообразно получается

[Light Insane]
00:05:024 (2) - может ctrl+g попробуешь?
00:14:738 (5,6) - и тут тоже
00:17:595 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - попробуй дать этому больше пространства путём увеличение спейсинга между двоечками
00:19:310 (5) - может 1/4 слайдер лучше будет?
01:26:024 (1) - любишь ты середину эдитора

[Chaos]
00:19:310 (5) - сейм ас эбаув (если ты это принял конечно)
00:37:453 (4) - можно нк
00:57:738 (7,1) - пофикси стак. а ещё мне кажется, что 00:57:738 (7) - с ctrl+g лучше выглядит
01:22:595 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ~~хайтай~~

удачи

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-05-24T17:54:02+00:00

Seni wrote:
lo
Chaos

Basically the only thing I have a problem with in this diff are the hitsounds. Your samples are a bit overpowering, so I'm really questioning if stuff like 01:02:738 (4) - or 01:11:881 (4) - are good rhythm choices. I can see that you want to emphasize vocals in places like these and trying to avoid too much 1/2 spam but when you suddenly stop following the backbeat here it sounds really empty.
I suggest you use a different rhythm or hitsounding pattern. You can look at the other harder diffs for ideas because this only happens in your extra and light insane. I think the way of mapping to vocals and ignoring some of the downbeats is completely legit (that is present in many ranked maps and does follow the song), and this is my way of mapping those. as for the hitsounding patterns - I might remove some of the hitsounds so that it doesn't sound that empty (though I'm personally fine with that lol), gotta think about it
01:17:738 (2) - is another good example of poor rhythm choices conflicting with the hitsounding pattern. tried smth else, I actually noticed that this section doesn't really follow the same logic - (1) and (2) were just mapped to the vocals and then I switched to drums
00:56:310 (1,2,3) - 3 claps + vocals should have way more spacing emphasis than 00:55:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - so imo switch the spacing between these two sets of jumps I'd rather say that all those jumps before are like the buildup which resolves at 00:55:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - , and then it's like going down in intensity a bit. I still increased the spacing on those, though they're still smaller than 00:55:738 (1,2,3,4,5) -

Light Insane
Pretty much the same thing about hitsounds as Chaos diff.
^

thanks!

also @Mentai: I noticed that 00:57:738 (4,1) - aren't stacked for whatever reason, might want to fix that

Jabba

813 posts

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Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-05-24T18:17:09+00:00

tokiko wrote:
[General]
мне кажется, что тебе нужно замапать изи, который будет состоять из одних 1/1 слайдеров (для баланса, так сказать) нормал как нижняя диффа подходит, он изначально изиком и назывался, но мы с Ризеном пообсуждали чутка и я пришел к выводу, что его лучше нормалом назвать, а бывший нормал в advanced переименовать. в нормале и так не юзаются 1/2 совершенно, поэтому не думаю, что еще одна диффа нужна
некоторые диффы заканчиваются в разное время, это не так страшно, но кто-нибудь обязательно может пристать, поэтому проверь на всякий случай а эт норма, там просто кто-то мапает последние 4 бита, а кто-то нет. ну и плюс это ГДшеры, так что, думаю, это полностью их право
[Normal]
сделай хитсаунды потише, а то этот хлопок иногда сильно бьёт по ушам (это ко всему мапсету относится) ыыы, я и так уже два раза тише их делал лол. срезал до 60 в киае/45 обычный

[Advanced]

не надо мапать всё с одинаковым дс, это странно выглядит, тем более в адванседе. попробуй раздвинуть некоторые паттерны, если хочешь я уже выше написал, что это диффа раньше была нормалом, поэтому и замапаной была с одинаковым дс. я так пробежался по ранкнутым advanced диффам примерно такого же старрейта, там почти все с ДСом включенным мапнуты. я подумаю еще, мб на нк повыделяю дичь
01:10:024 (1,2,3) - тут лучше сделать приятный треугольничек не треугольничек, ибо это фишка изи диффы, а здесь они не юзаются, а раздвинуть чуть подальше - там действительно слишком маленький спейсинг был
01:26:024 (1) - поставь эту ноту в другое место, а то как-то слишком однообразно получается с этой нотой все так и задумано, ее максимум логично ставить по центру как просто один большой завершающий бит перед спиннером

[Light Insane]

00:05:024 (2) - может ctrl+g попробуешь? выглядит неплохо, но чет по-моему дс тогда слишком большим станет для секции. у этого паттерна идея в том, что там слайдеры можно почти не вести, и тогда получится достаточно небольшой дс между объектами
00:14:738 (5,6) - и тут тоже 7-1 тогда очень неудобный джамп получается с переменой флоу в другую сторону
00:17:595 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - попробуй дать этому больше пространства путём увеличение спейсинга между двоечками чутка поменял паттернинг, теперь больше соответствует затуханию в музыке
00:19:310 (5) - может 1/4 слайдер лучше будет? я сначала и здесь сделал этот 1/4, а потом так посмотрел диффы - там на всех гд, начиная с инса, здесь 1/4 есть. поэтому я, чтобы уж не выделялось особо, здесь оставлю ноту, а в ласте слайдер
01:26:024 (1) - любишь ты середину эдитора ^

[Chaos]

00:19:310 (5) - сейм ас эбаув (если ты это принял конечно) ^
00:37:453 (4) - можно нк можно, на самом-то деле
00:57:738 (7,1) - пофикси стак. а ещё мне кажется, что 00:57:738 (7) - с ctrl+g лучше выглядит флоу кстати тоже получше, я даже уже не помню, почему я именно в ту сторону хотел его сделать
01:22:595 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ~~хайтай~~ вообще это брэнд-нью ворлд ризии!
удачи

спасибо!

Mentai

472 posts

Joined June 2016

Mentai 2017-05-25T01:17:10+00:00

uhHHhhHh oops

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Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Asuka_- 2017-05-26T11:38:28+00:00

im not good at english
i use google translate

Seni wrote:
Asuka_'s Insane

01:05:738 -
01:06:167 - I think it's really bad to ignore these ticks when you don't need to since 01:05:738 is a snare and should definitely be emphasized. You are putting too much emphasis on vocals here by undermapping and it really takes away from the music, even more so because of how strong the hitsound samples are.

It is consistent with 00:08:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - .
But it is certainly true. xD
I keep for now, but I will change it when pointed out by many people.

nice mod Thanks!!

Kaitjuh

856 posts

Joined December 2012

Kaitjuh 2017-05-26T14:44:41+00:00

m4m from queue

General

The hitsounds are pretty dang loud in Zel's and (borderline) eze's diff imo, during the kiai i think the max volume should be around 60-70%, since at higher volumes it just completely drowns out the music. Maybe consider copying the volumes from other diffs? Since I think the volume is better controlled there.
the mp3 file is 128 kbps atm, maybe try finding one thats 192 kpbs?

Mentai's Hard

00:03:738 - Pretty loud beat here, consider mapping it?
00:40:453 (2,4) - b l a n k e t s , use the sliderball ring as a guide xd there are more out there so look for those
00:51:453 (4) - space further for consistency?
00:58:595 (1) - this unstack looks a bit off, either stack it fully or overlap it like some other people do 1/1 gaps https://puu.sh/w1HqH/5d16bd198d.png This was probably just a stack that unstacked during editing though.

Light Insane

00:02:453 (1,2) - Ctrl+G the rhythm since the strong sound ends on a sliderend atm. It'd be more intuitive if strong sounds were clickable.

There seems to be a heavy focus on vocals in your own diffs, not just your light insane. This is quite a shame since there a lot of beats that remain unemphasized that land on strong sounds like snare drums. Imo the map is decent but could be a lot better if you incorporated not only vocals, but also account for other instruments in the song like the drums. I could continue pointing out minor flaws in the map but the structure would still remain the same.

Asuka_-'s Insane

00:03:167 (3) - Map a 1/1 Slider instead for the long vocal?
00:32:024 (4) - maybe space a bit more bc its a strong snare
01:21:453 (1) - since you tend to emphasize new combo's more, space this further or you could Ctrl+G. I've found out the flow on Ctrl+G works quite well.

you can mod back only part of my map tbh, i didnt really do much because of the above reason: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/614235

Good Luck o/

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-05-26T15:05:14+00:00

Kaitjuh wrote:
m4m from queue

General
the mp3 file is 128 kbps atm, maybe try finding one thats 192 kpbs?
I'll try, the problem is that's the only mp3 with 4 beats in the end (01:30:024 - ) I could find, the rest has a fade-out at the end (literally any other set except one I've taken this mp3 from, can't really remember which one). I'll try though

Light Insane
00:02:453 (1,2) - Ctrl+G the rhythm since the strong sound ends on a sliderend atm. It'd be more intuitive if strong sounds were clickable.
intended, as the section focuses on vocals. I actually prefer this as an 1/2 slider, but people kept asking me to map 00:02:595 - so I did this xd

There seems to be a heavy focus on vocals in your own diffs, not just your light insane. This is quite a shame since there a lot of beats that remain unemphasized that land on strong sounds like snare drums. Imo the map is decent but could be a lot better if you incorporated not only vocals, but also account for other instruments in the song like the drums. I could continue pointing out minor flaws in the map but the structure would still remain the same. I usually don't do "it's my style"-type responses, but this is actually the case - I believe that mapping to the vocals is quite a legit way to map and it fits the song. insane actually focuses on beats a bit more than the last diff, and in both diffs I still try to map beats even with sliderends. I might think about adding more emphasized beats tho

Good Luck o/

thanks! I'll mod the entire set anyway lol

Joe Castle

802 posts

Joined September 2014

Joe Castle 2017-05-26T22:54:31+00:00

HI! im here from #modreqs since you requested mods there!
i hope this mod can help you a bit

Normal:

didnt found any problems at all, in my opinión it looks good

Advance:

1. im a Little problematic with all those objects near to each other in almost all the map, but idk

Mentai´s Hard:

1. 00:03:167 (4) - move this slider to: X:72 - y:184
2. 00:23:738 (5,6) - It could look more cooler if the second slider could go to the other way
3. 00:35:738 (1,2) - the second slider should have the angle of the first one, because it looks weird
4. 00:50:595 (1,2,3,4) - all this sliders should have an equal spacing
5. 00:56:310 (1,2,3,4) - make combo "2,3,4" closer to the circle "1"

Light Insane:

1. 00:16:310 (1,2) - make this combo look like the sliders at 00:15:167 (1,2)

Asuka_-´s Insane:

1. 01:04:881 (4,5,6) - try doing something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8187532 or put the circle more down
2. 01:12:881 (3,4,5) - this circles look weird, make a wider triangle maybe?
3. 01:14:024 (4,5,6) - same reason as #2
4. 01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - it looks like you just dropped a bunch of circles randomly for me :S try doing this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8187544 (thats just my idea)

Eze´s Extra:

1. 00:02:881 (2,3,4,5) - put the triplet a Little bit closer to the curve of the stream
2. 00:05:453 (1,2,3) - move the circles directly to the sliderend
3. 01:17:738 (3,1) - make this objects a Little bit closer too
4. 01:20:024 (3,1) - make here the same thing you made on 01:17:738 (3,1), so they can look the exact way

Zel´s Extreme:

1. 00:02:881 (2,1) - make a Little bit more spacing on this objects
2. 00:03:167 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - i dont really see the point of the circles there, when there is no sound where you can map that...
3. 01:21:453 (1,2,1,2,1) - this is just an idea, but why not making a "down, up, down, up, down" thingy? i mean, the first slider goes down, then the second goes up and like that

4. 01:25:738 (3) - replace this with a circle
5. 01:30:453 (4) - im not really sure about this that being that long, there is a better way to replace it?

Chaos:

1. 00:01:453 (1,2,3,4) - move the "3,4" part a bit down, it looks weird there
2. 00:21:167 (2,3,4) - make this sliders have an equal space between them
3. 00:58:310 (1) - rotate this a bit to the right, so it doesnt look that weird
4. 01:00:024 (3,4,5) - same thing that #2
5. 01:09:167 (2,3,4) - same problema here
6. 01:13:738 (2,3,4) - i think you made this to have more and more spacing between every slider, but you kinda went a Little bit far with the last one, fix that

i hope this mod helped a Little bit at least

Mentai

472 posts

Joined June 2016

Mentai 2017-05-27T01:25:35+00:00

Kaitjuh wrote:
Mentai's Hard
00:03:738 - Pretty loud beat here, consider mapping it? may be, but its not a sin to skip a drum beat. waiting on more feedback
00:40:453 (2,4) - b l a n k e t s , use the sliderball ring as a guide xd there are more out there so look for those oops
00:51:453 (4) - space further for consistency? yes
00:58:595 (1) - this unstack looks a bit off, either stack it fully or overlap it like some other people do 1/1 gaps https://puu.sh/w1HqH/5d16bd198d.png This was probably just a stack that unstacked during editing though. yeah, adjusted earlier, just wasnt updated xd

ty!

[quote="Joe Castle"]

Mentai´s Hard:

1. 00:03:167 (4) - move this slider to: X:72 - y:184 too cramped 4 me
2. 00:23:738 (5,6) - It could look more cooler if the second slider could go to the other way you're right, but i also can't use large ds in this very calm section
3. 00:35:738 (1,2) - the second slider should have the angle of the first one, because it looks weird they are the same! maybe because they arent blanketed?
4. 00:50:595 (1,2,3,4) - all this sliders should have an equal spacing yes
5. 00:56:310 (1,2,3,4) - make combo "2,3,4" closer to the circle "1"not sure what you meant, but this caused me to fix a blanket, so thanks

thX 4 modz xd

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Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-05-27T03:50:04+00:00

Joe Castle wrote:
HI! im here from #modreqs since you requested mods there!
i hope this mod can help you a bit

Normal:

didnt found any problems at all, in my opinión it looks good

Advance:

1. im a Little problematic with all those objects near to each other in almost all the map, but idk that's just basic 1/2 spacing, nothing too strange

Light Insane:

1. 00:16:310 (1,2) - make this combo look like the sliders at 00:15:167 (1,2) nice find, fixed

Chaos:

1. 00:01:453 (1,2,3,4) - move the "3,4" part a bit down, it looks weird there looks fine imo
2. 00:21:167 (2,3,4) - make this sliders have an equal space between them 0.1x difference is not that much I think. I tried to make them the same but the latter patterning is kinda fixed and I can't rotate it properly without it going offscreen, so I'll have to keep this
3. 00:58:310 (1) - rotate this a bit to the right, so it doesnt look that weird it didn't look weird at all, but I had another idea
4. 01:00:024 (3,4,5) - same thing that #2 reworked the pattern a bit, changed the spacing in other way
5. 01:09:167 (2,3,4) - same problema here ^
6. 01:13:738 (2,3,4) - i think you made this to have more and more spacing between every slider, but you kinda went a Little bit far with the last one, fix that not really, (3) is supposed to have a bit less spacing, just like 01:04:595 (2,3,4) -

i hope this mod helped a Little bit at least

thanks!

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Asuka_- 2017-05-27T09:55:28+00:00

im not good at english
i use google translate

Kaitjuh wrote:
Asuka_-'s Insane
00:03:167 (3) - Map a 1/1 Slider instead for the long vocal? nice
00:32:024 (4) - maybe space a bit more bc its a strong snare i try
01:21:453 (1) - since you tend to emphasize new combo's more, space this further or you could Ctrl+G. I've found out the flow on Ctrl+G works quite well. ok

Joe Castle wrote:
Asuka_-´s Insane:

1. 01:04:881 (4,5,6) - try doing something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8187532 or put the circle more down little change (fix flow)
2. 01:12:881 (3,4,5) - this circles look weird, make a wider triangle maybe? little change
3. 01:14:024 (4,5,6) - same reason as #2 little change
4. 01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - it looks like you just dropped a bunch of circles randomly for me :S try doing this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8187544 (thats just my idea) nice i try

Thanks!!

upd

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Seolv

847 posts

Joined March 2016

Seolv 2017-05-31T18:28:16+00:00

So sorry i had to ruin the 69 posts ;w;
Rip meme

lul

2017-05-31 20:04 [ L u k a s ]: ey
2017-05-31 20:04 [ L u k a s ]: wanna irc nm
2017-05-31 20:04 [ L u k a s ]: im bored so i wanted to mod some map idk xd
2017-05-31 20:04 MadHypnofrog: go on lol
2017-05-31 20:04 MadHypnofrog: feel free to mod any diffs you're comfortable with
2017-05-31 20:04 MadHypnofrog: except for gds ofc
2017-05-31 20:05 [ L u k a s ]: fuck
2017-05-31 20:05 [ L u k a s ]: the spread
2017-05-31 20:05 [ L u k a s ]: Normal and Advanced? noob xd
2017-05-31 20:05 [ L u k a s ]: jk
2017-05-31 20:05 MadHypnofrog: eh had a discussion with rizen, we agreed on renaming easy to normal and normal to advanced
2017-05-31 20:05 [ L u k a s ]: ima mod normal
2017-05-31 20:05 MadHypnofrog: since the rhythm in advanced uses lots of 1/2 slider gaps
2017-05-31 20:06 [ L u k a s ]: 00:11:738 (3) - this is the same as 00:14:024 (3,4,5) - yet you use different rhythm choices
2017-05-31 20:06 [ L u k a s ]: 00:17:453 (1) - why is this a long slider, I think that you're ignoring quite a lot of important beats by using this big slider
2017-05-31 20:06 MadHypnofrog: wow the hitsounds are rip at that part for whatever reason LOL
2017-05-31 20:07 MadHypnofrog: as for the first one I feel like going in with 1/1 spam is kinda boring so I introduce more complex rhythms as the song goes on
2017-05-31 20:07 MadHypnofrog: 00:17:453 (1) - hard to map stuff there without using 1/2
2017-05-31 20:08 [ L u k a s ]: it is a normal so you can use 1/2
2017-05-31 20:08 MadHypnofrog: don't want to since I don't use them anywhere, would be a difficulty spike tbh
2017-05-31 20:08 MadHypnofrog: though I might use 1/1 and 3/2 repeat there
2017-05-31 20:08 MadHypnofrog: idk
2017-05-31 20:08 [ L u k a s ]: instead you can do repeat on 00:17:453 (1) - 
2017-05-31 20:09 [ L u k a s ]:  and a circle on 00:18:881 - 
2017-05-31 20:09 [ L u k a s ]: i meant a repeat on 00:18:024 - 
2017-05-31 20:09 [ L u k a s ]: xd
2017-05-31 20:10 MadHypnofrog: gotta think about it, this part has tricky 1/2s and it's smh hard to emphasize correct sounds without using 1/2 gaps and stuff
2017-05-31 20:10 [ L u k a s ]: yeah remap everything xd
2017-05-31 20:10 [ L u k a s ]: jk
2017-05-31 20:10 MadHypnofrog: so I just went with a slider that has turns on those sounds xd
2017-05-31 20:10 MadHypnofrog: remap kd pls
2017-05-31 20:11 [ L u k a s ]: 00:56:310 (1) - here as well, but it's even worse cause you're using less beats to emphasize more intense part of the song which is before the kiai
2017-05-31 20:12 [ L u k a s ]: yeah that's literally the only issue in this diff, looks clean otherwise
2017-05-31 20:12 MadHypnofrog: same reasoning tbh
2017-05-31 20:12 [ L u k a s ]: yeah but it's so bad xd
2017-05-31 20:12 [ L u k a s ]: because there you've got song getting intense
2017-05-31 20:12 [ L u k a s ]: and and the one before is with same intensity
2017-05-31 20:13 MadHypnofrog: simplifying rhythms for lyfe
2017-05-31 20:13 MadHypnofrog: ye that's true
2017-05-31 20:13 [ L u k a s ]: i'm good
2017-05-31 20:13 [ L u k a s ]: lulkas 4 bn 2069 
2017-05-31 20:13 MadHypnofrog: i'll think about it anyway
2017-05-31 20:13 MadHypnofrog: can't come up with an idea rn
2017-05-31 20:14 [ L u k a s ]: You can do what i suggested, using repeated slider and a circle
2017-05-31 20:14 [ L u k a s ]: Advanced
2017-05-31 20:14 [ L u k a s ]: 00:07:167 (3) - Confusing Overlap, the players will sure get triggered about
2017-05-31 20:14 [ L u k a s ]: 00:08:310 (1) - same
2017-05-31 20:14 [ L u k a s ]: 00:12:881 (1) - same
2017-05-31 20:14 [ L u k a s ]: xd
2017-05-31 20:15 MadHypnofrog: not really imo, those are like 4 beats apart
2017-05-31 20:15 [ L u k a s ]: 00:14:595 (4,5) - use the same rhythm as in other sliders before it (1/1 slider) instead of two 1/2 sliders, it's to keep the consistency since it literally sounds the same
2017-05-31 20:15 [ L u k a s ]: plus the song isn't getting more intense there so you use the same rhythm
2017-05-31 20:15 MadHypnofrog: oh those
2017-05-31 20:16 MadHypnofrog: listen closely, there are wubs in the background
2017-05-31 20:16 MadHypnofrog: so I'm emphasizing them
2017-05-31 20:16 [ L u k a s ]: oh yeah
2017-05-31 20:16 MadHypnofrog: there are actually 3 starting at 00:14:738 -
2017-05-31 20:16 [ L u k a s ]: ugh fucking hitsounds
2017-05-31 20:16 [ L u k a s ]: ima turn these off xd
2017-05-31 20:16 MadHypnofrog: turn them off LOL
2017-05-31 20:17 MadHypnofrog: this whole diff is a slider fest though LOL
2017-05-31 20:17 [ L u k a s ]: 00:17:453 (1) - there's a sound on the arrow and the slider end so maybe, to emphasize those without breaking the consistency, put a circle on 00:17:453 - and a 1/2 slider on 00:17:595 - 
2017-05-31 20:18 MadHypnofrog: sounds legit
2017-05-31 20:19 [ L u k a s ]: 01:02:738 (5) - I don't really like this overlap it's kinda overlapping the (3) if you look closely which triggered me a bit tbh xd
2017-05-31 20:20 MadHypnofrog: wait rut
2017-05-31 20:20 MadHypnofrog: wut
2017-05-31 20:20 MadHypnofrog: with 01:01:453 (3) - ?
2017-05-31 20:20 [ L u k a s ]: the (3) before that
2017-05-31 20:20 [ L u k a s ]: yes
2017-05-31 20:20 [ L u k a s ]: look closely 
2017-05-31 20:20 MadHypnofrog: uh they're stacked?
2017-05-31 20:20 [ L u k a s ]: yeah
2017-05-31 20:20 [ L u k a s ]: oh shit i didnt see
2017-05-31 20:20 [ L u k a s ]: sorry, my bad
2017-05-31 20:20 MadHypnofrog: ye it's just a stack lol
2017-05-31 20:20 [ L u k a s ]: the rest is fine
2017-05-31 20:21 [ L u k a s ]: ima post it on forum now xd

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-05-31T18:30:21+00:00

[ L u k a s ] wrote:

So sorry i had to ruin the 69 posts ;w;
Rip meme

lul

2017-05-31 20:04 [ L u k a s ]: ey
2017-05-31 20:04 [ L u k a s ]: wanna irc nm
2017-05-31 20:04 [ L u k a s ]: im bored so i wanted to mod some map idk xd
2017-05-31 20:04 MadHypnofrog: go on lol
2017-05-31 20:04 MadHypnofrog: feel free to mod any diffs you're comfortable with
2017-05-31 20:04 MadHypnofrog: except for gds ofc
2017-05-31 20:05 [ L u k a s ]: fuck
2017-05-31 20:05 [ L u k a s ]: the spread
2017-05-31 20:05 [ L u k a s ]: Normal and Advanced? noob xd
2017-05-31 20:05 [ L u k a s ]: jk
2017-05-31 20:05 MadHypnofrog: eh had a discussion with rizen, we agreed on renaming easy to normal and normal to advanced
2017-05-31 20:05 [ L u k a s ]: ima mod normal
2017-05-31 20:05 MadHypnofrog: since the rhythm in advanced uses lots of 1/2 slider gaps
2017-05-31 20:06 [ L u k a s ]: 00:11:738 (3) - this is the same as 00:14:024 (3,4,5) - yet you use different rhythm choices
2017-05-31 20:06 [ L u k a s ]: 00:17:453 (1) - why is this a long slider, I think that you're ignoring quite a lot of important beats by using this big slider
2017-05-31 20:06 MadHypnofrog: wow the hitsounds are rip at that part for whatever reason LOL
2017-05-31 20:07 MadHypnofrog: as for the first one I feel like going in with 1/1 spam is kinda boring so I introduce more complex rhythms as the song goes on
2017-05-31 20:07 MadHypnofrog: 00:17:453 (1) - hard to map stuff there without using 1/2
2017-05-31 20:08 [ L u k a s ]: it is a normal so you can use 1/2
2017-05-31 20:08 MadHypnofrog: don't want to since I don't use them anywhere, would be a difficulty spike tbh
2017-05-31 20:08 MadHypnofrog: though I might use 1/1 and 3/2 repeat there
2017-05-31 20:08 MadHypnofrog: idk
2017-05-31 20:08 [ L u k a s ]: instead you can do repeat on 00:17:453 (1) - 
2017-05-31 20:09 [ L u k a s ]:  and a circle on 00:18:881 - 
2017-05-31 20:09 [ L u k a s ]: i meant a repeat on 00:18:024 - 
2017-05-31 20:09 [ L u k a s ]: xd
2017-05-31 20:10 MadHypnofrog: gotta think about it, this part has tricky 1/2s and it's smh hard to emphasize correct sounds without using 1/2 gaps and stuff
2017-05-31 20:10 [ L u k a s ]: yeah remap everything xd
2017-05-31 20:10 [ L u k a s ]: jk
2017-05-31 20:10 MadHypnofrog: so I just went with a slider that has turns on those sounds xd
2017-05-31 20:10 MadHypnofrog: remap kd pls
2017-05-31 20:11 [ L u k a s ]: 00:56:310 (1) - here as well, but it's even worse cause you're using less beats to emphasize more intense part of the song which is before the kiai
2017-05-31 20:12 [ L u k a s ]: yeah that's literally the only issue in this diff, looks clean otherwise
2017-05-31 20:12 MadHypnofrog: same reasoning tbh
2017-05-31 20:12 [ L u k a s ]: yeah but it's so bad xd
2017-05-31 20:12 [ L u k a s ]: because there you've got song getting intense
2017-05-31 20:12 [ L u k a s ]: and and the one before is with same intensity
2017-05-31 20:13 MadHypnofrog: simplifying rhythms for lyfe
2017-05-31 20:13 MadHypnofrog: ye that's true
2017-05-31 20:13 [ L u k a s ]: i'm good
2017-05-31 20:13 [ L u k a s ]: lulkas 4 bn 2069 
2017-05-31 20:13 MadHypnofrog: i'll think about it anyway
2017-05-31 20:13 MadHypnofrog: can't come up with an idea rn
2017-05-31 20:14 [ L u k a s ]: You can do what i suggested, using repeated slider and a circle
2017-05-31 20:14 [ L u k a s ]: Advanced
2017-05-31 20:14 [ L u k a s ]: 00:07:167 (3) - Confusing Overlap, the players will sure get triggered about
2017-05-31 20:14 [ L u k a s ]: 00:08:310 (1) - same
2017-05-31 20:14 [ L u k a s ]: 00:12:881 (1) - same
2017-05-31 20:14 [ L u k a s ]: xd
2017-05-31 20:15 MadHypnofrog: not really imo, those are like 4 beats apart
2017-05-31 20:15 [ L u k a s ]: 00:14:595 (4,5) - use the same rhythm as in other sliders before it (1/1 slider) instead of two 1/2 sliders, it's to keep the consistency since it literally sounds the same
2017-05-31 20:15 [ L u k a s ]: plus the song isn't getting more intense there so you use the same rhythm
2017-05-31 20:15 MadHypnofrog: oh those
2017-05-31 20:16 MadHypnofrog: listen closely, there are wubs in the background
2017-05-31 20:16 MadHypnofrog: so I'm emphasizing them
2017-05-31 20:16 [ L u k a s ]: oh yeah
2017-05-31 20:16 MadHypnofrog: there are actually 3 starting at 00:14:738 -
2017-05-31 20:16 [ L u k a s ]: ugh fucking hitsounds
2017-05-31 20:16 [ L u k a s ]: ima turn these off xd
2017-05-31 20:16 MadHypnofrog: turn them off LOL
2017-05-31 20:17 MadHypnofrog: this whole diff is a slider fest though LOL
2017-05-31 20:17 [ L u k a s ]: 00:17:453 (1) - there's a sound on the arrow and the slider end so maybe, to emphasize those without breaking the consistency, put a circle on 00:17:453 - and a 1/2 slider on 00:17:595 - 
2017-05-31 20:18 MadHypnofrog: sounds legit
2017-05-31 20:19 [ L u k a s ]: 01:02:738 (5) - I don't really like this overlap it's kinda overlapping the (3) if you look closely which triggered me a bit tbh xd
2017-05-31 20:20 MadHypnofrog: wait rut
2017-05-31 20:20 MadHypnofrog: wut
2017-05-31 20:20 MadHypnofrog: with 01:01:453 (3) - ?
2017-05-31 20:20 [ L u k a s ]: the (3) before that
2017-05-31 20:20 [ L u k a s ]: yes
2017-05-31 20:20 [ L u k a s ]: look closely 
2017-05-31 20:20 MadHypnofrog: uh they're stacked?
2017-05-31 20:20 [ L u k a s ]: yeah
2017-05-31 20:20 [ L u k a s ]: oh shit i didnt see
2017-05-31 20:20 [ L u k a s ]: sorry, my bad
2017-05-31 20:20 MadHypnofrog: ye it's just a stack lol
2017-05-31 20:20 [ L u k a s ]: the rest is fine
2017-05-31 20:21 [ L u k a s ]: ima post it on forum now xd

rip 69 posts 2017-2017
thanks!

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2017-06-01T02:34:58+00:00

Hello from modding queue

Based on my rules I'll be only modding the diffs you created. I want you to improve.

[Chaos]

I think you're pushing it with AR 9.7 and OD 9.5 No need for such things to be so high up. It's already high enough on the SR scale but then added extra difficulty just because of the settings. Toning them down would be a lot nicer imo
00:02:453 (1) - Ended on a clickable beat like 00:01:453 (1) - and 00:03:738 (1) - would be strange to suddenly change it like that Same as with most parts
00:07:024 (1) - Seems simplified quite a noticeable beat in between this slider which leaves the rhythm empty and stranded if not mapped out
00:10:310 (5) - Could've use a lot of different elements. Ex: Could've SV to indicate a change with the music then change SV back to normal to play the part out otherwise it just makes this slider feel like any other slider
00:10:595 (1,2,3,4) - Quite a drastic transition from utilizing the music with 1/2 sliders then all of a sudden you have a 10 note jump pattern right after utilizing the same sounds 00:11:738 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - without much indication of change in the music, just seems to be thrown in there to increase SR
00:24:595 (3,4) - Even with calm parts spacing seems so far apart
00:26:310 (4,1) - Spacing is inconsistent with the spacing from above even though the 2nd one lands on a stronger vocal but has less spacing
00:29:881 (1) - Noticeable beat in between the slider
00:44:738 (5) - Why is this spacing the same as 00:44:881 (1,2,3) - when (5) has nothing strong compared to the hitsound profile used on the 3 notes
00:46:167 (3,4,5,6) - Same with just feels like it's thrown out there
00:47:167 (1) - Note density and how the setup and stuff was made makes this part after incredibly challenging
Basically most of this sums it up, use this or not on parts of the kiai too

[Normal]

Wow cs is really small feels like an easy. Could be 3.5 or 3
00:36:881 (2,3) - Seems a bit too rushed having that as 2/1 slider builds more emphasis with the hold and then into the strong beat http://puu.sh/w7d4U/4b1882064e.jpg
00:38:024 (1,1,1,1) - It feels oversimplified makes it look like a beginner diff with slider art
00:50:595 (2) - Lot of following notes after this especially with 00:55:167 (3,4,5,6) -
Not that much just a lot of changes between vocals and instruments that could've been improved but it should be ok after a couple more mods from pros. Not bad

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-06-01T05:36:03+00:00

Kocari wrote:
Hello from modding queue

Based on my rules I'll be only modding the diffs you created. I want you to improve.

[Chaos]
I think you're pushing it with AR 9.7 and OD 9.5 No need for such things to be so high up. It's already high enough on the SR scale but then added extra difficulty just because of the settings. Toning them down would be a lot nicer imo I think that ar9.7 isn't that much of a problem since it's highbpm (210) and lower AR might affect the readability of jumps. as for OD, the rhythm is fairly simple and has only a few triples, it's mostly 1/2 spam so it shouldn't be hard to acc at all
00:02:453 (1) - Ended on a clickable beat like 00:01:453 (1) - and 00:03:738 (1) - would be strange to suddenly change it like that Same as with most parts intended, this part follows the vocals, just like the (almost) whole diff. sometimes I sacrifice those downbeats to emphasize those long vocal lines
00:07:024 (1) - Seems simplified quite a noticeable beat in between this slider which leaves the rhythm empty and stranded if not mapped out changed to 1/2 + circle, did the same in kiai
00:10:310 (5) - Could've use a lot of different elements. Ex: Could've SV to indicate a change with the music then change SV back to normal to play the part out otherwise it just makes this slider feel like any other slider ye idk why I didn't do anything there, decreased SV for this one
00:10:595 (1,2,3,4) - Quite a drastic transition from utilizing the music with 1/2 sliders then all of a sudden you have a 10 note jump pattern right after utilizing the same sounds 00:11:738 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - without much indication of change in the music, just seems to be thrown in there to increase SR it was mainly done to not throw 1/2 spam at the player immediately, just four sliders to let them adapt to the rhythm, and then do teh jumps. idk I'll think of an other way of representing this idea, cause I both like the jumps since they follow the music nicely and I don't want to go all-in immediately
00:24:595 (3,4) - Even with calm parts spacing seems so far apart true, fixed
00:26:310 (4,1) - Spacing is inconsistent with the spacing from above even though the 2nd one lands on a stronger vocal but has less spacing fixed
00:29:881 (1) - Noticeable beat in between the slider vocals, I'm against changing this one - would mess the rhythm up
00:44:738 (5) - Why is this spacing the same as 00:44:881 (1,2,3) - when (5) has nothing strong compared to the hitsound profile used on the 3 notes 00:47:738 (4,5,6,7) - this is a form of 1-2-1-2 patterning and I think it fits nicely in there
00:46:167 (3,4,5,6) - Same with just feels like it's thrown out there decreased spacing on (3) a bit
00:47:167 (1) - Note density and how the setup and stuff was made makes this part after incredibly challenging idk I'm fine with those, 00:47:167 (1) - the first two beats are mapped as a slider in first two sections and 00:47:595 (3) - is a slider in 1st and 3rd sections, it should be fine
Basically most of this sums it up, use this or not on parts of the kiai too ye applied some as well

[Normal]
Wow cs is really small feels like an easy. Could be 3.5 or 3 ye cs3 feels nice
00:36:881 (2,3) - Seems a bit too rushed having that as 2/1 slider builds more emphasis with the hold and then into the strong beat http://puu.sh/w7d4U/4b1882064e.jpg sure
00:38:024 (1,1,1,1) - It feels oversimplified makes it look like a beginner diff with slider art kinda fits this section imo, the ones that are more problematic are 00:56:310 (1) - and 00:17:453 (1) - cause by using them I skip lots of beats, but this section is calm and I think those sliders represent it perfectly
00:50:595 (2) - Lot of following notes after this especially with 00:55:167 (3,4,5,6) - added an object there 00:48:024 (2) - and there 00:50:310 (2) - , I think this should do it for now as 00:51:738 (1) - doesn't stand out that much now
Not that much just a lot of changes between vocals and instruments that could've been improved but it should be ok after a couple more mods from pros. Not bad

thanks!

Zel

240 posts

Joined April 2014

Zel 2017-06-03T04:30:18+00:00

-YN wrote:
Random mod passing by.
Zel's Extreme
00:19:310 (1,2) - Since you mapped this on a distinct sound that differs from a lot of sounds throughout the song I would personally curve the sliders instead of tilting them. the following sliders in the section are curved or pointed, so nah srry
00:19:453 (2) - set volume to 5% ? fixed
00:29:453 (4,1) - idk if you mapped vocal here, but having 2 complete looking sliders on same kind of tone the vocalist hits is weird. Use same style of slider here? ye fix
01:11:738 (4,5,6,7,1,2) - You have put emphasis on white ticks with higher spacing, but 01:12:166 (7,1) - contradicts that with sudden lower spacing by a lot. yea youre right

Zallies wrote:
[Zel's Extreme]
00:05:453 - i can't agree to ignore the beat hitsound its vocal mapped
00:09:167 (3,1) - stack with them?? no its a different sound all together
00:17:310 (6) - im thinking that this part should be clickable, and i dont think 1/2 red tick is my choice on making white tick on beat cuz it makes awkward youre correct, fixed
00:50:310 (5,6,1,2) - this is also a square jump, r u really using this jump instead of star etc? nothing wrong with squares, and its a very crooked/acute one at that
01:04:167 (1,2,3) - not fan patterns xd indeed cuz vocals
01:07:453 (3,1) - its kinda little bit over ds. unlike 00:58:310 (1,1) - this is good af fixed, and i also noticed a NC issue because of this so ty
01:13:310 (1,2,3) - wat it made me confuse sounds like a personal problem, i did it before in the map
01:14:453 (6,1) - overmap tbh incorrect, its very intense part of the map.
01:16:595 (5) - why not copy 3? its kinda cool imo i dont understand, im sorry
01:26:024 (1) - you have to do better than dat xd try make it good its literally actually perfect so idk what youre talking about lol

Testo wrote:
[Zel's Extreme]
00:10:024 (4,5) - do you really need to overmap here it isn't overmap, its vocal mapped.
00:17:310 (6) - 2 notes will be better suggested from a different mod and applied :3
00:36:880 (3,4,5,6) - 2 kicksliders for better emphasize good suggestion, but i feel like its fine the way it is and it has kicksliders emphasizinjg the lyrics already, so if i did kicksliders here nothing would be emphasized
01:30:595 - sound ends here why slider not? good call

Itasha_S13 wrote:
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[Zel's Extreme]

the beginning looks a bit overmapped but I like it more so... ¯(´・◡・｀)/¯ i disagree, vocals are mapped consistently and the triples are all there.
00:16:881 (3,5) - add more spacing between these to be more consistent in the spacing considering the other jumps liek this its fine
01:03:453 (3,4) - too short spacing between these imo youd be correct in that assumption friendo
nazi stuff:
00:23:024 (1,3) - could blank better fix
00:32:881 (4,5) - stack with 00:31:881 (5) - that was probably to be intended, but fucked up. ty

Seni wrote:
Zel's Extreme

01:23:738 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't feel like these jumps should be getting smaller, or changing emphasis in any way. All 3 sets are equally strong imo they should have equal emphasis its calming down to the end of the song, same rules with intro; should be gradual

Joe Castle wrote:
Zel´s Extreme:

1. 00:02:881 (2,1) - make a Little bit more spacing on this objects disagree, its fine
2. 00:03:167 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - i dont really see the point of the circles there, when there is no sound where you can map that... the sounds are there? what
3. 01:21:453 (1,2,1,2,1) - this is just an idea, but why not making a "down, up, down, up, down" thingy? i mean, the first slider goes down, then the second goes up and like that good su gestion my dude, also adds more emphasis
4. 01:25:738 (3) - replace this with a circle its fine
5. 01:30:453 (4) - im not really sure about this that being that long, there is a better way to replace it? suggested from another mod then fixed

Zel

240 posts

Joined April 2014

Zel 2017-06-03T04:33:11+00:00

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eeezzzeee

979 posts

Joined August 2013

eeezzzeee 2017-06-04T05:40:14+00:00

wow so many mods ok here we go

no response = fixed

gottagof4ast

00:03:310 (3,4,5) - idk about this triple, it doesn't feel needed as the sounds are extremely quiet but you map this sound often so I guess it's ok yeah no change
00:06:881 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - These NC's look weird
00:19:024 (2,1) - This jump feels a bit on the small side
00:32:167 (1) - sliderend should be mapped, so how about 1/2 slider + circle instead of a 1/1 nah im trying to avoid too dense rhythm
00:42:167 - I know you probably want to be consistent with 00:39:738 (4,1) - but there is a sound here so map 00:42:024 (4) - as a 1/2 slider i dont wanna emphasize that since its so weak
00:50:453 (6,2) - some overlap you may or may not want to fix
01:00:024 (2) - sound on sliderend is too strong to not be circle/sliderhead
01:09:167 (2) - ^ umm ill think about it i guess. you are right that its a strong vocal part but at the same time i dont want to make the rhythm too dense cuz like this is 210 bpm so i think having some 1/1 is fine
01:11:167 (1,2) - The vocals start on these sliderends so if u want to follow those which is suggested by 01:11:024 (5) - than move the sldiers 1/2 later i think this part is better to map the instruments though
01:15:953 (3) - Not sure if u should map this made some change to the placement
01:23:738 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - would just keep same spacing between 12 and not make it smaller but thats your choice no change for now

-YN

00:08:310 (1,2,3) - Try to stay consistent with how the slider looks here. Same tone from vocalist.
01:04:167 (3,1) - have same spacing as 01:03:881 (1,2) - since it's same bass sound. Also feels different when playing. its pretty similar already though

Zallies

00:17:453 (1,2,3,1,2) - you did it like falling pattern, why not doing the same with 00:18:881 (1,2) - ? changed it differently
00:58:881 - missing? i dont understand what do you mean?
01:04:310 (1,2) - lets try blanketing 1?

wkdalstn29

00:07:167 (1) - remove NC
00:08:024 (1) - remove NC use this for SV change
00:08:310 (1) - I think it is a slide little far
00:13:595 (2) - There is a feeling closer to other circles.
00:21:167 (3) - move slightly down
00:26:881 (1,2,3,4) - Make it regular its fine
00:58:596 (1) - remove NC
00:59:453 (3) - remove NC these make better aesthetics
01:05:881 (1) - move down
01:08:595 (1) - remove NC same
01:11:738 (1) - remove NC
01:12:167 (4) - NC
01:12:310 (1) - remove NC same
01:23:453 (1) - remove NC

Itasha_S13

00:09:881 (4) - move this up (to.. 424/156) and move 00:09:738 (3) - to 224/316 that would play better i made a lot of different changes here from another mod
00:36:024 (2) - this looks a little bit messy with the previous slider because it's rotation, also, both should have more spacing since 00:36:024 (2) - have strong beat on it, so just copy paste this 00:35:738 (1) - and ctrl+g https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8161039 made some different changes
01:02:881 (5,1) - should move 01:03:167 (1) - closer, since the sound on it it's not really "strong" and the 5 ends on a blue tick, that spacing it's too much atm slider leniency makes this ok to play tho
01:05:167 (3) - stack this with end of 01:04:595 (2) - instead? a bit more spacing here since 01:05:167 (3) - has strong beat on it (and I think 01:05:024 (2) - should be stacked with 01:05:738 (3) - ) considering the spacing between 01:04:310 (1,2) - and 01:05:024 (2,3) - but both are the same sound :thinking:
01:15:881 (2,3) - I think this is... much overmapping :thinking:
nazi stuff:
00:21:453 (4) - stack its end with 00:20:738 (2) - its stacked on 00:20:310 (4) -
00:30:453 (3,1) - blanket not what i wanted
00:35:310 (5) - stack with 00:34:595 (1) - intentional
00:31:453 (3,2) - stack? (and then form blanket with 00:32:595 (2,3) -
01:05:595 (2,1) - stack properly kappa
01:09:738 (4,5) - blanket

Seni

01:23:738 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Same suggestion as Zel's diff its fine either way imo. i think zel explained my exact same train of thought here as well lol

Joe Castle

1. 00:02:881 (2,3,4,5) - put the triplet a Little bit closer to the curve of the stream
2. 00:05:453 (1,2,3) - move the circles directly to the sliderend intentional
3. 01:17:738 (3,1) - make this objects a Little bit closer too not necessary its easily playable with slider leniency
4. 01:20:024 (3,1) - make here the same thing you made on 01:17:738 (3,1), so they can look the exact way i dont understand what you mean they are pretty similar lol

okie then
also made a bunch of changes here and there on my own
and nerfed the difficulty of the map by a little to better fit the spread

update

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205,149,79167,6,0,P|139:174|74:149,1,144,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
188,81,79595,2,0,P|204:112|205:148,1,72,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,340,80024,2,0,P|125:352|108:358,3,35.9999989013672,2|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
73,274,80310,6,0,P|138:249|204:275,1,144,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
448,264,80881,2,0,P|464:233|465:197,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,98,81167,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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162,31,81738,2,0,L|188:144,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,286,82024,2,0,L|208:260,1,99.0000030212403,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,353,82310,2,0,L|324:240,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,127,82595,5,0,3:0:0:0:
328,257,82738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,264,82881,1,8,3:2:0:0:
321,120,83024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,286,83167,5,0,3:0:0:0:
288,344,83310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,127,83453,2,0,B|84:168|84:168|64:216,1,148.50000453186,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,286,83738,5,8,0:0:0:0:
417,286,83881,1,8,0:0:0:0:
135,172,84167,5,8,0:0:0:0:
376,172,84310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
177,58,84595,5,8,0:0:0:0:
335,58,84738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,288,86024,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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321,264,90024,5,0,3:0:0:0:
191,120,90167,1,0,3:0:0:0:
328,127,90310,1,0,3:0:0:0:
184,257,90453,1,0,3:0:0:0:

FiddleBlue

287 posts

Joined February 2016

FiddleBlue 2017-06-07T19:47:58+00:00

Hello from my queue!
I'll be modding four difficulties only, if you don't mind.

Asuka_'s Insane

00:09:310 (6,1) - Idk if this the spacing the same as 00:09:453 (1,2,3) - , but if it isn't I think it should be as they are the same sound.
00:26:024 (3) - Perhaps make this into a 1/2 slider and a circle instead. I think a reverse slider here is kinda out of place.
00:29:167 (2,3) - Perhaps blanketing these?
00:46:738 (4,1) - I think the spacing is too much for a 1/4 jump.
01:22:595 (1,2,3,4) - This section is kind of weird as the music is gradually getting louder and intense. The 1/2 sliders are a little bit boring for a part like this. Perhaps you can try combining circles with them. Some suggestion: https://i.gyazo.com/78b73ca3ea3be5b571b ... 48cf50.png
01:26:024 (1) - Why don't you put a circle here and start the spinner from the next blue tick. Also I think the spinner should end at 01:26:024 (1) - as that's what the next high difficulties are doing and I think ending at the red tick would be a little bit hard for players.

eze's Extra

00:07:738 (3) - Perhaps making the spacing here shorter or 00:08:024 (1) - longer as what you did with 00:07:453 (2,4) - .
00:12:453 (2) - Perhaps blanket this with 00:12:024 (2) - ?
01:00:881 (1) - Maybe blanket this with 01:00:024 (2) - ?
01:14:310 (6,2) - Blanket?
01:21:453 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should add a mixture of circles here to make the part more stand out that just fast sliders.

Zel's Extreme

I think the AR is a bit too high, perhaps AR 9.5 instead?
00:10:024 (4,5) - Kinda overmapped don't you think? Why don't you make 00:09:453 (1) - into two circles instead so it'll be a four 1/2 consecutive jumps?
00:17:453 (7) - How about ignoring this sound instead as it lacks the strong sound in which 00:16:881 (3,4,5,6) - has?
01:01:167 (3,4) - Weird flow :/ Maybe curve the slider?
01:05:024 (4,5,6) - Perhaps make these the same spacing to emphasize 01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - more as the three circles lack the intense sound in which 01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - has.

Chaos

00:23:738 (4) - Perhaps make this slider body parallel to 00:23:024 (1) - .
00:30:024 - There's a sound here. You can make 00:29:881 (1) - as a 1/2 slider and a circle instead.
00:34:453 (1) - ^
01:06:738 (1) - Why new NC?
01:14:738 (1) - ^

I really enjoy this mapset. Hoping to see this rank soon.
Good luck with your mapset!

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-06-07T20:38:09+00:00

FiddleBlue wrote:
Hello from my queue!
I'll be modding four difficulties only, if you don't mind.
Chaos
00:23:738 (4) - Perhaps make this slider body parallel to 00:23:024 (1) - . nice catch, I didn't exactly make them parallel but I rotated (2) so that it looks nicer now
00:30:024 - There's a sound here. You can make 00:29:881 (1) - as a 1/2 slider and a circle instead. intended, I skip lots of downbeats to emphasize the vocals better; I think it fits the song better
00:34:453 (1) - ^ ^
01:06:738 (1) - Why new NC? if you listen closely you can hear that 01:06:738 - starting from here the instruments follow the 1-2-3-1-2-1-2 pattern (hitsounds also reflect this). 01:06:738 (1) - is clearly the start of a new pattern and 01:06:453 (2) - is the end, so 01:06:595 (1) - doesn't belong to either of them and thus is NCd, because having it either in the previous or next combo would be illogical
01:14:738 (1) - ^ similar reasoning, esp. in this case 01:14:738 (1) - has the new vocal line, while 01:14:595 (1) - is just a beat, and I feel that it's fine to emphasize 01:14:738 (1) - with a NC. I might change those though if there are more complaints
[/notice]
I really enjoy this mapset. Hoping to see this rank soon. same tbh
Good luck with your mapset!

thanks!

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2017-06-08T01:38:35+00:00

is the anime worth the watch?

Normal

00:03:738 (1) - Not sure for what reason do you have to change flow. But since the timeline spacing is far enough I'll let this slide (But my recommendation is to curve the straight part to curve inward into the slider (http://puu.sh/wdUBn/5ce40bb542.jpg ) )
00:14:024 (3,4,5,1) - A bit too harsh in terms of flow for a sound that doesn't hold something special
00:20:310 (2,3,1,2,3) - This has "bad pattern" and "lazy placement" written all over visually. Change how you map this?
00:31:738 (3,3) - Small stacking issue that i think it is fine to ignore
Overall this diff did not meet my standards in aesthetics and flow so get some polishing on this one

advanced

00:05:453 (2,2) - It's better not to stack these. Connecting two notes that is on different section would play awkwardly imo
00:07:453 (4,1) - Blanket?
00:18:881 (5) - The placement looked like it was isolated from the original pattern, and looks pretty bad at the moment
00:28:881 (1,2) - What I meant by connecting notes of different section can be seen here as well and for me, it looks awkward.
00:50:595 (3) - ctrl+j will make it look better
00:53:453 (4,2) - Can be seen in the editor and gameplay that these are overlapped. And it looked pretty bad for me. Move them apart?
This diff also needs polishing

Hard

00:19:738 (1) - I think a finish hs would fit better here. Having a drum-ish hs on a piano sounds a bit odd for me
00:38:024 (1) - From the mp3 it sounded mandatory to add a finish hs instead of a drum. The hs will sounded underemphasized
00:50:595 (1) - remove nc, put nc at 00:49:310 (4) -
00:53:881 (4,1) - ^
01:06:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - For 210bpm I think you're asking too much for players to single tap these
01:19:310 (2) - for me this wave looks odd. Fix this?
Very solid overall. Great work

Good luck with this set

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-06-08T03:10:07+00:00

Winter Story wrote:
is the anime worth the watch? I enjoyed it, gotta watch chaos;head first tho

Normal
00:03:738 (1) - Not sure for what reason do you have to change flow. But since the timeline spacing is far enough I'll let this slide (But my recommendation is to curve the straight part to curve inward into the slider (http://puu.sh/wdUBn/5ce40bb542.jpg ) ) it's like 4 beats apart so I think that the 'flow break' is not that crucial. added the curve
00:14:024 (3,4,5,1) - A bit too harsh in terms of flow for a sound that doesn't hold something special actually three red ticks starting from 00:14:738 - have that wubby sound (this is emphasized better in higher diffs) and I think it's fine to change the flow a bit there. also it's not that hard at all, you can just move your cursor up in a straight line
00:20:310 (2,3,1,2,3) - This has "bad pattern" and "lazy placement" written all over visually. Change how you map this? how's that bad patterning? 00:22:024 (1,2,3) - this type of placement (with a triangle in the middle) is used everywhere in the map, 00:19:738 (1,2,3) - the rhythm is simplier there because I introduce it gradually, so there's no possibility to use such patterning. the only cocnern there might be is the relative placement of 00:22:024 (1,2,3) - to 00:19:738 (1,2,3) - but tbh I don't see anything wrong there
00:31:738 (3,3) - Small stacking issue that i think it is fine to ignore this wasn't even supposed to be a stack LOL but fixed
Overall this diff did not meet my standards in aesthetics and flow so get some polishing on this one giff me examples of bad flow pls, there are like 5 or 6 different flow patterns (triangle, trapeze, zigzag and some more) and none of them break the flow that hard

advanced
00:05:453 (2,2) - It's better not to stack these. Connecting two notes that is on different section would play awkwardly imo changed, but because I felt that 00:06:595 (2,3) - was kinda flowbreaking. flows in a more circular way now
00:07:453 (4,1) - Blanket? yes
00:18:881 (5) - The placement looked like it was isolated from the original pattern, and looks pretty bad at the moment not at all, 4-5 is literally the same as 2-3 and even has the same x-coordinates, so it's fine
00:28:881 (1,2) - What I meant by connecting notes of different section can be seen here as well and for me, it looks awkward. uh, what? there are no stacks?
00:50:595 (3) - ctrl+j will make it look better kinda messes up the DS
00:53:453 (4,2) - Can be seen in the editor and gameplay that these are overlapped. And it looked pretty bad for me. Move them apart? whoOPS they were supposed to be stacked. ye, regarding this - tbh I don't see anything wrong with it, I'm just reusing the placement
This diff also needs polishing as for this diff I'd rather say that it's mapped in such a style that it can't really look good, it focuses on flow and following the vocals the most, and the rhythm choice doesn't allow me to do much patterns. similar

Good luck with this set

thanks!

lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2017-06-08T15:29:14+00:00

was planning to map this on the other day LOL

[general]

i kinda agreed from Rizen's mod that the diff name should be changed from Advanced to Normal, and Normal to Easy, due to the same how u map like from lower than 200 bpm though

[chaos]

00:01:453 (1) - booo, someone didn't set an emphasize finish hitsound ;w;
00:10:595 (1,2,3,4) - i'd actually make this as an "actual" symmetry for a part like this as an intensity intro part, where it suits better for a challenge diff
00:17:595 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - since this is a 7* diff, if i were you, i'd actually make all notes rather than adding some 1/2 sliders before going to a calm section part, since this is the intro intensity part right here
00:19:310 (5) - would be nice if u nc this
00:20:024 (2) - why drum sampleset?
00:22:310 (2) - 00:24:595 (3) - 00:26:595 (1) - (tail) ^
00:19:738 - isn't this 1x slider speed a bit too fast for a calm section part here?
00:33:881 (4,1) - u didn't quite making a blanket slider a bit well here. try fix this from 00:34:453 (1) - by setting a middle anchor on 3|214 and last on 5|107 (still bad? ask someone else to help lol)
00:54:595 (1,2) - isn't this way too forced to make a bigger spacing while u're trying to make a low to high spacing from the start, just like 00:54:024 (1,2,1,2) - ? i'd make it the same spacing scale the same to adjust it well there
00:55:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - i can't get it why u made a huge spacing 00:56:024 (4,5) - , but not on 00:55:738 (1,2) - , since it's not as far as what i have expected for this part
01:02:738 (4,2) - this isn't quite neat for a slider blanket like this, if you ask me. u can try to adjust this one a bit
01:06:738 (1,2) - remove nc on 01:06:738 (1) - , set nc on 01:06:881 (2) -
01:06:310 (1,2) - this is waaaay to forceful for the sake of a diff. the same goes to 01:07:167 (1,2,1,2) - , which is pretty a huge diff spike right there. tbh i'm not quite a fan of that kind of spacing, and i'd totally suggest you not to make that kind of huge spacing, even that i know the instrument's like from low to high pitch right there from the synth sound
01:14:738 (1) - remove nc
01:16:024 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - from the start, i was expecting about having a spacing from the low synth sound to high synth sound, as a low to high spacing from how it looks like, but it's not pretty what i've been expected at the start
01:21:595 (2,2) - what are these mapping for? u could just use 2 1/2 sliders with a huge spacing there instead
01:22:738 (2) - 01:23:595 (2) - these points are the same case as i have provided from above
01:21:453 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i know that it is an intense part where many challenger players have to pass against the jumps like that, but this is WAY TOO FORCEFUL by the look of the spacing, which is not clearly what the highest diff looks like with that forced gap
01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - why 4 notes? clearly overmapped here, since i didn't even hear any beats presence there. i'd use 2/1 sliders instead to end it well for the outro

i kinda dislike this diff from the way how you mapped this, sorry

[zel]

00:10:024 (4,5) - what are u trying to map here? i'd suggest this instead for a better rhythm choice (and the example from how i mapped) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8293496
00:36:952 (4,6) - looks like an overmap for me since the notes are absent, despite u're trying to hide it with a stream instead
00:46:453 (3) - what a weird start to use a 1/2 slider, despite that there's a vocal starting on a white tick there. would just use 2 notes instead, but having the white tick one should be a lower spacing
00:50:595 (1) - can u provide me a reason why 1/4 slider?
00:58:310 (4) - NCing this would be cool before the initial chorus downbeat there
01:00:310 (1,2) - i don't totally get it why with such a low spacing distance due to its downbeat there. i'd just make (2) on 01:00:881 (1) - instead there ya know... and here's an additional placement note change if u agree with this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8294173
01:14:595 (1) - drum sampleset
01:26:024 (1) - u sure it's parallel for u?
01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - the same as i have stated from the highest diff

[eze]

00:08:310 (1,2) - i find this blanket not rly neat
00:11:738 (1) - fix ur stack from 00:10:881 (2) -
00:26:595 (1,2,2,4,6) - what are these map for on those blue ticks? it's clearly an overmap tbh. try to listen again on 25% playback rate
00:55:381 (2) - 00:55:810 (2) - ^
00:55:810 (2) - why not just a red anchor instead rather than leaving a slider look like that? .-.
01:06:810 (3) - 01:07:238 (2,4,2,4) - again, what are these for? there aren't any notes on a blue tick for these
01:13:953 (4) - again
01:17:738 (3) - just use a reverse once, rather than having 2 reverses here, cuz the second blue tick is an absent note
01:20:024 (3) - ^
01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - the same reason as i have provided from the highest diff

[asuka]

00:01:881 (2,3) - i wonder why did you set a drum sampleset here, despite that the beat isn't there for using a hitsound .-.
00:02:453 (4) - but the tail is required here .-.
00:03:881 (2,3,1) - from the first and the second point
00:12:881 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - hm, are you actually going for an angle slider pattern? just copy paste one of the sliders, then adjust the angle from what you want. then copy paste again, do the same thing
00:26:595 (1,2,3) - you might want to review the hitsounds again by listening at the song again
00:32:453 (2,4) - blanket them?
01:07:453 (5,6) - what about the blue tick? i don't think it looks suit for the use since it's an absent note. if you think that you're following for a background music that should supports enough, then it's ok
01:24:881 (1) - i'd make it the middle center from 01:24:595 (1,2) - in 421|189 since it's just a weak vocal note that doesn't emphasize any beat there. should be emphasize well with a weak vocal note there instead XD
01:25:738 (4) - what about the red tick? why not just a note instead of 1/2 slider here? should be well emphasize enough rather than giving another note to hear on that red tick, since it ends on a white tick instead
01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - i have provided the mod about this just like the previous diffs

[light insane]

00:27:738 (1) - this doesn't look so well for not stacking on 00:27:024 (2) -
00:37:738 (4) - fix this stack
01:04:310 (1) - fix ur stack from 01:03:453 (2) -
01:30:024 (1,2) - this again just like from the previous diffs

[mentai]

00:09:453 (1,2,3,4) - for the start, 00:10:024 (3) - what's with that white tick? it's an absent note, right? u can make it into this for a change in rhythm, but up to you what u want to make http://puu.sh/weqSJ/ec977e1f0e.jpg
01:23:738 (1,2,3) - would be cool to end it with 2 notes here instead

[advanced]

00:55:167 (3,4,5,6) - isn't this too much? could be nice to set 1/1 notes everywhere and some adjustment with 1/2 sliders and stuff if i were you, like http://puu.sh/wer8h/56f25a971e.jpg to make the notes more emphasize from the violin sound there
01:22:595 (3,4,5,6) - try this http://puu.sh/wer5G/11a3212e36.jpg

[normal]

would increase a bit of ds there if i were you in order to avoid getting confused for a beginner players
and yeah, not using too much notes will be friendly for them too!
01:26:167 (1) - the spinner ends at 01:30:595 - for the right timing

the hitsounds are pretty messy tbh. if you want me to take care of them, i'll do it for you instead if you want to XD

gl

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-06-08T17:05:15+00:00

lit120 wrote:
was planning to map this on the other day LOL gg there are not enough sets of this

[general]
i kinda agreed from Rizen's mod that the diff name should be changed from Advanced to Normal, and Normal to Easy, due to the same how u map like from lower than 200 bpm though earlier the diffs were named Easy and Normal, now they're Normal and Advanced; we discussed it IRC and I agreed to change the names, i think it's fine now
[chaos]
00:01:453 (1) - booo, someone didn't set an emphasize finish hitsound ;w; this part is kinda quiet so I don't really think there should be a finish. I'll test this tho
00:10:595 (1,2,3,4) - i'd actually make this as an "actual" symmetry for a part like this as an intensity intro part, where it suits better for a challenge diff this would require me to move the whole next pattern to the right as well, but there's not enough space :< I think this is also fine, since it's not even that far away from the middle
00:17:595 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - since this is a 7* diff, if i were you, i'd actually make all notes rather than adding some 1/2 sliders before going to a calm section part, since this is the intro intensity part right here those sliders are indicating the decrease in intensity (the spacing and SV are both decreasing), and if I put a bunch of circles there it'd be kinda hard imo. also smh I missed drums on those sliderends so fixed LOL
00:19:310 (5) - would be nice if u nc this sure
00:20:024 (2) - why drum sampleset? three similar sounds huh, this is not a clap as far as I hear lol. also with the samples I use putting a clap there would result in a loud sound while the section is kinda calm
00:22:310 (2) - 00:24:595 (3) - 00:26:595 (1) - (tail) ^ ^
00:19:738 - isn't this 1x slider speed a bit too fast for a calm section part here? true, but I indicate this with spacing rather than SV. and changing SV now would be a pain in the ass tbh xdd
00:33:881 (4,1) - u didn't quite making a blanket slider a bit well here. try fix this from 00:34:453 (1) - by setting a middle anchor on 3|214 and last on 5|107 (still bad? ask someone else to help lol) did smth similar, should be better now
00:54:595 (1,2) - isn't this way too forced to make a bigger spacing while u're trying to make a low to high spacing from the start, just like 00:54:024 (1,2,1,2) - ? i'd make it the same spacing scale the same to adjust it well there gradual increase in spacing wasn't the idea, if you listen to the song you'll hear that 00:54:167 (2,2) - have weak sounds (aka no drums) and starting from 00:54:738 (2) - red ticks have drums, so starting from that tick I just increase the spacing. same applies to the last jump section
00:55:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - i can't get it why u made a huge spacing 00:56:024 (4,5) - , but not on 00:55:738 (1,2) - , since it's not as far as what i have expected for this part true, the spacing was a bit too low, fixd! also changed the next pattern a bit
01:02:738 (4,2) - this isn't quite neat for a slider blanket like this, if you ask me. u can try to adjust this one a bit tweaked this a bit
01:06:738 (1,2) - remove nc on 01:06:738 (1) - , set nc on 01:06:881 (2) - k I think I explained this somewhere already, but anyway. starting from 01:06:738 - the song follows the 1-2-3-1-2-1-2 pattern in the background, and 01:06:595 - is not connected neither to the previous one nor the next one, thus it is a single NC. I'll think about your NC pattern, probs gather more opinions on it
01:06:310 (1,2) - this is waaaay to forceful for the sake of a diff. the same goes to 01:07:167 (1,2,1,2) - , which is pretty a huge diff spike right there. tbh i'm not quite a fan of that kind of spacing, and i'd totally suggest you not to make that kind of huge spacing, even that i know the instrument's like from low to high pitch right there from the synth sound the second ones are fine imo, this is supposed to be the peak of the kiai. as for the first one - yes, I'm aware that this is controversial af since 01:06:453 (2) - has almost no sound. but I think that such spacing emphasizes that 'tro' syllable in the vocal, which is like the strongest syllable in the whole section. I will change this if needed, but I'd prefer to keep it like this rn
01:14:738 (1) - remove nc k this one was suggested by many people already
01:16:024 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - from the start, i was expecting about having a spacing from the low synth sound to high synth sound, as a low to high spacing from how it looks like, but it's not pretty what i've been expected at the start got the idea, changed
01:21:595 (2,2) - what are these mapping for? u could just use 2 1/2 sliders with a huge spacing there instead 00:54:167 (2,2) - similar to those. I think that doing such jumps after sliders would be kinda hard so I kinda 'warm-up' the players for the jumps
01:22:738 (2) - 01:23:595 (2) - these points are the same case as i have provided from above uh, refer to 00:54:595, this has the same patterning in the music
01:21:453 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i know that it is an intense part where many challenger players have to pass against the jumps like that, but this is WAY TOO FORCEFUL by the look of the spacing, which is not clearly what the highest diff looks like with that forced gap subjective tbh, those jumps are arranged in a quite easy pattern (literally back-and-forths), spacing is done according to the rest of difficulty spikes. imo that's fine, this section is the climax of the song and deserves to have a hard jump section
01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - why 4 notes? clearly overmapped here, since i didn't even hear any beats presence there. i'd use 2/1 sliders instead to end it well for the outro ehh how? this one clearly has 4 beats, literally all difs have those mapped. maybe you have the wrong mp3 smh? since I know that there are other mp3s that only have 3 beats at the end, etc
i kinda dislike this diff from the way how you mapped this, sorry

[light insane]
00:27:738 (1) - this doesn't look so well for not stacking on 00:27:024 (2) - RIP stacks, fixd
00:37:738 (4) - fix this stack ^
01:04:310 (1) - fix ur stack from 01:03:453 (2) - ^
01:30:024 (1,2) - this again just like from the previous diffs same explanation
[advanced]
00:55:167 (3,4,5,6) - isn't this too much? could be nice to set 1/1 notes everywhere and some adjustment with 1/2 sliders and stuff if i were you, like http://puu.sh/wer8h/56f25a971e.jpg to make the notes more emphasize from the violin sound there kinda similar reasoning to the same timestamp on highest diff, sliders starting from (3) are covering drums on red ticks as well. I think it's fine since this is an intense section
01:22:595 (3,4,5,6) - try this http://puu.sh/wer5G/11a3212e36.jpg same, that'd simplify the rhythm too much
[normal]
would increase a bit of ds there if i were you in order to avoid getting confused for a beginner players x1.0 is fine imo
and yeah, not using too much notes will be friendly for them too! 4 1/1 notes in a row that only happen twice in the map shouldn't be that hard huh
01:26:167 (1) - the spinner ends at 01:30:595 - for the right timing uh that white tick has an almost inaudible sound while the red tick before has a clap. so I'll keep it
the hitsounds are pretty messy tbh. if you want me to take care of them, i'll do it for you instead if you want to XD I'm open for any ideas! rn hitsounds just follow the music, but since I map to vocals mainly some drums aren't mapped and I've been told that it sounds kinda strange. so if you have better ideas about how to hs those please do tell :>

gl

wew, that was long
thanks!

Mentai

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Mentai 2017-06-08T17:38:41+00:00

@winter story: i'll gauge the difficulty of the singletaps later

@lit120: i want to keep the end consistent with the pattern i do at the beginning, not a bad thought though

thanks guys

might not be a bad idea to look for BN's thoughts on this set

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Jabba

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Jabba 2017-06-08T18:25:16+00:00

find me some bns ;_; I posted in pishi's queue tho, waiting for any signs lol

7ambda

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7ambda 2017-06-08T18:34:56+00:00

01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - 01:21:453 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - You either lack creativity to express the kiais, or you're overestimating their intensities.

Jabba

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Jabba 2017-06-08T18:47:17+00:00

F1r3tar wrote:
01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - 01:21:453 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - You either lack creativity to express the kiais, or you're overestimating their intensities.

I just don't want them to look random, thus it's patternized (esp the second one, which clearly has that 1-2-1-2 pattern in the music, the jumps reflect it as well)
as for the first section, the placement there is a bit more free, but it still follows the patterns in music
and I wonder why you didn't mention this 00:54:024 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - as well lmao

ikaNyai

75 posts

Joined September 2015

ikaNyai 2017-06-09T20:40:41+00:00

just a small little mod ;w;
i'm not really understand at modding so i go by how I feel is wired when playing ;w; sorry!!
also please dont take it seriously ! just some my self opinion ><

click me ><

[chaos]
00:27:881 (2) - 378 218
00:40:024 (2) - mayebe is better in smth like this
00:42:595 (1) - put on 00:41:310 (2) -
00:44:024 (3) - end more toward start of 00:44:310 (4) -
00:45:881 (2) - a little bit right like 380 244
00:46:167 (3) - 196 38 ( 00:46:310 (4) - 255 305)
00:57:024 (5) - ctrl +g
01:30:024 (1) - around 170 350 (a bit left)
00:29:167 (2) - around ? 231 147
00:32:167 (1) - maybe put on 00:31:595 (4) - ?
01:14:881 (3) - 325 313?
01:18:310 (6) - ctrl +G ? (if you change this then also with 01:19:453 (2) - )

that all what i can give (run)
good luck ></ its actually relly funmap and give pp D:

Jabba

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Jabba 2017-06-09T20:57:35+00:00

ikaNyai wrote:
just a small little mod ;w;
i'm not really understand at modding so i go by how I feel is wired when playing ;w; sorry!!
also please dont take it seriously ! just some my self opinion ><

click me ><
[chaos]
00:27:881 (2) - 378 218 did smth similar to blanket it with (3)
00:40:024 (2) - mayebe is better in smth like this those are the same as 00:39:024 (2) -
00:42:595 (1) - put on 00:41:310 (2) - it's rather snapped to the anchor
00:44:024 (3) - end more toward start of 00:44:310 (4) - ye
00:45:881 (2) - a little bit right like 380 244 woah this overlaps with 00:45:024 (2) - apparently, fixed
00:46:167 (3) - 196 38 ( 00:46:310 (4) - 255 305) this one is supposed to have lower DS
00:57:024 (5) - ctrl +g intended, creates some kind of a up-down-up-down flow
01:30:024 (1) - around 170 350 (a bit left) those should be fine as I made them symmetrical
00:29:167 (2) - around ? 231 147 blanketed by 00:29:453 (4) -
00:32:167 (1) - maybe put on 00:31:595 (4) - ? (1) blankets (4)'s end
01:14:881 (3) - 325 313? the angle would be too sharp then; I rather changed it to be more comfortable
01:18:310 (6) - ctrl +G ? (if you change this then also with 01:19:453 (2) - ) this sound is similar to 01:18:024 (5) - and thus has the same direction, unlike 01:18:595 (7) -

that all what i can give (run)
good luck ></

thanks!

Jennifer

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Joined July 2015

Jennifer 2017-06-10T01:45:39+00:00

sorry for short mod, there wasnt much i found
[advanced]
01:07:024 (2) - can you change this into a curved slider? (ctrl+c 01:05:881 (2) - ) it looks weird D:

[hard]
00:03:738 - why is this being ignored? should have a note
00:43:595 (4) - personal preference, change s- slider into something like 00:40:453 (2) - or 00:45:024 (2) - ,the two sound suggest more fierce so i think something with red joint would be nicer

[chaos]
00:27:024 (2) - ctrl g

Jabba

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Jabba 2017-06-10T01:57:57+00:00

Jennglebells wrote:
sorry for short mod, there wasnt much i found
[advanced]
01:07:024 (2) - can you change this into a curved slider? (ctrl+c 01:05:881 (2) - ) it looks weird D: didn't exactly copy it but added a slight curve

[chaos]
00:27:024 (2) - ctrl g intended, the flow gets a bit more harsh there to indicate the transition to the next section

thanks!
also @Mentai: 01:06:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm not sure that hitsounding all of those with claps is a good idea LOL

Mentai

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Mentai 2017-06-10T19:11:57+00:00

@jennglebells prefer to map vocals here ; (

thx

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Affirmation 2017-06-11T10:52:24+00:00

Q

[Chaos]
00:14:810 - looks overmapping?
01:06:738 (1,2) - swap NC

GL

Jabba

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Joined February 2015

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Jabba 2017-06-11T10:56:47+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
Q

[Chaos]
00:14:810 - looks overmapping? there's that wubby sound in the background
01:06:738 (1,2) - swap NC uhhhh, fixed

GL

thanks!

-LynX-

131 posts

Joined December 2013

-LynX- 2017-06-12T19:06:58+00:00

NM from queue, nice song

Normal

Nothing much to say, nice map

Advanced

00:16:310 (1) - i think this shouldn't be NC-ed, following previous patterns
00:31:167 (1) - minor, but maybe rotate this 90 degrees clockwise? i think it will look better
00:38:595 (2,3) - also very minor, but these 2 sliders represent different sounds but play similarly, maybe make 2->3 a 90 degree angle or something, like this 00:43:167 (2,3) - , or maybe make the sliders' shapes different
01:02:738 (5,1,2) - similarly, make 1 a different shape or make 5->1->2 angled instead of a straight line, since 1 is a different sound
Another nice map

Mentai's Hard

Isn't AR8.5 a bit too high for a 3.2* hard diff? 8 would fit better i think
00:03:738 - it's kinda weird that this sound is skipped, especially when the spacing from 4->1 in 00:03:167 (4,1,2) - and the spacing from 1->2 looks similar, but 4->1 is 1.5/1 and 1->2 is 1/1. if you want to skip the sound i suggest increase the spacing for 4->1
Nothing much to say too, clean map

Light Insane

00:19:738 (1) - from this point onwards the music calms down quite a bit, maybe lower sv? i know it's a hassle since you have lots of blankets and everything but yeah
Nice m...

Asuka_-'s Insane

00:08:738 (3,4,5,6) - maybe NC 3 and 5?
00:28:595 (4) - minor visual suggestion, perhaps use some red anchors for this slider for the distinct sound
00:37:453 (4) - perhaps NC this, since the spacing from 2->3 and 3->4 is similar but 3->4 is 1/1
01:12:881 (3,4,5,1) - maybe this will flow better? https://puu.sh/wiar4/48b97677d1.png

eze's Extra

00:02:595 (1) - maybe red anchor for this like before
00:20:310 (4) - don't think an extended slider is necessary here, it's just normal vocals
00:26:595 (1,2) - maybe something like this will be smoother to play? https://puu.sh/wibj7/05be53b908.png
00:34:595 (1) - i think if you move this downwards a little the flow will be better
00:47:738 (3,5) - i think if you 5 blanket 3 flow will be improved + sharper movement from 5->1
fun to play

that's all from me, hope you rank this soon

here's a star xd

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