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A1caida
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Jabba

-Alcaida wrote:

В исполнителе Itou должно быть
https://www.google.ru/search?num=40&newwindow=1&q=Itou+Kanako&spell=1&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwia3_ykyqvTAhUF3iwKHXGsBi4QBQgiKAA&biw=1280&bih=913
я базировался на официальной обложке сингла http://www.achanime.net/wp-content/uplo ... llable.jpg
плюс в видео 5pb тоже используется Ito https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0JIJzmBip-o
я энивэй еще буду уточнять мету (в основном из-за названия анимы) у японцев, но спасибо! без кд, надеюсь, не обидишься с:
Rotmas
Крч я как про модер наляпую сюда все что мне непонравилось а дальше сам думай насколько это важные замечания)

chaos
00:19:453 (6) - яб тут прыгающий слайдер поставил с максимальной скоростью и велосити 5%
00:19:738 (1) - тут ты выделяешь 2 четких бита слайдером, не вижу на то причин т.к. нету вокал, фигач джамп.
00:20:024 (2,3,4) - А тут наоборот есть вокал, а у тебя 2 ноты
00:20:024 (2,3) - яб тут поставил слайдер
00:20:310 (4) - это закончил на красном тике на белом ноту и далее идёт вокал можно так и оставить всеж выделять такой бит началом слайдера более мение, но заканчивать слайдер на таком сильном бите такое себе
00:35:738 (1) - вот ещё аналогично, ты с этих битов обычно начинаешь, а этот слайдер на таком сильном бите заканчивается
Сократи слайдер до красного тика и начни с белого сильного бита новую комбу
00:52:310 (3) - нью комбо
00:53:453 (3) - ^
я тут послушал по 50% этот вот момент 00:55:881 (7,8,9) - думал там нет трипла т.к. его тупо не слышно, а нет он есть, а вот тут вот 00:55:595 (4,5,6) - его нету, так что овермап неиначе 00:55:667 (5) - от этого я бы избавился, а тем трем нотам понизил бы звук хитсаунда, ото чот их не слышно совсем
00:47:595 (3,4) - тут то же 2 лишние ноты, там канешн есть чот жужащее на фоне, раз уж овермапаешь тогда уж сделай стрим от этой ноты 00:47:453 (2) - до этой 00:47:738 (5) - на полный хронометраж сего жужания.
Окей не буду так докапываться до всех триплов которые я не понимаю откуда там взялись. (видать я ракал)
00:48:881 - новая мода на пропуск белых тиков) Хоть бы маленький слайдер поставил до синего тика, да и под вокал подошло бы, отож ваще голяк.
00:49:738 (3,4,5,6) - вот тож момент, тут ка бы стримчик, а не трипл... Хотя один хрен овермапом попахивает, ну да ладно, все теперь точно все триплы скипаю)
00:58:310 (1) - очень спорный момент, яб на красном тике закончил, да и смотрится как то, я канешн понимаю что эт такой момент который ты решил выделить по особому но у тебя это странно вышло. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7915259 вот так вроде прикольней смотрится
скорость слайдера 1.5
Extreme
Такс тут кстати нету таких моментов как в прошлой просмотренной дифе, так что вообще без претензий.
Она неплохо замапанна, так что просто дам пару советов.
01:11:738 (4,5,6,7) - вот как бэ паттерн, и между этими битами 01:11:738 (4,5) - большой спесинг, а между этими 01:11:880 (5,6) - нет, хотя сильный бит который стоило бы выделить более высоким спесингом именно этот 01:12:023 (6) - а в данном патерне почему то эта нота выделяется 01:11:880 (5) -
И определённо я думаю что с этой ноты 01:12:023 (6) - должна идти новая комба.
Ну вот ещё моментик 01:14:167 (4,5) - тут один спесинг в пол экрана 01:14:595 (1,2) - тут казалось бы на тот же самый момент в фул срин джамп.
А потом вот эти 2 сильных бита 01:14:881 (3,4) - опять всего в пол экрана хотя лучше бы именно этот джамп сделать в фул срин.
Ну тут все, в остальном очень приятная дифа.

Ой чот чую нехватит меня на ещё 2 дифы. Я пробежался быренько по Екстра дифе она мне больше всего понравилась, не знаю что сказать. Инсейн и нормал даж смотреть не буду.
Если мод покажется тебе бесполезным можешь оставить меня без кудосу.
Успехов.
Topic Starter
Jabba

Rotmas wrote:

Крч я как про модер наляпую сюда все что мне непонравилось а дальше сам думай насколько это важные замечания)

chaos
00:19:453 (6) - яб тут прыгающий слайдер поставил с максимальной скоростью и велосити 5% слайдербрейков будет куча, я единственное что мб сделаю с этим слайдером это закручу его посильнее, т.к. там на бэке саунд подходящий
00:19:738 (1) - тут ты выделяешь 2 четких бита слайдером, не вижу на то причин т.к. нету вокал, фигач джамп. вся секция под вокалы замапана, поэтому тут слайдер оправдан, аналогично 00:22:024 (1) - . я зато заметил, что 00:26:310 (4) - немного выбивается из этого, заменил слайдером
00:20:024 (2,3,4) - А тут наоборот есть вокал, а у тебя 2 ноты под вокал мапается
00:20:024 (2,3) - яб тут поставил слайдер ^
00:20:310 (4) - это закончил на красном тике на белом ноту и далее идёт вокал можно так и оставить всеж выделять такой бит началом слайдера более мение, но заканчивать слайдер на таком сильном бите такое себе ^
00:35:738 (1) - вот ещё аналогично, ты с этих битов обычно начинаешь, а этот слайдер на таком сильном бите заканчивается
Сократи слайдер до красного тика и начни с белого сильного бита новую комбу ^ - хотя эта идея неплоха, но если я так сделаю, оно будет выбиваться из всего куплета, потому что там-то такие затяжные вокалы везде замапаны как 1/1, а здесь так бац и 1/2 поехали, а т.к. я ремапить куплет не хочу (ибо там классно под вокал все), то и эти оставлю
00:52:310 (3) - нью комбо понимаю, к чему клонишь, но я здесь не начинаю еще джампопаттерн как чуть позже, но зато здесь был косяк с хитсаундами - пофиксил
00:53:453 (3) - ^ ^
я тут послушал по 50% этот вот момент 00:55:881 (7,8,9) - думал там нет трипла т.к. его тупо не слышно, а нет он есть, а вот тут вот 00:55:595 (4,5,6) - его нету, так что овермап неиначе 00:55:667 (5) - от этого я бы избавился, а тем трем нотам понизил бы звук хитсаунда, ото чот их не слышно совсем про триплу уже не первый раз говорят, поменял ее; насчет хсов - там и так должно нормально читаться, как по мне
00:47:595 (3,4) - тут то же 2 лишние ноты, там канешн есть чот жужащее на фоне, раз уж овермапаешь тогда уж сделай стрим от этой ноты 00:47:453 (2) - до этой 00:47:738 (5) - на полный хронометраж сего жужания. я чет упорно там не слышу на 00:47:524 - , да, в этих триплах вторая нота довольно слабая, но а) она там есть и б) они хорошо подходят под триплы с более выраженной второй нотой 00:48:738 (3,4,5) - . да и вообще, в 2к17 удивляться относительно рандомным триплам лол
Окей не буду так докапываться до всех триплов которые я не понимаю откуда там взялись. (видать я ракал)
00:48:881 - новая мода на пропуск белых тиков) Хоть бы маленький слайдер поставил до синего тика, да и под вокал подошло бы, отож ваще голяк. а мне кстати нравится идея с кикслайдерами, я предыдущие триплы на них изменил (как раз там слабую вторую ноту пофиксить), а эти оставил + поменял паттерны немного в целом
00:49:738 (3,4,5,6) - вот тож момент, тут ка бы стримчик, а не трипл... Хотя один хрен овермапом попахивает, ну да ладно, все теперь точно все триплы скипаю) ^
00:58:310 (1) - очень спорный момент, яб на красном тике закончил, да и смотрится как то, я канешн понимаю что эт такой момент который ты решил выделить по особому но у тебя это странно вышло. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7915259 вот так вроде прикольней смотрится
скорость слайдера 1.5 выглядит неплохо, но скорость 1.5 для слайдера, на котором по сути нет никакой музыки и только вокал, будет немного оверкилл ящитаю. + там довольно затяжной вокал, поэтому 3/4

Ой чот чую нехватит меня на ещё 2 дифы. Я пробежался быренько по Екстра дифе она мне больше всего понравилась, не знаю что сказать. Инсейн и нормал даж смотреть не буду.
Если мод покажется тебе бесполезным можешь оставить меня без кудосу.
Успехов.
модить экстрим на русском было не лучшей идеей ибо там гдшер не русский лол
спасибо!

translation for Zel:
01:11:738 (4,5,6,7) - you have large spacing between 01:11:738 (4,5) - and small spacing between 01:11:880 (5,6) - , but (6) is stronger than (5)
01:12:023 (6) - NC
01:14:167 (4,5) - , 01:14:595 (1,2) - similar sounds in the background but the second jump is much bigger; after that there are two strong beats 01:14:881 (3,4) - which deserve a fullscreen jump more
nice diff
polka


[General:]
  • Girl's gotta unplug her nose when she sings.
    Whoa hitsounds are loud on your diffs. I would copy what the first Insane did. Sounds nicer.
[Normal:]
  • 00:17:453 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern's kinda cool but it creates numerous issues. 00:18:024 (2) - This overlap is a little unsightly and 00:18:881 (4) - goes right into the hp bar.
    00:55:167 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I think replacing all of these with a spinner would make the map more fun.
    01:24:595 (3,1) - Give (1) its own space because this is kinda ugly.
[First Insane:]
  • AR is way too high for insane.
    01:24:881 (1,2,3,4) - I would remove hs. THere's nothing that calls for them and it would help exaggerate how quiet the song gets here.
[Afteword:]

  • I can't mod (or play) any higher in sr. Good luck with thiiis.
Topic Starter
Jabba

PolkaMocha wrote:



[General:]
  • Girl's gotta unplug her nose when she sings.
    Whoa hitsounds are loud on your diffs. I would copy what the first Insane did. Sounds nicer. sheesh lowered the volume
[Normal:]
  • 00:17:453 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern's kinda cool but it creates numerous issues. 00:18:024 (2) - This overlap is a little unsightly and 00:18:881 (4) - goes right into the hp bar. true, fixed both
    00:55:167 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I think replacing all of these with a spinner would make the map more fun. idk this section is pretty much strong and I don't really want to put a spinner here which takes all emphasis away
    01:24:595 (3,1) - Give (1) its own space because this is kinda ugly. swapped (2) and (3) instead so that (2) would completely disappear before (1) even starts appearing. also it flows even better I think
thanks!
Zel

MadHypnofrog wrote:

Rotmas wrote:

Крч я как про модер наляпую сюда все что мне непонравилось а дальше сам думай насколько это важные замечания)

chaos
00:19:453 (6) - яб тут прыгающий слайдер поставил с максимальной скоростью и велосити 5% слайдербрейков будет куча, я единственное что мб сделаю с этим слайдером это закручу его посильнее, т.к. там на бэке саунд подходящий
00:19:738 (1) - тут ты выделяешь 2 четких бита слайдером, не вижу на то причин т.к. нету вокал, фигач джамп. вся секция под вокалы замапана, поэтому тут слайдер оправдан, аналогично 00:22:024 (1) - . я зато заметил, что 00:26:310 (4) - немного выбивается из этого, заменил слайдером
00:20:024 (2,3,4) - А тут наоборот есть вокал, а у тебя 2 ноты под вокал мапается
00:20:024 (2,3) - яб тут поставил слайдер ^
00:20:310 (4) - это закончил на красном тике на белом ноту и далее идёт вокал можно так и оставить всеж выделять такой бит началом слайдера более мение, но заканчивать слайдер на таком сильном бите такое себе ^
00:35:738 (1) - вот ещё аналогично, ты с этих битов обычно начинаешь, а этот слайдер на таком сильном бите заканчивается
Сократи слайдер до красного тика и начни с белого сильного бита новую комбу ^ - хотя эта идея неплоха, но если я так сделаю, оно будет выбиваться из всего куплета, потому что там-то такие затяжные вокалы везде замапаны как 1/1, а здесь так бац и 1/2 поехали, а т.к. я ремапить куплет не хочу (ибо там классно под вокал все), то и эти оставлю
00:52:310 (3) - нью комбо понимаю, к чему клонишь, но я здесь не начинаю еще джампопаттерн как чуть позже, но зато здесь был косяк с хитсаундами - пофиксил
00:53:453 (3) - ^ ^
я тут послушал по 50% этот вот момент 00:55:881 (7,8,9) - думал там нет трипла т.к. его тупо не слышно, а нет он есть, а вот тут вот 00:55:595 (4,5,6) - его нету, так что овермап неиначе 00:55:667 (5) - от этого я бы избавился, а тем трем нотам понизил бы звук хитсаунда, ото чот их не слышно совсем про триплу уже не первый раз говорят, поменял ее; насчет хсов - там и так должно нормально читаться, как по мне
00:47:595 (3,4) - тут то же 2 лишние ноты, там канешн есть чот жужащее на фоне, раз уж овермапаешь тогда уж сделай стрим от этой ноты 00:47:453 (2) - до этой 00:47:738 (5) - на полный хронометраж сего жужания. я чет упорно там не слышу на 00:47:524 - , да, в этих триплах вторая нота довольно слабая, но а) она там есть и б) они хорошо подходят под триплы с более выраженной второй нотой 00:48:738 (3,4,5) - . да и вообще, в 2к17 удивляться относительно рандомным триплам лол
Окей не буду так докапываться до всех триплов которые я не понимаю откуда там взялись. (видать я ракал)
00:48:881 - новая мода на пропуск белых тиков) Хоть бы маленький слайдер поставил до синего тика, да и под вокал подошло бы, отож ваще голяк. а мне кстати нравится идея с кикслайдерами, я предыдущие триплы на них изменил (как раз там слабую вторую ноту пофиксить), а эти оставил + поменял паттерны немного в целом
00:49:738 (3,4,5,6) - вот тож момент, тут ка бы стримчик, а не трипл... Хотя один хрен овермапом попахивает, ну да ладно, все теперь точно все триплы скипаю) ^
00:58:310 (1) - очень спорный момент, яб на красном тике закончил, да и смотрится как то, я канешн понимаю что эт такой момент который ты решил выделить по особому но у тебя это странно вышло. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7915259 вот так вроде прикольней смотрится
скорость слайдера 1.5 выглядит неплохо, но скорость 1.5 для слайдера, на котором по сути нет никакой музыки и только вокал, будет немного оверкилл ящитаю. + там довольно затяжной вокал, поэтому 3/4

Ой чот чую нехватит меня на ещё 2 дифы. Я пробежался быренько по Екстра дифе она мне больше всего понравилась, не знаю что сказать. Инсейн и нормал даж смотреть не буду.
Если мод покажется тебе бесполезным можешь оставить меня без кудосу.
Успехов.
модить экстрим на русском было не лучшей идеей ибо там гдшер не русский лол
спасибо!

translation for Zel:
01:11:738 (4,5,6,7) - you have large spacing between 01:11:738 (4,5) - and small spacing between 01:11:880 (5,6) - , but (6) is stronger than (5) youre right, i was trying to emphasize with backwards rotation but the flow is still normal so not awkward enough, remapped pattern
01:12:023 (6) - NC disagree, no reason to and it would break the nc structure
01:14:167 (4,5) - , 01:14:595 (1,2) - similar sounds in the background but the second jump is much bigger; after that there are two strong beats 01:14:881 (3,4) - which deserve a fullscreen jump more youre right, ctrl+g on large pattern fixes it
nice diff thank you for mod! <3
Zel
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Random mod passing by.
  • Eze's Extra
00:08:310 (1,2,3) - Try to stay consistent with how the slider looks here. Same tone from vocalist.
01:04:167 (3,1) - have same spacing as 01:03:881 (1,2) - since it's same bass sound. Also feels different when playing.

  • Zel's Extreme
00:19:310 (1,2) - Since you mapped this on a distinct sound that differs from a lot of sounds throughout the song I would personally curve the sliders instead of tilting them.
00:19:453 (2) - set volume to 5% ?
00:29:453 (4,1) - idk if you mapped vocal here, but having 2 complete looking sliders on same kind of tone the vocalist hits is weird. Use same style of slider here?
01:11:738 (4,5,6,7,1,2) - You have put emphasis on white ticks with higher spacing, but 01:12:166 (7,1) - contradicts that with sudden lower spacing by a lot.

Good luck ranking this btw! <3
Zallies
m4m

hey don't mind my modding skills, im really bad at it :(
ill do my best!

[general]
  1. Remove Widescreen Support, it only uses when you have a Storyboard
[Chaos]
  1. 00:02:881 (3,4,5) - since i tried 3 to turn 20 degree, 4 and 3 arent the same shape
    also I dislike this pattern, cuz the vocal change on 4
  2. 00:04:738 (1) - for my perspective, 00:04:881 - this part is stronger than you make the 1/2 on red tick
  3. 00:05:310 (3) - same as here, it make the music go awkward
  4. 00:07:167 - beat is really important than the vocal on this heavy drop incoming
  5. 00:07:453 (2,3,4) - not the same shape ehh
  6. 00:08:738 (2) - there so much space on the right side?
  7. 00:26:167 (3,4) - too awkward for me
  8. 00:26:595 (1,2) - i dont know if you're wanna blanket 1, or you just wanna do this pattern?
  9. 00:27:738 (1,2) - low ds. and the music start intense beat and you did a low ds on this :(
  10. 00:32:595 (2,3,4) - did you really shaped all?
  11. 00:33:595 (2,4) - why not try blanketing 2? looks like 4 is out of place
  12. 00:35:738 (1) - my suggestion: why not start 1 on the upper right pattern?
  13. 00:54:595 (1,2) - and these two starting a big jump, and not this 00:55:024 (2) - also this is not arrange on 00:54:453 (2) - 2 because 00:54:167 (2,2) - these two are looking good
  14. 00:56:024 (4,5) - overplaced xd
  15. 00:57:738 - my suggestion: make this 1/1? cuz the music fade its kinda cool though to add
  16. 00:59:453 (5,3,4,5) - looks good, but i not a fan doing this xd
  17. i dont understand at this point xddddddddd, 01:01:881 (1,2) - are super close, and three started to make a BIGGG DS. please fix the patterns indeed
  18. 01:02:881 - i miss the clap hitsounds, its important
  19. 01:04:595 (2,3,4) - well 4 start curvy <3
  20. 01:06:310 (1,2) - too much </3 rather than 01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this was so cool patternsss
  21. 01:11:595 (3,4) - ^
  22. 01:12:024 - i really love putting clap on this
  23. 01:14:595 (1,1) - remove nc
  24. 01:14:881 (2) - perfect v it?
  25. 01:22:024 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - OVERMAPPED
my personal look, i dont like the mapping much xd smh its like an overmapped.

[Zel's Extreme]
  1. 00:05:453 - i can't agree to ignore the beat hitsound
  2. 00:09:167 (3,1) - stack with them??
  3. 00:17:310 (6) - im thinking that this part should be clickable, and i dont think 1/2 red tick is my choice on making white tick on beat cuz it makes awkward
  4. 00:50:310 (5,6,1,2) - this is also a square jump, r u really using this jump instead of star etc?
  5. 01:04:167 (1,2,3) - not fan patterns xd
  6. 01:07:453 (3,1) - its kinda little bit over ds. unlike 00:58:310 (1,1) - this is good af
  7. 01:13:310 (1,2,3) - wat it made me confuse
  8. 01:14:453 (6,1) - overmap tbh
  9. 01:16:595 (5) - why not copy 3? its kinda cool imo
  10. 01:26:024 (1) - you have to do better than dat xd try make it good
[eze's Extra]
  1. 00:17:453 (1,2,3,1,2) - you did it like falling pattern, why not doing the same with 00:18:881 (1,2) - ?
  2. 00:58:881 - missing?
  3. 01:04:310 (1,2) - lets try blanketing 1?
smh its good

[Asuka_-'s Insane]
  1. are you sure putting ur gd name "_-'s"?
  2. 00:02:595 - important beat, why did you ingnore?
  3. 00:14:024 (1,2,3,4) - this was good pattern. 00:12:881 (1,2) - i really dont understand this pattern?
  4. 00:17:453 - just add a circle, its needs the beat hitsound
  5. 01:09:167 (3,4) - ... wanna try back and forth?
i actually like the 00:47:167 - all of this patterns, its really clean and organize =w=
good work

normal and mentai is all good there's nothing on that diff xd

GOOD LUCK HAVE FUN
P90 RUSH B
Topic Starter
Jabba

Zallies wrote:

m4m

hey don't mind my modding skills, im really bad at it :(
ill do my best!

[general]
  1. Remove Widescreen Support, it only uses when you have a Storyboard #blamementai2k17
[Chaos]
  1. 00:02:881 (3,4,5) - since i tried 3 to turn 20 degree, 4 and 3 arent the same shape
    also I dislike this pattern, cuz the vocal change on 4 they weren't even supposed to be the same LOL but anyway the point about (4) being different is legit so I changed the pattern slightly
  2. 00:04:738 (1) - for my perspective, 00:04:881 - this part is stronger than you make the 1/2 on red tick I know but I focus on the vocals, so those are emphasizing the vocal lines instead
  3. 00:05:310 (3) - same as here, it make the music go awkward ^ and also I swapped 2 and 3 according to the point above, I liked the idea
  4. 00:07:167 - beat is really important than the vocal on this heavy drop incoming ^^
  5. 00:07:453 (2,3,4) - not the same shape ehh fixd LOL
  6. 00:08:738 (2) - there so much space on the right side? I don't really think that's a big problem since the section starting on 00:03:738 - utilized the whole right side. also I like this pattern :>
  7. 00:26:167 (3,4) - too awkward for me I'm aware that flow is a bit weird there, but I tried to do the similar thing on the second half of the verse - the whole verse has a nice circular flow, then on the last vocal lines it starts to become more awkward, kind of like a buildup. I'll change this if I come with a better way of positioning it!
  8. 00:26:595 (1,2) - i dont know if you're wanna blanket 1, or you just wanna do this pattern? wait weren't they supposed to blanket each other LOL fixed
  9. 00:27:738 (1,2) - low ds. and the music start intense beat and you did a low ds on this :( fixd
  10. 00:32:595 (2,3,4) - did you really shaped all? k I get it
  11. 00:33:595 (2,4) - why not try blanketing 2? looks like 4 is out of place yes
  12. 00:35:738 (1) - my suggestion: why not start 1 on the upper right pattern? eh I think that (5) - (1) would be kinda forced
  13. 00:54:595 (1,2) - and these two starting a big jump, and not this 00:55:024 (2) - also this is not arrange on 00:54:453 (2) - 2 because 00:54:167 (2,2) - these two are looking good k so 00:54:167 - has a weak sound as well as 00:54:453 - , the beat gets stronger at 00:54:738 - so the DS here is larger as well. as for the second one I chose parallel jumps over stacking those two notes like I did before, so I'll leave it like that for now
  14. 00:56:024 (4,5) - overplaced xd uh wut? if you meant making 4-5 and 2-3 parallel I did it, if not - then idk, that was the only thing I noticed
  15. 00:57:738 - my suggestion: make this 1/1? cuz the music fade its kinda cool though to add sure
  16. 00:59:453 (5,3,4,5) - looks good, but i not a fan doing this xd changed this a bit, like in the beginning
  17. i dont understand at this point xddddddddd, 01:01:881 (1,2) - are super close, and three started to make a BIGGG DS. please fix the patterns indeed yes I swapped 2 and 3 there as well
  18. 01:02:881 - i miss the clap hitsounds, its important emphasizes the held vocal
  19. 01:04:595 (2,3,4) - well 4 start curvy <3 fixed lmao I didn't even bother making them the same
  20. 01:06:310 (1,2) - too much </3 rather than 01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this was so cool patternsss eh why? this is just a big jump that emphasizes the 'tro' syllable in 'uncontrollable', and I made it parallel to 01:05:595 (2,3) - cause it flows well and looks nice imo
  21. 01:11:595 (3,4) - ^ ^
  22. 01:12:024 - i really love putting clap on this ^^
  23. 01:14:595 (1,1) - remove nc the actual clap-drum-drum pattern starts at 01:14:738 - and not on the downbeat, hence I ncd it
  24. 01:14:881 (2) - perfect v it? not really sure about this one, 01:15:024 - has a weaker vocal than 01:14:881 - so I don't really want to make them the same; gotta think about it
  25. 01:22:024 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - OVERMAPPED nope. this is the most intense section of the whole song
my personal look, i dont like the mapping much xd smh its like an overmapped.

normal and mentai is all good there's nothing on that diff xd nice

GOOD LUCK HAVE FUN
P90 RUSH B
wowsies I had to rethink lots of patterns, thanks!
Asuka_-
im not good at english.

Zel

Zel wrote:

i would change ar to 9.1 or 9 for better spread +dt change to 9.2
00:10:167 (5) - a better angle might be like this http://i.imgur.com/sD6OSp0.png little change
00:20:024 (2,3) - the spacing here is pretty large in comparison to the rest of the section its fine
00:36:881 (1,2,3) - i would have these spaced more since its more intense then the part previous, but i like what you did so up to you lol nice~
00:37:453 (4,5,2) - blanket is off k
00:42:024 (1,2) - could be blanketed kind of like http://i.imgur.com/glvv2AW.png kk
01:04:881 (4,5,6) - center 4 for a better aes k
01:07:453 (5,6) - might work better as a stream keep
01:12:881 (3,5,1) - center 3 between 1 and 5 ok

gottagof4ast

gottagof4ast wrote:

00:02:453 (4) - Just a suggestion but maybe this can be a 1/2 slider instead of a circle nice

00:05:310 (3) - The sound on this sliderend should be mapped as it is a very loud beat i'd like follow vocal

00:06:595 (3) - Would also map this sliderend, the way it's mapped right now doesn't fit ^ its fine

00:08:453 (2,4,6) - There is no sound on these, maybe map 00:08:310 (1,3,5) - as sliders so there is no weird gap its fine

00:10:595 (1) - The sliders starting here are a bit samey to play as there are alot of them so put down some circles little canged

00:41:167 (1) - remove NC keep for now

00:42:595 (1) - ^, these aren't really needed

00:45:738 (1) - ^

01:21:453 (1,2) - This feels mapped way too slow

Zallies

Zallies wrote:

[Asuka_-'s Insane]
  1. are you sure putting ur gd name "_-'s"? yesxD
  2. 00:02:595 - important beat, why did you ingnore? fixed~
  3. 00:14:024 (1,2,3,4) - this was good pattern. 00:12:881 (1,2) - i really dont understand this pattern? its fine
  4. 00:17:453 - just add a circle, its needs the beat hitsound no
  5. 01:09:167 (3,4) - ... wanna try back and forth? its fine..?


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275,226,48595,2,0,P|305:247|337:274,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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388,36,49310,6,0,P|356:29|302:25,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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247,133,49738,2,0,P|205:132|158:120,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Icekalt
Just passing by form #modrequest~ (amatuer modder inc: RUN :p)

Chaos
- 00:04:738 (1,4) - maybe put these 2 a tiny bit higher so you can blanket better with 00:04:453 (4) -
- stack 00:09:453 (1) - with 00:08:738 (2) - (sliderend)
- stack 00:36:167 (2) - with 00:35:453 (5) - (botth sliderend)
- you used the same DS for the jump 00:41:738 (3,1) - and 00:42:024 (1,2) - but the sound on 00:42:024 (1,2) - is much stronger so you should lower the DS between 00:42:024 (1,2) -
- 00:52:310 (3,4,5) - and 00:53:453 (3,4,5) - are so hard to aim~
- try to strg+g 00:57:024 (5) - because the flow isnt nice there as it is
- 00:58:595 (1) - looks not so nice and plays wierd - maybe increase the DS there
- arrange 01:00:595 (5) - so that 01:00:024 (3,4,5) - form a somewhat triangle like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8031672
- stack 01:01:881 (1) - with 01:02:738 (4) - (sliderend) and then put 01:01:738 (5) - in the middle of 01:01:881 (1) - and 01:01:024 (2) - like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8031703
- maybe blanket 01:04:167 (1) - with 01:04:595 (2) - (sliderend)

the other diffs seems fine too me
Gl with the set^^ :)
Topic Starter
Jabba

IceKalt wrote:

Just passing by form #modrequest~ (amatuer modder inc: RUN :p)

Chaos
- 00:04:738 (1,4) - maybe put these 2 a tiny bit higher so you can blanket better with 00:04:453 (4) - nice one, I swear it was a proper blanket once
- stack 00:09:453 (1) - with 00:08:738 (2) - (sliderend) would kinda mess up the flow
- stack 00:36:167 (2) - with 00:35:453 (5) - (botth sliderend) whoops
- you used the same DS for the jump 00:41:738 (3,1) - and 00:42:024 (1,2) - but the sound on 00:42:024 (1,2) - is much stronger so you should lower the DS between 00:42:024 (1,2) - true, tweaked it a bit
- 00:52:310 (3,4,5) - and 00:53:453 (3,4,5) - are so hard to aim~ I know, that's intended, I'll keep them for now
- try to strg+g 00:57:024 (5) - because the flow isnt nice there as it is intended as well, the flow goes in some form of an up-and-down movement there (you have to move your cursor up at (4), then down to aim (5), then up again etc), and I think it fits this section quite well
- 00:58:595 (1) - looks not so nice and plays wierd - maybe increase the DS there sure why not
- arrange 01:00:595 (5) - so that 01:00:024 (3,4,5) - form a somewhat triangle like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8031672 made it a bit neater
- stack 01:01:881 (1) - with 01:02:738 (4) - (sliderend) and then put 01:01:738 (5) - in the middle of 01:01:881 (1) - and 01:01:024 (2) - like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8031703 uh I didn't really get this one but I noticed that 01:01:881 (1) - has kinda low DS so I fixed it
- maybe blanket 01:04:167 (1) - with 01:04:595 (2) - (sliderend) would result in low DS

the other diffs seems fine too me
Gl with the set^^ :)
thanks!
AthenaPvP
Easy
To be honest, I just find 01:26:024 (1,1) - this to be a little weird. Though maybe I'm missing something. Other than that solid build!

Normal
01:26:024 (1,1) - Why are these two notes quieter than...
01:26:024 (1,1) - These two? I could tell there was a rhythm going on with the sounds, but it suddenly was silenced and it stuck out.

Honestly, me going any farther with difficulties would be difficult. Though I'm sure they're all really great!
ababa

M4M #modreq


Light Insane


SPOILER
Try to populate the edges and corner more https://puu.sh/vTdlk/f171208784.jpg

Maybe you can try to halve the amounts of NCs you have here, it's kinda much for a 4.2* map with HP5.5

00:14:738 (5,6,7) - This comes a bit unexpected, there aren't any other parts in the song that are as dense. Maybe try to replace with simple circles?

00:18:024 (4,5,1,2) - Make 1,2 the same spacing as the 3,4 from before?

00:58:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - Kinda hard to read imo, maybe put the 3 between the 2 sliders? https://puu.sh/vTdcb/3058d1fb68.png

01:07:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same here


Mentai's Hard


SPOILER
00:02:738 (3) - Try to space this more, this rhythm can be confusing for this diffuculty range

00:03:881 (1) - Maybe it's just me but you could put a circle on the white tick (I can hear a sound there, or I'm just dumb) to compensate for the strange rhythm on the 1, kinda complicated if beats start on red ticks

00:09:167 (3,1) - Space instead of stack?

00:10:595 (1) - 00:17:167 (4) - Maybe try to space everything a bit less Edit: Actually, keep it.

00:48:881 (3,4,5) - They don't kinda fit with the 1/2 slider rhythm, yoiu switching from mapping drums to mapping vocal in that moment. Maybe continue to use the 1/2 slider rhythm...

00:53:453 (3,4,5) - Here aswell

00:56:738 (2,3) - Weird rhythm again, I know, the song makes it hard to map on white ticks in these parts but I'd do it anyways to avoid confusing rhythms

01:23:738 (1,2,3) - 1,2 could be mistaken as a 1/2 gap, space them more.

I don't really like the rhythm style here, the "I'll leave the white tick because it would fit the music perfectly" style, because that can and will make some things unreadable. And this is a 3.2*, AR8 would be fine I guess


Normal


SPOILER
(I'll see everything from the exes of a beginner)

00:01:453 (1,1,1) - Why NCs? The HP is low enough

00:11:738 (3,4,5,6) - Idk, it's a bit too hard for a Normal imo

00:24:310 (1) - 00:36:595 (3) - You sure it's ok with the occasional pauses and odd slider lengths in this difficulty range? I don't know what else you could put there, but this definitely is a bit too hard for a normal... (I couldn't even fc this)

00:55:167 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe make this a smooth curve for the looks? https://puu.sh/vTeLF/0662602442.png

00:58:310 (1,1) - So if you want to keep 00:11:738 (3,4,5,6), then emphasize this point in the music with a slightly bigger jump

01:10:024 (1,2,3) - You could make this a triangle https://puu.sh/vTeT6/9d9fe3cf68.png
There are some places where you could make trangles 01:06:310 (3,1,2) -

You're clearly an experienced mapper, can't find that many flaws... (or maybe I'm just a shit modder)
Mentai

IceDynamix wrote:

M4M #modreq




Mentai's Hard


00:02:738 (3) - Try to space this more, this rhythm can be confusing for this diffuculty range nah, ds 1.00x is being used in this opening for the spaced rhythms

00:03:881 (1) - Maybe it's just me but you could put a circle on the white tick (I can hear a sound there, or I'm just dumb) to compensate for the strange rhythm on the 1, kinda complicated if beats start on red ticks yes, but its not the sound i want to map

00:09:167 (3,1) - Space instead of stack? why? i use this a couple times in the map, fits imo

00:10:595 (1) - 00:17:167 (4) - Maybe try to space everything a bit less Edit: Actually, keep it.

00:48:881 (3,4,5) - They don't kinda fit with the 1/2 slider rhythm, yoiu switching from mapping drums to mapping vocal in that moment. Maybe continue to use the 1/2 slider rhythm... i actually map vocals the entire map, just i'm not gonna just have a spinner or extended slider when the music picks up drastically here

00:53:453 (3,4,5) - Here aswell ^

00:56:738 (2,3) - Weird rhythm again, I know, the song makes it hard to map on white ticks in these parts but I'd do it anyways to avoid confusing rhythms this is spaced correctly and has 1/1 gap, how is that weird?

01:23:738 (1,2,3) - 1,2 could be mistaken as a 1/2 gap, space them more. i can see that, fixed

I don't really like the rhythm style here, the "I'll leave the white tick because it would fit the music perfectly" style, because that can and will make some things unreadable. And this is a 3.2*, AR8 would be fine I guess mapping the music perfectly is a good thing, there is no weird 3/4 or 1/4 rhythms i used, so i think the map expresses the music correctly and well
thanks for mod
SPOILER
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58167
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Uncontrollable
TitleUnicode:Uncontrollable
Artist:Ito Kanako
ArtistUnicode:いとうかなこ
Creator:MadHypnofrog
Version:Mentai's Hard
Source:CHAOS;CHILD
Tags:asuka_- eeezzzeee zel mentai 5pb. nitroplus itou chaos child head op opening tv size
BeatmapID:1278622
BeatmapSetID:582517

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:5.5
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SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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432,56,63453,2,0,L|444:136,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,280,63738,2,0,B|396:220|396:220|376:200|376:200|368:144,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,89,64167,2,0,B|233:139|233:139|253:159|253:159|261:219,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,116,64595,2,0,L|128:44,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,188,64881,2,0,L|47:123,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,272,65167,2,0,L|7:221,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,304,65453,6,0,P|144:356|112:376,2,70,12|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,65881,2,0,P|313:158|336:132,2,70,12|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,360,66310,2,0,L|432:384,1,70,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,220,66595,5,8,0:0:0:0:
420,220,66738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,272,66881,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,272,67024,1,6,0:0:0:0:
200,124,67167,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,124,67310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,64,67453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,64,67596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,220,67738,6,0,L|420:296,2,70,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,160,68167,2,0,L|268:90,2,70,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,12,68595,2,0,P|236:8|224:16,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,112,68881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,112,69024,2,0,P|390:117|422:105,2,70,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,24,69453,2,0,P|516:76|500:164,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,228,70024,5,2,0:0:0:0:
312,228,70167,2,0,L|300:300,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,336,70453,2,0,L|155:266,2,70,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,192,70881,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,192,71024,2,0,P|176:168|124:180,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,132,71310,2,0,P|282:95|229:89,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,112,71595,2,0,P|404:67|357:43,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,168,71881,2,0,P|456:212|380:200,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,132,72310,5,2,0:0:0:0:
104,132,72595,2,0,L|96:52,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,200,72881,2,0,B|180:252|180:252|164:284|164:284|172:344,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,267,73310,2,0,B|303:215|303:215|319:183|319:183|311:131,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,244,73738,2,0,L|422:313,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,164,74024,2,0,L|498:227,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,88,74310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,64,74595,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,64,74738,2,0,L|274:1,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,124,75024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,124,75167,2,0,L|206:187,2,70,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,276,75595,2,0,P|248:268|292:208,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,268,76024,2,0,P|368:277|328:333,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,384,76453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,332,76595,2,0,L|60:252,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,140,76881,5,6,0:0:0:0:
72,140,77024,2,0,P|160:176|252:128,1,188.999994232178,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,52,77738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,52,77881,2,0,B|404:128|404:128|420:168|420:168|416:240,1,188.999994232178,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,372,78595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,252,78881,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,88,79167,5,2,0:0:0:0:
232,88,79310,2,0,B|192:148|308:216|252:288,1,188.999994232178,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,364,80024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
428,364,80167,2,0,B|428:168,1,188.999994232178,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,88,80881,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,212,81167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,344,81453,6,0,P|276:340|292:348,1,62.9999980773926,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,268,81738,2,0,P|369:275|339:267,1,62.9999980773926,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,132,82024,2,0,L|372:200,1,62.9999980773926,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,150,82310,2,0,L|231:87,1,62.9999980773926,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,44,82595,6,0,P|68:48|32:36,1,62.9999980773926,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,168,82881,2,0,P|126:159|157:163,1,62.9999980773926,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,300,83167,2,0,L|132:237,1,62.9999980773926,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,292,83453,2,0,L|263:354,1,62.9999980773926,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,252,83738,6,0,L|416:248,1,62.9999980773926,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,68,84167,2,0,L|369:73,1,62.9999980773926,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,230,84595,2,0,P|250:262|259:291,1,62.9999980773926,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86024,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86167,12,2,90024,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Jabba

IceDynamix wrote:

M4M #modreq


Light Insane


SPOILER
Try to populate the edges and corner more https://puu.sh/vTdlk/f171208784.jpg don't really think that's much of a problem, I can try this if I decide to change some patterns

Maybe you can try to halve the amounts of NCs you have here, it's kinda much for a 4.2* map with HP5.5 used hp6 instead, removing nc would increase combos up to 12 or smth

00:14:738 (5,6,7) - This comes a bit unexpected, there aren't any other parts in the song that are as dense. Maybe try to replace with simple circles? actually both hard and other insane don't have those 1/4s mapped so yes, I guess I'd just use circles there

00:18:024 (4,5,1,2) - Make 1,2 the same spacing as the 3,4 from before? whoops

00:58:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - Kinda hard to read imo, maybe put the 3 between the 2 sliders? https://puu.sh/vTdcb/3058d1fb68.png (3) is the same as (1), but I spaced 5 out - should be better now

01:07:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same here ^


Normal


SPOILER
(I'll see everything from the exes of a beginner)

00:01:453 (1,1,1) - Why NCs? The HP is low enough not a big problem imo, indicates the big gap between those notes

00:11:738 (3,4,5,6) - Idk, it's a bit too hard for a Normal imo it's not that hard but apparently this is the only section where I use this, so I changed it

00:24:310 (1) - 00:36:595 (3) - You sure it's ok with the occasional pauses and odd slider lengths in this difficulty range? I don't know what else you could put there, but this definitely is a bit too hard for a normal... (I couldn't even fc this) what's exactly odd about this? I know, the diff is pretty much hard (it's even more like an advanced and not normal). all those sliders are following the vocals and there are only 1/2 and 1/1 gaps between objects

00:55:167 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe make this a smooth curve for the looks? https://puu.sh/vTeLF/0662602442.png sure

00:58:310 (1,1) - So if you want to keep 00:11:738 (3,4,5,6), then emphasize this point in the music with a slightly bigger jump jumps in normals are a no-no :<

01:10:024 (1,2,3) - You could make this a triangle https://puu.sh/vTeT6/9d9fe3cf68.png
There are some places where you could make trangles 01:06:310 (3,1,2) - I can literally make triangles out of everything (that's what I did in easy), as for this diff I went with the idea of such objects not touching so that it's easier to read

You're clearly an experienced mapper, can't find that many flaws... (or maybe I'm just a shit modder)
thanks!
Rizen
Hi, here to fulfill the m4m request

I would call your Easy a Normal and your Normal an Advanced tbh. Not because of the icon but because of patterns in Easy being too difficult for an 'Easy' new player e.g. consecutive circles at relatively highish bpm at 00:55:167 (3,4,5,6,1) -

Easy
  1. The difficulty spread within this difficulty is rather uneven imo, with that midway point being at 00:28:881 (1) - . Before this time, everything was mostly 2/1 with the occastional 1/1. After this however, it becomes mostly 1/1 with very occasional 1/1. I find this to be a rather big problem in the diff considering the song intensities between the two parts isn't that much different. A more obvious example would be to compare 00:19:738 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - to 00:10:595 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - . The first timestamp music is relatively calmer than the second timestamp music yet has less objects placed. I may even go as far as to say this unevenness makes the diff unrankable
  2. 00:32:881 (4,1,2,3) - you usually do a trapezium pattern with these objects, so try applying that here too (e.g. 00:30:595 (3,1,2,3) - , 00:34:024 (3,4,5,1) - )
  3. 00:53:738 (3,1) - move slider 1 slightly more to the right for zig-zag flow at 00:52:881 (1,2,3,1) - ?
  4. 01:00:881 (1) - don't like this 3/2 repeat slider as the white tick to either side of that red tick is much more audible/important (left white tick is a snare and right white tick is a strong vocal)
  5. 01:10:024 (1) - ^
  6. 01:09:453 (3,1,2) - don't you usually place the third object somewhere so makes a 'triangle'? e.g. 01:00:024 (3,1,2) - , 01:06:595 (2,1,2) - , etc.
  7. yeahh, it kinda felt like 30% an Easy diff and 70% a Normal diff fused together.. give my first point some thought ://
Mentai's Hard
  1. 00:03:167 (4) - following vocals when there's rather strong percussion like at the large white tick is rather difficult.. try changing this slider into a repeat slider so that large white tick is mapped somewhat
  2. 00:04:738 (1,2,3,4) - try this rhythm instead? current is a bit too dense considering this part of the music is relatively calm
  3. 00:10:024 (3) - that white tick is rather weak compared to the red tick in between, try adjusting the rhythm here to include that red tick
  4. 00:10:881 (2,3) - doesn't look nice compared to your other instances of this (e.g. 00:12:024 (2,3) - , 00:13:167 (2,3) - , etc.)
  5. 00:11:738 (1,2,3,4) - flow in this pattern is kinda strange compared to other times like 00:10:595 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:16:310 (1,2,3,4) - ). In those times, the flow in the pattern 'rotates' for the first three sliders but then the fourth slider goes in the other rotation. However over here, the change in flow rotation happens with the third slider instead. perhaps adjust this pattern so that same flow pattern is seen here
  6. 00:21:738 (6,1) - bit strange to increase spacing for new measure here when you didn't at parts like 00:24:024 (6,1) - , 00:26:310 (6,1) - , etc.
  7. 00:29:881 (4) - is the whistle on the slider end here accidental? not seen in other diffs
  8. 00:37:738 - rather prominent percussion beat, would map this with a circle. Especially since the next section revolves around the percussion
  9. 01:06:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - if this is meant to be a square pattern, it's kinda sloppily done ://
  10. 01:26:024 (4) - NC this, literally every other diff in this mapset does
Light Insane
  1. 00:02:453 (4,1) - perhaps you can ctrl+g this so it is slider then circle? seeing as you seem to be mapping primarily to the vocals. also because you mapped similar parts to this like 00:04:453 (4,1) - as to the vocals and without making the large white tick clickable
  2. 00:07:167 (1) - forgot drum sampleset at slider head I think
  3. 00:10:310 (3) - would be nice to hitsound this note tbh, like a drum sampleset
  4. 00:31:595 (3,4,1) - perhaps move circle 4 a bit closer to slider 3 to make that vocal spacing theme you have going on more distinct (e.g. 00:33:881 (2,3,1) - )
  5. 00:36:595 (3) - not too sure but I don't hear a sound on that first blue tick. perhaps change this to a circle and 1/4 slider?
  6. 00:38:167 (2,3) - and 00:39:024 (2,3) - , space circle 3 out a bit more? a short compared to the next couple of times you use this pattern like at 00:40:453 (2,3) - , 00:42:738 (2,3) - , etc.
  7. 00:50:738 (2) - drum sampleset if you want to highlight those two percussion sounds, which is what I think you are doing since you mapped this as two circles
  8. 01:02:738 (4,1) - spacing here seems a bit short imo, try moving slider 4 lower
  9. 01:04:310 (1,2,3,4) - tbh, I don't find this kinda of pattern appropriate. purely my opinion but I think this kind of pattern only works well in build ups in the music as the distance between slider pairs is increasing. it works at 00:07:167 (1,2,3,4) - because there is a build up in music intensity here
  10. 01:13:453 (1,2,3,4) - same thing as previous point tbh
  11. 01:22:881 (3,4) - imo, these would look better if each slider was rotated 10deg about the selection centre
good luck!
Topic Starter
Jabba

Rizen wrote:

Hi, here to fulfill the m4m request

I would call your Easy a Normal and your Normal an Advanced tbh. Not because of the icon but because of patterns in Easy being too difficult for an 'Easy' new player e.g. consecutive circles at relatively highish bpm at 00:55:167 (3,4,5,6,1) -

Easy
  1. The difficulty spread within this difficulty is rather uneven imo, with that midway point being at 00:28:881 (1) - . Before this time, everything was mostly 2/1 with the occastional 1/1. After this however, it becomes mostly 1/1 with very occasional 1/1. I find this to be a rather big problem in the diff considering the song intensities between the two parts isn't that much different. A more obvious example would be to compare 00:19:738 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - to 00:10:595 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - . The first timestamp music is relatively calmer than the second timestamp music yet has less objects placed. I may even go as far as to say this unevenness makes the diff unrankable actually this section 00:10:595 - was really too simplified so I added more 1/1 beats to it. as for 00:28:881 - the music here gets more intense so I use more 1/1 rhythms. I guess buffing the very first part would work, as that would make the 00:19:738 - section relatively easier
  2. 00:32:881 (4,1,2,3) - you usually do a trapezium pattern with these objects, so try applying that here too (e.g. 00:30:595 (3,1,2,3) - , 00:34:024 (3,4,5,1) - ) true, fixed
  3. 00:53:738 (3,1) - move slider 1 slightly more to the right for zig-zag flow at 00:52:881 (1,2,3,1) - ? ye sure
  4. 01:00:881 (1) - don't like this 3/2 repeat slider as the white tick to either side of that red tick is much more audible/important (left white tick is a snare and right white tick is a strong vocal) changed to 2/1 + circle
  5. 01:10:024 (1) - ^ ^
  6. 01:09:453 (3,1,2) - don't you usually place the third object somewhere so makes a 'triangle'? e.g. 01:00:024 (3,1,2) - , 01:06:595 (2,1,2) - , etc. redid the pattern anyway cause I had to change 01:10:024 (1) -
  7. yeahh, it kinda felt like 30% an Easy diff and 70% a Normal diff fused together.. give my first point some thought :// I'm fine with renaming the diff as long as it can be an acceptable lowest diff LOL cause I had lots of trouble reducing the rhythm in both normal and hard

Light Insane
  1. 00:02:453 (4,1) - perhaps you can ctrl+g this so it is slider then circle? seeing as you seem to be mapping primarily to the vocals. also because you mapped similar parts to this like 00:04:453 (4,1) - as to the vocals and without making the large white tick clickable fixd
  2. 00:07:167 (1) - forgot drum sampleset at slider head I think whoops forgot to do this one since the highest diff (which I copied hs from) doesn't have this tick mapped
  3. 00:10:310 (3) - would be nice to hitsound this note tbh, like a drum sampleset eze's diff actually has a finish on this note and I like how it sounds, so yes, changed
  4. 00:31:595 (3,4,1) - perhaps move circle 4 a bit closer to slider 3 to make that vocal spacing theme you have going on more distinct (e.g. 00:33:881 (2,3,1) - ) increased spacing on both 3-4 and 4-1
  5. 00:36:595 (3) - not too sure but I don't hear a sound on that first blue tick. perhaps change this to a circle and 1/4 slider? there's a trill in the background, it's fine imo
  6. 00:38:167 (2,3) - and 00:39:024 (2,3) - , space circle 3 out a bit more? a short compared to the next couple of times you use this pattern like at 00:40:453 (2,3) - , 00:42:738 (2,3) - , etc.yes
  7. 00:50:738 (2) - drum sampleset if you want to highlight those two percussion sounds, which is what I think you are doing since you mapped this as two circles not really sure if there's an actual drum sound in the background but I think it fits well. I mapped those two as circles cause it's the end of the section tho, before the more intense part lol
  8. 01:02:738 (4,1) - spacing here seems a bit short imo, try moving slider 4 lower tweaked it a bit
  9. 01:04:310 (1,2,3,4) - tbh, I don't find this kinda of pattern appropriate. purely my opinion but I think this kind of pattern only works well in build ups in the music as the distance between slider pairs is increasing. it works at 00:07:167 (1,2,3,4) - because there is a build up in music intensity here
  10. 01:13:453 (1,2,3,4) - same thing as previous point tbh I think those are fine cause they act as the buildup for the jump section that comes right after. I might change it tho if I come up with a better idea
  11. 01:22:881 (3,4) - imo, these would look better if each slider was rotated 10deg about the selection centre agreed
good luck!
thanks!
-Helix-
hi m4m from modreq(i use google translate)
◾Asuka_-'s Insane
00:27:453 (4) - How about reversing the end of the slide?
00:35:738 (1,3,5) - The position is slightly uneven.
00:56:310 (1,2,3,4) - Can not it be more in the middle? (its my personal opinion.)
01:05:453 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I hope you have the same jump length.
01:16:595 (6,7) - move slightly right
01:21:453 (1) - move up
01:23:881 (2) - I'd better go a little more clockwise.


◾eze's Extra
00:07:167 (1) - remove NC
00:08:024 (1) - remove NC
00:08:310 (1) - I think it is a slide little far
00:13:595 (2) - There is a feeling closer to other circles.
00:21:167 (3) - move slightly down
00:26:881 (1,2,3,4) - Make it regular
00:58:596 (1) - remove NC
00:59:453 (3) - remove NC
01:05:881 (1) - move down
01:08:595 (1) - remove NC
01:11:738 (1) - remove NC
01:12:167 (4) - NC
01:12:310 (1) - remove NC
01:23:453 (1) - remove NC


m4m my map please
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/607007
good luck~
guijcl
M4M Req xd

Light Insane
00:09:453 (1,2) - Those to slider are copy pasted but if u notice they got two diferent sounds
00:23:738 (3) - wierd slider shape, maybe do like this, cuz has two diferent "iiii" http://prntscr.com/fa4qyu
00:34:310 (3) - U can try to do a blanket from this
00:37:167 (2,3) - Fix
00:41:167 (1,2,3) - Maybe u should change to something like this: http://prntscr.com/fa4src
00:44:881 (1,2,3) - ^
00:56:310 (1,2,3) - Better like this imo: http://prntscr.com/fa4tmc
01:04:167 (4,2) - Fix
01:14:881 (3,6) - Fix

Good Diff in imo
GL
Topic Starter
Jabba

q1ffaay wrote:

M4M Req xd

Light Insane
00:09:453 (1,2) - Those to slider are copy pasted but if u notice they got two diferent sounds legit, changed
00:23:738 (3) - wierd slider shape, maybe do like this, cuz has two diferent "iiii" http://prntscr.com/fa4qyu there's no actual vocal in the middle, and this is the usual pattern I do in this diff so it's fine
00:34:310 (3) - U can try to do a blanket from this that'd mess up with the ds, but I'll think about maybe tweaking it somehow
00:37:167 (2,3) - Fix uh there's nothing wrong with it tho?
00:41:167 (1,2,3) - Maybe u should change to something like this: http://prntscr.com/fa4src this section is based on repetitive patterns cause the sounds in the background are the same
00:44:881 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:56:310 (1,2,3) - Better like this imo: http://prntscr.com/fa4tmc my intention was to put 2 and 3 on the same line, though I like your idea
01:04:167 (4,2) - Fix uh if you were talking about stacks then yes, fixed
01:14:881 (3,6) - Fix ^

Good Diff in imo
GL
thanks!
Mentai

Rizen wrote:

Hi, here to fulfill the m4m request


Mentai's Hard
  1. 00:03:167 (4) - following vocals when there's rather strong percussion like at the large white tick is rather difficult.. try changing this slider into a repeat slider so that large white tick is mapped somewhat i would really like to avoid this
  2. 00:04:738 (1,2,3,4) - try this rhythm instead? current is a bit too dense considering this part of the music is relatively calm due to bpm, you're right
  3. 00:10:024 (3) - that white tick is rather weak compared to the red tick in between, try adjusting the rhythm here to include that red tick i'd rather not have my map be ALL 1/2 spam...
  4. 00:10:881 (2,3) - doesn't look nice compared to your other instances of this (e.g. 00:12:024 (2,3) - , 00:13:167 (2,3) - , etc.) first set of these always rotate this way, the others are just designed differently, i could space them a bit more?
  5. 00:11:738 (1,2,3,4) - flow in this pattern is kinda strange compared to other times like 00:10:595 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:16:310 (1,2,3,4) - ). In those times, the flow in the pattern 'rotates' for the first three sliders but then the fourth slider goes in the other rotation. However over here, the change in flow rotation happens with the third slider instead. perhaps adjust this pattern so that same flow pattern is seen here yes
  6. 00:21:738 (6,1) - bit strange to increase spacing for new measure here when you didn't at parts like 00:24:024 (6,1) - , 00:26:310 (6,1) - , etc. THIS was an accident xd
  7. 00:29:881 (4) - is the whistle on the slider end here accidental? not seen in other diffs intentional
  8. 00:37:738 - rather prominent percussion beat, would map this with a circle. Especially since the next section revolves around the percussion originally this just sounded like white noise to me, i can hear something rather faintly, but also most of my hearing is gone so people will hear things i can't anymore. i'll take your word for it... for now
  9. 01:06:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - if this is meant to be a square pattern, it's kinda sloppily done :// i tried eyeballing
  10. 01:26:024 (4) - NC this, literally every other diff in this mapset does i guess!

good luck![/notice]
thx for mod xd
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Asuka_-

wkdalstn29 wrote:

hi m4m from modreq(i use google translate) me too xDD
◾Asuka_-'s Insane
00:27:453 (4) - How about reversing the end of the slide? its fine.
00:35:738 (1,3,5) - The position is slightly uneven. little change.
00:56:310 (1,2,3,4) - Can not it be more in the middle? (its my personal opinion.) nice! i try
01:05:453 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I hope you have the same jump length. hm... i think is fun!
01:16:595 (6,7) - move slightly right little change.
01:21:453 (1) - move up little change.
01:23:881 (2) - I'd better go a little more clockwise. no
Thanks!!

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384,228,35024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
481,113,35167,2,0,P|442:124|405:129,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,53,35453,2,0,P|241:46|182:42,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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218,174,36024,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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234,216,36453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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255,261,36881,5,8,0:0:0:0:
102,273,37024,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,307,37167,1,8,0:0:0:0:
405,174,37453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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492,154,38024,5,2,0:0:0:0:
492,154,38167,2,0,P|418:86|329:129,1,204,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,325,38881,5,2,0:0:0:0:
264,325,39024,2,0,P|255:228|242:108,1,204,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,279,39738,2,0,L|63:298,2,68,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,184,40167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,82,40310,5,2,0:0:0:0:
124,82,40453,2,0,P|225:49|299:113,1,204,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
490,181,41167,5,2,0:0:0:0:
490,181,41310,2,0,P|383:158|321:224,1,204,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,358,42024,5,2,0:0:0:0:
420,358,42167,2,0,L|266:372,1,136,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,233,42595,5,2,0:0:0:0:
226,233,42738,2,0,P|129:307|50:258,1,204,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
21,130,43453,5,2,0:0:0:0:
21,130,43595,2,0,P|105:59|200:95,1,204,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,217,44310,2,0,L|306:305,2,68,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
434,146,44738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
303,76,44881,5,2,0:0:0:0:
303,76,45024,2,0,P|412:64|522:52,1,204,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,160,45738,5,2,0:0:0:0:
208,160,45881,2,0,L|-5:134,1,204,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,259,46595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
321,259,46738,2,0,P|350:208|346:271,1,159.375006079674
264,153,47167,6,0,P|271:119|282:70,1,76.4999976654053,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,187,47453,2,0,P|156:152|152:94,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,260,47738,2,0,P|65:229|46:193,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,354,48024,2,0,P|34:345|-15:325,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,312,48310,6,0,P|222:319|273:332,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,226,48595,2,0,P|305:247|337:274,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,204,48881,2,0,P|431:240|445:285,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,131,49167,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,36,49310,6,0,P|356:29|302:25,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,133,49595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
247,133,49738,2,0,P|205:132|158:120,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,24,50024,2,0,P|50:73|42:108,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,208,50310,2,0,P|107:252|118:297,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,377,50595,6,0,P|217:338|227:286,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,306,50881,2,0,P|324:275|309:219,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,215,51167,2,0,P|414:184|386:134,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,101,51453,2,0,P|476:67|444:44,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,70,51738,6,0,P|286:84|221:82,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,185,52024,2,0,P|218:180|165:158,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,273,52310,2,0,P|137:255|107:229,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,322,52595,2,0,P|26:293|9:242,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,128,52881,6,0,P|66:98|86:56,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,132,53167,2,0,P|184:80|182:47,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,104,53453,2,0,P|293:62|274:19,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,50,53738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
499,185,53881,6,0,P|461:183|413:174,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,289,54167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
398,289,54310,2,0,P|352:292|302:304,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,54595,2,0,P|212:257|204:292,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
101,295,54881,2,0,P|108:339|119:384,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
9,211,55167,6,0,P|15:171|28:120,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,147,55453,2,0,P|132:121|163:74,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,112,55738,2,0,P|283:92|337:81,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,151,56024,2,0,P|420:152|480:168,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,246,56310,5,8,0:0:0:0:
430,295,56453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
319,164,56595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,354,56738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
87,243,57024,5,8,0:0:0:0:
429,169,57310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
135,44,57595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
135,44,57738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
367,178,58310,6,0,B|350:187|350:187|324:182|324:182|295:193|295:193|278:189,1,82.8749962062838,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,163,58595,5,6,0:0:0:0:
138,320,58738,2,0,P|129:284|126:234,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,89,59024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
37,269,59167,2,0,P|37:218|47:170,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,17,59453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
255,163,59595,6,0,P|290:175|356:178,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,65,59881,1,2,0:0:0:0:
462,248,60024,2,0,P|469:211|475:159,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,353,60310,2,0,P|464:365|417:359,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,278,60595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
389,195,60738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,367,60881,5,2,0:0:0:0:
161,307,61024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,307,61167,2,0,P|156:270|151:220,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,83,61453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
79,161,61595,1,2,0:0:0:0:
287,161,61738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,16,61881,6,0,P|149:68|141:114,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,107,62167,2,0,P|385:151|397:200,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,206,62453,2,0,P|131:252|121:292,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,286,62738,2,0,P|381:334|390:376,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
477,202,63024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
477,202,63167,6,0,P|430:201|389:187,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,57,63453,2,0,P|269:60|200:78,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,173,63738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,226,63881,1,2,0:0:0:0:
133,91,64024,1,8,0:0:0:0:
46,239,64167,6,0,P|33:195|22:143,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,359,64453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
150,359,64595,2,0,P|105:370|40:368,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,298,64881,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,224,65024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,284,65167,2,0,P|363:339|355:370,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,162,65453,5,12,0:0:0:0:
490,311,65595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
379,51,65881,5,12,0:0:0:0:
316,212,66024,1,8,0:0:0:0:
177,133,66310,5,12,0:0:0:0:
243,318,66453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
102,205,66595,5,8,0:0:0:0:
27,372,66738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,274,66881,1,8,0:0:0:0:
21,171,67024,2,0,P|10:129|101:30,1,170,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,105,67453,2,8,P|216:98|250:89,1,42.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,24,67595,2,8,P|373:32|406:41,1,42.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
481,146,67738,5,6,0:0:0:0:
425,319,67881,2,0,P|416:283|413:233,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,120,68167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
247,290,68310,2,0,P|250:245|265:198,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,55,68595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
87,199,68738,6,0,P|46:208|2:211,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,272,69024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
229,127,69167,2,0,P|273:129|319:138,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,37,69453,2,0,P|423:63|444:140,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,274,69738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
504,187,69881,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,231,70024,5,2,0:0:0:0:
422,368,70167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
422,368,70310,2,0,P|377:373|335:376,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,321,70595,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,231,70738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
174,180,70881,1,8,0:0:0:0:
339,72,71024,6,0,L|435:87,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,180,71310,2,0,L|87:194,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,251,71595,2,0,L|472:269,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,353,71881,2,0,L|73:372,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,211,72167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
273,211,72310,6,0,P|267:264|260:303,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,88,72595,2,0,P|221:78|263:74,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,145,72881,1,2,0:0:0:0:
351,26,73024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,91,73167,1,8,0:0:0:0:
331,170,73310,6,0,P|338:211|350:252,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
495,330,73595,1,2,0:0:0:0:
495,330,73738,2,0,P|453:344|395:356,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,299,74024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
334,352,74167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
163,384,74310,2,0,L|148:293,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,138,74595,5,2,0:0:0:0:
218,208,74738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
218,208,74881,2,0,P|224:172|233:108,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,29,75167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
169,63,75310,1,2,0:0:0:0:
321,148,75453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,48,75595,6,0,P|460:97|454:134,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
491,262,75881,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,371,76024,2,0,P|308:366|270:356,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,256,76310,1,2,0:0:0:0:
314,214,76453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
202,329,76595,1,2,0:0:0:0:
190,137,76738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
355,293,76881,6,0,P|404:228|372:142,1,152.999995330811,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,61,77453,2,0,P|194:106|187:155,1,76.4999976654053,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,237,77738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,326,77881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,326,78024,6,0,L|80:335,1,76.4999976654053,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,312,78310,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,162,78595,2,0,P|486:204|478:241,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,36,78881,2,0,P|396:75|400:112,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,268,79167,6,0,P|272:315|182:284,1,152.999995330811,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,106,79738,2,0,L|31:203,1,76.4999976654053,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,24,80024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,101,80167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,101,80310,6,0,P|206:108|253:106,1,76.4999976654053,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,57,80595,1,2,0:0:0:0:
485,205,80881,2,0,P|496:178|505:128,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
505,322,81167,2,0,P|461:332|406:334,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,375,81453,6,0,P|265:302|291:230,1,152.999995330811,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,95,82024,2,0,P|392:110|308:119,1,152.999995330811,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,34,82595,6,0,L|66:130,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,196,82881,2,0,L|204:110,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
50,88,83167,2,0,L|26:169,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,254,83453,2,0,L|189:176,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,74,83738,5,8,0:0:0:0:
88,262,83881,1,8,0:0:0:0:
277,158,84167,5,8,0:0:0:0:
221,349,84310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
443,99,84595,5,8,0:0:0:0:
399,279,84738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,213,84881,6,0,L|140:224,1,63.7500024318696
23,146,85310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,46,85595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,46,85738,2,0,L|237:53,1,63.7500024318696
256,192,86024,12,0,89881,0:0:0:0:
317,189,90024,5,2,0:0:0:0:
209,238,90167,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,333,90310,1,2,0:0:0:0:
129,286,90453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
Testo
[Chaos]
  1. 00:01:453 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - этот парт должен быть менее интенсивным, я понимаю, ты мапаешь по вокалам, но всё же там не должен быть такой экшон
  2. 00:08:738 (2) - у таких слайдеров должен быть 1 угол(http://i.imgur.com/x87tkdQ.png)
  3. 00:09:881 (4) - раз ты выделяешь вокал, то мб сделаешь тут слайдер?
  4. 00:12:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - очень неудобно
  5. далее ты то фолловишь вокал, то нет, тебе так делать нельзя, учитывая как у тебя мапнуто начало(игнор инструментала, всё на вокал)
  6. 01:16:881 (1) - очень резкая смена св, учитывая что сонг не настолько затих, каких нибудь 0.8 хватит сполна
  7. Нужно поработать над ритмикой и эстетикой
[Zel's Extreme]
  1. 00:10:024 (4,5) - do you really need to overmap here
  2. 00:17:310 (6) - 2 notes will be better
  3. 00:36:880 (3,4,5,6) - 2 kicksliders for better emphasize
  4. 01:30:595 - sound ends here why slider not?
[Asuka_-'s Insane]
  1. 00:10:167 (5) - beat is too strong for sliderend
  2. 00:10:595 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You also can use something like this for variety http://i.imgur.com/ieAFOE2.jpg
  3. 00:47:167 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - here too
удачи!
Topic Starter
Jabba

Testo wrote:

[Chaos]
  1. 00:01:453 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - этот парт должен быть менее интенсивным, я понимаю, ты мапаешь по вокалам, но всё же там не должен быть такой экшон упрощать ритм здесь особо как-то не хочется, потому что сразу задаются паттерны на всю мапу, а вот спейсинг подрезал кое-где
  2. 00:08:738 (2) - у таких слайдеров должен быть 1 угол(http://i.imgur.com/x87tkdQ.png) не уверен, что правильно тебя понял, но там середина срсли была не там где надо, фиксанул
  3. 00:09:881 (4) - раз ты выделяешь вокал, то мб сделаешь тут слайдер? пауза на 4ке, как мне кажется, лучше выделяет завершение слова
  4. 00:12:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - очень неудобно было неудобнее, поверь. переделал чутка, стало похоже теперь на 00:15:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , которые, как по мне, замечательно играются
  5. далее ты то фолловишь вокал, то нет, тебе так делать нельзя, учитывая как у тебя мапнуто начало(игнор инструментала, всё на вокал) вот кст нифига подобного, там что в начале, что в куплете идет упор на вокалы с добавлением 1/2 там, где вокалов нет (яркий пример в начале 00:02:881 (3,4,5) - , он же 00:21:167 (2,3,4) - , немного отход от этого, т.к. там два бита до этого с вокалом 00:23:738 (4,5) - , итд
  6. 01:16:881 (1) - очень резкая смена св, учитывая что сонг не настолько затих, каких нибудь 0.8 хватит сполна а мне кажется что нормально, там и вокал достаточно медленный по сравнению с киаем, и на бэке меньше битов намного
  7. Нужно поработать над ритмикой и эстетикой про ритмику я уже пообъяснял чутка, а с эстетикой-то что не так? практически все в паттернах, единственное на что можно обратить внимание как по мне - это слайдеры в слоупарте в середине, но там у меня нет других идей
удачи!
спасибо!
ItashaS13
o/

  • Chaos
    00:04:738 (1,2,3) - these should not end on white ticks. they don't play bad atm, but I think they would play a lot better and fit the song better if they started on these white ticks, will still follow the vocals and you don't miss the downbeat and the next strong beat at 00:05:453 -
    00:06:024 (1) - should be 2 circles, I think it fits better since there's no vocals, so you follow vocals with sliders from 00:06:310 -
    00:18:881 (3,4) - should move this closer to the end of 00:18:595 (2) - decrease spacing in these just like the music does :thinking: (ok, you just reduced SV but spacing should decrease too)
    00:18:167 (5) - stack its end with 00:17:024 (6) - < so you have more spacing between 00:17:024 (6) - and then move 00:18:881 (3,4) - closer to 00:18:595 (2) -
    00:19:738 (1) - should make sliders a bit slower from here, or .. why not make this slider 00:19:453 (6) - a lot faster than 00:19:738 (1) - so that sound get more emphazised
    00:36:595 - something I noticed while playing was, until this point, most of the flow it's going clockwise, maybe Im been too nazi, but why not do ctrl+g on 00:25:310 (1) - 00:31:595 (4) - 00:32:167 (1) - and 00:34:453 (1) - that would add more variety in the flow :thonkung: or can ctrl+g 00:30:453 (3,4) - these two and not in 00:31:595 (4) - or w/e, it's up t you
    00:44:310 (4,7) - 00:45:881 (2) - should try ctrl+g in one of these two for the same reason
    01:07:881 (2,4) - ctrl+g?
    01:20:595 (1) - move to 248/1127 :thinking:
    some nazi stuff:
    00:01:453 (1,3) - they play well stacked but, well, what if you stacked both circles to the sliderends, that would make it more interesting http://prntscr.com/fb7qz7
    00:20:167 (3,4) - blanket
    00:07:024 (1,2) - blanket?
    00:10:310 (5,2) - blanket?
    00:22:453 (3,4) -

    Zel's Extreme
    the beginning looks a bit overmapped but I like it more so... ¯(´・◡・`)/¯
    00:16:881 (3,5) - add more spacing between these to be more consistent in the spacing considering the other jumps liek this
    01:03:453 (3,4) - too short spacing between these imo
    nazi stuff:
    00:23:024 (1,3) - could blank better
    00:32:881 (4,5) - stack with 00:31:881 (5) -

    eze's Extra
    00:09:881 (4) - move this up (to.. 424/156) and move 00:09:738 (3) - to 224/316 that would play better
    00:36:024 (2) - this looks a little bit messy with the previous slider because it's rotation, also, both should have more spacing since 00:36:024 (2) - have strong beat on it, so just copy paste this 00:35:738 (1) - and ctrl+g https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8161039
    01:02:881 (5,1) - should move 01:03:167 (1) - closer, since the sound on it it's not really "strong" and the 5 ends on a blue tick, that spacing it's too much atm
    01:05:167 (3) - stack this with end of 01:04:595 (2) - instead? a bit more spacing here since 01:05:167 (3) - has strong beat on it (and I think 01:05:024 (2) - should be stacked with 01:05:738 (3) - ) considering the spacing between 01:04:310 (1,2) - and 01:05:024 (2,3) - but both are the same sound :thinking:
    01:15:881 (2,3) - I think this is... much overmapping :thinking:
    nazi stuff:
    00:21:453 (4) - stack its end with 00:20:738 (2) -
    00:30:453 (3,1) - blanket
    00:35:310 (5) - stack with 00:34:595 (1) -
    00:31:453 (3,2) - stack? (and then form blanket with 00:32:595 (2,3) -
    01:05:595 (2,1) - stack properly kappa
    01:09:738 (4,5) - blanket
Topic Starter
Jabba

Itasha_S13 wrote:

o/

[list]Chaos
00:04:738 (1,2,3) - these should not end on white ticks. they don't play bad atm, but I think they would play a lot better and fit the song better if they started on these white ticks, will still follow the vocals and you don't miss the downbeat and the next strong beat at 00:05:453 - that is a legit way of mapping those but this way prioritizes drums over vocals and I don't want this as the whole diff focuses mainly on vocals. the 1/1 slider at 00:05:595 (4) - fits the held vocal perfectly so I don't want to change it
00:06:024 (1) - should be 2 circles, I think it fits better since there's no vocals, so you follow vocals with sliders from 00:06:310 - idk that's true that the first slider is a bit different, but I think putting a circle at 00:06:167 - which doesn't really have an audible beat won't be that much of a good idea; also those three are following the drums pretty good (wacky reasoning ikr LOL)
00:18:881 (3,4) - should move this closer to the end of 00:18:595 (2) - decrease spacing in these just like the music does :thinking: (ok, you just reduced SV but spacing should decrease too) yes, changed the pattern a bit
00:18:167 (5) - stack its end with 00:17:024 (6) - < so you have more spacing between 00:17:024 (6) - and then move 00:18:881 (3,4) - closer to 00:18:595 (2) - ^
00:19:738 (1) - should make sliders a bit slower from here, or .. why not make this slider 00:19:453 (6) - a lot faster than 00:19:738 (1) - so that sound get more emphazised nice idea, but I can't really do it now due to the slider being too low, and if I want to make it faster I'll have to change the whole patterning up to the middle of the verse. I'll do this if I come up with an idea tho
00:36:595 - something I noticed while playing was, until this point, most of the flow it's going clockwise, maybe Im been too nazi, but why not do ctrl+g on 00:25:310 (1) - 00:31:595 (4) - 00:32:167 (1) - and 00:34:453 (1) - that would add more variety in the flow :thonkung: or can ctrl+g 00:30:453 (3,4) - these two and not in 00:31:595 (4) - or w/e, it's up t you intended, the flow goes clockwise up until 00:26:024 (2,3,4) - which indicates the end of the section; the same thing is used in the 2nd half of the verse
00:44:310 (4,7) - 00:45:881 (2) - should try ctrl+g in one of these two for the same reason as for this one I never actually liked how 00:44:024 (3,4) - flows so I changed it and ctrl-j'd some of the next patterns
01:07:881 (2,4) - ctrl+g? intended, don't want to make them the same distance, so I emphasize the second 'nee' a bit more
01:20:595 (1) - move to 248/1127 :thinking: this pattern is different from (6) and I don't think that I should align them together
some nazi stuff:
00:01:453 (1,3) - they play well stacked but, well, what if you stacked both circles to the sliderends, that would make it more interesting http://prntscr.com/fb7qz7 looks nice but the intention was to make the player stop at those cause those are literally the first objects on the map
00:20:167 (3,4) - blanket not really possible imo due to DS, it's blanketed by (1) instead
00:07:024 (1,2) - blanket? I tried
00:10:310 (5,2) - blanket? not a good idea imo due to how (5) is shaped, I'd rather have (2)'s end at (5)'s anchor
00:22:453 (3,4) - I genuinely believe they were blanketed once. I didn't blanket them now cause the DS is kinda big but instead went with an equal distance between 2-3 and 3-4. also the 00:22:453 (3,1) - blanket was broken and I never noticed it lol
thanks!
Seni
lo
Chaos

  1. Basically the only thing I have a problem with in this diff are the hitsounds. Your samples are a bit overpowering, so I'm really questioning if stuff like 01:02:738 (4) - or 01:11:881 (4) - are good rhythm choices. I can see that you want to emphasize vocals in places like these and trying to avoid too much 1/2 spam but when you suddenly stop following the backbeat here it sounds really empty.
    I suggest you use a different rhythm or hitsounding pattern. You can look at the other harder diffs for ideas because this only happens in your extra and light insane.
    01:17:738 (2) - is another good example of poor rhythm choices conflicting with the hitsounding pattern.
  2. 00:56:310 (1,2,3) - 3 claps + vocals should have way more spacing emphasis than 00:55:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - so imo switch the spacing between these two sets of jumps

Zel's Extreme


  1. 01:23:738 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't feel like these jumps should be getting smaller, or changing emphasis in any way. All 3 sets are equally strong imo they should have equal emphasis

eze's Extra


  1. 01:23:738 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Same suggestion as Zel's diff

Asuka_'s Insane

  1. 01:05:738 -
    01:06:167 - I think it's really bad to ignore these ticks when you don't need to since 01:05:738 is a snare and should definitely be emphasized. You are putting too much emphasis on vocals here by undermapping and it really takes away from the music, even more so because of how strong the hitsound samples are.

Light Insane


  1. Pretty much the same thing about hitsounds as Chaos diff.
tokiko
  • [General]
  1. мне кажется, что тебе нужно замапать изи, который будет состоять из одних 1/1 слайдеров (для баланса, так сказать)
  2. некоторые диффы заканчиваются в разное время, это не так страшно, но кто-нибудь обязательно может пристать, поэтому проверь на всякий случай
  • [Normal]
  1. сделай хитсаунды потише, а то этот хлопок иногда сильно бьёт по ушам (это ко всему мапсету относится)

    [Advanced]

  2. не надо мапать всё с одинаковым дс, это странно выглядит, тем более в адванседе. попробуй раздвинуть некоторые паттерны, если хочешь
  3. 01:10:024 (1,2,3) - тут лучше сделать приятный треугольничек
  4. 01:26:024 (1) - поставь эту ноту в другое место, а то как-то слишком однообразно получается

    [Light Insane]

  5. 00:05:024 (2) - может ctrl+g попробуешь?
  6. 00:14:738 (5,6) - и тут тоже
  7. 00:17:595 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - попробуй дать этому больше пространства путём увеличение спейсинга между двоечками
  8. 00:19:310 (5) - может 1/4 слайдер лучше будет?
  9. 01:26:024 (1) - любишь ты середину эдитора

    [Chaos]

  10. 00:19:310 (5) - сейм ас эбаув (если ты это принял конечно)
  11. 00:37:453 (4) - можно нк
  12. 00:57:738 (7,1) - пофикси стак. а ещё мне кажется, что 00:57:738 (7) - с ctrl+g лучше выглядит
  13. 01:22:595 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - хайтай
удачи
Topic Starter
Jabba

Seni wrote:

lo
Chaos

  1. Basically the only thing I have a problem with in this diff are the hitsounds. Your samples are a bit overpowering, so I'm really questioning if stuff like 01:02:738 (4) - or 01:11:881 (4) - are good rhythm choices. I can see that you want to emphasize vocals in places like these and trying to avoid too much 1/2 spam but when you suddenly stop following the backbeat here it sounds really empty.
    I suggest you use a different rhythm or hitsounding pattern. You can look at the other harder diffs for ideas because this only happens in your extra and light insane. I think the way of mapping to vocals and ignoring some of the downbeats is completely legit (that is present in many ranked maps and does follow the song), and this is my way of mapping those. as for the hitsounding patterns - I might remove some of the hitsounds so that it doesn't sound that empty (though I'm personally fine with that lol), gotta think about it
    01:17:738 (2) - is another good example of poor rhythm choices conflicting with the hitsounding pattern. tried smth else, I actually noticed that this section doesn't really follow the same logic - (1) and (2) were just mapped to the vocals and then I switched to drums
  2. 00:56:310 (1,2,3) - 3 claps + vocals should have way more spacing emphasis than 00:55:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - so imo switch the spacing between these two sets of jumps I'd rather say that all those jumps before are like the buildup which resolves at 00:55:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - , and then it's like going down in intensity a bit. I still increased the spacing on those, though they're still smaller than 00:55:738 (1,2,3,4,5) -


Light Insane
  1. Pretty much the same thing about hitsounds as Chaos diff.
^
thanks!

also @Mentai: I noticed that 00:57:738 (4,1) - aren't stacked for whatever reason, might want to fix that
Topic Starter
Jabba

tokiko wrote:

  • [General]
  1. мне кажется, что тебе нужно замапать изи, который будет состоять из одних 1/1 слайдеров (для баланса, так сказать) нормал как нижняя диффа подходит, он изначально изиком и назывался, но мы с Ризеном пообсуждали чутка и я пришел к выводу, что его лучше нормалом назвать, а бывший нормал в advanced переименовать. в нормале и так не юзаются 1/2 совершенно, поэтому не думаю, что еще одна диффа нужна
  2. некоторые диффы заканчиваются в разное время, это не так страшно, но кто-нибудь обязательно может пристать, поэтому проверь на всякий случай а эт норма, там просто кто-то мапает последние 4 бита, а кто-то нет. ну и плюс это ГДшеры, так что, думаю, это полностью их право
  • [Normal]
  1. сделай хитсаунды потише, а то этот хлопок иногда сильно бьёт по ушам (это ко всему мапсету относится) ыыы, я и так уже два раза тише их делал лол. срезал до 60 в киае/45 обычный

    [Advanced]

  2. не надо мапать всё с одинаковым дс, это странно выглядит, тем более в адванседе. попробуй раздвинуть некоторые паттерны, если хочешь я уже выше написал, что это диффа раньше была нормалом, поэтому и замапаной была с одинаковым дс. я так пробежался по ранкнутым advanced диффам примерно такого же старрейта, там почти все с ДСом включенным мапнуты. я подумаю еще, мб на нк повыделяю дичь
  3. 01:10:024 (1,2,3) - тут лучше сделать приятный треугольничек не треугольничек, ибо это фишка изи диффы, а здесь они не юзаются, а раздвинуть чуть подальше - там действительно слишком маленький спейсинг был
  4. 01:26:024 (1) - поставь эту ноту в другое место, а то как-то слишком однообразно получается с этой нотой все так и задумано, ее максимум логично ставить по центру как просто один большой завершающий бит перед спиннером

    [Light Insane]

  5. 00:05:024 (2) - может ctrl+g попробуешь? выглядит неплохо, но чет по-моему дс тогда слишком большим станет для секции. у этого паттерна идея в том, что там слайдеры можно почти не вести, и тогда получится достаточно небольшой дс между объектами
  6. 00:14:738 (5,6) - и тут тоже 7-1 тогда очень неудобный джамп получается с переменой флоу в другую сторону
  7. 00:17:595 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - попробуй дать этому больше пространства путём увеличение спейсинга между двоечками чутка поменял паттернинг, теперь больше соответствует затуханию в музыке
  8. 00:19:310 (5) - может 1/4 слайдер лучше будет? я сначала и здесь сделал этот 1/4, а потом так посмотрел диффы - там на всех гд, начиная с инса, здесь 1/4 есть. поэтому я, чтобы уж не выделялось особо, здесь оставлю ноту, а в ласте слайдер
  9. 01:26:024 (1) - любишь ты середину эдитора ^

    [Chaos]

  10. 00:19:310 (5) - сейм ас эбаув (если ты это принял конечно) ^
  11. 00:37:453 (4) - можно нк можно, на самом-то деле
  12. 00:57:738 (7,1) - пофикси стак. а ещё мне кажется, что 00:57:738 (7) - с ctrl+g лучше выглядит флоу кстати тоже получше, я даже уже не помню, почему я именно в ту сторону хотел его сделать
  13. 01:22:595 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - хайтай вообще это брэнд-нью ворлд ризии!
удачи
спасибо!
Mentai
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Asuka_-
im not good at english
i use google translate


Seni wrote:

Asuka_'s Insane

  1. 01:05:738 -
    01:06:167 - I think it's really bad to ignore these ticks when you don't need to since 01:05:738 is a snare and should definitely be emphasized. You are putting too much emphasis on vocals here by undermapping and it really takes away from the music, even more so because of how strong the hitsound samples are.

It is consistent with 00:08:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - .
But it is certainly true. xD
I keep for now, but I will change it when pointed out by many people.
nice mod Thanks!!
Kaitjuh
m4m from queue

General

  1. The hitsounds are pretty dang loud in Zel's and (borderline) eze's diff imo, during the kiai i think the max volume should be around 60-70%, since at higher volumes it just completely drowns out the music. Maybe consider copying the volumes from other diffs? Since I think the volume is better controlled there.
  2. the mp3 file is 128 kbps atm, maybe try finding one thats 192 kpbs?

Mentai's Hard

  1. 00:03:738 - Pretty loud beat here, consider mapping it?
  2. 00:40:453 (2,4) - b l a n k e t s , use the sliderball ring as a guide xd there are more out there so look for those
  3. 00:51:453 (4) - space further for consistency?
  4. 00:58:595 (1) - this unstack looks a bit off, either stack it fully or overlap it like some other people do 1/1 gaps https://puu.sh/w1HqH/5d16bd198d.png This was probably just a stack that unstacked during editing though.

Light Insane

  1. 00:02:453 (1,2) - Ctrl+G the rhythm since the strong sound ends on a sliderend atm. It'd be more intuitive if strong sounds were clickable.
There seems to be a heavy focus on vocals in your own diffs, not just your light insane. This is quite a shame since there a lot of beats that remain unemphasized that land on strong sounds like snare drums. Imo the map is decent but could be a lot better if you incorporated not only vocals, but also account for other instruments in the song like the drums. I could continue pointing out minor flaws in the map but the structure would still remain the same.

Asuka_-'s Insane

  1. 00:03:167 (3) - Map a 1/1 Slider instead for the long vocal?
  2. 00:32:024 (4) - maybe space a bit more bc its a strong snare
  3. 01:21:453 (1) - since you tend to emphasize new combo's more, space this further or you could Ctrl+G. I've found out the flow on Ctrl+G works quite well.


you can mod back only part of my map tbh, i didnt really do much because of the above reason: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/614235

Good Luck o/
Topic Starter
Jabba

Kaitjuh wrote:

m4m from queue

General

  1. the mp3 file is 128 kbps atm, maybe try finding one thats 192 kpbs?
I'll try, the problem is that's the only mp3 with 4 beats in the end (01:30:024 - ) I could find, the rest has a fade-out at the end (literally any other set except one I've taken this mp3 from, can't really remember which one). I'll try though


Light Insane

  1. 00:02:453 (1,2) - Ctrl+G the rhythm since the strong sound ends on a sliderend atm. It'd be more intuitive if strong sounds were clickable.
intended, as the section focuses on vocals. I actually prefer this as an 1/2 slider, but people kept asking me to map 00:02:595 - so I did this xd

There seems to be a heavy focus on vocals in your own diffs, not just your light insane. This is quite a shame since there a lot of beats that remain unemphasized that land on strong sounds like snare drums. Imo the map is decent but could be a lot better if you incorporated not only vocals, but also account for other instruments in the song like the drums. I could continue pointing out minor flaws in the map but the structure would still remain the same. I usually don't do "it's my style"-type responses, but this is actually the case - I believe that mapping to the vocals is quite a legit way to map and it fits the song. insane actually focuses on beats a bit more than the last diff, and in both diffs I still try to map beats even with sliderends. I might think about adding more emphasized beats tho

Good Luck o/
thanks! I'll mod the entire set anyway lol
Joe Castle
HI! im here from #modreqs since you requested mods there!
i hope this mod can help you a bit :(

Normal:

didnt found any problems at all, in my opinión it looks good


Advance:

1. im a Little problematic with all those objects near to each other in almost all the map, but idk


Mentai´s Hard:

1. 00:03:167 (4) - move this slider to: X:72 - y:184
2. 00:23:738 (5,6) - It could look more cooler if the second slider could go to the other way
3. 00:35:738 (1,2) - the second slider should have the angle of the first one, because it looks weird
4. 00:50:595 (1,2,3,4) - all this sliders should have an equal spacing
5. 00:56:310 (1,2,3,4) - make combo "2,3,4" closer to the circle "1"


Light Insane:

1. 00:16:310 (1,2) - make this combo look like the sliders at 00:15:167 (1,2)

Asuka_-´s Insane:

1. 01:04:881 (4,5,6) - try doing something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8187532 or put the circle more down
2. 01:12:881 (3,4,5) - this circles look weird, make a wider triangle maybe?
3. 01:14:024 (4,5,6) - same reason as #2
4. 01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - it looks like you just dropped a bunch of circles randomly for me :S try doing this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8187544 (thats just my idea)


Eze´s Extra:

1. 00:02:881 (2,3,4,5) - put the triplet a Little bit closer to the curve of the stream
2. 00:05:453 (1,2,3) - move the circles directly to the sliderend
3. 01:17:738 (3,1) - make this objects a Little bit closer too
4. 01:20:024 (3,1) - make here the same thing you made on 01:17:738 (3,1), so they can look the exact way


Zel´s Extreme:

1. 00:02:881 (2,1) - make a Little bit more spacing on this objects
2. 00:03:167 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - i dont really see the point of the circles there, when there is no sound where you can map that...
3. 01:21:453 (1,2,1,2,1) - this is just an idea, but why not making a "down, up, down, up, down" thingy? i mean, the first slider goes down, then the second goes up and like that :o
4. 01:25:738 (3) - replace this with a circle
5. 01:30:453 (4) - im not really sure about this that being that long, there is a better way to replace it?


Chaos:

1. 00:01:453 (1,2,3,4) - move the "3,4" part a bit down, it looks weird there
2. 00:21:167 (2,3,4) - make this sliders have an equal space between them
3. 00:58:310 (1) - rotate this a bit to the right, so it doesnt look that weird
4. 01:00:024 (3,4,5) - same thing that #2
5. 01:09:167 (2,3,4) - same problema here
6. 01:13:738 (2,3,4) - i think you made this to have more and more spacing between every slider, but you kinda went a Little bit far with the last one, fix that


i hope this mod helped a Little bit at least :(
Mentai

Kaitjuh wrote:

Mentai's Hard

  1. 00:03:738 - Pretty loud beat here, consider mapping it? may be, but its not a sin to skip a drum beat. waiting on more feedback
  2. 00:40:453 (2,4) - b l a n k e t s , use the sliderball ring as a guide xd there are more out there so look for those oops
  3. 00:51:453 (4) - space further for consistency? yes
  4. 00:58:595 (1) - this unstack looks a bit off, either stack it fully or overlap it like some other people do 1/1 gaps https://puu.sh/w1HqH/5d16bd198d.png This was probably just a stack that unstacked during editing though. yeah, adjusted earlier, just wasnt updated xd

ty!

[quote="Joe Castle"]



Mentai´s Hard:

1. 00:03:167 (4) - move this slider to: X:72 - y:184 too cramped 4 me
2. 00:23:738 (5,6) - It could look more cooler if the second slider could go to the other way you're right, but i also can't use large ds in this very calm section
3. 00:35:738 (1,2) - the second slider should have the angle of the first one, because it looks weird they are the same! maybe because they arent blanketed?
4. 00:50:595 (1,2,3,4) - all this sliders should have an equal spacing yes
5. 00:56:310 (1,2,3,4) - make combo "2,3,4" closer to the circle "1"not sure what you meant, but this caused me to fix a blanket, so thanks


thX 4 modz xd
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332,100,52595,2,0,P|309:78|294:51,1,62.9999980773926,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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312,228,70024,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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216,192,70881,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Jabba

Joe Castle wrote:

HI! im here from #modreqs since you requested mods there!
i hope this mod can help you a bit :(

Normal:

didnt found any problems at all, in my opinión it looks good


Advance:

1. im a Little problematic with all those objects near to each other in almost all the map, but idk that's just basic 1/2 spacing, nothing too strange

Light Insane:

1. 00:16:310 (1,2) - make this combo look like the sliders at 00:15:167 (1,2) nice find, fixed

Chaos:

1. 00:01:453 (1,2,3,4) - move the "3,4" part a bit down, it looks weird there looks fine imo
2. 00:21:167 (2,3,4) - make this sliders have an equal space between them 0.1x difference is not that much I think. I tried to make them the same but the latter patterning is kinda fixed and I can't rotate it properly without it going offscreen, so I'll have to keep this
3. 00:58:310 (1) - rotate this a bit to the right, so it doesnt look that weird it didn't look weird at all, but I had another idea
4. 01:00:024 (3,4,5) - same thing that #2 reworked the pattern a bit, changed the spacing in other way
5. 01:09:167 (2,3,4) - same problema here ^
6. 01:13:738 (2,3,4) - i think you made this to have more and more spacing between every slider, but you kinda went a Little bit far with the last one, fix that not really, (3) is supposed to have a bit less spacing, just like 01:04:595 (2,3,4) -


i hope this mod helped a Little bit at least :(
thanks!
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