some small suggestion. no kd 1234

[JAPARIPA]
00:16:132 (16132|3) - consider moving it to 3 to anchor with the previous note
00:26:014 (26014|2,26191|2) - consider moving these to 2 and 00:26:191 (26191|0) - to 3 to anchor with the previous note
00:26:720 (26720|1,26897|1) - use 2 notes each instead of one? inconsistency here
00:50:720 (50720|2) - consider moving these to 4 and ctrl+g on 00:50:897 (50897|3,50985|2) - to anchor with the previous note

AncuL wrote:

some small suggestion. no kd 1234

[JAPARIPA]
00:16:132 (16132|3) - consider moving it to 3 to anchor with the previous note ×
00:26:014 (26014|2,26191|2) - consider moving these to 2 and 00:26:191 (26191|0) - to 3 to anchor with the previous note √
00:26:720 (26720|1,26897|1) - use 2 notes each instead of one? inconsistency here √
00:50:720 (50720|2) - consider moving these to 4 and ctrl+g on 00:50:897 (50897|3,50985|2) - to anchor with the previous note ×

thank u

Tofu1222's Hard → Tofu's Hard

Updated!

boop

Easy:

- 00:05:897 - is better make a hs each note consistency like 00:41:191 (41191|2,41191|1) - sound balance kinda so add whistle in 00:05:897 (5897|1) - same part similar

- missing whistle in 00:54:955 (54955|1) -

Etsu wrote:

Easy:

- 00:05:897 - is better make a hs each note consistency like 00:41:191 (41191|2,41191|1) - sound balance kinda so add whistle in 00:05:897 (5897|1) - same part similar

- missing whistle in 00:54:955 (54955|1) -

lol, thanks mod

The second times destruction bubble by me


Updated!

[EZ]
00:03:602 - suggest to move this note to 1, since this sound is different with the previous sound, using something other and stair can show that feeling (plus too much left to right pattern in this part)
00:03:955 (3955|0,4132|1,4308|3) - CTRL+H if you apply my previous mod
00:05:367 (5367|0) - you might want to change this pattern into a small trills img, you can hear new sound (piano i think) start from here, use trills to emphasize that sound
00:16:485 - i can see you are using 1/2 to simplify the 1/4, but the vocal is also quite catchy, change the first note to LN for the vocal and drum roll is better imo, by what i mean img
00:42:602 - cant understand the LNs here, while the main sounds stop at here 00:43:132 - then back in 00:43:485 - (something like img), spam 1/1 thru this part is clearly a bad decision, might just change the LNs to 1/2 normal note
01:27:073 (87073|1) - to 4? just feel it make the pattern more balance
[NM]
00:05:897 - why not use double to focus on the bell sound, its much more better than focusing on the drum img
00:56:544 - 00:57:249 - 00:57:955 - feels weird not having note for these sound, they are either snare drum or bell, both very noticeable and catchy, pls add (if this change makes the SR go over 2.2, you can reduce some double)
00:58:132 - if you my last mod, you can change to pattern to smth like img, using 1/2 jack to build up the intensity as the music itself goes up
[JAPARIPA!]
00:13:661 - Quite hard to read, try this perhaps img
00:21:249 (21249|3) - The vocal is actually stop at 00:21:470 - , but i suggest you to end this LN early at 00:21:426 - , the current 00:21:514 - feels weird to hit
00:22:132 (22132|0,22397|3) - II believe these LNs are 1/2 instead of 1/4
00:24:249 (24249|3,24602|0,24955|1) - If you are using the LN for the vocal, the last one 00:24:955 (24955|1) - should end at 00:25:308 - or 00:25:485 - here if you want. If you are following the background main sound, you sound extend all the LNs to 1/1 length (no gap between) like img
00:35:014 (35014|3) - is this a mistake or wat... finish it at 00:35:191 - pls

Also, since the HS are same pitch with the music itself, pls raise the volume to 50% (or even 70%) so the player can notice the HS. Otherwise it will be consider as blending

YaHao wrote:

[EZ]
00:03:602 - suggest to move this note to 1, since this sound is different with the previous sound, using something other and stair can show that feeling (plus too much left to right pattern in this part)
00:03:955 (3955|0,4132|1,4308|3) - CTRL+H if you apply my previous mod
00:05:367 (5367|0) - you might want to change this pattern into a small trills img, you can hear new sound (piano i think) start from here, use trills to emphasize that sound
00:16:485 - i can see you are using 1/2 to simplify the 1/4, but the vocal is also quite catchy, change the first note to LN for the vocal and drum roll is better imo, by what i mean img
00:42:602 - cant understand the LNs here, while the main sounds stop at here 00:43:132 - then back in 00:43:485 - (something like img), spam 1/1 thru this part is clearly a bad decision, might just change the LNs to 1/2 normal note
01:27:073 (87073|1) - to 4? just feel it make the pattern more balance
all fixed
[NM]
00:05:897 - why not use double to focus on the bell sound, its much more better than focusing on the drum img
00:56:544 - 00:57:249 - 00:57:955 - feels weird not having note for these sound, they are either snare drum or bell, both very noticeable and catchy, pls add (if this change makes the SR go over 2.2, you can reduce some double)
00:58:132 - if you my last mod, you can change to pattern to smth like img, using 1/2 jack to build up the intensity as the music itself goes up
all fixed
[JAPARIPA!]
00:13:661 - Quite hard to read, try this perhaps img No, I think it is not hard to read
00:21:249 (21249|3) - The vocal is actually stop at 00:21:470 - , but i suggest you to end this LN early at 00:21:426 - , the current 00:21:514 - feels weird to hit
00:22:132 (22132|0,22397|3) - II believe these LNs are 1/2 instead of 1/4
00:24:249 (24249|3,24602|0,24955|1) - If you are using the LN for the vocal, the last one 00:24:955 (24955|1) - should end at 00:25:308 - or 00:25:485 - here if you want. If you are following the background main sound, you sound extend all the LNs to 1/1 length (no gap between) like img I following the background main sound
00:35:014 (35014|3) - is this a mistake or wat... finish it at 00:35:191 - pls

Also, since the HS are same pitch with the music itself, pls raise the volume to 50% (or even 70%) so the player can notice the HS. Otherwise it will be consider as blending

I raised to 60%

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Thanks check, but Why not check the Tofu's diff?

Updated!

ExNeko wrote:

YaHao wrote:

00:24:249 (24249|3,24602|0,24955|1) - If you are using the LN for the vocal, the last one 00:24:955 (24955|1) - should end at 00:25:308 - or 00:25:485 - here if you want. If you are following the background main sound, you sound extend all the LNs to 1/1 length (no gap between) like img I following the background main sound

Then why you still keeping the 1/2 gap

[JAPARIPA!]
Some addition mod
00:15:602 (15602|0) - Should end at 00:15:779 -

[Hard]
00:42:602 - suggest to emphasize the mainsound in here (using double). way better than following the snare drum imo img
00:45:867 - ghost note i believe
01:07:308 (67308|3,67661|3,68014|3,68367|3,68720|3,69073|3,69426|3,69779|3,70132|3,70485|3,70838|3,71191|3,71544|3,71897|3,72249|3,72602|3) - you might want to fix this, there is no point of keeping smth like this (and some part after this, i find that you like to spam 1 4 col a lot for some reason)

get the map back to bubble stage after you fix, and also, i didnt mod the full mapset because i was busy, dont panic and keep asking me why i didnt mod blah blah

YaHao wrote:

Then why you still keeping the 1/2 gap

ok

[JAPARIPA!]
Some addition mod
00:15:602 (15602|0) - Should end at 00:15:779 -



get the map back to bubble stage after you fix, and also, i didnt mod the full mapset because i was busy, dont panic and keep asking me why i didnt mod blah blah

All modified,
Thanks again


Updated!

YaHao wrote:

[Hard]
00:42:602 - suggest to emphasize the mainsound in here (using double). way better than following the snare drum imo img fixed in a different way but same note amount
00:45:867 - ghost note i believe deleted
01:07:308 (67308|3,67661|3,68014|3,68367|3,68720|3,69073|3,69426|3,69779|3,70132|3,70485|3,70838|3,71191|3,71544|3,71897|3,72249|3,72602|3) - you might want to fix this, there is no point of keeping smth like this (and some part after this, i find that you like to spam 1 4 col a lot for some reason) rearrange the pattern in this part

get the map back to bubble stage after you fix, and also, i didnt mod the full mapset because i was busy, dont panic and keep asking me why i didnt mod blah blah

I didnt mean to make you rush, but just ask for progress lol. Anyway thanks for mods!

http://puu.sh/wB2MK/7f93d9d4bb.wav
drum-hitwhistle have some unecessary silence. replace with this (saving 200+kb lol)

Rivals_7 wrote:

http://puu.sh/wB2MK/7f93d9d4bb.wav
drum-hitwhistle have some unecessary silence. replace with this (saving 200+kb lol)

Done
thx

Updated!

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uh what?
dude 24 h pls lmao

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