Gravity00:02:246 - 00:02:408 - could add a note here for the main melody and remove SV, or just keep the same//okay keep coz start from 00:01:922 - ijust follow the kick
00:04:030 (4030|6,4084|5,4138|4) - this part is just 1/4//okay
00:04:841 - should be triple here for drum//00:05:165 (5165|4,5165|6,5246|1,5246|0) - concistency with them
00:05:652 (5652|3) - change this to LN instead, ends it at 00:05:652 (5652|3) - for the main melody, and end 00:05:408 (5408|0) - at 00:05:652 - if u accept this.//rearrange into
https://puu.sh/y4bIn/da5b3e54fa.png//too hard lmao
00:07:435 - I suggest to change this to less-dense chordstream but continuour to represent the main melody, smth like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/936561600:16:962 (16962|4,17652|5,19638|3,19881|3,19962|5,20206|1,20287|2,20489|0,20570|1,22800|2,22881|1) - snap these to 1/6//the first note is okay but the second note i keep this, coz it's part of
https://puu.sh/y4bSZ/bc6c137fb2.png00:28:597 - can add a double/triple here //sure
00:41:489 (41489|6,41489|5,41570|5,41570|6) - why suddenly a jack here ?//rearrange
00:44:165 - same as 00:28:597 - //okay, rearrange
00:46:273 - ^ also 00:46:597 - //^
00:49:354 - ^//^
00:56:165 - could add a note here for the main melody//added in 4
01:02:165 - should be hand here//consider
01:11:976 (71976|3,72138|3,72300|3,72462|3) - >_>, maybe swap 01:12:462 (72462|3,72543|1,72706|3) - //nope
01:18:624 - double should be here instead at 01:18:706 - //
01:19:516 (79516|0,79516|6,79516|3,79597|3,79597|6,79597|0) - I personally dont like chordstream->jack , maybe change [13457] tp [2356], also 01:19:516 - shouldn't be triple//okay
01:25:652 (85652|2,85706|1,85814|3,85868|2) - this is in 1/4//okay
01:26:895 - maybe smth like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9365765 to prevent stack at 6//no. thanks
01:32:408 (92408|1) - move to 4//nope
01:33:381 (93381|5,93381|4,93462|5,93462|6) - umm jack//?
01:36:246 - put a not here//sure , why note
01:36:381 - and 01:36:543 - missing note for drum //okay
01:36:624 - why you ignore the piano in this part, idk it would be better to add piano here imo.//just follow the kicks to give a little time relax for the hardest part
01:44:408 - could be quad here//okay
01:47:706 (107706|2,107760|3,107868|1,107922|2,108030|0,108084|1) - this is in 1/4//rearrange
01:51:543 (111543|0,111543|2,111624|1,111706|2,111706|0,111787|1,111868|2,111868|0) - uggh ban this pls//consider
01:52:030(112030|2,112030|4,112030|3,112111|0,112111|1,112111|6,112111|5,112192|3,112192|2,112192|4,112273|5,112273|0,112273|6,112273|1,112354|3,112354|2,112354|4,112435|5,112435|0,112435|6,112435|1,112516|3,112516|2,112516|4) - why this is the only part where it is 343434343, other part all goes with 4343434//nope
01:56:084 - maybe do smth like this,
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9365846,single isn't enough for drum imo// i thinks just only one its enought coz i just follow the synth and the kick tbh
01:57:706 - If u accept above ^, put this double, maybe put a note for piano here also,but just a suggestion//nope
01:58:638 (118638|5) - ghost//rearrange
02:00:219 - missing a note here