13:57 Kaifin: oh you might wanna do od 8.5 or 8.8 or something sily
13:57 Kaifin: cause of the stream spacing
13:58 Kaifin: dont have to go to 9 if you dont want to but 9 is also option

Kaifin wrote:

reality distraction

13:16 *Kaifin is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1231971 Camellia Vs Akira Complex - Reality Distortion [rrtyui x Sing's Transference (NEW)]]
13:16 Kaifin: can feel the editor lagging as i type nice
13:16 Sing: lmaoo
13:16 Kaifin: all those 1/8 slider triples play really well in rrtyuis part so if anyone says to change them dont
13:17 Sing: ye we wont
13:17 Kaifin: some bn will tell you to change them
13:17 Kaifin: but as you can see they are easily playable
13:17 Kaifin: how do i disable sb in the editooro
13:17 Kaifin: so i can mod
13:17 Sing: coby .osb
13:17 Sing: into sb folder
13:17 Sing: cut*
13:18 Kaifin: i tried to open osb in notepad
13:18 Kaifin: it crashed
13:18 Sing: just cut the entire file
13:18 Sing: dont open it
13:18 Sing: xd
13:18 Kaifin: i deleted the sb foolder
13:19 Sing: wew nic
13:19 Kaifin: is this first part you
13:19 Sing: ya
13:19 Kaifin: 00:19:553 (2) - i understand what these are mapped to but i think it would be better if you made the "aaaaaaa" clickable instead
13:19 Sing: okok
13:20 Kaifin: cause like it sounds like its off
13:20 Kaifin: u get me
13:20 Kaifin: that applies to all of them
13:20 Sing: this good?https://puu.sh/ycups/cd779f3fbd.png
13:20 Kaifin: 00:23:753 -
13:20 Kaifin: this stuff is all fine tho
13:20 Kaifin: ye
13:21 Sing: aite
13:21 Kaifin: wait
13:21 Kaifin: what i mean is to move 00:19:553 (2) - back to 00:19:403 -
13:21 Kaifin: and still have the slider end on the other "aaaa" sound unless you want to make it a circle
13:21 Sing: oh ok
13:22 Kaifin: since its held and it sounds off
13:22 Kaifin: 00:29:153 (2) - and then this one too
13:22 Sing: yeye its bettr now
13:22 Kaifin: i think the other ones are fine
13:22 Kaifin: also since you map the sound 00:30:353 (3) - here
13:22 Kaifin: you might want to consider mapping it back there
13:22 Kaifin: 00:30:953 (1,2) - is this a hidden repeat cause i cant see it lol
13:22 Sing: yea it is
13:23 Sing: ill fix tht
13:24 Kaifin: 01:06:353 (3) -
13:24 Kaifin: if you shorten this to the blue tick and add a circle i think this will look a lot better
13:24 Kaifin: the whole thing looks really weird rn
13:24 Sing: aite
13:25 Kaifin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9447210
13:25 Kaifin: you could do it like this or something
13:26 Sing: https://puu.sh/ycuHk/f80a4751c3.png yee
13:26 Kaifin: 01:35:153 (1,2,3,4) - if you move this a touch to the left it'll be a lot easier
13:26 Sing: o thts rrtyuis
13:26 Kaifin: i broke on it both runs cause its a weird angle
13:26 Kaifin: O
13:26 Sing: i can jus move it tho
13:26 Sing: not a big deal
13:27 Kaifin: would mention it to him
13:27 Kaifin: almost like a lil blanket http://puu.sh/ycuKo/a2eacfb009.jpg
13:27 Sing: ye i will
13:27 Sing: yea it is a blanket
13:27 Sing: thts y when i moved it i rotated it too
13:27 Sing: to keep the blanket
13:28 Kaifin: 01:44:153 (1) - is this is purposely lik a super normal slider
13:28 Kaifin: stuck out as exceedingly normal to the point where it looked a little silly
13:28 Sing: yea
13:28 Sing: mm i can try change it
13:28 Sing: lul
13:28 Kaifin: maybe you could like slowly distort it at the end or something
13:28 Kaifin: cause the sound starts to do that
13:29 Kaifin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9447238
13:29 Kaifin: Sad boys
13:29 Kaifin: Free My Man
13:29 Sing: xd
13:30 Kaifin: 02:22:553 - fc choke point
13:30 Kaifin: but its Good
13:30 Sing: yea
13:30 Kaifin: 02:25:703 (1,1) - hidden repeat
13:31 Kaifin: lol did i even see this when playing wtf
13:31 Sing: yea it was evn worse when stacked
13:31 Sing: shiet
13:31 Sing: https://puu.sh/ycuWh/bb095e8cba.png
13:31 Sing: fixed
13:31 Kaifin: 02:29:603 (1,2,3,4,5) - lowering this a little bit more would help it with readability
13:32 Kaifin: i was lik O when it happened
13:32 Kaifin: cause the spacing isnt the same for any of the other stacked ones
13:32 Kaifin: i think if you changed the stream shape since the spacing stays the same, it'd be cooler
13:32 Kaifin: so i'd recommend that first
13:32 Kaifin: like how rrtyui does it in his part
13:33 Kaifin: 02:32:153 (1,2,1,2) - i understand the spacing idea here but a little bit more spacing between these pairs like this would be nice for flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9447267
13:33 Sing: aite aite
13:33 Kaifin: could make it even narrower angle like http://puu.sh/ycv1q/afc355ba51.jpg
13:33 Kaifin: sec phone call
13:34 Sing: okok
13:34 Sing: fixed all those
13:46 Kaifin: ok back
13:46 Sing: aite
13:48 Kaifin: 04:21:053 -
13:48 Kaifin: since all your streams start at the spacing of 04:19:853 (1,2) - or at least fully seperated
13:48 Kaifin: 04:22:253 (1,2) -
13:48 Kaifin: 04:23:453 (1,2) - examples
13:49 Kaifin: thats why i fully whiffed this in the run
13:49 Kaifin: i would buff the inital spacing a bit and adjust the increase accordingly
13:49 Kaifin: you might have to change the placement slightly to do this
13:49 Sing: okok
13:49 Kaifin: like this
13:50 Kaifin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9447376
13:50 Sing: https://puu.sh/ycvKX/7aa7b0fdef.png
13:50 Kaifin: yea that works
13:50 Sing: aite
13:50 Kaifin: my placement suggestion was trying to keep the big jump to 04:21:353 (1) -
13:50 Kaifin: cause thats the big focus in rrtyui's part as well
13:51 Kaifin: but yours is consistent with your spacing so it makes sense
13:51 Sing: yeye
13:51 Kaifin: 04:27:053 (1,2,3,4) - same complaint here
13:51 Kaifin: except here tbh i would just make it even spacing
13:52 Sing: https://puu.sh/ycvP7/dcdf35517d.png
13:52 Kaifin: i'm not sure how you could do expanding spacing and make it look nice with where all the objects are, but if you can do it
13:52 Kaifin: that works but move 2 and 3 like 2 pix to the left
13:52 Kaifin: left/up diagonal
13:52 Sing: aite
13:53 Kaifin: what i would do would be like uhhh http://puu.sh/ycvRO/f701c88cee.jpg
13:53 Kaifin: but keeping the expanding looks fine tooo
13:53 Kaifin: 04:30:653 (1,2,3,4) -
13:54 Kaifin: and this one 04:33:053 - which is especially O My because of how much it increases in spacing
13:54 Sing: well thas the end of the section
13:54 Sing: so larger increase makes sense
13:54 Kaifin: oh no the increase makes sense
13:54 Kaifin: just make sure the first 2 are spaced more
13:54 Kaifin: so its less awkward to fully ramp into the spaced motion
13:54 Sing: okok
13:55 Kaifin: 04:37:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this one's fine cause it goes from high to low
13:55 Kaifin: you might want to be careful stacking it though
13:55 Sing: https://puu.sh/ycvYf/412b1e3d9f.png
13:55 Sing: yea tru
13:55 Kaifin: lookz good
13:56 Kaifin: i think the end stuff is all g
13:56 Kaifin: its fine that its different from the start i think cause the 1/1 sounds are a lot more pronouced at the end
13:56 Kaifin: Nice Map

13:57 Kaifin: oh you might wanna do od 8.5 or 8.8 or something sily
13:57 Kaifin: cause of the stream spacing
13:58 Kaifin: dont have to go to 9 if you dont want to but 9 is also option

Kaifin wrote:

13:57 Kaifin: oh you might wanna do od 8.5 or 8.8 or something sily
13:57 Kaifin: cause of the stream spacing
13:58 Kaifin: dont have to go to 9 if you dont want to but 9 is also option

Irreversible wrote:

the sb

1. 01:06:653 (4) - NC for cut-stream?
2. 01:28:253 (1,2) - silence sliderend?
3. 01:30:653 (1,2) - ^
4. 01:51:203 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - swapping these two set of stream pattern should make it easier to read
5. 03:00:803 (3,1) - space them further?
6. 03:37:103 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The spacing here is much larger than the others I don't think it's necessary
7. 03:44:603 (1,1) - reduce spacing here? generally it feels too much for a slow part
8. 04:30:653 (1,2,3,4) - make it consistent with previous stream pattern? (e.g 04:21:053 (1,2,3,4) -) unlike 04:33:053 (1,2,3,4) - which is highlighting end of section music remains relatively the same which make this kinda sudden
9. 04:46:553 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - sex