Mirash wrote:

where are normal hitwhistles?

1. 00:16:946 (3) - A parallel slider with 00:17:309 (4) - rather than 00:16:582 (2) - would flow better, the flow currently feels a bit unnatural when the song is playing just drums, no vocals here.
2. 00:24:491 - huh you don't want a circle here? in before the map is called flawed fundamentally, you might want to make a variety in rhythm that also makes playing more fun. also the flow 00:24:400 (5,6) - you tend to like placing in this difficulty is not the best to represent the flow of 00:24:582 (6) - properly so a triplet can make it better in the both ways.
3. 01:02:764 (1) - after 512810410 months I still think this could've hitsounded by either finish or drum hitsounds lol.
4. 01:12:582 (6) - this will be fit better at higher place because the pitch of the vocal is higher here! 2017 mod https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8475445
5. 01:24:582 (1) - mapping a circular slider with 5 anchors lmao what year is it
6. 01:28:582 (2) - u didn't add a reverse dab

1. 00:40:946 (1,2,3,4) - I'd overlap each other so they don't look TOO hard while you can keep the play ability here.
2. 01:14:400 (1,2,3,4) - same

1. 00:05:490 (1) - in the case you may want to raise this object one grid up, this doesn't affect to game play but the pattern looking.
2. 00:26:218 (7) - I think kill this circle once and moving 00:26:400 (1) - onto 1/2 tick earlier (00:26:218 -) to make the rhythm easier to understand where you're following for.
3. 00:27:610 - yes same here, and a circle 00:28:218 -
4. 00:40:946 (4,5,6) - I feel the attempt to catch the 1/4 melodies and fail is a bit silly decision in this level of difficulty imo lol. if you wanted to differentiate it from those 1/1 + circle + 1/1, you might have a try 1/1 + circle + 1/2 reverse so you'll have something different but still not confusing in comparison.
5. 00:46:582 (3) - I would go with a stable 1/1 rhythm here according to other patterns such as 00:42:400 (1,2,3) -
6. 01:01:309 (3,1) - switch ncs tbh
7. 01:05:673 (1) - nc pls? the ncs on the chorus are kinda fucked up, you know.

Delis wrote:

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[General]
the part where you've been using drum whistles has a low volume overall, probably adjust the .wav to raise up the volume? I intentionally lower the volume of those hs, so it wouldn't be too standout
01:29:673 - is the best place to stop the beatmap as the both instrumental and vocal have ended. song still fade out till 01:30:400 -
[Insane]

1. 00:16:946 (3) - A parallel slider with 00:17:309 (4) - rather than 00:16:582 (2) - would flow better, the flow currently feels a bit unnatural when the song is playing just drums, no vocals here.
2. 00:24:491 - huh you don't want a circle here? in before the map is called flawed fundamentally, you might want to make a variety in rhythm that also makes playing more fun. also the flow 00:24:400 (5,6) - you tend to like placing in this difficulty is not the best to represent the flow of 00:24:582 (6) - properly so a triplet can make it better in the both ways. I have different interpretation on this 00:23:855 (2,3,4,5,6) - I want to highlight the vocal increase to its fullest. So instead of placing triplet, which kinda kills the emphasis on 00:24:582 -, I put a jump there with different flow compared to other flow on this section
3. 01:02:764 (1) - after 512810410 months I still think this could've hitsounded by either finish or drum hitsounds lol.
4. 01:12:582 (6) - this will be fit better at higher place because the pitch of the vocal is higher here! 2017 mod https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8475445
5. 01:24:582 (1) - mapping a circular slider with 5 anchors lmao what year is it 2017, year that "omg I'm mapping the oldstyle, I'm so cool"
6. 01:28:582 (2) - u didn't add a reverse dab

it feels like you've adjusted some of patterns in a worse way, or just me.
[Hard]

1. 00:40:946 (1,2,3,4) - I'd overlap each other so they don't look TOO hard while you can keep the play ability here. Aaaaa, I don't really like the looks of overlaping reverses lo
2. 01:14:400 (1,2,3,4) - same

[Normal]

1. 00:05:490 (1) - in the case you may want to raise this object one grid up, this doesn't affect to game play but the pattern looking.
2. 00:26:218 (7) - I think kill this circle once and moving 00:26:400 (1) - onto 1/2 tick earlier (00:26:218 -) to make the rhythm easier to understand where you're following for. tbh, I don't understand why it would make them easier to understand. Song is still consistent with the previous part
3. 00:27:610 - yes same here, and a circle 00:28:218 -
4. 00:40:946 (4,5,6) - I feel the attempt to catch the 1/4 melodies and fail is a bit silly decision in this level of difficulty imo lol. if you wanted to differentiate it from those 1/1 + circle + 1/1, you might have a try 1/1 + circle + 1/2 reverse so you'll have something different but still not confusing in comparison.
5. 00:46:582 (3) - I would go with a stable 1/1 rhythm here according to other patterns such as 00:42:400 (1,2,3) -
6. 01:01:309 (3,1) - switch ncs tbh
7. 01:05:673 (1) - nc pls? the ncs on the chorus are kinda fucked up, you know.

the bg made me hungry so i end up actually ez is ok