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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018년 1월 7일 일요일 at 오후 10:27:33

Artist: Chroma
Title: Hoshi ga Furanai Machi
Tags: pporse HAPPYNATION #02
BPM: 165
Filesize: 9397kb
Play Time: 05:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Meteor Shower // pporse's 7K - 7Key (6.6 stars, 5720 notes)
  2. Shooting Star // 4K - 4Key (4.64 stars, 4436 notes)


Download: Chroma - Hoshi ga Furanai Machi
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#7

Thanks to pporse
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안녕하심니까

Shooting Star // 4K
00:42:149 - 어떠심니까?
03:43:785 - 이런식으로 가는거 어떠신가여 특히 03:44:513 - 여기서부터 2스냅으로 3번 주는것도 음 괜찮게 살릴수있는거같음요
03:46:513 - 여기랑 03:46:604 - 여기 1놋씩 줘도 괜찮지 않을까요?
03:49:331 (229331|1) - 위에 모딩이 만약 수락되면 이것도 지우는것도 괜찮을꺼같네요
Meteor Outburst // pporse's 7K
04:30:331 - 여기에 4놋을 주시거나 아니면 04:30:695 - 여기를 3놋주고 04:30:785 - 이것도 3놋주는건 어떨까요?
04:51:785 - 여기도 4놋 어떠신가요?
호홓 :)
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Murumoo wrote:

안녕하심니까

Shooting Star // 4K
00:42:149 - 어떠심니까? // 바꿨습니다
03:43:785 - 이런식으로 가는거 어떠신가여 특히 03:44:513 - 여기서부터 2스냅으로 3번 주는것도 음 괜찮게 살릴수있는거같음요 // 저쪽이 애초에 동탁으로 컨셉을 잡았기때문에 메인음은 넣지않습니다
03:46:513 - 여기랑 03:46:604 - 여기 1놋씩 줘도 괜찮지 않을까요? // 위랑 같음
03:49:331 (229331|1) - 위에 모딩이 만약 수락되면 이것도 지우는것도 괜찮을꺼같네요
호홓 :)


고맙습니다 매번 도움이되네요
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Murumoo wrote:

안녕하심니까



Meteor Outburst // pporse's 7K
04:30:331 - 여기에 4놋을 주시거나 아니면 04:30:695 - 여기를 3놋주고 04:30:785 - 이것도 3놋주는건 어떨까요?
04:30:331 - 4노트로 바꿨어요
04:30:695 - 04:30:785 - 여기는 손배치 때문에 일단 유지

04:51:785 - 여기도 4놋 어떠신가요?
4노트로 수정했어요
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Lastopia's Miracle in the Night Sky Mod
NM from Personal Request

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[General]
  1. 카운트다운 꺼주세요
  2. 커스텀힛사는 넣으실생각 없으신가요? 4놋이 있는 clap소리들에 피니시만 들어가니 어색하기도 하고, 02:26:695 - 이런 소리에 이런거이런거좀 박아주고 05:38:695 - 여기에 이런거좀 박아주면 느낌도 살듯합니다


[Shooting Star // 4K]
  1. 00:52:876 - 이렇게하는것도 부드러우니 느낌 좋긴 한데 어떠세요?
  2. 00:58:695 - 이런곳을 이런 트릴과 같은 형태로 두고 다른곳을 조금 부드럽게 하면 참 좋을텐데 말이죠
  3. 03:13:967 - 여기도 03:13:240 - 요기처럼 트릴형태로 두시는건 어떠세요

    짧은모딩은 그닥 마음이 편하지 않은데 잡을게 ㄹㅇ 없음 일관성이 되게 좋아서 ㅋㅋㅋ
    롱놋없었을땐 더타곡이었는데 아쉽네


[Meteor Shower // pporse's 7K]
  1. 00:55:058 - 여기 짧은 롱놋 하나 놓치신거같네요 뒷부분 패턴을 보니 일관성이 맞지 않습니다
  2. 01:45:967 - 여기서부턴 스네어 말고 킥에서는 그냥 1놋인데 저는 2놋을 넣어도 느낌은 괜찮을것 같네요 이상태에선 뭔가 비는느낌이 들기도 하고요
  3. 05:06:695 (306695|3,307422|3) - 길이가 애매한것 같네요 화음이라 해야하나? 스타카토 같이 추가되는 짧은 메인음 표현하신 거 같네요 짧은 롱놋으로 해주시거나 더 길게 늘려주시면 좋을것 같은데 말이죠
  4. 05:49:604 - 여기서부터는 메인음도 롱놋으로 길게 늘려줬으면 좋았을거 같아요
    언랭용 표시였던 7롱놋이 없어졌네요! 이제 저도 7키 동시입력 안되는 제 키보드로도 칠 수 있겠군요 :)


정말 잡을게 없네요 노래 구조도 튀는게 없고 그래서 일관성도 잘 맞춰주셨고.. 다른사람이 모딩할때는 아마 세세한 패턴 문제를 봐드릴 것 같네요
저는 뭐 패턴은 잡을게 없어보여서 큰것만 잡아드렸어요 굿럭 두분다 잘만드셨습니다

and take my kudosu
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Lastopia wrote:

Lastopia's Miracle in the Night Sky Mod
NM from Personal Request

Columns:|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|



[Meteor Shower // pporse's 7K]
  1. 00:55:058 - 여기 짧은 롱놋 하나 놓치신거같네요 뒷부분 패턴을 보니 일관성이 맞지 않습니다
    그러네요 제가 놓친듯. 수정했습니다.
  2. 01:45:967 - 여기서부턴 스네어 말고 킥에서는 그냥 1놋인데 저는 2놋을 넣어도 느낌은 괜찮을것 같네요 이상태에선 뭔가 비는느낌이 들기도 하고요
    노트 하나 추가했어요.
  3. 05:06:695 (306695|3,307422|3) - 길이가 애매한것 같네요 화음이라 해야하나? 스타카토 같이 추가되는 짧은 메인음 표현하신 거 같네요 짧은 롱놋으로 해주시거나 더 길게 늘려주시면 좋을것 같은데 말이죠
    음..패턴 다른걸로 바꿔볼까도 생각 중인 파트인데 일단 조금씩 늘려봤어요. 다음에 다른 피드백이 오면 한번 바꿔봐야겠네요.
  4. 05:49:604 - 여기서부터는 메인음도 롱놋으로 길게 늘려줬으면 좋았을거 같아요
    롱놋으로도 한번 바꿔봤는데 단놋이 더 어울리는거 같아서 일단 유지해둘게요
    언랭용 표시였던 7롱놋이 없어졌네요! 이제 저도 7키 동시입력 안되는 제 키보드로도 칠 수 있겠군요 :)


정말 잡을게 없네요 노래 구조도 튀는게 없고 그래서 일관성도 잘 맞춰주셨고.. 다른사람이 모딩할때는 아마 세세한 패턴 문제를 봐드릴 것 같네요
저는 뭐 패턴은 잡을게 없어보여서 큰것만 잡아드렸어요 굿럭 두분다 잘만드셨습니다

and take my kudosu


모딩 감사합니다 :)
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Lastopia wrote:

Lastopia's Miracle in the Night Sky Mod
NM from Personal Request

Columns:|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|


[General]
  1. 카운트다운 꺼주세요
  2. 커스텀힛사는 넣으실생각 없으신가요? 4놋이 있는 clap소리들에 피니시만 들어가니 어색하기도 하고, 02:26:695 - 이런 소리에 이런거이런거좀 박아주고 05:38:695 - 여기에 이런거좀 박아주면 느낌도 살듯합니다


// 힛사는 기본적인 힛사만 박을겁니다

[Shooting Star // 4K]
  1. 00:52:876 - 이렇게하는것도 부드러우니 느낌 좋긴 한데 어떠세요? // 수정했습니다
  2. 00:58:695 - 이런곳을 이런 트릴과 같은 형태로 두고 다른곳을 조금 부드럽게 하면 참 좋을텐데 말이죠 // 이부분은 크게 넣을 포인트가 없어서 약하게 해도될거같습니다 제가 메인으로 생각하는 부분은 00:56:149 - ~00:58:695 - 이부분이기때문에 넘어가겠습니다
  3. 03:13:967 - 여기도 03:13:240 - 요기처럼 트릴형태로 두시는건 어떠세요// 이거도 노래에 따른 패턴이기떄문에 패스

    짧은모딩은 그닥 마음이 편하지 않은데 잡을게 ㄹㅇ 없음 일관성이 되게 좋아서 ㅋㅋㅋ
    롱놋없었을땐 더타곡이었는데 아쉽네


정말 잡을게 없네요 노래 구조도 튀는게 없고 그래서 일관성도 잘 맞춰주셨고.. 다른사람이 모딩할때는 아마 세세한 패턴 문제를 봐드릴 것 같네요
저는 뭐 패턴은 잡을게 없어보여서 큰것만 잡아드렸어요 굿럭 두분다 잘만드셨습니다

and take my kudosu


모딩 고맙습니다 :_)
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Nice beatmap :D

Shooting Star // 4K - 4Key

I'm overall pretty happy with this beatmap but maybe add some notes to the LN part like this (03:32:695) to help keep the rythm

My play here
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잘점해바라
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2017-12-14 20:22 Wonki: 두번째파트
2017-12-14 20:23 Wonki: 3놋으로바꿔야겠다
2017-12-14 20:25 Fontes: 지금다시쳐봣는데
2017-12-14 20:25 Fontes: 이대로 랭보내면 100% 욕먹음
2017-12-14 20:25 Fontes: 물론 4키
2017-12-14 20:25 Wonki: 난상관없음
2017-12-14 20:25 Wonki: 난노래에맞게
2017-12-14 20:25 Wonki: 만들었을뿐
2017-12-14 20:25 Fontes: 노래에 맞게짠건 맞는데
2017-12-14 20:25 Fontes: 초반부 노트를 너무 안쓴듯
2017-12-14 20:25 Fontes: 일단 체감상 너무 쉬운데다
2017-12-14 20:26 Fontes: 뒤에쪽에 다 몰아져잇어서 챌린지라할만한게
2017-12-14 20:26 Fontes: 저거 8스냅짜리를말하는게아니라
2017-12-14 20:26 Wonki: 난어거지로
2017-12-14 20:26 Wonki: 노트넣고싶진않음
2017-12-14 20:26 Fontes: 글쎄 내가보니까 어거지로아녀도 이쁘게 더 들어갈거같은데
2017-12-14 20:27 Fontes: 일단
2017-12-14 20:27 Fontes: 그
2017-12-14 20:27 Wonki: 기다려봐
2017-12-14 20:27 Wonki: 2번째 3놋넣고있음
2017-12-14 20:27 Fontes: 로도 마라톤 랭시킬려는거잇잖아
2017-12-14 20:27 Fontes: 그거 후살제외하고의 초중반패턴이
2017-12-14 20:27 Fontes: 딱 4성후반 5성초반대임
2017-12-14 20:27 Fontes: 솔직히 이게 전혀 5성같지않은패턴들인데
2017-12-14 20:28 Fontes: 8스냅구간땜에 별이올라간거라
2017-12-14 20:28 Fontes: 좀더 살을 많이붙일수잇는데 살짝아쉬움
2017-12-14 20:28 Wonki: 일부러
2017-12-14 20:28 Wonki: 초반에
2017-12-14 20:28 Wonki: 1,2놋만쓴건데
2017-12-14 20:28 Wonki: 점점올라가게하려고
2017-12-14 20:29 Fontes: 음
2017-12-14 20:29 Fontes: 전체적인 버프를 좀 줫으면 좋겟음
2017-12-14 20:29 Fontes: 뭐 의도는 느껴지는데
2017-12-14 20:29 Fontes: 좀 약해서
2017-12-14 20:29 Fontes: 이게 4.7정도면
2017-12-14 20:29 Fontes: 아니
2017-12-14 20:29 Fontes: 4.5~6?
2017-12-14 20:29 Fontes: 그정도면 적당한데
2017-12-14 20:29 Fontes: 초반부가 좀 살이넘 없는거같은느낌을
2017-12-14 20:29 Fontes: 지울수가읍어
2017-12-14 20:30 Fontes: 그리구 애초 4키니까
2017-12-14 20:30 Fontes: 노래에 맞게는 맞는데
2017-12-14 20:30 Fontes: 소리배정 노트수 늘려서
2017-12-14 20:31 Fontes: 패턴을 노리고 넣는것도
2017-12-14 20:31 Fontes: 나쁘지않다고생각함
2017-12-14 20:31 Fontes: 일단 애초 스트림이 난이도가 잘 안나오는데
2017-12-14 20:31 Fontes: 이건이미 5성이되어있으니까
2017-12-14 20:31 Fontes: 전체적인 살을 첨가해도
2017-12-14 20:32 Fontes: 더 좋아질수 잇을거라고 봄
2017-12-14 20:32 Fontes: 잠만 나손님옴
2017-12-14 20:33 Fontes: 그 로도 마라톤잇잖아
2017-12-14 20:33 Fontes: 그거 초반부 스트림정도가 딱 좋다고봄
2017-12-14 20:33 Fontes: 근데그건 브픔빨이라 체감이 훨씬 높지만
2017-12-14 20:33 Fontes: 그정도 밀도는 나와줘야 5성치는맛이날덧
2017-12-14 20:33 Fontes: 왜 그 비교해보면
2017-12-14 20:33 Fontes: 딱 5성초반하면
2017-12-14 20:33 Fontes: 오버더탑잇고
2017-12-14 20:34 Fontes: 치킨꺼 네오트레이션도잇고
2017-12-14 20:35 Fontes: 음 그 멜로디반복에 1 2 노트나 1노트만 배치한건 좋앗는데
2017-12-14 20:35 Fontes: 적어도 키아이밀도는 늘엇으면함
2017-12-14 20:36 Fontes: 아무튼 좀더 해보구
2017-12-14 20:36 Fontes: 그때 스레드 남겨주겟음
2017-12-14 20:36 Fontes: 이거 아얄로 치면안되냐?
2017-12-14 20:39 Wonki: 맘대로
2017-12-14 20:40 Wonki: 이게
2017-12-14 20:40 Wonki: 총3개의 하이라이트가있는데
2017-12-14 20:40 Wonki: 첫번째는 그대로할거고
2017-12-14 20:40 Wonki: 두번째는좀변화를줬음
2017-12-14 20:40 Wonki: 세번째는 후살식이고
2017-12-14 20:40 Fontes: 그 하이라이트에
2017-12-14 20:41 Fontes: 스네어드럼 3놋주고
2017-12-14 20:41 Fontes: 위로 잭섞는거 어떠냐
2017-12-14 20:41 Fontes: 그럼굳이 노트 안쑤셔박아도 체감은 올라갈텐데
2017-12-14 20:41 Wonki: https://puu.sh/yGep6/d754a7c273.jpg
2017-12-14 20:41 Wonki: 이게두번째꺼임
2017-12-14 20:42 Fontes: 이따 업뎃하면
2017-12-14 20:42 Fontes: 쳐봄
2017-12-14 20:50 Wonki: 업뎃함
2017-12-14 20:53 Fontes: ts
2017-12-14 20:53 Fontes: ㅅㄴ
2017-12-14 20:53 Wonki: 손님노답이네
2017-12-14 20:59 Wonki: 저거걍
2017-12-14 20:59 Wonki: 4개쾅쾅이하셈
2017-12-14 21:00 Wonki: 4개쾅쾅이 1/4
2017-12-14 21:01 Fontes: 저걸
2017-12-14 21:01 Fontes: 굳이
2017-12-14 21:01 Fontes: 쾅쾅으루해야되?
2017-12-14 21:01 Wonki: 패턴이
2017-12-14 21:01 Wonki: 내가
2017-12-14 21:01 Fontes: 아까보단
2017-12-14 21:01 Fontes: 낫네
2017-12-14 21:01 Wonki: 잭으로도해보고
2017-12-14 21:01 Wonki: 그냥1/8로도해봤는데
2017-12-14 21:01 Wonki: 느낌이안살어
2017-12-14 21:01 Fontes: 일단 이거 야알붙이고
2017-12-14 21:02 Wonki: 저긴쾅쾅이가답임
2017-12-14 21:02 Wonki: 올리슈
2017-12-14 21:02 Fontes: 집갈때 스레드 남겨줌
2017-12-14 21:02 Fontes: 이거 아얄남기는이유가
2017-12-14 21:02 Fontes: 2페채워야된다매
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Mortelspawn_ wrote:

Nice beatmap :D

Shooting Star // 4K - 4Key
I'm overall pretty happy with this beatmap but maybe add some notes to the LN part like this (03:32:695) to help keep the rythm

My play here


Yeah I appreciate that and Thank you for playing !
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[General]
Turn off the count down thing
Put "HAPPYNATION #02" in TAG as thats the song album.

[Shooting Star // 4K]
01:21:422 (81422|2,81513|2,81785|0,81876|0,82149|1,82240|1,82513|2,82604|2) - There is no same pitch sound in here i'm sure, putting them in the same col does make much sense.
01:33:558 (93558|0,93604|2,93695|0) - I find this pattern kinda weird to play, try CTRL+H 01:33:604 (93604|2,93649|3,93695|0,93740|1,93785|3,93785|2) - and move the 01:33:604 - to 2 3 col
01:34:331 - Feel this section is a bit empty, while there are so many sound in the background, this section only has LN for synth and single note for drum, suggest that you follow some 1/4 synth starting from 01:35:058 - 01:39:058 - 01:40:876 - etc
02:51:604 (171604|0,171604|1,171695|1,171695|0) - I didnt see you jack these sound in the previous section (01:17:058 (77058|2,77058|3,77149|1,77149|0) - ), and some snare drum are using double and some are not.
03:20:422 (200422|3) - I dont think its necessary to have a triple jack here (also the first triple jack thru the whole map which plays a bit weird), move to 3th col if you want
04:20:149 - I really cant agree on this section here, the sounds are 1/8 yes, so technically they are not wrong. But you have to know this section is indeed very calm, using this massive amount of note doesnt really suit the intensity here, not even mention the heavy 1/8 +1/4 double here 04:30:331 - the hardest part of the map, which it shouldnt from a musical aspect, sounds with higher intensity have easier pattern is really not a good choice.
05:21:240 - From here, it seems like you add 1 extra note for every snare drum compare with the previous section, i really cant see the reason here, its the last kiai section but yet they still the same sounds with same intensity same pitch.


Will do the 7k diff later tmr
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YaHao wrote:

[General]
Turn off the count down thing
Put "HAPPYNATION #02" in TAG as thats the song album. // done

[Shooting Star // 4K]
01:21:422 (81422|2,81513|2,81785|0,81876|0,82149|1,82240|1,82513|2,82604|2) - There is no same pitch sound in here i'm sure, putting them in the same col does make much sense. // The lower sounds have the same sounds which i represented it with jacks
01:33:558 (93558|0,93604|2,93695|0) - I find this pattern kinda weird to play, try CTRL+H 01:33:604 (93604|2,93649|3,93695|0,93740|1,93785|3,93785|2) - and move the 01:33:604 - to 2 3 col //There's a high possibility that pattern causes 200s. so i changed 43 12 43 12
01:34:331 - Feel this section is a bit empty, while there are so many sound in the background, this section only has LN for synth and single note for drum, suggest that you follow some 1/4 synth starting from 01:35:058 - 01:39:058 - 01:40:876 - etc // I added more notes
02:51:604 (171604|0,171604|1,171695|1,171695|0) - I didnt see you jack these sound in the previous section (01:17:058 (77058|2,77058|3,77149|1,77149|0) - ), and some snare drum are using double and some are not. // The jacks represent the main melody and the trills in the beginning are for easy playing
03:20:422 (200422|3) - I dont think its necessary to have a triple jack here (also the first triple jack thru the whole map which plays a bit weird), move to 3th col if you want
04:20:149 - I really cant agree on this section here, the sounds are 1/8 yes, so technically they are not wrong. But you have to know this section is indeed very calm, using this massive amount of note doesnt really suit the intensity here, not even mention the heavy 1/8 +1/4 double here 04:30:331 - the hardest part of the map, which it shouldnt from a musical aspect, sounds with higher intensity have easier pattern is really not a good choice. // This is the best pattern i could find and i put this because any other pattern does not fit in. I tried to put 2note 4 jacks but it didn't go well. That one is the best pattern too in my opinion
05:21:240 - From here, it seems like you add 1 extra note for every snare drum compare with the previous section, i really cant see the reason here, its the last kiai section but yet they still the same sounds with same intensity same pitch. It is the same reason as the starting part but this time i modified the melody section from jacks to trills like


Will do the 7k diff later tmr


Thanks you so much :)
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[Shooting Star // 4K]
04:30:331 - I'm still not ok with this pattern, the 1/8 + 1/4 double have definitely go over this map's overall difficulty. It involve massive triple 1/4 jacks in one col, and i dont see any other section have done the same thing and it shouldnt be used here. Suggest you focus on the 1/4 double only when the drum roll starts fading in

Will get to 7k once we settle the 4k diff
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YaHao wrote:

[Shooting Star // 4K]
04:30:331 - I'm still not ok with this pattern, the 1/8 + 1/4 double have definitely go over this map's overall difficulty. It involve massive triple 1/4 jacks in one col, and i dont see any other section have done the same thing and it shouldnt be used here. Suggest you focus on the 1/4 double only when the drum roll starts fading in

Will get to 7k once we settle the 4k diff



How about this?
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You must rank this map okay =w=

[Shooting Star // 4K]

  1. 00:55:785 (55785|2,55876|3) - ctrl + g, looks more neat and to matching with 01:01:695 - this pattern
  2. 00:58:876 (58876|0) - move this to 4 for avoiding the note stack on 00:58:331 (58331|0,58513|0,58695|0,58876|0,59149|0,59422|0) - here?
  3. 01:05:967 (65967|3,66058|0) - i suggest to ctrl + g this, since 01:06:058 (66058|0,66240|0) - this 2 notes on the same column is quite unreasonable bcs of different pitch xd
  4. 01:09:967 - ~ 01:10:604 - continuous same pattern? suggesting to 01:10:604 (70604|1,70695|2) - ctrl + g this, since the pace has changed and make it more connecting to the next pattern
  5. 02:09:604 (129604|2) - move to 4 for removing the stress on 02:09:513 (129513|1,129604|2,129695|1,129785|2,129876|1,129967|2) - here? since its not supposed to be trill on there :^)
  6. 02:38:331 (158331|3,158513|3,158695|3,158876|3,159058|3,159240|3,159422|3) - the note stack was too long :^) recommending to move 02:38:876 (158876|3) - this to 3 for resolving the problem
  7. 03:32:149 - i love this pattern <33
  8. 03:46:513 - add note like 03:45:058 - this one?
  9. 03:57:967 - how about like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9846876 this? seems more balanced and for avoiding 03:58:513 (238513|2,238604|1,238695|2,238785|1,238876|2,238967|1,239058|2,239149|1) - this long trill
  10. 04:03:604 - 04:05:058 - 04:05:422 - add note for the kick sound? dunno if this intentional or not xd
  11. 04:12:876 - should be triple for the finish sound?
  12. 04:20:149 - well i know its kind of the music itself, but still not recommending with this usage of long bursts, it quite turns out to be spam on 4K while on 7K it has more diversity so more naturally to play xd
  13. 05:18:967 (318967|2) - well this note is quite distracting the acc somehow :^) but seems unavoided lmao


Lovely jack pattern and nice LN pattern on the last kiai xD
Okay goodluck owo
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Kyousuke- wrote:

You must rank this map okay =w=

NO REPLY = FIXED
[Shooting Star // 4K]

  1. 00:55:785 (55785|2,55876|3) - ctrl + g, looks more neat and to matching with 01:01:695 - this pattern
  2. 00:58:876 (58876|0) - move this to 4 for avoiding the note stack on 00:58:331 (58331|0,58513|0,58695|0,58876|0,59149|0,59422|0) - here?
  3. 01:05:967 (65967|3,66058|0) - i suggest to ctrl + g this, since 01:06:058 (66058|0,66240|0) - this 2 notes on the same column is quite unreasonable bcs of different pitch xd
  4. 01:09:967 - ~ 01:10:604 - continuous same pattern? suggesting to 01:10:604 (70604|1,70695|2) - ctrl + g this, since the pace has changed and make it more connecting to the next pattern
  5. 02:09:604 (129604|2) - move to 4 for removing the stress on 02:09:513 (129513|1,129604|2,129695|1,129785|2,129876|1,129967|2) - here? since its not supposed to be trill on there :^)
  6. 02:38:331 (158331|3,158513|3,158695|3,158876|3,159058|3,159240|3,159422|3) - the note stack was too long :^) recommending to move 02:38:876 (158876|3) - this to 3 for resolving the problem
  7. 03:32:149 - i love this pattern <3 // LN LOVERS
  8. 03:46:513 - add note like 03:45:058 - this one?
  9. 03:57:967 - how about like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9846876 this? seems more balanced and for avoiding 03:58:513 (238513|2,238604|1,238695|2,238785|1,238876|2,238967|1,239058|2,239149|1) - this long trill
  10. 04:03:604 - 04:05:058 - 04:05:422 - add note for the kick sound? dunno if this intentional or not xd
  11. 04:12:876 - should be triple for the finish sound? // Too hard :O
  12. 04:20:149 - well i know its kind of the music itself, but still not recommending with this usage of long bursts, it quite turns out to be spam on 4K while on 7K it has more diversity so more naturally to play xd // Well, I think it's ok. but i try to find some better pattern
  13. 05:18:967 (318967|2) - well this note is quite distracting the acc somehow :^) but seems unavoided lmao // :D


Lovely jack pattern and nice LN pattern on the last kiai xD
okay goodluck owo

Thanks :) yee
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I fixed 04:57:967 - ~ some parts of kiai to fit 4.64★
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7k

01:05:240 (65240|1,65240|0,65513|5,65513|6) - hmm... i dont see any reason why suddenly increase the length of these LNs, the sounds are 1/4 long and your previous LNs also used 1/4. This apply to the kiai thats after

Call me when finished
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YaHao wrote:

7k

01:05:240 (65240|1,65240|0,65513|5,65513|6) - hmm... i dont see any reason why suddenly increase the length of these LNs, the sounds are 1/4 long and your previous LNs also used 1/4. This apply to the kiai thats after

Actually the sounds are 1/4 LN. but It is boring to use the same pattern in all parts. so, I wanted to make a little change.
It's just a change of length, but it can avoid boredom enough.



Call me when finished
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