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Hello Bulldog here from Mod Request. Most of what I have to say is just my thoughts. Hope I can be of some help 
00:28:708 (8) - any reason why this slider looks different than the ones before it
00:43:363 (2,3,4,5,6) - flow could feel better if you changed where the 1/4 slider ends
01:00:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these jumps seem way to large for what the song is actually doing. I would rather it warm up into the kaia section instead of just having large jumps that i dont feel the music warrants.
01:14:225 (6,7,1) - weird flow but up to you if you want to do anything about it
01:16:984 (8) - would prefer it to flow clockwise into the 1 but you do this pattern a lot so kinda hard to change all of them. Just feels awkward to me and I feel like the music doesn't make this break in flow necessary.
01:22:329 (6,7) - so like this is a 8.10x jump. I know its between 2 sliders but it feels like its way to much exp considering that before it was just a 5x jump 01:11:122 (4,5,6) -
01:25:260 (7,8,1,2) - Jump is way to big and isn't in a pattern of big jumps nor does the music change to warrant it
01:45:950 (8,1) - the previous times this patteren happened you put the 1 slider head under the 8 and change the flow in the opposite direction. This is fine from a normal standpoint but just wanted to point out that you change it here for some reason I don't clearly understand
01:52:329 (5,6,7) - why the stack of 6,7 instead of a dsing them after the 5 in a flowlike manner
02:41:984 (2,3,4) - same^
02:50:605 (5,6) - another big jump from slider to slider that I dont particularity like.
03:04:743 (8,1) - a jump from the edge of the screen to another
In general:
So I think the map has a clear style and I do like that. Even if its not my style it is consistent in patterns and such. I do feel like some things are unjustified and are hard just for the sake of making a hard map (which isnt bad just my impression on it). You could be more consistent in the spacing you use and the rhythms you use as well but that's up to you to decided on what you want to do. Also I think that you could break the flow less in some spots to make it feel like you aren't always trying to break it. I did enjoy the map and the song and hope I could be of some help
best wishes~
00:28:708 (8) - any reason why this slider looks different than the ones before it
00:43:363 (2,3,4,5,6) - flow could feel better if you changed where the 1/4 slider ends
Something for the rhythm at the start. Just something I noticed
So for the first section there could be more of a pattern to what you are doing.
there are 4 different rhythms/note placments you use for the first 3 ticks in this section
00:22:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/2 slider into circle "A"
00:23:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1/1 slider "B"
00:27:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 2 circles into a 1/2 slider "C"
00:41:467 (1,2) - two 1/2 sliders "D"
now the pattern in which these are currently being used is
ABAB
CAAB
ACAB
ABDB
this inst much of a pattern in my eyes. Something you could do to fix this is change 3 of them so that there is a sense of a pattern
to do so you would change it to look like so
ABAB
ACAB
ACAB
ABAB
so
00:27:674 (1,2,3) - would be replaced by a 1/2 slider into a circle
00:29:053 (1,2) - would be replaced by two circles into a 1/2 slider
00:41:467 (1,2) - would be replaced by a slider into a circle
there are 4 different rhythms/note placments you use for the first 3 ticks in this section
00:22:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/2 slider into circle "A"
00:23:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1/1 slider "B"
00:27:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 2 circles into a 1/2 slider "C"
00:41:467 (1,2) - two 1/2 sliders "D"
now the pattern in which these are currently being used is
ABAB
CAAB
ACAB
ABDB
this inst much of a pattern in my eyes. Something you could do to fix this is change 3 of them so that there is a sense of a pattern
to do so you would change it to look like so
ABAB
ACAB
ACAB
ABAB
so
00:27:674 (1,2,3) - would be replaced by a 1/2 slider into a circle
00:29:053 (1,2) - would be replaced by two circles into a 1/2 slider
00:41:467 (1,2) - would be replaced by a slider into a circle
01:00:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these jumps seem way to large for what the song is actually doing. I would rather it warm up into the kaia section instead of just having large jumps that i dont feel the music warrants.
01:14:225 (6,7,1) - weird flow but up to you if you want to do anything about it
01:16:984 (8) - would prefer it to flow clockwise into the 1 but you do this pattern a lot so kinda hard to change all of them. Just feels awkward to me and I feel like the music doesn't make this break in flow necessary.
01:22:329 (6,7) - so like this is a 8.10x jump. I know its between 2 sliders but it feels like its way to much exp considering that before it was just a 5x jump 01:11:122 (4,5,6) -
01:25:260 (7,8,1,2) - Jump is way to big and isn't in a pattern of big jumps nor does the music change to warrant it
01:45:950 (8,1) - the previous times this patteren happened you put the 1 slider head under the 8 and change the flow in the opposite direction. This is fine from a normal standpoint but just wanted to point out that you change it here for some reason I don't clearly understand
01:52:329 (5,6,7) - why the stack of 6,7 instead of a dsing them after the 5 in a flowlike manner
02:41:984 (2,3,4) - same^
02:50:605 (5,6) - another big jump from slider to slider that I dont particularity like.
03:04:743 (8,1) - a jump from the edge of the screen to another
In general:
So I think the map has a clear style and I do like that. Even if its not my style it is consistent in patterns and such. I do feel like some things are unjustified and are hard just for the sake of making a hard map (which isnt bad just my impression on it). You could be more consistent in the spacing you use and the rhythms you use as well but that's up to you to decided on what you want to do. Also I think that you could break the flow less in some spots to make it feel like you aren't always trying to break it. I did enjoy the map and the song and hope I could be of some help
best wishes~
Topic Starter
Bulldog wrote:
Hello Bulldog here from Mod Request. Most of what I have to say is just my thoughts. Hope I can be of some help
00:28:708 (8) - any reason why this slider looks different than the ones before it To add variation. I changed some more sliders around there to look like it now.
00:43:363 (2,3,4,5,6) - flow could feel better if you changed where the 1/4 slider ends This is fine.Something for the rhythm at the start. Just something I noticedThe start is fine.So for the first section there could be more of a pattern to what you are doing.
there are 4 different rhythms/note placments you use for the first 3 ticks in this section
00:22:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/2 slider into circle "A"
00:23:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1/1 slider "B"
00:27:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 2 circles into a 1/2 slider "C"
00:41:467 (1,2) - two 1/2 sliders "D"
now the pattern in which these are currently being used is
ABAB
CAAB
ACAB
ABDB
this inst much of a pattern in my eyes. Something you could do to fix this is change 3 of them so that there is a sense of a pattern
to do so you would change it to look like so
ABAB
ACAB
ACAB
ABAB
so
00:27:674 (1,2,3) - would be replaced by a 1/2 slider into a circle
00:29:053 (1,2) - would be replaced by two circles into a 1/2 slider
00:41:467 (1,2) - would be replaced by a slider into a circle
01:00:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these jumps seem way to large for what the song is actually doing. I would rather it warm up into the kaia section instead of just having large jumps that i dont feel the music warrants. 01:01:294 (4,7,3,6) - There are stronger beats here that stand out from the rest of the beat so I made these spaced further than the other notes. I think this spacing works well with the song so I'm going to leave them. I can understand your point if I did jumps the size of some in the kiai sections but these ones are okay.
01:14:225 (6,7,1) - weird flow but up to you if you want to do anything about it This plays well so keeping it as it is.
01:16:984 (8) - would prefer it to flow clockwise into the 1 but you do this pattern a lot so kinda hard to change all of them. Just feels awkward to me and I feel like the music doesn't make this break in flow necessary. Again this plays fine and looks good (imo) too.
01:22:329 (6,7) - so like this is a 8.10x jump. I know its between 2 sliders but it feels like its way to much exp considering that before it was just a 5x jump 01:11:122 (4,5,6) - The spacing isn't that different here but if someone else mentions it I'll change it. I think it's fine tho
01:25:260 (7,8,1,2) - Jump is way to big and isn't in a pattern of big jumps nor does the music change to warrant it 01:25:088 (6) - The pitch suddenly becomes a lot higher here so I think a big jump is well suited.
01:45:950 (8,1) - the previous times this patteren happened you put the 1 slider head under the 8 and change the flow in the opposite direction. This is fine from a normal standpoint but just wanted to point out that you change it here for some reason I don't clearly understand This is fine.
01:52:329 (5,6,7) - why the stack of 6,7 instead of a dsing them after the 5 in a flowlike manner I've seen this in some other maps (can't remember the names) and this actually plays quite well.
02:41:984 (2,3,4) - same^
02:50:605 (5,6) - another big jump from slider to slider that I dont particularity like.
03:04:743 (8,1) - a jump from the edge of the screen to another
In general:
So I think the map has a clear style and I do like that. Even if its not my style it is consistent in patterns and such. I do feel like some things are unjustified and are hard just for the sake of making a hard map (which isnt bad just my impression on it). You could be more consistent in the spacing you use and the rhythms you use as well but that's up to you to decided on what you want to do. Also I think that you could break the flow less in some spots to make it feel like you aren't always trying to break it. I did enjoy the map and the song and hope I could be of some help
best wishes~ Thanks for the mod!