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UnderminE
Didn't I give star to this map yet o: Star star!
ziin
SLIDER MOD FOR YOU. SORTA CAUSTIC. If I don't say anything it's complaining about some slider touching some other slider in an inappropriate way.

[easy]
very nice, just remember it's only gay if the sliders touch.
00:45:295 (4) -
00:52:840 (5) -
00:53:558 (6) -
00:57:511 (3) -
01:03:618 (2) - This one's actually good, try to make the previous slider bisect it.
01:14:037 (3) -
01:14:756 (4) - This spacing is a 'lil off
01:27:690 (4) -
01:30:205 (1) - try giving it 4 red points evenly spaced so the ball squiggles with the drums
01:57:151 (3) -
01:57:870 (4) - spacing
01:59:666 (1) - if you can make the end clearly visible it will work
02:03:618 (1) - ^ and this one is a bit too close to covering up the repeat
02:16:552 (5,6) -
02:23:738 (1) -
02:31:642 (3,3) - questionable

[you suck]
00:37:391 (1,2,3) - rotate 1 by -15 degrees, 3 by 15 degrees and make it pretty
00:40:265 (1,2,3) - just a tad bit more space? http://puu.sh/3bSs
00:43:499 (2,3) - ^ or move the end node out 1 up/1 right for (3) (left down for (2)) to put the end in the center http://puu.sh/3bSy
00:45:115 (2) - a little bit more space plz.
00:48:528 (4) - curve it so it doesn't touch (1)
00:51:762 (1,3) - criss cross these so the end of both is clear.
00:56:792 (2) - down some to leave a space
01:04:696 (1,2,3) - what is this I don't even.
01:09:008 (1,2,3) -
01:10:265 (4,1) - move the (4) up left and away from the CF in the middle, and give (1) some breathing room.
01:12:421 (2) - moved to 272,124 looks good
01:12:960 (3) - 296,192
01:18:169 (2) - idk what to do with these other than stack the ends.
01:26:253 (1) - end node up 1, but this spacing sucks
01:28:409 (3) - left 1, and fix (2) after you do.
01:29:127 (1) - accelerate that spacing
01:43:499 (1,2,3,4) - curve these just enough so they don't touch.
01:46:912 (6,1) - it's so pretty
01:52:840 (1) - flip it
01:57:151 (3,2) - (3)'s hitburst might cover up the repeat on (2) if you're using crappy hitbursts
02:00:025 (4,6) - there's a space in between these which is kinda weird.
02:00:744 (1,2,3) - not feeling it
02:05:595 (4) - weird stack
02:07:031 (2) - fit the previous and next sliders in the curves of the S.
02:10:984 (4) - try to get the end in between 2 and 3.
02:14:037 (2,4) - spacing
02:17:990 (1,2,3) - just a little bit more space
02:19:606 (1) - don't cover this one
^ repeats
02:30:025 (2) - fit the previous and next sliders in the curves of the S.
02:32:361 (1) - stack the end better
02:32:899 (2) - fit the previous and next sliders in the curves of the S.


Natteke + Lanttu <3

AIBat Warnings
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[General]
MP3 Bitrate:
128

Background:
2fccad17ba1e823c12798b19cb836495.jpg is 1000x625, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.

Custom Hitsounds:
Not yet implemented.


[Storyboard]
No problems found.

[All .osu Files]
General and Metadata:

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Lanttu is moe] : Lanttu Natteke
- [Less than Three] : Natteke Lanttu
- [Natteke is a'trollin'] : Lanttu Natteke
- [Shiirn sucks at mapping] : Natteke Lanttu

Combo Colours:
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Lanttu is moe] :
Combo1 : 143,155,175
Combo2 : 132,138,60
Combo3 : 122,122,122

- [Less than Three] :
Combo1 : 143,155,175
Combo2 : 132,138,60
Combo3 : 122,122,122

- [Natteke is a'trollin'] :
Combo1 : 17,254,176
Combo2 : 173,255,95
Combo3 : 255,88,100
Combo4 : 255,94,55

- [Shiirn sucks at mapping] :
Combo1 : 143,155,175
Combo2 : 132,138,60
Combo3 : 122,122,122

Tags:
- Consider adding "Natteke is a" to all of your tags

Kiai:
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Lanttu is moe] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 02:17:990, ends on 02:40:239.
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:40:984, ends on 02:41:058.

- [Less than Three] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 02:17:990, ends on 02:40:239.
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:40:984, ends on 02:41:058.

- [Natteke is a'trollin'] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 02:17:990, ends on 02:40:265.

- [Shiirn sucks at mapping] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 02:17:990, ends on 02:40:239.
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:40:984, ends on 02:41:058.


[Difficulty: Lanttu is moe]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:33:053
01:08:982
01:09:341
01:30:538
01:40:598
01:41:317
01:43:473
01:52:814
01:53:532
01:54:251
01:54:970
01:55:329
02:40:239
02:41:058


[Difficulty: Less than Three]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
01:40:958
01:41:317
01:41:676
01:43:473
01:52:095
01:52:814
01:53:532
01:54:251
02:40:239
02:41:058


[Difficulty: Natteke is a'trollin']
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
01:40:958
01:41:317
01:41:676
01:43:473


[Difficulty: Shiirn sucks at mapping]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
01:40:958
01:41:317
01:41:676
01:43:473
01:52:095
01:52:814
01:53:532
01:54:251
02:40:239
02:41:058
If you weren't done you shouldn't have put it in pending.
Topic Starter
Shiirn
Stuff done. Most AIBat stuff can be ignored.
ziin
It was really only combo colors and kiai which was questionable, but natteke's just a troll. And I didn't read the thread before I posted that.
NoHitter
General
Rename your diffs.
Make Tags consistent between diffs.

Normal
Combo-nazi (Your current combos seem very inconsistent) You can choose to not follow this, but I highly suggest you do.
SPOILER
00:40:265 (4) - New Combo (NC)
00:41:702 (1) - Remove New Combo (RNC)
00:43:139 (2) - NC
00:52:121 (4) - NC if you add a note at 00:51:762, NC there.
00:57:511 (3) - NC
00:58:948 (1) - RNC
01:00:385 (1) - NC
01:02:181 (1) - RNC if you don't follow mod below.
01:03:618 (4) - NC if you don't follow mod below.
01:06:133 (5) - NC
01:07:930 (1) - RNC
01:09:008 (4) - NC
01:14:756 (4) - NC
01:16:193 (1) - RNC
01:17:630 (2) - NC
01:29:127 (6) - NC
01:30:205 (1) - RNC
01:57:870 (4) - NC
01:59:666 (1) - RNC
02:00:744 (4) - NC
02:06:852 (4) - NC
02:15:115 (4) - NC
02:20:864 (3) - NC for consistency. Fine as is.
00:50:684 (3) - IMO the rhythm you followed here is very unnoticeable. I had to increase the volume for me to actually hear it. I think 1/1 notes/sliders should be here.
01:00:385 (3) - Same as above? Maybe change to something like this?
01:03:259 (x) - A 3/2 slider should start here followed by one more. Like this.
01:30:205 (2) - Looks ugly IMO. A slider like this would be better?

Lanttu's Hard
01:42:960 (1) - IMO better if note is at 01:43:499 only. No need for slider starting at 01:42:960

Shiirn's Insane?
Combo-nazi again (Inconsistent combos :/)
SPOILER
00:38:828 (1) - RNC for consistency
00:41:702 (1) - NC
00:44:576 (1) - RNC
00:47:630 (1) - RNC
00:53:199 (1) - RNC
00:54:636 (4) - NC
00:56:073 (1) - RNC
00:58:948 (1) - RNC
01:04:696 (1) - RNC
01:07:570 (1) - RNC (You probably should move this closer)
01:10:445 (1) - RNC
01:21:942 (1) - RNC
01:24:816 (1) - RNC
01:27:690 (1) - RNC
01:44:936 (1) - RNC
01:46:732 (9) - NC
01:47:630 (1) - RNC
02:28:229 (4) - NC
02:14:397 (1) - Don't overlap this with 02:14:397 (3)? It gets confusing being covered up in play.

Natteke's Insane
I don't suppose you'll change the combo colors so that they'll be consistent with the other diffs?
As I've read the thread, you don't want to.
00:45:475 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure about this. No indication whatsoever in the music that there's gonna be a sudden spacing change. Only the combo colors.
01:30:744 (1) - End this 1/2 later?

Anyway, nothing major, so star.
Lanttu

NoHItter wrote:

Lanttu's Hard
01:42:960 (1) - IMO better if note is at 01:43:499 only. No need for slider starting at 01:42:960
Hmm, I still kind of prefer it like the way it is... çwç
NoHitter
Bubbled
Gonzvlo
/late

\o/
Doomsday
Lookin' good

Ranked!
Topic Starter
Shiirn
\o/
Charles445
Aaaand the background is still the wrong aspect ratio

Why don't you listen to me god damn it
Raging Bull
I miss your old difficulty names better. :L
Topic Starter
Shiirn

Charles445 wrote:

Aaaand the background is still the wrong aspect ratio

Why don't you listen to me god damn it
you mad bro?

it still looks nice.
Verdisphena
Grats :D
Gonzvlo
Grats Shiirn, nice map :3
ziin
>dat aspect ratio
OzzyOzrock
wait but the BG dimensio... is there... uh... oh well reason to everything
Topic Starter
Shiirn
Let me clear this up:

There is no ranking requirement to specific background aspect ratios, only for the maximum size. I picked a slightly different ratio simply because this map is an ambient bgm, it's far more suited to a letterboxed screen (or, as ziin shows, a nice surprise for people playing under other aspect ratios).


Hush about it.
xsrsbsns
good, congrats!
UnderminE
Oh finally, congrats~
OsuMasterFTW
Its my best. 8-) 676,930 Silver SS Hidden + HardRock (Proof: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NEpZjfHPTJE) Congartz. :)
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