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Tony

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Tony 2011-07-02T16:10:15+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, April 16, 2012 at 5:53:50 PM

Artist: monochrome-coat
Title: Black Parrot
Source: Touhou
Tags: kosiga wmfchris Nakagawa-Kanon dksslqj pinetree Meramipop Nue Houjuu UFO Unidentified Fantastic Object Heian Alien
BPM: 110
Filesize: 5205kb
Play Time: 03:39
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.07 stars, 143 notes)
Hard (4.62 stars, 474 notes)
Lunatic (5 stars, 691 notes)
Normal (2.75 stars, 231 notes)
Wmf's Taiko (4.83 stars, 981 notes)

Download: monochrome-coat - Black Parrot
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
my 7th beatmap
Redownload if downloaded before 31.December.2011
Special Thanks to Nakagawa-Kanon, kosiga and wmfchris for the awesome GDs!
Thank You mercury2004 for the awesome custom clap you gave me!

Mapset:
[Easy] 100% by kosiga
[Normal] 100% (remapped on 22.12.2011)
[Hard] 100% (remapped on 03.11.2011)
[Wmf's Taiko] 100% by wmfchris
[Lunatic] - 100% by Nakagawa-Kanon

Last edited by Tony 2012-04-16T14:54:21+00:00, edited 107 times in total.

Selee

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Selee 2011-07-02T18:36:38+00:00

Code

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Tony

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Tony 2011-07-02T19:57:54+00:00

thanks a lot, you are fast :O

Vass_Bass

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Vass_Bass 2011-07-26T09:45:14+00:00

finished

and star for it~

Download: monochrome-coat - Black Parrot (Tony) [CollabTemplate].osu

Axey

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Axey 2011-07-28T06:30:54+00:00

one part

haven't finish hitsounds

starrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

Download: monochrome-coat - Black Parrot (Tony) [Huang].osu

theowest

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theowest 2011-08-04T13:38:28+00:00

Here's my part:
http://puu.sh/3ZC9

Delete anything after the kai part.. I just mapped there for fun heheh. Just extract it into the song folder, copy over my part into your collab.

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2011-08-04T16:10:51+00:00

star.....(when can I meet the word limit :/)

well that's a moe girl and a moe moe song >A<~~

theowest

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theowest 2011-08-06T14:44:12+00:00

bro, you have to add theowest to the tags. And everyone else who's part of it.

Tony

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Tony 2011-08-06T17:28:46+00:00

well i'm gonna add to tags all of you when is the collab done... I know that's dum, but it's the way Tony does

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2011-08-07T10:37:36+00:00

I'm baka in making solo maps

/me attacks Tony by Hydro pump!
...
Tony fainted!
/me gains 1293 exp. points!

Download: monochrome-coat - Black Parrot (Tony) [Collab].osu

Tony

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Tony 2011-08-07T12:36:12+00:00

my Charmander attacks your Squirtle

Fire attack!!!!!
Critical Hit!!!!!!

/thanks a lot for your part

Musty

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Musty 2011-08-09T19:40:10+00:00

finished in 30mins, i hope you likeit xD

HitObjects

168,168,105491,6,2,B|200:232,1,55,4|0
100,164,106036,2,2,B|36:196,1,55
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312,192,111491,1,2
380,192,111764,1,2
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timingpoints

105491,-200,4,2,0,80,0,0
122127,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0

Star~

Leorda

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Leorda 2011-08-16T13:24:49+00:00

my parts is done, fast and furious of mapping

My parts

Don't let this map graveyard, ok?

Tony

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Tony 2011-08-16T13:43:33+00:00

Leorda wrote:
my parts is done, fast and furious of mapping

Don't let this map graveyard, ok?

I DONT GRAVEYARD MAPS :S

Axey

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Axey 2011-08-16T14:11:40+00:00

bad job :O!

Download: monochrome-coat - Black Parrot (Tony) [Collab].osu

Axey

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Axey 2011-08-17T02:25:37+00:00

why u not update my second part?

Vass_Bass

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Vass_Bass 2011-08-19T19:00:01+00:00

Here's a nicknames for collab, with all changes :3

SPOILER

SHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTM MESSSSSAAAAGGGEEEE

Download: Names.zip

pieguyn

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pieguyn 2011-08-25T05:55:21+00:00

Easy:

00:20:400 (2,3) - Replace the sliders with 2 beats each? Having them as sliders sounds kind of weird

00:29:127 (1) - remove NC
01:14:945 (5) - new combo
03:16:582 (1) - remove whistle from start and add whistle on end
03:17:673 (2) - remove whistle
03:18:218 (3) - add whistle
03:18:764 (4) - remove whistle
03:19:309 (6) - add whistle on end?

Normal:

01:22:582 - add a note?
02:14:945 - ^

Hard:

00:26:945 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - silence the ends of these sliders?
01:10:582 (1,2,3) - whistle sounds really odd here, perhaps remove it?
01:17:127 (2) - ^
01:34:582 (1) - ^
01:47:536 (9) - hard to see with all the notes around it, perhaps remove it?
02:02:945 (1,2,3) - remove whistle?
02:09:491 (2) - ^

Collab:

01:34:582 (1) - whistle on repeat?
02:09:491 (1) - remove finish and add whistle?
02:29:877 (3) - move 1/8 earlier
02:30:900 (2) - move 1/8 later
02:34:173 (3) - ^
02:35:264 (7) - ^
02:38:127 - add a note?
02:40:718 (9) - move 1/8 later
02:42:900 (6) - ^
02:43:991 (10) - ^
03:11:127 (3) - remove whistle from 1st repeat?

nice map~ (*^o^)

Tony

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Tony 2011-08-25T07:10:57+00:00

most of them fixed~ thanks

(you were fast)

theowest

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theowest 2011-09-11T00:00:28+00:00

Y U NO RANK THIS.

Vergence

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Vergence 2011-09-12T09:46:58+00:00

Hello~
Easy
HP Drain -1. Its kinda harsh on beginners

Normal
01:10:582 (1) - Make it more equal on both sides
02:07:309 (4) - New combo
03:36:764 (5) - :/ Weird slider. I don't like it.

Hard
01:45:491 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Can you arrange this in a more orderly position.

Collab
00:30:764 (1) - Remove new combo
_____________________________________________
I love the soft section

Star~
Good luck for ranking~

Tony

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Tony 2011-09-12T10:01:16+00:00

taillssss <3 I love orange lol! Thanks for mod! most fixed :3

Tony

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Tony 2011-09-12T10:02:00+00:00

theowest wrote:
Y U NO RANK THIS.

I try to rank all of my maps :3

theowest

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theowest 2011-09-12T11:57:51+00:00

Tony wrote:
theowest wrote:
Y U NO RANK THIS.

I try to rank all of my maps :3

Oh, that's right.

DeeN

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DeeN 2011-09-26T09:33:20+00:00

3Y3S

<Easy>
nothing

<Normal>
nothing

<Hard>
01:01:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i dont like this arrangement,hard to see hard to move
02:15:491 (1,2,3,4,5) - hard to see

u should do further work in Hard

<Collab>
00:13:991 (6) - remove this note
00:52:991 - add a note
00:52:582 (5,6,7,8) - is there 1/6?
02:05:945 (6,1) - remove these and add a silder from 02:05:945 to 02:06:491,add normal-whistle in 02:05:945
03:32:127 (1) - right 1 gird (level 4）
03:35:400 (1) - add normal-whistle

<Collad> diff really nice but Hard u need to do more work even remap it

good luck

Tony

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Tony 2011-09-26T12:11:20+00:00

fixed some~ thanks

SPOILER

Your message is too short.

senaya

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senaya 2011-11-03T08:22:18+00:00

salut

ai vrut nazi-mod? XD

[Easy]
03:38:945 (1) - elimina sectii rosii sub spinner D:

[Normal]
00:19:309 (1) - nu e simetric
00:22:582 (1) - ^
00:35:673 (1) - ^ nodul central pune 1 patrat in dreapta.
00:40:036 (1) - ^ nodul central pune 1 patrat in jos.
02:07:309 (1-6) - cred ca va fi mai bine de a rearanja acest pattern. pune finish la (1) si (6) de la inceput.
03:38:945 (1) - elimina sectii rosii sub spinner D:

dar e bun si asa cum este, nu stiu de ce vrei nazi-moduri D:

Tony

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Tony 2011-11-03T13:01:43+00:00

senaya wrote:
salut
ai vrut nazi-mod? XD askjahsjhaj!

dar e bun si asa cum este, nu stiu de ce vrei nazi-moduri D: am vrut sa vad cat de nazi esti lol

heh! primul mod romanesc pe care l-am primit! mersi mult!

Backfire

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Backfire 2011-11-13T01:25:21+00:00

I guess I can make you a taiko

Tony

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Tony 2011-11-13T07:38:30+00:00

Backfire wrote:
I guess I can make you a taiko

yay! U MAD? :S

Backfire

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Backfire 2011-11-13T14:34:56+00:00

What? No. that was the >*.*< emote, if im not mistaken. I use it a lot.

Vass_Bass

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Vass_Bass 2011-11-13T16:18:43+00:00

note 51: Don't do the SB for Tony

Tony

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Tony 2011-11-13T17:09:27+00:00

note number 1: jealousy can blind a person

Vass_Bass

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Vass_Bass 2011-11-13T17:14:00+00:00

hahaha you pro troll

Tony

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Tony 2011-11-13T17:21:14+00:00

theowest

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theowest 2011-12-03T15:38:22+00:00

I hope you didn't do anything while I was making this:
http://puu.sh/9PP0

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2011-12-04T10:19:42+00:00

.______. ~

Download: monochrome-coat - Black Parrot (Tony) [Collab].osu

theowest

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theowest 2011-12-04T10:37:24+00:00

wmfchris wrote:
.______. ~

you used mine first right?

Tony

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Tony 2011-12-04T10:43:23+00:00

of course

theowest

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theowest 2011-12-04T10:43:49+00:00

Tony wrote:
of course

yay.

L_P

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L_P 2011-12-05T23:52:51+00:00

A nice map, only suggestion for you

General: no insane? 2 hards?

collab: i do think this type of song isnt good thing to make a collab......everyone has new inspiration
+i suggest next time you add hit sounds yourself.....now is like messy
and may be try to follow the drum, it is a pity for this song / map....
collab could be better...next time go find natsumerin, furawa, alace, and maybe some yousei teikoku's fans for this type of map?
the style of mapping is a little bit confusing..

00:17:127 (6) - last beat finish
00:52:582 (5,6,7,8) - somthing like this?http://puu.sh/a0Ka
01:05:127 (5,6,7) - enlarge the spacing
theowest introduced the clap sound...however i dont think that suits the song
and the clap beat is like, not really fit in
01:33:491 (2) - i think youre mapping on the vocal...then this should be started at the previous tick
03:00:627 (1) - jump this lol
03:11:673 - add a slow slider...?

Hard
way better than your collab ha.
00:16:036 (7,8) - i really dont find these sliders interesting, maybe just do a spinner or change the way it flows..?
01:01:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - can you find some pattern or shape? i dont like this type of arrangement, it is like...the mapper was lazy to think of something good..?
01:34:036 (8) - clap?
01:48:218 (2) - shorten by a tick?
02:24:763 (5) - argh no more repeat, try adding some note?
02:32:945 (5,6,7,8) - make a jump at note 5 or make this 4 notes a slider? i feel like this part can have some nice thing to happen
03:03:764 (1) - from this part onward,,the slider slide sound is a bit annoying....why dont you silence it
03:23:400 (6,7,8,9) - wow, too empty for a hard
03:27:354 (8) - add a note?

easy / normal i dont see problem...

lets see....good luck.

Tony

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Tony 2011-12-06T05:00:02+00:00

L_P wrote:
A nice map, only suggestion for you

General: no insane? 2 hards?

collab: i do think this type of song isnt good thing to make a collab......everyone has new inspiration
+i suggest next time you add hit sounds yourself.....now is like messy
and may be try to follow the drum, it is a pity for this song / map....
collab could be better...next time go find natsumerin, furawa, alace, and maybe some yousei teikoku's fans for this type of map?
the style of mapping is a little bit confusing..
I'm amazed of your awesomeness!

Hard

00:16:036 (7,8) - i really dont find these sliders interesting, maybe just do a spinner or change the way it flows..? fixed
01:01:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - can you find some pattern or shape? i dont like this type of arrangement, it is like...the mapper was lazy to think of something good..? thanks a lot for suggestion! It really helps me (not)

awesome mod! It really improved my map a lot (so not true)

L_P

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L_P 2011-12-06T06:21:54+00:00

:O i was just tryin to help...

Tony

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Tony 2011-12-06T12:09:06+00:00

np man! I was feedbacking :3

theowest

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theowest 2011-12-06T12:11:25+00:00

L_P wrote:
A nice map, only suggestion for you

General: no insane? 2 hards?

collab: i do think this type of song isnt good thing to make a collab......everyone has new inspiration
+i suggest next time you add hit sounds yourself.....now is like messy
and may be try to follow the drum, it is a pity for this song / map....
collab could be better...next time go find natsumerin, furawa, alace, and maybe some yousei teikoku's fans for this type of map?
the style of mapping is a little bit confusing..

00:17:127 (6) - last beat finish
00:52:582 (5,6,7,8) - somthing like this?http://puu.sh/a0Ka
01:05:127 (5,6,7) - enlarge the spacing
theowest introduced the clap sound...however i dont think that suits the song
and the clap beat is like, not really fit in YES IT DOES. Collabs contain different styles of mapping = different hitsounds.
01:33:491 (2) - i think youre mapping on the vocal...then this should be started at the previous tick lol wat
03:00:627 (1) - jump this lol
03:11:673 - add a slow slider...?

lets see....good luck.

mercury2004

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mercury2004 2011-12-06T14:33:24+00:00

SP Priority Mod.

Red: Means.You are breaking beatmapping rules or something that doesn't right. You should change it immediately.
Orange: Means. My Suggestion. It is okay whether you change it or not
Purple:Means. Highly Recommend you to change it.

General
-Folder OK
- Audio Lead in in the Hard difficulty is different from other. please fix it

. I know hard difficulty has starting point earlier than the other but 2 second is still just fine
Clap sound does not fit to the music at all. I think this is better Download here
Since this is touhou song. You might want to put something about touhou into the tag. Here use this nue houjuu undefined fantastic object ufo heian alien
5% Audio timing section is not recommended. Use at least 10%

Easy Difficulty
Most are Nazi mod. Only problem is too much kick slider like this 00:38:945 (4) - and lack of some interesting pattern
00:29:127 (1) - Remove NC
00:31:309 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Arrange this in octagonal pattern looks better
00:51:491 (4) - make this slider head look like this

SPOILER

01:09:491 (5,1) - One tiny grid up. and fix the spacing
02:08:400 (5) - NC
02:32:400 (5) - This slider the beginner might not know where this slider will end. If you can please change it.
02:41:127 (5) - ^
02:43:854 (3) - Align this same horizontal line as 02:43:309 (2) -
02:45:491 (4) - NC and put this in the middle.
03:18:764 (4,5,6) - This is too confusing for beginner. If you want to keep it please NC here 03:18:764 (4) -
03:21:491 (1,2,3,4) - Arrange them like this

SPOILER

Arrange some pattern and slider look nicer would be perfect.

Normal Difficulty
01:46:582 (5) - NC
01:48:764 (5) - NC
03:01:309 (4) - Spacing issue

The rest looks find to me.

Hard Difficulty
01:18:764 (8) - NC here

Collab Difficulty
02:28:445 (1) - Remove NC

Sorry for such a poor mod. This map looks good already. GJ Star.

If this mod proved to be not helpful. Don't kudos

theowest

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theowest 2011-12-06T14:37:00+00:00

mercury2004 wrote:
Since this is touhou song. You might want to put something about touhou into the tag. Here use this nue houjuu undefined fantastic object ufo heian alien

LOL
rly
wow..

Last edited by theowest 2011-12-06T14:43:06+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

mercury2004

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mercury2004 2011-12-06T14:38:54+00:00

My opinion is the song is base on guitar and drum. I felt clap sound don't feel right in the song.

theowest

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theowest 2011-12-06T14:42:07+00:00