1. 00:27:711 - i think you should follow vocal here.
   how about circle+1/1slider pattern instead 1/1 slider+circle https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10408742
   
2. 00:30:595 (3) - this slider should be placed accurately imo.
   https://puu.sh/zBDU4/b532f6e175.png
   how's it? using 1/12 tick and set volume to 5% at 00:31:172 - . i thought this (3) to be just a one slide to 00:31:364 - , but weird slider tick rings also we can't mute this (cuz of RC lol)
   
3. 00:45:403 (3,4) - fix blancket or somthing like this https://puu.sh/zBE0A/cedeef5513.png
   i think we should clarify whether they wanna be blanket or not.
   
4. 00:46:749 (5,6) - in this section, you're following both piano and vocal. considering the concept, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10408764 <- would work.
   
5. from 01:02:903 (1) - for piano and vocal, this pattern is the most suitable i think but what do you think?
   https://puu.sh/zBE82/e1d338e446.png
   
6. 01:41:364 (6,7) - you should emphasize more and more i feel!
   it means, just add nc on 01:41:364 (6) - . also plz check mod at "hitsound" below.
   
7. 03:36:172 (3) - can you take more distance from 03:35:980 (2) - ? like this https://puu.sh/zBEKL/72ca63216f.png
   
8. 03:44:826 (3) - add nc to emphasize 03:44:441 (1,2) - . also check "hitsound".
   
9. 03:52:903 (3) - wanna follow strings on 03:53:095 - . how's this? https://puu.sh/zBEQP/d25a9b321f.png
   
10. 03:57:326 (6) - stack
    
11. 04:03:864 (8,1) - stack
    
12. 04:07:518 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too intense for this map tbh, i can understand you can emphasize string sounds tho. changing 04:07:518 (1,2) - to 1/2 slider and it'd be better imo, also it'll become drum sound emphasis too.
    
13. 04:09:057 (9) - add nc to avoid long combos imo
    
14. 04:35:211 (1) - should be started from 04:35:018 - considering mainly piano. also vocal doesn't start from 04:35:211 - exactly.
    
15. 04:53:672 (1,2) - how about using same slider shape? looks more consistent i feel
    https://puu.sh/zBFj6/def01f2273.png
    
16. 04:58:864 (3) - add nc to emphasize 04:58:288 (1,2) - . also check "hitsound"
    
17. 05:24:057 (1) - i prefer removing this. why do you need to follow only this vocal? atmosphere which is cool-downed is more important imo.

1. from 01:15:211 - to 01:27:518 - . i feel weird to some drum-finish usage. you can use more and more drum-finish sound. also it's a bit surprising to ring that at 01:24:057 - at first.
   try to put drum-finish on these and you'd feel better i believe.
   01:17:903 - 01:18:288 - 01:20:211 - 01:20:788 - 01:24:441 -
   
2. 01:35:788 - remove drum-finish. not following the song therefore i felt something strange.
   
3. 04:15:018 - this drum-finish also feels weird for me. such a low-sound makes "beat", like human's heart. it means low-sound is mainly put on downbeat.
   in this reason, just a little thing tho, i recommend deleting finish here and putting drum-finish on 04:15:211 - instead.
   
4. 01:41:364 - 03:44:441 - 04:58:288 - these jump should have consistent hitsounding, also they should be strong emphasis. i suggest a way for example.
   
   1. sampleset:normal, additions:drum-finish at (1)
   2. sampleset:normal, additions:soft-clap at (2)

thzz wrote:

hi! as requested irc~

placement

1. 00:27:711 - i think you should follow vocal here. pkhg's
   how about circle+1/1slider pattern instead 1/1 slider+circle https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10408742
   
2. 00:30:595 (3) - this slider should be placed accurately imo. pkhg's
   https://puu.sh/zBDU4/b532f6e175.png
   how's it? using 1/12 tick and set volume to 5% at 00:31:172 - . i thought this (3) to be just a one slide to 00:31:364 - , but weird slider tick rings also we can't mute this (cuz of RC lol)
   
3. 00:45:403 (3,4) - fix blancket or somthing like this https://puu.sh/zBE0A/cedeef5513.png yeah, gonna follow your example then
   i think we should clarify whether they wanna be blanket or not.
   
4. 00:46:749 (5,6) - in this section, you're following both piano and vocal. considering the concept, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10408764 <- would work. agreed
   
5. from 01:02:903 (1) - for piano and vocal, this pattern is the most suitable i think but what do you think? already been suggested amd Narcissu denied it because of following the fade in thingy
   https://puu.sh/zBE82/e1d338e446.png
   
6. 01:41:364 (6,7) - you should emphasize more and more i feel! yes, and added more DS
   it means, just add nc on 01:41:364 (6) - . also plz check mod at "hitsound" below.
   
7. 03:36:172 (3) - can you take more distance from 03:35:980 (2) - ? like this https://puu.sh/zBEKL/72ca63216f.png done this for narcissu since it does make sense
   
8. 03:44:826 (3) - add nc to emphasize 03:44:441 (1,2) - . also check "hitsound". NCd
   
9. 03:52:903 (3) - wanna follow strings on 03:53:095 - . how's this? https://puu.sh/zBEQP/d25a9b321f.png agreed
   
10. 03:57:326 (6) - stack ok
    
11. 04:03:864 (8,1) - stack nice catch
    
12. 04:07:518 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too intense for this map tbh, i can understand you can emphasize string sounds tho. changing 04:07:518 (1,2) - to 1/2 slider and it'd be better imo, also it'll become drum sound emphasis too. nerfed
    
13. 04:09:057 (9) - add nc to avoid long combos imo right
    
14. 04:35:211 (1) - should be started from 04:35:018 - considering mainly piano. also vocal doesn't start from 04:35:211 - exactly. pkhg's
    
15. 04:53:672 (1,2) - how about using same slider shape? looks more consistent i feel pkhg's but it is really minor so i fixed it for him
    https://puu.sh/zBFj6/def01f2273.png
    
16. 04:58:864 (3) - add nc to emphasize 04:58:288 (1,2) - . also check "hitsound"
    
17. 05:24:057 (1) - i prefer removing this. why do you need to follow only this vocal? atmosphere which is cool-downed is more important imo. alright

hitsound

1. from 01:15:211 - to 01:27:518 - . i feel weird to some drum-finish usage. you can use more and more drum-finish sound. also it's a bit surprising to ring that at 01:24:057 - at first.
   try to put drum-finish on these and you'd feel better i believe.
   01:17:903 - 01:18:288 - 01:20:211 - 01:20:788 - 01:24:441 - yeah. agreed and also did some tweak from my side too
   
2. 01:35:788 - remove drum-finish. not following the song therefore i felt something strange. ok
   
3. 04:15:018 - this drum-finish also feels weird for me. such a low-sound makes "beat", like human's heart. it means low-sound is mainly put on downbeat.
   in this reason, just a little thing tho, i recommend deleting finish here and putting drum-finish on 04:15:211 - instead.
   
4. 01:41:364 - 03:44:441 - 04:58:288 - these jump should have consistent hitsounding, also they should be strong emphasis. i suggest a way for example.
   
   1. sampleset:normal, additions:drum-finish at (1)
   2. sampleset:normal, additions:soft-clap at (2)
   aaand applied too

that's all! good luck o/~~

Gust wrote:

Mod request from pm
I love this song!
[Hymn To The World]
00:35:788 (2,3) - I think here is different to 00:33:095 (2,3) - , so change to 2 slider to follow the vocal maybe better. like this

1

00:44:441 (1) - move to x:81 y:203 looks better p e r f e c t i o n
01:08:864 (5) - If you want to follow the vocal, maybe it can be move to a little earlier. how about 01:08:800 (5) - naah, seems it is already fine as it is
01:48:288 (9,10) - change 9 like this maybe better for play would make things awkward tbh. so i prefer the current one.

2

01:50:595 (5,7) - stack? woops
01:53:479 (5,6,7,8) - why not make these to a square xd it is already a square tho, just a bit tilted
02:52:518 (5,9,10,1) - stack? stacj
nothing to say in other parts

Hailie wrote:

Hello!

• 
  Hymn of the World

1. 00:22:134 (1) - okay I been careful with this - even with slow down or just turning off the hitsounds and bringing the volume up - I feel this note its off - the note I think you following lands on a blue tick (not talking about the drum btw) while the other lands of the yellow - it be more accurate to show represent that by changing the slider into a 1/4 slider and having a note on 00:22:422 - instead
   likewise with this 1 05:45:211 (6) -
   - Now this slider is fine 00:22:518 (2) - and all the rest of the repeats is fine it is true that it's actually off but however, after i checked it throughly, your suggestion is actually pretty off too. The actual correct one is making 00:22:134 (1) - into an 1/4 and then moving 00:22:518 (2) - onto 00:22:454 - with these, it follow the weird violin more accurately, same thing are applied on the later part.
2. 01:19:634 (3,4) - seems strange to put more priority towards the drum here when for the most part you been following the vocals and ignore the drum namely at places such as 01:16:557 (4) - 01:23:480 (5) - 01:25:788 (3) - ,etc - it just seems inconsistent and it would be best to change the order where the slider is on the blue tick instead agreed
   ^ 01:28:864 (3,4) - kind of the same thing
3. 01:41:749 - for a map that following the vocals - wouldn't it be a nice touch to map the start of the vocals here?
   04:58:672 - same for this ^ yes
4. 01:52:710 (2,3) - can't tell if this is intentional (doubt it tho) or not but the stack is slightly off woops
5. 01:55:595 (2) - forgot a whistle here? yes aa
6. 01:56:556 (4,5) - this is the only time where ya have the circle stack on top of the slider end in this chorus (I check the 2nd chorus to make sure if it was done the same way) and there isn't exactly nothing really special than any other part similar so it feel kind of inconsistent - basically suggestion changing this to something else [/color]
7. 05:06:364 (2) - missing whistle

okay think that is about it - call me back for a recheck (either in-game or forums will do) after this mod has been address and you have the metadata be confirm correct