00:06:306 (3,4) - you could move these two notes back so that 4 overlaps with 00:07:906 (3) -
Fixed00:08:306 (1,4) - you could fiddle with spacing to make the head of this slider and the 4 overlap
Fixed00:13:506 (2,3) - perhaps these two should be overlapped? its not that much of a big spacing change
Ignored, imo looks bad :/00:15:706 (4) - this isnt properly blanketed, the approach circle should fit along the curve of the slider
Fixed00:16:106 (6,2) - you need to fix this overlap
Fixed00:16:306 (1,2) - these two sliders should be the same angle, it looks messy if you eyeball it like this
Fixed00:16:306 (1,4) - fix overlap
Fixed00:17:706 (1,2,3,4) - this whole pattern should overlap with the previous in a better way.
example Hmm, i made this to change styles, imo is a good pattern and looks fine00:23:506 (3,4) - the angle between these two jumps is a bit odd, it looks weird and is probably weirder to play.
this would work perfectly Oh, looks nice, done!00:25:906 (1) - i wonder why you made this slider facing such an odd way? it works either way, but the flow into the next slider is rather weird.
Fixed00:33:706 - you already have an established rhythm from here to 00:35:306 - here but you kinda throw it out the window. could be disorientating to the player.
Mmm, i think you talk about the slider form and position, so i changed it and the positions of the next notes00:38:706 (1) - you need to fix the curve on this slider by tightening the two anchors
Fixed00:44:706 (5) - maybe this shouldn't be on top of the slider head? consider overlapping it with the previous note
Fixed00:46:706 (2,3,4,5,6) - polygon circle could be made more interesting by making it a star. also, overlap it with the following slider better!
Fixed00:55:831 (3) - move this a bit left, it looks too messy to be so close to the 1/1 slider
Fixed00:59:768 (3) - why not overlap with the tail of the slider instead of a part of the triple?
Fixed01:00:518 (6,3) - fix this overlap
Fixed01:01:831 (4) - spacing here is weird, and it overlaps weirdly with 01:02:956 (3) - which causes a mess.
Fixed01:05:206 (1,2,3) - this just looks ugly, try pointing it in the direction of the next burst
Fixed01:07:643 (2,2) - these two have an unnecessary overlap which can be avoided by moving 01:08:581 (2) - upwards and to the left
Fixed01:11:206 (1,4,2,4) - these 4 objects overlap in a very messy way
Hmm, imo is fine, anyway i change it a bit01:13:268 (2,4,2,4) - ^
Fixed01:15:518 (5,1) -
try to do more of this when you're making your uneven overlaps, it looks a lot better ok, i will keep this in mind
01:17:581 (3) -
http://i.imgur.com/6J6jnYd.png ?
Fixed01:18:518 (6) - this is the wrong rhythm. try something like this:
http://i.imgur.com/cCaSMk1.png Mmm, I think the current pattern and yours are bad xD. I replace the 6 cursor with a circle, imo sounds better than these 2 patterns 01:22:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this stream has all sorts of spacing problems. please use slider>stream tool!
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