00:15:984 (1,2,3) - this part of melody repeats during all map, u can use same structure for it like:
For highlighting this sounds u can use bigger spacing, same structure on repeated melody will be very good
00:21:984 (1,2) - here is the same sound, but much stronger (circle+circle+slider with higher spacing can be great here)
00:23:359 (2,3,4,5) - this is hard to read, at least don't place one slider over another
00:17:609 (3,4) - this sound is repeated to, so u can try to make simillar thing, repeated structure
00:31:984 (1) - from this moment you have reverse sliders, If they are used to emphasize special sound ==> they are used in wrong way
this sound much better imo, u can try something urself, but this high sounds have to be emphasized (I used slider 4, 8 and 10 for it)
You better remake part up to 00:47:734 (9) so all string sounds are highlighted
00:50:234 (4,5,6) - make it like this
Its easier to understand how it is played
00:54:984 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - well its unreadable (Sliders) und impossible to pass with streaming, this too 01:00:421 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
00:58:484 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - unreadable, all objects in one place