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General
  • 所有offset - ⑨
GaiGar
  • 00:02:167 (3) - 这个slider移动到00:01:987更符合节奏
    00:16:103 (4) - 这个slider会被前面打出的300挡住
    00:18:300 (7) - 第一个圈加soft-finish
    00:37:336 (1) - 第一个圈加normal-finish
    00:40:264 (5) - 加normal-finish
    00:51:979 (5) - new combo
    00:53:443 (1) - 去掉new combo
    01:01:497 (5) - new combo
    01:06:622 (5) - new combo
    01:24:193 - 总觉得在这里就可以结束了啊
GaoGaiGar
  • 00:07:472 (3) - 作为normal难度这个有点难了
    00:02:176 (3) - 这个slider移动到00:01:987更符合节奏
    00:10:987 (3) - new combo
    00:12:451 (5,6) - 用1.1的DS
    00:15:197 (3,4) - 用1.1的DS
    00:17:576 (2,3,4) - 用1.1的DS
    00:38:809 (3,4,5) - 用1.1的DS
    00:43:202 (1,2) - 用1.1的DS
    00:46:863 (2,3) - 用1.1的DS
    00:49:059 (4) - new combo
    00:57:845 (4) - new combo
    01:01:506 (3) - new combo
    01:04:068 (1,2) - 用1.1的DS
    01:24:193 - 总觉得在这里就可以结束了啊
Genesic GaiGar
  • 00:08:059 (5) - new combo
    00:10:987 (11) - new combo
    00:13:916 (16) - new combo
    00:17:210 (25) - new combo
    00:19:773 (33) - new combo
    00:20:322 (1) - 去掉new combo
    00:41:921 (6,8) - 木有重叠好
    00:43:019 (10,2) - 木有重叠好
    00:57:845 (4) - new combo,第一个圈加finish
    01:01:506 (5) - new combo
Final Genesic GaoGaiGar
  • 00:10:987 (1) - 第一个圈加soft-finish
    00:37:528 (7) - new combo
    01:03:885 (3) - new combo
加个KDS STAR
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Program By Weiren
Topic Starter
Muscipular

Weiren wrote:

General
  • 所有offset - ⑨
GaiGar
  • 00:02:167 (3) - 这个slider移动到00:01:987更符合节奏
    00:16:103 (4) - 这个slider会被前面打出的300挡住
    00:18:300 (7) - 第一个圈加soft-finish
    00:37:336 (1) - 第一个圈加normal-finish
    00:40:264 (5) - 加normal-finish
    00:51:979 (5) - new combo
    00:53:443 (1) - 去掉new combo
    01:01:497 (5) - new combo
    01:06:622 (5) - new combo
    01:24:193 - 总觉得在这里就可以结束了啊
GaoGaiGar
  • 00:07:472 (3) - 作为normal难度这个有点难了
    00:02:176 (3) - 这个slider移动到00:01:987更符合节奏
    00:10:987 (3) - new combo
    00:12:451 (5,6) - 用1.1的DS
    00:15:197 (3,4) - 用1.1的DS
    00:17:576 (2,3,4) - 用1.1的DS
    00:38:809 (3,4,5) - 用1.1的DS
    00:43:202 (1,2) - 用1.1的DS
    00:46:863 (2,3) - 用1.1的DS
    00:49:059 (4) - new combo
    00:57:845 (4) - new combo
    01:01:506 (3) - new combo
    01:04:068 (1,2) - 用1.1的DS
    01:24:193 - 总觉得在这里就可以结束了啊
Genesic GaiGar
  • 00:08:059 (5) - new combo
    00:10:987 (11) - new combo
    00:13:916 (16) - new combo
    00:17:210 (25) - new combo
    00:19:773 (33) - new combo
    00:20:322 (1) - 去掉new combo
    00:41:921 (6,8) - 木有重叠好
    00:43:019 (10,2) - 木有重叠好
    00:57:845 (4) - new combo,第一个圈加finish
    01:01:506 (5) - new combo
Final Genesic GaoGaiGar
  • 00:10:987 (1) - 第一个圈加soft-finish
    00:37:528 (7) - new combo
    01:03:885 (3) - new combo
加个KDS STAR
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EasyModder 1.3
Program By Weiren
Done.
谢谢

原来好多地方丢了NewCombo
Miu Matsuoka
Modding key:
Black: Normal mods
Crimson: Combining mods (Change none OR all of them)
With a "?": Suggestion

Overall
Not a fan of those difficulty names, but I think they're fine.

Gaigar
00:04:336 (2) - Best not to overlap with 00:01:987 (3)
00:25:621 (1) - Too quick after a spinner, maybe end spinner at 00:24:889?
00:42:095 (2) - Don't overlap with the previous slider
00:43:193 (3) - Make this parallel to (2)
Combining the above 2 mods... Might look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/144225

00:47:586 (3) - (1) is blocking the reverse arrow, rearrange some sliders to prevent this
01:04:059 (1) - Avoid touching the previous slider
01:06:622 (5) - Start at the same level (y-coordinate) that (1) and (3) have
01:19:801 (1) - Start at 01:19:618
01:21:265 (1) - Too quick after a spinner
01:23:461 (6) - Put this under (5)

GaoGaiGar
00:07:281 (3) - End at red tick (Add one reverse)
00:43:193 (1) - Make this parallel to 00:42:095 (6)
00:46:854 (2) - Remove ONE reverse
00:47:586 (3) - Start at 00:47:403

00:56:006 (5) - Clap
00:56:738 (7) - Overlap this with (3)
01:19:801 (1) - Start at 01:19:618 and end at original time

Genesic GaiGar
00:00:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These two triplets are 1 beat apart, spacing must be greater, or it would be misleading
00:03:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:18:300 (6) - Spacing is too small
00:57:104 (3) - Change this to the Ctrl+J of 00:56:372 (1)
01:19:801 (1) - Start at 01:19:618 and end at original time
01:22:729 (1) - Reverse arrow is being overlapped

Final Genesic GaoGaiGar
00:28:001 (10) - Move to overlap slider head to the slider head of (7)
00:39:532 - Kiai fountains which are too close may be unrankable, remove this or the coming one
01:05:249 (6,7) - Don't overlap anything suddenly when there is a stream
01:06:530 (9,1) - ^
Section 01:06:622 - 01:15:042: LOL those 1/4 jumps are insane, but I like them... Unfortunately it seems to be unrankable with such placings, change them?

lol'd at the song~ and nice hitsounds :D
Topic Starter
Muscipular

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

Modding key:
Black: Normal mods
Crimson: Combining mods (Change none OR all of them)
With a "?": Suggestion

Overall
Not a fan of those difficulty names, but I think they're fine.

Gaigar
00:04:336 (2) - Best not to overlap with 00:01:987 (3)
00:25:621 (1) - Too quick after a spinner, maybe end spinner at 00:24:889?
00:42:095 (2) - Don't overlap with the previous slider
00:43:193 (3) - Make this parallel to (2)
Combining the above 2 mods... Might look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/144225

00:47:586 (3) - (1) is blocking the reverse arrow, rearrange some sliders to prevent this
01:04:059 (1) - Avoid touching the previous slider
01:06:622 (5) - Start at the same level (y-coordinate) that (1) and (3) have
01:19:801 (1) - Start at 01:19:618
01:21:265 (1) - Too quick after a spinner
01:23:461 (6) - Put this under (5)

GaoGaiGar
00:07:281 (3) - End at red tick (Add one reverse)
00:43:193 (1) - Make this parallel to 00:42:095 (6)
00:46:854 (2) - Remove ONE reverse
00:47:586 (3) - Start at 00:47:403

00:56:006 (5) - Clap
00:56:738 (7) - Overlap this with (3)
01:19:801 (1) - Start at 01:19:618 and end at original time

Genesic GaiGar
00:00:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These two triplets are 1 beat apart, spacing must be greater, or it would be misleading
00:03:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:18:300 (6) - Spacing is too small
00:57:104 (3) - Change this to the Ctrl+J of 00:56:372 (1)
01:19:801 (1) - Start at 01:19:618 and end at original time
01:22:729 (1) - Reverse arrow is being overlapped

Final Genesic GaoGaiGar
00:28:001 (10) - Move to overlap slider head to the slider head of (7)
00:39:532 - Kiai fountains which are too close may be unrankable, remove this or the coming one
01:05:249 (6,7) - Don't overlap anything suddenly when there is a stream
01:06:530 (9,1) - ^
Section 01:06:622 - 01:15:042: LOL those 1/4 jumps are insane, but I like them... Unfortunately it seems to be unrankable with such placings, change them?

lol'd at the song~ and nice hitsounds :D
Thanks
Snowy Dream
[GaiGar]
01:06:622 (5) - newcombo
01:08:086 (1) - delete newcombo
01:09:550 (2) - newcombo
01:17:604 (4) - 不顺时针摆么...?


[GaoGaiGar]
00:13:358 (4) - 删掉可能节奏更好.


[Genesic GaiGar]
00:38:800 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这种摆法有点难... 而且导致00:40:447 (2) 可能会看不清楚..


[Final Genesic GaoGaiGar]
00:30:583 (8) - newcombo
01:13:130 (3,4,5,7,8,9,10) - 3-5 和7-10 部分重叠 个人感觉不好看..
01:21:000 (1,2,3,4) - spinner后面最好空一点再放note.
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其他没什么问题了 0.0
Kawayi Rika
hi~ 你好 我的一些建议~

[Final Genesic GaoGaiGar]

01:04:608 (5) - 往右边移动一个格子。
01:24:193 (10) - slider 开头 去掉finish.


[Genesic GaiGar]

00:40:356 - add note.
00:46:854 (4) - add NC.
00:49:782 (4) - ^
00:54:175 (4) - ^
01:14:675 (7) - 建议往下移动一个格子。
01:18:153 (5) - Remove note.
01:24:193 (5) - slider 开头 去掉finish.


[GaoGaiGar]

AR 或者 HP -1?
00:07:281 (3) - 这个换成1/4会更好听点?而且是NORMAL难度。
00:56:372 (6) - add NC.
01:18:336 (5) - ^
01:23:461 (7) - slider结尾 加上finish.


[GaiGar]


AR-1
00:01:987 (3) - 这个有点歪了,可以画的更圆滑吗?
00:09:148 (2,3) - 间距错误。
01:06:256 (4) - 移动到这里会好看点? X:224 y:176
01:18:336 (5) - add NC.
01:23:461 (6) - 把开头和折返的finish删掉。


MAP做的不错~继续加油~
good luck~ :)
Topic Starter
Muscipular
Update Thanks :)

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字数补丁.exe
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ax_pokl
[GaiGar]
一上手刚准备打,发现问题就来了。
我不得不去看edit
00:01:987 (3) - 结尾在00:02:890比较好吧、
00:05:059 (3) - 同理
00:05:059 (3) - 这个开头实在是。。两个小节最好保持一致。
即便是我都要卡一下,新手就更不用说了。
00:06:917 (2) - 上手就用这种东西不太好吧。
如果00:08:050 (1) - 之前的东西是成心要弄难的话,那就算了别改了。
——————
00:22:693 (1,1) - 这两个spinner加在这里我实在搞不懂。
绿色有点不和谐啊,换成黄色或删掉?
00:44:657 (4,1,2,3) - 这里snapp有点严重,一定要改改。
00:50:514 (3) - 最好放在spinner的右边,不要snapp。
01:06:622 (1,2,1,2) - 不妨放远点。
00:08:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 这里最好NC

[GaoGaiGar]
难度比较相似,最好删一个难度并分开等级。
00:04:336 (2,3) - 中间加一个circle
00:06:917 (2,3) - 这个,非常难度,最好分开。
00:35:322 (3,4,5,6) - 这样很不好,因为很难读具体有几个circle(这里节奏改变了)。改成slider吧。
01:04:059 (1,2) - 合并
01:13:211 (2,3) - 纯坑爹,合并。
01:23:461 (7) - 为何不在最后加一个spinner?

[Genesic GaoGaiGar]
00:03:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 叠起来的坑爹啊。仔细看看第五个clrcle偏移出来了。
00:04:878 (7) - 这个最好还是snapp
00:21:228 (7,8,9,10) - 坑爹了。把8号slider右移或交换位置。

[Final]
这个还可以,没什么好改的。

mod结束
Topic Starter
Muscipular

ax_pokl wrote:

[GaiGar]
一上手刚准备打,发现问题就来了。
我不得不去看edit
00:01:987 (3) - 结尾在00:02:890比较好吧、
00:05:059 (3) - 同理
00:05:059 (3) - 这个开头实在是。。两个小节最好保持一致。
即便是我都要卡一下,新手就更不用说了。
00:06:917 (2) - 上手就用这种东西不太好吧。
如果00:08:050 (1) - 之前的东西是成心要弄难的话,那就算了别改了。
——————
00:22:693 (1,1) - 这两个spinner加在这里我实在搞不懂。
绿色有点不和谐啊,换成黄色或删掉?
00:44:657 (4,1,2,3) - 这里snapp有点严重,一定要改改。
00:50:514 (3) - 最好放在spinner的右边,不要snapp。
01:06:622 (1,2,1,2) - 不妨放远点。
00:08:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 这里最好NC

[GaoGaiGar]
难度比较相似,最好删一个难度并分开等级。
00:04:336 (2,3) - 中间加一个circle
00:06:917 (2,3) - 这个,非常难度,最好分开。
00:35:322 (3,4,5,6) - 这样很不好,因为很难读具体有几个circle(这里节奏改变了)。改成slider吧。
01:04:059 (1,2) - 合并
01:13:211 (2,3) - 纯坑爹,合并。
01:23:461 (7) - 为何不在最后加一个spinner?

[Genesic GaoGaiGar]
00:03:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 叠起来的坑爹啊。仔细看看第五个clrcle偏移出来了。
00:04:878 (7) - 这个最好还是snapp
00:21:228 (7,8,9,10) - 坑爹了。把8号slider右移或交换位置。

[Final]
这个还可以,没什么好改的。

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谢谢。
嗯,那个。。。snapp是神马。。。
ax_pokl

Muscipular wrote:

ax_pokl wrote:

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谢谢。
嗯,那个。。。snapp是神马。。。
snapp是重叠,就是不要把物件叠起来遮挡。
resnap是调整全部物件的时间位置,edit里有这个功能。
frost-b-spec
thx reqs~

[Genesic GaiGar]
0.37.336(1) - return -1

[GaoGaiGar]
0.46.854(2) - return -1

[GaiGar]
1.04.059(1) - use 1return(1.04.059 - 1.04.425 - 1.04.791)
1.23.461(6) - Don't overlapped it on (3,4)

:)
Topic Starter
Muscipular

frost-b-spec wrote:

thx reqs~

[Genesic GaiGar]
0.37.336(1) - return -1

[GaoGaiGar]
0.46.854(2) - return -1

[GaiGar]
1.04.059(1) - use 1return(1.04.059 - 1.04.425 - 1.04.791)
1.23.461(6) - Don't overlapped it on (3,4)

:)
Update
Thanks :)
kanpakyin

Muscipular wrote:

ax_pokl wrote:

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谢谢。
嗯,那个。。。snapp是神马。。。

ax_pokl wrote:

snapp是重叠,就是不要把物件叠起来遮挡。
resnap是调整全部物件的时间位置,edit里有这个功能。
.....stack才是重疊把,查無snapp字,而且resnap是重新把note/slider咬住時間線把..
mercury2004
Sorry for late. :o
Mod as requested.

Red: Means.You are breaking beatmapping rules or mistake. You should change it immediately.
Orange: Means. My Suggestion. It is okay whether you change it or not
Purple:Means. Highly Recommend you to change it.

General
You don't need to put dash in the (TV Size). "TV Size" <-- Ok, "TV-Size" Not Ok
Third Timing Section BPM and Offset is not correct, But I can't find the correct BPM and offset too. You should ask for help in this forum viewtopic.php?f=60&t=13795

I think GaiGar Difficulty and GaoGaoGar difficulty is almost the same. Just increase some note and swap position and increase AR OD .... I think you should keep only one difficulty here. Or you should make one of the difficulty more different in note place ment and rhythms



GaiGar Difficulty
I'll assume this as Normal difficulty.
HP drain +1
00:46:121 (1) - Can you move this somewhere else. Beginner might not see the reverse slider.
01:24:193 (6) - Kiai Time end here

GaoGaiGar Difficulty
I'll assume this as Normal+ difficulty.
01:24:193 (6) - Kiai Time end here


Genesic Gaigar Difficulty
01:24:193 (6) - Kiai Time end here

Final Genesic Gaigar Difficulty
00:40:264 (1) - move this kiai to here? 00:38:800 (1) -
01:03:876 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is completely confusing. You should use 1/6 here.
01:06:622 (1,2) - This jump is unacceptable.It is very confusing.This will cause combo break. move 2 closer to 1 Put them halfway. Or At least new combo the jump so the player will know this is a jump.01:07:537 (3,1) - ^
01:08:086 (2,3) - ^
01:09:001 (4,1) - ^
01:09:550 (2,3) - ^
01:10:283 (6,7) - ^
01:10:923 (9,1) - ^
01:12:845 (2,3) - ^
01:13:394 (6,7) - ^

01:20:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This jump is okay since this flow is fast. The jump is acceptable.

Overall. GJ. You make a map that make me really want to watch that anime. Hitsound and note placement is fantastic. Star~

If this mod proved to be not helpful. Don't kudos
Topic Starter
Muscipular

mercury2004 wrote:

Sorry for late. :o
Mod as requested.

Red: Means.You are breaking beatmapping rules or mistake. You should change it immediately.
Orange: Means. My Suggestion. It is okay whether you change it or not
Purple:Means. Highly Recommend you to change it.

General
You don't need to put dash in the (TV Size). "TV Size" <-- Ok, "TV-Size" Not Ok
Third Timing Section BPM and Offset is not correct, But I can't find the correct BPM and offset too. You should ask for help in this forum viewtopic.php?f=60&t=13795

I think GaiGar Difficulty and GaoGaoGar difficulty is almost the same. Just increase some note and swap position and increase AR OD .... I think you should keep only one difficulty here. Or you should make one of the difficulty more different in note place ment and rhythms



GaiGar Difficulty
I'll assume this as Normal difficulty.
HP drain +1
00:46:121 (1) - Can you move this somewhere else. Beginner might not see the reverse slider.
01:24:193 (6) - Kiai Time end here

GaoGaiGar Difficulty
I'll assume this as Normal+ difficulty.
01:24:193 (6) - Kiai Time end here


Genesic Gaigar Difficulty
01:24:193 (6) - Kiai Time end here

Final Genesic Gaigar Difficulty
00:40:264 (1) - move this kiai to here? 00:38:800 (1) -
01:03:876 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is completely confusing. You should use 1/6 here.
01:06:622 (1,2) - This jump is unacceptable.It is very confusing.This will cause combo break. move 2 closer to 1 Put them halfway. Or At least new combo the jump so the player will know this is a jump.01:07:537 (3,1) - ^
01:08:086 (2,3) - ^
01:09:001 (4,1) - ^
01:09:550 (2,3) - ^
01:10:283 (6,7) - ^
01:10:923 (9,1) - ^
01:12:845 (2,3) - ^
01:13:394 (6,7) - ^

01:20:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This jump is okay since this flow is fast. The jump is acceptable.

Overall. GJ. You make a map that make me really want to watch that anime. Hitsound and note placement is fantastic. Star~

If this mod proved to be not helpful. Don't kudos
Update
Thanks~
Selee

mercury2004 wrote:

Third Timing Section BPM and Offset is not correct, But I can't find the correct BPM and offset too. You should ask for help in this forum viewtopic.php?f=60&t=13795
I don't think my timing is off. :o
TicClick
The second BPM is 161 or 161.5, not 165 (as I hear it).
No kudosu, ofc.

The third is ok.
Neptunus
你好~

Gaogaigar:
01:24:560 - 这条绿线应该出现在01:24:193 - 吧?

Gaofightgar:
节奏太密集,毕竟作为hard难度来讲:举个例子
00:02:890 (9) - 这里与其用一个reverse slider,不如用个长1/2slider,既符合vocal,又不会太紧张。就像这里一样,你就处理的很好00:05:420 (8) -
00:06:735 (2,3) - 这种衔接在hard里面出现有欠妥当,
再比如:00:31:112 (5,6,1) -
建议去掉00:31:112 (5,6) - 并且将slider从00:31:295 - 这里开始,结尾不变

Final Genesic GaoGaiGar:
note样式保持一致:比如:
00:46:854 (4) - 这里应该newcombo因为00:49:599 (1) - 同样的地方你选择了newcombo, 然而,我的建议是去掉00:49:599 (1) - ,并且从00:49:782 (2) - 开始newcombo


加油,争取rank!~ ;)
Topic Starter
Muscipular

Neptunus wrote:

你好~

Gaogaigar:
01:24:560 - 这条绿线应该出现在01:24:193 - 吧?

Gaofightgar:
节奏太密集,毕竟作为hard难度来讲:举个例子
00:02:890 (9) - 这里与其用一个reverse slider,不如用个长1/2slider,既符合vocal,又不会太紧张。就像这里一样,你就处理的很好00:05:420 (8) -
00:06:735 (2,3) - 这种衔接在hard里面出现有欠妥当,
再比如:00:31:112 (5,6,1) -
建议去掉00:31:112 (5,6) - 并且将slider从00:31:295 - 这里开始,结尾不变

Final Genesic GaoGaiGar:
note样式保持一致:比如:
00:46:854 (4) - 这里应该newcombo因为00:49:599 (1) - 同样的地方你选择了newcombo, 然而,我的建议是去掉00:49:599 (1) - ,并且从00:49:782 (2) - 开始newcombo


加油,争取rank!~ ;)
Update~
Thank you
What
Good map ^^
You need Tags.
This is my little MOD . sorry my eng is bad


[GaoGaiGar]
good

[GaoFighGar]
01:21:265 (1,2) - spacing

[Final Genesic GaoGaiGar]
00:21:228 (8) - NC?
Topic Starter
Muscipular

What wrote:

Good map ^^
You need Tags.
This is my little MOD . sorry my eng is bad


[GaoGaiGar]
good

[GaoFighGar]
01:21:265 (1,2) - spacing

[Final Genesic GaoGaiGar]
00:21:228 (8) - NC?
Fixed
Thank you
artpiggo
Final
00:06:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - make some slope in it (rotate i mean) since the vertical stream is the way too tense for the beginning of song.
01:01:497 (2) - add curve in it since straight slider is too boring in this part. and for the sake of its chorus.
01:02:961 (2) - ^
01:20:990 (1,2,3) - rotate to this way >> \\
01:23:553 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - zig zag pattern at least. go direct vertical is too tense. and it will make the map nicer.

GaoFigh
00:18:300 (6) - add curve
00:19:032 (8) - ^
00:37:336 (1) - rotate to >> //
00:40:264 (1) - CCW 90
01:05:890 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make in >> ))

GaoGai
00:30:380 (4) - add curve

7.5/10 good luck.
Topic Starter
Muscipular

artpiggo wrote:

Final
00:06:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - make some slope in it (rotate i mean) since the vertical stream is the way too tense for the beginning of song.
01:01:497 (2) - add curve in it since straight slider is too boring in this part. and for the sake of its chorus.
01:02:961 (2) - ^
01:20:990 (1,2,3) - rotate to this way >> \\
01:23:553 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - zig zag pattern at least. go direct vertical is too tense. and it will make the map nicer.

GaoFigh
00:18:300 (6) - add curve
00:19:032 (8) - ^
00:37:336 (1) - rotate to >> //
00:40:264 (1) - CCW 90
01:05:890 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make in >> ))

GaoGai
00:30:380 (4) - add curve

7.5/10 good luck.
Update Something
thanks~
Lidan
Hey :D

[Final Genesic GaoGaiGar]
  1. 00:09:331 (4) - Add circle?
[GaoFighGar]
  1. 00:21:228 (1) - New combo
Nice map :)
Topic Starter
Muscipular

L i d a N wrote:

Hey :D

[Final Genesic GaoGaiGar]
  1. 00:09:331 (4) - Add circle?
[GaoFighGar]
  1. 00:21:228 (1) - New combo
Nice map :)
thanks but sorry for no change
Sure
Hi, you have exciting song. :D


[Final Genesic GGG]
00:21:228 (8) - New combo
00:39:532 & 00:40:264 - Unrankable. You can't use several kiai times in short time. It distracts player from moving cursor. Turn off them.
01:20:990 (1) - Starting stream on blue tick after spinner? It's not funny. Better way for an example http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/162327


[GaoFighGar]
00:01:444 (4) - Spacing. I point spacing out rarely, but this one isn't good idea.
00:02:529 (8) - This overlapping is ugly. Try this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/162334
00:04:336 (4) - Spacing
00:39:532 - I don't see any reason to turn on kiai at this time. Turn off please.
01:05:524 (1) - Don't you think it's too close to next note?


[GaoGaiGar]
00:54:907 (3) - New combo?
There is no major problem.


Good luck ;)
Topic Starter
Muscipular

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi, you have exciting song. :D


[Final Genesic GGG]
00:21:228 (8) - New combo
00:39:532 & 00:40:264 - Unrankable. You can't use several kiai times in short time. It distracts player from moving cursor. Turn off them.
01:20:990 (1) - Starting stream on blue tick after spinner? It's not funny. Better way for an example http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/162327


[GaoFighGar]
00:01:444 (4) - Spacing. I point spacing out rarely, but this one isn't good idea.
00:02:529 (8) - This overlapping is ugly. Try this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/162334
00:04:336 (4) - Spacing
00:39:532 - I don't see any reason to turn on kiai at this time. Turn off please.
01:05:524 (1) - Don't you think it's too close to next note?


[GaoGaiGar]
00:54:907 (3) - New combo?
There is no major problem.


Good luck ;)
fixed, thank you :)
L_P
hihi
全部建议,因为这map没问题

Insane

00:02:529 (8) - 强力建议用curve的http://puu.sh/6VQ3
00:19:764 (1,2,3) - 这三个用在这里怪怪的,不如变成。。删掉note2, 1跟3jump
没啥问题,但是感觉你用的stream有时候打起来不打过瘾啊?

Hard
00:04:878 (7) - 改成note, 然后再slider?
00:06:554 (1,2,3,4) - 很难读啊。。。没啥特别建议
00:30:746 (7) - 变成一个没repeat的slider?
00:51:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里建议搞点花样
01:23:461 (3) - 目测这个可以拉近一点

gaogaigar
00:06:917 (2) - 这个难度的,听说MAT很禁忌多repeat
我倒觉得你三个diff.里最好的是gaogaigar XD no offence...

对不起。。。我渣。。。好难mod啊
Topic Starter
Muscipular

L_P wrote:

hihi
全部建议,因为这map没问题

Insane

00:02:529 (8) - 强力建议用curve的http://puu.sh/6VQ3
00:19:764 (1,2,3) - 这三个用在这里怪怪的,不如变成。。删掉note2, 1跟3jump
没啥问题,但是感觉你用的stream有时候打起来不打过瘾啊?

Hard
00:04:878 (7) - 改成note, 然后再slider?
00:06:554 (1,2,3,4) - 很难读啊。。。没啥特别建议
00:30:746 (7) - 变成一个没repeat的slider?
00:51:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里建议搞点花样
01:23:461 (3) - 目测这个可以拉近一点

gaogaigar
00:06:917 (2) - 这个难度的,听说MAT很禁忌多repeat
我倒觉得你三个diff.里最好的是gaogaigar XD no offence...

对不起。。。我渣。。。好难mod啊
改了一部分
Thanks :)
bossandy
新手mod 還不成熟 請見諒>_<
GaoGaiGar:
SPOILER
00:40:264 (5) - 加NC
00:41:729 (1) - 去掉NC
00:43:193 (5) - 加NC?
00:46:121 (1) - 開頭加finish?
01:05:157 (1) - 去掉NC
GaoFighGar:
SPOILER
00:21:228 (7) - 間距
00:51:979 (1,2,3,4,5) - 把一些slider分成三個note的或一slider加一note感覺比較好玩>_<
01:17:421 (X) - 加個note吧
01:24:193 (5) - 開頭加finish?
Final Genesic GaoGaiGar:
SPOILER
00:13:449 (4) - 去掉clap
00:13:541 (5) - 加clap
00:16:835 (7) - 開頭加finish? 加NC
01:00:032 (4) - 中間加clap
副歌那一段啊... 我不知道這樣行不行?>_< 你可以問問別人這樣的擺法可不可以

這首歌好熱血啊~ Great map!! 祝好運~~
Topic Starter
Muscipular

bossandy wrote:

新手mod 還不成熟 請見諒>_<
GaoGaiGar:
SPOILER
00:40:264 (5) - 加NC
00:41:729 (1) - 去掉NC
00:43:193 (5) - 加NC?
00:46:121 (1) - 開頭加finish?
01:05:157 (1) - 去掉NC
GaoFighGar:
SPOILER
00:21:228 (7) - 間距
00:51:979 (1,2,3,4,5) - 把一些slider分成三個note的或一slider加一note感覺比較好玩>_<
01:17:421 (X) - 加個note吧
01:24:193 (5) - 開頭加finish?
Final Genesic GaoGaiGar:
SPOILER
00:13:449 (4) - 去掉clap
00:13:541 (5) - 加clap
00:16:835 (7) - 開頭加finish? 加NC
01:00:032 (4) - 中間加clap
副歌那一段啊... 我不知道這樣行不行?>_< 你可以問問別人這樣的擺法可不可以

這首歌好熱血啊~ Great map!! 祝好運~~
Update
thanks
L_P
需要star吗?
话说我最近有点吝啬要pm我一声
Topic Starter
Muscipular

L_P wrote:

需要star吗?
话说我最近有点吝啬要pm我一声
如果你喜欢这图的话就射吧>///<
L_P
啊 我射了
Mapper 31
May I make taiko diff?
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