Hello. There were some exams, so sorry for that late.
[Inner Oni]
I suggest some things and hope that some will help you.
Good luck on your way!
[Inner Oni]
- Map is so repetetive, so i think i'll not mention every similar thing more than twice, because it will be like mod of "^" (in case i find them, of course ).
- 01:37:482 (3,4) - similar sounds, i see no reason for kat at 3. Change it to don. Also, i recommend you to even delete last one, 4, because of 01:37:146 - 01:37:823 - .
- 01:47:625 (51,52) - you can also emphasize drum's sound ending by putting here kats.
- 01:50:267 (67,68,69) - if you tried to emphasize vocal here, so better to 01:50:352 (68,69) - swap them. I know, that you try to map 01:50:437 (69) - those sounds like don, but here is no problem to switch it to don.
- 02:00:494 (143) - kat here will suit better and make this part a little various. Also, you did that pattern lately at 02:03:051 (162,163,164,165) - this moment.
- 02:01:176 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155) - the same stream as ago, but you did here 02:01:517 (153) - kat here and idk why.
- 02:03:903 (169) - the same suggestion, as i said above.
- 02:11:403 (234) - if you decided to fix that moments, so here is another one.
- 02:14:471 (257,258,259) - oh i forgot to say somethinh about rhytm here- 02:14:642 (259) - is note, which better to tap, than to stream ( i mean 02:14:471 (257,258,259) - d.k will be better for rhytm, than ddk, because you emphasize kat by spacing)
- 02:15:323 (264) - don to emphasize the beginning of next stream (which starts with kat).
- 02:20:948 (308) - don suits more.
- 02:37:312 (406,407,408,409,410,411,412) - bad rhytmic here, try to change this pattern
- 02:41:744 (439,440) - oh, here you did d.k, as i suggested some moments ago. You know, your map has good stabilty, but moments like this are a bit weird, because player get used to play similar sounds as similar patterns (in most cases).
- 02:53:335 (525,526,527,528,529,530,531,532,533,534,535,536) - bad rhytmics again. In this moment i can't what are you emphasizing here.
- 03:26:573 (3,4) - as i said before, or fix to dd, or delete 4 and make 3 don.
- 03:48:733 (92) - why kat?
- 04:09:358 (176) - i usually do kat in that moments, so maybe you'll like this idea too. And even maybe make 04:09:358 (176,177,178) - them kkk.
- 04:12:085 (193,194,195,196,197,198,199) - if you hear stream in this moment - you have low sound oor smth else. Delete them and listen with 25-50%. I hear stream starts 04:12:767 (200) - here, but not at 04:12:085 (193) - this moment.
- 04:22:994 (285,286,287,288,289,290,291) - well, i'll not repeat them, but i hope you'll understand what i mean.
- 04:25:806 (306,307,308) - strange emphasizing, but ok.
- 04:34:585 (374,375,376,377) - also want to point, that here i hear 5-note stream. For example, delete 04:35:011 - and put 1 note at 04:34:840 - . Plus, by this you emphasize 04:35:096 - loud sound by spacing.
- 04:42:767 (435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443) - i think, you can do better this part.
- 04:54:869 - so here starts new musical part and you get some really cool sounds to emphasize, but you continue to map similar. Think about reampping in more various style. 05:02:198 (557,558,559,560) - good example, but use more density.
- 05:05:778 (582,583,584,585,586,587,588,589) - in that density this looks more better, than 04:54:869 (502,503,504,505,506,507,508,509,510,511,512,513,514,515,516,517,518,519) - , but you lose 05:05:608 - sounds here.
I suggest some things and hope that some will help you.
Good luck on your way!