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Fifkee
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 29 March, 2017 at 7:05:26 PM

Artist: Toby Fox
Title: Metal Crusher
Source: Undertale
Tags: undertale mettaton chiptune
BPM: 116
Filesize: 1053kb
Play Time: 00:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. 4K ADVANCED - 4Key (2.12 stars, 286 notes)
  2. 4K BASIC - 4Key (1.95 stars, 264 notes)
  3. 4K EXHAUST - 4Key (3.01 stars, 447 notes)
  4. 4K NOVICE - 4Key (1.94 stars, 293 notes)
  5. Copper (0 stars, 0 notes)
  6. Gold (1.5 stars, 54 notes)
  7. Hyperdiamond (2.92 stars, 41 notes)
  8. Molybdenum (5.29 stars, 216 notes)
  9. Steel (4.13 stars, 198 notes)
Download: Toby Fox - Metal Crusher
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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What needs to be completed:

- 2 more difficulties ✔  
- Finish "Steel" difficulty ✔  
- Make the "Magnesium" difficulty a tiny bit easier (or make it harder if I want -u-) ✔  ✔  ✔  
- Make "Steel" a 4-star ✔
- Make "Gold" harder ✔  
- Make Copper ✔
-Finish Copper X
-Hopefully get this ranked.
(The difficulties are named after metals, from softest to hardest.)
The two ranks are going to be called Copper and some other metal that's harder than copper but weaker than Molybdenum.
Modders
qrlwx, TheNewBungping
^will be set to modders if I manage to get another person to mod my map k
Thanks for reading! Here's a cookie.
qrlwx
Hey

00:01:188 (4,5) - unexpected gap between notes, would at least nc, probably stack 5 with 4 or increase spacing relative to 00:00:930 (3,4) -, I would suggest a rhythm like https://gyazo.com/69cc4b66015a9c38bc69d70a74fd1146 and https://gyazo.com/f83eb3baa06e3bbac3b63ed669483e9f
00:04:280 (5) - nc
00:06:749 (9,1) - would somehow adjust flow between these as they feel very unnatural to play right now. I also would nc and alternate patterns with 00:07:007 (2) - (one tick later).
00:08:688 (4) - nc
00:11:145 (8) - fix positioning
00:13:861 (2) - nc here instead of 1 tick earlier or: 00:13:861 (2,3,4) - convert into kickslider (would recommend that)
00:14:378 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - feels somewhat unnatural, I would suggest to tinker a little bit with the structure of the stream, you can convert sliders using ctrl shift f (in case you didn't know)
00:15:284 (1,2) - use normal spacing
00:17:223 (1,2) - stack these or increase spacing
00:17:480 (2,3,4) - 00:17:997 (5,6,7) - increase spacing between these
00:19:549 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - wouldn't spam nc here
00:20:842 (4) - I would use a combo like https://gyazo.com/da387db12b48a0200fc89879be9dd634 for all sliders similar to this one
00:37:911 (6,7) - increase spacing, nc
00:39:204 (4) - move out of underlap to improve readability
00:39:204 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - seems like a somewhat generic pattern, you might want to have some diversity when doing something like this. Maybe look into maps like flower dance that have a similar theme of circle placement.
00:43:342 (7) - nc here instead 00:43:730 (1) -
00:44:894 (9,1,2,3) - try to keep spacing emphasis parallel to the sounds you hear, it's somewhat unnatural to play right now.
00:45:670 (1) - would use a rhythm like https://gyazo.com/09f9d9e396459afa66cb64cafa1c64b3
00:46:445 (4,5,6) - more distinct spacing emphasis required
00:47:480 (8) - nc here instead 00:47:997 (1) -
00:50:584 (4) - stack properly or remove from underlap
00:50:842 (5,6) - increase spacing or stack
00:53:428 (1) - why nc?
Topic Starter
Fifkee
thanks for the mod bb, i'm fixing them right now! :D
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4K NORMAL
00:20:844 - 00:26:792 Too many repetitive pattern.
00:27:050 - 00:27:309 and 00:27:568 - 00:27:826 is not the same sound, I recommend changing it.
00:43:602 move this so that it's using the same snap divisor as the other notes in this entire map.
Topic Starter
Fifkee
alright, thanks!
Topic Starter
Fifkee

TheNewBungping wrote:

4K NORMAL
00:20:844 - 00:26:792 Too many repetitive pattern.
00:27:050 - 00:27:309 and 00:27:568 - 00:27:826 is not the same sound, I recommend changing it.
00:43:602 move this so that it's using the same snap divisor as the other notes in this entire map.
1. Fixed.
2. Set that whole part to whistles.
3. It was already on the same snap divisor, 1/4.
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