hi
00:57:256 (2,1,2,3) - 01:02:179 (2,1,2) - rhythms are quite awkward here, you have the strong snare mapped to the slider end 00:57:564 . a rhythm like 00:59:872 (1,2) - is much nicer cos you can click this beat
01:33:564 (1,2) - can be pretty confusing tbh, the snapping changes but the pattern looks the same as everything else. maybe try increasing spacing? or use a rhythm like 02:11:718 (1,2,3) - to make the change easy to read
02:35:410 (1,2) - why put the jump? stacking would make more sense with what u did previously 02:34:179 (2,3) - 02:36:641 (2,3) . also u can remove nc
02:43:564 (1) - really hard to read this slider, cause its covered by 02:43:102 (1) - and 02:43:333 (2) - points in the general direction toward 02:43:718 (1) .
03:00:333 (4,5,1) - triplet doesnt work here, the snare on 03:00:333 (4) - is really strong so that should be emphasised. a rhythm like
http://puu.sh/vdhMq/17aed97a1f.jpg could work
03:15:102 (2,1,2,3) - 03:20:026 (2,1,2,3) - same as mentioned before
03:24:641 (1) - 03:27:102 (1) - dont think u need nc? 03:23:410 (2) - and 03:24:026 (2) - dont have ncs
04:20:949 (1) - doesn't really address the 1/3 change that well either
call me back when u reply and fix metadata