Art-FzTT wrote:

star !! really fun map =)

i really want this to be ranked !!!

GL

Hellzero wrote:

M4M

General
Del 2 osb files done
Remove Lead-in done

Lunatic
00:27:909 - need note (with finish) Added, but didn't put a finish
01:01:225 (3,4) - stack Done
00:34:067 (1) - revome finish? I like it as is
01:04:383 - add note? I think it's fine as is
01:55:541 (6) - whistle at start? hm....done

Hard
First test play i missed on this part 01:44:962 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - maybe me confused NC i dont know D: Just say
00:25:383 (1) - add finish at start I think it's fine as is
02:05:172 (1,2,3) - after jumps this part look like jumps D: increase the distance? I think it's fine as is
03:15:593 (4) - NC I think it's fine as is
03:15:909 (1) - remove NC ^

Normal will relay to Leyko
Different Kiai? Oh, it's guest diff D:
00:54:120 (4) - triplet on normal? Del this and star spinner
03:01:225 (3) - add whistle like 03:11:329 (4)
03:15:593 (4) - Del this and star spinner

Easy
OD -1? not really sure, I can 100% it with HR either way so I can't tell the difference at all
02:11:488 (1,2,3,4) - hm... easy... ok. I think it should be fine, it's easy to know how the rhythm goes and they're all sliders
Nothing here but it look like normal :\

Hellzero wrote:

Normal
Different Kiai? Oh, it's guest diff D:
00:54:120 (4) - triplet on normal? Del this and star spinner okay
03:01:225 (3) - add whistle like 03:11:329 (4) okay
03:15:593 (4) - Del this and star spinner okay

Raging Bull wrote:

General:
*Opens folder* -> *Sees smiley face* -> ! ^o^

Easy:
00:34:541 - Timing section seems useless. Remove it. Done
01:19:698 (2) - Slider nazi. It looked pretty weird compared to most of your other sliders. Make a better beat blanket? :L fixed a bit~
01:36:120 - Map here to keep breaks consistent? I think it's fine as is
03:08:646 (3) - Why don't you move this note down instead? So it doesn't get overlapped by the slider. I dunno, I kind of like it as is I'll change it if more people want though

Normal:
Seems okay, though I don't like some overlaps :L

Hard:
00:34:541 - Don't need this timing section. Remove it. Done
00:44:962 (3,4) - This looks more like it would fit the lunatic difficulty. Make it slightly easier? Or extend the slider all the way to where 4 is on timeline. I think it's fine as is
01:23:488 (1,4) - I suggest you change the position for one of these two. Right now, 1 nearly blocks out 4 and makes it so it doesn't look like a slider. moved (4)~
03:06:435 (3,4) - Same as second comment. I think it's fine as is

Insane:
Put a break at 00:58:225 instead? Or map this part for hard/easy to keep breaks consistent. I think it's fine as is, as it gets harder I map more and remove some breaks~
00:34:541 (1,1) - It might be an insane/lunatic, but I think this part is a bit cruel. 1/2 note after spinner. :/
Use a slider instead with slower velocity? I think it's fine as is

I tried :L Anyways good map thanks for mod+star~

• 
  The part of mp3 files after 03:20:014 are not used yet. You should cut them off via software. If you don't know how to do, just PM me and I'll help you~

• 
  AR - 1, now is a little fast
  00:17:172 (2) - add normal-finish on the last circle
  00:20:330 (1) - move 1 grid left
  00:44:330 (2) - kinda ugly
  02:04:856 (3,4) - too close
  02:15:751 (4,1) - I suggest you to change these circles to one slider. It's hard for beginner

• 
  01:06:435 (2,4) - these notes aren't stack well. move the circle to (312, 66)
  01:46:856 (1,2) - too close
  01:52:541 (4) - new combo?

• Very good and I can't find any bug.

• You can set the HP Drain Rate to 8
  00:34:541 (1,1) - too fast, you may move the spinner to 00:34:383
  01:08:804 (3,1) - these notes aren't stack well. move the slider (01:09:593 (1)) to (315, 214)
  01:25:067 (6) - confusing, hard to read
  01:50:330 (2,3) - don't use this pattern, it is unrankedable now!

Weiren wrote:

General

• 
  The part of mp3 files after 03:20:014 are not used yet. You should cut them off via software. If you don't know how to do, just PM me and I'll help you~ I prefer to keep the full song there so people can listen to it~

Easy

• 
  AR - 1, now is a little fast Done
  00:17:172 (2) - add normal-finish on the last circle I prefer it as is, but I will change it if more people want~
  00:20:330 (1) - move 1 grid left instead I moved (3) and (4) right a bit~
  00:44:330 (2) - kinda ugly I think it's fine as is
  02:04:856 (3,4) - too close Intentional, I wanted (4) to be in the center~
  02:15:751 (4,1) - I suggest you to change these circles to one slider. It's hard for beginner I'm not sure about this I kind of prefer it the way I have it, but I will change it if more people want~

Leyko's Normal will relay to Leyko~

• 
  01:06:435 (2,4) - these notes aren't stack well. move the circle to (312, 66)
  01:46:856 (1,2) - too close
  01:52:541 (4) - new combo?

Hard

• Very good and I can't find any bug.

Lunatic

• You can set the HP Drain Rate to 8 Setting it to 8 makes the score too high, and I think 8 is a bit too high
  00:34:541 (1,1) - too fast, you may move the spinner to 00:34:383 Changed~
  01:08:804 (3,1) - these notes aren't stack well. move the slider (01:09:593 (1)) to (315, 214) o.o good eye, fixed~
  01:25:067 (6) - confusing, hard to read I think it's fine as is
  01:50:330 (2,3) - don't use this pattern, it is unrankedable now! it is? I think it's fine and not hard at all to read, nor have I seen anywhere that it was unrankable

Really nice map, and awesome. star(now I'm short of KDS, I will give KDS star when I get enough KDS) thanks for mod+star~
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Program By Weiren

Raging Bull wrote:

Lunatic
00:28:067 (1) - Space it properly D: It tricked me *sniffles* But really. Looked like 1/2 to me since it is spaced almost as far as other 1/2 notes. stacked it on top of (2). I originally had another note stacked on top of (1) but then decided I didn't like that note, this solution seems better IMO~

No kds if you found it helpful. Thanks for checking~

1. 00:37:383 (3) - 2 sounds on a note sounds bad, really, use only whistle would better
2. 00:42:435 (3) - ^
3. 00:52:541 (5) - ^
4. 02:08:330 - Use silent sound(5%) would be better IMO, since backgronud music here no sound to match
5. 02:56:330 - ^
6. 03:03:909 (4) - 2 sounds on a note sounds bad, really, use only whistle would better
7. 03:08:962 (4) - ^

1. 00:36:435 (2) - Remove whistle, and then add whistle at 00:37:067 (4)
2. 00:47:646 (4) - Remove whistle on slider or add whistle to other slider to stay the same
3. 01:07:383 (3) - Add whistle sounds better
4. 02:03:593 (6) - Remove whistle IMO
5. 03:08:646 (3) - Add whistle

1. 00:33:751 (1,1,1) - Is here needed new combo? Or maybe you have some particular reson
2. 00:42:277 (2) - Remove whistle here sounds better
3. 00:44:962 (3) - It's a bit hard to read while playing, I suggest use a note and a slider which repeat 3 time, sicne 3 repeat slider is used in most times
   
4. 00:52:383 (2) - Remove whistle
5. 01:12:593 (4) - ^
6. 01:25:698 (3) - Tiny spacing wrong
7. 01:37:698 (2,3) - sldier(2) covered by previou note, looked bad and also hard to see, then note (3) spacing wrong
8. 01:37:698 Spinner - Although auto play could get 2000 bonus at this spinner, I still think this spinner is hard to 300 while playing, maybe use a slider better
9. 03:03:751 (2) - Remove whistle
10. 03:06:435 (3) - Same suggestion to 00:44:962 (3)

1. 00:27:593 (7) - Spacing too far
2. 00:36:435 (4) - ^
3. 00:38:962 (5,6) - ^
4. 00:47:962 (4) - Well, this is too close, when a jump appear or just a spacing change, it's better to use new combo so that player could noticed
   There are few sound suggetion same to Hard diff. So I won't post them out again

Weiren wrote:

01:06:435 (2,4) - these notes aren't stack well. move the circle to (312, 66) fixed
01:46:856 (1,2) - too close fixed
01:52:541 (4) - new combo? okay

Breeze wrote:

00:36:435 (2) - Remove whistle, and then add whistle at 00:37:067 (4) hmm okay
00:47:646 (4) - Remove whistle on slider or add whistle to other slider to stay the same i think its okay that way
01:07:383 (3) - Add whistle sounds better okay
02:03:593 (6) - Remove whistle IMO okay
03:08:646 (3) - Add whistle okay

Breeze wrote:

Hi there

[Easy]

1. 00:37:383 (3) - 2 sounds on a note sounds bad, really, use only whistle would better I think it sounds fine~ I'll change it if more people want me to, though
2. 00:42:435 (3) - ^ ^
3. 00:52:541 (5) - ^ ^
4. 02:08:330 - Use silent sound(5%) would be better IMO, since backgronud music here no sound to match Changed
5. 02:56:330 - ^ ^
6. 03:03:909 (4) - 2 sounds on a note sounds bad, really, use only whistle would better As before, I think it sounds fine as is
7. 03:08:962 (4) - ^ ^

[Lkyo's Normal]

1. 00:36:435 (2) - Remove whistle, and then add whistle at 00:37:067 (4)
2. 00:47:646 (4) - Remove whistle on slider or add whistle to other slider to stay the same
3. 01:07:383 (3) - Add whistle sounds better
4. 02:03:593 (6) - Remove whistle IMO
5. 03:08:646 (3) - Add whistle

[Hard]

1. 00:33:751 (1,1,1) - Is here needed new combo? Or maybe you have some particular reson I think it looks nice and I wanted to emphasize that part
2. 00:42:277 (2) - Remove whistle here sounds better Fixed~
3. 00:44:962 (3) - It's a bit hard to read while playing, I suggest use a note and a slider which repeat 3 time, sicne 3 repeat slider is used in most times I think it plays fine, but I'll change it if more people want
   [attachment=0:ed21f]1.jpg[/attachment:ed21f]
4. 00:52:383 (2) - Remove whistle Done
5. 01:12:593 (4) - ^ ^
6. 01:25:698 (3) - Tiny spacing wrong I put it under the end of 01:23:804 (2), I prefer it how it is~
7. 01:37:698 (2,3) - sldier(2) covered by previou note, looked bad and also hard to see, then note (3) spacing wrong o.o...not sure how that ended up there, fixed~
8. 01:37:698 Spinner - Although auto play could get 2000 bonus at this spinner, I still think this spinner is hard to 300 while playing, maybe use a slider better I'm not sure about this, I think this spinner is fine I'll change it if more people want though
9. 03:03:751 (2) - Remove whistle Done
10. 03:06:435 (3) - Same suggestion to 00:44:962 (3) I think it plays fine, but I'll change it if more people want

[Lunatic]
Wow, you're challennge the limit of human ability. hehe x)

1. 00:27:593 (7) - Spacing too far I think it's fine as is
2. 00:36:435 (4) - ^ ^
3. 00:38:962 (5,6) - ^ ^
4. 00:47:962 (4) - Well, this is too close, when a jump appear or just a spacing change, it's better to use new combo so that player could noticed I'm not sure I want to add a jump there, but if more people want I will~ Also, I think most of the jumps are readable enough without new combos, and since there are so many, it would be weird to put a new combo on all of them~
   There are few sound suggetion same to Hard diff. So I won't post them out again

nice map, star thanks for mod+star

SapphireGhost wrote:

I'd put a clever song reference here but nah, I'm not in the mood.

[General]
- It would be good to cut your mp3 due to more than 20% being unmapped. I like keeping the full song, and almost 80% is mapped
- Keep the spinners on your difficulties the same length. why? o.o on easier diffs, I prefer to put longer spinners~

[Easy]
Settings are a bit too high. HP Drain and Overall Difficulty should be set to 2. Changed
00:17:172 (2) - I'd advise not putting such short sliders that repeat an unpredictable number of times on an Easy difficulty to avoid confusion. You have several of them, though, so oh well. I think it should be fine, all you need to do is hit the start and hold until it ends~
01:28:541 - 18 seconds is getting too long for this break. I'd advise making it consistent with the other difficulties. I prefer to have more breaks on easier diffs~
02:16:541 - I'm not sure why this break is dragged, sir. it's not o.o reinserted anyway
03:07:067 (1,2,3) - It would be cool to position these so that (1) and (3) don't overlap. I think it's fine as is, but I'll change it if more people want

[Leyko's Normal] will relay to Leyko
00:26:962 (3,4) - It would be nice to remove the overlap here.
02:06:435 (1) - Spinner might be a bit long, but oh well.

[Hard]
00:30:593 (2,1,1,1) - It would be nice if these didn't overlap. they hardly overlap D: oh well, changed
00:33:909 (1,1) - I'd remove new combo here because it's getting a bit spammy. I think it looks nice, and I wanted to emphasize that part
02:15:830 (1) - I'd remove the spinner altogether and drag the break to where it ends. This removes your short spinner and provides coolness. I think it's fine as is, but I'll change it if more people want

[Insane]
I don't think Approach Rate 9 is necessary or better than Approach Rate 8 here, and I feel pretty strongly that's the case. The rest played alright, though. For me, AR9 is better and more fun~

Have a star. Fun fun fun fun. thanks for mod+star~

SapphireGhost wrote:

[Leyko's Normal]
00:26:962 (3,4) - It would be nice to remove the overlap here. Done~
02:06:435 (1) - Spinner might be a bit long, but oh well. No worries, changed it xD

JauiPlaY wrote:

[Leyko's Normal]
00:26:962 (3,4) - may be confusing for new players. Changed.
00:33:751 (1) - remove the repeat or let the volume louder. Changed.
00:55:698 (T) - useless timing point. Fixed.
01:26:014 (T) - ^ Fixed.
03:02:646 (2) - should be overlapped by 03:01:225 (3). Fixed.

JauiPlaY wrote:

hihi~
some suggestions:

[General]
fine. but you've mapped all the diff to 3:17 only, and the length of the song is 4:23...so maybe cut the .mp3 file? aaaaaa >.< All right I'll do it later~

[Easy]
02:30:120 (x) - add a note here? Hm...done~
03:08:646 (3) - x272y256 may be better imo. seeing as many people have pointed this out, I have changed it~

[Leyko's Normal] will relay to Leyko
00:26:962 (3,4) - may be confusing for new players.
00:33:751 (1) - remove the repeat or let the volume louder.
00:55:698 (T) - useless timing point.
01:26:014 (T) - ^
03:02:646 (2) - should be overlapped by 03:01:225 (3).

[Hard]
01:57:435 (4) - x384y160 may be better imo. this is just a mirrored version of 01:56:330 (1,2,3), so I think it's fine as is~
01:57:593 (1) - and x432y224. ^
02:15:830 (1) - maybe too short... because many people have pointed this out, I changed it~

[Lunatic]
00:34:383 (1) - should starts at 00:34:146 imo. I wanted to create more of a build-up with the spinner, which is why there's a pause (without one it just seems like it's continuing the previous part).
00:45:041 (4,5) - spacing. though it's fine but looks weird. how does it look weird? o.o It's evenly spaced, so I think it should be fine as is
02:36:751 (1) - starts at 02:36:672? I think it's fine as is

nice map.
so
star~ thanks for mod+star~

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Leyko's Normal]
Tag "zsr123" is missing Fixed
Really, lower SV or increase AR, it makes no sense when approach circles are much slower than the sliders specially on a song with such adrenaline as this one. Okay, increased AR.
The 2 sections where you're using kiai sound really different, try fore a more consistent kiai? Okay ;3;
01:10:067 (5) - Start this slider 1/2 earlier then extend it by 1 repeat, so it follows the music more, it's pretty awkward right now. Okay
00:32:488 (1,1) - Remove NC on those 2. Okay
00:35:488 - Why have a kiai fountain when you could just have kiai regularly? Changed it
01:05:804 - ^
01:44:962 (5) - My ears X_X please dont spam such a loud hitsound on a repeat slider Woops.. sorry xD

Sakura Hana wrote:

[zsr123's Taiko]
02:06:593 (807,808,809,810,811,812,813,814,815,816,817,818,819,820,821,822,823,824,825,826,827,828,829,830,831,832,833,834,835,836) -
This is a really mean move at such a high bpm to put so many finishes even if they are 1/2 plus switching around, i recommend instead that you use regular katsus.I think this is okay.... as I can simple pass without miss here even I'm a newbie taiko player(I can't pass the whole diff ;_;) and this fit the music
02:16:541 - This is a really weird kiai section actually, plus isnt it kinda long? for the guitar solo@ @ if you really dont like this I can change..

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Your mp3 has only 75% mapped, you need to cut the rest this is bold and in red so I guess I have to fix it now anyway, done

[Lunatic]
00:33:751 (1,1,1) - Please avoid using portal combos (NC spam) they mess up HP calculations. these jumps are so large that I would expect players to miss at least one of them some of the time, so the "messing up" is actually intentional o.o
00:34:383 (1,1) - Spinner is pretty short and having a note 1/2 after at this speed is not a good idea aaa alright, I've removed the spinner
01:58:383 (1,2,3) - Why suddenly use some jumps? they dont fit with this part of the music imo, nor with the pattern you were using. I think it's fine as is
02:03:909 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps look somewhat random positioned to me, since they dont seem to form a pattern nor the music seems to be jumping either. I think this is fine as is, it's building up along with the song
02:05:014 (5,1) - Switch new combo. Done~
02:35:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Can you at least form a shape with these notes? they look like randomly thrown around the grid ._. see? I'd rather make this part more "free-style" after using a lot of patterns... anyway, (1,2,3,4) make a zig-zag because of the song's pitch going up and down, and (5,6,7,8) are making a sort of spiral because the song's pitch is going straight up, with it ending in the center at the spinner.

[Hard]
00:33:751 (1,1,1) - Same comment as [Lunatic] Changed~
00:34:225 - Delete this green line while you're at it. Deleted this and the one after it
01:39:120 (3) - I couldnt see this slider due to the hitburst :< I think it's fine as is, the only part that's covered up is the end and it has a low AR

[zsr123's Taiko]
02:06:593 (807,808,809,810,811,812,813,814,815,816,817,818,819,820,821,822,823,824,825,826,827,828,829,830,831,832,833,834,835,836) -
This is a really mean move at such a high bpm to put so many finishes even if they are 1/2 plus switching around, i recommend instead that you use regular katsus.
02:16:541 - This is a really weird kiai section actually, plus isnt it kinda long?

[Leyko's Normal]
Tag "zsr123" is missing
Really, lower SV or increase AR, it makes no sense when approach circles are much slower than the sliders specially on a song with such adrenaline as this one.
The 2 sections where you're using kiai sound really different, try fore a more consistent kiai?
01:10:067 (5) - Start this slider 1/2 earlier then extend it by 1 repeat, so it follows the music more, it's pretty awkward right now.
00:32:488 (1,1) - Remove NC on those 2.
00:35:488 - Why have a kiai fountain when you could just have kiai regularly?
01:05:804 - ^
01:44:962 (5) - My ears X_X please dont spam such a loud hitsound on a repeat slider

[Easy]
00:17:172 (2), and all others - Please dont use small sliders that repeat more than once because they confuse new players I think it should be fine as is, since all you have to do is hit the slider and hold until it ends. I think it should be fine because when doing this, there isn't anything directly after, so it's not like there's no time to recover after it ends. Also, it helps a lot by knowing the song and map~

Note to both of the guest mappers: I know kiai can be different on a guest difficulty but it'd be better to see some kiai that makes more sense, remember kiai is your appreciation of the strongest parts of the song, and it makes very little sense if all your kiai sections sound different

Really great map pieguy, you deserve a star--- icon lol thanks for mod~

NatsumeRin wrote:

don't know if it's because you changed the mp3, but offset+6 (126). fixed~

no kud. Thanks~