Sakura Hana wrote:[General]
Your mp3 has only 75% mapped, you need to cut the rest this is bold and in red so I guess I have to fix it now anyway, done
00:33:751 (1,1,1) - Please avoid using portal combos (NC spam) they mess up HP calculations. these jumps are so large that I would expect players to miss at least one of them some of the time, so the "messing up" is actually intentional o.o
00:34:383 (1,1) - Spinner is pretty short and having a note 1/2 after at this speed is not a good idea aaa alright, I've removed the spinner
01:58:383 (1,2,3) - Why suddenly use some jumps? they dont fit with this part of the music imo, nor with the pattern you were using. I think it's fine as is
02:03:909 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps look somewhat random positioned to me, since they dont seem to form a pattern nor the music seems to be jumping either. I think this is fine as is, it's building up along with the song
02:05:014 (5,1) - Switch new combo. Done~
02:35:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Can you at least form a shape with these notes? they look like randomly thrown around the grid ._. see? I'd rather make this part more "free-style" after using a lot of patterns... anyway, (1,2,3,4) make a zig-zag because of the song's pitch going up and down, and (5,6,7,8) are making a sort of spiral because the song's pitch is going straight up, with it ending in the center at the spinner.
00:33:751 (1,1,1) - Same comment as [Lunatic] Changed~
00:34:225 - Delete this green line while you're at it. Deleted this and the one after it
01:39:120 (3) - I couldnt see this slider due to the hitburst :< I think it's fine as is, the only part that's covered up is the end and it has a low AR
02:06:593 (807,808,809,810,811,812,813,814,815,816,817,818,819,820,821,822,823,824,825,826,827,828,829,830,831,832,833,834,835,836) -
This is a really mean move at such a high bpm to put so many finishes even if they are 1/2 plus switching around, i recommend instead that you use regular katsus.
02:16:541 - This is a really weird kiai section actually, plus isnt it kinda long?
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Really, lower SV or increase AR, it makes no sense when approach circles are much slower than the sliders specially on a song with such adrenaline as this one.
The 2 sections where you're using kiai sound really different, try fore a more consistent kiai?
01:10:067 (5) - Start this slider 1/2 earlier then extend it by 1 repeat, so it follows the music more, it's pretty awkward right now.
00:32:488 (1,1) - Remove NC on those 2.
00:35:488 - Why have a kiai fountain when you could just have kiai regularly?
01:05:804 - ^
01:44:962 (5) - My ears X_X please dont spam such a loud hitsound on a repeat slider
00:17:172 (2), and all others - Please dont use small sliders that repeat more than once because they confuse new players I think it should be fine as is, since all you have to do is hit the slider and hold until it ends. I think it should be fine because when doing this, there isn't anything directly after, so it's not like there's no time to recover after it ends. Also, it helps a lot by knowing the song and map~
Note to both of the guest mappers: I know kiai can be different on a guest difficulty but it'd be better to see some kiai that makes more sense, remember kiai is your appreciation of the strongest parts of the song, and it makes very little sense if all your kiai sections sound different
Really great map pieguy, you deserve a star--- icon lol thanks for mod~