Giga-P - Childish War [Osu|Taiko|OsuMania] · forum

voynich

Joined July 2014

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voynich 2017-02-26T11:13:55+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, July 24, 2017 at 6:49:23 AM

Artist: Giga-P
Title: Childish War
Tags: vocaloid okochama sensou kagamine rin and len kiddie war clap jager-kun nines shelso vinnie reol
BPM: 175
Filesize: 4409kb
Play Time: 03:18
Difficulties Available:

Clap's Insane (4.95 stars, 836 notes)
Collab (6.05 stars, 841 notes)
Easy (1.45 stars, 50 notes)
Extra (5.61 stars, 823 notes)
Jager's Hard (3.35 stars, 598 notes)
Nines' Extra (5.75 stars, 985 notes)
Normal (2.09 stars, 54 notes)
Shelso's Oni (4.97 stars, 1370 notes)
Vinnie's 4k Insane - 4Key (3.91 stars, 2360 notes)

Download: Giga-P - Childish War
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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i'm leaving this ~~trash~~ up as an example of myself to not let a failure go unpunished.
man i was edgy way back when. i might actually revisit this idk

Easy: In Progress <----]--- both of these i need mods for i'm bad at mapping lower than hard

Normal: In Progress <-]

Jager's Hard: Finished

Clap's Insane: Finished

-Lidell's Insane: In Progress ?

~~Another: Planned~~ may not be neccessary

Extra: Finished

Nines' Extra: Finished
~~Dashyy-'s Extra: In Progress ?~~ might not be happening

Collab: -Nishiki- Finished, Nines Finished

Childish: Very unlikely.

Shelso's Oni: Finished
Vinnie's 4K Insane: Finished

Progress

2/26/17 - changed weird thing in metadata
2/26/17 - fixed a few things.(and also extra thingy i forgot to do)
2/26/17 - and a new bg
3/2/17 - reached 50% for extra
3/2/17 - T_T

3/2/17 - yet another new bg
3/4/17 - 70% complete with extra
3/5/17 - finished extra
3/13/17 - added jager's hard
3/13/17 - added shelso's oni
3/27/17 - not dead yet,added potatoe's retreat (placeholder)
4/9/17 - added normal diff (incomplete)
4/9/17 - turns out potatoe's diff was finished the whole time lmao
4/23/17 - yet again staying alive,fixed up normal diff (here's to hoping i'm not an idiot and actually finish this time)
4/24/17 - added clap's insane (for sure this time)
4/25/17 - finished normal
5/7/17 - honestly guys,thank you so much for the support on this map!i love how many different people are getting interested in this and it really keeps me coming back to the mapping scene.
5/7/17 - added vinnie's 4k insane
5/7/17 - things fixed on extra (lots of things)
5/7/17 - going a bit overboard with the things sorry
5/8/17 - added new metadata
5/13/17 - i miss the old bg
5/13/17 - yet again new extra stuffs
5/16/17 - how many kudosus do you need in order to catch the attention of a bn?
5/18/17 - apparently it's like 12 so let's do this bois
5/27/17 - added childish difficulty,gonna be hardest but rn it's bad af,moving mapset into wip/h
5/29/17 - nevermind the childish difficulty sucked
5/30/17 - 3.5 -> 4
6/2/17 - new childish difficulty,let's try this again.
6/3/17 - work on childish difficulty resulted in a remap
6/4/17 - my style is way too trash now to make a new diff
6/22/17 - collab,rin,and len submitted.
6/28/17 - focus currently on collab,will continue on Len and Rin (then Easy and Normal) after collab is done
7/24/17 - and just before the graveyard,this map is back!collab finished,will start work again on Rin and Len
7/24/17 - actually the Rin and Len idea sucked so work on easy diff is continuing (will do normal after.)
7/24/17 - after work on both easy and normal is finished,i'll start work on another.

Last edited by voynich 2022-07-07T22:30:45+00:00, edited 86 times in total.

Potatoe751

87 posts

Joined July 2014

Potatoe751 2017-02-26T11:46:57+00:00

Honestly this map is a lot of fun to play, but to make it rankable you’ll have to take out a lot that makes it fun. IMO you should just keep it graveyarded instead of going for rank

00:09:190 (2,3,4) – and 00:11:247 (5,6,7) - Spacing shouldn’t be the same when they aren’t the same timing, really hard to read.

00:12:575 (2,3) – Snap to 1/3 ticks

00:12:447 (1,2,3,4) – I would recommend using 1/3 sliders instead of beats since it’s a new timing

00:14:161 (4) – This slider isn’t rankable

00:16:218 (4,5,6) – Should be snapped to 1/3

00:19:304 (1,1) – Spacing is too big imo

00:26:332 (1,2,3,1,2,3) – Really hard to read, although I don’t think it’s unrankable.

00:28:904 (1,2) – Unrankable. You can’t cover a slider end by itself or an entire slider.

00:31:304 (5,6,7,8,1) – Personally I think the spacing is too big for your ¼ bursts

00:35:075 (2,3,1) – Unrankable for the same reason

00:36:447 (4,5,6,7) – I’m not sure if this is unrankable :v

00:38:332 (4,5) – Ugly overlap

00:39:190 (6,7,8,9,10) – Unrankable

00:39:875 (10,1) – Unrankable

00:41:590 (2) – DS increase doesn’t seem warranted

00:45:361 (1,2,3) – Unrankable

00:49:818 (4,1) – Unrankable

00:57:532 (1) – Unrankable

voynich

273 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

voynich 2017-02-26T12:11:58+00:00

Potatoe751 wrote:
Honestly this map is a lot of fun to play, but to make it rankable you’ll have to take out a lot that makes it fun. IMO you should just keep it graveyarded instead of going for rank

00:09:190 (2,3,4) – and 00:11:247 (5,6,7) - Spacing shouldn’t be the same when they aren’t the same timing, really hard to read. Fixed.

00:12:575 (2,3) – Snap to 1/3 ticks Whoops that's why i always got 100s there.

00:12:447 (1,2,3,4) – I would recommend using 1/3 sliders instead of beats since it’s a new timing Now a bit more transition

00:14:161 (4) – This slider isn’t rankable Now slightly more rankable

00:16:218 (4,5,6) – Should be snapped to 1/3 Literally no idea how that happens :c

00:19:304 (1,1) – Spacing is too big imo Not really.They're supposed to fit in between 00:18:618 (1) like a blanket.

00:26:332 (1,2,3,1,2,3) – Really hard to read, although I don’t think it’s unrankable. Part of the "gimmick" my guy.Also the NC leaves a distinction.

00:28:904 (1,2) – Unrankable. You can’t cover a slider end by itself or an entire slider. I'd like to introduce you to https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1129261,which does this several times as a gimmick and is ranked.

00:31:304 (5,6,7,8,1) – Personally I think the spacing is too big for your ¼ bursts Yeah,fixed when I went over it myself.

00:35:075 (2,3,1) – Unrankable for the same reason This one I actually dislike,so yeah fixed.

00:36:447 (4,5,6,7) – I’m not sure if this is unrankable :v Fixed.

00:38:332 (4,5) – Ugly overlap Fixed.

00:39:190 (6,7,8,9,10) – Unrankable Eh.If I spaced them out,it'd be a lot harder to hit.

00:39:875 (10,1) – Unrankable

00:41:590 (2) – DS increase doesn’t seem warranted Wanted to fully blanket 00:41:932 (1) .

00:45:361 (1,2,3) – Unrankable Gimmick

00:49:818 (4,1) – Unrankable

00:57:532 (1) – Unrankable

I get you're concerned for the map's rankability,and thank you for that,but a majority of the map's gimmick relies on the 1/4 sliders.Though they do need tweaking.
Otherwise,thanks for the mod!

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Asuka_- 2017-02-27T09:25:21+00:00

hi im not good at english.

meta
Title : "おこちゃま戦争"

general
you should use custom combocolor

Extra
stack reniency = 6 ??
00:41:761 - you should follow this sound
plz try https://gyazo.com/837541f31a4539a9595a8b3ffaeb358c

00:57:018 (3) - x371 y373 better
01:18:847 (5,1,2,1) - keep DS

voynich

273 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

voynich 2017-02-28T00:20:54+00:00

Asuka_- wrote:
hi im not good at english.

meta
Title : "おこちゃま戦争" Added

general
you should use custom combocolor

Extra
stack reniency = 6 ?? ?
00:41:761 - you should follow this sound
plz try https://gyazo.com/837541f31a4539a9595a8b3ffaeb358c

00:57:018 (3) - x371 y373 better Not bad...Added!
01:18:847 (5,1,2,1) - keep DS Fixed up a bit

Thanks for the mod!(Especially the unicode,didn't remember what it was)

Weber

1,254 posts

Joined May 2015

Weber 2017-03-03T03:59:25+00:00

hi

00:11:761 (1,2,3,4) - Flow could be improved here
00:13:933 (2,3,4) - Difference in spacing here is a little weird considering it's the same in the music

more later

voynich

273 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

voynich 2017-03-03T04:55:55+00:00

Weber wrote:
hi

00:11:761 (1,2,3,4) - Flow could be improved here Not very descriptive,though I tried to improve the flow here.
00:13:933 (2,3,4) - Difference in spacing here is a little weird considering it's the same in the music Fixed,

more later

Proper kudosu after you're finished with the mod,because I don't want yours denied.

Nines

392 posts

Joined May 2013

Nines 2017-04-27T05:29:50+00:00

why hello there

m4m time~~~

[Normal]

00:41:761 - I think this is the more dominant beat, so you should move 00:41:932 (6) - to this point
01:23:761 (1,2,3) - I feel that in a map that is less dense, it might more acceptable to have distance spacing change like this for a phrase that's just quarter beat presses, but I think a newer player might feel overwhelmed by the density of the map to rush 2 and 3 because of how close they are to each other
01:25:132 (1,2,3,1) - same here
01:27:190 (2,3) - ugly overlap
01:35:418 - I think this beat deserves to be mapped since the robot-buzz sound doesn't start until here
02:29:590 (1,2) - make the blanket neater
02:44:675 (1,2,3,4) - does the spacing need to increase here?
02:52:218 (3,1) - this is a personal preference, but I think you might agree: Extend 3 to where the spinner stars and the scoot the spinner over one tick. This way, you here the hitsound for all of the beats. Since the spinner doesn't make initial noise, it feels you're depriving me of the impact this beat deserves D:
03:10:561 (1) - all those anchors tho
03:18:275 (3,1) - I think it would be better to get rid of 1 and make 3 a repeating slider.

[Jager's Hard]

This map is a good Hard difficulty. The main problem is the strange use of New Combos. I aim to help you fix that!
00:23:075 (2) - Make NC because of SV change
00:23:418 (3) - Make NC because this is the start of a new line in the song, rhythmically.
00:27:190 (1) - Remove NC and make 00:27:532 (2) - the start of the NC
00:30:618 (1) - I think this NC is unnecessary, so please remove it
00:31:647 (4) - Make NC
00:32:675 (1) - Remove NC
00:33:875 (1) - Remove NC
00:34:390 (3) - Make this the NC instead of 00:34:732 (1)
00:35:761 (5) - Make this the NC instead of 00:35:932 (1)
00:37:132 (4) - Make NC
00:40:561 (1) - Remove NC
00:41:075 (1) - Remove NC and make 00:41:247 (3) the start of the next combo
00:42:275 (1) - Remove NC and make 00:42:618 (2) the start of the next combo
00:48:104 (5) - Make this the NC instead of 00:48:790 (1)
00:49:475 (4) - Make this the NC instead of 00:49:647 (1)
00:52:047 (6) - Make this the NC instead of 00:52:561 (1)
00:53:418 (5) - Make NC
00:57:532 (6) - Make this the NC instead of 00:58:047 (1)
00:58:904 (5) - Make NC
01:03:018 (6) - Make NC
01:03:875 (1) - Remove NC and make 01:04:390 (3) the start of the next combo
01:05:761 (4) - Make this the NC instead of 01:06:275 (1)
Okay so you're probably sick of me sounding monotonous, so I won't continue to point these things out, instead I'll focus on playability, blankets, flow errors, etc. Please go through the rest of your map fix the New Combos. Generally, do your best to start the NC at the beginning of a measure. The bigger white ticks mark the start of a new measure.
01:26:504 (1,2,3) - This is actually a string of 5 beats, not 3, so maybe change 1 and 2 into a repeating slider and move 3 and shrink it to accordingly
01:27:190 (1,2) - Confusing overlap. The rest of the map suggests that these play the same way that 01:27:875 (3,4) does, due to spacing. Space them apart more or do whatever you think is best to fix the spacing.
01:28:475 (6,7) - fix the spacing here too
02:35:761 (9) - Remove the repeat and add another slider to fill in the beat. Sounds much better this way.
03:14:161 (3,4) - 4 isn't quite mapped to the vocals, more to the instrumental part of the song. If this is how you wanna map this part, then shorten 4 and create a slider at 03:14:675. This feels much better to play. If it's the vocals you're looking for, the vocals start not on the blue tick, but on the white tick.

[Clap's Insane]

I hate AR 9, don't get me wrong (that's why I use HR lol), but I don't feel like this AR is totally appropriate for an Insane difficulty. I feel like this AR should be reserved for Expert difficulties. Consider it (or not lol)
00:19:304 (1,1) - Maybe make these horizontal instead of vertical like the previous two. It feels more interesting that way. Also, to make it more interesting, don't let them be straight.
00:46:732 (5) - Make NC
01:01:475 (1,2) - Ctrl + G for TONS MORE FUN. (and it flows better)
01:41:590 (5) - Make NC
02:39:875 (1,2) - Since the vocals are descending, you should move these down a little bit.
02:40:217 (1,2) - same here
02:51:532 (1,2,1,2) - This feels awkward to play. Consider rotating them horizontally maybe? Figure something out at least lol because the flow is critical for sliders like these, otherwise people will sliderbreak all of the time.
03:18:618 (1) - I'm sure you're spacing them like this to keep it challenging, but I think you should move this to x:136 y:124. It makes your cursor movements more dramatic. Move this to where I said, and move 03:18:961 (1) to x:212 y:228 and play test it. You'll see what I mean.

[Extra]

00:12:790 (4) - This beat shouldn't be mapped. Especially not if you're mapping to the vocals this section.
00:22:390 - You should begin your phrase here instead of at 00:22:904 (1).
00:25:647 (4,5,1) - This sort of spacing looks really ugly. You should space all of your triplets more neatly and closer.
00:29:418 (2) - Make NC because of SV change
00:36:790 (1) - Was there a circle that was supposed to be at the end of this slider? It ends on a blue tick so either there was indeed a circle that was supposed to immediately follow it or you need to scale this slider so that it extends to the white tick.
00:41:075 (2) - Bottom line, always make a NC where SV changes occur.
00:41:418 (1,2,3) - This needs remapping. It doesn't feel like it follows any particular rhythm and because of the really fast SV, you'd assume that these 3 things play into each other immediately, when in fact, 3 is actually a whole beat apart from 2 as opposed to the 1 and 2 being a 1/4 of a beat apart.
00:46:732 (3) - Make NC. Ok i'll shut up about new combos now lmao
00:52:047 (1,2) - consider spacing them a little bit further apart so that they don't like they're about to touch
00:57:532 (1) - honestly, who am I to complain about strange silder shapes and such... but seriously this one is CRAZY. I get the cursor manipulation that occurs, but I think there's an overall better way to draw this slider while still achieving the same cursor path.
01:05:761 (1,2) - This is a really ugly overlap, pls fix
01:06:790 (5,6) - bad flow. consider transition into a circular flow or continuing the up/down flow pattern you established during this combo.
01:12:447 (1) - Make this bigger so that it extends to the white tick
02:14:847 (2,3,4) - ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
02:41:590 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - FREEDOM DIVE???????
02:59:590 (1) - This blanket is too close. Make it so it's not squeezing that circle.

As for Potatoe's Retreat, I don't know how to help. I'm sorry and no offense, truly, but it is overmapped. The excessive use of streams in places like 01:51:189 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - just don't fit. not even with hitsounds

Sorry it took so long for my mod to come out. I'll try my best to have a GD done within the next week (hopefully not two). If I just don't get the inspiration I need then I'll message you. Peace! Good luck!

voynich

273 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

voynich 2017-04-27T06:49:57+00:00

Nines wrote:
why hello there

m4m time~~~

[Normal]
00:41:761 - I think this is the more dominant beat, so you should move 00:41:932 (6) - to this point Tried it,but I don't think I like how it feels,especially how drastically the rhythmn would change.
01:23:761 (1,2,3) - I feel that in a map that is less dense, it might more acceptable to have distance spacing change like this for a phrase that's just quarter beat presses, but I think a newer player might feel overwhelmed by the density of the map to rush 2 and 3 because of how close they are to each other Good point,fixed distance between 2/3 and 2/3 at 01:25:818 .
01:25:132 (1,2,3,1) - same here
01:27:190 (2,3) - ugly overlap Fixed
01:35:418 - I think this beat deserves to be mapped since the robot-buzz sound doesn't start until here Good point,added a 1/1 slider for the buzzer
02:29:590 (1,2) - make the blanket neater Tweaked it a bit,but couldn't make it perfect
02:44:675 (1,2,3,4) - does the spacing need to increase here? Thought it'd be boring if it kept the same spacing,but now that you've pointed it out I'm not sure
02:52:218 (3,1) - this is a personal preference, but I think you might agree: Extend 3 to where the spinner stars and the scoot the spinner over one tick. This way, you here the hitsound for all of the beats. Since the spinner doesn't make initial noise, it feels you're depriving me of the impact this beat deserves D: Good point.
03:10:561 (1) - all those anchors tho lol
03:18:275 (3,1) - I think it would be better to get rid of 1 and make 3 a repeating slider. Doesn't really tie to any important part of the song though...unless you mean a buzzer slider.
[Jager's Hard]
This map is a good Hard difficulty. The main problem is the strange use of New Combos. I aim to help you fix that! Sent to Jager-kun,as I'm not sure how he wants me to go about mods.
00:23:075 (2) - Make NC because of SV change
00:23:418 (3) - Make NC because this is the start of a new line in the song, rhythmically.
00:27:190 (1) - Remove NC and make 00:27:532 (2) - the start of the NC
00:30:618 (1) - I think this NC is unnecessary, so please remove it
00:31:647 (4) - Make NC
00:32:675 (1) - Remove NC
00:33:875 (1) - Remove NC
00:34:390 (3) - Make this the NC instead of 00:34:732 (1)
00:35:761 (5) - Make this the NC instead of 00:35:932 (1)
00:37:132 (4) - Make NC
00:40:561 (1) - Remove NC
00:41:075 (1) - Remove NC and make 00:41:247 (3) the start of the next combo
00:42:275 (1) - Remove NC and make 00:42:618 (2) the start of the next combo
00:48:104 (5) - Make this the NC instead of 00:48:790 (1)
00:49:475 (4) - Make this the NC instead of 00:49:647 (1)
00:52:047 (6) - Make this the NC instead of 00:52:561 (1)
00:53:418 (5) - Make NC
00:57:532 (6) - Make this the NC instead of 00:58:047 (1)
00:58:904 (5) - Make NC
01:03:018 (6) - Make NC
01:03:875 (1) - Remove NC and make 01:04:390 (3) the start of the next combo
01:05:761 (4) - Make this the NC instead of 01:06:275 (1)
Okay so you're probably sick of me sounding monotonous, so I won't continue to point these things out, instead I'll focus on playability, blankets, flow errors, etc. Please go through the rest of your map fix the New Combos. Generally, do your best to start the NC at the beginning of a measure. The bigger white ticks mark the start of a new measure.
01:26:504 (1,2,3) - This is actually a string of 5 beats, not 3, so maybe change 1 and 2 into a repeating slider and move 3 and shrink it to accordingly
01:27:190 (1,2) - Confusing overlap. The rest of the map suggests that these play the same way that 01:27:875 (3,4) does, due to spacing. Space them apart more or do whatever you think is best to fix the spacing.
01:28:475 (6,7) - fix the spacing here too
02:35:761 (9) - Remove the repeat and add another slider to fill in the beat. Sounds much better this way.
03:14:161 (3,4) - 4 isn't quite mapped to the vocals, more to the instrumental part of the song. If this is how you wanna map this part, then shorten 4 and create a slider at 03:14:675. This feels much better to play. If it's the vocals you're looking for, the vocals start not on the blue tick, but on the white tick.
[Clap's Insane]
I hate AR 9, don't get me wrong (that's why I use HR lol), but I don't feel like this AR is totally appropriate for an Insane difficulty. I feel like this AR should be reserved for Expert difficulties. Consider it (or not lol) I sent a similar message to clap as well,but I think I'll make this tweak anyways.
00:19:304 (1,1) - Maybe make these horizontal instead of vertical like the previous two. It feels more interesting that way. Also, to make it more interesting, don't let them be straight.
00:46:732 (5) - Make NC
01:01:475 (1,2) - Ctrl + G for TONS MORE FUN. (and it flows better)
01:41:590 (5) - Make NC
02:39:875 (1,2) - Since the vocals are descending, you should move these down a little bit.
02:40:217 (1,2) - same here
02:51:532 (1,2,1,2) - This feels awkward to play. Consider rotating them horizontally maybe? Figure something out at least lol because the flow is critical for sliders like these, otherwise people will sliderbreak all of the time.
03:18:618 (1) - I'm sure you're spacing them like this to keep it challenging, but I think you should move this to x:136 y:124. It makes your cursor movements more dramatic. Move this to where I said, and move 03:18:961 (1) to x:212 y:228 and play test it. You'll see what I mean.
[Extra]
00:12:790 (4) - This beat shouldn't be mapped. Especially not if you're mapping to the vocals this section. Howso?It fit's the に syllable and feels jarring without.
00:22:390 - You should begin your phrase here instead of at 00:22:904 (1). Good point,fixed.
00:25:647 (4,5,1) - This sort of spacing looks really ugly. You should space all of your triplets more neatly and closer. Barely even noticed due to my hitcircle,fixed.
00:29:418 (2) - Make NC because of SV change Looks a lot nicer,fixed.
00:36:790 (1) - Was there a circle that was supposed to be at the end of this slider? It ends on a blue tick so either there was indeed a circle that was supposed to immediately follow it or you need to scale this slider so that it extends to the white tick. No I'm just an idiot and forgot all about it.I'm pretty sure I even made a mental note to edit it
00:41:075 (2) - Bottom line, always make a NC where SV changes occur. Noted.
00:41:418 (1,2,3) - This needs remapping. It doesn't feel like it follows any particular rhythm and because of the really fast SV, you'd assume that these 3 things play into each other immediately, when in fact, 3 is actually a whole beat apart from 2 as opposed to the 1 and 2 being a 1/4 of a beat apart. I think filler rhythmn might work here,but if I test it and it plays like shit,I'll just remap it.
00:46:732 (3) - Make NC. Ok i'll shut up about new combos now lmao
00:52:047 (1,2) - consider spacing them a little bit further apart so that they don't like they're about to touch Np
00:57:532 (1) - honestly, who am I to complain about strange silder shapes and such... but seriously this one is CRAZY. I get the cursor manipulation that occurs, but I think there's an overall better way to draw this slider while still achieving the same cursor path. Looked gross,cleaned up,but you can't polish a turd,so I might have to remap.
01:05:761 (1,2) - This is a really ugly overlap, pls fix Hopefully it's better now.
01:06:790 (5,6) - bad flow. consider transition into a circular flow or continuing the up/down flow pattern you established during this combo. Transitioned into circular flow
01:12:447 (1) - Make this bigger so that it extends to the white tick Fixed and added finish
02:14:847 (2,3,4) - ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) wew i wondered how long it'd take for someone to see it
02:41:590 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - FREEDOM DIVE??????? I thought it fit the theme,but 1/4 sliders might work as well.I'll keep it,but if it becomes a common complaint,I'll change it.
02:59:590 (1) - This blanket is too close. Make it so it's not squeezing that circle. Broadened slider shape,moved note a bit closer,and added much needed circular flow.
As for Potatoe's Retreat, I don't know how to help. I'm sorry and no offense, truly, but it is overmapped. The excessive use of streams in places like 01:51:189 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - just don't fit. not even with hitsounds

Sorry it took so long for my mod to come out. I'll try my best to have a GD done within the next week (hopefully not two). If I just don't get the inspiration I need then I'll message you. Peace! Good luck!

Thanks for the mod!Don't stress too much on the GD,as I'm fine if you decide you don't want to anymore.Best of luck to you and your map too!

Egotrip

92 posts

Joined May 2015

Egotrip 2017-04-27T19:46:33+00:00

Jager's Hard

Nines wrote:

This map is a good Hard difficulty. The main problem is the strange use of New Combos. I aim to help you fix that!
00:23:075 (2) - Make NC because of SV change
00:23:418 (3) - Make NC because this is the start of a new line in the song, rhythmically.
00:27:190 (1) - Remove NC and make 00:27:532 (2) - the start of the NC
00:30:618 (1) - I think this NC is unnecessary, so please remove it
00:31:647 (4) - Make NC
00:32:675 (1) - Remove NC
00:33:875 (1) - Remove NC
00:34:390 (3) - Make this the NC instead of 00:34:732 (1)
00:35:761 (5) - Make this the NC instead of 00:35:932 (1)
00:37:132 (4) - Make NC
00:40:561 (1) - Remove NC
00:41:075 (1) - Remove NC and make 00:41:247 (3) the start of the next combo
00:42:275 (1) - Remove NC and make 00:42:618 (2) the start of the next combo
00:48:104 (5) - Make this the NC instead of 00:48:790 (1)
00:49:475 (4) - Make this the NC instead of 00:49:647 (1)
00:52:047 (6) - Make this the NC instead of 00:52:561 (1)
00:53:418 (5) - Make NC
00:57:532 (6) - Make this the NC instead of 00:58:047 (1)
00:58:904 (5) - Make NC
01:03:018 (6) - Make NC
01:03:875 (1) - Remove NC and make 01:04:390 (3) the start of the next combo
01:05:761 (4) - Make this the NC instead of 01:06:275 (1)
Okay so you're probably sick of me sounding monotonous, so I won't continue to point these things out, instead I'll focus on playability, blankets, flow errors, etc. Please go through the rest of your map fix the New Combos. Generally, do your best to start the NC at the beginning of a measure. The bigger white ticks mark the start of a new measure.
01:26:504 (1,2,3) - This is actually a string of 5 beats, not 3, so maybe change 1 and 2 into a repeating slider and move 3 and shrink it to accordingly
01:27:190 (1,2) - Confusing overlap. The rest of the map suggests that these play the same way that 01:27:875 (3,4) does, due to spacing. Space them apart more or do whatever you think is best to fix the spacing.
01:28:475 (6,7) - fix the spacing here too
02:35:761 (9) - Remove the repeat and add another slider to fill in the beat. Sounds much better this way.
03:14:161 (3,4) - 4 isn't quite mapped to the vocals, more to the instrumental part of the song. If this is how you wanna map this part, then shorten 4 and create a slider at 03:14:675. This feels much better to play. If it's the vocals you're looking for, the vocals start not on the blue tick, but on the white tick.

Code

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Childish War.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50847
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Childish War
TitleUnicode:おこちゃま戦争
Artist:Giga-P
ArtistUnicode:Giga-P
Creator:-Nishiki-
Version:Jager's Hard
Source:Kagamine Rin & Len
Tags:vocaloid
BeatmapID:1235500
BeatmapSetID:578474

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

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+ All problems are fixed
Hitsounds incoming ( 19 % )
Thank's for modding :p

Egotrip

92 posts

Joined May 2015

Egotrip 2017-04-28T11:58:01+00:00

Hitsound 100%

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Childish War.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50847
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Childish War
TitleUnicode:おこちゃま戦争
Artist:Giga-P
ArtistUnicode:Giga-P
Creator:-Nishiki-
Version:Jager's Hard
Source:Kagamine Rin & Len
Tags:vocaloid
BeatmapID:1235500
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[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:6
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218,308,135704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,336,135875,2,0,L|350:338,2,40
218,308,136218,2,0,P|210:260|221:224,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,200,136561,5,0,0:0:0:0:
371,208,136732,1,0,0:0:0:0:
422,269,136904,5,8,0:0:0:0:
350,304,137075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,319,137247,2,0,L|321:317,3,40
247,328,137590,2,0,L|297:326,3,40
224,334,137932,2,0,L|274:332,3,40
199,329,138275,2,0,P|172:289|172:244,1,80
144,184,138618,6,0,P|192:176|256:96,1,128,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,48,139132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,24,139304,2,0,P|120:32|56:112,2,128,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,48,140161,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,96,140332,6,0,P|312:144|304:184,1,64,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,168,140590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,176,140675,2,0,L|208:184,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,152,141018,2,0,L|80:144,1,64,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,116,141361,5,8,0:0:0:0:
18,193,141532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
47,267,141704,2,0,L|127:259,1,64
177,321,142047,6,0,P|217:337|265:337,1,64
267,266,142390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
321,322,142561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,264,142732,6,0,P|384:224|376:176,1,64
401,128,143075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,154,143247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
265,109,143418,6,0,P|233:107|205:122,1,64
168,189,143761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,255,143932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,264,144104,6,0,B|256:272|256:272|336:264,1,128
400,216,144618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,144,144790,2,0,L|424:16,2,128
480,192,145647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,264,145818,2,0,P|488:304|448:336,1,64
464,328,146075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,328,146161,6,0,L|376:320,1,64
312,336,146504,2,0,P|256:352|232:344,1,64
192,304,146847,6,0,L|112:288,1,64
64,256,147190,2,0,P|56:216|72:176,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,152,147532,6,0,L|208:144,1,64
248,112,147875,2,0,P|256:160|240:192,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,146,148218,6,0,P|175:98|191:66,1,64
239,36,148561,2,0,P|280:40|304:56,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,104,148904,6,0,P|388:117|435:113,1,64
479,73,149247,5,8,0:0:0:0:
503,152,149418,1,0,0:0:0:0:
454,219,149590,2,4,P|401:235|329:226,1,128,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,170,150104,2,0,L|201:150,2,64
254,247,150618,2,0,P|268:272|317:301,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,226,150961,6,0,P|366:179|350:91,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,72,151475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,124,151647,2,0,L|101:118,2,128
307,162,152504,1,0,0:0:0:0:
363,113,152675,6,0,P|371:64|356:41,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,27,153018,2,0,L|210:32,1,64
178,83,153361,2,0,P|166:122|173:154,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,184,153704,2,0,L|320:171,1,64
374,182,154047,2,0,P|383:218|366:264,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,298,154390,2,0,L|246:295,1,64
191,332,154732,2,0,L|115:323,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
89,257,155075,6,0,P|69:212|117:79,1,192
187,71,155761,2,0,L|329:66,1,128
320,152,156447,2,0,L|168:152,1,128
174,224,156961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
186,222,157046,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,221,157132,6,0,L|286:219,1,64
333,247,157475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,310,157647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,343,157818,2,0,P|182:349|147:337,1,64
96,294,158161,2,0,L|84:220,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,161,158504,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,139,158675,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,186,158847,5,8,0:0:0:0:
328,181,159018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,223,159190,2,0,P|402:280|381:348,3,128
286,353,160561,5,0,0:0:0:0:
286,353,160904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
207,297,161247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
207,297,161590,6,0,L|160:289,2,40
277,259,161932,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,171532,12,0,172904,0:0:0:0:
256,192,172990,12,0,174275,0:0:0:0:
410,84,174447,5,0,0:0:0:0:
394,84,174532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
377,83,174618,2,0,L|288:84,1,80
247,146,174961,2,0,P|201:158|151:133,1,80
141,74,175304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,73,175475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
247,146,175647,6,0,P|254:218|245:245,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,265,175990,2,0,L|100:260,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,195,176332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,137,176504,2,0,B|169:115|169:115|268:136,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,194,177018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,254,177190,2,0,P|255:300|266:334,2,80
319,194,177704,2,0,P|361:192|392:168,1,80
432,101,178047,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,47,178218,2,2,L|205:48,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,92,178732,6,0,L|65:79,2,80,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,131,179247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,207,179418,1,4,0:0:0:0:
240,268,179590,2,0,P|295:289|383:249,1,160
389,234,180018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
394,219,180104,2,0,L|395:124,1,80
338,81,180447,2,0,P|281:72|248:84,1,80
253,157,180790,2,0,P|196:166|163:154,1,80
122,100,181132,6,0,L|26:97,2,80,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,60,181647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
270,76,181818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,129,181990,2,0,P|330:179|222:229,1,160
175,201,182504,5,4,0:0:0:0:
231,144,182675,2,0,L|232:46,2,80
175,201,183190,2,0,P|160:253|171:289,1,80
225,329,183532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,300,183704,2,0,P|327:244|301:147,1,160
231,144,184218,6,0,L|134:137,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,82,184732,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,102,184904,2,0,L|449:100,1,80
472,173,185247,2,0,P|479:233|467:269,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
463,263,185504,1,0,0:0:0:0:
451,274,185590,6,0,L|359:276,1,80
320,214,185932,2,0,L|228:212,1,80
165,241,186275,2,0,P|148:186|155:158,1,80
207,106,186618,5,4,0:0:0:0:
287,108,186790,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,165,186961,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,178,187132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
485,224,187304,2,0,P|476:275|449:314,1,80
393,340,187647,1,8,0:0:0:0:
339,281,187818,2,0,P|280:264|155:262,1,160
126,317,188332,5,8,0:0:0:0:
104,247,188504,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,180,188675,2,0,P|180:169|223:176,1,80
279,193,189018,1,8,0:0:0:0:
346,167,189190,2,0,P|368:115|337:11,1,160
271,29,189704,5,8,0:0:0:0:
202,55,189875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,35,190047,2,0,P|119:75|130:133,1,80
172,164,190390,1,8,0:0:0:0:
190,233,190561,2,0,P|128:249|25:228,2,160
245,187,191418,2,0,P|284:185|331:200,1,80
340,266,191761,2,0,L|385:271,2,40
300,326,192104,6,0,P|257:346|210:334,1,80
179,286,192447,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,211,192618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,179,192790,2,0,P|265:210|243:260,1,80
179,286,193132,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,249,193304,2,0,P|106:194|185:132,1,160
236,88,193818,5,8,0:0:0:0:
304,125,193990,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,200,194161,2,0,P|317:255|290:328,1,120
262,317,194504,2,0,L|154:305,1,80
145,211,194847,6,0,P|117:168|121:113,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,94,195190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,131,195361,2,0,L|332:122,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,94,195875,2,0,P|135:72|83:77,1,80
44,122,196218,6,0,L|31:200,1,80
66,263,196561,2,0,P|100:285|152:280,1,80
198,245,196904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
258,283,197075,2,0,L|246:370,2,80
319,244,197590,2,0,P|343:197|336:153,1,80
291,119,197932,5,0,0:0:0:0:
278,118,198018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
265,117,198104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,117,198190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,116,198275,2,0,L|155:117,1,80
130,191,198618,2,0,L|215:192,1,80
274,239,198961,5,4,0:0:0:0:

golden pepe

64 posts

Joined September 2015

golden pepe 2017-04-30T17:18:11+00:00

Nines wrote:
why hello there

[Clap's Insane]
I hate AR 9, don't get me wrong (that's why I use HR lol), but I don't feel like this AR is totally appropriate for an Insane difficulty. I feel like this AR should be reserved for Expert difficulties. Consider it (or not lol) I sent a similar message to clap as well,but I think I'll make this tweak anyways.
00:19:304 (1,1) - Maybe make these horizontal instead of vertical like the previous two. It feels more interesting that way. Also, to make it more interesting, don't let them be straight. i think i'll just leave it as it is, if there's another complaint i'll try to change it
00:46:732 (5) - Make NC ok
01:01:475 (1,2) - Ctrl + G for TONS MORE FUN. (and it flows better) i knew something was just not right about that part, ty
01:41:590 (5) - Make NC ok
02:39:875 (1,2) - Since the vocals are descending, you should move these down a little bit. ok
02:40:217 (1,2) - same here ok
02:51:532 (1,2,1,2) - This feels awkward to play. Consider rotating them horizontally maybe? Figure something out at least lol because the flow is critical for sliders like these, otherwise people will sliderbreak all of the time. uh hopefully its better
03:18:618 (1) - I'm sure you're spacing them like this to keep it challenging, but I think you should move this to x:136 y:124. It makes your cursor movements more dramatic. Move this to where I said, and move 03:18:961 (1) to x:212 y:228 and play test it. You'll see what I mean. honestly it felt less dramatic so im gonna keep it as it is for now

golden pepe

64 posts

Joined September 2015

golden pepe 2017-04-30T17:19:28+00:00

map

Nines

392 posts

Joined May 2013

Nines 2017-05-08T05:58:15+00:00

so i'm 40% done with my GD as of this message, just lettin ya know!

KeigoClear

98 posts

Joined September 2010

KeigoClear 2017-05-16T09:02:07+00:00

m4m return
only modding Extra diff.
my posts are suggestion almost all. don't take it to heart

i apologize if there are any mistakes in my English T^T

Extra

00:07:475 (3) - remove clap
00:07:818 (4) - ^
00:08:161 (5) - ^

00:09:018 (1) - add clap
00:09:190 (2) - ^
00:10:218 (2) - ^
00:10:561 (3) - ^
00:10:904 (4) - ^
00:11:247 (5) - ^
00:11:418 (6) - ^
00:11:590 (7) -
00:11:761 (1) - ^
00:11:932 (2) - ^
00:12:104 (4) - ^

00:12:447 - ~ 00:17:818 - need add hitsound, so much less.
The following is one example:
00:12:447 (1) - add clap
00:12:790 (4) - ^
00:13:818 (1) - ^
00:14:161 (4) - ^
00:15:190 (1) - ^
00:15:532 (2) - ^
00:15:875 (3) - ^
00:16:218 (4) - ^
00:17:247 (3) - ^
00:17:590 (4) - ^

00:13:132 (1) - add whistle
00:13:475 (2) - ^
00:14:504 (5) - ^
00:14:847 (6) - ^
00:16:561 (1) - ^
00:16:904 (2) - ^

00:34:047 (1) - add NC
00:34:390 (3) - remove NC

00:40:390 - add circle
00:40:561 (1) - this is better i think like this https://puu.sh/vRxNU/edf84def6d.jpg
(Copy 00:39:875 (1) - and paste. then select it with Ctral+Shift+S and change Scale x1.000 to 0.800)

00:41:075 (1,2,3,1,2) - x2.00sv is suddenly for these. x1.5 is better i think

00:55:304 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - COOL KICK!

01:06:447 (3) - need NC

01:06:961 (4) - move to 01:07:047 -
and 01:06:961 - add circle. Example: https://puu.sh/vRy9d/ba8362aa91.jpg

01:10:732 (1) - add NC

01:12:104 (5) - add clap
01:11:761 (3) - ^
01:12:104 (5) - ^

01:12:275 - add circle with NC
01:12:361 (2) - add circle Example: http://puu.sh/vRyiZ/6290883697.jpg

01:18:275 (1,2,3,4,5) - these timings are little hard for read i think so.
Thus,
01:18:532 (2) - remove circle
and 01:18:275 (1) - this slider end point extend to 01:18:275 (1) -
01:18:618 (2) - add NC. Example: https://puu.sh/vRyDs/0df077a999.jpg

01:19:647 (1,2,3,4,5) - as adove

01:24:447 (1,2) - the overlap is no good for read. change like this: http://puu.sh/vRyZF/d79851129e.jpg

01:25:475 (1,2,3) - these patterns are no consistency, to influence read.
better like this: https://puu.sh/vRzaK/2219d00c68.jpg

01:27:190 (1,2,3) - spacing is little narrow. better like this: http://puu.sh/vRzf1/c7845fcb48.jpg

01:34:732 (1,2) - this 1/8 slider chain is hard for playing.
How does that look?: https://puu.sh/vRAEx/8fe3a8c637.jpg

01:37:475 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - nice jump!

01:40:904 (1) - add NC
01:41:590 (1) - ^
01:41:932 (1) - ^

01:44:504 - How about this timing? https://puu.sh/vRAR5/5debf0cc80.jpg

02:20:504 (1) - add NC because suddenly sv
02:25:990 (1) - ^

02:41:590 - ~ 02:52:904 - veryverynice flow! so fun

03:05:590 (1) - add NC
03:06:275 (1) - ^

03:10:390 (5) - move to x:139 y:151 for visual

03:11:761 (1) - add NC

03:16:390 (2) - remove clap
03:16:732 (4) - ^
03:17:075 (2) - ^
these changes make intonate.

03:18:961 (1) - remove whistle
only finish sound is cool with the end!

my apologies for the delay

cool feeling Map :3
Good luck for Rank!

voynich

273 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

voynich 2017-05-17T04:15:17+00:00

KeigoClear wrote:
m4m return
only modding Extra diff.
my posts are suggestion almost all. don't take it to heart
i apologize if there are any mistakes in my English T^T

Extra
00:07:475 (3) - remove clap
00:07:818 (4) - ^
00:08:161 (5) - ^ I don't really see a reason to these,as it contrasts what happens on 00:10:218 (2,3,4)

00:09:018 (1) - add clap Added.
00:09:190 (2) - ^
00:10:218 (2) - ^ Not past these.
00:10:561 (3) - ^
00:10:904 (4) - ^
00:11:247 (5) - ^
00:11:418 (6) - ^
00:11:590 (7) -
00:11:761 (1) - ^
00:11:932 (2) - ^
00:12:104 (4) - ^

00:12:447 - ~ 00:17:818 - need add hitsound, so much less. Wanted to contrast with the section before it,especially since the beat snap divisor changes,though I did remove the hitsounds for the first few notes.
The following is one example:
00:12:447 (1) - add clap
00:12:790 (4) - ^
00:13:818 (1) - ^
00:14:161 (4) - ^
00:15:190 (1) - ^
00:15:532 (2) - ^
00:15:875 (3) - ^
00:16:218 (4) - ^
00:17:247 (3) - ^
00:17:590 (4) - ^

00:13:132 (1) - add whistle
00:13:475 (2) - ^
00:14:504 (5) - ^
00:14:847 (6) - ^
00:16:561 (1) - ^
00:16:904 (2) - ^

00:34:047 (1) - add NC Added
00:34:390 (3) - remove NC Used for emphasis

00:40:390 - add circle Not sure about this; I might consider it,though because this part builds up to a much faster part of the song,I think I'll leave it for now.If I don't like it during playtesting though I'll change it.
00:40:561 (1) - this is better i think like this https://puu.sh/vRxNU/edf84def6d.jpg That's not too bad of an idea!Hopefully it doesn't make it harder to hit 00:41:075 (1) after.
(Copy 00:39:875 (1) - and paste. then select it with Ctral+Shift+S and change Scale x1.000 to 0.800)

00:41:075 (1,2,3,1,2) - x2.00sv is suddenly for these. x1.5 is better i think I find it a bit similar to how spaced 00:43:990 (1,2,3,4,5)
is after,though I've had some issues with this before.

00:55:304 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - COOL KICK! I just remembered to fix up the hitsounds here.wew i forget everything

01:06:447 (3) - need NC Fixed.

01:06:961 (4) - move to 01:07:047 -
and 01:06:961 - add circle. Example: https://puu.sh/vRy9d/ba8362aa91.jpg Not exactly what you asked for,but I fixed it up.

01:10:732 (1) - add NC Don't really see the point,though I might fix this up anyway.

01:12:104 (5) - add clap
01:11:761 (3) - ^
01:12:104 (5) - ^ Not bad!Added.

01:12:275 - add circle with NC ???
01:12:361 (2) - add circle Example: http://puu.sh/vRyiZ/6290883697.jpg

01:18:275 (1,2,3,4,5) - these timings are little hard for read i think so. The spacing on these are very different from 01:21:704 (1,2,3,4)
,mostly due to the change in note density.
Thus,
01:18:532 (2) - remove circle
and 01:18:275 (1) - this slider end point extend to 01:18:275 (1) -
01:18:618 (2) - add NC. Example: https://puu.sh/vRyDs/0df077a999.jpg Not sure about this because every other part after this (01:18:961 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2)) all go with the same pattern.

01:19:647 (1,2,3,4,5) - as adove

01:24:447 (1,2) - the overlap is no good for read. change like this: http://puu.sh/vRyZF/d79851129e.jpg I'll just blanket the thing

01:25:475 (1,2,3) - these patterns are no consistency, to influence read.
better like this: https://puu.sh/vRzaK/2219d00c68.jpg Good point.

01:27:190 (1,2,3) - spacing is little narrow. better like this: http://puu.sh/vRzf1/c7845fcb48.jpg I actually thought I went a little too far with spacing,so I dunno.

01:34:732 (1,2) - this 1/8 slider chain is hard for playing.
How does that look?: https://puu.sh/vRAEx/8fe3a8c637.jpg But then 01:34:990 goes unused...I fixed it up but not exactly like how you have.

01:37:475 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - nice jump! ~~~

01:40:904 (1) - add NC Fixed.
01:41:590 (1) - ^
01:41:932 (1) - ^

01:44:504 - How about this timing? https://puu.sh/vRAR5/5debf0cc80.jpg No changes to rhythm,though I did like the spacing.

02:20:504 (1) - add NC because suddenly sv Good point.
02:25:990 (1) - ^

02:41:590 - ~ 02:52:904 - veryverynice flow! so fun Was a nightmare to place each note individually (at the time I had no idea about ctrl+alt+f) so I'm glad it plays well.

03:05:590 (1) - add NC Did something a bit different,though thanks for the heads up.
03:06:275 (1) - ^

03:10:390 (5) - move to x:139 y:151 for visual Didn't even notice that,though wouldn't it make circular flow to 03:10:561 (1) feel off?

03:11:761 (1) - add NC ...not sure about this one.

03:16:390 (2) - remove clap Good eye,fixed.
03:16:732 (4) - ^
03:17:075 (2) - ^
these changes make intonate.

03:18:961 (1) - remove whistle Added!
only finish sound is cool with the end!

my apologies for the delay It's fine!I've got someone else I'm waiting on right now,though they have a better excuse as they're modding the whole nine yards and a foot.
cool feeling Map :3
Good luck for Rank!

Thanks for the mod!Though it did get a bit repetitive (you could've grouped certain ones together by ctrl+mouse click),it certainly helped me with a few kinks in the map.

CucumberCuc

1,316 posts

Joined January 2016

CucumberCuc 2017-05-17T09:44:48+00:00

Hi
M4M

[Normal]
check DS
00:11:761 (2,1) do slightly close
00:12:447 (1,2,3,4) do far
00:17:932 (1,2) ^
00:23:418 (1,2) do close like 00:24:618 (3,4)
00:25:818 (5,1) do far
00:27:361 (3,1) ^
00:28:218 (2,1) ^
00:30:961 (6,1,2,3,4,5) different range
00:39:190 (5,6,1) do far
00:42:618 (1,3) not good overlap
00:45:361 (1,2,3) do far
01:03:532 (2,1) do close
01:40:218 (1,2,3) do far
02:34:732 (5,1) do close
02:41:932 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) I think you can remove some circles and put the sliders as I believe that 16 circles will push a bit hard for Normal
02:47:418 (1,2,3,4,1,2) you can leave, but maybe remove 1-3 sliders and add circles?
03:18:618 maybe add slider and end on next circle?

[Hard]
00:06:961 (1) move end slider slightly down
00:13:704 (1,2) - 00:16:561 (1,2,1,2) maybe stack?
00:22:390 put circle and stack with slider?
00:28:561 (2,2) stack
00:28:904 (1,2,3) do far?
00:53:418 NC?
00:58:904 ^
01:21:018 (1,2) stack, but 01:22:047 (5,6) not stack
01:22:647 (7) move down
01:24:704 (2) move left
01:50:332 (3) ^
01:59:075 (3) move up and right
02:18:618 NC?
02:24:104 ^
02:29:247 remove NC, 02:29:590 add NC
02:30:618 ^, 02:30:961 ^
02:32:675 ^, 02:33:018 - 02:33:704 - 02:34:390 - 02:35:075 ^
03:00:790 ^, 03:01:132 ^
03:03:704 (1,2) do far
03:08:332 to 03:17:590 why this moment was so close, if for example the second half of your first kiai no changes were made to DS

[Insane]
00:09:190 (5,6) it's far
00:47:075 (2) move 1 up and left
00:47:590 (5) move 1 down and left
00:46:732 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) you can do like on 01:41:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) if you don't want to do the things written above
00:51:361 (3,4) slightly far
00:53:418 (4,1) ^
01:10:561 (3,1) ^
01:12:275 (4,1) ^
01:43:818 put circle?

voynich

273 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

voynich 2017-05-18T04:58:58+00:00

CucumberCuc wrote:
Hi
M4M

[Normal]
check DS
00:11:761 (2,1) do slightly close Fixed.
00:12:447 (1,2,3,4) do far Not a lot of space so...fixed?
00:17:932 (1,2) ^ Not enough room for distance snap.
00:23:418 (1,2) do close like 00:24:618 (3,4) Fixed.
00:25:818 (5,1) do far Fixed
00:27:361 (3,1) ^ !
00:28:218 (2,1) ^ !
00:30:961 (6,1,2,3,4,5) different range Tried to improvise
00:39:190 (5,6,1) do far I tried
00:42:618 (1,3) not good overlap Tried to fix it up
00:45:361 (1,2,3) do far Very difficult to space properly
01:03:532 (2,1) do close Fixed.
01:40:218 (1,2,3) do far
02:34:732 (5,1) do close An attempt was made.
02:41:932 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) I think you can remove some circles and put the sliders as I believe that 16 circles will push a bit hard for Normal They are on 1/1 beats so I thought it'd be fine,but I still cleaned it up.
02:47:418 (1,2,3,4,1,2) you can leave, but maybe remove 1-3 sliders and add circles? I think the contrast between the previous section is enough to leave this part in.
03:18:618 maybe add slider and end on next circle? I get this a lot,but I don't really know how well it'd work considering its break from what I've already put.

[Hard]
Messaged Jager-kun
00:06:961 (1) move end slider slightly down
00:13:704 (1,2) - 00:16:561 (1,2,1,2) maybe stack?
00:22:390 put circle and stack with slider?
00:28:561 (2,2) stack
00:28:904 (1,2,3) do far?
00:53:418 NC?
00:58:904 ^
01:21:018 (1,2) stack, but 01:22:047 (5,6) not stack
01:22:647 (7) move down
01:24:704 (2) move left
01:50:332 (3) ^
01:59:075 (3) move up and right
02:18:618 NC?
02:24:104 ^
02:29:247 remove NC, 02:29:590 add NC
02:30:618 ^, 02:30:961 ^
02:32:675 ^, 02:33:018 - 02:33:704 - 02:34:390 - 02:35:075 ^
03:00:790 ^, 03:01:132 ^
03:03:704 (1,2) do far
03:08:332 to 03:17:590 why this moment was so close, if for example the second half of your first kiai no changes were made to DS

[Insane]
Messaged Clap
00:09:190 (5,6) it's far
00:47:075 (2) move 1 up and left
00:47:590 (5) move 1 down and left
00:46:732 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) you can do like on 01:41:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) if you don't want to do the things written above
00:51:361 (3,4) slightly far
00:53:418 (4,1) ^
01:10:561 (3,1) ^
01:12:275 (4,1) ^
01:43:818 put circle?

Thanks for the mod!Though a few of the updates may take a while,as they're from GDs,the Normal should be updated.I would've liked a mod for the extra,though you're already doing more than I did

golden pepe

64 posts

Joined September 2015

golden pepe 2017-05-18T21:43:47+00:00

CucumberCuc wrote:
[Insane]
00:09:190 (5,6) it's far emphasis sake
00:47:075 (2) move 1 up and left fixed
00:47:590 (5) move 1 down and left ^
00:46:732 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) you can do like on 01:41:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) if you don't want to do the things written above ok
00:51:361 (3,4) slightly far emphasis sake
00:53:418 (4,1) ^ emphasis sake
01:10:561 (3,1) ^ emphasis sake
01:12:275 (4,1) ^ emphasis sake
01:43:818 put circle? no, since i didnt do it for 00:48:618

thx for mod

map

Davin Fortune

584 posts

Joined June 2014

Davin Fortune 2017-05-21T06:57:12+00:00

Im make the hard aroud 40% right now, i hope i don't make u wait too long
Just wait for another 3/4 days i guess ;w;

Egotrip

92 posts

Joined May 2015

Egotrip 2017-05-21T10:19:41+00:00

CucumberCuc wrote:
[Hard]
00:06:961 (1) move end slider slightly down thanks
00:13:704 (1,2) - 00:16:561 (1,2,1,2) maybe stack? yes thanks
00:22:390 put circle and stack with slider? thanks
00:28:561 (2,2) stack ok
00:28:904 (1,2,3) do far? ok
00:53:418 NC? ok
00:58:904 ^ ok
01:21:018 (1,2) stack, but 01:22:047 (5,6) not stack ok
01:22:647 (7) move down ok
01:24:704 (2) move left ok
01:50:332 (3) ^ ok
01:59:075 (3) move up and right ok
02:18:618 NC? ok
02:24:104 ^ ok
02:29:247 remove NC, 02:29:590 add NC ok
02:30:618 ^, 02:30:961 ^ ok
02:32:675 ^, 02:33:018 - 02:33:704 - 02:34:390 - 02:35:075 ^ ok
03:00:790 ^, 03:01:132 ^ ok
03:03:704 (1,2) do far ok
03:08:332 to 03:17:590 why this moment was so close, if for example the second half of your first kiai no changes were made to DS ????

thx for modding!

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play rainworld

373 posts

Joined May 2015

play rainworld 2017-05-24T00:47:53+00:00

offset is 5575

clap's insane

~ 00:13:132 (1) - this slider could look better

336,92,13132,6,0,B|294:81|254:99|254:99|214:114|172:94,1,163.799995001221,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

~ 00:14:504 (1) - maybe move slider end to x:224 y:180?
~ 00:15:304 (2) - this feels super weird to click on a 1/3 note, along with it feeling weird to have 00:14:504 (1) end on a offbeat
~ 00:17:247 (1,1) - ugly af overlap
~ 00:22:561 (3) - think this should be a circle to make the zzzzzt noises stand out
~ 00:26:761 - there should be a circle here and 00:26:418 (7) here because there is still vocals on those ticks
~ 00:31:818 (3,3) - maybe have 1/4 sliders here to prioritize the vocals?
~ 00:40:561 (3) - maybe extend this by 1/4 because the vocals are the exact same to 00:39:875 (1)
~ 01:05:761 (7,8,9) - touching the bottom of the screen on my screen
~ 00:56:590 (2,3) - this also touches the bottom
~ 01:01:647 (2) - gonna stop taking screenshots, but this is also off my screen
~ 01:49:132 (1,1) - slightly touching the bottom, might not need to be fixed
~ 02:07:647 (1) - ^
~ 02:57:704 (2) - ^
~ 00:59:075 (1) - move 2nd to last slider anchor to x:303 y:300
~ 01:18:961 (1,2,3,4) - replace with a 3/4 slider to make it not overmapped
~ 01:20:332 (1,2,3,4) - ^ there's a lot of overmapped stuff like this, so I won't cover them all
~ 02:13:904 there should be a note here
~ 02:28:561 (1,2) - these are kinda close to eachother, maybe move them a little farther apart or overlap them?
~ 02:47:418 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this might be a bit too much for an insane diff

overall looks pretty nice

gl with the map

golden pepe

64 posts

Joined September 2015

golden pepe 2017-05-24T21:29:44+00:00

SnivehNDraegonz wrote:
offset is 5575

clap's insane

~ 00:13:132 (1) - this slider could look better i guess i fixed
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~ 00:14:504 (1) - maybe move slider end to x:224 y:180? sure
~ 00:15:304 (2) - this feels super weird to click on a 1/3 note, along with it feeling weird to have 00:14:504 (1) end on a offbeat went ahead and played, and didn't seem/feel awkward to me. if i get another complaint i'll change it
~ 00:17:247 (1,1) - ugly af overlap um, i moved it if that makes it any better
~ 00:22:561 (3) - think this should be a circle to make the zzzzzt noises stand out don't necessarily like how it plays when replaced by a circle, so i won't change it
~ 00:26:761 - there should be a circle here no and 00:26:418 (7) here because there is still vocals on those ticks ok
~ 00:31:818 (3,3) - maybe have 1/4 sliders here to prioritize the vocals? sure
~ 00:40:561 (3) - maybe extend this by 1/4 because the vocals are the exact same to 00:39:875 (1) ok
~ 01:05:761 (7,8,9) - touching the bottom of the screen on my screen moved
~ 00:56:590 (2,3) - this also touches the bottom moved
~ 01:01:647 (2) - gonna stop taking screenshots, but this is also off my screen that is not off screen
~ 01:49:132 (1,1) - slightly touching the bottom, might not need to be fixed its ok
~ 02:07:647 (1) - ^
~ 02:57:704 (2) - ^
~ 00:59:075 (1) - move 2nd to last slider anchor to x:303 y:300 didnt do it exactly, but i moved it around a bit so it looked a bit neater
~ 01:18:961 (1,2,3,4) - replace with a 3/4 slider to make it not overmapped ok
~ 01:20:332 (1,2,3,4) - ^ there's a lot of overmapped stuff like this, so I won't cover them all
~ 02:13:904 there should be a note here the sound there isn't really noticeable so i'm just gonna leave it be
~ 02:28:561 (1,2) - these are kinda close to eachother, maybe move them a little farther apart or overlap them? moved it a little farther part
~ 02:47:418 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this might be a bit too much for an insane diff oh yeah lol, guess i went overboard with that. i'll change

overall looks pretty nice wouldn't be too sure about that lol

gl with the map

thanks

map

Lokidoki

374 posts

Joined June 2015

Lokidoki 2017-06-02T13:39:44+00:00

Welp, cleaning out all the req.

only checking the extra's
[General]
remove source completely, add the vocaloids to tags. also add all gd'rs (names) that have finished their gd's to tags. add "kiddie war" since it's the official eng translation and "reol" she wrote the lyrics to tags .
also, idk if you should use the official romaji ver of song's name, or this translation, you've gotta ask someone to confirm that. probably the romaji.
[Extra]
check aimod
inconsistent NC'ing, do one each big white tick
don't put the spinner before the timing point
00:06:275 (1) - start this at 00:05:932 - if you want it to be the whoosh sound starter.
00:19:304 (1) - outside the player's range
00:29:418 (1) - really no point in upping the SV
00:41:075 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^
00:46:732 (1) - ^
the kiai is a lackluster, brings 0 interest
00:57:532 (1) - unranakable slider
01:12:275 - strong sounds here, map them
01:21:704 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - very weird and uncomfortable pattern
01:24:447 (1,2) - blanket
01:30:618 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - very weird and uncomfortable pattern
01:33:361 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:41:590 (1,2) - really no point in upping the SV
02:20:504 (1) - ^ why priorites the vocals, they are NOT intensifying here
02:25:990 (5) - ^
02:32:675 (2) - not clear where it goes
02:52:990 (1) - 1/4 gap isn't enough
02:58:132 (7,1) - what happened to the spacing?
this extra needs a lot of work and rework to be done.
[Nines' Extra]
check aimod
01:05:760 (1,2) - useless sliders that don't show off anything, don't go for the vocals really.
01:06:125 (2) - or at least move that to the red tick.
01:26:332 (8) - doesn't flow as good as the prev ones.
02:00:618 (1,1) - same as the first one
02:00:983 (1) - same as the second one
03:10:560 (1,2) - uhh, same as the first one
03:10:925 (2) - same as the second one

voynich

273 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

voynich 2017-06-02T21:19:43+00:00

Lokidoki wrote:
Welp, cleaning out all the req.
only checking the extra's
[General]
remove source completely, add the vocaloids to tags. also add all gd'rs (names) that have finished their gd's to tags. add "kiddie war" since it's the official eng translation and "reol" she wrote the lyrics to tags . Done on all difficulties.
also, idk if you should use the official romaji ver of song's name, or this translation, you've gotta ask someone to confirm that. probably the romaji.
[Extra]
check aimod Fixed except for the 1/3 kiai thing.
inconsistent NC'ing, do one each big white tick Done with a few exceptions (see 00:34:561 )
don't put the spinner before the timing point solution found
00:06:275 (1) - start this at 00:05:932 - if you want it to be the whoosh sound starter. eh i'll just remove it
00:19:304 (1) - outside the player's range Messed about with new thing
00:29:418 (1) - really no point in upping the SV Gimmick of the map is variable SV,though if it gets too in the way i might change it
00:41:075 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^
00:46:732 (1) - ^
the kiai is a lackluster, brings 0 interest you bring zero interest (´･ω･`) (I don't like this section either but I have no easy way of fixing it up outside of remapping it)
00:57:532 (1) - unranakable slider Fixed
01:12:275 - strong sounds here, map them Hopefully this is good enough (my recent mapping style is very different from this map's so it's kinda awkward)
01:21:704 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - very weird and uncomfortable pattern It's fairly standard circular flow,I'm not sure how that'd be uncomfortable.
01:24:447 (1,2) - blanket No easy way to fix it but I tried.
01:30:618 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - very weird and uncomfortable pattern What's weird and uncomfortable about stream spacing?
01:33:361 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:41:590 (1,2) - really no point in upping the SV Good point,used slider to lean into lesser slider velocity.
02:20:504 (1) - ^ why priorites the vocals, they are NOT intensifying here Because this whole section is about the vocals.
02:25:990 (5) - ^
02:32:675 (2) - not clear where it goes fixed up a bit
02:52:990 (1) - 1/4 gap isn't enough I'm not sure why a 1/4 gap isn't enough...?
02:58:132 (7,1) - what happened to the spacing? Marks the sudden slowdown of the SV,it goes from 1.75 to 0.75,a whole SV.
this extra needs a lot of work and rework to be done.
[Nines' Extra]
contacted nines
check aimod
01:05:760 (1,2) - useless sliders that don't show off anything, don't go for the vocals really.
01:06:125 (2) - or at least move that to the red tick.
01:26:332 (8) - doesn't flow as good as the prev ones.
02:00:618 (1,1) - same as the first one
02:00:983 (1) - same as the second one
03:10:560 (1,2) - uhh, same as the first one
03:10:925 (2) - same as the second one

Nines

392 posts

Joined May 2013

Nines 2017-06-04T17:44:29+00:00

response placeholder

EDIT: oops forgot to use this

Last edited by Nines 2017-06-07T01:02:15+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Nines

392 posts

Joined May 2013

Nines 2017-06-07T01:01:53+00:00

Lokidoki wrote:
Welp, cleaning out all the req.
[Nines' Extra]
check aimod not sure how to fix but will fix soon. no major errors tho
01:05:760 (1,2) - useless sliders that don't show off anything, don't go for the vocals really. it's for the vibrato-ish sound of the vocals
01:06:125 (2) - or at least move that to the red tick. wait idk why it wasn't snapped lol. thanks for noticing that
01:26:332 (8) - doesn't flow as good as the prev ones. i think it does
02:00:618 (1,1) same as the first one thanks
02:00:983 (1) - same as the second one thanks
03:10:560 (1,2) - uhh, same as the first one seriously wtf lol
03:10:925 (2) - same as the second one[/notice] i swear to god lmao

Fixed .osu file for-Nishiki-'s use

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50847
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 8
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[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:おこちゃま戦争
Artist:Giga-P
ArtistUnicode:Giga-P
Creator:-Nishiki-
Version:Nines' Extra
Source:
Tags:vocaloid okochama sensou kagamine rin and len kiddie war clap jager-kun nines shelso vinnie reol
BeatmapID:1303211
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4.1
OverallDifficulty:8
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Sidetail

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Sidetail 2017-06-09T01:51:55+00:00

[general]

The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars.

- You can't rank this without easy since lowest diff is over 2 stars.

- Please take a look at each diffs for uninherited timing points (AiMod)

- Current is fine, but you can add custom combo colours for more characterization in your map

[normal]
Open AiMod and fix all the distance. "Check distance snap" feature.
02:07:650 - please snap kiai, it's off by very little
- Avoid using dramatic SV changes such as 01:48:275 - (0.5x) -> 01:51:190 - (1.0x) -> 01:53:761 - (0.5x) in diffs like normal. If I were you, I would stick to single speed for both normal and easy to be on safe side since you can't change sv dramatically for emphasis purpose anyways.
- Remove second of same of duplicated green lines. As an example, open timing and look at 01:07:304 - point. That is same attributes as one before (01:01:818 - ) (same speed, same sampleset, same volume, same kiai toggle) so second one is useless. Delete 01:18:275 - , etc...
00:06:961 (1,2) - Either make a easy diff or nerf this diff. Something like this is too hard to be a diff which would compensate for lack of easy diff.
00:33:018 (5) - yeah this is suddenly just way too slow, you probably have to remap ones that are dramatically chanced for sv.
00:53:247 (4) - since you're following vocal, you don't need this
00:53:418 (1) - really should've been this rhythm https://puu.sh/weSXw/f805f97443.jpg current one is ignoring a lot of things so atleast get the vocal part on the point
00:54:790 (2) - NC (since I see you're NCing every downbeat)
01:05:761 (1) - this is especially its annoying the fact that whistle is very long due to slider being long (sort of unbearable)
01:10:047 (1) - totally missing out all the rhyhtm. At least shorten it to 01:10:561 and put a reverse on it
01:12:447 - place a note since vocal is pretty interesting there
01:36:104 (1,1) - not a fan of this overlap, it makes map look less polished imo
01:38:504 (3,1) - this rhythm is weird. 01:38:504 (3) - into single clickable note, 01:39:018 (1) - start on 01:38:847
01:49:818 (2) - NC, but more importantly, the sv control is just wayy too big
01:55:304 (2) - ^ (etc)
02:26:847 (1,2,3,4) - these dont look very nice when they dont' have much structure, at last think about shape polarity and make them look parallel
02:29:590 (1,2) - ^ it doesn't look very nice from my perspective
02:35:075 (1) - this should've been slider
02:39:190 (3,4,5) - not sure why spaces are different
02:41:590 (4,1) - too hard for normal that lacks easy
02:52:218 (3) - would just use single long slider since you dont really want to do this in normal..
02:58:218 (1,1) - would be nice if you can at least not ignore the vocal .. https://puu.sh/weTyE/51b7f09e6e.jpg
03:03:704 (1,1) - ^
03:10:561 (1) - whistles are annoying on long sliders like this
03:14:847 (1) - ^ (etc)
03:18:275 (3) - should've been slider to 03:18:618 -
If you're not going to map here from on wards, please delete those unused greenlines after your last note.

Overall, I think normal needs work, too much whistle is obnoxious, significant SV drops and raise, ignored rhythms, and weird flows which would make frustrating plays for new players.

I haven't looked at other diffs at all since you seem to be uncertain with your normal diff the most. Hopefully that helps for your normal. gl.

voynich

273 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

voynich 2017-06-09T23:27:53+00:00

Sidetail wrote:
[general]
The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars.
- You can't rank this without easy since lowest diff is over 2 stars. .2 below feelsbadman

- Please take a look at each diffs for uninherited timing points (AiMod)

- Current is fine, but you can add custom combo colours for more characterization in your map

[normal]
Open AiMod and fix all the distance. "Check distance snap" feature.
02:07:650 - please snap kiai, it's off by very little Fixed
- Avoid using dramatic SV changes such as 01:48:275 - (0.5x) -> 01:51:190 - (1.0x) -> 01:53:761 - (0.5x) in diffs like normal. If I were you, I would stick to single speed for both normal and easy to be on safe side since you can't change sv dramatically for emphasis purpose anyways.
- Remove second of same of duplicated green lines. As an example, open timing and look at 01:07:304 - point. That is same attributes as one before (01:01:818 - ) (same speed, same sampleset, same volume, same kiai toggle) so second one is useless. Delete 01:18:275 - , etc...
00:06:961 (1,2) - Either make a easy diff or nerf this diff. Something like this is too hard to be a diff which would compensate for lack of easy diff yeah i'll just make an easy diff
00:33:018 (5) - yeah this is suddenly just way too slow, you probably have to remap ones that are dramatically chanced for sv. fixed
00:53:247 (4) - since you're following vocal, you don't need this taken out
00:53:418 (1) - really should've been this rhythm https://puu.sh/weSXw/f805f97443.jpg current one is ignoring a lot of things so atleast get the vocal part on the point fixed
00:54:790 (2) - NC (since I see you're NCing every downbeat) could argue it's place but i'm too tired rn
01:05:761 (1) - this is especially its annoying the fact that whistle is very long due to slider being long (sort of unbearable) fixed?
01:10:047 (1) - totally missing out all the rhyhtm. At least shorten it to 01:10:561 and put a reverse on it done
01:12:447 - place a note since vocal is pretty interesting there added
01:36:104 (1,1) - not a fan of this overlap, it makes map look less polished imo fixed
01:38:504 (3,1) - this rhythm is weird. 01:38:504 (3) - into single clickable note, 01:39:018 (1) - start on 01:38:847 cleaned up but not the way you said it (really janky if i do it your way)
01:49:818 (2) - NC, but more importantly, the sv control is just wayy too big tried but i'm probably just gonna remap this whole thing once i wake up
01:55:304 (2) - ^ (etc)
02:26:847 (1,2,3,4) - these dont look very nice when they dont' have much structure, at last think about shape polarity and make them look parallel
02:29:590 (1,2) - ^ it doesn't look very nice from my perspective
02:35:075 (1) - this should've been slider
02:39:190 (3,4,5) - not sure why spaces are different
02:41:590 (4,1) - too hard for normal that lacks easy
02:52:218 (3) - would just use single long slider since you dont really want to do this in normal..
02:58:218 (1,1) - would be nice if you can at least not ignore the vocal .. https://puu.sh/weTyE/51b7f09e6e.jpg
03:03:704 (1,1) - ^
03:10:561 (1) - whistles are annoying on long sliders like this
03:14:847 (1) - ^ (etc)
03:18:275 (3) - should've been slider to 03:18:618 -
If you're not going to map here from on wards, please delete those unused greenlines after your last note.

Overall, I think normal needs work, too much whistle is obnoxious, significant SV drops and raise, ignored rhythms, and weird flows which would make frustrating plays for new players.

I haven't looked at other diffs at all since you seem to be uncertain with your normal diff the most. Hopefully that helps for your normal. gl.

i'll just remap it i'm too tired to mod rn and the map sucks

voynich

273 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

voynich 2017-06-14T21:48:18+00:00

back from vaycay
will remap normal
may do collab if interested.

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