1. Hard (3.05 stars, 267 notes)
2. Insane (3.94 stars, 356 notes)
3. Normal (1.91 stars, 156 notes)

AK2806 wrote:

interesting map
节奏没问题，玩的时候可以准确判断
几点意见：
00:58:632 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - 太挤，点的不舒服 Has been modified
00:03:612 (1,2,3) - circle没对齐Has been modified
00:41:918 (2,3,4) - 建议分开一些stay the same
如果要做3*图，可以把00:55:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ，01:02:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 部分的位置重新调整stay the same
如果要做4*图，建议增加一些散打或者短slider

謝謝MODDING 我會繼續努力

davidminh0111 wrote:

Mod maps:
-Insanel: all keep
-00:34:204 (6, 7):You should make the distance closer same as number 5 you did
-00:42:239 (2, 3, 4): You should replace them with circles because it looks like a mess
-01:09:347 (1, 2): You should do the number 1 till the end of the white line.
-01:18:561 (6): You should make the slide more beautiful.

-Norma:
-00:47:061 (3, 4):You should seperate them out.done

Roger06150 wrote:

Hey :3

Insane

00:05:326 - Nothing here ?
00:08:915 (2) - Stop this slider on the white tickKEEP
00:09:343 (3,4) - Put the slider (4) on the red tick and places a circle between the two sliders on the blue tickKEEP
01:08:918 (1,3) - Stop the slider (1) on the red tick and place a circle on the blue tick between the two slidersKEEP

Normal

00:05:326 - Nothing here ?KEEP
00:20:489 - Circle ?DONE

Very good map, good luck for ranking !

Lone Pixel wrote:

Hi.

I'm looking into the Normal diff at first.

Timing

I don't like your timing - you used very many points to slightly change the timing when it became too incorrect. Instead you could just use only one punctual timing. I figured out 140.09 bpm and -1332 offset. Think about changing that because I don't think a BN would like it.

Note Placing

done00:13:632 (3) - There is no note but 00:20:489 (3) - there is one. That doesn't make sense because the music literally repeats. And you have hidden it so it's even more surprising.
done01:11:061 (2) - This note doesn't really make sense to me. You focused so much on the singing that this is strangely unexpected.
The rest is good.

I'm checking Insane diff now.

Timing

Same as Normal. Especially in the part which begins here: 00:08:702 (1) - it is not perfectly timed.

Note Placing

keep00:01:898 (1) - There really shouldn't be a slider.
keep00:07:978 (6) - Slider should begin here.
keep00:08:702 (1) - That one could be stacked on top of those two: 00:08:085 (7) - 00:09:343 (3)
keep00:29:704 (5) - The slider has a corner but I don't see the sense of it in the music.
The rest is really nice. Couldn't find anything strange really!
all to follow the Vocals

Nice job. Only small things.

MisakiAN wrote:

Hy~
some quick mod
[General]
put 鋼の錬金術師 in source
the kiai should start in here 01:08:915 - not here 00:55:201 - done

[Insane]
this part looks empty 00:05:486 - maybe u should map in here too. u can add circle in here 00:05:486 - and slider in the red tick and ended in white tick in here 00:05:701 (2) - to here 00:06:772 - done


00:39:986 (1) - NCdone
00:44:915 - NCdone
00:45:344 (3) - delete NCdone
00:47:701 (1) - ^done
00:48:344 - add circle in here because it has a strong beat in theredone
01:25:629 - ^done
00:49:844 (1) - delete NCdone
00:50:058 (2) - NCdone
01:10:415 - put circle and stack it with this 01:10:522 (1,2) - done
01:12:772 (2) - bad overlap with this slider 01:12:344 (1) - .maybe u can move the slider a bit far from the previous sliderdone
01:17:486 (1) - maybe its better if u stack it with this circle 01:16:844 (6) - done
01:24:344 (6) - NCdone
01:27:344 (1) - delete NCdone
01:27:772 (3) - NCdone

you have problems with New Combo (NC) =w= I started to face the problem
but Good Job ^^
GOOD LUCK

exAerialZ wrote:

Hey! Here are some mods for your Normal/Hard beatmaps!

--Normal--
00:34:201 (1) - This slider is too long, replace it with a shorter slider and a single hit circle.
00:39:986 (2) - Replace this with a slider lasting for the same amount of time as slider (1)..done
00:40:201 (3) - Replace this slider with a hit circle at the end of it..done
00:51:344 (1) - New combo doesn't have to start here. .done
00:51:772 (2) - New combo should start here where the note accent is in the music..done
01:18:236 (1) - The spinner here feels unnecessary. Replace it with the rhythm you were doing before.keep
01:31:201 (1) - If the spinner is going to be anywhere it should be here.keep[/color]

--Hard--
00:00:772 (3) - Place a hit circle here. Move slider (3) over two ticks and have it last two ticks longer.
00:01:844 (1) - This feels unnecessary. Just turn this into a slider with the same amount of time length. The reverse arrow isn't hitting any sound in the song.done
00:03:558 (1) - This reverse arrow works because it's hitting a syllable in the vocals.done
00:07:415 (2) - Have this last for one more tick.done
00:07:736 (3) - Move the slider over one tick and make it one tick shorter.done
00:10:094 (4) - Have this slider last for one more tick. done
00:10:844 (5) - Move this over one tick and stack it on top of the (6) slider.done
00:58:951 (2) - Move this slider over one tick and make it one tick shorter.done
01:03:236 (4) - Add a hit circle here, move the slider over one tick, make it one tick shorter.done
01:04:951 (4) - Move the slider over one tick and make it one tick shorter.done
01:18:665 (1) - Don't have a spinner in the middle of the chorus.KEEP[/color]

Good luck on this beatmap! I really love this song AND the series.
Also, kudosu me please!

m3gB3g wrote:

Pls add video

Parachute wrote:

Hey, small nm from modreq :3

You still didnt add Rin Desus timing points. right now the timing is really weird and i think with his timing its gonna be better. just copy paste the timing points into notepad file of the map. (after that you might have to redo your green lines and possibly the preview point.)

Normal
00:19:844 (2) - Random jump, this is unrankable. make spacing consistent for easy/normal diffs.
00:27:344 (1) - Make spacing consistent, just curve it a biiit away from the next slider
00:30:986 (1) - Spacing to next object is a bit too big. make perfect blanket here and it will be no issue.
00:34:201 (1) - Here unrankable too because too low spacing from the slider before this one. you have to change this one.
01:00:344 (1) - Spacing
01:20:915 (1) - Same

01:10:415 - I would add a note here at x:360 y:332, you map the vocal and she kinda sings there already so i think its a better idea to put one here already. keep . i think it difficult to follow.

About the hitsounds:
00:05:486 (1) - may want to do whistle at the repeat point
00:10:629 (4) - Whistle at beginning of the slider
00:13:844 (4) - Remove clap from the end
00:16:415 (2) - Clap at the beginning
00:20:701 (3) - Remove clap at the end
00:23:272 (2) - Add at the beginning
00:26:058 (1,2,1) - This lacks claps. maybe at the beginning of each slider would be a nice clap.
00:52:844 (3) - Whistle at beginning or repeat point.
00:53:915 (1) - Whistle at end
00:54:558 (2) - Whistle at beginning
01:01:415 (3) - Remove clap at the repeat point, this is a bit too much claps ^^
01:08:272 (3) - ^
01:09:558 (2) - 01:11:272 (2) - 01:28:415 (2) - 01:31:201 (1) - All of these lack probably 1 clap.

Hard
00:11:915 - Until here you use a bit too much whistle, do it like in normal.
00:14:486 (5) - .. 00:17:914 (5) - .. 00:21:344 (5) - .. beginning of: 00:24:772 (5) - .. beginning of 00:25:629 (7) - should all have a clap.
00:35:701 (1,1) - remove one of the ncs.

Insane
Ar should be a bit lower, maybe like 8,5 sorry i want ar 9 ((i love ar 9 ((?
Also your hp drain seems a bit too much for this diff, if you miss once it takes forever to recover at the beginning so maybe lower it a bit for 4*

00:05:915 (2,3) - Whistle should be on end of the sliders and not the beginning.


Well thats all. One thing that you could do is adding finishes, especially where the song itself has sounds that are like the finishes. (also change the combo colors. having the standart ones doesnt look good imo. do something that fits with your bg.)
Otherwise already nice map so gl with it ^^

Incomp wrote:

From #modreq. Got nothing better to do with my time.

Insane

00:41:941 (2,3,4) - This bit just feels off, like it's not covering sounds that it should. Not sure how to explain it.I know that , but i can't use 1/6.
00:45:584 (8,9,10) - The way the circles lead off of the sliders breaks flow. Ignore this if you intended for that.done
00:46:227 (10,11) - Weird to have these two notes. Consider turning 10-11 into a slider and then adding a note on the white tick afterwards.done
00:56:914 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Kind of an abrupt way to stop following vocals and start going with the instruments.keep
01:23:485 (1,2,3,4,5) - This combo is shorter than all the ones that come before it.done
01:25:843 (1) - Might not want to NC here.done

Consider lowering the OD by 1 and raising the HP by 1 on this early 4* map.keep

I couldn't find any major red flags in your Insane difficulty, so I had to point out things that could simply just be your mapping style. In other words, it's a solid difficulty.

Hard

00:31:441 (1,2,3) - 1 and 2 follow the vocals, 3 follows the hardly-audible drum.keep
00:21:584 (6,7,8) - The small stack here is not consistent with how you handle this kind of notes in the song (with a 1/4 slider).done
00:49:227 (4,5,6) - ^done
00:58:628 (1,2,3) - The spacing here between the end of 1 and 2 is not consistent with the spacing between 2 and the head of 3.done
00:59:914 (5,6,1) - ^done
01:02:914 (3,4,5) - ^done
01:04:628 (3,4,5) - ^done

This difficulty flows together very nicely, and it can prepare new players for the inevitable 1/4 sliders that I had such a hard time learning to read.

Normal

00:56:914 (1,2,3) - You should avoid having a 1/2 circle under a slider end in a Normal difficulty.keep ,


Consider reducing the OD and HP by 1 on this difficulty.keep

Very well done. Couldn't find anything else to point out.

I better see this ranked one day.thank you!!!

insane
01:27:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think these jumps deserving higher spacing. 1 and 2 have strong sound , same 4 and 5. They need more space definitely


Hard
00:28:858 (2) - NC
00:29:500 (1) - remove NC
00:21:344 (5) - NC
00:31:000 (4) - NC
00:31:429 (1) - remove NC
00:32:715 (5) - NC
00:34:215 (5) - NC
00:34:643 (1) - remove NC
00:35:715 (4) - NC
00:36:358 (1) - remove NC
00:44:286 (1) - ^
00:44:715 (2) - NC
00:47:072 (4) - ^
00:49:858 (9) - ^
00:50:072 (1) - remove NC
01:06:339 (4) - NC
01:32:879 (6) - NC

Normal

01:07:839 (2) - - overlap (after click "2" appearing 2 object in one time, this will very confuse newbees)
01:14:267 (2) - ^
01:26:481 (3) - 01:27:767 (1) - ^

Like your style! Handsomely and Good express sound impact

Good Luck with Ranking!

m3gB3g wrote:

hi!
Short moding!

insane
01:27:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think these jumps deserving higher spacing. 1 and 2 have strong sound , same 4 and 5. They need more space definitely done


Hard
00:28:858 (2) - NC
00:29:500 (1) - remove NC
00:21:344 (5) - NC
00:31:000 (4) - NC
00:31:429 (1) - remove NC
00:32:715 (5) - NC
00:34:215 (5) - NC
00:34:643 (1) - remove NC
00:35:715 (4) - NC
00:36:358 (1) - remove NC
00:44:286 (1) - ^
00:44:715 (2) - NC
00:47:072 (4) - ^
00:49:858 (9) - ^
00:50:072 (1) - remove NC
01:06:339 (4) - NC
01:32:879 (6) - NC

Normal

01:07:839 (2) - - overlap (after click "2" appearing 2 object in one time, this will very confuse newbees)done
01:14:267 (2) - ^done
01:26:481 (3) - 01:27:767 (1) - ^done

Like your style! Handsomely and Good express sound impact [color=#FF00FF]thank you!

Good Luck with Ranking!
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1. 00:42:250 (3) - Doesn't make sense to start on blue since both the thump and vocal land on white. Why's this even on blue when there's no instrument or vocal mapped to it?
2. 00:44:072 (1,2) - Would make more sense if (2) was the NC instead of (1), cus a new vocal sounds like it starts there instead.
3. 00:48:358 (1) - Not on a prominent sound. It would make more sense to delete this since that's where the combo really starts, at the next vocal.
4. 00:52:429 (4,5) - Vocal sounds held down , so why are you trying to use 1/2 circles to represent every rhythm in this green combo when there are clearly different rhythms going on?
5. 01:16:839 (6,7) - ^
6. 01:00:339 (1,2) - (1) starts on active sound and ends on passive sound, but (2) starts on active sound and ends on active sound? Where's your consistency in rhythm?
7. 01:03:874 (2) - Why do you have the active sound landing on the repeat?
8. 01:18:553 (6) - Probably not the best looking shape with the rest of the pattern.
9. 01:19:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Where are you getting the idea to put finishes on these? They sound so random.
10. 01:29:910 (2,3,4) - Inconsistently-spaced overlaps?

F1r3tar wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:42:250 (3) - Doesn't make sense to start on blue since both the thump and vocal land on white. Why's this even on blue when there's no instrument or vocal mapped to it? done
2. 00:44:072 (1,2) - Would make more sense if (2) was the NC instead of (1), cus a new vocal sounds like it starts there instead.done
3. 00:48:358 (1) - Not on a prominent sound. It would make more sense to delete this since that's where the combo really starts, at the next vocal.done
4. 00:52:429 (4,5) - Vocal sounds held down , so why are you trying to use 1/2 circles to represent every rhythm in this green combo when there are clearly different rhythms going on?done
5. 01:16:839 (6,7) - ^done
6. 01:00:339 (1,2) - (1) starts on active sound and ends on passive sound, but (2) starts on active sound and ends on active sound? Where's your consistency in rhythm?done
7. 01:03:874 (2) - Why do you have the active sound landing on the repeat?done
8. 01:18:553 (6) - Probably not the best looking shape with the rest of the pattern.done
9. 01:19:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Where are you getting the idea to put finishes on these? They sound so random.done
10. 01:29:910 (2,3,4) - Inconsistently-spaced overlaps?done

1. 00:00:155 (1,2,3,4) - You're emphasizing white ticks with hitsounds but you aren't doing anything to show so with object placement. You may want to rearrange the objects so they look like this.
2. 00:01:870 (1,2,3) - To follow the vocals properly, rhythm should look like this.
3. 00:03:584 (1,2,3) - This is not consistent with what was done for 00:01:870 (1,2) - I suggest you rearrange the objects so that the timeline looks like this.
   
   I could go on and on. In general, you are not putting clickables on the important sounds, which is what you should be doing. This issue is scattered all around the map (00:07:012 (1,2) - 00:08:727 (1,2) - 00:31:000 (1,2,3) - 00:32:715 (1,2,3) - 00:35:715 (1,2) - 00:37:858 (1,2,3) - 01:12:553 (2,3,4) etc.). What I don't understand is why you actually get it right sometimes. Do you put either sliders or circles at random? Is there a logic behind this object placement? If there is none, I advise you develop one. If there is one, I highly suggest you improve it.
   
4. 00:34:215 (1) - This slider doesn't really start on a sound, nor does it end anywhere logical. I suggest you remap this bit following the guitar
5. 00:42:786 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - The ranking criteria advises against repeated use of 1/2 sliders in a normal difficulty. You don't have an Easy difficulty, so you should keep the Normal as simplistic as possible
6. 00:56:910 (1,2) - The ranking criteria advises against the overlapping of hitcircles and slidertails (as well as other overlaps)
7. 01:18:231 (1,1) - The ranking criteria advises for a gap of 2 whole measures between a spinner and the next object, which means the next object should be placed at least @ 01:21:767 -

1. 00:07:762 (3) - There is no sound in the song which calls for this hitcircle on a blue tick
2. 00:10:012 (4,5,6) - Move 1/4th to the left
3. 00:21:558 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is a Hard, not an Insane. if you want to map something like this, you should use a triple + reverse slider. Example.
4. 00:49:215 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
5. 00:55:839 (2,3,4) - What.. is this? Sliderheads are supposed to be on recognizable sounds.. This of it as a big stream and just do this
6. 00:57:339 (2,3,4) - ^
   
   So on, so forth

1. 00:15:344 (6,7) - 7 has no strong sound >> there is no reason it should be so spaced. Same for 00:22:200 (6,7) - 01:05:052 (9,10) - 01:25:410 (6,7) -

Mombei wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs

[Normal] done ! but i redo 1 part
Rhythm;

1. 00:00:155 (1,2,3,4) - You're emphasizing white ticks with hitsounds but you aren't doing anything to show so with object placement. You may want to rearrange the objects so they look like this.
2. 00:01:870 (1,2,3) - To follow the vocals properly, rhythm should look like this.
3. 00:03:584 (1,2,3) - This is not consistent with what was done for 00:01:870 (1,2) - I suggest you rearrange the objects so that the timeline looks like this.
   
   I could go on and on. In general, you are not putting clickables on the important sounds, which is what you should be doing. This issue is scattered all around the map (00:07:012 (1,2) - 00:08:727 (1,2) - 00:31:000 (1,2,3) - 00:32:715 (1,2,3) - 00:35:715 (1,2) - 00:37:858 (1,2,3) - 01:12:553 (2,3,4) etc.). What I don't understand is why you actually get it right sometimes. Do you put either sliders or circles at random? Is there a logic behind this object placement? If there is none, I advise you develop one. If there is one, I highly suggest you improve it.
   
4. 00:34:215 (1) - This slider doesn't really start on a sound, nor does it end anywhere logical. I suggest you remap this bit following the guitar
5. 00:42:786 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - The ranking criteria advises against repeated use of 1/2 sliders in a normal difficulty. You don't have an Easy difficulty, so you should keep the Normal as simplistic as possible
6. 00:56:910 (1,2) - The ranking criteria advises against the overlapping of hitcircles and slidertails (as well as other overlaps)
7. 01:18:231 (1,1) - The ranking criteria advises for a gap of 2 whole measures between a spinner and the next object, which means the next object should be placed at least @ 01:21:767 -

[Hard] done ! but i redo 1 part

Here are the same rhythm issues. I believe I don't need to point every single instance out for you, nor should I have to anyways.

1. 00:07:762 (3) - There is no sound in the song which calls for this hitcircle on a blue tick
2. 00:10:012 (4,5,6) - Move 1/4th to the left
3. 00:21:558 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is a Hard, not an Insane. if you want to map something like this, you should use a triple + reverse slider. Example.
4. 00:49:215 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
5. 00:55:839 (2,3,4) - What.. is this? Sliderheads are supposed to be on recognizable sounds.. This of it as a big stream and just do this
6. 00:57:339 (2,3,4) - ^
   
   So on, so forth

[Insane]

I believe I made myself clear enough in regard to the rhythmic structure of this mapset, haven't I?

1. 00:15:344 (6,7) - 7 has no strong sound >> there is no reason it should be so spaced. Same for 00:22:200 (6,7) - 01:05:052 (9,10) - 01:25:410 (6,7) -done

In general, there is a lack of understanding of basic rhythm. You know what a concept in mapping is, but apply it poorly in practice. There is also a lack of polishing within the aesthetics throughout the mapset, minor spacing issues, and hitsounding could use some work, but I believe none of that will have any relevance until you get a grasp of what basic rhythm is and how to apply it in practice effectively. I suggest you familiarize with basic and irregual rhythms before attempting to fix this map.


I sincerely hope the time and effort I put into this mod will help you grow as a mapper and push you one step closer towards your goals, whatever those may be. Cheers

• Should get more emphasis
  Stacking is losing emphasis

• 00:53:500: Remove this circle, I don't hear anything in the music from here
  01:32:879: Use slider here instead, i can still hear the music till the end

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello from #modreqs
Some advice:
[General]

• Should get more emphasis
  Stacking is losing emphasis

[Hard]

• 00:53:500: Remove this circle, I don't hear anything in the music from here done
  01:32:879: Use slider here instead, i can still hear the music till the enddone

Sorry for short mod because I'm a bad modder
If this doesn't hellp you, ignore it

-NeBu- wrote:

insane

00:34:429 (7,1,2) - blanketdone
00:35:715 (1,2) - ^done
00:36:358 (3) - round it up, will fit better with 00:35:929 (2) - done
00:36:358 (3,4,5) - move 00:37:000 (5) - so there will be good triangledone
01:00:339 (1,2,3) - I think you can add circles between (01:00:660 (2,4) - ) it fits good, just connect them with slider welldone
01:26:053 (3,4) - blanketdone
01:26:481 (4,5) - ^done
01:32:450 (6) - just make simple blanket slider with 01:32:023 (4) - since current one is ugly done

I love FMA and the song, so I hope you can rank it, gl!