KRZY wrote:

[General]
Consider mapping an Easy difficulty~ hmm,I think its okey sorryT_T

[Normal]
00:50:364 (1) - Move to 00:50:693, and add a note at 00:50:364 (X)
00:51:353 (2) - Move to 00:51:683 and remove repeat

SPOILER

01:09:155 (2) - End this slider on 01:09:650 instead?
01:10:144 (3) - End this slider on 01:10:639 instead?
01:18:221 (1) - Move to 01:18:386
01:19:045 (2) - Move to 01:19:210
01:19:375 (3) - Delete
01:53:661 (2) - Move to 01:53:990, and add a note at 01:53:661 (X)
01:54:979 (4) - Add one more repeat, and fix spacing so it fits the above mod

SPOILER

02:22:672 (5,6) - Overlap with 02:23:001 (1)?

SPOILER

02:23:990 (2) - End this slider on 02:24:485 instead?
03:04:540 (4) - Move to x:254 y:92 All Fixed

[Collab]
Get a good custom hitclap~ > < default hitsound like sorry.
04:11:088 ~ 04:12:840 : Silence sliderslides okey Fix

• • Approach Rate: 4
  • 00:13:693 (5) - Add "New Combo"
  • 00:42:781 (x) - Add a circle
  • 01:06:188 (5) - Add "New Combo"
  • 01:12:781 (5) - ^
  • 01:47:397 (3) - End this slider at 01:47:891 (red tick). Add a slider-repetition.
  • 03:05:199 (5) - Add "New Combo"

• • Remove all those "clap"s, they don't the music imo.

xxheroxx wrote:

[Normal]

• • Approach Rate: 4
  • 00:13:693 (5) - Add "New Combo"
  • 00:42:781 (x) - Add a circle No sorry
  • 01:06:188 (5) - Add "New Combo"
  • 01:12:781 (5) - ^
  • 01:47:397 (3) - End this slider at 01:47:891 (red tick). Add a slider-repetition.
  • 03:05:199 (5) - Add "New Combo"

Other Fixed

[Collab]

• • Remove all those "clap"s, they don't the music imo.

like clap hitsound sorry

winber1 wrote:

General

--you don't need your name in the tags lol, and it's not spaced correctly either ._. no It is convenient for a search

Collab


01:30:254 (6) - to be honest, i don't like this spacing that much.\ Change spacing 01:30:089 (5,6,7,8) -
04:04:210 (x) - add note? i like better, idk about u.k


Normal

00:21:683 (1) - end spinner here. it makes a lot more sense ._.k changed
00:32:397 (1,2) - um.. i'm hesitant to do something like this in the easiest diff of the mapset sorry no change
00:41:133 (2) - new combo?ok
00:42:781 (x) - add note with new combo Fix
00:43:111 (1) - remove combo and move note 1/2tick later.^
01:01:243 (7) - add finish^
01:23:331 (4,5) - something like this? (you don't have to use two repeats sliders, but i just like the rhythm more if you do it like this):woo sound good change but repeat 1time

SPOILER

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01:32:397 (6) - unstack?Fix
01:59:924 (2) - ^?^
02:04:210 (5) - new combo?^
02:23:990 (2) - end 1/2 tick earlier at 02:24:485 ^
03:10:144 (1,2,3,4) - follow the music and use notes every 3/2 ticks? not 2/1 ticks maybe fix
03:29:430 (3,4) - put it somehwere else? not under the previous slider?change slider
03:46:902 (3) - ^? dont stack?k
04:06:627 (4) - new combo? ^

KSHR wrote:

ykcarrot wrote:

kanakyin, kanparin, kanpakana, rinkyin, whatever

add "Kanarrot" and "kanparrot", please (*´ω｀*) 　because so moe..

1. The Normal is too hard to be the easiest diff of the mapset imo. Adding an Easy would be preferable.

1. 00:07:493 (1,2,3) - These overlaps looked rather weird in-game. I'm sure there's a way to place the slider so they don't overlap.
2. 00:14:093 (1) - This slider becomes abruptly silent. It sounds really bad while playing.
3. 00:17:493 (1) - This is just a suggestion, but you could add a crescendo from 00:18:693 - to 00:21:093 - and make the spinner silent at 00:21:293 - ?
4. 00:32:397 (1,2) - This sounds quite out of place to be honest, because it has lots of 1/2 very suddenly, while the map as a whole has more 1/1 and 3/2 rhythms.
5. 00:36:188 (3,4) - This sounds rather weird as well, because you were following the vocals, but the end of (1) matches nothing in the vocals.
6. 01:04:869 (3) - For consistency with what was previously mapped, add a new combo.
7. 01:07:507 (3) - Same.
8. 01:13:111 (2,5) - Do not silence notes like that. Each beat is expect to give a hitsound, and these don't, which is confusing. Also, there IS something in the song at that point, so there's no reason why you would silence them. Reducing the volume would make sense, but not that much.
9. 01:54:979 (4) - If anything, this should be a long slider, not a repeat one, to match the vocals. If you want to keep it a repeat slider, the second repeat surprised me, as you've been using only repeat sliders with one repeat, and nothing in the song made me expect a second one here.
10. 01:56:792 (1,2) - Same as 00:32:397 (1,2) -
11. 02:04:210 (1,2,3,4) - I find this beat/slider placement to be rather poor. It leaves blanks in the map which feel rather bad, and could match the lyrics better. Maybe try this timeline:
12. 02:18:715 (2,3,4) - For consistency with what was mapped before, make these all new combos.
13. 02:27:617 (5) - Silenced beats. (see above)
14. 02:29:430 (2) - The repeat sounds rather weird in this case. The lyrics don't have this beat at all, and you've been mapping to the lyrics all along so far.
15. 02:48:056 (8) - You should make this section louder... The beats are hardly hearable right now.
16. 03:09:155 (5,1) - This overlap looks really bad and could be very easily avoided.
17. 03:29:924 (4) - Change this slider's shape to avoid the overlap with 03:31:573 (3) - ?
18. 03:38:825 (6) - You should make this louder. It's hardly hearable right now.
19. 03:48:715 (7,1) - This overlap could be easily avoided. D:
20. 03:51:188 (2) - Same as 02:29:430 (2) -
21. 03:54:814 (3,4) - This overlap could be easily avoided. D:
22. Extend the last spinner so it ends at the same time as for the Hard diff ?

1. This is closer to an Insane than a Hard imo... I'm not a big fan of all the added 1/4 either.

1. Use tick rate 2 to make the speed changes more readable.

1. Even for a taiko, some parts seriously feel overmapped.
2. The slider speed during the 180BPM section is really fast. Maybe reduce it a bt ?

Odaril wrote:

ykcarrot

1. 00:54:320 (1,2) - Unreadable speed change ! This should be fixed if tick rate 2 is used. // meh
   
2. 01:09:155 (3) - Here again ! // ^

Odaril wrote:

KPY & Kana's Taiko

1. Even for a taiko, some parts seriously feel overmapped. X,not really.Some part overmapped is acceptable in Taiko diff.
2. The slider speed during the 180BPM section is really fast. Maybe reduce it a bt ? X,Since SV1.4 is really simple SV in Taiko diff,so not decide to change it.

Odaril wrote:

General

1. The Normal is too hard to be the easiest diff of the mapset imo. Adding an Easy would be preferable.

okey, making now bit wait

Collab

1. Use tick rate 2 to make the speed changes more readable.

No,tick rate 2 Score and Combo really high

Sorda

1. Extend the last spinner to make it end at the same time as the endtime of Hard ? Or add a new one, your call.

Fixed

KanaRin

1. 00:34:540 (5,1) - This overlap could be easily avoided.I think its okey
2. 00:43:276 (7,1) - I find this stack to be a bad idea because it stops the cursor very suddenly and kills the flow of the map.changed
3. 01:51:353 (3) - This speed change is unreadable because the only tick of the slider is hidden under another slider's path. This should be fixed if tick rate 2 is used.changed tick rate 2
4. 02:40:968 (7,8) - Can't say I agree with this jump. The placement is unintuitive (the patterns are obviously going up and you add a random 3,1 jump to the very bottom ?) and the jumps itself is unexpected.no,keep it sorry

Patchouli

1. 00:16:893 (1,2) - I... kinda understand why you did that jump, but it's very sudden and confusing. If you want to keep it, you should space 00:16:693 (3,1) - the same way as 00:16:493 (2,3) - to make the jump more consistent. changed spacing