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??? i need help

edit: nvm problem solved
Alfarai

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00:31:943 (1) - not really a good idea to place it there, probaly around x:0 y:208 for flow fixed
00:36:558 (5) - this looks like your 1/4, hmm.. i dont know whats wrong in this part
00:39:328 (1) - do something like 00:37:020 (2,1) - , but be more perfect fixed
01:19:481 (7,8,9) - A little bit down so it looks good imo fixed
01:21:328 (1) - too late for vocal I'd rather keep it this way because consistency
01:54:328 (6,1) - overlap nah seems fine to me
02:34:943 (2,1,2) - probaly a triangle instead, or increase the spacing increased spacing
02:58:251 (3,4) - blanket? fixed

whoa
cisphobia
NM from my queue!
error's insane

00:13:943 (5,6) - these sliders don't touch, but 00:15:789 (5,6) do. i'd make both either not touching or touching, for consistency reasons.

00:22:020 (5,6,7) - if you could possibly make (5) blanket the slider, it would look better (and match 00:23:866 (5,6,7) ). another option i'd consider to make it look better is move the whole triangle closer to the slider so that there's no followpoint leading into (5).

00:29:058 (4) - sudden sharp-curve slider. i'd change it to a regular curved slider, or add sharp-curve sliders into earlier parts of the map. atm it's a new type of slider that's introduced in the 2nd section of the intro of the song, and it stands out too much for no reason, giving visual emphasis to nothing.

00:33:789 (1,2,3,4) - this looks more confusing to look at compared to 00:31:943 (1,2,3,4) , because 00:34:020 (2,4) - lead into eachother. i'd do something about it to make it less confusing to read, so that it fits better into gameplay. making it a bit confusing to look at makes it seem like this "knock knock" section is more important, but it's the same as the previous one.

00:32:866 (5,6,7) - has less spacing than 00:34:712 (5,6,7) . it gives more emphasis to 00:34:712 (5,6,7) , for no reason (as both sound exactly the same). i'd change 00:32:866 (5,6,7) to have the same spacing as 00:34:712 (5,6,7) .

00:40:712 (4,5,6,7,8) - nothing in the song calls for a stream. i'd just continue with jumps, rather than a stream, because 1/2 jumps synergize better with the vocals.

00:46:712 (1,2,3) - i'd change this pattern into something more like 00:48:558 (1,2,3) . atm the first pattern doesn't emphasize the 2nd "kung", but the second pattern does.
01:47:635 (1,2,3,4) - ^, and more.

01:04:712 (6,7) - i'd space these a bit further apart to better emphasize the vocals.

01:12:328 (8,9) - this is barely readable, even if the previous triple was spaced the same. i'd rather have them stacked on top of eachother than spaced out.

01:16:251 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is this stream spaced less than every other stream that came before it, like 00:15:328 (1,2,3,4,5) and such? i'd have the spacing be the same so that both are emphasized equally.
01:20:174 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:58:251 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^, and more.

01:31:135 (2,3) - place these closer together so that no followpoint appears.

02:42:558 (1,2,3,4,1) - i'd make this a curved stream, just like every other stream in the map, for consistency reasons.

02:57:558 (6,7,1) - 90 degree triple seems very unfair, because it's a difficulty spike and it was never introduced before in the map. i'd make it straight, just like 02:56:866 (2,3,4) .

alfaster's light insane

00:13:937 (5,6) - why doesn't this place a circle on the vocals but 00:15:783 (4,5,6) - does? i'd make them both emphasize the vocals.
00:21:322 (3,4,5) vs 00:23:168 (6,7) - ^
00:28:706 (4,5,6,7,1) & 00:30:552 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^, and more.

00:55:014 (3) - new combo, cause this is the start of a new sub-section of vocals.
01:09:783 (3) - ^

00:57:322 (4) - this slider ends on 1/8, but it should end on the blue tick instead. sliders ending on 1/8 have never happened in the map before, so players may get a 100 because they expect the slider to end on the blue tick. i'd change it.

01:01:937 (2) - i'd make this slider more even. atm one side is longer than the other.

01:09:322 (2,3) - why is the spacing between the slider and circle so much different than the spacing between the slider and circle here: 00:54:552 (2,3) ? make the spacing the same for consistency reasons.

01:40:475 (2,4,6) - new combo on each of these, because it's a completely new rhythm that needs to be emphasized. also helps with sightreading, no followpoints allow the player to have to feel each note's rhythm rather than using followpoints to help aid, [the followpoints] leading to them hitting the rhythm wrong.

01:43:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is this kiai section's intro so much different than 00:43:014 (1,2,3,4,1,2) ? they both sound very alike and should keep the same rhythm patterns.
01:58:706 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^, and more.

01:52:014 (4,5,6,7) - why triple here instead of the reverse slider that you had in the previous kiai section?
02:06:783 (4,5,6) - ^, and more.

01:53:860 (4,5) - this doesn't follow the vocals very well, cause the player isn't clicking the kno-knock because (4)'s slidertail ends on knock.
02:08:629 (4,5) - ^, and more.

02:13:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - i feel this would be better as a break. however, if you don't want a break here, i'd instead change the whole thing to emphasize the vocals, like you did here 02:20:860 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) , instead of emphasizing the background beat, like you did here 02:13:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) .

02:54:783 (3,4,5,6,7) - nothing calls for a stream here, i'd change it to jumps instead.

hard

00:22:937 (1,2,3,4) - this should keep the same rhythm pattern as 00:20:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) , you introduced a new concept and you should repeat the concept in places where the song sounds the same, or very alike.

00:32:860 (1,2,3) - place this under 00:32:398 (3) for better readability.
00:34:706 (1,2,3) - ^, 00:34:245 (3) .
01:37:475 (5,6,7) - ^, 01:37:014 (3) and more.

i'd be careful about having perfectly stacking circles in a hard, like 01:10:245 (4,5) and such. consider changing it, or check with more people to see if it's okay.

01:12:091 (4,1) - a break can fit in the middle of these, if you want.

01:29:168 (1,2) - these vocals can be clicked twice with circles, but 01:32:860 (1) these vocals can only be clicked once. they should both be able to be clicked, for consistency.

01:40:822 (3,4) - new combo, cause new rhythm being introduced. it kinda signals to players that it's a different rhythm.

01:43:014 (3) - make the red node a white node in this slider and fix the curve a bit. atm it looks scrunched up.

02:24:552 (1) - heart slider nodes look more like this, rather than looking like an actual heart.

sorry for short mod!
some of what i said can be applied throughout the whole difficulty
i didn't mod any difficulties under hard cause i have very little experience mapping low star difficulties. i may come back to mod them once i gain experience tho :9
good luck with rank!

btw: "and more" means that the issue appears in other places in the map.
-Keitaro

sonic8889 wrote:

NM from my queue!
error's insane

00:13:943 (5,6) - these sliders don't touch, but 00:15:789 (5,6) do. i'd make both either not touching or touching, for consistency reasons.

00:22:020 (5,6,7) - if you could possibly make (5) blanket the slider, it would look better (and match 00:23:866 (5,6,7) ). another option i'd consider to make it look better is move the whole triangle closer to the slider so that there's no followpoint leading into (5).

00:29:058 (4) - sudden sharp-curve slider. i'd change it to a regular curved slider, or add sharp-curve sliders into earlier parts of the map. atm it's a new type of slider that's introduced in the 2nd section of the intro of the song, and it stands out too much for no reason, giving visual emphasis to nothing.

00:33:789 (1,2,3,4) - this looks more confusing to look at compared to 00:31:943 (1,2,3,4) , because 00:34:020 (2,4) - lead into eachother. i'd do something about it to make it less confusing to read, so that it fits better into gameplay. making it a bit confusing to look at makes it seem like this "knock knock" section is more important, but it's the same as the previous one.

00:32:866 (5,6,7) - has less spacing than 00:34:712 (5,6,7) . it gives more emphasis to 00:34:712 (5,6,7) , for no reason (as both sound exactly the same). i'd change 00:32:866 (5,6,7) to have the same spacing as 00:34:712 (5,6,7) .

00:40:712 (4,5,6,7,8) - nothing in the song calls for a stream. i'd just continue with jumps, rather than a stream, because 1/2 jumps synergize better with the vocals. Following background sound

00:46:712 (1,2,3) - i'd change this pattern into something more like 00:48:558 (1,2,3) . atm the first pattern doesn't emphasize the 2nd "kung", but the second pattern does. I guess a nah will be better, its still emphasize with the sounds and song tho
01:47:635 (1,2,3,4) - ^, and more.

01:04:712 (6,7) - i'd space these a bit further apart to better emphasize the vocals.

01:12:328 (8,9) - this is barely readable, even if the previous triple was spaced the same. i'd rather have them stacked on top of eachother than spaced out. no, its still the same spacing as 01:11:635 (4,5,6) - so its still readable, some testplay results no readable issue

01:16:251 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is this stream spaced less than every other stream that came before it, like 00:15:328 (1,2,3,4,5) and such? i'd have the spacing be the same so that both are emphasized equally.
01:20:174 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:58:251 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^, and more. well its already patterned to use low spaced stream in the second part, so its okay imo

01:31:135 (2,3) - place these closer together so that no followpoint appears.

02:42:558 (1,2,3,4,1) - i'd make this a curved stream, just like every other stream in the map, for consistency reasons. nah, streams can be variated even the shape is different from the others.

02:57:558 (6,7,1) - 90 degree triple seems very unfair, because it's a difficulty spike and it was never introduced before in the map. i'd make it straight, just like 02:56:866 (2,3,4) . 45 degree then
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352,160,119404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,332,119635,2,0,P|200:348|152:288,1,157.500006008148
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232,264,120328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,24,120558,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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456,56,121020,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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144,108,121943,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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420,320,123789,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,184,124020,6,0,P|240:80|432:40,1,315.000012016297
468,168,124712,5,8,0:0:0:0:
388,360,124943,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,104,125174,5,0,0:0:0:0:
424,272,125404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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388,360,125866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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428,216,127135,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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388,240,128174,2,0,P|344:280|352:356,1,78.7500030040742
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376,104,128635,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,104,128751,2,0,P|344:140|352:208,1,78.7500030040742,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,40,128981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,40,129097,2,0,P|448:84|444:136,1,78.7500030040742,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,32,129328,2,0,P|244:52|160:32,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,120,129789,6,0,P|28:220|108:252,1,157.500006008148,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,224,130135,2,0,P|133:160|65:213,1,157.500006008148,8|0,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
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232,304,130712,6,0,P|276:276|260:164,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,112,131058,2,0,L|444:88,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,52,131404,2,0,P|460:104|404:172,1,78.7500030040742,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,176,131635,6,0,P|436:220|516:184,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,92,131981,2,0,P|304:140|348:256,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,280,132328,5,8,0:0:0:0:
96,328,132558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,248,132674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,168,132789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,368,133020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,168,133251,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,96,133366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,24,133481,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,146404,12,0,147789,0:0:0:0:
120,48,148251,6,0,P|56:104|60:216,1,157.500006008148,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,332,148712,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,116,148943,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,344,149174,2,0,P|328:368|256:332,1,157.500006008148
136,136,149635,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,88,149866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,308,150097,5,0,0:0:0:0:
268,4,150328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,284,150558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,224,150789,6,0,P|32:160|112:44,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,4,151251,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,4,151366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,4,151481,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,244,151712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,356,151943,6,0,L|0:364,1,157.500006008148,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,160,152404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,288,152635,2,0,P|332:344|384:280,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,153097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,153212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,153328,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,344,153558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,200,153789,6,0,P|196:184|128:236,1,157.500006008148,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,340,154251,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,292,154481,2,0,P|352:256|240:120,1,315.000012016297,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,232,155174,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,288,155404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,124,155635,6,0,L|148:8,1,78.7500030040742
208,152,155866,2,0,P|156:196|92:176,1,78.7500030040742
232,80,156097,2,0,P|272:108|272:196,1,78.7500030040742,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,124,156328,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,124,156443,2,0,L|28:124,1,78.7500030040742,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,264,156674,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,264,156789,2,0,L|224:264,1,78.7500030040742,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,192,157020,2,0,P|16:256|104:340,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,272,157481,6,0,P|280:240|256:152,1,78.7500030040742
208,336,157712,2,0,P|260:352|328:296,1,78.7500030040742
184,264,157943,2,0,P|144:296|152:388,1,78.7500030040742,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,208,158174,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,208,158289,2,0,L|280:96,1,78.7500030040742,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,76,158520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,76,158635,2,0,L|176:176,1,78.7500030040742,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,56,158866,2,0,B|356:36|356:36|452:56,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,272,159328,6,0,P|340:216|380:124,1,157.500006008148,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,228,159674,2,0,P|472:320|364:336,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,348,160020,2,0,L|208:344,1,78.7500030040742,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,384,160251,6,0,P|224:328|152:240,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,348,160597,2,0,P|68:372|156:300,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,212,160943,2,0,L|76:328,1,78.7500030040742,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,188,161174,6,0,P|92:144|0:180,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,268,161520,2,0,P|200:240|168:120,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,80,161866,5,8,0:0:0:0:
408,64,162097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,296,162328,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,80,162558,5,8,0:0:0:0:
200,68,162674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,60,162789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,48,162904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,40,163020,6,0,P|409:46|468:136,1,157.500006008148,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,336,163481,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,132,163712,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,288,163943,2,0,P|96:280|72:200,1,157.500006008148
212,72,164404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,220,164635,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,52,164866,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,168,165097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,224,165328,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,40,165558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,240,165789,5,0,0:0:0:0:
80,52,166020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,232,166251,5,8,0:0:0:0:
196,164,166481,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,160,166712,6,0,P|504:248|408:320,1,157.500006008148,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,300,167174,2,0,P|265:230|298:161,1,157.500006008148,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,20,167635,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,232,167866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,120,168097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,180,168328,6,0,P|480:260|312:212,1,315.000012016297
376,88,169020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,232,169251,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,12,169481,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,169712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,136,169943,5,8,0:0:0:0:
264,20,170174,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,264,170404,6,0,L|188:348,1,78.7500030040742
148,176,170635,2,0,L|76:264,1,78.7500030040742
208,108,170866,2,0,L|100:92,1,78.7500030040742,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,160,171097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,160,171212,2,0,L|332:80,1,78.7500030040742,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,248,171443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,248,171558,2,0,L|356:312,1,78.7500030040742,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,340,171789,2,0,P|156:316|64:356,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,216,172251,6,0,L|72:84,1,78.7500030040742
148,36,172481,2,0,L|148:152,1,78.7500030040742
148,284,172712,2,0,L|148:152,1,78.7500030040742,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,104,172943,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,104,173058,2,0,L|224:220,1,78.7500030040742,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,352,173289,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,352,173404,2,0,L|224:220,1,78.7500030040742,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,148,173635,2,0,B|312:228|312:228|288:332,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,352,174097,6,0,P|460:300|440:200,1,157.500006008148,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,144,174443,2,0,P|392:84|456:-4,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,88,174789,2,0,L|512:192,1,78.7500030040742,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,216,175020,6,0,B|300:184|300:184|204:236,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,300,175366,2,0,P|180:284|152:188,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,140,175712,2,0,L|296:84,1,78.7500030040742,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,48,175943,6,0,P|380:92|312:192,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,264,176289,2,0,P|292:272|236:176,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,140,176635,5,8,0:0:0:0:
52,144,176866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,236,176981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,332,177097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,228,177328,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,144,177558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,56,177674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,8,177789,6,0,L|268:16,1,105,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,200,178251,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,228,178481,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,128,178712,2,0,P|448:184|428:256,1,105
312,316,179174,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,228,179404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,52,179635,5,0,0:0:0:0:
284,52,179866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,232,180097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,232,180328,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,176,180558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,176,180789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,204,181020,2,0,P|404:280|348:320,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,292,181481,5,0,0:0:0:0:
296,352,181712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,144,181943,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,292,182174,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,172,182404,2,0,P|336:108|284:64,1,105
160,56,182866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,188,183097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,316,183328,5,0,0:0:0:0:
156,316,183558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,240,183789,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,240,184020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,148,184250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,148,184481,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,316,184712,2,0,P|360:304|388:240,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,228,185174,6,0,B|144:244|144:244|48:192,1,210,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,64,185866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,272,186097,2,0,P|52:312|12:372,1,105
32,192,186558,2,0,P|96:212|116:284,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,116,187020,6,0,L|260:116,1,210,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,188,187712,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,92,187943,2,0,P|400:60|368:-8,1,105,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,188,188404,2,0,P|316:220|348:288,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,216,188866,6,0,L|376:224,1,52.5
440,296,189097,2,0,L|512:288,1,52.5
464,368,189328,2,0,L|388:376,1,52.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,308,189558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,308,189674,2,0,L|384:300,1,52.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,380,189904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,380,190020,2,0,L|264:388,1,52.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,328,190251,2,0,P|152:360|96:328,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,232,190712,6,0,L|164:288,1,52.5
100,172,190943,2,0,L|72:252,1,52.5
120,92,191174,2,0,L|176:144,1,52.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,24,191404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,24,191520,2,0,L|40:92,1,52.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,24,191751,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,24,191866,2,0,L|224:84,1,52.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,112,192097,2,0,P|328:80|396:112,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,96,192443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,120,192558,1,4,0:0:0:0:
Alfarai
Let me just clarify that this diff is a collab between me and Charmcaster and it's also my first so yeah

sonic8889 wrote:

NM from my queue!
alfaster's light insane

00:28:706 (4,5,6,7,1) & 00:30:552 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^, and more. both are mapped the same way


01:43:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is this kiai section's intro so much different than 00:43:014 (1,2,3,4,1,2) ? they both sound very alike and should keep the same rhythm patterns. it's a collab and 01:43:937 is my part while the other is charm's

01:58:706 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^, and more. ^

01:52:014 (4,5,6,7) - why triple here instead of the reverse slider that you had in the previous kiai section? ^
02:06:783 (4,5,6) - ^, and more. ^


01:53:860 (4,5) - this doesn't follow the vocals very well, cause the player isn't clicking the kno-knock because (4)'s slidertail ends on knock. made it into a triple

02:08:629 (4,5) - ^, and more. this is a different one than 01:53:860 and if you listen closely, 02:07:014 (6) seems to end on a less emphasized beat

also fixed the 'and more' thing
UniqueBlock11
13476 is a bit late for offset, try to use 13460 for all difficulties
of course if you changed the offset you'd have to change the timing points but it's your choice
riffy
knock knock!




[General]
  1. Just a friendly reminder that all of the difficulties are meant to be finished on the same spot. I know it's a WIP set, but I still feel like this could be mentioned.
  2. Also, be sure toremove the unused hitsounds, check tags and video for consistency. You know, all the general stuff.
[Easy]
  1. 00:17:168 (1,2,3) - it'd be better to repeat a similar pattern like 1-2 two times, rather than using (3). After all, the vocals here are repeated TWICE, so using a the same or very similar pattern TWICE would make more sense.
    Note: 00:31:937 (1,2,3) - this would apply here and to similar parts. So, basically each time a line is repeated, you could use a similar pattern or similar rhythm to be more consistent and to represent the song more accurately.
  2. 01:23:168 (2,3) - swapping these on the timeline (Ctrl+G) would match the vocals better. Here, it should feel more natural with the vocals.
  3. 02:24:552 (1) - I'd highly recommend avoiding overlaps of slider-head and slider-tail as those may confuse beginners. And since I couldn't really fix the heart-shaped slider to match this suggestion, I would probably recommend a plain arc-shaped thing. o hai

    Generally, I feel like you've sort of overused spinners as there are 8 spinners and a large number of breaks. Replacing some of the spinners with hitobject could spice things up a little. Additionally, some slidershapes could be neater/softer, for instance 01:53:168 (3) - here. It may seem a bit difficult to make this, but I feel like sogfter shapes would suit the song better.

I'll be finishing this later, don't kudosu
Topic Starter
Fragmented

Bakari wrote:

knock knock!




[General]
  1. Just a friendly reminder that all of the difficulties are meant to be finished on the same spot. I know it's a WIP set, but I still feel like this could be mentioned.
  2. Also, be sure toremove the unused hitsounds, check tags and video for consistency. You know, all the general stuff.
[Easy]
  1. 00:17:168 (1,2,3) - it'd be better to repeat a similar pattern like 1-2 two times, rather than using (3). After all, the vocals here are repeated TWICE, so using a the same or very similar pattern TWICE would make more sense.
    Note: 00:31:937 (1,2,3) - this would apply here and to similar parts. So, basically each time a line is repeated, you could use a similar pattern or similar rhythm to be more consistent and to represent the song more accurately.
  2. 01:23:168 (2,3) - swapping these on the timeline (Ctrl+G) would match the vocals better. Here, it should feel more natural with the vocals.
  3. 02:24:552 (1) - I'd highly recommend avoiding overlaps of slider-head and slider-tail as those may confuse beginners. And since I couldn't really fix the heart-shaped slider to match this suggestion, I would probably recommend a plain arc-shaped thing. o hai

    Generally, I feel like you've sort of overused spinners as there are 8 spinners and a large number of breaks. Replacing some of the spinners with hitobject could spice things up a little. Additionally, some slidershapes could be neater/softer, for instance 01:53:168 (3) - here. It may seem a bit difficult to make this, but I feel like sogfter shapes would suit the song better.

I'll be finishing this later, don't kudosu
oh fak didnt read the last line,
bn pls deny kds pls thanks
riffy
[Normal]

  • A bit more dense rhythm would be a good idea, 00:26:398 (3) - for instance this part is mapped in a less dense way than in Easy. This applies to a few more patterns, just play through both difficulties and you'll feel it. For insntance, 00:46:706 (1,2) - these feel really slow and Normal could use something more similar to the rhythm used in Advanced.
  1. 01:20:860 (2) - just like in the Easy difficulty, softer curves could make things appear neater. Example
  2. 02:24:552 (1) - try spreading tail/head apart a little. A bit of extra readability would make the slider look more natural since everything else in this difficulty is really easy to read.
  3. 02:27:322 (1,2) - these are practically inaudible. Consider using at least 30% volume to make the object give at least some audio feedback.
  4. There's also a bit of an inconsistency with mapping, 02:59:398 - vocals are ignored, yet 03:06:783 - here they are mapped. It would be better to stick to either mapping them in every similar case or ignoring that kind of vocals.

    A bit of this and that with rhythm, apart from that it is pretty neat.
[arnold's Advanced]
  1. 00:13:481 - I would complain about the visuals here as the objects are relactively close and slightly overlap. Personally, I feel like those overlaps were unintentional just because of how minor they are. Larger spacing would probably prevent the overlaps, making things slightly easier to read and neater.
  2. 00:47:404 (2) - 00:48:558 (1) - sliders like give a broken flow or change the way sliders feel making a player watch the path more attentively, which essentially complicates the part. I would suggest using simplier and more readable slidershapes to match the fast-paced and yet simplistic feel of the kiai.
  3. 01:29:174 (1,2) - overlapping with the slidertail and the circle makes the whole thing look a bit too messy, in my opinion. I would try to keep things neat by avoiding this kind of overlaps.
    Note: 01:32:866 (1,2) - same would apply to similar patterns.

    So, my main concern would be the visuals, which feel sort of unpolished and sometimes contradicting the feel/concept of the song.


edit, sorry, I just completely ran out of motivation to mod. prob you can consider this one a finished mod
Topic Starter
Fragmented

Bakari wrote:

[Normal]

  • A bit more dense rhythm would be a good idea, 00:26:398 (3) - for instance this part is mapped in a less dense way than in Easy. This applies to a few more patterns, just play through both difficulties and you'll feel it. For insntance, 00:46:706 (1,2) - these feel really slow and Normal could use something more similar to the rhythm used in Advanced.
  1. 01:20:860 (2) - just like in the Easy difficulty, softer curves could make things appear neater. Example
  2. 02:24:552 (1) - try spreading tail/head apart a little. A bit of extra readability would make the slider look more natural since everything else in this difficulty is really easy to read.
  3. 02:27:322 (1,2) - these are practically inaudible. Consider using at least 30% volume to make the object give at least some audio feedback.
  4. There's also a bit of an inconsistency with mapping, 02:59:398 - vocals are ignored, yet 03:06:783 - here they are mapped. It would be better to stick to either mapping them in every similar case or ignoring that kind of vocals.

    A bit of this and that with rhythm, apart from that it is pretty neat.
[arnold's Advanced]
  1. 00:13:481 - I would complain about the visuals here as the objects are relactively close and slightly overlap. Personally, I feel like those overlaps were unintentional just because of how minor they are. Larger spacing would probably prevent the overlaps, making things slightly easier to read and neater.
  2. 00:47:404 (2) - 00:48:558 (1) - sliders like give a broken flow or change the way sliders feel making a player watch the path more attentively, which essentially complicates the part. I would suggest using simplier and more readable slidershapes to match the fast-paced and yet simplistic feel of the kiai.
  3. 01:29:174 (1,2) - overlapping with the slidertail and the circle makes the whole thing look a bit too messy, in my opinion. I would try to keep things neat by avoiding this kind of overlaps.
    Note: 01:32:866 (1,2) - same would apply to similar patterns.

    So, my main concern would be the visuals, which feel sort of unpolished and sometimes contradicting the feel/concept of the song.


i'll finish later, don't kudosu since I already got one kd

OMFG CAN I STOP GIVING PEOPLE KUDOS JNHFLEGJELGKJELKJLKJKJF im sorry. i should read more books. im sorry
Topic Starter
Fragmented

UniqueBlock11 wrote:

13476 is a bit late for offset, try to use 13460 for all difficulties
of course if you changed the offset you'd have to change the timing points but it's your choice
im pretty sure its fine
Topic Starter
Fragmented

sonic8889 wrote:

NM from my queue!

alfaster's light insane

00:13:937 (5,6) - why doesn't this place a circle on the vocals but 00:15:783 (4,5,6) - does? i'd make them both emphasize the vocals. added a circle
00:21:322 (3,4,5) vs 00:23:168 (6,7) - ^ fixed

00:55:014 (3) - new combo, cause this is the start of a new sub-section of vocals. fixed
01:09:783 (3) - ^ fixed

00:57:322 (4) - this slider ends on 1/8, but it should end on the blue tick instead. sliders ending on 1/8 have never happened in the map before, so players may get a 100 because they expect the slider to end on the blue tick. i'd change it. fixed

01:01:937 (2) - i'd make this slider more even. atm one side is longer than the other. fixed

01:09:322 (2,3) - why is the spacing between the slider and circle so much different than the spacing between the slider and circle here: oops fixed
00:54:552 (2,3) ? make the spacing the same for consistency reasons.

01:40:475 (2,4,6) - new combo on each of these, because it's a completely new rhythm that needs to be emphasized. also helps with sightreading, no followpoints allow the player to have to feel each note's rhythm rather than using followpoints to help aid, [the followpoints] leading to them hitting the rhythm wrong. i dont think thats necessary

01:43:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is this kiai section's intro so much different than 00:43:014 (1,2,3,4,1,2) ? they both sound very alike and should keep the same rhythm patterns. its called a collab for a reason....
01:58:706 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^, and more. ^

02:13:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - i feel this would be better as a break. however, if you don't want a break here, i'd instead change the whole thing to emphasize the vocals, like you did here 02:20:860 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) , instead of emphasizing the background beat, like you did here 02:13:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) . alright changed that section to a improved one

02:54:783 (3,4,5,6,7) - nothing calls for a stream here, i'd change it to jumps instead. was matching up this 02:56:629 (3,4,5,6) - but if anyone else brings it up, ill change it

hard

00:22:937 (1,2,3,4) - this should keep the same rhythm pattern as 00:20:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) , you introduced a new concept and you should repeat the concept in places where the song sounds the same, or very alike. im following the vocals for this

00:32:860 (1,2,3) - place this under 00:32:398 (3) for better readability. thats because of the stack leniency
00:34:706 (1,2,3) - ^, 00:34:245 (3) . ^
01:37:475 (5,6,7) - ^, 01:37:014 (3) and more. ^

i'd be careful about having perfectly stacking circles in a hard, like 01:10:245 (4,5) and such. consider changing it, or check with more people to see if it's okay. no complaints so far

01:12:091 (4,1) - a break can fit in the middle of these, if you want. sure

01:29:168 (1,2) - these vocals can be clicked twice with circles, but 01:32:860 (1) these vocals can only be clicked once. they should both be able to be clicked, for consistency. true, fixed

01:40:822 (3,4) - new combo, cause new rhythm being introduced. it kinda signals to players that it's a different rhythm. its fine like that tho

01:43:014 (3) - make the red node a white node in this slider and fix the curve a bit. atm it looks scrunched up. fixed

02:24:552 (1) - heart slider nodes look more like this, rather than looking like an actual heart. but this is fine too right?

sorry for short mod! that was considered short?? wot xD
some of what i said can be applied throughout the whole difficulty
i didn't mod any difficulties under hard cause i have very little experience mapping low star difficulties. i may come back to mod them once i gain experience tho :9
good luck with rank!

btw: "and more" means that the issue appears in other places in the map.
Thanks for your mod!!
Topic Starter
Fragmented

Bakari wrote:

knock knock!




[General]
  1. Just a friendly reminder that all of the difficulties are meant to be finished on the same spot. I know it's a WIP set, but I still feel like this could be mentioned. you're probably referring to the light insane, so i fixed it :3
  2. Also, be sure to remove the unused hitsounds thats probably arnold's stuff xD, check tags and video for consistency. You know, all the general stuff. aites
[Easy]
  1. 00:17:168 (1,2,3) - it'd be better to repeat a similar pattern like 1-2 two times, rather than using (3). After all, the vocals here are repeated TWICE, so using a the same or very similar pattern TWICE would make more sense. okie fixed
    Note: 00:31:937 (1,2,3) - this would apply here and to similar parts. So, basically each time a line is repeated, you could use a similar pattern or similar rhythm to be more consistent and to represent the song more accurately. okie cool
  2. 01:23:168 (2,3) - swapping these on the timeline (Ctrl+G) would match the vocals better. Here, it should feel more natural with the vocals. fixed!
  3. 02:24:552 (1) - I'd highly recommend avoiding overlaps of slider-head and slider-tail as those may confuse beginners. And since I couldn't really fix the heart-shaped slider to match this suggestion, I would probably recommend a plain arc-shaped thing. o hai did something similar

    Generally, I feel like you've sort of overused spinners as there are 8 spinners and a large number of breaks. Replacing some of the spinners with hitobject could spice things up a little. Additionally, some slidershapes could be neater/softer, for instance 01:53:168 (3) - here. It may seem a bit difficult to make this, but I feel like sogfter shapes would suit the song better. i changed some spinners and fixed the slider shape

I'll be finishing this later, don't kudosu
Topic Starter
Fragmented

Bakari wrote:

[Normal]

  • A bit more dense rhythm would be a good idea, 00:26:398 (3) - for instance this part is mapped in a less dense way than in Easy. This applies to a few more patterns, just play through both difficulties and you'll feel it. For insntance, 00:46:706 (1,2) - these feel really slow and Normal could use something more similar to the rhythm used in Advanced. fixed
  1. 01:20:860 (2) - just like in the Easy difficulty, softer curves could make things appear neater. Example fixed
  2. 02:24:552 (1) - try spreading tail/head apart a little. A bit of extra readability would make the slider look more natural since everything else in this difficulty is really easy to read. i did my best lul
  3. 02:27:322 (1,2) - these are practically inaudible. Consider using at least 30% volume to make the object give at least some audio feedback.
  4. There's also a bit of an inconsistency with mapping, 02:59:398 - vocals are ignored, yet 03:06:783 - here they are mapped. It would be better to stick to either mapping them in every similar case or ignoring that kind of vocals. fixed

    A bit of this and that with rhythm, apart from that it is pretty neat. :D
i'll finish later, don't kudosu since I already got one kd so sorry for giving you another kudo :<
josh1024
Uh hello don't mind me here.

Easy

Personally I care about shape a lot so if you don't then, meh.

00:20:860 (1,2,3) - the shape of slider 2 into 3 is kinda awkward maybe tweak them.
00:28:245 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make these entirely symmetrical say like ctrlG 3 and move 2.
00:33:783 (3) - fill in a circle after this slider since you did earlier.
00:35:629 (1,3) - same sound but different shape.
00:52:239 (3) - maybe use a shape not so soft on the voice "knock" since you used reverse sliders earlier.
01:03:316 (3,4) - maybe map slider 3 4 into one to represent extended sound.
01:58:700 (1) - not that corners are bad but here it visually divides 2 beats into three 2/3s so maybe change this.

It's getting late here (11:13 I'm a 10th grade student got class tommorrow)
so I suppose I'll post what I have done and come back later (or you can kick me out lol)
Topic Starter
Fragmented

josh1024 wrote:

Uh hello don't mind me here.

Easy

Personally I care about shape a lot so if you don't then, meh.

00:20:860 (1,2,3) - the shape of slider 2 into 3 is kinda awkward maybe tweak them. sure
00:28:245 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make these entirely symmetrical say like ctrlG 3 and move 2. okie but I didnt move 2 because idk where else to put it
00:33:783 (3) - fill in a circle after this slider since you did earlier. nah, since this is an easy diff, i purposely left that small break for beginners
00:35:629 (1,3) - same sound but different shape. uhmmm........?
00:52:239 (3) - maybe use a shape not so soft on the voice "knock" since you used reverse sliders earlier. i dont get what you mean
01:03:316 (3,4) - maybe map slider 3 4 into one to represent extended sound. ill leave that as it is, im following the rhythm
01:58:700 (1) - not that corners are bad but here it visually divides 2 beats into three 2/3s so maybe change this. fixed

It's getting late here (11:13 I'm a 10th grade student got class tommorrow)
so I suppose I'll post what I have done and come back later (or you can kick me out lol)
thanks for your mod puhuhuhu
Blukerbeh
Thanks for the great mod! Hopefully I may help you just as much!
(That being said i'm gonna be a little picky about overlapping LOL)

SPOILER
00:18:097 (5,6,7) - Snapping distance on triple may be just a little bit too high causing circle 7 to overlap with slider 4

00:36:443 (4) - overlap

00:39:328 (1) - you could move this up a little bit so that circle fits slider a little better

00:38:635 (5) - if you really wanted to, this could be a cool two sliders with a decent snapping distance

00:53:289 (6,7) - I put ctrl + g and rotated it a little bit so it wasn't overlapping horribly and I think it has a better flow

00:53:635 (8,1) - I'm nitpicking, but these sliders are too close, it can have the same distance as 00:54:097 (1,2) - without any trouble

sidenote: 00:54:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this part is amazing, i love these.

00:54:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this slider could use a tiny bit of help to fit better

01:14:404 (1) - awkward overlap; if you want to keep it a little closer to the center for flow then dont be afraid to make it a shell to 01:14:751 (2) -

01:17:058 (6,7,8) - just a tad too close

01:20:866 (7,8) - I think this would feel better as a double on slider 8 instead of having 7 as a reversal

01:55:712 (3) - head of slider 3 could be of on top of head of slider 1 (or is that a difficulty thing?)

01:52:020 (4,5) - ctrl + g and then stack onto slider 2,

02:01:251 (2) - this slider could be a shell but it isn't and it should be

02:04:020 (1) - ^

02:09:789 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - another great set of sliders, i adore these

02:13:251 (6,7,8) - this feels better as a triangle

02:32:635 (3) - same thing with the shell but also ctrl + g

the theme of my mod is to keep a consistency in slider spacing, and because you're using shells frequently, make sure they're all serving that purpose

thank you for making a TWICE map btw <3
Topic Starter
Fragmented

Blukerbeh wrote:

Thanks for the great mod! Hopefully I may help you just as much!
(That being said i'm gonna be a little picky about overlapping LOL)

SPOILER
00:18:097 (5,6,7) - Snapping distance on triple may be just a little bit too high causing circle 7 to overlap with slider 4

00:36:443 (4) - overlap

00:39:328 (1) - you could move this up a little bit so that circle fits slider a little better

00:38:635 (5) - if you really wanted to, this could be a cool two sliders with a decent snapping distance

00:53:289 (6,7) - I put ctrl + g and rotated it a little bit so it wasn't overlapping horribly and I think it has a better flow

00:53:635 (8,1) - I'm nitpicking, but these sliders are too close, it can have the same distance as 00:54:097 (1,2) - without any trouble

sidenote: 00:54:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this part is amazing, i love these.

00:54:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this slider could use a tiny bit of help to fit better

01:14:404 (1) - awkward overlap; if you want to keep it a little closer to the center for flow then dont be afraid to make it a shell to 01:14:751 (2) -

01:17:058 (6,7,8) - just a tad too close

01:20:866 (7,8) - I think this would feel better as a double on slider 8 instead of having 7 as a reversal

01:55:712 (3) - head of slider 3 could be of on top of head of slider 1 (or is that a difficulty thing?)

01:52:020 (4,5) - ctrl + g and then stack onto slider 2,

02:01:251 (2) - this slider could be a shell but it isn't and it should be

02:04:020 (1) - ^

02:09:789 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - another great set of sliders, i adore these

02:13:251 (6,7,8) - this feels better as a triangle

02:32:635 (3) - same thing with the shell but also ctrl + g

the theme of my mod is to keep a consistency in slider spacing, and because you're using shells frequently, make sure they're all serving that purpose

thank you for making a TWICE map btw <3

oh no you didnt indicate which diff you're modding D:
Blukerbeh

CharmCaster wrote:

Blukerbeh wrote:

Thanks for the great mod! Hopefully I may help you just as much!
(That being said i'm gonna be a little picky about overlapping LOL)

SPOILER
00:18:097 (5,6,7) - Snapping distance on triple may be just a little bit too high causing circle 7 to overlap with slider 4

00:36:443 (4) - overlap

00:39:328 (1) - you could move this up a little bit so that circle fits slider a little better

00:38:635 (5) - if you really wanted to, this could be a cool two sliders with a decent snapping distance

00:53:289 (6,7) - I put ctrl + g and rotated it a little bit so it wasn't overlapping horribly and I think it has a better flow

00:53:635 (8,1) - I'm nitpicking, but these sliders are too close, it can have the same distance as 00:54:097 (1,2) - without any trouble

sidenote: 00:54:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this part is amazing, i love these.

00:54:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this slider could use a tiny bit of help to fit better

01:14:404 (1) - awkward overlap; if you want to keep it a little closer to the center for flow then dont be afraid to make it a shell to 01:14:751 (2) -

01:17:058 (6,7,8) - just a tad too close

01:20:866 (7,8) - I think this would feel better as a double on slider 8 instead of having 7 as a reversal

01:55:712 (3) - head of slider 3 could be of on top of head of slider 1 (or is that a difficulty thing?)

01:52:020 (4,5) - ctrl + g and then stack onto slider 2,

02:01:251 (2) - this slider could be a shell but it isn't and it should be

02:04:020 (1) - ^

02:09:789 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - another great set of sliders, i adore these

02:13:251 (6,7,8) - this feels better as a triangle

02:32:635 (3) - same thing with the shell but also ctrl + g

the theme of my mod is to keep a consistency in slider spacing, and because you're using shells frequently, make sure they're all serving that purpose

thank you for making a TWICE map btw <3

oh no you didnt indicate which diff you're modding D:
HECK i meant error's
-Keitaro

Blukerbeh wrote:

Thanks for the great mod! Hopefully I may help you just as much!
(That being said i'm gonna be a little picky about overlapping LOL) :thonk:

SPOILER
00:18:097 (5,6,7) - Snapping distance on triple may be just a little bit too high causing circle 7 to overlap with slider 4 distance is totally fine, I'll move the circles so it doesn't overlap the slider

00:36:443 (4) - overlap intended

00:39:328 (1) - you could move this up a little bit so that circle fits slider a little better blanket is always my probs xD thanks for pointing it,
fixed.


00:38:635 (5) - if you really wanted to, this could be a cool two sliders with a decent snapping distance uhm, I don't get it :/

00:53:289 (6,7) - I put ctrl + g and rotated it a little bit so it wasn't overlapping horribly and I think it has a better flow its stacked instead of overlapping the other slider, also players might only touch the head so I think its pretty fine.

00:53:635 (8,1) - I'm nitpicking, but these sliders are too close, it can have the same distance as 00:54:097 (1,2) - without any trouble but its the sameee, 1,1x to be precise.

sidenote: 00:54:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this part is amazing, i love these. thanks~

00:54:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this slider could use a tiny bit of help to fit better

> 00:54:097 (1,2,3) - antiflow, 00:55:020 (1,2,3) - changes to normal flow, 00:55:943 (1) - anti flow and back to flow again from 00:56:289 (2,3) -

01:14:404 (1) - awkward overlap; if you want to keep it a little closer to the center for flow then dont be afraid to make it a shell to 01:14:751 (2) -

01:17:058 (6,7,8) - just a tad too close 01:17:520 (1) - Nc'ed so player now that this is something new.

01:20:866 (7,8) - I think this would feel better as a double on slider 8 instead of having 7 as a reversal vocal or probaly give example pls

01:55:712 (3) - head of slider 3 could be of on top of head of slider 1 (or is that a difficulty thing?) no thanks

01:52:020 (4,5) - ctrl + g and then stack onto slider 2, same as above

02:01:251 (2) - this slider could be a shell but it isn't and it should be I tried my best ;w;

02:04:020 (1) - ^ I feel like doing something else

02:09:789 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - another great set of sliders, i adore these

02:13:251 (6,7,8) - this feels better as a triangle too monstrata for me xd

02:32:635 (3) - same thing with the shell but also ctrl + g break flow

the theme of my mod is to keep a consistency in slider spacing, and because you're using shells frequently, make sure they're all serving that purpose

thank you for making a TWICE map btw <3
thanks for the mod.
uwu
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Title:KNOCK KNOCK
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Tags:worstpolackeu error- alfarai arnoldusj jyp entertainment kpop k-pop twicecoaster lane 2 nayeon chaeyoung tzuyu momo sana mina jihyo jisoo dahyun jeongyeon 나연 ì •ì—° 모모 사나 지효 미나 다현 ì±„ì˜ ì¯”ìœ„
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Shanipika
Hi from mod queue owo

Oh gosh kpop I'll mod your diff only k? I don't wanna go through 6 diff of this sowwy Q-Q (Not that k-pop is any bad but if I listen to this to much it get stuck in my head x) )

[Hard]

  1. 00:21:091 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This triple is really unfitting for a hard diff. Its the only spaced triple like that in the entire map too and also is inconsistant with the next one. Also you could prolly change 4 into a 1/2 slider to avoid making this one random double clicked when you dont do it anywhere else in the map really.
  2. 00:23:168 (3) - I think you could turn this into a 1/2 slider and have something similar to what you'll change this to 00:21:322 (4,5,6,7) -
  3. 01:20:860 (3) - If this was meant to blanket its off
  4. 01:30:783 (2,3) - tbh I dont like pointing out blankets cuz they dont affect gameplay at all but emm some people care and this one is off (You should prolly just have a polishing look at those once most major playability fixes are done tbh)
  5. 02:24:552 (1) - Nice try lel
  6. One little general comment : I feel you varied a lot between very curved and sligthly curved slider without any specific reason in the map. It kinda gives a weird visual look and I'm not sure if its just you dont care about aesthetic or you just didnt think about what it would do to have that wide variety of slider that aren't really meant to be more or less curved to represent anything specific.
[Normal]

  1. 01:23:629 (4,5,6) - Here, I'd recommand putting 6 a little bit off of making a perfect triangle like you did with this 01:21:783 (1,2,3) - since it can be a bit confusing in a normal.
  2. 03:05:629 (2,3,4,5) - this rhythm is inconsistant with 02:58:245 (1,2,3,4) - prolly should adapt one to be more similar to the other.
  3. Could prolly say the same as hard diff about the slider aesthetics and the blanket stuff didn't really look at the blankets tho.
[Easy]

  1. 01:36:552 (1,2,3) - You could prolly try to rearrange this a little to keep same visual spacing between 1-2 and 2-3.
  2. Again just give a look back at your blanket and slider curvature prolly here.
Also one thing I noticed, you tend to make your wavy slider very very curved to a point they sometime look a bit broken, maybe thats just me not liking how they end up looking tho.

I did give a quick look at gd but overall they looked about okish. Fun set owo. Good luck!
Luel Roseline
드디어...올 것이 왔군...
NM from #modreqs

[General]
1 - http://puu.sh/y3qjW/b1532ce54c.png https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9362876


[Easy]
00:43:014 - I think finish is better than whistle...
more
00:57:783 - 01:43:937 - 01:58:706 - 02:57:783
02:45:783 (4,1) - Ugly blanket.
Fixed code
208,300,166706,6,0,P|140:224|208:128,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,124,168091,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,52,168552,2,0,P|280:32|336:56,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,128,169475,2,0,P|348:188|292:216,1,110
220,200,170398,6,0,P|200:228|208:300,2,110,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,136,171783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,72,172245,2,0,B|172:112|116:76|116:76|60:40|4:80,1,220,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,148,173629,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,224,174091,6,0,P|192:248|232:240,1,110
284,192,175014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,248,175475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,232,175937,2,0,P|460:160|376:52,1,220
304,100,177322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,60,177783,5,0,0:0:0:0:


[Normal]
00:17:168 (1,2,1,2) - Add whistle hitsounds (Slidertails).

Well I can't found anymore.
I'm pretty shame. Anyway, GL.

edit1. Oh wait...Why Error's diff is more higher than WORSTPOLACKEU's diff?
Topic Starter
Fragmented

Shanipika wrote:

Hi from mod queue owo

Oh gosh kpop I'll mod your diff only k? I don't wanna go through 6 diff of this sowwy Q-Q (Not that k-pop is any bad but if I listen to this to much it get stuck in my head x) )

[Hard]

  1. 00:21:091 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This triple is really unfitting for a hard diff. Its the only spaced triple like that in the entire map too and also is inconsistant with the next one. Also you could prolly change 4 into a 1/2 slider to avoid making this one random double clicked when you dont do it anywhere else in the map really. but if i do change 4 into a 1/2 slider, it would be too difficult for a hard diff so I'll leave it for now
  2. 00:23:168 (3) - I think you could turn this into a 1/2 slider and have something similar to what you'll change this to 00:21:322 (4,5,6,7) - nah, im following the vocals here
  3. 01:20:860 (3) - If this was meant to blanket its off yep it was, fixed
  4. 01:30:783 (2,3) - tbh I dont like pointing out blankets cuz they dont affect gameplay at all but emm some people care and this one is off (You should prolly just have a polishing look at those once most major playability fixes are done tbh) aites fixed, ill keep that in mind once all playability is okay-ish
  5. 02:24:552 (1) - Nice try lel thanks? xD
  6. One little general comment : I feel you varied a lot between very curved and sligthly curved slider without any specific reason in the map. It kinda gives a weird visual look and I'm not sure if its just you dont care about aesthetic or you just didnt think about what it would do to have that wide variety of slider that aren't really meant to be more or less curved to represent anything specific. will see about it if anyone else complains about my slider shapes >.<
[Normal]

  1. 01:23:629 (4,5,6) - Here, I'd recommand putting 6 a little bit off of making a perfect triangle like you did with this 01:21:783 (1,2,3) - since it can be a bit confusing in a normal. fixed
  2. 03:05:629 (2,3,4,5) - this rhythm is inconsistant with 02:58:245 (1,2,3,4) - prolly should adapt one to be more similar to the other. hmmm idk, it was actually originally like that before but someone told me to change it, if anyone else points this out again i guess ill change it again :/
  3. Could prolly say the same as hard diff about the slider aesthetics and the blanket stuff didn't really look at the blankets tho. tbh i like my sliders being that way tho, will look out for more blankets stuff
[Easy]

  1. 01:36:552 (1,2,3) - You could prolly try to rearrange this a little to keep same visual spacing between 1-2 and 2-3.fixed
  2. Again just give a look back at your blanket and slider curvature prolly here. already mentioned above
Also one thing I noticed, you tend to make your wavy slider very very curved to a point they sometime look a bit broken, maybe thats just me not liking how they end up looking tho. its just you, some modders told me to shape them that way

I did give a quick look at gd but overall they looked about okish. Fun set owo. Good luck! arigato gozaimasu

Luel Roseline wrote:

드디어...올 것이 왔군...
NM from #modreqs

[General]
1 - http://puu.sh/y3qjW/b1532ce54c.png https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9362876 all fixed except the uninherited timing points,
idk how to fix it



[Easy]
00:43:014 - I think finish is better than whistle... all fixed
more
00:57:783 - 01:43:937 - 01:58:706 - 02:57:783
02:45:783 (4,1) - Ugly blanket. it seems fine to me hmmm
Fixed code
208,300,166706,6,0,P|140:224|208:128,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,124,168091,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,52,168552,2,0,P|280:32|336:56,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,128,169475,2,0,P|348:188|292:216,1,110
220,200,170398,6,0,P|200:228|208:300,2,110,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,136,171783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,72,172245,2,0,B|172:112|116:76|116:76|60:40|4:80,1,220,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,148,173629,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,224,174091,6,0,P|192:248|232:240,1,110
284,192,175014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,248,175475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,232,175937,2,0,P|460:160|376:52,1,220
304,100,177322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,60,177783,5,0,0:0:0:0:


[Normal]
00:17:168 (1,2,1,2) - Add whistle hitsounds (Slidertails). all fixed

Well I can't found anymore. its okay :)
I'm pretty shame. Anyway, GL.

edit1. Oh wait...Why Error's diff is more higher than WORSTPOLACKEU's diff? he hasnt finish his diff yet
i might remap some parts of easy and normal so stay tune :)
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