Hi LunaticMara
[Deedophobic]The only thing that I found strange from this diff is how you only give the whistle on the slider slide. For example:
00:17:633 (5) -
00:19:233 (1) -
I found it better if you at least give the start/end a whistle too just like what you did on:
00:37:233 (3) -
00:59:233 (2) - this one is very suitable with the music
And it's probably me being picky but I suggest you to make the whistle hitsound to be consistent. This rhythm you used might be a bit different, but the part after break is basically a loop so imo it'll be more interesting if you give the at least the same hitsound
[Normalphobic]I'm actually fine with this using majority of 1/1 beat, mostly because I find the hitsound is pretty interesting. How you mix using normal - soft sound is very nice~
My suggestions for this diff are:
- Try using a normal - hitwhistle. From Deedophobic I found that it sounds great for this music, but using too many hitsound might make it bad so you may want to be careful
- Make the sliders more neat. For example on 00:25:233 (4), you can try and make it so the curve match with 00:23:633 (2)'s outline
01:34:433 (1) - The other 2 diffs use finish so maybe give this one too
[Crazyphobic]00:16:033 (1,2) - could you make these so it have a better curve? maybe something like
this (yeah I'm not very good at this either)
00:22:733 (x) - maybe add a note here. Because of the music I always thought 00:22:633 (2,3) is a 1/4 jump
00:31:233 (6) - imo it's better to either to stack this under 5 or unstack the previous circles. The current pattern doesn't look very neat
00:36:033 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:16:033 (1,2) something like
this?00:39:633 (1) - add whistle at the start
01:19:633 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest to use 1.2x DS just like the previous 1/3 beat similar to this
I highly suggest to make the sliders more prettier
The other 3 diffs are great but unfortunately Crazyphobic diff are very messy. If you can make the pattern more prettier, please do so
Good Luck with your map amd ~star