community forum

Suzuyu - Euphorium

posted
Total Posts
45
show more
Reillia
어이 노래가 너무 좋은데 와타시가 pp엑스트라를 만들어도 되겠는가
Topic Starter
Leaf

[C u r i] wrote:

어이 노래가 너무 좋은데 와타시가 pp엑스트라를 만들어도 되겠는가
자리 꽉찾읍니다ㅜ
C O I N
하드 겟난 받는다 해서 리프님 보면 물어볼려햇는대 리프님 언제 오스들어오심?
Left
아마 손닉님으로 채워진걸로 알아요
_todestrieb
아스트랄

00:20:346 - 최고 난이도인만큼 악기 표현은 아낌없이 넣어주는 게 좋다고 생각해요 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7744758 이렇게 어떠심?
여기 잔잔한 부분은 아예 조용한 부분이랑 타악기 점점 들어가는 부분이 난이도 차이가 거의 없어서 곡 표현력이 좀 딸려보이네요
00:44:217 (1) - NC
01:14:540 (1) - 이 세월호 리본 슬라를 01:15:669 - 에서 끝내고 5단 꽃잎 슬라 부분을 01:15:991 - 에 피아노부터 시작하는 게 어떤가요? 좋은 기믹이긴 한데 키아이 도입부까지 넣는 건 좀 억지스럽네요 (01:18:572 - 에는 패턴에 알맞는 다른 슬라가 들어가야겠죠?)
01:24:378 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/1마다 보컬이 있는 부분인데 거의 뒷부분에 1/1마다 드럼 스네어 들어가는 부분이랑 비슷한 점프 패턴이 들어가네요.. 너무 억지스럽다고 생각합니다
01:32:765 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 제가 플레이어빌리티 관련해서 리프님만큼 많이 알지는 않겠지만.. 현재 패턴이 플로우가 이상하게 꺾이는 감이 있어요. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7744836 이런 식으로는 어떠신가요
01:52:765 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 2줄 위랑 마찬가지
Topic Starter
Leaf

bbj0920 wrote:

아스트랄

00:20:346 - 최고 난이도인만큼 악기 표현은 아낌없이 넣어주는 게 좋다고 생각해요 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7744758 이렇게 어떠심?
여기 잔잔한 부분은 아예 조용한 부분이랑 타악기 점점 들어가는 부분이 난이도 차이가 거의 없어서 곡 표현력이 좀 딸려보이네요 스핀으로변경햇읍니다
00:44:217 (1) - NC 수정
01:14:540 (1) - 이 세월호 리본 슬라를 01:15:669 - 에서 끝내고 5단 꽃잎 슬라 부분을 01:15:991 - 에 피아노부터 시작하는 게 어떤가요? 좋은 기믹이긴 한데 키아이 도입부까지 넣는 건 좀 억지스럽네요 (01:18:572 - 에는 패턴에 알맞는 다른 슬라가 들어가야겠죠?) 01:15:991 - 보컬과 음이 여기서 딱끊기는게 들려서 ㄱㅊ을듯 꽃잎슬라이더는 보컬에 맞춰서 한거라 그냥 둘게용
01:24:378 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/1마다 보컬이 있는 부분인데 거의 뒷부분에 1/1마다 드럼 스네어 들어가는 부분이랑 비슷한 점프 패턴이 들어가네요.. 너무 억지스럽다고 생각합니다 강조되는 부분이기도 하고 어색하지도 않아서 괜찮을거같습니다 패턴 수정후 01:25:023 (1) - 부터 강조해보았읍니다
01:32:765 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 제가 플레이어빌리티 관련해서 리프님만큼 많이 알지는 않겠지만.. 현재 패턴이 플로우가 이상하게 꺾이는 감이 있어요. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7744836 이런 식으로는 어떠신가요 수정
01:52:765 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 2줄 위랑 마찬가지 패턴생각후 노래랑 맞게 바꾸겠습니다
모딩 감사합니다
Left

bbj0920 wrote:

아스트랄

01:24:378 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/1마다 보컬이 있는 부분인데 거의 뒷부분에 1/1마다 드럼 스네어 들어가는 부분이랑 비슷한 점프 패턴이 들어가네요.. 너무 억지스럽다고 생각합니다
솔직히 이거는 저도 bbj님에 동의하는 부분입니다. 동선이랑 맞물려서 오히려 뒤쪽이 더 쉬운데, 분명히 노래상으로는 뒤가 강조가 더 필요한 부분이거든요. 점프를 둘다 넣을 수는 있겠지만 상대적인 강도를 고려했으면 좋겠어요
Topic Starter
Leaf

Left wrote:

bbj0920 wrote:

아스트랄

01:24:378 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/1마다 보컬이 있는 부분인데 거의 뒷부분에 1/1마다 드럼 스네어 들어가는 부분이랑 비슷한 점프 패턴이 들어가네요.. 너무 억지스럽다고 생각합니다
솔직히 이거는 저도 bbj님에 동의하는 부분입니다. 동선이랑 맞물려서 오히려 뒤쪽이 더 쉬운데, 분명히 노래상으로는 뒤가 강조가 더 필요한 부분이거든요. 점프를 둘다 넣을 수는 있겠지만 상대적인 강도를 고려했으면 좋겠어요
패턴 수정후 01:25:023 (1) - 부터 강조해보았읍니다
Beomsan
17:00 Leaf: 림아
17:00 Leaf: 림아ㅏ
17:00 Leaf: ㄴ[
17:00 Beomsan: 내
17:00 Leaf: 푸딩을찾고있읍니다
17:01 Beomsan: 제가먹음
17:01 Leaf: ㅜ
17:01 Beomsan: ...
17:01 Leaf: 숨은속뜻 : 모딍 급구
17:01 Beomsan: 모딩이 왜 푸딩이됨
17:01 Beomsan: ??
17:01 Beomsan: 진인가?
17:02 Leaf: 아
17:02 Leaf: 그것애이유는없구요
17:02 Leaf: ㅋㅋ
17:02 Beomsan: 저매핑까먹음
17:02 Beomsan: ㅎ
17:02 Leaf: 악
17:02 Leaf: 앜
17:02 Leaf: 악
17:03 Beomsan: 일단
17:03 Beomsan: 푸딩어떤거요
17:03 Beomsan: 지금 보고 쓸게 있으면 해주고
17:03 Beomsan: 없으면당장말함
17:03 Leaf: ㅞ
17:03 *Leaf is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1222081 Suzuyu - Euphorium]
17:04 Leaf: mappu child 입니다 저가요
17:04 Leaf: ㅋㅋ
17:06 Beomsan: 음
17:06 Beomsan: 일단님
17:06 Beomsan: 좀
17:06 Beomsan: 전체적인 첫감상은
17:06 Beomsan: 아 PP주려고 작정을했구나 이거구요
17:07 Leaf: !
17:07 Beomsan: 자잘하게 모딩할거리라면 잘 모르겠고
17:07 Beomsan: 그 패턴자체가 좀 후져보이는건 있음
17:07 Beomsan: 들어볼거임?
17:07 Leaf: 딲말하렴
17:07 Beomsan: 00:02:443 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
17:07 Leaf: 일단 저기
17:07 Leaf: 망한거 ㅇㅈ인띠
17:07 Beomsan: 이건 재가 좀망했다고했지만
17:07 Beomsan: 씹망인거같음
17:07 Beomsan: 어차피
17:08 Beomsan: 리맵할거같아서
17:08 Beomsan: 말해봄
17:08 Beomsan: 절대남기지말라고
17:08 Beomsan: ^^....
17:08 Leaf: 저기걍
17:08 Leaf: 스핀박을까
17:08 Leaf: 생각중
17:08 Beomsan: 스핀?
17:08 Beomsan: 스핀은 아닌거같은데
17:08 Leaf: 00:05:507 (4) - 여기까지
17:08 Beomsan: 그럴바에 걍 비우는게
17:08 Beomsan: 음
17:08 Beomsan: 스핀이냐 비우냐 채우냐 이런문제면
17:08 Beomsan: 일단 채우는게 최선인거같긴함
17:08 Beomsan: 근데 저 몹쓸패턴이 문제임
17:08 Leaf: 그럼저가 연구하갯음
17:09 Beomsan: 00:24:378 (1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) -
17:09 Beomsan: 여기말인데
17:09 Beomsan: 00:29:378 (3,1) -
17:09 Beomsan: 이거에대해서
17:09 Beomsan: 00:24:378 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - 앞의것들은
17:09 Beomsan: "완전히" 보컬만 따라갔다
17:09 Beomsan: 00:29:378 (3,1) - 근데 여기서
17:09 Beomsan: 그게깨짐
17:09 Beomsan: 00:29:378 (3) - 리버스 슬라이더로 보컬 표현은
17:09 Beomsan: 여기서부터여야했고
17:09 Beomsan: 00:29:540 (1) - 이건 굉장히 리겜스러운 리듬 접근
17:10 Beomsan: 근데 이게 나쁜건 절대아닌데
17:10 Beomsan: 전이랑 매칭이안됨
17:10 Beomsan: 00:31:314 (2) - 마찬가지
17:10 Beomsan: 리듬이 요상하게 더 꽉차있음
17:10 Beomsan: 변화를 줄거면 00:34:701 - 여기부터가 적절함
17:10 Beomsan: 파트를 이상한 시점으로 나눈 느낌
17:11 Leaf: 00:31:314 (2) -
17:11 Beomsan: 아니면 앞부분도 뒤랑 비슷하게 만들던지
17:11 Leaf: 여기 노트 하나만두기 ?
17:11 Beomsan: ㅇㅇ
17:11 Beomsan: 그런이야기임
17:11 Beomsan: 이해되죠??
17:11 Leaf: ㄹㅇ
17:11 Beomsan: 바로두ㅣ에도 찬 리듬 있음
17:11 Beomsan: 근데 그건 또 애매하당
17:11 Beomsan: 몰겠음 알아서하도록
17:11 Leaf: 00:33:088 (3) -
17:11 Leaf: 여긴임?
17:11 Beomsan: 200:33:088 (3,4) -
17:11 Beomsan: 00:33:088 (3,4) -
17:12 Beomsan: 00:33:088 -
17:12 Beomsan: 00:33:411 -
17:12 Beomsan: 이렇게 두 지점에 서클 하나씩 박아두면
17:12 Beomsan: 더괜찮을듯
17:12 Leaf: 아씨괄
17:12 Beomsan: 슬라이더랑은 다른느낌임 확실히
17:12 Leaf: 느린부분 존나어렴냉ㅋㅋ
17:12 Beomsan: 애초에 보컬이
17:12 Beomsan: 이렇게
17:12 Beomsan: 끊기는부분이많으면
17:12 Beomsan: 보컬위주로잡는건 나중가서 실수로 ㅈ느껴질 수가 있어서
17:12 Beomsan: 설계가중요함
17:13 Leaf: 너..
17:13 Leaf: 공감하였읍니다.
17:13 Beomsan: 내...
17:13 Leaf: 보컬중간에 드럼이껴잇읍니다
17:13 Beomsan: 00:50:185 (1) - 이거는 뭐 블랭킷을 하려고 한건지 만건지 모르곘오요
17:13 Beomsan: 보컬중간에 드럼이 껴있는걸 리듬으로 활용할 수도 있는데
17:13 Beomsan: 그런 모습이 안보였음
17:14 Beomsan: 보컬 위주로 하려고 했으나 나중가서 뭔가 잘못된걸 꺠닫고
17:14 Beomsan: 뭐 그런느낌?
17:14 Leaf: 00:33:411 (4) - 여기 노트 1개는 ㄹㅇ이내용
17:14 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
17:14 Beomsan: ㄹㅇ임
17:15 Beomsan: 01:00:507 (1,2,3,4) - 01:01:798 - 01:02:120 (2,3) -
17:15 Beomsan: ...
17:15 Beomsan: 이거 완전 힛사 이카사마 아니냐
17:15 Leaf: ㅜ
17:16 Beomsan: 그렇게 좃같진않은데 왜냐면
17:16 Beomsan: 01:02:604 (4,5,6) - 이렇게 앞에 나와야할걸 뒤로 뺸거같아서
17:16 Beomsan: 근데 좀 어색한데??
17:16 Beomsan: 01:01:636 (1) - 이게
17:16 Beomsan: 01:13:411 (1,2,3) - 이거는 뭐
17:16 Beomsan: PP맵치고는 존나 사린거같은데
17:16 Beomsan: 점프 막박을만한 음이 아닌지
17:17 Beomsan: 슬라이더 자체가 어울리지 않다고도 생각되긴 하고
17:17 Beomsan: 01:14:217 (4) - 01:13:572 (2) - 애매한 디스턴스 시각적으로 극혐
17:17 Beomsan: 01:14:540 (1) - 대칭씹망
17:18 Leaf: 악
17:18 Leaf: 손닉's 의 대칭슬라이더 ...
17:18 Leaf: 강의 듣고오갯읍니다
17:18 Beomsan: 그...런걸 봐도 여기선
17:18 Beomsan: 소용없을걸..?
17:19 Beomsan: 근데 너무 딱봐도 좆같네
17:19 Beomsan: 이런 슬라이더 찍는 점의 방식도 아님
17:19 Beomsan: 그렇다고 고쳐줄 능력도 없다
17:19 Beomsan: 패스
17:19 Beomsan: 01:18:572 (1) - 이거 변속말인데
17:19 Leaf: 바로수정하갯읍니다
17:19 Beomsan: 01:18:249 (1) - 이게 조금 느리면 좋겠는데 솔직히 어쩔수없다치고
17:19 Beomsan: 01:18:572 (1) - 이게 좀 빠를순없나?
17:19 Beomsan: 똑같이 안될거같긴한데
17:20 Leaf: 그것은..
17:20 Beomsan: 1/2박으로 하는건 어떰?
17:20 Beomsan: 어차피01:19:217 (3) - 뒤부터는
17:20 Beomsan: 다 1/2라서
17:20 Leaf: 슬라길이 같게한거라 불가능이다..
17:20 Beomsan: 01:18:249 (1) - 이거보다 더 빠르면됨
17:20 Beomsan: ㅎ..
17:20 Beomsan: 잘몰겠음
17:20 Beomsan: 모양은좋은데
17:20 Beomsan: 변속이 존나게 안타깝네
17:20 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
17:21 Beomsan: 01:18:249 (1) - 이게 빨라야만 한다는게
17:21 Leaf: 나도느꼇는데 어쩔수없는 부분이다
17:21 Beomsan: 01:18:572 (1) - 이게 느려야만 한다는게
17:21 Beomsan: ㅈㄴ슬프네
17:21 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
17:21 Leaf: 01:18:572 (1) - 여길 빠르게할렴녀
17:21 Leaf: 걍 꽃잎모양 갈아엎어야한다
17:21 Leaf: 앙기뮤띢
17:22 Beomsan: 발상자체는 좋았는데 곡이랑 별로 안맞았다
17:22 Beomsan: 01:41:798 (1,2,3) - 이건뭐임?
17:22 Leaf: 하나 = 꽃 ㄹㅇ
17:22 Beomsan: 개때리고싶네
17:22 Beomsan: 쳐맞으,실?
17:22 Leaf: 않이
17:22 Leaf: ㄴㅋ
17:22 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
17:23 Leaf: 제발바주샌
17:23 Beomsan: 02:01:475 (2) - 이거는
17:23 Beomsan: 슬라꼬리 스택인거같은데
17:23 Beomsan: 02:01:152 (1) - 이거랑 각도가 너무안좋음
17:24 Beomsan: 왼쪽으로 빼야할거같은데
17:24 Beomsan: 02:04:056 (3,4) -
17:24 Beomsan: 02:04:378 (5,6) -
17:24 Beomsan: RG?
17:24 Beomsan: 딱봐도존나헷갈리네
17:24 Leaf: ㅐ내는모른다 ..
17:24 Leaf: 내는몰느다..
17:24 Beomsan: 플레이어강간하고싶으면
17:25 Beomsan: 냅둬도됨
17:25 Beomsan: 저건
17:25 Beomsan: 음
17:25 Beomsan: 그렇게헷갈리지도않나??
17:25 Beomsan: 버리고
17:25 Leaf: 저가 킥슬라 존나혐오해서
17:25 Beomsan: 좋다가 01:40:023 (4,5) - 여기서
17:25 Leaf: 바꿀까생각중입니다
17:25 Beomsan: 모양개빡치네
17:26 Beomsan: 그냥노트3개로
17:26 Beomsan: 점프를만드셈
17:26 Beomsan: 이거쓸바에
17:27 Beomsan: 힛사는 좀 늘은거같은데
17:28 Beomsan: 01:26:314 (1,2) - 빠졌구요
17:28 Leaf: 01:00:507 (1,2) - 여기도빠졋냉
17:28 Leaf: ㄹㅇ
17:28 Beomsan: 01:29:217 - 여기서부터 좀
17:28 Beomsan: 힛사 전환이 요상함
17:28 Beomsan: 아까 노트 보면서도 느낀건데
17:29 Beomsan: 전환 자체는 상관없는데 요상함
17:29 Beomsan: 뭔말인지아려나
17:29 Beomsan: 01:30:669 -
17:29 Beomsan: 이런거
17:29 Beomsan: 01:32:120 (3,4,5) - 이거랑 상반되고
17:29 Beomsan: 01:33:411 (7,8) - 여기엔 후ㅣ슬이 없는데 이유를 모르겠고
17:30 Beomsan: 의도를 말안하면 모를 그런
17:30 Beomsan: 02:00:669 (4) - 애디션 드럼...
17:30 Beomsan: 글쎄 같은 생각을 하게되는
17:31 Leaf: 01:33:411 (7,8) -
17:31 Leaf: 여기 휘슬이니?
17:31 Beomsan: 흰틱에
17:31 Beomsan: 휘슬없어서
17:31 Beomsan: 좀 비어있는듯한 느낌을 받았음
17:31 Beomsan: 그리고 앞에 잘게 두 파트가 힛사 논리가 다름
17:31 Beomsan: 여러모로 의아한 부분이었음
17:31 Beomsan: 01:38:733 (5,6,7) - 빠졌고
17:32 Beomsan: 01:52:120 (1) - 빠짐
17:32 Leaf: 저기는
17:32 Leaf: 무엇을넣어야하니
17:32 Beomsan: 01:51:314 (2,3,4) - 이건 좋은데 01:51:959 (7,8) - 여기서 반복은좀
17:32 Beomsan: W F
17:32 Beomsan: 01:52:120 (1) -
17:32 Beomsan: 그러고보니 피니시에는 다른 힛사를 안섞는건가?
17:32 Beomsan: 그렇게 보이는데
17:33 Leaf: 와타시..
17:33 Leaf: 악기소리나는곳만 박는다데스
17:33 Beomsan: 음...
17:34 Beomsan: 그러니까
17:34 Beomsan: 피니쉬랑 휘슬 클랩을
17:34 Beomsan: 같이쓰질않냐
17:34 Beomsan: 이거임
17:34 Beomsan: 02:04:701 (7) - 테일 클랩제거해서 들어보셈 이게 나은거같은데
17:34 Leaf: 01:52:120 (1) - 여기에 클랩소리가 없는게아님?
17:34 Beomsan: WF라구요
17:34 Beomsan: 휘슬 피니쉬
17:35 Beomsan: 01:55:830 - 01:56:152 - 01:56:475 - 여기 힛사 존나 쌔게박아놓고
17:35 Beomsan: 01:57:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - 뒤로가니까 더밋밋해짐
17:36 Beomsan: 01:56:798 (1,2,3,4) - 여기가 가장 귀에 잘들림
17:36 Beomsan: 밋밋한게
17:36 Beomsan: 뒤는모르겠고
17:36 Beomsan: 앞이 너무 쎄다는 감상이 있는데 그건 둘째치고
17:36 Beomsan: 56789저기도 피니쉬좀
17:36 Beomsan: 798이네
17:37 Beomsan: 00:07:927 (2) - 탁탁00:07:927 (2) - 챙챙챙챙 뭐임
17:37 Leaf: 아니개어렵내
17:37 Beomsan: 아니
17:37 Beomsan: 00:08:249 (3,4,5,6) -
17:37 Beomsan: 챙챙챙챙
17:37 Beomsan: 소프트휘슬이라도 써야겠다 이건
17:37 Beomsan: 겨울에 쪼그라든 부랄마냥
17:37 Beomsan: 힘이없어보이네
17:38 Beomsan: 00:59:701 -
17:38 Beomsan: 휘슬빠짐
17:38 Beomsan: 01:00:507 (1,2) - 여기에 뭐가 들리는거같은걸?
17:39 Beomsan: 01:14:217 (4) - ^
17:39 Leaf: 님아
17:39 Leaf: 01:00:507 (1,2) -
17:39 Leaf: 1클랩 2 휘슬임 ?
17:40 Beomsan: 정답
17:40 Leaf: 아니 그럼맞잖아
17:40 Beomsan: ?
17:40 Leaf: 아
17:40 Leaf: 아까 빠진거 내가넣엇구나
17:40 Beomsan: ㅅㅂ;;
17:40 Leaf: ㅋㅋ
17:40 Beomsan: 그럼됐구요
17:41 Beomsan: 00:13:733 (6) - 여기진짜
17:41 Beomsan: 휘슬할거임?
17:41 Leaf: 넁
17:41 Beomsan: 뒤진다..
17:42 Leaf: ㅜ
17:42 Beomsan: 00:10:669 (3) - 여기는...
17:42 Beomsan: 암것도안넣을고야??
17:42 Leaf: 넁
17:42 Beomsan: 뒤진다..?
17:42 Beomsan: 00:13:733 (6) - 당장 클랩으로 바꿔주새요.
17:42 Leaf: 무엇을넣어야하나요 센세
17:43 Beomsan: 10669는
17:43 Beomsan: 휘슬이요
17:43 Beomsan: 00:14:056 (1) - 여기서부터 절 따라하세요
17:43 Beomsan: 00:14:056 (1) - 크랩00:14:540 (2) - 크랩지우고
17:43 Beomsan: 이 크랩아!
17:43 Leaf: 않이
17:44 Leaf: 그건않이애요
17:44 Beomsan: 조오까튼
17:44 Leaf: ㅋㅋ
17:44 Beomsan: SC77에
17:44 Beomsan: 히트노말이라도있어오??
17:44 Beomsan: 소리가왜저렇게둔탁해
17:44 Beomsan: 맘에안드네
17:44 Beomsan: 챡 챡거리는
17:44 Beomsan: 모래같은소리를
17:44 Beomsan: 00:14:540 (2) - 여따넣고 아까 말한대로하면
17:44 Beomsan: 완벽한데
17:45 Beomsan: 그냥 냅둬도 상관없겟다
17:45 Beomsan: (2)말임
17:45 Beomsan: 저기 힛사 조까틈
17:46 Beomsan: 현재로선
17:46 Leaf: 아
17:46 Leaf: 저기는 저가 크랩임
17:46 Leaf: ㅋㅋ
17:46 Beomsan: 님
17:46 Beomsan: 진짜
17:46 Beomsan: 잘
17:46 Beomsan: 생각해보시구요
17:46 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
17:46 Beomsan: SC76에 피니쉬밖에없ㄴㅔ
17:46 Beomsan: 77휘슬을 76에도 넣어서 00:38:572 (1) - 여기 머리 추가좀
17:47 Beomsan: 00:53:249 (2) - 머리휘슬 테일삭제
17:47 Beomsan: 00:54:701 (5) - 머리휘슬 꼬리클랩
17:48 Beomsan: 01:02:927 (6) - 휘슬
17:48 Leaf: 님아
17:48 Beomsan: ㄷㅊ고하셈
17:48 Leaf: 보컬에 박는것임?
17:48 Leaf: 아
17:49 Beomsan: 님
17:49 Beomsan: 그전에해논걸제발
17:49 Beomsan: 생각을하면서하셔야죠
17:49 Beomsan: 00:53:249 (2) - 완전개쒸발이잖이거
17:49 Leaf: 아니 전 ..
17:50 Beomsan: 쿵 짝쿵 쿵짝 이거였는데 갑자기 짝쿵짝쿵급으로 바뀜
17:50 Beomsan: 그렇단건아니고
17:51 Leaf: 림아
17:51 Leaf: 저가 힛사는 이해가안대서 재껴야할각나왔음
17:51 Beomsan: ㅇ...
17:51 Beomsan: 일단말한거는
17:51 Beomsan: 하세요제발
17:51 Beomsan: 못믿겠으면
17:51 Beomsan: 다른사람한테
17:51 Beomsan: 물어보시구요
17:51 Leaf: 아니저가
17:52 Leaf: 01:02:927 (6) - 여기 휘슬임??
17:52 Beomsan: 님
17:52 Beomsan: 저게
17:52 Beomsan: 01:01:636 -
17:52 Beomsan: 이거잖아요
17:52 Beomsan: 여기뭐들어가있음
17:52 Leaf: 01:01:636 - 여기빨간틱에 드럼소리있는데
17:52 Leaf: 01:02:927 (6) - 여긴 소리가없음
17:53 Beomsan: 님
17:53 Beomsan: 진짜
17:53 Beomsan: 하고싶은말이
17:53 Beomsan: 뭐냐면요
17:53 Beomsan: 힛사넣을때
17:53 Beomsan: 곡만들때 쓴 샘플사운드랑
17:53 Beomsan: 똑같은거씀?
17:53 Beomsan: 아니죠
17:53 Beomsan: 조오까튼 랭맵에서 쿵짝거리는거 대충 빼쓰고 그런거잖음
17:53 Beomsan: 그럼 노래를 무조건 맞춘다는 생각은 버리는게 좋음
17:53 Leaf: 아
17:53 Leaf: 저 무조껀 맞췄음
17:53 Beomsan: 그 힛사를 어떻게해야 제대로 활용할수있냐
17:53 Leaf: ㅋㅋ
17:53 Beomsan: 그걸 생각해야지
17:53 Beomsan: 같은 사운드 쓰는거도 아닌데
17:54 Beomsan: 똑같이하면가끔
17:54 Beomsan: 조오깥단말임
17:54 Beomsan: ㅇㅋ?
17:54 Beomsan: 힛사 하는게 기본적으로 곡 따라간다고 생각하면서
17:54 Leaf: 아
17:54 Beomsan: 거기서 자연스러움을 찾으란거
17:55 Leaf: 저 넘 어려움
17:55 Leaf: ㅋㅋ
Settia
2017-04-02 21:52 Settia: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1222081 Suzuyu - Euphorium [AstralAir]]
2017-04-02 21:52 Leaf: sure
2017-04-02 21:54 Settia: 00:06:314 (1) - 00:07:443 (1) - 00:15:185 (1) - 00:15:830 (3) - 00:16:152 (4) - add finish w
2017-04-02 21:54 Leaf: !
2017-04-02 21:55 Leaf: add
2017-04-02 21:55 Settia: 00:35:991 (1) - change to normal additions?
2017-04-02 21:55 Settia: 00:38:572 (1) - same sound as this section i think w
2017-04-02 21:57 Settia: oh nvm im stupid
2017-04-02 21:58 Leaf: 00:35:991 (1) - It sounds like a drum.
2017-04-02 21:58 Settia: dont care about avove
2017-04-02 21:58 Settia: 01:12:120 (1) - add some of hitsound?
2017-04-02 21:58 Leaf: oh
2017-04-02 21:58 Leaf: yess
2017-04-02 21:59 Settia: 01:18:894 - missing clap i think w
2017-04-02 21:59 Leaf: fact
2017-04-02 22:00 Leaf: i'm baka
2017-04-02 22:03 Settia: 01:32:765 - 01:33:572 - 01:33:894 - 01:33:249 (6) - i can hear synbal sound on them so add finish? but kinda loud w
2017-04-02 22:04 Settia: 01:34:056 (1) - this too
2017-04-02 22:04 Leaf: add+
2017-04-02 22:04 Settia: 01:39:217 (1) - finish~
2017-04-02 22:05 Leaf: holy I was missing a lot of finish
2017-04-02 22:05 Settia: 01:41:798 (1) - 01:42:765 (3) - too w
2017-04-02 22:05 Settia: ww
2017-04-02 22:08 Settia: 01:43:572 (2) - whistle and 01:43:733 (3) - clap? i can hear that clap but idk whether it fits them
2017-04-02 22:10 Settia: 01:48:733 (3) - remove clap this sound is not clap i think
2017-04-02 22:11 Leaf: fix
2017-04-02 22:11 Settia: 01:51:314 (2) - same as above
2017-04-02 22:12 Leaf: fix
2017-04-02 22:12 Leaf: 01:40:023 (4,5) -
2017-04-02 22:12 Leaf: add finish ?
2017-04-02 22:13 Settia: it seems so
2017-04-02 22:13 Leaf: ok
2017-04-02 22:14 Settia: 01:55:830 - 01:56:152 - 01:56:475 - finish too? but kinda loud
2017-04-02 22:15 Settia: 02:03:733 (1) - finish
2017-04-02 22:16 Leaf: add
2017-04-02 22:17 Settia: 02:04:620 - clap 02:04:701 (7) - remove clap then add whistle. its just suggestion i think its better?
2017-04-02 22:17 Settia: aa time line bugged
2017-04-02 22:18 Settia: 02:05:023 (1) - finish~
2017-04-02 22:19 Leaf: yess
2017-04-02 22:19 Settia: that's all~
Affirmation
As you requested

[이지]
00:32:120 (1) - 2/1슬라이더보다는 3/2슬라이더가 좀 더 좋을것 같아요.
00:34:701 - 여기 강한 드럼음이 있는데 클리커블로 만들어주시는게 어떤가여
00:37:282 (1) - 여기도 00:37:765 - 여기에 비트가 있는게 더 좋을듯?

[노말]
00:07:443 (3) - 이걸 00:07:765 - 여기서 끝내시고 00:08:088 - 여기 비트 추가하는게 더 좋을것 같네여
01:14:540 - 여기에 드럼 비트가 들어가는게 좋아보여요, 단순 스피너로 때우기에는 조금 허전해보이네요
02:05:991 (3,4) - 스택해보는게 어떤가요?

[최상위난이도]
00:29:540 (1,2) - 약간 리딩이 헷갈릴 수 있지 않을까요?
00:34:701 (1) - 중요한 드럼음 다 빼먹으신것 같네요. 00:35:189 - 여기 같은거
00:56:314 (4) - 여기 00:56:472 - 클리커블 노트가 들어가면 보컬표현도 되고 00:57:604 (4,5) - 랑 일관성도 맞출 수 있어서 좋을것 같아요
01:34:701 (3,5,3,5,7) - 저같으면 힛사같은데 강조하기 위해서라도 뉴콤 스팸 했을듯.

GL
Topic Starter
Leaf

Neoskylove wrote:

As you requested

[이지]
00:32:120 (1) - 2/1슬라이더보다는 3/2슬라이더가 좀 더 좋을것 같아요.
00:34:701 - 여기 강한 드럼음이 있는데 클리커블로 만들어주시는게 어떤가여
00:37:282 (1) - 여기도 00:37:765 - 여기에 비트가 있는게 더 좋을듯?

[노말]
00:07:443 (3) - 이걸 00:07:765 - 여기서 끝내시고 00:08:088 - 여기 비트 추가하는게 더 좋을것 같네여
01:14:540 - 여기에 드럼 비트가 들어가는게 좋아보여요, 단순 스피너로 때우기에는 조금 허전해보이네요
02:05:991 (3,4) - 스택해보는게 어떤가요?

[최상위난이도]
00:29:540 (1,2) - 약간 리딩이 헷갈릴 수 있지 않을까요?
00:34:701 (1) - 중요한 드럼음 다 빼먹으신것 같네요. 00:35:189 - 여기 같은거
00:56:314 (4) - 여기 00:56:472 - 클리커블 노트가 들어가면 보컬표현도 되고 00:57:604 (4,5) - 랑 일관성도 맞출 수 있어서 좋을것 같아요
01:34:701 (3,5,3,5,7) - 저같으면 힛사같은데 강조하기 위해서라도 뉴콤 스팸 했을듯.

GL
모든 부분 수정했습니다 감사합니다 :)
Reillia
[ㅎ]
전 난이도 키아이타임 통일 하는게? 하드 처럼 맞추는거 추천

[손닉 하드]
00:27:604 (4) - 언스냅 zz
01:49:540 (1,2,3,4,1,1) - 전과 후로 1/2박자가 꾸준히 나오다가 갑자기 박자가 텅텅 비니까 이게 뭐지 하는 느낌이 들었네용..

[레프트 인세인]
00:05:991 (2,3,4,5,2) - 오버랩을 피했으면 하는게 솔직한 바람..ㅋㅋ
00:30:507 (3,1,1) - 일직선으로 만들면 어떨가 싶네용

[Settia's Extra]
00:10:507 (2,2) - stack miss?
00:29:540 - i feel weird you skip this downbeat there's a strong drum sound
00:49:540 (3) - move 388 357 for 00:48:894 (1,2,3) - 00:49:540 (3,4) - visual comfortable
01:17:282 (2,3,4) - add nc? cuz these are have sv change
01:29:217 (1,2) - why use anti jump? i feel so weird

[막난]
01:18:572 (1) - sv 빠르게 해서 1/2로 만들고 01:18:894 - 여기에 노트 찍는게 더 좋아보일거 같네용
01:24:217 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 01:34:540 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 전자는 보통 키아이고 후자는 드럼으로 강조되는 느낌이 있는데 전자의 점프랑 후자의 점프의 차이가 크게 없다는게 아쉽네용
Settia

[C u r i] wrote:

[Settia's Extra]
00:10:507 (2,2) - stack miss?
00:29:540 - i feel weird you skip this downbeat there's a strong drum sound
00:49:540 (3) - move 388 357 for 00:48:894 (1,2,3) - 00:49:540 (3,4) - visual comfortable
01:17:282 (2,3,4) - add nc? cuz these are have sv change
01:29:217 (1,2) - why use anti jump? i feel so weird i think it's okay :>
no reply = fixed!

thank you for mod!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 76959
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Euphorium
TitleUnicode:Euphorium
Artist:Suzuyu
ArtistUnicode:鈴湯
Creator:Leaf
Version:Settia's Extra
Source:アストラエアの白き永遠 Finale -白き星の夢-
Tags:astralair no shiroki towa hoshi no yume favorite opening eroge settia left sonnyc
BeatmapID:1224003
BeatmapSetID:577420

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.5
ApproachRate:9.2
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1153,322.58064516129,4,2,76,60,1,0
6314,-100,4,2,77,60,0,0
21959,-133.333333333333,4,2,76,60,0,0
24378,-125,4,2,76,40,0,0
34701,-125,4,2,77,40,0,0
35991,-125,4,2,76,40,0,0
36072,-125,4,2,77,40,0,0
38572,-125,4,2,76,40,0,0
38652,-125,4,2,77,40,0,0
45023,-100,4,2,77,60,0,0
71798,-133.333333333333,4,2,76,60,0,0
73411,-100,4,2,77,60,0,0
76959,-100,4,2,77,60,0,0
77282,-133.333333333333,4,2,77,60,0,0
78249,-83.3333333333333,4,2,77,60,0,0
78572,-90.9090909090909,4,2,77,80,0,1
105669,-100,4,2,77,60,0,0
126233,-100,4,2,77,50,0,0
127604,-100,4,2,77,40,0,0
128894,-100,4,2,77,30,0,0
130185,-100,4,2,77,20,0,0
131475,-100,4,2,77,10,0,0
132765,-100,4,2,77,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,128,255
Combo2 : 213,0,0
Combo3 : 255,128,0
SliderTrackOverride : 40,40,40

[HitObjects]
256,192,1153,12,0,5507,0:0:0:0:
166,42,5991,5,0,0:0:0:0:
169,55,6072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,67,6152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,80,6233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,93,6314,6,0,P|237:110|241:220,1,180,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,331,6798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
103,318,6878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
98,305,6959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
185,167,7120,1,8,0:3:0:0:
271,310,7282,1,4,0:3:0:0:
98,305,7443,6,0,B|200:263|200:346|288:304,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,356,7927,2,0,P|411:311|384:252,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,214,8249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,310,8411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,166,8572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,310,8733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,105,8894,6,0,P|356:79|419:157,1,180,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,214,9378,1,8,0:3:0:0:
245,214,9540,2,0,L|147:213,1,90,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,166,9862,1,4,0:3:0:0:
352,341,10023,6,0,B|339:272|339:272|351:242|351:242|330:145,1,180,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,54,10507,2,0,P|181:98|203:159,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,134,10830,1,8,0:0:0:0:
393,96,10910,1,8,0:0:0:0:
354,74,10991,1,8,0:0:0:0:
310,75,11071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
273,99,11152,1,8,0:0:0:0:
157,320,11475,6,0,L|262:312,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,141,11798,2,0,L|86:133,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
7,177,12120,1,2,0:0:0:0:
67,52,12282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
98,220,12443,2,0,P|111:171|84:112,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
7,287,12765,6,0,P|61:339|172:303,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,187,13249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,199,13330,1,8,0:0:0:0:
285,211,13411,1,2,0:0:0:0:
98,220,13572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,358,13733,2,0,P|232:315|210:262,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
53,113,14056,6,0,L|159:107,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,71,14378,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,183,14540,1,8,0:0:0:0:
349,57,14701,1,2,0:0:0:0:
322,242,14863,1,8,0:0:0:0:
241,31,15023,1,2,0:0:0:0:
415,214,15185,6,0,P|357:155|255:182,1,180,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,169,15588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,169,15669,1,8,0:0:0:0:
319,328,15830,2,0,P|331:284|312:225,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,127,16152,2,0,P|174:171|193:230,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,368,16475,1,6,0:0:0:0:
49,289,16636,6,0,B|150:249|150:328|239:281,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,239,17120,1,2,0:0:0:0:
183,213,17282,5,8,0:0:0:0:
380,320,17443,1,2,0:0:0:0:
227,131,17604,5,8,0:0:0:0:
291,347,17765,1,2,0:0:0:0:
317,105,17927,5,8,0:0:0:0:
291,347,18089,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,131,18249,5,8,0:0:0:0:
380,320,18411,1,2,0:0:0:0:
461,232,18572,5,8,0:0:0:0:
426,203,18652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
382,194,18733,1,2,0:0:0:0:
339,206,18813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,230,18894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
267,259,18974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,268,19055,1,2,0:0:0:0:
181,256,19135,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,230,19217,6,0,P|132:187|157:126,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,18,19540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,18,19701,2,0,P|327:61|316:104,1,90,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,230,20023,1,8,0:0:0:0:
143,230,20104,1,8,0:0:0:0:
143,230,20185,1,8,0:0:0:0:
229,65,20346,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,20427,12,0,21798,0:0:0:0:
193,320,21959,6,0,L|108:314,2,67.5000025749208,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,229,22443,2,0,L|337:223,2,67.5000025749208,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,230,22927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,99,23088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,164,23250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
66,205,23411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
66,124,23572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,78,24378,6,0,P|385:161|347:217,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,252,24862,2,0,L|201:249,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,138,25346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,138,25507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,138,25669,6,0,L|261:141,2,72,4|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,75,26152,2,0,L|81:231,1,144,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,305,26636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,305,26798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,305,26959,6,0,B|151:300|151:300|181:314|181:314|254:308,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,351,27443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,351,27604,2,0,P|346:266|299:224,1,144,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,207,28088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,310,28249,2,0,L|222:228,1,72,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
427,98,28895,5,0,0:0:0:0:
427,98,29056,2,0,L|329:92,1,72
264,87,29378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,281,29540,2,0,L|392:193,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,32,29862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,32,30023,2,0,P|178:87|246:169,1,144,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,209,30507,2,0,L|296:280,1,72
187,381,30830,6,0,L|177:293,2,72,4|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,301,31314,2,0,P|138:238|204:231,1,144,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,280,31798,2,0,P|331:288|379:273,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,198,32120,6,0,L|459:360,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,207,32604,2,0,P|338:135|398:95,1,144,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,198,33088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,280,33411,5,4,0:1:0:0:
296,280,33572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,207,33733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,362,33894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,280,34056,2,0,L|219:271,2,72,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,292,34540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,199,34701,6,0,P|168:223|158:309,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,322,35185,1,2,0:0:0:0:
310,170,35669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,170,35830,1,2,0:0:0:0:
310,170,35991,6,0,L|307:79,1,72,4|0,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,19,36314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,106,36475,2,0,P|192:112|140:100,1,72,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,168,36798,1,8,0:3:0:0:
15,84,36959,2,0,P|41:68|94:61,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,220,37282,6,0,P|74:260|13:241,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,106,37765,2,0,L|233:276,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,333,38249,2,0,P|328:341|375:320,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,192,38572,6,0,P|335:218|317:274,1,144,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,355,39056,2,0,B|439:306|439:306|445:274|445:274|424:187,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
475,50,39540,2,0,L|474:131,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,93,39862,6,0,L|398:86,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,181,40185,2,0,L|216:174,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,23,40507,2,0,P|307:57|298:92,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,216,40830,2,0,P|161:181|169:146,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,33,41152,5,2,0:0:0:0:
88,33,41314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,59,41475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
46,194,41636,2,0,P|106:145|182:151,1,144,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,255,42120,2,0,L|242:342,1,72,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,384,42443,6,0,L|127:291,1,72,8|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,145,42765,1,2,0:0:0:0:
246,255,42927,2,0,L|174:250,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
54,238,43249,1,2,0:0:0:0:
169,145,43411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
125,312,43572,1,2,0:0:0:0:
93,102,43733,6,0,P|166:57|236:87,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,184,44217,1,4,0:3:0:0:
392,61,44378,1,4,0:3:0:0:
392,213,44540,1,4,0:3:0:0:
302,90,44701,1,4,0:3:0:0:
447,137,44862,1,4,0:3:0:0:
313,268,45023,6,0,P|294:218|311:169,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,137,45346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
302,90,45507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,213,45669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,61,45830,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,61,45911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,61,45991,1,8,0:0:0:0:
301,183,46152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,58,46314,6,0,B|300:52|300:52|326:67|326:67|400:60,2,180,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
81,63,47120,1,2,0:0:0:0:
202,236,47282,2,0,P|214:194|195:140,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
81,63,47604,6,0,L|93:250,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,348,48088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,150,48249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
207,348,48411,1,2,0:0:0:0:
207,348,48491,1,0,0:0:0:0:
207,348,48572,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,205,48733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
121,331,48894,6,0,P|163:275|281:296,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,205,49378,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,357,49540,2,0,L|381:262,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,44,49862,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,120,50023,6,0,B|419:113|419:113|377:128|377:128|285:116,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,248,50507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
315,291,50669,2,0,P|326:243|307:190,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,262,50991,1,2,0:0:0:0:
315,204,51152,1,8,0:0:0:0:
187,327,51314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,209,51475,6,0,P|154:182|211:258,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,341,51959,2,0,L|-1:332,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,247,52282,1,2,0:0:0:0:
77,123,52443,2,0,B|62:164|62:164|80:223,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,101,52765,6,0,P|112:43|6:71,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,208,53249,2,0,L|178:200,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,180,53572,1,2,0:0:0:0:
163,101,53733,1,8,0:0:0:0:
358,193,53894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
167,286,54056,6,0,P|154:238|177:183,2,90,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,340,54540,2,0,P|347:271|243:304,1,180,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,370,55023,1,2,0:0:0:0:
447,202,55185,1,8,0:0:0:0:
447,202,55265,1,8,0:0:0:0:
447,202,55346,6,0,L|329:189,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,82,55669,2,0,P|317:58|384:63,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,192,55991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,155,56152,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,280,56314,2,0,B|253:231|253:231|278:173,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,67,56636,6,0,B|447:130|447:130|460:157|460:157|444:277,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,280,57120,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,242,57281,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,195,57443,1,2,0:0:0:0:
447,327,57604,2,0,P|460:283|429:221,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,117,57927,6,0,P|217:117|179:211,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,282,58411,2,0,L|237:279,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,272,58733,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,195,58894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
174,353,59056,1,2,0:0:0:0:
25,181,59217,6,0,P|134:146|187:201,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,279,59701,1,2,0:0:0:0:
225,103,59862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
174,353,60023,1,2,0:0:0:0:
342,235,60185,2,0,P|317:207|250:199,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,353,60507,6,0,B|220:351|220:351|250:367|250:367|378:358,1,180,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,241,60991,2,0,L|331:234,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,359,61314,1,2,0:0:0:0:
431,241,61475,2,0,P|441:198|413:137,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,92,61798,5,0,0:0:0:0:
341,234,61959,1,2,0:0:0:0:
351,53,62120,1,2,0:0:0:0:
353,318,62282,2,0,P|256:247|283:176,1,180,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,53,62765,2,0,L|345:163,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,353,63088,6,0,L|184:167,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,22,63572,2,0,P|51:63|64:119,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,173,63894,1,2,0:0:0:0:
269,70,64056,2,0,B|216:63|216:63|190:74|190:74|116:68,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
46,240,64378,6,0,P|146:235|182:147,1,180,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
58,108,64862,1,8,0:3:0:0:
46,240,65023,2,0,L|38:341,1,90,4|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
182,172,65346,1,4,0:3:0:0:
38,329,65507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
146,98,65669,6,0,P|214:91|260:196,1,180,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,249,66152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,249,66314,2,0,L|421:241,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,347,66636,2,0,P|281:341|240:305,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,142,66959,6,0,B|414:113|414:113|407:258,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,347,67443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,240,67604,2,0,L|94:233,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,233,67846,1,0,0:0:0:0:
103,233,67927,1,2,0:0:0:0:
319,249,68088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,368,68249,6,0,B|176:300|176:300|195:268|195:268|195:170,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,103,68733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,193,68894,2,0,P|152:206|103:185,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,50,69217,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,91,69378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
155,127,69540,5,2,0:0:0:0:
354,14,69701,1,8,0:0:0:0:
155,127,69862,1,2,0:0:0:0:
411,181,70023,1,8,0:0:0:0:
411,181,70104,1,8,0:0:0:0:
411,181,70184,1,2,0:0:0:0:
259,76,70346,5,8,0:0:0:0:
261,113,70426,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,150,70507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
266,188,70587,1,8,0:0:0:0:
269,225,70668,1,8,0:0:0:0:
271,263,70749,1,8,0:0:0:0:
274,300,70829,1,6,0:0:0:0:
274,300,71798,6,0,P|238:309|188:294,1,67.5000025749208
117,328,72120,2,0,L|127:235,1,67.5000025749208,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,147,72443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
70,201,72604,2,0,P|142:179|204:233,1,135.000005149842,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,300,73088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,300,73169,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,300,73249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,300,73330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,300,73411,6,0,P|323:314|376:290,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,255,73733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
363,152,73894,6,0,P|326:187|320:245,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,303,74216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,89,74378,1,8,0:0:0:0:
193,358,74540,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74620,12,0,75991,0:0:0:0:
89,40,76959,6,0,L|94:155,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,206,77282,6,0,L|110:68,1,135.000005149842,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
29,250,77765,2,0,P|91:295|166:270,1,135.000005149842
255,167,78249,2,0,B|179:150|192:226|83:202,1,161.999995056153
244,364,78572,6,0,L|255:162,1,198.000006042481,6|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,47,79056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
347,169,79217,2,0,P|300:182|254:166,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,82,79540,1,8,0:0:0:0:
450,282,79701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
454,82,79862,6,0,L|451:195,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,350,80185,1,8,0:0:0:0:
450,282,80346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,279,80427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
430,276,80507,1,2,0:0:0:0:
259,248,80669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
451,180,80830,1,8,0:0:0:0:
321,350,80991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
167,218,81152,6,0,P|226:152|336:186,1,198.000006042481,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,350,81636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,306,81798,2,0,P|92:273|78:235,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,248,82120,1,8,0:0:0:0:
206,362,82282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,128,82443,5,6,0:0:0:0:
309,255,82604,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,251,82685,1,8,0:0:0:0:
259,248,82765,1,8,0:0:0:0:
453,120,82927,2,0,B|443:172|443:172|456:203|456:203|445:282,1,148.50000453186,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,348,83249,2,0,P|297:297|322:237,1,99.0000030212403,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,46,83572,2,0,L|193:99,1,49.5000015106202,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,163,83733,6,0,P|257:162|211:243,1,198.000006042481,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
114,283,84217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,254,84378,1,2,0:0:0:0:
74,184,84540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,328,84701,2,0,P|221:282|203:221,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
67,89,85023,6,0,P|57:136|73:183,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,140,85346,2,0,L|131:131,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,72,85669,1,2,0:0:0:0:
210,233,85830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
406,283,85991,2,0,P|419:234|394:177,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,44,86314,5,2,0:0:0:0:
332,236,86475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
106,250,86636,5,8,0:0:0:0:
404,189,86798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,131,86959,5,2,0:0:0:0:
406,283,87120,1,8,0:0:0:0:
406,283,87201,1,8,0:0:0:0:
406,283,87282,1,8,0:0:0:0:
203,360,87443,6,0,L|210:231,1,99.0000030212403,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,86,87765,1,8,0:0:0:0:
143,131,87927,5,2,0:0:0:0:
404,189,88088,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,40,88249,5,2,0:0:0:0:
208,261,88411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,261,88491,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,261,88572,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,40,88733,2,0,L|248:110,1,49.5000015106202,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,307,88894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,307,89217,6,0,P|178:342|125:268,1,198.000006042481,6|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,224,89701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,178,89862,1,8,0:0:0:0:
126,281,90023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,83,90185,6,0,L|134:193,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,155,90507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,261,90669,1,2,0:0:0:0:
253,91,90830,2,0,P|354:82|396:179,1,198.000006042481,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,342,91314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,261,91475,6,0,L|107:252,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,285,91798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
306,178,91959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,377,92120,2,0,P|445:331|408:263,1,99.0000030212403,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,91,92443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,342,92604,1,2,0:0:0:0:
398,155,92765,5,6,0:0:0:0:
208,261,92927,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,261,93007,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,261,93088,1,8,0:0:0:0:
431,284,93249,1,6,0:0:0:0:
306,178,93411,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,342,93572,1,12,0:0:0:0:
306,178,93733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,342,93894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
198,162,94056,6,0,L|208:268,1,99.0000030212403,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,56,94378,1,8,0:0:0:0:
306,178,94540,1,2,0:0:0:0:
54,167,94701,5,8,0:0:0:0:
288,151,94863,1,2,0:0:0:0:
105,56,95023,5,8,0:0:0:0:
306,178,95185,1,2,0:0:0:0:
129,220,95346,5,8,0:0:0:0:
403,152,95508,1,2,0:0:0:0:
193,306,95669,5,8,0:0:0:0:
338,65,95831,1,2,0:0:0:0:
129,220,95991,5,8,0:0:0:0:
434,261,96153,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,102,96314,5,8,0:0:0:0:
352,356,96475,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,356,96556,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,356,96636,6,0,P|363:307|344:258,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,66,96959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,66,97120,2,0,B|199:136|199:136|184:166|184:166|192:281,1,198.000006042481,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,314,97604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,183,97765,6,0,P|287:206|288:319,1,198.000006042481,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
494,332,98249,1,4,0:3:0:0:
190,260,98411,1,4,0:3:0:0:
494,332,98733,5,0,0:0:0:0:
283,313,98894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
489,209,99056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,380,99217,6,0,L|359:179,1,198.000006042481,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,50,99701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,219,99862,2,0,L|87:212,1,99.0000030212403,2|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,182,100185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,115,100346,1,12,0:0:0:0:
136,33,101798,6,0,P|54:67|56:194,1,198.000006042481,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,277,102282,2,0,P|195:188|84:127,1,198.000006042481,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,347,102765,2,0,B|145:304|145:399|247:339,1,198.000006042481,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,243,103249,1,8,0:3:0:0:
415,339,103411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,183,103572,5,2,0:0:0:0:
484,242,103733,1,8,0:0:0:0:
302,302,103894,1,4,0:3:0:0:
415,146,104056,1,4,0:3:0:0:
415,339,104217,1,8,0:3:0:0:
302,183,104378,6,0,L|302:66,1,99.0000030212403,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,302,104701,1,2,0:0:0:0:
81,202,104862,2,0,P|116:166|180:164,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,302,105185,2,0,P|267:338|203:340,1,99.0000030212403,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,236,105507,1,12,0:0:0:0:
439,116,106959,6,0,L|242:108,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,150,107443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,282,107604,2,0,P|286:232|269:184,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,63,107927,2,0,P|129:113|146:161,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,342,108249,5,2,0:0:0:0:
202,240,108411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
55,342,108572,1,8,0:0:0:0:
139,149,108733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,149,108814,1,8,0:0:0:0:
139,149,108894,1,2,0:0:0:0:
206,375,109056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,254,109217,2,0,L|132:246,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,147,109540,6,0,P|213:184|213:273,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,219,110023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,374,110185,2,0,L|334:275,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
438,129,110507,2,0,L|428:228,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,374,110830,5,2,0:0:0:0:
344,374,110991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,221,111152,1,8,0:0:0:0:
421,318,111314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
421,318,111394,1,8,0:0:0:0:
421,318,111475,1,2,0:0:0:0:
201,239,111636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,147,111798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
239,329,111959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
242,99,112120,6,0,P|322:53|402:114,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,239,112604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,239,112765,2,0,L|94:232,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,52,113088,2,0,P|154:98|169:154,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,329,113411,5,2,0:0:0:0:
319,147,113572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,239,113733,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,308,113894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,147,114056,5,2,0:0:0:0:
239,329,114217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,185,114378,1,8,0:0:0:0:
201,239,114540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
350,359,114701,6,0,L|336:249,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,41,115023,1,8,0:0:0:0:
234,138,115185,2,0,P|280:155|336:136,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,93,115507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,93,115588,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,93,115669,1,8,0:0:0:0:
338,269,115830,1,12,0:0:0:0:
468,192,115991,5,2,0:0:0:0:
252,318,116152,1,12,0:0:0:0:
474,285,116314,5,2,0:0:0:0:
318,146,116475,1,12,0:0:0:0:
351,368,116636,5,2,0:0:0:0:
469,192,116798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,192,116878,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,192,116959,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,318,117120,1,8,0:0:0:0:
275,78,117282,5,6,0:0:0:0:
317,65,117362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,77,117443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
390,109,117523,1,0,0:0:0:0:
399,152,117604,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,194,117685,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,222,117765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
305,233,117846,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,215,117927,6,0,L|252:159,3,45,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,86,118249,2,0,L|161:130,3,45,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,250,118572,5,2,0:0:0:0:
107,258,118652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,266,118733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,274,118814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
115,282,118894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
118,290,118975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
121,298,119056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
123,306,119136,1,8,0:0:0:0:
125,314,119217,5,2,0:0:0:0:
158,309,119297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,294,119378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
210,269,119458,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,238,119539,1,8,0:0:0:0:
223,204,119620,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,173,119700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,147,119781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
161,130,119862,5,2,0:0:0:0:
30,217,120023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,73,120185,2,0,P|146:50|206:61,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,209,120507,2,0,B|330:202|330:202|298:214|298:214|196:200,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
415,75,120991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
399,209,121152,6,0,L|392:316,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,123,121475,2,0,P|313:75|330:23,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,37,121717,1,8,0:0:0:0:
321,37,121798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,109,121959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
399,209,122120,2,0,L|288:204,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,132,122443,6,0,P|273:141|308:229,1,180,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,350,122927,1,8,0:0:0:0:
206,332,123007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,314,123088,1,2,0:0:0:0:
174,132,123249,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,204,123411,1,2,0:0:0:0:
243,37,123572,1,8,0:0:0:0:
218,226,123733,5,6,0:0:0:0:
416,178,123894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,178,123975,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,178,124056,1,2,0:0:0:0:
270,120,124217,1,8,0:0:0:0:
470,272,124378,1,2,0:0:0:0:
299,312,124540,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,178,124701,1,2,0:0:0:0:
401,356,124862,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,204,125023,6,0,P|308:135|413:69,1,180,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
470,272,125507,2,0,B|396:268|396:268|354:292|354:292|280:288,1,180,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,284,125991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,178,126152,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,126233,12,0,132765,0:0:0:0:
jieusieu
2017-04-09 23:34 jieusieu: 00:14:056 (1) -
2017-04-09 23:34 Leaf: 상간없음
2017-04-09 23:34 jieusieu: 00:14:056 (1,2,3,4,5) - 이거 다선택해서
2017-04-09 23:34 Leaf: 스택인것임?
2017-04-09 23:35 jieusieu: 3번서클을 주황색 6번서클이랑 겹치는게
2017-04-09 23:35 Leaf: 바로수정했띠
2017-04-09 23:35 jieusieu: 1번슬라랑 2번서클 거리감이랑 통일되고
2017-04-09 23:35 jieusieu: 하여튼그럼
2017-04-09 23:35 jieusieu: 00:19:217 (1) -
2017-04-09 23:35 jieusieu: 이건좀
2017-04-09 23:35 jieusieu: 에바아닐까요??
2017-04-09 23:35 Leaf: 악
2017-04-09 23:35 Leaf: 악
2017-04-09 23:35 Leaf: 악
2017-04-09 23:36 jieusieu: 차라리 좀더펴서
2017-04-09 23:36 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780486
2017-04-09 23:36 jieusieu: 이런모양은어떨지??
2017-04-09 23:36 jieusieu: 싫음말구
2017-04-09 23:36 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-09 23:37 jieusieu: 00:32:604 (2) - 개인적으론 1번슬라랑 90도로 맞추는거보단
2017-04-09 23:37 jieusieu: 예각으로 맞추는게괜찮을거같음
2017-04-09 23:38 Leaf: 예각이먼임?
2017-04-09 23:38 jieusieu: 90도보다쩍은거요
2017-04-09 23:38 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-09 23:38 Leaf: 아
2017-04-09 23:38 Leaf: 저 초등학교때 배운거같음
2017-04-09 23:38 jieusieu: 아니
2017-04-09 23:38 jieusieu: 이럼예각이아닌가??
2017-04-09 23:38 jieusieu: ㄹㅇ
2017-04-09 23:39 Leaf: 예ㅃ
2017-04-09 23:39 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780507
2017-04-09 23:39 jieusieu: 이런뜼임하여튼
2017-04-09 23:39 jieusieu: 00:37:765 (2,3,1) -
2017-04-09 23:39 jieusieu: 제생각엔
2017-04-09 23:40 jieusieu: 00:37:282 (1,2,3) - 모양 자체를 두고 보면 나쁘진 않은데
2017-04-09 23:40 jieusieu: 그 다음에 오는 모양이 하필이면 00:38:572 (1) - 이라 좀 보기 나쁜거같음
2017-04-09 23:41 jieusieu: 그런데딱히 대안법은 떠오르지 않네요
2017-04-09 23:41 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-09 23:41 Leaf: 쫌그런겉도같아요
2017-04-09 23:41 Leaf: 00:38:249 (3) - 여기
2017-04-09 23:41 Leaf: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780523
2017-04-09 23:41 Leaf: 일케하면 ㅍㅌㅊ?
2017-04-09 23:42 jieusieu: 흠
2017-04-09 23:42 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780533
2017-04-09 23:43 jieusieu: 이런건어떰??
2017-04-09 23:43 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-09 23:43 Leaf: ㄲ
2017-04-09 23:44 jieusieu: 그리고 00:38:572 (1,2) -
2017-04-09 23:44 jieusieu: 똑같이놓기엔좀그런게
2017-04-09 23:44 jieusieu: 하여튼좀그럼
2017-04-09 23:45 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780549 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780553
2017-04-09 23:46 Leaf: ㄹㅇ
2017-04-09 23:46 jieusieu: 00:41:636 (2,3) -
2017-04-09 23:46 jieusieu: 이거 슬라이더 끝부ㅜㄴ을 삼각형으로 맞추는게
2017-04-09 23:46 jieusieu: 더이쁠거같음
2017-04-09 23:47 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780570
2017-04-09 23:47 Leaf: 아
2017-04-09 23:47 Leaf: 바로수정했음
2017-04-09 23:48 jieusieu: 00:46:314 (1) -
2017-04-09 23:48 jieusieu: 별거아니긴한데
2017-04-09 23:48 jieusieu: 아 뭐라고하지
2017-04-09 23:48 jieusieu: 3을 중심으로 대칭했을때
2017-04-09 23:48 jieusieu: 안맞음하여튼
2017-04-09 23:49 Leaf: 확인
2017-04-09 23:50 jieusieu: 그래서 각을좀더줘서
2017-04-09 23:50 jieusieu: 아
2017-04-09 23:50 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780606
2017-04-09 23:50 jieusieu: 이런모양도어떨까하는데
2017-04-09 23:51 jieusieu: 이거는좀취향임
2017-04-09 23:51 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-09 23:52 jieusieu: 00:55:991 (3) -
2017-04-09 23:53 jieusieu: 아
2017-04-09 23:53 jieusieu: 이거는뭔가
2017-04-09 23:53 Leaf: 앜
2017-04-09 23:53 jieusieu: 좀맘에안드는데
2017-04-09 23:53 jieusieu: 건들기가쫌
2017-04-09 23:53 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-09 23:55 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780659
2017-04-09 23:55 jieusieu: 막건드려봤는데
2017-04-09 23:55 jieusieu: 아니다싶으면 스킵ㄱ
2017-04-09 23:56 Leaf: 저가 더 생각해보갯음
2017-04-09 23:56 jieusieu: 00:57:927 (1,2,3) -
2017-04-09 23:56 jieusieu: 이건 ㄹㅇ
2017-04-09 23:56 jieusieu: 부숴버릴수도있음저가
2017-04-09 23:56 Leaf: 악씨괄
2017-04-09 23:57 Leaf: 거리맞추갯음..
2017-04-09 23:57 jieusieu: 냅
2017-04-09 23:57 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-09 23:57 jieusieu: 01:05:669 (1) -
2017-04-09 23:57 jieusieu: 이거는 좀더 각주는게나을듯ㄱ
2017-04-09 23:58 jieusieu: 왼쪽으로
2017-04-09 23:58 Leaf: 않이
2017-04-09 23:58 Leaf: 어떻게함??
2017-04-09 23:58 jieusieu: 01:06:152 (2) - 랑 수직으로 되도 ㄱㅊ을거같ㅇ므
2017-04-09 23:58 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780693
2017-04-09 23:59 jieusieu: 01:07:927 (5) - 01:08:572 (2) -
2017-04-09 23:59 Leaf: 바로수정
2017-04-09 23:59 jieusieu: 갑자기 곡선이많아서
2017-04-09 23:59 jieusieu: 좀불안하니까
2017-04-09 23:59 jieusieu: 직선으로바꿔주세요
2017-04-10 00:00 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780709
2017-04-10 00:00 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-10 00:00 Leaf: 확인
2017-04-10 00:01 jieusieu: 01:13:572 (2,3) -
2017-04-10 00:01 jieusieu: 아이건
2017-04-10 00:01 jieusieu: 어떻게 잘해볼수있을거같지않음??
2017-04-10 00:01 Leaf: 아
2017-04-10 00:01 Leaf: 거기망햇음ㅋㅋ
2017-04-10 00:01 jieusieu: 01:14:540 (1) -
2017-04-10 00:01 jieusieu: 이거랑
2017-04-10 00:01 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-10 00:02 Leaf: 님
2017-04-10 00:02 jieusieu: 네
2017-04-10 00:02 Leaf: 저
2017-04-10 00:02 Leaf: 뇌정지왔음
2017-04-10 00:02 jieusieu: 아
2017-04-10 00:02 jieusieu: ,,,,
2017-04-10 00:02 Leaf: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-10 00:03 jieusieu: 그럼일단 다음꺼보죠
2017-04-10 00:03 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-10 00:03 jieusieu: 01:16:959 (1,1,1,1,1) -
2017-04-10 00:03 jieusieu: 발상참괜찮은거같은데
2017-04-10 00:03 jieusieu: 그거
2017-04-10 00:03 jieusieu: 컨트롤 쉬프트 r 해서
2017-04-10 00:04 jieusieu: 10도만 줘보시는게 더이쁜거같ㅇㅁ
2017-04-10 00:04 jieusieu: 10~15
2017-04-10 00:05 jieusieu: 01:38:088 (2,3) -
2017-04-10 00:05 jieusieu: 이건그냥
2017-04-10 00:05 jieusieu: 수직으로놔도될거같음
2017-04-10 00:05 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780761
2017-04-10 00:06 jieusieu: 01:41:798 (1,2,3) -
2017-04-10 00:07 jieusieu: 이거 할거면
2017-04-10 00:07 jieusieu: 슬라이더 머리랑 꼬리가 안쪽에있는게 더 나을거같음
2017-04-10 00:07 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780781
2017-04-10 00:07 jieusieu: 01:44:378 (1) -
2017-04-10 00:07 jieusieu: 이거 빨간점 좀만올려서
2017-04-10 00:08 jieusieu: 00:48:894 (1) -
2017-04-10 00:08 jieusieu: 이런느낌만드는게어떨지
2017-04-10 00:08 jieusieu: 01:45:185 (3) - 이거좀더내리는게 균형맞아보이는거같음
2017-04-10 00:09 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780800
2017-04-10 00:10 jieusieu: 01:53:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
2017-04-10 00:10 jieusieu: 여기 분위기에 비해 점프가 너무큼
2017-04-10 00:10 jieusieu: 그 전 점프도 그렇고
2017-04-10 00:11 Leaf: 님 아
2017-04-10 00:11 Leaf: 수정중임
2017-04-10 00:11 jieusieu: 아
2017-04-10 00:11 jieusieu: ㄹㅇ??임
2017-04-10 00:11 Leaf: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-10 00:12 jieusieu: 저그럼여기까지할꼐요ㅕ
2017-04-10 00:12 Leaf: 아
2017-04-10 00:12 Leaf: 말한거
2017-04-10 00:12 Leaf: 저가 다고친거같음
2017-04-10 00:12 Leaf: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-10 00:12 jieusieu: 아니
2017-04-10 00:12 Leaf: 점프뺴고임
2017-04-10 00:12 jieusieu: 저그럼
2017-04-10 00:12 jieusieu: 올리겠음
2017-04-10 00:13 Leaf: ㄴ[
2017-04-10 00:13 jieusieu: 아왜요
2017-04-10 00:16 Leaf: 올렷음??
2017-04-10 00:16 jieusieu: 아니
2017-04-10 00:16 jieusieu: 님 ㄴ라고 친게아니라
2017-04-10 00:16 jieusieu: 네라고친거임??
2017-04-10 00:17 Leaf: 내
Enon


정말 재밌네요 ^
Left
님 스킨이 더재밌음
Anze
[AstralAir]

00:38:572 (1) - 초록선 하나 제거

00:49:378 (2,3,4,5,6) - 3번에서 가사가 시작하는데 2번부터 서클점프라 어색한 것 같음. 1번과 2번 사이 간격을 줄여보면 어떰?

00:52:765 (1,2,4) - 개인적인 생각인데, 이 슬라이더들을 컨트롤+G 하면 더 좋은 동선이 나오는 것 같음.

01:03:088 (1) - 이걸 각진 슬라로 해야만 할까요? 01:04:378 (1) - 이거 복붙해서 부드럽게 하는 편이 반복되는 느낌도 살리고 좋은 듯.

01:14:540 (1) - 여기 뭔가 허전한데 멋진 힛사좀 넣어보셈. 전 난이도 공통

01:28:733 (4,1) - 이 슬라이더와 서클이 직선상에 있지 않네요. 의도가 아니시라면 직선으로 수정하시는 게 어떨까요.




[Hard]

꽤 높은 bpm의 단타와 슬라이더 속도에 비해 AR이 느린 게 아닌가 하는 느낌을 받았습니다.

00:27:603 (4) - Ai가 여기 언스냅이라고 합니다.




[Normal]

00:47:604 (1) - 여기 음이 없어서 힛사 안 박으신거임? 전 그래도 휘슬 넣는게 좋다 보는데, 취향 차이인 듯.

00:50:185 (1) - ^

01:33:411 (6) - 여기도 전 헤드에 휘슬 테일에 클랩 박으면 좋을 것 같다고 생각함..



[Easy]

01:30:830 (1) - 휘슬?
Beomsan

Left wrote:

님 스킨이 더재밌음
이 말 하려다가 스레드에서 하긴 좀 그래서 참았는데 너무 시원하네요 ^^^^
Enon
메구밍이 만만해?
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply