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[C u r i] wrote:

어이 노래가 너무 좋은데 와타시가 pp엑스트라를 만들어도 되겠는가
자리 꽉찾읍니다ㅜ
C O I N
하드 겟난 받는다 해서 리프님 보면 물어볼려햇는대 리프님 언제 오스들어오심?
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아마 손닉님으로 채워진걸로 알아요
bbj0920
아스트랄

00:20:346 - 최고 난이도인만큼 악기 표현은 아낌없이 넣어주는 게 좋다고 생각해요 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7744758 이렇게 어떠심?
여기 잔잔한 부분은 아예 조용한 부분이랑 타악기 점점 들어가는 부분이 난이도 차이가 거의 없어서 곡 표현력이 좀 딸려보이네요
00:44:217 (1) - NC
01:14:540 (1) - 이 세월호 리본 슬라를 01:15:669 - 에서 끝내고 5단 꽃잎 슬라 부분을 01:15:991 - 에 피아노부터 시작하는 게 어떤가요? 좋은 기믹이긴 한데 키아이 도입부까지 넣는 건 좀 억지스럽네요 (01:18:572 - 에는 패턴에 알맞는 다른 슬라가 들어가야겠죠?)
01:24:378 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/1마다 보컬이 있는 부분인데 거의 뒷부분에 1/1마다 드럼 스네어 들어가는 부분이랑 비슷한 점프 패턴이 들어가네요.. 너무 억지스럽다고 생각합니다
01:32:765 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 제가 플레이어빌리티 관련해서 리프님만큼 많이 알지는 않겠지만.. 현재 패턴이 플로우가 이상하게 꺾이는 감이 있어요. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7744836 이런 식으로는 어떠신가요
01:52:765 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 2줄 위랑 마찬가지
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Leaf

bbj0920 wrote:

아스트랄

00:20:346 - 최고 난이도인만큼 악기 표현은 아낌없이 넣어주는 게 좋다고 생각해요 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7744758 이렇게 어떠심?
여기 잔잔한 부분은 아예 조용한 부분이랑 타악기 점점 들어가는 부분이 난이도 차이가 거의 없어서 곡 표현력이 좀 딸려보이네요 스핀으로변경햇읍니다
00:44:217 (1) - NC 수정
01:14:540 (1) - 이 세월호 리본 슬라를 01:15:669 - 에서 끝내고 5단 꽃잎 슬라 부분을 01:15:991 - 에 피아노부터 시작하는 게 어떤가요? 좋은 기믹이긴 한데 키아이 도입부까지 넣는 건 좀 억지스럽네요 (01:18:572 - 에는 패턴에 알맞는 다른 슬라가 들어가야겠죠?) 01:15:991 - 보컬과 음이 여기서 딱끊기는게 들려서 ㄱㅊ을듯 꽃잎슬라이더는 보컬에 맞춰서 한거라 그냥 둘게용
01:24:378 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/1마다 보컬이 있는 부분인데 거의 뒷부분에 1/1마다 드럼 스네어 들어가는 부분이랑 비슷한 점프 패턴이 들어가네요.. 너무 억지스럽다고 생각합니다 강조되는 부분이기도 하고 어색하지도 않아서 괜찮을거같습니다 패턴 수정후 01:25:023 (1) - 부터 강조해보았읍니다
01:32:765 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 제가 플레이어빌리티 관련해서 리프님만큼 많이 알지는 않겠지만.. 현재 패턴이 플로우가 이상하게 꺾이는 감이 있어요. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7744836 이런 식으로는 어떠신가요 수정
01:52:765 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 2줄 위랑 마찬가지 패턴생각후 노래랑 맞게 바꾸겠습니다
모딩 감사합니다
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bbj0920 wrote:

아스트랄

01:24:378 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/1마다 보컬이 있는 부분인데 거의 뒷부분에 1/1마다 드럼 스네어 들어가는 부분이랑 비슷한 점프 패턴이 들어가네요.. 너무 억지스럽다고 생각합니다
솔직히 이거는 저도 bbj님에 동의하는 부분입니다. 동선이랑 맞물려서 오히려 뒤쪽이 더 쉬운데, 분명히 노래상으로는 뒤가 강조가 더 필요한 부분이거든요. 점프를 둘다 넣을 수는 있겠지만 상대적인 강도를 고려했으면 좋겠어요
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Leaf

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bbj0920 wrote:

아스트랄

01:24:378 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/1마다 보컬이 있는 부분인데 거의 뒷부분에 1/1마다 드럼 스네어 들어가는 부분이랑 비슷한 점프 패턴이 들어가네요.. 너무 억지스럽다고 생각합니다
솔직히 이거는 저도 bbj님에 동의하는 부분입니다. 동선이랑 맞물려서 오히려 뒤쪽이 더 쉬운데, 분명히 노래상으로는 뒤가 강조가 더 필요한 부분이거든요. 점프를 둘다 넣을 수는 있겠지만 상대적인 강도를 고려했으면 좋겠어요
패턴 수정후 01:25:023 (1) - 부터 강조해보았읍니다
Beomsan
17:00 Leaf: 림아
17:00 Leaf: 림아ㅏ
17:00 Leaf: ㄴ[
17:00 Beomsan: 내
17:00 Leaf: 푸딩을찾고있읍니다
17:01 Beomsan: 제가먹음
17:01 Leaf: ㅜ
17:01 Beomsan: ...
17:01 Leaf: 숨은속뜻 : 모딍 급구
17:01 Beomsan: 모딩이 왜 푸딩이됨
17:01 Beomsan: ??
17:01 Beomsan: 진인가?
17:02 Leaf: 아
17:02 Leaf: 그것애이유는없구요
17:02 Leaf: ㅋㅋ
17:02 Beomsan: 저매핑까먹음
17:02 Beomsan: ㅎ
17:02 Leaf: 악
17:02 Leaf: 앜
17:02 Leaf: 악
17:03 Beomsan: 일단
17:03 Beomsan: 푸딩어떤거요
17:03 Beomsan: 지금 보고 쓸게 있으면 해주고
17:03 Beomsan: 없으면당장말함
17:03 Leaf: ㅞ
17:03 *Leaf is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1222081 Suzuyu - Euphorium]
17:04 Leaf: mappu child 입니다 저가요
17:04 Leaf: ㅋㅋ
17:06 Beomsan: 음
17:06 Beomsan: 일단님
17:06 Beomsan: 좀
17:06 Beomsan: 전체적인 첫감상은
17:06 Beomsan: 아 PP주려고 작정을했구나 이거구요
17:07 Leaf: !
17:07 Beomsan: 자잘하게 모딩할거리라면 잘 모르겠고
17:07 Beomsan: 그 패턴자체가 좀 후져보이는건 있음
17:07 Beomsan: 들어볼거임?
17:07 Leaf: 딲말하렴
17:07 Beomsan: 00:02:443 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
17:07 Leaf: 일단 저기
17:07 Leaf: 망한거 ㅇㅈ인띠
17:07 Beomsan: 이건 재가 좀망했다고했지만
17:07 Beomsan: 씹망인거같음
17:07 Beomsan: 어차피
17:08 Beomsan: 리맵할거같아서
17:08 Beomsan: 말해봄
17:08 Beomsan: 절대남기지말라고
17:08 Beomsan: ^^....
17:08 Leaf: 저기걍
17:08 Leaf: 스핀박을까
17:08 Leaf: 생각중
17:08 Beomsan: 스핀?
17:08 Beomsan: 스핀은 아닌거같은데
17:08 Leaf: 00:05:507 (4) - 여기까지
17:08 Beomsan: 그럴바에 걍 비우는게
17:08 Beomsan: 음
17:08 Beomsan: 스핀이냐 비우냐 채우냐 이런문제면
17:08 Beomsan: 일단 채우는게 최선인거같긴함
17:08 Beomsan: 근데 저 몹쓸패턴이 문제임
17:08 Leaf: 그럼저가 연구하갯음
17:09 Beomsan: 00:24:378 (1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) -
17:09 Beomsan: 여기말인데
17:09 Beomsan: 00:29:378 (3,1) -
17:09 Beomsan: 이거에대해서
17:09 Beomsan: 00:24:378 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - 앞의것들은
17:09 Beomsan: "완전히" 보컬만 따라갔다
17:09 Beomsan: 00:29:378 (3,1) - 근데 여기서
17:09 Beomsan: 그게깨짐
17:09 Beomsan: 00:29:378 (3) - 리버스 슬라이더로 보컬 표현은
17:09 Beomsan: 여기서부터여야했고
17:09 Beomsan: 00:29:540 (1) - 이건 굉장히 리겜스러운 리듬 접근
17:10 Beomsan: 근데 이게 나쁜건 절대아닌데
17:10 Beomsan: 전이랑 매칭이안됨
17:10 Beomsan: 00:31:314 (2) - 마찬가지
17:10 Beomsan: 리듬이 요상하게 더 꽉차있음
17:10 Beomsan: 변화를 줄거면 00:34:701 - 여기부터가 적절함
17:10 Beomsan: 파트를 이상한 시점으로 나눈 느낌
17:11 Leaf: 00:31:314 (2) -
17:11 Beomsan: 아니면 앞부분도 뒤랑 비슷하게 만들던지
17:11 Leaf: 여기 노트 하나만두기 ?
17:11 Beomsan: ㅇㅇ
17:11 Beomsan: 그런이야기임
17:11 Beomsan: 이해되죠??
17:11 Leaf: ㄹㅇ
17:11 Beomsan: 바로두ㅣ에도 찬 리듬 있음
17:11 Beomsan: 근데 그건 또 애매하당
17:11 Beomsan: 몰겠음 알아서하도록
17:11 Leaf: 00:33:088 (3) -
17:11 Leaf: 여긴임?
17:11 Beomsan: 200:33:088 (3,4) -
17:11 Beomsan: 00:33:088 (3,4) -
17:12 Beomsan: 00:33:088 -
17:12 Beomsan: 00:33:411 -
17:12 Beomsan: 이렇게 두 지점에 서클 하나씩 박아두면
17:12 Beomsan: 더괜찮을듯
17:12 Leaf: 아씨괄
17:12 Beomsan: 슬라이더랑은 다른느낌임 확실히
17:12 Leaf: 느린부분 존나어렴냉ㅋㅋ
17:12 Beomsan: 애초에 보컬이
17:12 Beomsan: 이렇게
17:12 Beomsan: 끊기는부분이많으면
17:12 Beomsan: 보컬위주로잡는건 나중가서 실수로 ㅈ느껴질 수가 있어서
17:12 Beomsan: 설계가중요함
17:13 Leaf: 너..
17:13 Leaf: 공감하였읍니다.
17:13 Beomsan: 내...
17:13 Leaf: 보컬중간에 드럼이껴잇읍니다
17:13 Beomsan: 00:50:185 (1) - 이거는 뭐 블랭킷을 하려고 한건지 만건지 모르곘오요
17:13 Beomsan: 보컬중간에 드럼이 껴있는걸 리듬으로 활용할 수도 있는데
17:13 Beomsan: 그런 모습이 안보였음
17:14 Beomsan: 보컬 위주로 하려고 했으나 나중가서 뭔가 잘못된걸 꺠닫고
17:14 Beomsan: 뭐 그런느낌?
17:14 Leaf: 00:33:411 (4) - 여기 노트 1개는 ㄹㅇ이내용
17:14 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
17:14 Beomsan: ㄹㅇ임
17:15 Beomsan: 01:00:507 (1,2,3,4) - 01:01:798 - 01:02:120 (2,3) -
17:15 Beomsan: ...
17:15 Beomsan: 이거 완전 힛사 이카사마 아니냐
17:15 Leaf: ㅜ
17:16 Beomsan: 그렇게 좃같진않은데 왜냐면
17:16 Beomsan: 01:02:604 (4,5,6) - 이렇게 앞에 나와야할걸 뒤로 뺸거같아서
17:16 Beomsan: 근데 좀 어색한데??
17:16 Beomsan: 01:01:636 (1) - 이게
17:16 Beomsan: 01:13:411 (1,2,3) - 이거는 뭐
17:16 Beomsan: PP맵치고는 존나 사린거같은데
17:16 Beomsan: 점프 막박을만한 음이 아닌지
17:17 Beomsan: 슬라이더 자체가 어울리지 않다고도 생각되긴 하고
17:17 Beomsan: 01:14:217 (4) - 01:13:572 (2) - 애매한 디스턴스 시각적으로 극혐
17:17 Beomsan: 01:14:540 (1) - 대칭씹망
17:18 Leaf: 악
17:18 Leaf: 손닉's 의 대칭슬라이더 ...
17:18 Leaf: 강의 듣고오갯읍니다
17:18 Beomsan: 그...런걸 봐도 여기선
17:18 Beomsan: 소용없을걸..?
17:19 Beomsan: 근데 너무 딱봐도 좆같네
17:19 Beomsan: 이런 슬라이더 찍는 점의 방식도 아님
17:19 Beomsan: 그렇다고 고쳐줄 능력도 없다
17:19 Beomsan: 패스
17:19 Beomsan: 01:18:572 (1) - 이거 변속말인데
17:19 Leaf: 바로수정하갯읍니다
17:19 Beomsan: 01:18:249 (1) - 이게 조금 느리면 좋겠는데 솔직히 어쩔수없다치고
17:19 Beomsan: 01:18:572 (1) - 이게 좀 빠를순없나?
17:19 Beomsan: 똑같이 안될거같긴한데
17:20 Leaf: 그것은..
17:20 Beomsan: 1/2박으로 하는건 어떰?
17:20 Beomsan: 어차피01:19:217 (3) - 뒤부터는
17:20 Beomsan: 다 1/2라서
17:20 Leaf: 슬라길이 같게한거라 불가능이다..
17:20 Beomsan: 01:18:249 (1) - 이거보다 더 빠르면됨
17:20 Beomsan: ㅎ..
17:20 Beomsan: 잘몰겠음
17:20 Beomsan: 모양은좋은데
17:20 Beomsan: 변속이 존나게 안타깝네
17:20 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
17:21 Beomsan: 01:18:249 (1) - 이게 빨라야만 한다는게
17:21 Leaf: 나도느꼇는데 어쩔수없는 부분이다
17:21 Beomsan: 01:18:572 (1) - 이게 느려야만 한다는게
17:21 Beomsan: ㅈㄴ슬프네
17:21 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
17:21 Leaf: 01:18:572 (1) - 여길 빠르게할렴녀
17:21 Leaf: 걍 꽃잎모양 갈아엎어야한다
17:21 Leaf: 앙기뮤띢
17:22 Beomsan: 발상자체는 좋았는데 곡이랑 별로 안맞았다
17:22 Beomsan: 01:41:798 (1,2,3) - 이건뭐임?
17:22 Leaf: 하나 = 꽃 ㄹㅇ
17:22 Beomsan: 개때리고싶네
17:22 Beomsan: 쳐맞으,실?
17:22 Leaf: 않이
17:22 Leaf: ㄴㅋ
17:22 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
17:23 Leaf: 제발바주샌
17:23 Beomsan: 02:01:475 (2) - 이거는
17:23 Beomsan: 슬라꼬리 스택인거같은데
17:23 Beomsan: 02:01:152 (1) - 이거랑 각도가 너무안좋음
17:24 Beomsan: 왼쪽으로 빼야할거같은데
17:24 Beomsan: 02:04:056 (3,4) -
17:24 Beomsan: 02:04:378 (5,6) -
17:24 Beomsan: RG?
17:24 Beomsan: 딱봐도존나헷갈리네
17:24 Leaf: ㅐ내는모른다 ..
17:24 Leaf: 내는몰느다..
17:24 Beomsan: 플레이어강간하고싶으면
17:25 Beomsan: 냅둬도됨
17:25 Beomsan: 저건
17:25 Beomsan: 음
17:25 Beomsan: 그렇게헷갈리지도않나??
17:25 Beomsan: 버리고
17:25 Leaf: 저가 킥슬라 존나혐오해서
17:25 Beomsan: 좋다가 01:40:023 (4,5) - 여기서
17:25 Leaf: 바꿀까생각중입니다
17:25 Beomsan: 모양개빡치네
17:26 Beomsan: 그냥노트3개로
17:26 Beomsan: 점프를만드셈
17:26 Beomsan: 이거쓸바에
17:27 Beomsan: 힛사는 좀 늘은거같은데
17:28 Beomsan: 01:26:314 (1,2) - 빠졌구요
17:28 Leaf: 01:00:507 (1,2) - 여기도빠졋냉
17:28 Leaf: ㄹㅇ
17:28 Beomsan: 01:29:217 - 여기서부터 좀
17:28 Beomsan: 힛사 전환이 요상함
17:28 Beomsan: 아까 노트 보면서도 느낀건데
17:29 Beomsan: 전환 자체는 상관없는데 요상함
17:29 Beomsan: 뭔말인지아려나
17:29 Beomsan: 01:30:669 -
17:29 Beomsan: 이런거
17:29 Beomsan: 01:32:120 (3,4,5) - 이거랑 상반되고
17:29 Beomsan: 01:33:411 (7,8) - 여기엔 후ㅣ슬이 없는데 이유를 모르겠고
17:30 Beomsan: 의도를 말안하면 모를 그런
17:30 Beomsan: 02:00:669 (4) - 애디션 드럼...
17:30 Beomsan: 글쎄 같은 생각을 하게되는
17:31 Leaf: 01:33:411 (7,8) -
17:31 Leaf: 여기 휘슬이니?
17:31 Beomsan: 흰틱에
17:31 Beomsan: 휘슬없어서
17:31 Beomsan: 좀 비어있는듯한 느낌을 받았음
17:31 Beomsan: 그리고 앞에 잘게 두 파트가 힛사 논리가 다름
17:31 Beomsan: 여러모로 의아한 부분이었음
17:31 Beomsan: 01:38:733 (5,6,7) - 빠졌고
17:32 Beomsan: 01:52:120 (1) - 빠짐
17:32 Leaf: 저기는
17:32 Leaf: 무엇을넣어야하니
17:32 Beomsan: 01:51:314 (2,3,4) - 이건 좋은데 01:51:959 (7,8) - 여기서 반복은좀
17:32 Beomsan: W F
17:32 Beomsan: 01:52:120 (1) -
17:32 Beomsan: 그러고보니 피니시에는 다른 힛사를 안섞는건가?
17:32 Beomsan: 그렇게 보이는데
17:33 Leaf: 와타시..
17:33 Leaf: 악기소리나는곳만 박는다데스
17:33 Beomsan: 음...
17:34 Beomsan: 그러니까
17:34 Beomsan: 피니쉬랑 휘슬 클랩을
17:34 Beomsan: 같이쓰질않냐
17:34 Beomsan: 이거임
17:34 Beomsan: 02:04:701 (7) - 테일 클랩제거해서 들어보셈 이게 나은거같은데
17:34 Leaf: 01:52:120 (1) - 여기에 클랩소리가 없는게아님?
17:34 Beomsan: WF라구요
17:34 Beomsan: 휘슬 피니쉬
17:35 Beomsan: 01:55:830 - 01:56:152 - 01:56:475 - 여기 힛사 존나 쌔게박아놓고
17:35 Beomsan: 01:57:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - 뒤로가니까 더밋밋해짐
17:36 Beomsan: 01:56:798 (1,2,3,4) - 여기가 가장 귀에 잘들림
17:36 Beomsan: 밋밋한게
17:36 Beomsan: 뒤는모르겠고
17:36 Beomsan: 앞이 너무 쎄다는 감상이 있는데 그건 둘째치고
17:36 Beomsan: 56789저기도 피니쉬좀
17:36 Beomsan: 798이네
17:37 Beomsan: 00:07:927 (2) - 탁탁00:07:927 (2) - 챙챙챙챙 뭐임
17:37 Leaf: 아니개어렵내
17:37 Beomsan: 아니
17:37 Beomsan: 00:08:249 (3,4,5,6) -
17:37 Beomsan: 챙챙챙챙
17:37 Beomsan: 소프트휘슬이라도 써야겠다 이건
17:37 Beomsan: 겨울에 쪼그라든 부랄마냥
17:37 Beomsan: 힘이없어보이네
17:38 Beomsan: 00:59:701 -
17:38 Beomsan: 휘슬빠짐
17:38 Beomsan: 01:00:507 (1,2) - 여기에 뭐가 들리는거같은걸?
17:39 Beomsan: 01:14:217 (4) - ^
17:39 Leaf: 님아
17:39 Leaf: 01:00:507 (1,2) -
17:39 Leaf: 1클랩 2 휘슬임 ?
17:40 Beomsan: 정답
17:40 Leaf: 아니 그럼맞잖아
17:40 Beomsan: ?
17:40 Leaf: 아
17:40 Leaf: 아까 빠진거 내가넣엇구나
17:40 Beomsan: ㅅㅂ;;
17:40 Leaf: ㅋㅋ
17:40 Beomsan: 그럼됐구요
17:41 Beomsan: 00:13:733 (6) - 여기진짜
17:41 Beomsan: 휘슬할거임?
17:41 Leaf: 넁
17:41 Beomsan: 뒤진다..
17:42 Leaf: ㅜ
17:42 Beomsan: 00:10:669 (3) - 여기는...
17:42 Beomsan: 암것도안넣을고야??
17:42 Leaf: 넁
17:42 Beomsan: 뒤진다..?
17:42 Beomsan: 00:13:733 (6) - 당장 클랩으로 바꿔주새요.
17:42 Leaf: 무엇을넣어야하나요 센세
17:43 Beomsan: 10669는
17:43 Beomsan: 휘슬이요
17:43 Beomsan: 00:14:056 (1) - 여기서부터 절 따라하세요
17:43 Beomsan: 00:14:056 (1) - 크랩00:14:540 (2) - 크랩지우고
17:43 Beomsan: 이 크랩아!
17:43 Leaf: 않이
17:44 Leaf: 그건않이애요
17:44 Beomsan: 조오까튼
17:44 Leaf: ㅋㅋ
17:44 Beomsan: SC77에
17:44 Beomsan: 히트노말이라도있어오??
17:44 Beomsan: 소리가왜저렇게둔탁해
17:44 Beomsan: 맘에안드네
17:44 Beomsan: 챡 챡거리는
17:44 Beomsan: 모래같은소리를
17:44 Beomsan: 00:14:540 (2) - 여따넣고 아까 말한대로하면
17:44 Beomsan: 완벽한데
17:45 Beomsan: 그냥 냅둬도 상관없겟다
17:45 Beomsan: (2)말임
17:45 Beomsan: 저기 힛사 조까틈
17:46 Beomsan: 현재로선
17:46 Leaf: 아
17:46 Leaf: 저기는 저가 크랩임
17:46 Leaf: ㅋㅋ
17:46 Beomsan: 님
17:46 Beomsan: 진짜
17:46 Beomsan: 잘
17:46 Beomsan: 생각해보시구요
17:46 Beomsan: ㅋㅋ
17:46 Beomsan: SC76에 피니쉬밖에없ㄴㅔ
17:46 Beomsan: 77휘슬을 76에도 넣어서 00:38:572 (1) - 여기 머리 추가좀
17:47 Beomsan: 00:53:249 (2) - 머리휘슬 테일삭제
17:47 Beomsan: 00:54:701 (5) - 머리휘슬 꼬리클랩
17:48 Beomsan: 01:02:927 (6) - 휘슬
17:48 Leaf: 님아
17:48 Beomsan: ㄷㅊ고하셈
17:48 Leaf: 보컬에 박는것임?
17:48 Leaf: 아
17:49 Beomsan: 님
17:49 Beomsan: 그전에해논걸제발
17:49 Beomsan: 생각을하면서하셔야죠
17:49 Beomsan: 00:53:249 (2) - 완전개쒸발이잖이거
17:49 Leaf: 아니 전 ..
17:50 Beomsan: 쿵 짝쿵 쿵짝 이거였는데 갑자기 짝쿵짝쿵급으로 바뀜
17:50 Beomsan: 그렇단건아니고
17:51 Leaf: 림아
17:51 Leaf: 저가 힛사는 이해가안대서 재껴야할각나왔음
17:51 Beomsan: ㅇ...
17:51 Beomsan: 일단말한거는
17:51 Beomsan: 하세요제발
17:51 Beomsan: 못믿겠으면
17:51 Beomsan: 다른사람한테
17:51 Beomsan: 물어보시구요
17:51 Leaf: 아니저가
17:52 Leaf: 01:02:927 (6) - 여기 휘슬임??
17:52 Beomsan: 님
17:52 Beomsan: 저게
17:52 Beomsan: 01:01:636 -
17:52 Beomsan: 이거잖아요
17:52 Beomsan: 여기뭐들어가있음
17:52 Leaf: 01:01:636 - 여기빨간틱에 드럼소리있는데
17:52 Leaf: 01:02:927 (6) - 여긴 소리가없음
17:53 Beomsan: 님
17:53 Beomsan: 진짜
17:53 Beomsan: 하고싶은말이
17:53 Beomsan: 뭐냐면요
17:53 Beomsan: 힛사넣을때
17:53 Beomsan: 곡만들때 쓴 샘플사운드랑
17:53 Beomsan: 똑같은거씀?
17:53 Beomsan: 아니죠
17:53 Beomsan: 조오까튼 랭맵에서 쿵짝거리는거 대충 빼쓰고 그런거잖음
17:53 Beomsan: 그럼 노래를 무조건 맞춘다는 생각은 버리는게 좋음
17:53 Leaf: 아
17:53 Leaf: 저 무조껀 맞췄음
17:53 Beomsan: 그 힛사를 어떻게해야 제대로 활용할수있냐
17:53 Leaf: ㅋㅋ
17:53 Beomsan: 그걸 생각해야지
17:53 Beomsan: 같은 사운드 쓰는거도 아닌데
17:54 Beomsan: 똑같이하면가끔
17:54 Beomsan: 조오깥단말임
17:54 Beomsan: ㅇㅋ?
17:54 Beomsan: 힛사 하는게 기본적으로 곡 따라간다고 생각하면서
17:54 Leaf: 아
17:54 Beomsan: 거기서 자연스러움을 찾으란거
17:55 Leaf: 저 넘 어려움
17:55 Leaf: ㅋㅋ
Settia
2017-04-02 21:52 Settia: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1222081 Suzuyu - Euphorium [AstralAir]]
2017-04-02 21:52 Leaf: sure
2017-04-02 21:54 Settia: 00:06:314 (1) - 00:07:443 (1) - 00:15:185 (1) - 00:15:830 (3) - 00:16:152 (4) - add finish w
2017-04-02 21:54 Leaf: !
2017-04-02 21:55 Leaf: add
2017-04-02 21:55 Settia: 00:35:991 (1) - change to normal additions?
2017-04-02 21:55 Settia: 00:38:572 (1) - same sound as this section i think w
2017-04-02 21:57 Settia: oh nvm im stupid
2017-04-02 21:58 Leaf: 00:35:991 (1) - It sounds like a drum.
2017-04-02 21:58 Settia: dont care about avove
2017-04-02 21:58 Settia: 01:12:120 (1) - add some of hitsound?
2017-04-02 21:58 Leaf: oh
2017-04-02 21:58 Leaf: yess
2017-04-02 21:59 Settia: 01:18:894 - missing clap i think w
2017-04-02 21:59 Leaf: fact
2017-04-02 22:00 Leaf: i'm baka
2017-04-02 22:03 Settia: 01:32:765 - 01:33:572 - 01:33:894 - 01:33:249 (6) - i can hear synbal sound on them so add finish? but kinda loud w
2017-04-02 22:04 Settia: 01:34:056 (1) - this too
2017-04-02 22:04 Leaf: add+
2017-04-02 22:04 Settia: 01:39:217 (1) - finish~
2017-04-02 22:05 Leaf: holy I was missing a lot of finish
2017-04-02 22:05 Settia: 01:41:798 (1) - 01:42:765 (3) - too w
2017-04-02 22:05 Settia: ww
2017-04-02 22:08 Settia: 01:43:572 (2) - whistle and 01:43:733 (3) - clap? i can hear that clap but idk whether it fits them
2017-04-02 22:10 Settia: 01:48:733 (3) - remove clap this sound is not clap i think
2017-04-02 22:11 Leaf: fix
2017-04-02 22:11 Settia: 01:51:314 (2) - same as above
2017-04-02 22:12 Leaf: fix
2017-04-02 22:12 Leaf: 01:40:023 (4,5) -
2017-04-02 22:12 Leaf: add finish ?
2017-04-02 22:13 Settia: it seems so
2017-04-02 22:13 Leaf: ok
2017-04-02 22:14 Settia: 01:55:830 - 01:56:152 - 01:56:475 - finish too? but kinda loud
2017-04-02 22:15 Settia: 02:03:733 (1) - finish
2017-04-02 22:16 Leaf: add
2017-04-02 22:17 Settia: 02:04:620 - clap 02:04:701 (7) - remove clap then add whistle. its just suggestion i think its better?
2017-04-02 22:17 Settia: aa time line bugged
2017-04-02 22:18 Settia: 02:05:023 (1) - finish~
2017-04-02 22:19 Leaf: yess
2017-04-02 22:19 Settia: that's all~
Affirmation
As you requested

[이지]
00:32:120 (1) - 2/1슬라이더보다는 3/2슬라이더가 좀 더 좋을것 같아요.
00:34:701 - 여기 강한 드럼음이 있는데 클리커블로 만들어주시는게 어떤가여
00:37:282 (1) - 여기도 00:37:765 - 여기에 비트가 있는게 더 좋을듯?

[노말]
00:07:443 (3) - 이걸 00:07:765 - 여기서 끝내시고 00:08:088 - 여기 비트 추가하는게 더 좋을것 같네여
01:14:540 - 여기에 드럼 비트가 들어가는게 좋아보여요, 단순 스피너로 때우기에는 조금 허전해보이네요
02:05:991 (3,4) - 스택해보는게 어떤가요?

[최상위난이도]
00:29:540 (1,2) - 약간 리딩이 헷갈릴 수 있지 않을까요?
00:34:701 (1) - 중요한 드럼음 다 빼먹으신것 같네요. 00:35:189 - 여기 같은거
00:56:314 (4) - 여기 00:56:472 - 클리커블 노트가 들어가면 보컬표현도 되고 00:57:604 (4,5) - 랑 일관성도 맞출 수 있어서 좋을것 같아요
01:34:701 (3,5,3,5,7) - 저같으면 힛사같은데 강조하기 위해서라도 뉴콤 스팸 했을듯.

GL
Topic Starter
Leaf

Neoskylove wrote:

As you requested

[이지]
00:32:120 (1) - 2/1슬라이더보다는 3/2슬라이더가 좀 더 좋을것 같아요.
00:34:701 - 여기 강한 드럼음이 있는데 클리커블로 만들어주시는게 어떤가여
00:37:282 (1) - 여기도 00:37:765 - 여기에 비트가 있는게 더 좋을듯?

[노말]
00:07:443 (3) - 이걸 00:07:765 - 여기서 끝내시고 00:08:088 - 여기 비트 추가하는게 더 좋을것 같네여
01:14:540 - 여기에 드럼 비트가 들어가는게 좋아보여요, 단순 스피너로 때우기에는 조금 허전해보이네요
02:05:991 (3,4) - 스택해보는게 어떤가요?

[최상위난이도]
00:29:540 (1,2) - 약간 리딩이 헷갈릴 수 있지 않을까요?
00:34:701 (1) - 중요한 드럼음 다 빼먹으신것 같네요. 00:35:189 - 여기 같은거
00:56:314 (4) - 여기 00:56:472 - 클리커블 노트가 들어가면 보컬표현도 되고 00:57:604 (4,5) - 랑 일관성도 맞출 수 있어서 좋을것 같아요
01:34:701 (3,5,3,5,7) - 저같으면 힛사같은데 강조하기 위해서라도 뉴콤 스팸 했을듯.

GL
모든 부분 수정했습니다 감사합니다 :)
Reillia
[ㅎ]
전 난이도 키아이타임 통일 하는게? 하드 처럼 맞추는거 추천

[손닉 하드]
00:27:604 (4) - 언스냅 zz
01:49:540 (1,2,3,4,1,1) - 전과 후로 1/2박자가 꾸준히 나오다가 갑자기 박자가 텅텅 비니까 이게 뭐지 하는 느낌이 들었네용..

[레프트 인세인]
00:05:991 (2,3,4,5,2) - 오버랩을 피했으면 하는게 솔직한 바람..ㅋㅋ
00:30:507 (3,1,1) - 일직선으로 만들면 어떨가 싶네용

[Settia's Extra]
00:10:507 (2,2) - stack miss?
00:29:540 - i feel weird you skip this downbeat there's a strong drum sound
00:49:540 (3) - move 388 357 for 00:48:894 (1,2,3) - 00:49:540 (3,4) - visual comfortable
01:17:282 (2,3,4) - add nc? cuz these are have sv change
01:29:217 (1,2) - why use anti jump? i feel so weird

[막난]
01:18:572 (1) - sv 빠르게 해서 1/2로 만들고 01:18:894 - 여기에 노트 찍는게 더 좋아보일거 같네용
01:24:217 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 01:34:540 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 전자는 보통 키아이고 후자는 드럼으로 강조되는 느낌이 있는데 전자의 점프랑 후자의 점프의 차이가 크게 없다는게 아쉽네용
Settia

[C u r i] wrote:

[Settia's Extra]
00:10:507 (2,2) - stack miss?
00:29:540 - i feel weird you skip this downbeat there's a strong drum sound
00:49:540 (3) - move 388 357 for 00:48:894 (1,2,3) - 00:49:540 (3,4) - visual comfortable
01:17:282 (2,3,4) - add nc? cuz these are have sv change
01:29:217 (1,2) - why use anti jump? i feel so weird i think it's okay :>
no reply = fixed!

thank you for mod!

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274,300,73330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,300,73411,6,0,P|323:314|376:290,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,255,73733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
363,152,73894,6,0,P|326:187|320:245,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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104,206,77282,6,0,L|110:68,1,135.000005149842,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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298,47,79056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
347,169,79217,2,0,P|300:182|254:166,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,82,79540,1,8,0:0:0:0:
450,282,79701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
454,82,79862,6,0,L|451:195,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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430,276,80507,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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451,180,80830,1,8,0:0:0:0:
321,350,80991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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321,350,81636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,306,81798,2,0,P|92:273|78:235,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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206,362,82282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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284,251,82685,1,8,0:0:0:0:
259,248,82765,1,8,0:0:0:0:
453,120,82927,2,0,B|443:172|443:172|456:203|456:203|445:282,1,148.50000453186,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,348,83249,2,0,P|297:297|322:237,1,99.0000030212403,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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352,356,96556,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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194,66,96959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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284,314,97604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,183,97765,6,0,P|287:206|288:319,1,198.000006042481,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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190,260,98411,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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234,50,99701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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184,277,102282,2,0,P|195:188|84:127,1,198.000006042481,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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152,236,105507,1,12,0:0:0:0:
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140,150,107443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,282,107604,2,0,P|286:232|269:184,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,63,107927,2,0,P|129:113|146:161,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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139,149,108894,1,2,0:0:0:0:
206,375,109056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,254,109217,2,0,L|132:246,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,147,109540,6,0,P|213:184|213:273,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,219,110023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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104,73,120185,2,0,P|146:50|206:61,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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299,312,124540,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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401,356,124862,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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470,272,125507,2,0,B|396:268|396:268|354:292|354:292|280:288,1,180,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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2017-04-09 23:34 jieusieu: 00:14:056 (1) -
2017-04-09 23:34 Leaf: 상간없음
2017-04-09 23:34 jieusieu: 00:14:056 (1,2,3,4,5) - 이거 다선택해서
2017-04-09 23:34 Leaf: 스택인것임?
2017-04-09 23:35 jieusieu: 3번서클을 주황색 6번서클이랑 겹치는게
2017-04-09 23:35 Leaf: 바로수정했띠
2017-04-09 23:35 jieusieu: 1번슬라랑 2번서클 거리감이랑 통일되고
2017-04-09 23:35 jieusieu: 하여튼그럼
2017-04-09 23:35 jieusieu: 00:19:217 (1) -
2017-04-09 23:35 jieusieu: 이건좀
2017-04-09 23:35 jieusieu: 에바아닐까요??
2017-04-09 23:35 Leaf: 악
2017-04-09 23:35 Leaf: 악
2017-04-09 23:35 Leaf: 악
2017-04-09 23:36 jieusieu: 차라리 좀더펴서
2017-04-09 23:36 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780486
2017-04-09 23:36 jieusieu: 이런모양은어떨지??
2017-04-09 23:36 jieusieu: 싫음말구
2017-04-09 23:36 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-09 23:37 jieusieu: 00:32:604 (2) - 개인적으론 1번슬라랑 90도로 맞추는거보단
2017-04-09 23:37 jieusieu: 예각으로 맞추는게괜찮을거같음
2017-04-09 23:38 Leaf: 예각이먼임?
2017-04-09 23:38 jieusieu: 90도보다쩍은거요
2017-04-09 23:38 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-09 23:38 Leaf: 아
2017-04-09 23:38 Leaf: 저 초등학교때 배운거같음
2017-04-09 23:38 jieusieu: 아니
2017-04-09 23:38 jieusieu: 이럼예각이아닌가??
2017-04-09 23:38 jieusieu: ㄹㅇ
2017-04-09 23:39 Leaf: 예ㅃ
2017-04-09 23:39 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780507
2017-04-09 23:39 jieusieu: 이런뜼임하여튼
2017-04-09 23:39 jieusieu: 00:37:765 (2,3,1) -
2017-04-09 23:39 jieusieu: 제생각엔
2017-04-09 23:40 jieusieu: 00:37:282 (1,2,3) - 모양 자체를 두고 보면 나쁘진 않은데
2017-04-09 23:40 jieusieu: 그 다음에 오는 모양이 하필이면 00:38:572 (1) - 이라 좀 보기 나쁜거같음
2017-04-09 23:41 jieusieu: 그런데딱히 대안법은 떠오르지 않네요
2017-04-09 23:41 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-09 23:41 Leaf: 쫌그런겉도같아요
2017-04-09 23:41 Leaf: 00:38:249 (3) - 여기
2017-04-09 23:41 Leaf: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780523
2017-04-09 23:41 Leaf: 일케하면 ㅍㅌㅊ?
2017-04-09 23:42 jieusieu: 흠
2017-04-09 23:42 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780533
2017-04-09 23:43 jieusieu: 이런건어떰??
2017-04-09 23:43 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-09 23:43 Leaf: ㄲ
2017-04-09 23:44 jieusieu: 그리고 00:38:572 (1,2) -
2017-04-09 23:44 jieusieu: 똑같이놓기엔좀그런게
2017-04-09 23:44 jieusieu: 하여튼좀그럼
2017-04-09 23:45 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780549 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780553
2017-04-09 23:46 Leaf: ㄹㅇ
2017-04-09 23:46 jieusieu: 00:41:636 (2,3) -
2017-04-09 23:46 jieusieu: 이거 슬라이더 끝부ㅜㄴ을 삼각형으로 맞추는게
2017-04-09 23:46 jieusieu: 더이쁠거같음
2017-04-09 23:47 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780570
2017-04-09 23:47 Leaf: 아
2017-04-09 23:47 Leaf: 바로수정했음
2017-04-09 23:48 jieusieu: 00:46:314 (1) -
2017-04-09 23:48 jieusieu: 별거아니긴한데
2017-04-09 23:48 jieusieu: 아 뭐라고하지
2017-04-09 23:48 jieusieu: 3을 중심으로 대칭했을때
2017-04-09 23:48 jieusieu: 안맞음하여튼
2017-04-09 23:49 Leaf: 확인
2017-04-09 23:50 jieusieu: 그래서 각을좀더줘서
2017-04-09 23:50 jieusieu: 아
2017-04-09 23:50 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780606
2017-04-09 23:50 jieusieu: 이런모양도어떨까하는데
2017-04-09 23:51 jieusieu: 이거는좀취향임
2017-04-09 23:51 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-09 23:52 jieusieu: 00:55:991 (3) -
2017-04-09 23:53 jieusieu: 아
2017-04-09 23:53 jieusieu: 이거는뭔가
2017-04-09 23:53 Leaf: 앜
2017-04-09 23:53 jieusieu: 좀맘에안드는데
2017-04-09 23:53 jieusieu: 건들기가쫌
2017-04-09 23:53 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-09 23:55 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780659
2017-04-09 23:55 jieusieu: 막건드려봤는데
2017-04-09 23:55 jieusieu: 아니다싶으면 스킵ㄱ
2017-04-09 23:56 Leaf: 저가 더 생각해보갯음
2017-04-09 23:56 jieusieu: 00:57:927 (1,2,3) -
2017-04-09 23:56 jieusieu: 이건 ㄹㅇ
2017-04-09 23:56 jieusieu: 부숴버릴수도있음저가
2017-04-09 23:56 Leaf: 악씨괄
2017-04-09 23:57 Leaf: 거리맞추갯음..
2017-04-09 23:57 jieusieu: 냅
2017-04-09 23:57 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-09 23:57 jieusieu: 01:05:669 (1) -
2017-04-09 23:57 jieusieu: 이거는 좀더 각주는게나을듯ㄱ
2017-04-09 23:58 jieusieu: 왼쪽으로
2017-04-09 23:58 Leaf: 않이
2017-04-09 23:58 Leaf: 어떻게함??
2017-04-09 23:58 jieusieu: 01:06:152 (2) - 랑 수직으로 되도 ㄱㅊ을거같ㅇ므
2017-04-09 23:58 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780693
2017-04-09 23:59 jieusieu: 01:07:927 (5) - 01:08:572 (2) -
2017-04-09 23:59 Leaf: 바로수정
2017-04-09 23:59 jieusieu: 갑자기 곡선이많아서
2017-04-09 23:59 jieusieu: 좀불안하니까
2017-04-09 23:59 jieusieu: 직선으로바꿔주세요
2017-04-10 00:00 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780709
2017-04-10 00:00 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-10 00:00 Leaf: 확인
2017-04-10 00:01 jieusieu: 01:13:572 (2,3) -
2017-04-10 00:01 jieusieu: 아이건
2017-04-10 00:01 jieusieu: 어떻게 잘해볼수있을거같지않음??
2017-04-10 00:01 Leaf: 아
2017-04-10 00:01 Leaf: 거기망햇음ㅋㅋ
2017-04-10 00:01 jieusieu: 01:14:540 (1) -
2017-04-10 00:01 jieusieu: 이거랑
2017-04-10 00:01 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-10 00:02 Leaf: 님
2017-04-10 00:02 jieusieu: 네
2017-04-10 00:02 Leaf: 저
2017-04-10 00:02 Leaf: 뇌정지왔음
2017-04-10 00:02 jieusieu: 아
2017-04-10 00:02 jieusieu: ,,,,
2017-04-10 00:02 Leaf: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-10 00:03 jieusieu: 그럼일단 다음꺼보죠
2017-04-10 00:03 jieusieu: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-10 00:03 jieusieu: 01:16:959 (1,1,1,1,1) -
2017-04-10 00:03 jieusieu: 발상참괜찮은거같은데
2017-04-10 00:03 jieusieu: 그거
2017-04-10 00:03 jieusieu: 컨트롤 쉬프트 r 해서
2017-04-10 00:04 jieusieu: 10도만 줘보시는게 더이쁜거같ㅇㅁ
2017-04-10 00:04 jieusieu: 10~15
2017-04-10 00:05 jieusieu: 01:38:088 (2,3) -
2017-04-10 00:05 jieusieu: 이건그냥
2017-04-10 00:05 jieusieu: 수직으로놔도될거같음
2017-04-10 00:05 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780761
2017-04-10 00:06 jieusieu: 01:41:798 (1,2,3) -
2017-04-10 00:07 jieusieu: 이거 할거면
2017-04-10 00:07 jieusieu: 슬라이더 머리랑 꼬리가 안쪽에있는게 더 나을거같음
2017-04-10 00:07 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780781
2017-04-10 00:07 jieusieu: 01:44:378 (1) -
2017-04-10 00:07 jieusieu: 이거 빨간점 좀만올려서
2017-04-10 00:08 jieusieu: 00:48:894 (1) -
2017-04-10 00:08 jieusieu: 이런느낌만드는게어떨지
2017-04-10 00:08 jieusieu: 01:45:185 (3) - 이거좀더내리는게 균형맞아보이는거같음
2017-04-10 00:09 jieusieu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780800
2017-04-10 00:10 jieusieu: 01:53:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
2017-04-10 00:10 jieusieu: 여기 분위기에 비해 점프가 너무큼
2017-04-10 00:10 jieusieu: 그 전 점프도 그렇고
2017-04-10 00:11 Leaf: 님 아
2017-04-10 00:11 Leaf: 수정중임
2017-04-10 00:11 jieusieu: 아
2017-04-10 00:11 jieusieu: ㄹㅇ??임
2017-04-10 00:11 Leaf: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-10 00:12 jieusieu: 저그럼여기까지할꼐요ㅕ
2017-04-10 00:12 Leaf: 아
2017-04-10 00:12 Leaf: 말한거
2017-04-10 00:12 Leaf: 저가 다고친거같음
2017-04-10 00:12 Leaf: ㅋㅋ
2017-04-10 00:12 jieusieu: 아니
2017-04-10 00:12 Leaf: 점프뺴고임
2017-04-10 00:12 jieusieu: 저그럼
2017-04-10 00:12 jieusieu: 올리겠음
2017-04-10 00:13 Leaf: ㄴ[
2017-04-10 00:13 jieusieu: 아왜요
2017-04-10 00:16 Leaf: 올렷음??
2017-04-10 00:16 jieusieu: 아니
2017-04-10 00:16 jieusieu: 님 ㄴ라고 친게아니라
2017-04-10 00:16 jieusieu: 네라고친거임??
2017-04-10 00:17 Leaf: 내
Enon


정말 재밌네요 ^
Left
님 스킨이 더재밌음
Anze
[AstralAir]

00:38:572 (1) - 초록선 하나 제거

00:49:378 (2,3,4,5,6) - 3번에서 가사가 시작하는데 2번부터 서클점프라 어색한 것 같음. 1번과 2번 사이 간격을 줄여보면 어떰?

00:52:765 (1,2,4) - 개인적인 생각인데, 이 슬라이더들을 컨트롤+G 하면 더 좋은 동선이 나오는 것 같음.

01:03:088 (1) - 이걸 각진 슬라로 해야만 할까요? 01:04:378 (1) - 이거 복붙해서 부드럽게 하는 편이 반복되는 느낌도 살리고 좋은 듯.

01:14:540 (1) - 여기 뭔가 허전한데 멋진 힛사좀 넣어보셈. 전 난이도 공통

01:28:733 (4,1) - 이 슬라이더와 서클이 직선상에 있지 않네요. 의도가 아니시라면 직선으로 수정하시는 게 어떨까요.




[Hard]

꽤 높은 bpm의 단타와 슬라이더 속도에 비해 AR이 느린 게 아닌가 하는 느낌을 받았습니다.

00:27:603 (4) - Ai가 여기 언스냅이라고 합니다.




[Normal]

00:47:604 (1) - 여기 음이 없어서 힛사 안 박으신거임? 전 그래도 휘슬 넣는게 좋다 보는데, 취향 차이인 듯.

00:50:185 (1) - ^

01:33:411 (6) - 여기도 전 헤드에 휘슬 테일에 클랩 박으면 좋을 것 같다고 생각함..



[Easy]

01:30:830 (1) - 휘슬?
Beomsan

Left wrote:

님 스킨이 더재밌음
이 말 하려다가 스레드에서 하긴 좀 그래서 참았는데 너무 시원하네요 ^^^^
Enon
메구밍이 만만해?
Elfin
via forum pm

[General]
  1. 제가 플레이 했을 당시에 저런 캐릭은 없었던것 같아서, 혹시 몰라 검색해보니 딱히 관련이 있는 이미지는 아니더군요. 딱히 그걸 제한하는 부분은 없지만, 만일을 위해서 되도록이면 관련 있는 이미지를 사용하는게 좋지 않을까 조심스럽게 제안해봅니다.
  2. 00:01:153 - 30% 볼륨이 곡에 비해서 좀 작은감이 있습니다. 일단 다른 30% 부분에 비해서는 소리 자체가 확실하게 들리는면이 있으니 40 ~ 50% 사이로 책정해두는게 좋지 않을까 싶습니다.
  3. 00:39:862 - 이 지점부터는 곡 자체의 소리가 점점 커지는 느낌이 있으니, 볼륨을 서서히 올려줘도 괜찮을것 같네요.
  4. 01:18:572 - 울리는 소리 자체가 너무 커서 곡하고 좀 따로노는듯한 감이 있습니다. 이부분에서의 히트사운드 볼륨을 좀 줄여주면 해결은 될것같네요.


[Easy]
  1. 00:08:572 (3) - 솔직하게 이 음은, 이 전에 나오는 슬라이더 끝부분과 이어지는 감이 있습니다. 그래서인지 이걸 서클로 둬서 표현을 하기에는 살짝 애매한 감이 있네요.
  2. 00:13:411 (2) - 슬라이더 끝부분에 클랩. 그쪽이 좀더 느낌은 살아있는것 같네요.
  3. 00:34:701 (1) - 00:37:282 (1) - 슬라이더 앞부분에 있는 소리가, 뒤쪽에도 들리는 느낌이 있으니 똑같이 휘슬 추가해주는게 좋을것 같습니다.
  4. 01:00:507 (1,2) - 3/2 리핏으로 두는게 곡하고는 제일 잘맞는다고 봅니다. 흰색 지점에는 딱히 매칭되는 소리 자체가 없어요.
  5. 01:03:088 (1,2) - 마찬가지로 앞쪽에 들리는 가사나 소리는 흰색 지점이 아닌, 01:01:798 (3,4)와 같은 느낌으로 진행이 됩니다. 그래서 그런지 표현이 조금 아쉽다고 생각이 드네요.
  6. 01:14:217 (2) - 이것도 마찬가지로 여기보다는 바로 다음 지점인 01:14:378가 소리는 더 확실하게 들립니다. 하지만 어짜피 이지라 1/2는 되도록 피하게 되니, 뒤쪽에 들리는 음 자체가 캐치하기에는 확실한 음이 아닌 이 노트는 그냥 빼버려도 인식하는데 아무런 문제가 없다고 봅니다.
  7. 01:18:572 - 이 지점부터 흰색선 8개를 기준으로 두던 뉴콤보 사이클 자체가 조금씩 깨지기 시작합니다. 일관성을 위해서 아래와 같이 수정해주시는게 좋을것 같네요.
    1. 01:18:572 (3) - 01:23:733 (3) - 01:26:314 (3) - 뉴콤보 추가
    2. 01:19:862 (1) - 01:22:443 (1) - 01:25:023 (1) - 01:26:798 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
    3. 01:21:475 (2) - 아래쪽에 있는 01:19:862 (1,2)부분 모딩을 수정했다면 01:21:152지점에, 아닐경우엔 01:21:475 (2)에 뉴콤보 추가
  8. 01:19:862 (1,2) - 실제로 01:21:152 지점에서 가사가 길게 이어지는 느낌이 있음에도 불구하고, 1번이 리핏을 이어버린 탓에 2번 슬라이더가 의미가 없어지네요. 서클이 연속으로 나오는걸 피하고 싶다면, 차라리 이런식으로 표현을 해버리는게 매칭도 더 잘 되지 않았을가 싶습니다: http://sylphi.s-ul.eu/QdxD1PYa
  9. 01:26:314 (3,1) - 이부분도 솔직하게 좀 애매한 느낌을 감추기는 힘들것 같네요. 그래도 여긴 해결책 자체가 안보이니...


[Normal]
  1. 00:07:282 (2,3,4,5) - 솔직하게 말해서 곡이랑 매칭이 안되는 느낌이 강하네요. 멜로디에 맞췄다고 보기에는 00:08:088 부분에 음이 없는걸 설명하기가 힘들고, 드럼소리에 맞췄다고 보기에는 00:07:927 부분이 설명이 안됩니다.
  2. 00:09:862 (3) - 이부분도 허전한 느낌이 좀 강하긴 하네요. 차라리 이렇게 표현해버리는것도 괜찮을것 같네요: http://sylphi.s-ul.eu/Aqz7VOu4
  3. 00:51:152 (2,3) - 개인적으로 슬라이더 경로랑 서클 위치랑 미묘하게 틀어져서 신경이 쓰이네요. 위치를 좀 더 오른쪽으로 두는게 보기엔 좋을것 같은데...
  4. 00:58:572 (2) - 사실상 이 슬라이더를 1/2 정도 앞으로 당기고 00:58:894에 노트를 추가하는게 좋을것 같아요. 00:58:572 부분에 딱히 드럼소리나, 가사의 시작부분이 있는건 아니라...
  5. 01:00:507 (2,3) - 이지에서 설명했다시피, 소리 자체는 01:00:991 지점이 강합니다.
  6. 01:39:701 (2) - 어느 음에 맞춘건지를 잘 모르겠네요. 사실상 이 부분에는 표현할만한 음이 없어서 오히려 박자리딩에 방해가 된다고 생각이 드네요. (참고로 01:44:378 (1,2,3,4)는 이부분과는 소리가 다르기에, 저대로 냅둬도 맞습니다)
  7. 01:46:959 - 이부분도 충분히 음은 어느정도 있는것 같은데 1/1로만 표현해서 좀 아쉽다는 생각이 드네요. 01:48:733 같은데는 1/2서클 한두개쯤은 둬도 괜찮다고 생각하긴 합니다만...
  8. 01:54:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 박자 중간중간에 두기에는 좀 미묘한 박자가 있다면 차라리 묶어버리는것도 하나의 답이라고 생각해요. 지금 상황대로라면 확실하게 박자를 읽기엔 힘들다고 봅니다.
  9. 02:03:733 (4) - 이것도 02:02:443 (1)처럼 길이를 늘려보는건 어떤가요?
  10. 02:05:991 (3,4) - 이렇게 두는것보단 그냥 스택하는게 보기에 좋을것 같네요.


[Sonnyc's Hard]
  1. 00:27:603 (4) - AIMod에서도 잡는 부분인데, 이거 노트 끝부분이 언스냅이 안되있다고 합니다. 혹시 모르니 확인 부탁드립니다.
  2. 00:48:894 (4) - 전체적으로 뭔가 슬라이더들 담요가 너무 딱딱 맞아떨어지는것 때문에 오히려 이런식으로 약간 빗나간게 눈에 띄이곤 하네요.
  3. 01:52:201 (1) - 이 스피너는 정말 최선인건가요?
  4. 01:57:282 (1) - http://sylphi.s-ul.eu/CGOaEzgB 붉은색인데 뉴콤보 후에도 붉은색... 아무래도 버그인것 같은데 이건 직접 수정해줘야하지 않을까 싶기도...


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  1. 00:01:153 (1,1,1) - 확실히 경로를 완전히 가리거나 그런건 아닌데, 시작 지점 자체가 경로에 완전히 가려져서 인식이 힘들 가능성이 있습니다. 이게 아래쪽으로 또다른 인센이 있는것도 아닌데, 벌써부터 이정도로 가려지는 패턴이 나온다는건 좀...
  2. 02:02:765 (2) - 보통 이런식으로 두면 1리핏이라고 생각될수도 있기에 리딩미스가 생길 가능성이 있다고 봅니다. 차라리 역방향으로 두는게 박자 인식하기엔 좋지 않을까요?


일단 5.6성이 넘는 경우에는 저도 플레이가 잘 안되는 부분이 있어서 모딩을 안합니다.
그래도 의견이 필요하시다면 나중에 인게임으로 PM주시면 테스트플레이라는 형식으로 따로 말씀드리겠습니다.
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