00:52:431 - 00:58:976 I see where your going with this. However the LN anchoring has some very negative downsides to play it.
1. It's uncomfortable for many to play.
2. Majority of players will effectively be mindblocked due to the repetition.
3. Highly unbalanced, I do see the pitch relevance but the "stress" of playing it is not spread evenly between four fingers. It's nice to see pitch relevance here but perhaps consider comfortable play here over pitch relevance. It's only the intro.
With the above stated, consider revising 00:52:431 - 00:58:976
01:18:613 - 01:25:158 Same as above.
01:43:022 (103022|0,103022|3,103158|3) - Idk about this and bits like it. I recommend having the LNs as solo notes. It's just much more comfortable to play at this BPM. Or keep, some players prefer it. *shrugs*
I'm organizing these sections01:44:249 (104249|1,104249|2,104249|3,104249|0,104385|0,104385|3,104385|1,104385|2,104522|0,104522|1,104522|2,104522|3,104658|2,104658|0,104658|3,104658|1) - This makes no sense to me whatsoever. I hear sounds going on that would be suited more to LNs.
Try this or make your own:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7931733 Mmm .... I do not like that idea. But I could take your idea xD
01:45:885 (105885|2,105885|0,105885|3,105954|3,106022|1,106090|2,106158|1,106158|3,106226|0,106295|1,106295|3,106295|2,106363|0,106431|3,106431|2,106499|1,106567|0,106635|3,106704|1,106704|2,106704|0,106772|3,106840|2,106908|1,106976|2,106976|0,106976|3,107045|1,107113|3,107181|2,107249|0,107317|1,107385|3,107385|2,107385|0,107454|1,107522|0,107522|3,107590|2,107658|1,107726|0,107795|3,107795|2,107795|1,107863|0,107931|3,107999|2,108067|0,108067|1,108135|3,108204|2,108272|0,108340|1,108408|3,108476|2,108476|0,108476|1,108545|3,108613|1,108613|0,108681|2,108749|3,108817|1,108885|3,108885|0,108885|2,108954|1,109022|3,109090|2) - Strongly recommend you revise it and use far less LN here. Your going for rank and using LN like this is considered unrankable. Not to mention you use normal notes later that pretty much play to the same sound. Use LN here to instead highlight specific sounds instead.
I will ask some QAT members about the LNs, the truth is that I do not want to change that pattern
01:48:340 (108340|1,108408|3,108476|0,108476|1,108476|2,108545|3,108613|1,108613|0,108681|2,108749|3,108817|1,108885|0,108885|2,108885|3,108954|1,109022|3,109090|2) - maybe a bunch of single LNs would be ok here as though normal notes would suit it better.
I liked this idea, maybe I could change the LNs that exist before those01:49:158 - 01:49:704 - this is 1/3 snap. listen at 50%
√ good point02:01:704 (121704|0) - same as at 01:44:249 Make an LN pattern and end the one notes snap at 02:02:249 for consistency
Mmm ... what I mentioned before
03:03:613 (183613|0,183885|1,184158|3,184431|1,184704|0,184976|3,185249|1,185522|2,185795|0,186067|2,186340|2,186613|3,186885|0,187158|1,187431|2,187976|3,188249|2,188522|1,188795|0,189067|2,189340|1,189613|0,189885|2,190158|3) - I highly recommend deleting these and focus more on percussion here. These strings are not as present as the notes before it and thus redundant to play.
I will try to follow this
03:12:340 - 03:25:431 - The SV play is ok. Personally I think notes would be better here because the SV is kinda constant which is more likely to be found in a loved map rather then ranked, but it's up to you.
03:32:658 (212658|3) - listen closely, sound plays between red and blue tick. check for other parts like this.
03:59:522 (239522|1,239658|1,239795|1,239931|1) - There are only 3 notes played to this sound. Delete the fourth one it's a ghost (pun intended)
√ good point 04:05:249 (245249|2,245249|3,245249|0,245249|1,245385|1,245385|0,245385|3,245385|2,245522|3,245522|2,245522|0,245522|1,245658|0,245658|1,245726|2,245726|3) - If a player manages to get through to here this and the rest of it is gonna kill so many plays. It' not a bad pattern at all it's just difficult.
Mention something similar to the previous mod (it seems to me), for some reason the map is not a "hard" or "insane" difficulty. It would be a little strange to put a simple pattern there being between "difficult" sections. I would like to imply that this map should not be so simple.