1. Extra (5.65 stars, 1270 notes)

1. 01:09:599 (3,1) - stack 1 on the head of 3 properly
2. 01:49:448 why not map a stream here for the piano?
3. if you dont do the above you can remove the green line here 01:49:296
4. 02:03:387 (6,1) - personally I feel stacking these is weird, it would feel better to have some movement between the 2 of them
5. 02:09:296 (3,6) - could stack these on 02:10:508 (5) - since I know you want to stack 3 and 6 otherwise I would have just suggested to stack 6 and 5
6. 02:30:812 (3,4,5) - I dont understand the rhythm change from the jumps to these sliders
7. 02:42:175 (3,4) - add clap to both of them
8. 02:43:539 (1) - move this to x80 y80 so its not overlapping 02:42:933 (3) -
9. 02:43:690 (2,2,2) - you could try to line these up in a line like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7475705 if you do this and just want to code for it poke me and I'll do it for you. best way to do it it do rotate them and make sure that they have the same y axis the rotate it back. (thats just how I do this type of thing xd)
10. 03:36:872 (1) - to 04:18:993 (4) - you miss a fuck ton of claps in this section w
11. 05:10:509 you have 2 timing points here remove 1 of them

Depths wrote:

hi w
[Extra]

1. 01:09:599 (3,1) - stack 1 on the head of 3 properly - fix
2. 01:49:448 why not map a stream here for the piano? - feels unnecessary and would be annoying to some players imo
3. if you dont do the above you can remove the green line here 01:49:296 - fix
4. 02:03:387 (6,1) - personally I feel stacking these is weird, it would feel better to have some movement between the 2 of them - i'll change it if someone brings it up again
5. 02:09:296 (3,6) - could stack these on 02:10:508 (5) - since I know you want to stack 3 and 6 otherwise I would have just suggested to stack 6 and 5 - keeping it imoooooo
6. 02:30:812 (3,4,5) - I dont understand the rhythm change from the jumps to these sliders - same, changed first slider into circles
7. 02:42:175 (3,4) - add clap to both of them - ok
8. 02:43:539 (1) - move this to x80 y80 so its not overlapping 02:42:933 (3) - moved somewhere
9. 02:43:690 (2,2,2) - you could try to line these up in a line like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7475705 if you do this and just want to code for it poke me and I'll do it for you. best way to do it it do rotate them and make sure that they have the same y axis the rotate it back. (thats just how I do this type of thing xd) - keeping them in a curve https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7476059
10. 03:36:872 (1) - to 04:18:993 (4) - you miss a fuck ton of claps in this section w - i got lazy...fixed
11. 05:10:509 you have 2 timing points here remove 1 of them - oh lol

thats pretty much it, really nice map. If you have any questions feel free to poke me in game or on discord if you have any questions~
you should also get a better diff name w - imgay

xLolicore- wrote:

idk you could use something like imprisonment for a diff name xd

Ringer wrote:

hi, late mod from my NM queue

Extra

Generally, I was feeling that you were more and more following the voice as the song progressed, am I wrong, and was it intended? It feels strange to me you emphasize differently the voice depending of the moment - Yeah it was intended, I didn't want to make the map rhythm dense the whole duration because it contains no breaks. For example, the section before second verse is pretty dense rhythm wise so I decided to follow the vocals during the verse to have some sort of "break" before the next kiai. I hope this is a good enough explanation.

01:02:933 - Missing the 6th note of the stream? seems strange especially missing on white tick - fixed, i'm deaf
02:12:327(5) - NC there instead of 02:12:478(1)? - fixed
04:57:781(2,3,4,5) - Slider with reverse arrow instead of 4 notes streams at least for the first one for the player to understand the rythm ? Me and my friends were confused when we tried the map (player point of view) Also why no NC? - changed into a slider, though I don't seem to understand what NC would do here with a slider?
04:59:296(6) - Finish/clap? - added clap, finish seems to loud for me imo
04:59:902(4) - ^ - ^
and same for each end note until the end (except the last note, see below) with also a finish or clap song at 05:03:539(4) fixed
05:06:569 - Note with Finish + Clap and move the spinner(1) to 05:06:645? - fixed