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IRON ATTACK! - Future is Undefined [Osu|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
Kite
All fixed except green lines, as they don't mess with hitsounds or other things.
Also kept beginning in easy and normal

Thanks for the mod~
ziin
[easy]
00:51:992 (4) - so glad you did this. Even before I played it I thought to myself "I hope there's 3 snare hits on that..."

[normal]
00:48:392 (1,2,3,4) - some overlaps. Rest of the map is perfect, so it would be nice to make these perfect too, no?

[suraimu]
The map's fine there's just a few things I don't like:
There's a lot of inconsistent spacing in the map and a lot of speed changes. You're using 5 slider speeds which is okay I suppose, but still it's something to think about. Do you really need that .7 and .8 section? Do you really need that .5 section?

The streams especially aren't placed perfectly, and these aren't really pleasant:
00:23:944 (1,2,3,1) -
because they are so close together. You've already got:
00:16:594 (3,4,5,6) - "normal" compressed stream
00:21:994 (1,2,3) - linear spaced stream
I missed one of the linear spaced streams because I thought they were more antijumps. It probably won't happen again though.

When you use a very low spacing, especially on compressed streams, you shouldn't use grid snap except on the first and last note. spacing here is pretty important to looking good, and if you can get the stream to be perfectly spaced, why not do it?
00:42:992 (4) - there's only a 0.04x difference in spacing here, but I can easily tell this one is too close, so it looks bad.

[insane]
too hard for me on this computer.
Take a look at what I said on suraimu's diff, mainly on the compressed streams/grid snap. I also think the spacing is a little small, but that's mostly personal preference.
00:09:995 (1,2,3) - can you take some emphasis off the end of these sliders? Maybe switch to soft hitsound for the end?
01:12:390 (1) - aren't these combos a little long?
01:32:789 (1) - double check new combos here.
Topic Starter
Kite

ziin wrote:

[normal]
00:48:392 (1,2,3,4) - some overlaps. Rest of the map is perfect, so it would be nice to make these perfect too, no? Moved the overlapping notes a bit

[suraimu]
The map's fine there's just a few things I don't like:
There's a lot of inconsistent spacing in the map and a lot of speed changes. You're using 5 slider speeds which is okay I suppose, but still it's something to think about. Do you really need that .7 and .8 section? Do you really need that .5 section?

I fixed suraimu's diff to only have 3 slider speeds, also remapped this one bit 00:23:944 (1,2,3,1)

The streams especially aren't placed perfectly, and these aren't really pleasant:
00:23:944 (1,2,3,1) -
because they are so close together. You've already got:
00:16:594 (3,4,5,6) - "normal" compressed stream
00:21:994 (1,2,3) - linear spaced stream
I missed one of the linear spaced streams because I thought they were more antijumps. It probably won't happen again though.

I remapped one of those, the others don't seem that much of a problem to me though

When you use a very low spacing, especially on compressed streams, you shouldn't use grid snap except on the first and last note. spacing here is pretty important to looking good, and if you can get the stream to be perfectly spaced, why not do it?
00:42:992 (4) - there's only a 0.04x difference in spacing here, but I can easily tell this one is too close, so it looks bad.

[insane]
too hard for me on this computer.
Take a look at what I said on suraimu's diff, mainly on the compressed streams/grid snap. I also think the spacing is a little small, but that's mostly personal preference.
Hmm the streams on Insane look okay to me even when I mapped with grid snap, even though I agree with the spacing being a little small. It's still okay imo and plays fine, but I might end up increasing the spacing a bit, not sure yet though.

00:09:995 (1,2,3) - can you take some emphasis off the end of these sliders? Maybe switch to soft hitsound for the end? That's actually a great idea, thanks
01:12:390 (1) - aren't these combos a little long? Placed more New Combos during the long stream
01:32:789 (1) - double check new combos here.Placed more New Combos to fit the music
Thanks for the mod ziin :3
NatsumeRin
[General]
BPM:200, offset:392

i love the taiko diff.

[Normal]
just mention here, if you increase both HP/OD by 1 tick the max score would be higher, (current max score in Hard seems too high)

[suraimu's Hard]
a general thing: i noticed you tend to make the notes close to each other, i can understand the circles because it's a 200 BPM song, but in slider parts like 00:57:991 (1,2,3,4), do you really need to do that? it looks not so good anyway.

[Insane]
00:41:192 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make the spacing increase like http://puu.sh/dWBA ?

don't kud.
Topic Starter
Kite
Sorry for late fix.
Fixed BPM+ offset, settings on [Normal] and moved the Pattern in [Insane] a bit closer.
Thanks for the mod!
NatsumeRin
bubbled.
Pereira006
hello

General

  1. I love this song and I download today but you diff normal are TAG inconsistency
    Normal Tag:
    suraimu suraimu_su pheon_ metal arrange ufo undefined fantastic object seirensen zun

    Easy,Hard,insane and Taiko tag:
    suraimu suraimu_su_ pheon metal arrange ufo undefined fantastic object seirensen zun

    So only you normal is tag inconsistency so pleasse make same tag
IMO -> my opinions

Some Suggestions
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Easy

is great stuff cool
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Normal

  1. 00:07:592 (2,1) - http://puu.sh/eA5P and i did test play i get 300 score i tough this is not slider repat but yes it so i get combo break so they are hidden repeat ;_____; well try remap part this 00:09:992 (1,2) or 00:05:192 (1,2) or something IMO
  2. 00:12:392 (2) - grid 2 right to make symentric with 00:09:992 (1) also if you fix this you need fix spacing at 00:14:792 (1)
  3. 01:10:592 (1) - click here and you look this http://puu.sh/eA7L http://puu.sh/eA7Q but this slider is new combo so you have put manually new combo like this http://puu.sh/eA82
stuff cool
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suraimu's Hard

  1. 00:23:942 (3,4,1) - I not like this stack with end slider, will most better if you do this http://puu.sh/eA99 the (4) need stack with 00:24:392 (1) the start slider then most better gameplay and relax for this hard IMO
stuff cool
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Insane

stuff aswome
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the mod are just suggestions but you have fix the General
that all i think sorry my suck eng
good luck and bye bye
Ekaru
Okay, yeah, that slider repeat at the beginning of Normal is arguably hidden to a newer player who aren't quick at reacting to things. I'm not popping for that, though, but for the inconsistent tags and because you do need to add a New Combo at 01:10:592 (1) on Normal; those things are definitely unrankable.

Ask NatsumeRin or me for your bubble back when you're done fixing these things, because they're small but unrankable and blahblahblah.
Topic Starter
Kite
Thanks for the mods, everything has been fixed.
Ekaru
Looks fine. Rebubbling
lolcubes
Yo!

[Insane]
  1. 01:03:242 (4) - This finish sounds like an extra. Intentional? If not, I think it's best to remove it, atleast because of the consistency with the next similar section where you didn't use it.
[Easy]
  1. 00:57:992 (1,2,3) - No! :D You convinced me to leave these in your normal, but for easy these are a massive overkill. Remove a repeat from each slider and if you want reposition them a little bit, then they would be completely fine imo.
Minor stuff. I can't let those go in easy, sorry. ;x;
Fix em and I rank.
lolcubes
Doubleposting like a baws.

Ranked!
Andrea
Grats Kite! :P
Kurai
\:D/
Sander-Don
\:D/
phonic
Grats~
Pheon
oh btw
[1/26/2012 4:19:46 PM] Cubes!!: gonna rank one of your taikos soon!
[1/26/2012 4:19:52 PM] Cubes!!: (future is undefined)
[1/26/2012 4:20:47 PM] Marcus: Oh, alright
[1/26/2012 4:20:51 PM] Marcus: Oh, shit
[1/26/2012 4:20:54 PM] Marcus: I gotta revise that one then.

Damn you, lolcubes. >:( Not even giving me a freaking day to be lazy.
lolcubes
:D

Atleast I'm not afk that often, right? ;x;
eikkaleyd
:D Congratulation~


Wow this is su-chan's first Ranked guest diff~!
すっちゃんおめてとう~ :)
NatsumeRin
Congrats!
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