ykcarrot wrote:

Hi~ there
You have a really great fade-in at intro part. Good job.
OK, I have just few suggestions, bcuz maps are pretty nice.


[General]
I suggest extend length of the last spinner to 03:56:081. Then add finish. Done~


[Insane]
00:09:927 (4) - Little bit hard to see return arrow. Uhm... It's border line, I don't know.Fixed!

SPOILER

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03:03:416 (1) - Try to start this spinner from 03:03:664. You may put a note or add one return to previous slider if you fix it.Done~
03:50:229 (1) - Start from 03:50:806 ?okey,Done~




[Suzully's Hard]
01:48:828 (3) - 1/8 slider is not really neccsary at this time. I think just 1/4 is okay.No change


[Kit's Normal]
Everything is fine to me.


Good luck! ლ( ╹ ◡ ╹ ლ)

Ekaru wrote:

Insane:

AR 8 fits the map and song a lot better IMO. It's not a fast song, and this map doesn't have the "fast" feel needed to make AR 9 feel good. AR 8 also makes this map a lot more accessible.

Nothing wrong with the map itself though; just that AR 9 doesn't fit it very well. Good map otherwise.

Hard:

03:46:026 (2,4,5) - (4,5)'s stacking makes the overlap here from (2)'s hitburst look really ugly. Fine otherwise.fixed!

Normal:

Nothing; probably 'cuz this map's been modded to death already.

Have your star

1. 02:31:685 (1) - 始点にfinish追加
2. 02:52:784 (1) - finish追加
3. 02:56:740 (1) - 始点にfinish追加
4. 03:02:015 (2,3) - finish追加
5. 03:46:850 (2) - 終点にfinish追加
6. 03:50:642 (T) - 緑線不要 ?

1. 00:54:598 (3,4) - 1grid 上、左 nazi
2. 03:41:576 (4) - (2)のx軸に対して対称の位置から1grid右になっているので
   　　　　　　　　　 気になる場合はこのスライダー以降全てを1grid左に nazi

1. 00:21:136 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - コンボが長いので連打の始まる(10)から区切ってみてはどうでしょう
2. 02:55:751 (5) - 1grid上（見た目） nazi
3. 03:49:488 (1) - このスライダーと次のスピンまでの空白が少し気になったので提案です
   　　　　　　　　 　修正する場合、音付けは最初のサビの終わりと同じ感じでOKだと思います
   
   
   awesome AR9 map!!

1. TL's Taiko ?

KSHR wrote:

modding
(all suggestions)

Kit's Nirmal

1. 02:31:685 (1) - 始点にfinish追加
2. 02:52:784 (1) - finish追加
3. 02:56:740 (1) - 始点にfinish追加
4. 03:02:015 (2,3) - finish追加
5. 03:46:850 (2) - 終点にfinish追加
6. 03:50:642 (T) - 緑線不要 ?

Suzully's Hard

1. 00:54:598 (3,4) - 1grid 上、左 nazi
2. 03:41:576 (4) - (2)のx軸に対して対称の位置から1grid右になっているので
   　　　　　　　　　 気になる場合はこのスライダー以降全てを1grid左に nazi

Insane

1. 00:21:136 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - コンボが長いので連打の始まる(10)から区切ってみてはどうでしょうfixed
   
2. 02:55:751 (5) - 1grid上（見た目） nazifixed
   
3. 03:49:488 (1) - このスライダーと次のスピンまでの空白が少し気になったので提案です
   　　　　　　　　 　修正する場合、音付けは最初のサビの終わりと同じ感じでOKだと思いますfixed
   
   
   
   awesome AR9 map!!

TL's taikofixed

1. TL's Taiko ?

見るとこなくて若ハゲわんちゃんだった..
already stared, fight~

168664 勇気を　好きという言葉→勇気を｢好き｣と言う言葉。

Garven wrote:

This MP3's quality sounds really low. Is it possible it find a better one? Listen to the cymbals in this recording compared to Aenna's.

Leorda wrote:

Konnchiwa

General
* Are you silence the soft-sliderslide and soft-slidertick? I remember that some modder that soft-sliderslider and soft-slidertick are unrankable for some reason. But, not sure if you silence or notI think about it.thank you



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Kit's Normal
01:25:751 (2) - The head slider is almost offscreen! Please move up a bit. It's difficult to read the pattern while playing, and it says at new rules
01:50:806 (2) - The head slider is almost touch the HP Bar. Otherwise, it could be greatly impair the visibility of notes and approach circles to the player
03:44:213 (3) - I'm not sure if sliderbody is hidden and it's safe for normal mode. Some beginner/average player are playing normal diff. If some seen this slider, I'm not sure if they not confusing

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Suzully's Hard
00:37:455 (2) - Move 2 grid down (Nazi)
01:48:828 (3) - Too much 1/8 kickslider are for Insane diff, not Hard. But, I'm not sure about this one if this appropriate for Hard diff too
02:01:191 (4,5) - This pauses seems odd for me, thoughfixed
02:57:400 (2) - The tail slider is touch the HP Barfixed
02:58:059 (3) - ^fixed


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Insane
00:43:389 (1) - Make a same slider as 00:42:729 (4) and flip horizontally? I feel that this slider are not same as previous slider (Nazi)fixed
00:52:290 (4) - I don't like this slider. I think the sliderpath is cover with tail slider and will result is ugly slider. You should make the slider have a clear pathfixed
02:51:301 (5) - New combo?fixed


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Gomennasai~!!!!!!

1. Missing tags on Kit's Normal
2. I'm worry with the huge score gap between Normal (1.4 million) & Hard (8.6 million) . The diff spread between them is quite far too. It may be only me but I think there should be a middle diff between them
3. You can't silence the tick and the sliderslide at the same time, it is unrankable. If you insist on keeping the silence slider tick, at least don't silence the sliderslider, if you think it's too loud, try lowering the volume for it
4. The slider tick sounds nice too (except for the intro) so it's better if you don't silence it
5. For Suzully's Hard use slider stack 0.8. This will fix the stack on 02:49:158 (5,6)
6. There are so many code on the osb file? where did the image files go? or rather did you decide to remove the SB? If it's the latter, don't forget to remove the osb file

1. The intro is quite soft so I suggest to decrease the volume on timing sections from 00:02:675 to 00:07:949 to 40% or 50%
2. 00:13:883 (2) - hmm maybe remove the repeat then extend this slider to 00:14:378 ? it'll sounds better with a slider tick sound but because you silence it, I'm not sure it'll be good. The same applied for the other similar rhythm (00:19:158 (2), 00:24:433 (2), etc)
3. 03:24:762 (2) - remove this clap? it doesn't sounds good imo
4. 03:44:213 (3) - the only kick slider on the diff. Kinda break the flow with how the majority of the rhythm is 2/1. It's better if you extend this another half beat

1. I honestly think the change from 1x slider speed to 0.5 is too much. 0.75 works better, you used it on 02:52:702 and it work perfect. Not too fast and too slow either
2. 00:23:773 (1) - add finish at the start
3. 00:37:455 (2) - if only you used 1 DS. This slider could have better slider end overlap, same for other overlaps, but oh well you already used 1.1 so it's fine (a complete DS change is too much work I see)
4. 00:40:669 (2) - I think this 1/4 circle is a bit too much. Remove it?
5. 00:44:543 (4) - rather than the custom clap, the normal soft/normal finish is better
6. 00:45:944 (4) - same as 00:40:669 (2)
7. 00:49:817 (4) - remove the finish, the double hitsound is not working here
8. 01:38:609 (3) - same as 00:44:543 (4)
9. 03:03:169 (4) - this finish a little bit forced imo. I think it'll sound better if you remove it
10. 03:26:081 (1) - same as 00:49:817 (4) Ok there are a lot of this finish & clap hitsound but with all due respect, they don't fit at all. A simple custom clap is good enough, adding another finish is too much. Please check your diff for them and fix it

1. 02:04:158 (145,146,147,148) - this sounds very strange, no matter how many times I hear this, it's still tick me off. Maybe move
2. 02:04:323 (146) to 02:04:323 ?
3. 02:42:235 (59) - a regular don sounds more fitting here
4. The taiko diff is good but I still have some doubt over some of the patterns. Please search for an expert Taiko modder to help you with it

1. The same comment about the 0.5x slider speed on Suzully's diff
2. I agree that AR 9 doesn't fit with the song. AR 8 works perfectly with the song so I suggest to use it
3. 00:18:911 (2) - hmm the 1/4 maybe a bit surprising, probably because it's a slider end stack
4. 00:42:235 (3) - the repeat is partially hidden by the previous slider's hitburst. Please reposition it
5. 01:43:883 (6,1) - please fix the spacing. The spacing of these objects is the same with 01:43:554 (5,6) but they actually have different rhythm (5,6 is 2/1 beat apart but 6,1 is 1/2 beat apart!!!). I know that there's a speed change but the spacing is still too confusing
6. 02:42:235 (1) - a normal finish works better here
7. 02:40:257 (4) - hmm remove this to make it the same as 02:46:026 (5,1) ? I found that the slight stop on 02:46:026 (5,1) fits the song
8. 03:45:532 (1) - the only 1/4 kick slider as far as I see. I suggest to break it into 2 circles, not only it'll be consistent, it's flow better imo
9. 02:47:510 (1,2,3,1) - Nice. How about Ctrl + R the 02:48:664 (1) ?

Sallad4ever wrote:

[Suzully's Hard]

1. I honestly think the change from 1x slider speed to 0.5 is too much. 0.75 works better, you used it on 02:52:702 and it work perfect. Not too fast and too slow either
   Changed~
2. 00:23:773 (1) - add finish at the start Added.
3. 00:37:455 (2) - if only you used 1 DS. This slider could have better slider end overlap, same for other overlaps, but oh well you already used 1.1 so it's fine (a complete DS change is too much work I see) =D
4. 00:40:669 (2) - I think this 1/4 circle is a bit too much. Remove it? Removed.
5. 00:44:543 (4) - rather than the custom clap, the normal soft/normal finish is better Fixed.
6. 00:45:944 (4) - same as 00:40:669 (2) Removed.
7. 00:49:817 (4) - remove the finish, the double hitsound is not working here Removed on top.
8. 01:38:609 (3) - same as 00:44:543 (4) Changed.
9. 03:03:169 (4) - this finish a little bit forced imo. I think it'll sound better if you remove it Turned the vulume down.
10. 03:26:081 (1) - same as 00:49:817 (4) Ok there are a lot of this finish & clap hitsound but with all due respect, they don't fit at all. A simple custom clap is good enough, adding another finish is too much. Please check your diff for them and fix it Fixed some of them~

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi Patchouli

[General]

1. Missing tags on Kit's NormalFixed
2. I'm worry with the huge score gap between Normal (1.4 million) & Hard (8.6 million) . The diff spread between them is quite far too. It may be only me but I think there should be a middle diff between them.hmm,Normal(1.4million)Hard(8.6million)Insane(15.3million).N-(7.2million)-H-(6.7million)-I.I want to keep this state.But if I have a problems, I plan to add a degree of difficulty
3. You can't silence the tick and the sliderslide at the same time, it is unrankable. If you insist on keeping the silence slider tick, at least don't silence the sliderslider, if you think it's too loud, try lowering the volume for it.Fixed
4. The slider tick sounds nice too (except for the intro) so it's better if you don't silence itok
5. For Suzully's Hard use slider stack 0.8. This will fix the stack on 02:49:158 (5,6)
6. There are so many code on the osb file? where did the image files go? or rather did you decide to remove the SB? If it's the latter, don't forget to remove the osb fileFixed

[Insane]

1. The same comment about the 0.5x slider speed on Suzully's diff.No change
2. I agree that AR 9 doesn't fit with the song. AR 8 works perfectly with the song so I suggest to use itSorry,no change.I want to keep feel speedy...
3. 00:18:911 (2) - hmm the 1/4 maybe a bit surprising, probably because it's a slider end stackFixed
4. 00:42:235 (3) - the repeat is partially hidden by the previous slider's hitburst. Please reposition itFixed
5. 01:43:883 (6,1) - please fix the spacing. The spacing of these objects is the same with 01:43:554 (5,6) but they actually have different rhythm (5,6 is 2/1 beat apart but 6,1 is 1/2 beat apart!!!). I know that there's a speed change but the spacing is still too confusingSome Remap
6. 02:42:235 (1) - a normal finish works better herehmm...add soft finish.
7. 02:40:257 (4) - hmm remove this to make it the same as 02:46:026 (5,1) ? I found that the slight stop on 02:46:026 (5,1) fits the songSome Remap
8. 03:45:532 (1) - the only 1/4 kick slider as far as I see. I suggest to break it into 2 circles, not only it'll be consistent, it's flow better imookey~
9. 02:47:510 (1,2,3,1) - Nice. How about Ctrl + R the 02:48:664 (1) ?Fixed

Nice map, The diff spread is worrying but the Hard and Insane are fun. For the taiko diff, try asking arken, lepidon, wmfchris or OzzyOzrock for help
Star for now~

[Kit's Normal]

1. The intro is quite soft so I suggest to decrease the volume on timing sections from 00:02:675 to 00:07:949 to 40% or 50%Fixed
   
2. 00:13:883 (2) - hmm maybe remove the repeat then extend this slider to 00:14:378 ? it'll sounds better with a slider tick sound butNo change
   because you silence it, I'm not sure it'll be good. The same applied for the other similar rhythm (00:19:158 (2), 00:24:433 (2), etc)
3. 03:24:762 (2) - remove this clap? it doesn't sounds good imoFixed
4. 03:44:213 (3) - the only kick slider on the diff. Kinda break the flow with how the majority of the rhythm is 2/1. It's better if you extend this another half beatFixed