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mooai
:)
GiNa
:)
M0Rl0_sk
nice map
音が特にいい
~☆
Acyfd
:) star~
PSPDS Eddie
16MBwww
:P
Topic Starter
Patchouli

PSPDS Eddie wrote:

16MBwww
:P
Pendになったら綺麗に容量収まってるよ:p
CMP
:)
Sure
Hi~ there :D
You have a really great fade-in at intro part. Good job.
OK, I have just few suggestions, bcuz maps are pretty nice.


[General]
I suggest extend length of the last spinner to 03:56:081. Then add finish.


[Insane]
00:09:927 (4) - Little bit hard to see return arrow. Uhm... It's border line, I don't know.
03:03:416 (1) - Try to start this spinner from 03:03:664. You may put a note or add one return to previous slider if you fix it.
03:50:229 (1) - Start from 03:50:806 ?


[Suzully's Hard]
01:48:828 (3) - 1/8 slider is not really neccsary at this time. I think just 1/4 is okay.


[Kit's Normal]
Everything is fine to me.


Good luck! ლ( ╹ ◡ ╹ ლ)
Topic Starter
Patchouli

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi~ there :D
You have a really great fade-in at intro part. Good job.
OK, I have just few suggestions, bcuz maps are pretty nice.


[General]
I suggest extend length of the last spinner to 03:56:081. Then add finish. Done~


[Insane]
00:09:927 (4) - Little bit hard to see return arrow. Uhm... It's border line, I don't know.Fixed!
SPOILER
[attachment=0:f0988]screenshot317.jpg[/attachment:f0988]
03:03:416 (1) - Try to start this spinner from 03:03:664. You may put a note or add one return to previous slider if you fix it.Done~
03:50:229 (1) - Start from 03:50:806 ?okey,Done~




[Suzully's Hard]
01:48:828 (3) - 1/8 slider is not really neccsary at this time. I think just 1/4 is okay.No change


[Kit's Normal]
Everything is fine to me.


Good luck! ლ( ╹ ◡ ╹ ლ)
So fast ykcarrot sensei:o
thanks for the quick modding!
Faust
Little IRC Mod in case you decide to kudosu. It's fine if you don't kudosu :D

SPOILER
19:22 <Patchouli> : play thank you~ XDD
19:22 <Faust> : np
19:31 <Faust> : mm, maybe the AR is a bit too high
19:34 <Patchouli> : hmm...
19:38 <Patchouli> : I prefer playing it with AR9 and also AR9 excite players more than AR8 imo
19:38 <Faust> : true. top-tier players seem to like AR9
19:38 <Faust> : lol, just spin 423 rpm
19:38 <Faust> : :o
19:38 <Patchouli> : lol
19:58 <Faust> : 01:23:856 - http://puu.sh/3D73 Suggestion.
19:59 <Faust> : 02:07:290 - Uneven spacing lol
20:02 <Faust> : That's all for your diff. :)
20:03 <Patchouli> : >>01:23:856 nice idea.:D I change it
20:03 <Faust> : On Suzully, I think it'll be nice to put a note on 00:07:620 -
20:03 <Faust> : 00:18:169 - Note here as well.
20:05 <Patchouli> : 02:07:290 - fixed~
20:08 <Faust> : Hmm, silent slidertick?
20:11 <Faust> : 01:16:521 - On Kit's Normal. Shift the inherited timing section 1/4 before.
20:12 <Faust> : 02:31:685 - ^
20:15 <Faust> : I think that's it. Really good map >:3
20:16 <Patchouli> : thank you for modding >.< Sorry poor English;_;
20:16 <Faust> : you're welcome, and np
20:18 <Faust> : Wow, 5 pages of star only.
20:18 <Faust> : and 1 mod.

Fantastic map.
Sharp
yo
Topic Starter
Patchouli
star thx all. ;)
biwako
:)
Ekaru
Insane:

AR 8 fits the map and song a lot better IMO. It's not a fast song, and this map doesn't have the "fast" feel needed to make AR 9 feel good. AR 8 also makes this map a lot more accessible.

Nothing wrong with the map itself though; just that AR 9 doesn't fit it very well. Good map otherwise.

Hard:

03:46:026 (2,4,5) - (4,5)'s stacking makes the overlap here from (2)'s hitburst look really ugly. Fine otherwise.

Normal:

Nothing; probably 'cuz this map's been modded to death already.

Have your star
-SeRa_old
:D
Scarlet Sisters
good map !!!
すごい楽しかったです!
star~
Topic Starter
Patchouli

Ekaru wrote:

Insane:

AR 8 fits the map and song a lot better IMO. It's not a fast song, and this map doesn't have the "fast" feel needed to make AR 9 feel good. AR 8 also makes this map a lot more accessible.

Nothing wrong with the map itself though; just that AR 9 doesn't fit it very well. Good map otherwise.

Hard:

03:46:026 (2,4,5) - (4,5)'s stacking makes the overlap here from (2)'s hitburst look really ugly. Fine otherwise.fixed!

Normal:

Nothing; probably 'cuz this map's been modded to death already.

Have your star
thank you for modding!
terametis
:)
cacipan
ナ、ナイスマップ! :oops:


ミンナニ ナイショダヨ
SPOILER
数字はmsです

歌詞の違い
39268 屋上の塀に立ち→屋上の縁に立ち
45202 消えてなくなる→消えて無くなる
47345 言葉に溢れてる→言葉にあふれてる
89378 空を埋め尽くすよ→空をうめつくすよ
93449 世界を創り直すんだ→世界を作り直すんだ
106356 世界で沈み→世界が沈み
114762 水を掻き分けて→水をかきわけて
164543 空気のようにただ→空気の様にただ
167180 さぁ吐き出す→さぁはきだす
172784 だから今だけは→だからいまだけは
209707 消滅をつかさどる鳥たち→消滅を司る鳥たち

歌詞の実際の区切りと違い(ここに挙げたもの以外はあっています、参考になれば)
49817 さぁ飛び出せ 羽ばたけ私の翼よ 今
114762 水をかきわけて行くんだ
158114 そばに立ち見つめていたいの
176411 空気力学少女と少年の詩を聞かせて
225202 きっと 届くはずさ 今

歌詞と区切り両方の違い
120037 あなたに届く力で 飛ぶんだ→あなたに届く力で、飛ぶんだ
168664 勇気を 好きという言葉→勇気を「好き」と言う言葉。

【届く力で、】の句読点と、【「好き」】の鉤括弧は、半角で印字されています
Akiros_old
suteki na eroge :)
Candy_old_1
:)
KSHR
modding ;)
(all suggestions)


Kit's Nirmal
  1. 02:31:685 (1) - 始点にfinish追加
  2. 02:52:784 (1) - finish追加
  3. 02:56:740 (1) - 始点にfinish追加
  4. 03:02:015 (2,3) - finish追加
  5. 03:46:850 (2) - 終点にfinish追加
  6. 03:50:642 (T) - 緑線不要 ?
Suzully's Hard
  1. 00:54:598 (3,4) - 1grid 上、左 nazi
  2. 03:41:576 (4) - (2)のx軸に対して対称の位置から1grid右になっているので
              気になる場合はこのスライダー以降全てを1grid左に nazi
Insane
  1. 00:21:136 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - コンボが長いので連打の始まる(10)から区切ってみてはどうでしょう
  2. 02:55:751 (5) - 1grid上(見た目) nazi
  3. 03:49:488 (1) - このスライダーと次のスピンまでの空白が少し気になったので提案です
              修正する場合、音付けは最初のサビの終わりと同じ感じでOKだと思います


    awesome AR9 map!!
TL's taiko
  1. TL's Taiko ?

見るとこなくて若ハゲわんちゃんだった..
already stared, fight~ :)
Topic Starter
Patchouli

KSHR wrote:

modding ;)
(all suggestions)

Kit's Nirmal
  1. 02:31:685 (1) - 始点にfinish追加
  2. 02:52:784 (1) - finish追加
  3. 02:56:740 (1) - 始点にfinish追加
  4. 03:02:015 (2,3) - finish追加
  5. 03:46:850 (2) - 終点にfinish追加
  6. 03:50:642 (T) - 緑線不要 ?
Suzully's Hard
  1. 00:54:598 (3,4) - 1grid 上、左 nazi
  2. 03:41:576 (4) - (2)のx軸に対して対称の位置から1grid右になっているので
              気になる場合はこのスライダー以降全てを1grid左に nazi
Insane
  1. 00:21:136 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - コンボが長いので連打の始まる(10)から区切ってみてはどうでしょうfixed
  2. 02:55:751 (5) - 1grid上(見た目) nazifixed
  3. 03:49:488 (1) - このスライダーと次のスピンまでの空白が少し気になったので提案です
              修正する場合、音付けは最初のサビの終わりと同じ感じでOKだと思いますfixed



    awesome AR9 map!!

TL's taikofixed

  1. TL's Taiko ?

見るとこなくて若ハゲわんちゃんだった..
already stared, fight~ :)
cacipan
訂正します

168664 勇気を 好きという言葉→勇気を「好き」と言う言葉。
168664 勇気を 好きという言葉→勇気を「好き」と言う言葉

句点がないのが正確です。度々すみません。
Mixagji
star!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wring
niceeeeeee staaaaaaaaaaaaar :D
koredemo mizikaitte///
kibisisugiru desyou!
loli_milk
これは!!!!神!!!! :) :)
star~             
phoon
ii map dana-
star- ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;)
Garven
This MP3's quality sounds really low. Is it possible it find a better one? Listen to the cymbals in this recording compared to Aenna's.
azuraer
空気力学少年少女の歌

神曲!

NiceMap^-^

star~
grvyd
Nice 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-)
Topic Starter
Patchouli

Garven wrote:

This MP3's quality sounds really low. Is it possible it find a better one? Listen to the cymbals in this recording compared to Aenna's.
Yes,But did not find high-quality mp3. ;_;
I'm still looking.

9/23 Edit:mp3 changed! :)
tsuka
> < .
Leorda
Konnchiwa

General
* Are you silence the soft-sliderslide and soft-slidertick? I remember that some modder that soft-sliderslider and soft-slidertick are unrankable for some reason. But, not sure if you silence or not

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Kit's Normal
01:25:751 (2) - The head slider is almost offscreen! Please move up a bit. It's difficult to read the pattern while playing, and it says at new rules
01:50:806 (2) - The head slider is almost touch the HP Bar. Otherwise, it could be greatly impair the visibility of notes and approach circles to the player
03:44:213 (3) - I'm not sure if sliderbody is hidden and it's safe for normal mode. Some beginner/average player are playing normal diff. If some seen this slider, I'm not sure if they not confusing

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Suzully's Hard
00:37:455 (2) - Move 2 grid down (Nazi)
01:48:828 (3) - Too much 1/8 kickslider are for Insane diff, not Hard. But, I'm not sure about this one if this appropriate for Hard diff too
02:01:191 (4,5) - This pauses seems odd for me, though
02:57:400 (2) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar
02:58:059 (3) - ^

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Insane
00:43:389 (1) - Make a same slider as 00:42:729 (4) and flip horizontally? I feel that this slider are not same as previous slider (Nazi)
00:52:290 (4) - I don't like this slider. I think the sliderpath is cover with tail slider and will result is ugly slider. You should make the slider have a clear path
02:51:301 (5) - New combo?

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Gomennasai~!!!!!!
Topic Starter
Patchouli

Leorda wrote:

Konnchiwa

General
* Are you silence the soft-sliderslide and soft-slidertick? I remember that some modder that soft-sliderslider and soft-slidertick are unrankable for some reason. But, not sure if you silence or notI think about it.thank you



-------------------------------------------------------------------------

Kit's Normal
01:25:751 (2) - The head slider is almost offscreen! Please move up a bit. It's difficult to read the pattern while playing, and it says at new rules
01:50:806 (2) - The head slider is almost touch the HP Bar. Otherwise, it could be greatly impair the visibility of notes and approach circles to the player
03:44:213 (3) - I'm not sure if sliderbody is hidden and it's safe for normal mode. Some beginner/average player are playing normal diff. If some seen this slider, I'm not sure if they not confusing

-------------------------------------------------------------------------

Suzully's Hard
00:37:455 (2) - Move 2 grid down (Nazi)
01:48:828 (3) - Too much 1/8 kickslider are for Insane diff, not Hard. But, I'm not sure about this one if this appropriate for Hard diff too
02:01:191 (4,5) - This pauses seems odd for me, thoughfixed
02:57:400 (2) - The tail slider is touch the HP Barfixed
02:58:059 (3) - ^fixed


-------------------------------------------------------------------------

Insane
00:43:389 (1) - Make a same slider as 00:42:729 (4) and flip horizontally? I feel that this slider are not same as previous slider (Nazi)fixed
00:52:290 (4) - I don't like this slider. I think the sliderpath is cover with tail slider and will result is ugly slider. You should make the slider have a clear pathfixed
02:51:301 (5) - New combo?fixed


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Gomennasai~!!!!!!
thank you for modding,Leorda~ :)
se-sukeEila
star~ :)

☆*:・'`★☆。.:*:・'`★*:.。:* ・'`☆。.:*:・'`★.‥∵★¨∴
DeadAlready
>w</

ehhh I really don't have advice to give star DDDD:
Cuuuuri
ぱっちゃんは神なんですか☺?
star~pya~ :oops: :oops: :oops:
opichan_old
nice map ;)
ganbattekudasai
star~
yes
(´・∀・`)(´・∀・`)
Semi_Semi
great><

pending map

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