Fixed all except:
Mir wrote:
04:28:866 (1,3) - Some more subjectively ew wave sliders.
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00:59:312 (1,2) - Could you make this symmetrical on the y-axis like the previous patterns were? This looks weird as is, but is made more apparent due to your previous patterning. Since I repeat this kind of patterning again 01:08:724 (1,2,3,4) -
01:17:547 (1,2,3) - This (2) is clearly stronger than the previous (1) and the following (3), but is mapped the same as the rest of this combo. I would remove the combo on the (1) and move it to the (2) and maybe have a direction change from the (1). Something like this: http://i.imgur.com/GGrVEsW.png Since I want equal feeling since I'm focussing on the vocals purely here
01:25:194 (3) - Why not ctrl+H this like your other symmetrical patterns? Would fit more with the style so far imo. It would also provide more comfortable visual flow into the next object. 01:13:430 (1,2,3) - I didnt flip all the sliders, it depended on how I thought it felt, see here
02:57:056 (1) - Remove NC because you're using one NC per two downbeats and this ends up inconsistent. Add an NC at 02:59:410 (4) - then too. Fix the rest accordingly. you mean... remove 02:54:702 (6) - here right?
03:34:722 (5) - Maybe Ctrl+H this too? Prefer the look of it now
Pretty chill map! Good luck with this.~