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Vine (CV: Onishi Saori) - Gabriel no Kazoe Uta
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鸽[Kamiya] wrote:
蹲坑 晚上飞机赶不紧了！
[normal]
00:07:173 (3) - 包圆
00:26:528 (6) - 切单点啊 一直这样还是很闷的
例：试试看https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7402772
01:23:870 (4,5) - 看上去比较挫
[hard]
01:16:640 (2,3) - 丑
00:59:570 - ~01:04:544 - 别转了别空着 ）笑
mmp 这个有什么可摸的
[嘎不利路]Misaki-Mei wrote:
鸽
不鸽
啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊 啊啊 9
00:43:215 (8,9,10) - 能不能做个三角 8 10这样
00:52:520 (7,8,9) - ^
01:01:298 - 其实转盘结束点位置应该在这里。
没了 水的太水了卧槽
shouldn't it be Vigne instead of Vine? since the character's full name is officially Vignette in english and that's how her name is usually shortened according to the subs lol
also, not sure how important this is, but the production company the VA works under has her english romanisation has Onishi Saori, it might be worth looking into changing that as well
also, not sure how important this is, but the production company the VA works under has her english romanisation has Onishi Saori, it might be worth looking into changing that as well
Topic Starter
@肌肉男
主难度第一个改了 转盘……你这图我可能没看清，但感觉像unrankable
normal节奏的话是因为vocal不同，两个用note+滑条的地方都是后两拍对应“人”(nin)．overlap改了第二个
@莉莉 第一个那里我是类似地方滑条note都使用一下．节奏会多样点，挑了这里感觉是可以用note．转盘接转盘应该没啥问题．音量调了
@香菜 这bpm和ds 钝角并不会比锐角难打吧……滑条保留，因为结尾减弱不想放太多．nm那里感觉还好
@菓神 前俩都改了，不好看的都没改
@四萌 我想要直线啊．转盘结束点是我想放在每小节的开始处而不是人声结束处
谢摸
@doormat fixed "Onishi", about "Vine" I have asked alacat, thanks
主难度第一个改了 转盘……你这图我可能没看清，但感觉像unrankable
normal节奏的话是因为vocal不同，两个用note+滑条的地方都是后两拍对应“人”(nin)．overlap改了第二个
@莉莉 第一个那里我是类似地方滑条note都使用一下．节奏会多样点，挑了这里感觉是可以用note．转盘接转盘应该没啥问题．音量调了
@香菜 这bpm和ds 钝角并不会比锐角难打吧……滑条保留，因为结尾减弱不想放太多．nm那里感觉还好
@菓神 前俩都改了，不好看的都没改
@四萌 我想要直线啊．转盘结束点是我想放在每小节的开始处而不是人声结束处
谢摸
@doormat fixed "Onishi", about "Vine" I have asked alacat, thanks
sorry late
[General]
I couldn't find that name of romanised on official >.> We have to get opinions for this
[General]
- 00:11:890 - Why don't you start preview point from here ? I can hear her breath from here.
- 00:26:769 - I prefer to take a vocal sound at here. Because you took same sounds around 00:20:722 (8) - ,00:15:157 (8) -
- 00:32:577 (8) - try to make a jump on here! I like your part around here 00:20:722 (8,9) -
- 00:43:215 (8,9,10) - Design suggestion : How about making curve shape on these circles like your previous slider like 00:41:947 (6) - ? It would be better for looking.
- 01:22:660 - ,01:23:144 - same as 00:26:769 - , I have a sense of discomfort with this part since you skipped 1/2 sounds suddenly.
- 00:26:770 - Same as Gabriel difficulty
- 00:54:640 (1,1,1) - This is not fine for using a spinner in this music. try to set a spinner from 00:54:640 - to 00:56:674 - ?
- Circle size + 0.5 or 0.7 ? It would be better for reading and looking.
- 00:54:640 (1,1,1) - Same as Normal difficulty
I couldn't find that name of romanised on official >.> We have to get opinions for this
Topic Starter
alacat wrote:
sorry late
[Gabriel][Normal]
- 00:26:769 - I prefer to take a vocal sound at here. Because you took same sounds around 00:20:722 (8) - ,00:15:157 (8) - 00:20:722 (8,9) - here are 3 syllables obviously: fu, ta, ri. 00:14:915 (7,8,9) - same. But in 00:26:528 (7,8) - , I know there are 4 kanas, but it's more likely two syllables, so I want to make some different here for variety.
- 00:32:577 (8) - try to make a jump on here! I like your part around here 00:20:722 (8,9) - 00:21:205 - is at a white line and here's a sound of background music, while 00:32:576 - is at red line, and no background music, only vocal, so I don't really want to use jump here.
others all fixed, thx for mod
- 00:26:770 - Same as Gabriel difficulty same as above
Vine vs Vigne
I couldn't find that name of romanised on official >.> We have to get opinions for this[/color]
Vine makes sense and has been widely used as her short form romanised name by the public.
Therefore, I do not have any issues about it. If you have any opinions, feel free to drop by!
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vine_(demon%29
Therefore, I do not have any issues about it. If you have any opinions, feel free to drop by!
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vine_(demon%29
timing check
00:59:570 - is 540bpm
01:00:815 - is 744bpm
01:01:720 - is 992bpm
that really heated part mapped nothing need to be tapped, so it's ok to not time it.
offsets are already fine.
00:59:570 - is 540bpm
01:00:815 - is 744bpm
01:01:720 - is 992bpm
that really heated part mapped nothing need to be tapped, so it's ok to not time it.
offsets are already fine.
Topic Starter
Thanks for HW's timing check and KwaN's meta check!
Thank you KwaN and Hollow Wings
Easy and Normal :
00:54:640 - Please remove the green section from here
call me back again
Easy and Normal :
00:54:640 - Please remove the green section from here
call me back again
Topic Starter
lol fixed
ok 
Topic Starter
Thanks! 
744 bpm song ranked hype
rip Vine
IRC mod
2017-03-11 21:52 Kencho: 這個主難度沒什麼好說的，唯一是節奏統一的問題
2017-03-11 21:52 Pata-Mon: 节奏不统一的地方大多是vocal不同吧
2017-03-11 21:53 Kencho: 我覺得全部放圓圈好了
2017-03-11 21:53 Kencho: 物件非常少
2017-03-11 21:53 Pata-Mon: 哪些
2017-03-11 21:53 Kencho: 比如00:20:722 (8,9) - 00:32:335 (7,8) -
2017-03-11 21:53 Pata-Mon: 因为这图就是简单啊……
2017-03-11 21:54 Pata-Mon: 全都note会不会太无聊了啊
2017-03-11 21:54 Kencho: 00:38:010 (7,8) -
2017-03-11 21:54 Kencho: 這幾個地方你是怎麼跟的
2017-03-11 21:54 Pata-Mon: 这个是vocal
2017-03-11 21:54 Pata-Mon: nin（人）
2017-03-11 21:54 Pata-Mon: 红线起
2017-03-11 21:55 Pata-Mon: 跟00:32:577 (8) - 一样
2017-03-11 21:55 Pata-Mon: 其他地方都是nin只占一拍 在后面白线
2017-03-11 21:55 Kencho: 那就
2017-03-11 21:55 Kencho: 沒什麼好說了
2017-03-11 21:55 Pata-Mon: >_<
2017-03-11 21:56 Kencho: 01:05:027 (1) - 這個怎麼不疊到00:52:520 (5) - 呢
2017-03-11 21:56 Kencho: normal
2017-03-11 21:57 Pata-Mon: 2333隔了转盘我一般就不管了
2017-03-11 21:57 Pata-Mon: 因为转盘鼠标位置就动了
2017-03-11 21:58 Kencho: 01:10:834 (2,4,5) - 這個比較奇怪，因為整個圖也沒有重複放物件的地方
2017-03-11 21:58 Pata-Mon: 好
2017-03-11 21:59 Kencho: 01:24:838 (5) - ctrl+h
2017-03-11 22:00 Kencho: http://puu.sh/uE4IO/fb3791917d.jpg
2017-03-11 22:01 Pata-Mon: 我觉得现在这样好看些
2017-03-11 22:01 Pata-Mon: 弧朝一边我觉得要对称或者包才好看
2017-03-11 22:02 Pata-Mon: 否则的话反向好看
2017-03-11 22:02 Kencho: 那就是審美不同了
2017-03-11 22:02 Pata-Mon: 0.0
2017-03-11 22:03 Kencho: 反向的我會喜歡http://puu.sh/uE4U0/f5099b16d0.jpg
2017-03-11 22:03 Pata-Mon: 这种我也喜欢
2017-03-11 22:03 Pata-Mon: 但总之我觉得都朝外会不太好看
2017-03-11 22:04 Kencho: 我開始那個建議是想01:23:386 (3,4,5) - 做一個對稱
2017-03-11 22:04 Pata-Mon: 那也行
2017-03-11 22:04 Pata-Mon: 对 做对称吧 之前是因为你说重叠的地方用过这个
2017-03-11 22:04 Pata-Mon: 所以这里不再用 但现在前面改了233
2017-03-11 22:05 Pata-Mon: 诶不对
2017-03-11 22:05 Pata-Mon: 那会变成01:22:418 (2) - 重叠
2017-03-11 22:05 Kencho: http://puu.sh/uE54A/62d5b32a9d.jpg 我是說這樣的
2017-03-11 22:06 Kencho: 斜著看
2017-03-11 22:06 Pata-Mon: 那也行 虽然我个人觉得差不多
2017-03-11 22:06 Kencho: 或者滑條橫著也可以
2017-03-11 22:06 Kencho: https://puu.sh/uE57Y/d7294b7d44.jpg
2017-03-11 22:07 Kencho: 改不改都無所謂都是小東西
2017-03-11 22:07 Pata-Mon: 哼着芭
2017-03-11 22:07 Kencho: easy
2017-03-11 22:07 Kencho: 00:36:615 (3) -
2017-03-11 22:07 Kencho: 這個不要刻意包也可以因為這滑條弧度和其他的不同了
2017-03-11 22:08 Pata-Mon: 原来全曲只有这个贴脸blanket
2017-03-11 22:08 Pata-Mon: 嗯
2017-03-11 22:08 Kencho: 所以用回你其他滑條的弧度就好
2017-03-11 22:08 Kencho: 保持一致性
2017-03-11 22:09 Kencho: 沒有了
2017-03-11 22:09 Pata-Mon: 好
Looks good for me!
Kencho wrote:
Probably my last qualify icon
Topic Starter
thanks!
you should map the 744bpm part
gratz
gratz
Rizia wrote:
you should map the 744bpm part
gratz