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Vine (CV: Onishi Saori) - Gabriel no Kazoe Uta

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Pata-Mon
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年3月11日 at 22:09:53

Artist: Vine (CV: Onishi Saori)
Title: Gabriel no Kazoe Uta
Source: ガヴリールドロップアウト
Tags: Saori Gabriel Dropout Anime ED ending tv size
BPM: 124
Filesize: 10396kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.42 stars, 76 notes)
  2. Gabriel (2.59 stars, 115 notes)
  3. Normal (1.74 stars, 87 notes)
Download: Vine (CV: Onishi Saori) - Gabriel no Kazoe Uta
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Topic Starter
Pata-Mon
Lily Bread
没有BG,所以不摸(逃)
等下午下课摸吧..
Ellyu
req from qq(送个nm)

Gabriel
00:55:274 (3,4) - 这两个间距突然不是1.2x了,3可以理解但是4我感觉移下一点会好一些
00:59:570 (1) - (个人感觉)这个转盘很怪啊,要不拆成三个 https://puu.sh/ug3TI/fd38a1d89e.png

Normal
00:14:915 (6,7) - 00:38:010 (6,7) - 这种地方先滑条还是先circle建议统一,不然consistence方面有些问题
00:23:625 (1,4) - overlap了有些不好看
00:46:267 (2,3,5) - ^

Easy 没啥问题
这歌让我怎么摸
Lily Bread
no gu

[Easy]
00:38:010 (5,6) - 滑条怎么样

00:57:896 (1) - 转盘接转盘其实不太好..

音量可以考虑一下,感觉70有点大?

实在水不了
Xinely
Gaburiru ga hitori
Hanazawa Kana
水水水 sp+1
我擦 这种能摸出来什么东西 我就瞎几把写了

[主难度]
00:18:786 (4,5,6) - 钝角好大哦 看了下后面角度也没这么大 要不把前面1234转一下?
01:24:838 (5) - 可以换成两个单点?

[NM]
00:23:625 (1,4) - 有点重叠 可以调一下

我星星之前都给射没了 等你给完kd我再射

GL

edit:好厉害 我就刷新一下的功夫就多出来两个Po 毕竟怕他神
[Kamiya]
蹲坑 晚上飞机赶不紧了!
Binguo

[Kamiya] wrote:

蹲坑 晚上飞机赶不紧了!


[normal]
00:07:173 (3) - 包圆
00:26:528 (6) - 切单点啊 一直这样还是很闷的
例:试试看https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7402772
01:23:870 (4,5) - 看上去比较挫

[hard]
01:16:640 (2,3) - 丑
00:59:570 - ~01:04:544 - 别转了别空着 )笑

mmp 这个有什么可摸的
[Kamiya]

Misaki-Mei wrote:



不鸽
[嘎不利路]
啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊 啊啊 9
00:43:215 (8,9,10) - 能不能做个三角 8 10这样

00:52:520 (7,8,9) - ^

01:01:298 - 其实转盘结束点位置应该在这里。

没了 水的太水了卧槽
Doormat
shouldn't it be Vigne instead of Vine? since the character's full name is officially Vignette in english and that's how her name is usually shortened according to the subs lol

also, not sure how important this is, but the production company the VA works under has her english romanisation has Onishi Saori, it might be worth looking into changing that as well
Topic Starter
Pata-Mon
@肌肉男
主难度第一个改了 转盘……你这图我可能没看清,但感觉像unrankable
normal节奏的话是因为vocal不同,两个用note+滑条的地方都是后两拍对应“人”(nin).overlap改了第二个
@莉莉 第一个那里我是类似地方滑条note都使用一下.节奏会多样点,挑了这里感觉是可以用note.转盘接转盘应该没啥问题.音量调了
@香菜 这bpm和ds 钝角并不会比锐角难打吧……滑条保留,因为结尾减弱不想放太多.nm那里感觉还好
@菓神 前俩都改了,不好看的都没改
@四萌 我想要直线啊.转盘结束点是我想放在每小节的开始处而不是人声结束处

谢摸

@doormat fixed "Onishi", about "Vine" I have asked alacat, thanks
alacat
sorry late

[General]
  1. 00:11:890 - Why don't you start preview point from here ? I can hear her breath from here.
[Gabriel]
  1. 00:26:769 - I prefer to take a vocal sound at here. Because you took same sounds around 00:20:722 (8) - ,00:15:157 (8) -
  2. 00:32:577 (8) - try to make a jump on here! I like your part around here 00:20:722 (8,9) -
  3. 00:43:215 (8,9,10) - Design suggestion : How about making curve shape on these circles like your previous slider like 00:41:947 (6) - ? It would be better for looking.
  4. 01:22:660 - ,01:23:144 - same as 00:26:769 - , I have a sense of discomfort with this part since you skipped 1/2 sounds suddenly.
[Normal]
  1. 00:26:770 - Same as Gabriel difficulty
  2. 00:54:640 (1,1,1) - This is not fine for using a spinner in this music. try to set a spinner from 00:54:640 - to 00:56:674 - ?
[Easy]
  1. Circle size + 0.5 or 0.7 ? It would be better for reading and looking.
  2. 00:54:640 (1,1,1) - Same as Normal difficulty
Vine vs Vigne
I couldn't find that name of romanised on official >.> We have to get opinions for this
Topic Starter
Pata-Mon

alacat wrote:

sorry late

[Gabriel]
  1. 00:26:769 - I prefer to take a vocal sound at here. Because you took same sounds around 00:20:722 (8) - ,00:15:157 (8) - 00:20:722 (8,9) - here are 3 syllables obviously: fu, ta, ri. 00:14:915 (7,8,9) - same. But in 00:26:528 (7,8) - , I know there are 4 kanas, but it's more likely two syllables, so I want to make some different here for variety.
  2. 00:32:577 (8) - try to make a jump on here! I like your part around here 00:20:722 (8,9) - 00:21:205 - is at a white line and here's a sound of background music, while 00:32:576 - is at red line, and no background music, only vocal, so I don't really want to use jump here.
[Normal]
  1. 00:26:770 - Same as Gabriel difficulty same as above
others all fixed, thx for mod

Vine vs Vigne
I couldn't find that name of romanised on official >.> We have to get opinions for this[/color]
IamKwaN
Vine makes sense and has been widely used as her short form romanised name by the public.
Therefore, I do not have any issues about it. If you have any opinions, feel free to drop by!

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vine_(demon%29
Hollow Wings
timing check

00:59:570 - is 540bpm
01:00:815 - is 744bpm
01:01:720 - is 992bpm

that really heated part mapped nothing need to be tapped, so it's ok to not time it.
offsets are already fine.
Topic Starter
Pata-Mon
Thanks for HW's timing check and KwaN's meta check!
alacat
Thank you KwaN and Hollow Wings

Easy and Normal :
00:54:640 - Please remove the green section from here


call me back again
Topic Starter
Pata-Mon
lol fixed
alacat
ok :idea:
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