havent really fixed much yet, hopefully i can get those done soon.
Metaku wrote:hi hi
rectangle.png unused? uuuuu left that in cuz i want to add particles for the sb but i dont have a particle generator and i dont wanna do it by hand ;w; removed for now and storybrew looks confusing af
00:35:478 (1) - Might want to adjust this a bit. Due to the red anchor there's a part that looks a bit sharp and it could be easily fixed by moving the red anchor slightly up thats intentional, to emphasize the snare a little bit
00:59:720 (1) - If I understood your slider choices correctly I think this would be better off as something like these 01:04:569 (1,3) - since it's noticeably softer than 00:58:357 (3) - for example. i *think* i was somewhat going off of my ideas in the upper 2 diffs like 01:00:175 (3,1) - 01:02:599 (3,1) - 01:05:024 (3,1) - these slider shapes are all paired. i couldnt do that in Hard cuz rhythm stuff. anyways, changed both sliders to this shape 01:02:145 (1), seems to make more sense
On that note it could be kinda cool to use mixed red/gray anchor sliders like those to emphasize finishes and stuff in the verse too like 00:40:327 (1) - and 00:50:024 (1) - saved those for the other sections since the verse isnt all that exciting
Pretty solid diff overall, no real problems to be found tbh yay!
00:21:236 (3) - I think you could just make this a circle too as all 3 notes are really strong so skipping a weak beat on 00:21:387 - wouldn't really hurt and it would be better for emphasis as well hmmm i think emphasis is better as is cuz it makes it harder to hit the next slider (cuz timing)? i have the slider thing in both upper diffs as well
00:39:417 (2,3,4) - These have that funny guitar sound so I think you could make them stand out from 00:38:205 (2,3,4,1) - a bit, maybe use red anchor slider instead of straight ones or smtng? i don't have any red anchor 1/2 sliders throughout the diff because theyre too short imo. and if i change it then i dont have an excuse to not use non-straight 1/2 sliders for everything else
00:48:811 (1,3) - Literally the only stack in the whole map lol. Kinda cramped but would be cool if you could find some other way to do this. fixed
00:50:478 - 00:52:902 - Makes me kinda sad that you skipped these you had focus on vocals earlier i cut these out because i didn't want the constant 1/2 to go on for too long (give players a breather) otherwise the string of objects would be super long compared to the previous section.
00:59:417 (4) - this is different from the 2 before as it has 2 snares instead of snare + kick. You could try making a stack here instead? no normal stacks for this diff
01:00:782 (4) - Quite sure this would feel better as 1/2 slider since you were following the guitar and it has an extended sound here fixed
01:03:660 (2) - This slider kinda bothers me since you were following vocals earlier... What if you instead of a slider used 2 circles instead? You could have the first one follow the flow of 01:03:205 (1) - and then change flow direction on 01:03:811 - where the vocals start again so the focus would stay on the vocals like earlier? i dont prioritize vocals. priority is finishes (always a click), and i just fitted everything else onto the rhythms (i used a slider here for both upper diffs too)
01:09:872 (2) - I have to say this feels weird as the sliderhead is weaker here than any other part of the slider... fixed
01:25:478 (2,3,4,1) - Pretty cool pattern tbh as an alternate for 1/4 rhythms while still emphasizing the drum roll... Nice <3
01:26:387 (1) - Would be cool to have this as a red anchor slider fixed
01:36:084 (1) - Maybe use something more special here like you did on 01:19:114 (1) - ? Doesn't really stand out now since you have used similar sliders a lot every 1/1 slider in the final qtr of kiai is different now
Kinda sad you didn't keep the slider theme like in normal, would've been cool for emphasis since this diff is still distance snapped as well hmm which aspect(s) of the "slider theme" are you referring to? i thought i did better with sliders in this diff tbh
00:29:417 (1,2,3) - Cool pentagon pattern here but I don't really think a linear pattern like this captures the kick snare kick thing well... I'd rather try some kind of back and forth movement here changed to a triangle thing
00:44:569 (3,4) - Kinda catched my eye since the angle difference is a lot bigger than before on 00:42:145 (3,4) - and 00:43:357 (3,4) - copypasted 00:43:357 (3,4) - and made some adjustments
01:03:205 (1,2,3) - Guitar gets pretty high pitch and noticeable here compared to before so maybe shorten 1 and and add a circle where it currently ends for better emphasis? i dont really map rhythm/DS based on pitch, so no
01:06:387 (4) - I really wish the last beat on this would be clickable since it's clearly different from before (snares vs kick) yes its different but i did this for spread. Normal and Hard both have 1 non-repeating slider for this, Insane has the double repeating slider, the final diff has single repeat slider+circle.
01:06:993 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Well... I think this pattern is WAY too hard compared to the rest of the map. You've barely used jumps at all but now you throw a 8 note jump pattern with a rather long jump on the end. On that note 01:07:902 (4,1) - Shouldn't you swap nc here if you were NCing the snares?i have jumps on all finishes, and those snares are quite strong as well moved final jump to the hexgrid not NCing based on snares, NCing based on strong vocals
01:42:145 (5) - Should NC this. Downbeat and the rhythm changes to 1/3 and it's quite easy to read this wrong as 1/4 at the moment fixed
[Yahuri's Journey On Ice]
00:28:104 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - This pattern could use some more spacing, your 4* Insane has bigger spacing here lol fixed
01:00:781 (1) - Maybe curve this a bit more towards 01:00:175 (4) - ? The angle difference looks a bit weird as it is imo the angles of the sliders are the same lol (but the perfect overlap wasnt perfect so i fixed that )
01:06:993 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Pretty much the same thing as earlier, could use a larger spacing since it's extremely similar to the one on the 4* Insane despite being nearly 1* difference in star rating fixed
01:25:554 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Stream like this will probably catch a lot people off guard since it's the first stream on the whole map so I'd probably try to make it a bit easier either by changing shape, lowering spacing or adding a filler 1/4 repeat somewhere in the middle ok
Pretty good tbh... Hard to find faults in this map :D
thank you! ^-^