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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年5月3日 at 17:40:43

Artist: solfa feat.Chata
Title: Prism lovely day
Source: 彼女と俺の恋愛日常
Tags: eroge opening Asuka_- Karen Lovely day of Girlfriends & me parasol
BPM: 180
Filesize: 4327kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Asuka_-'s Hard (3 stars, 326 notes)
  2. Easy (1.52 stars, 151 notes)
  3. Insane (4.68 stars, 393 notes)
  4. Karen's Insane (4.35 stars, 427 notes)
  5. Normal (2.04 stars, 189 notes)


Download: solfa feat.Chata - Prism lovely day
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#3
Mapset
- Easy by me
- Normal by me
- Hard by Asuka_-
- Insane by Karen
- Insane by me
special thanks
Lama Poluna
Namki
alacat
Shirasaka Koume
Toyosaki Aki
Ellyu
- Frontier -

Lasse
Xexxar
posted
o open

phd for mod
posted
give me I pls
posted
ok Karen!
but i dont sure when i could finish my diffs
posted
Hai

[General]
  1. Tags: Kanojo to Ore no Lovely Day iyuna 天ヶ咲麗
  2. Combo colors:
    Combo1 : 255,128,192
    Combo2 : 0,64,128
    Combo3 : 255,255,255
    Combo4 : 255,128,64


[Insane]
  1. 00:10:881 (3,4,5,6,1) - Improve form?
  2. 00:13:547 (4) - x0 y251, little more DS.
  3. 00:16:214 (4,5,1) - The shape of a triangle?
  4. 00:16:881 (2,3,4) - ^
  5. 00:58:881 (4,1) - Swap NC?
  6. 01:25:547 (3,5) 01:26:214 (1) - - NC?
  7. 01:48:714 (4,5,6,1) - Swap NC?
  8. 01:43:714 (3) - Improve form pls.


[Asuka_-'s Hard]
  1. 00:05:547 (4) - Slider repeat. like this 01:04:881 (4) - ?
  2. 00:10:881 (4) - ^
  3. 00:32:214 (4) - ^
  4. 00:53:881 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 1/3
  5. 01:48:714 - Ignore beat?


because I love Chata.

gl~
posted
hello.
As far as I can hear your soft clap sounds kinda weak, it doesn't really reflect an exact clap sound in the music imo. You may want to use this one, instead. It has a bit more delay and it is stronger itself.

Also, Hard doesn't have a redline here 00:59:881 - but it looks like it must.

ye, pretty neat mapset, gl~
posted
thx both~
i will apply later and reply mods!
posted
feat.とChataの間のスペースはいらないと思います ('ω') 頑張って!☆
posted
MOD初心者なので的外れな意見あるかもです ご容赦ください><
[General]
  1. Romanised Artist Gardenの譜面だとfeat.Chataだけどどうなんだろう。。 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/511637
  2. Tagに追加: Lovely day of Girlfriends & me parasol


[Easy]
  1. 00:07:214 (3) - 1/2スライダーで直前のサークルをBlanketするのは良くないそうです(初心者が読みづらいため)
  2. 00:55:881 - ここら辺忙しく感じました こんな感じの音取りとかどうですか?
    img
    [img](4の最初が%2000:55:881)https://puu.sh/v6J7f/c32690f633.jpg[/img]
  3. 01:02:547 (1) - オートで6000点はEasyではちょっと短いと思います かといって伸ばす事も出来ないので普通に配置したほうがいいと思います
  4. 01:07:547 (4,1) - 音取りに違和感を感じました 01:12:880 (4,1,2) と一緒でもいいと思います
  5. 01:18:214 (4,1) - ^


[Normal]
  1. 1/2の連打がスタックされている場所とスタックされていない場所があり違和感を感じました ノリノリなところスタックさせてないなら01:03:714 (3,4) はスタックじゃなくていいと思います
  2. 00:55:547 (4) - 2番のケツで見えないからずらしたほうがいいかな



[Asuka_-'s Hard]
上の方も言っておられますが強い連打の音が鳴ってるのに無視してる場所がいくつもありますので一度確認してみてください。

  1. 00:42:547 - もっと音拾ってもいいんじゃないですか?
  2. 00:53:881 - ここからのパートは1/4ではなく1/3です。
  3. 00:59:547 (3) - 2/3 Sliderの方が曲に合ってます。
  4. 01:48:381 (3) - 1/1 Sliderにしてみるのはどうでしょうか 01:48:714 にそこそこ強い音が鳴ってるので拾った方がいいと思います。


[Karen's Insane]
  1. 00:27:714 (2,3) - Stack? like this 00:22:381 (2,3)
  2. 01:22:214 (4,5) - Better not do stack. its like sound of 01:11:547 (4,5)

sorry for my poor english ;-;

[Insane]
  1. 00:14:214 (2,3,4) - もう少し角度あったほうがやりやすそう
  2. 01:37:547 (2,3,4) - ^
  3. 00:54:214 (2,3) - リズム変わった直後だしスペーシング狭めた方がわかりやすいかも
  4. 01:49:047 (1) - 特に理由ないならNC外してもいいかも

EasyとInsaneだけサビ入った時のカスタム違ったけど意図的じゃないなら確認してみてください!
GL :)
posted
im not good at english.

Lama Poluna wrote:


[Asuka_-'s Hard]
  1. 00:05:547 (4) - Slider repeat. like this 01:04:881 (4) - ? i want to follow vocal, keep.
  2. 00:10:881 (4) - ^ nice
  3. 00:32:214 (4) - ^ nice
  4. 00:53:881 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 1/3 oh sorry xD
  5. 01:48:714 - Ignore beat?
    yea, i want to emphasize 01:47:881 (1,2) - 's sound. so i put circle in 01:48:881 (4,5) - .
    the reason why i ignore 01:48:714 - is because 01:47:714 - isnt clickable, and if i put object in 01:48:714 - , i will not be able to emphasize 01:48:881 (4,5) - , i think.
    sorry keep for now.

    i put 1/1 slider in 01:48:380 - i think solve the issue~ xD


because I love Chata. me too XDXD
gl~

Namki wrote:


Also, Hard doesn't have a redline here 00:59:881 - but it looks like it must. fixed

Shirasaka Koume wrote:

MOD初心者なので的外れな意見あるかもです ご容赦ください>< super mod

[Asuka_-'s Hard]
上の方も言っておられますが強い連打の音が鳴ってるのに無視してる場所がいくつもありますので一度確認してみてください。
了解です。 私が連打に置き換えれるかなーと思ったところは修正しました。

  1. 00:42:547 - もっと音拾ってもいいんじゃないですか? 
    dtプレイヤーの休息のためにと思って 音取りを減らしています。
    実際休息になるかもわかんないので、色んな人に指摘されたら変更しようと思います。
  2. 00:53:881 - ここからのパートは1/4ではなく1/3です。 ごめんなさい!! なおしました!!
  3. 00:59:547 (3) - 2/3 Sliderの方が曲に合ってます。おh ほんとだ... ありがとうございます!
  4. 01:48:381 (3) - 1/1 Sliderにしてみるのはどうでしょうか 01:48:714 にそこそこ強い音が鳴ってるので拾った方がいいと思います。
    やはりそこ気になりますか...(上の人にも指摘された)
    1/1sliderだと拾った上にclickしなくてもいい...( *´艸`) これで行こうと思いますw ありがとうございます~!
updateeeeeee
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 64957
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Metadata]
Title:Prism lovely day
TitleUnicode:プリズム lovely day
Artist:solfa feat. Chata
ArtistUnicode:solfa feat.茶太
Creator:joker-
Version:Asuka_-'s Hard
Source:彼女と俺の恋愛日常
Tags:eroge opening Asuka_- Karen
BeatmapID:1246152
BeatmapSetID:575372

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6.6
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@joker-さん
hitsoundありがとうございます!!(忘れてた)

ほんと申し訳ないんですが、hitsound付ける前の私の譜面に修正を加えてしまいました。。。
なので、joker-さんがhitsoundをつけてくださったHardから 修正を加えたHardにhitsoundをコピーさせてもらいましたー。

なにか不都合あれば知らせてください!!
ほんとにhitsoundありがとうございますww
posted

Lama Poluna wrote:

Hai

[General]
  1. Tags: Kanojo to Ore no Lovely Day iyuna 天ヶ咲麗 i dislike to add them about composer and Lyric writer
  2. Combo colors:
    Combo1 : 255,128,192
    Combo2 : 0,64,128
    Combo3 : 255,255,255
    Combo4 : 255,128,64 adjusted


[Insane]
  1. 00:10:881 (3,4,5,6,1) - Improve form? hmm...dont need to gain distances on the part i think
  2. 00:13:547 (4) - x0 y251, little more DS. no
  3. 00:16:214 (4,5,1) - The shape of a triangle? i wanna emphasize 00:16:547 - 's mainly melody, keep
  4. 00:16:881 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
  5. 00:58:881 (4,1) - Swap NC? some how?
  6. 01:25:547 (3,5) 01:26:214 (1) - - NC? ^
  7. 01:48:714 (4,5,6,1) - Swap NC? if someone point out it, i'll fix
  8. 01:43:714 (3) - Improve form pls. i dont understand the difference...


because I love Chata. yes!

gl~

Namki wrote:

hello.
As far as I can hear your soft clap sounds kinda weak, it doesn't really reflect an exact clap sound in the music imo. You may want to use this one, instead. It has a bit more delay and it is stronger itself. thx, i applied your whistle


ye, pretty neat mapset, gl~

alacat wrote:

feat.とChataの間のスペースはいらないと思います ('ω') 頑張って!☆ kdsありがとうございます!公式サイト確認したところなかったので、スペース除きました!

Shirasaka Koume wrote:

MOD初心者なので的外れな意見あるかもです ご容赦ください><
[General]
  1. Romanised Artist Gardenの譜面だとfeat.Chataだけどどうなんだろう。。 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/511637 公式サイト確認したところsolfaがついてたので今のであってるんじゃないかと思います
  2. Tagに追加: Lovely day of Girlfriends & me parasol いれました


[Easy]
  1. 00:07:214 (3) - 1/2スライダーで直前のサークルをBlanketするのは良くないそうです(初心者が読みづらいため) なるほど90度回転させました
  2. 00:55:881 - ここら辺忙しく感じました こんな感じの音取りとかどうですか? 00:56:547 - の音がボーカルシンバルともに大きい音なのでclickableにしたいです
    img
    [img](4の最初が%2000:55:881)https://puu.sh/v6J7f/c32690f633.jpg[/img]
  3. 01:02:547 (1) - オートで6000点はEasyではちょっと短いと思います かといって伸ばす事も出来ないので普通に配置したほうがいいと思います 一応RCにはぎりぎり引っかからないのとEasyなんでスピナー入れてあげたほうがいいかなぁと思って入れてますが、ほかのdiffとの統一性などを加味するとそれもいい気がしますね。ほかの人に指摘されたら変えます
  4. 01:07:547 (4,1) - 音取りに違和感を感じました 01:12:880 (4,1,2) と一緒でもいいと思います おっとこれはミスですね変えました
  5. 01:18:214 (4,1) - ^ ^


[Normal]
  1. 1/2の連打がスタックされている場所とスタックされていない場所があり違和感を感じました ノリノリなところスタックさせてないなら01:03:714 (3,4) はスタックじゃなくていいと思います まさしくその通りですね、変えました
  2. 00:55:547 (4) - 2番のケツで見えないからずらしたほうがいいかな ここだけこの配置は変なので前後調整してこの配置避けました


[Insane]
  1. 00:14:214 (2,3,4) - もう少し角度あったほうがやりやすそう 配置的にきついけど何とか少し角度つけました
  2. 01:37:547 (2,3,4) - ^ 逆っ側にもっていきました
  3. 00:54:214 (2,3) - リズム変わった直後だしスペーシング狭めた方がわかりやすいかも 確かにここだけ少しスペーシング大きいですね、変えました
  4. 01:49:047 (1) - 特に理由ないならNC外してもいいかも 一番最後にNC入れるのが個人的に好きというクソみたいな理由で入れてます、BNに言われたら消します

EasyとInsaneだけサビ入った時のカスタム違ったけど意図的じゃないなら確認してみてください! hitsound確認しようとタイミング開いたらENがkiaiタイムないことに気が付きました、併せて直しました
GL :)


thanks all guys~
posted
hi m4m from ur q
I will finish modding tomorrow.
sry being late;w;

[General]
Uhh...00:53:881 to 00:59:881 (1) - is more like a 3/4 waltz. better to add a red timing point here as 180bpm 3/4 waltz. So the somebody play this with nightcore won't fill weird here.
[Insane]
00:20:381 (1,3) - blanket
00:28:381 (3) - uhh,the slider shape isn't fit the music imo. but you know, it's a totally subjective thing. so it's depends on you.
00:59:547 (2) - should be 1/3 snapped too.
01:20:380 (3,4,5,6) - shape of square?
01:36:963 (7,4) - minor things.Try to avoid the overlap.
01:45:214 (1,2,3,4) - tbh. Just copy this pattern from the intro is kinda boring. But this still depends on you.
01:45:214 (1,2) - If you don't want to fix^.just blanket this properly plz.
01:48:047 (2,3,4) - enlarge the space a little

[Karen]
oh 2 combo colors again seriously? lol
00:01:881 (2,1) - minor things. blanket(actually 00:00:548 (1,2) - isn't blanket properly too.easy to see that if you set cs to 7)
00:12:547 (5) - nc
00:17:714 (1,2) - 01:33:047 (1,2) - why stack them? this isn't fit the music well. the space is just too small.and suddenly stop here is really weird imo.
00:30:214 (2,4) - blanket
01:43:047 (2,3) - 01:43:714 (4,1) - make space between them please. cuz the beat on 3 and 1 is strong and space can emphasize them. Just like what you did in the intro 00:27:714 (2,3) -

[Asuka]
combo color...
00:05:547 (4) - how about change this to 1/4 reversed slider?
00:26:881 (4,5) - 01:42:214 (4,5) - same ^
00:27:214 (1) - to 00:29:714 (4) - the sv could be lower. this part is calm.
00:30:714 (4,1) - blanket
00:32:547 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:37:881 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - tbh this pattern is really bad and boring. sth like 00:48:547 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - is better. If you don't want to change it please fix this 00:44:547 (1,2,3,4) - at least to keep the consistence.
00:41:047 (2,3,4) - minor things. shouldn't the space be equal?
01:09:214 (1,2,3,4) - 01:14:547 (1,2,3,4) - 01:19:880 (1,2,3,4) - 3/4 slider isn't fit the music here. there is obvious beat at the red tick. and this is even more terrible 01:15:547 (4) - it skips the 1/4 strong beat here. just personally. why don't you use 1/2? 01:25:214 (1,2,3,4) - sth like this fit well imo.

[Normal]
00:19:881 the beat at here is strong. should be clickable imo.
01:34:547 (1) - same ^
00:27:214 (1,2) - blanket
00:53:881 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the beat is kinda wrong. this is obvious a 3/4 waltz so the beat is like OooOooOoo......so pattern should be 1/2 slider-circle-1/2 slider-circle......
01:26:547 (1,2) - blanket

[Easy]
00:58:547 (4,5) - how about replace them with a 1/1 slider and a circle?
01:02:547 (1) - extend the spinner to 01:04:547 . or don't make the spinner audioable.
01:09:880 (4,1) - this overlap weird. just subjective thing.
01:48:880 (2) - replace it with a circle. this is the only 1/2 slider in this diff and it seems a little inconsistent. and this always kill the beginner.

gl~
posted
hello~
BGあとで変えるつもりなら余計な事だったかもしれないけど微妙に画質悪いの気になったから
作ってみました
http://puu.sh/v7MfX/ff5fe45790.png

(時間取れたら)あとでここにmod書きます ;-;
posted

handsome muscle wrote:


[Asuka]
combo color... ok copied insane
00:05:547 (4) - how about change this to 1/4 reversed slider? i'd like to follow the vocal. keep foe now.
00:26:881 (4,5) - 01:42:214 (4,5) - same ^

00:26:881 (4,5) - and 00:16:214 (4,5) - , 01:31:547 (4,5) - and 01:42:214 (4,5) - .
I think that these should be unified.


00:27:214 (1) - to 00:29:714 (4) - the sv could be lower. this part is calm. ok change to 0.9
00:30:714 (4,1) - blanket ok
00:32:547 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:37:881 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - tbh this pattern is really bad and boring. sth like 00:48:547 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - is better. If you don't want to change it please fix this 00:44:547 (1,2,3,4) - at least to keep the consistence.

00:32:547 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - and 00:37:881 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:43:214 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - and 00:48:547 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
I have a unity (although there are some differences somewhat)
I do not think we need to fix it. keep for now. but thanks!!


00:41:047 (2,3,4) - minor things. shouldn't the space be equal? little change
01:09:214 (1,2,3,4) - 01:14:547 (1,2,3,4) - 01:19:880 (1,2,3,4) - 3/4 slider isn't fit the music here. there is obvious beat at the red tick. and this is even more terrible 01:15:547 (4) - it skips the 1/4 strong beat here. just personally. why don't you use 1/2? 01:25:214 (1,2,3,4) - sth like this fit well imo.
Id like to follow the vocal.
update
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TitleUnicode:プリズム lovely day
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Creator:joker-
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Source:彼女と俺の恋愛日常
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Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Hi! m4m from #modreqs
[General]
  1. Tick out "Widescreen Support" since your map has no storyboard
  2. You may tick out Enable Countdown because there is no countdown when you play.
  3. Asuka_-'s Hard uses default colour combo.


[Easy]
  1. 00:55:881 (4,1) - maybe nc at (4) and remove nc at (1). It's an 3/4 (waltz) beat here. (If you fix this, also add nc at 00:57:881 (3).)


[Normal]
  1. 00:01:881 (1,1) - They're not perfectly blanket.
    00:27:214 (1,2) - ^ Maybe you could move a slider-tail to x:344 y:163 to make a perfect blanket
  2. 00:55:547 (4,1) - like in easy diff ;w;


[Asuka_-'s Hard]
  1. Maybe change to AR7? AR8 is kinda hard for newbies and too high for 3*. Also If you change to AR7, AR in this set will arrange like 3/5/7/9. (fck grammar xP)
  2. 00:55:770 - You could add a note here to make it fits with the vocal.
  3. 01:05:214 - 40% volume here is kinda low. :o
  4. I just curious why there isn't any jump here?


[Karen's Insane]
  1. Your diff doesn't have kiai x(
  2. 00:07:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - overlap sliders here may make the players miss here. So, what about something like this?
  3. 01:04:214 (3,4) - Maybe ctrl+g here?
  4. 01:05:214 - like in Hard diff.
  5. 01:31:380 (4,1) - not perfectly blanket. maybe move (1) to x:134 y:165?


[Insane]
  1. 00:25:714 (1,4) - not perfectly blanket.
  2. 00:47:881 (3) - imo ctrl+g here is a good idea


Sorry for bad mod ;w;
GL~
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- Frontier - wrote:

Hi! m4m from #modreqs
[General]
  1. Tick out "Widescreen Support" since your map has no storyboard ok
  2. You may tick out Enable Countdown because there is no countdown when you play.
  3. Asuka_-'s Hard uses default colour combo. ok


[Asuka_-'s Hard]
  1. Maybe change to AR7? AR8 is kinda hard for newbies and too high for 3*. Also If you change to AR7, AR in this set will arrange like 3/5/7/9. (fck grammar xP) ok, and change hpdrain to 5, od to 6
  2. 00:55:770 - You could add a note here to make it fits with the vocal. nice. Instead I changed 00:55:547 (3) - to 2/3slider.
  3. 01:05:214 - 40% volume here is kinda low. :oIt's my mistake xd fixed~
  4. I just curious why there isn't any jump here? Because it is low sd, it is better not to have jump!! i can not make jump in hard xd


Sorry for bad mod ;w; Thanks for good mod!!!!!!!
GL~
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TitleUnicode:プリズム lovely day
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Source:彼女と俺の恋愛日常
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posted

handsome muscle wrote:

hi m4m from ur q
I will finish modding tomorrow.
sry being late;w;

[General]
Uhh...00:53:881 to 00:59:881 (1) - is more like a 3/4 waltz. better to add a red timing point here as 180bpm 3/4 waltz. So the somebody play this with nightcore won't fill weird here.
[Insane]
00:20:381 (1,3) - blanket
00:28:381 (3) - uhh,the slider shape isn't fit the music imo. but you know, it's a totally subjective thing. so it's depends on you.
00:59:547 (2) - should be 1/3 snapped too.
01:20:380 (3,4,5,6) - shape of square? intentional
01:36:963 (7,4) - minor things.Try to avoid the overlap. i think dont need to avoid it
01:45:214 (1,2,3,4) - tbh. Just copy this pattern from the intro is kinda boring. But this still depends on you.
01:45:214 (1,2) - If you don't want to fix^.just blanket this properly plz. ok
01:48:047 (2,3,4) - enlarge the space a little

[Normal]
00:19:881 the beat at here is strong. should be clickable imo. following melodies
01:34:547 (1) - same ^ ^
00:27:214 (1,2) - blanket
00:53:881 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the beat is kinda wrong. this is obvious a 3/4 waltz so the beat is like OooOooOoo......so pattern should be 1/2 slider-circle-1/2 slider-circle...... srsly? the part is beated 1/3... i heard
01:26:547 (1,2) - blanket

[Easy]
00:58:547 (4,5) - how about replace them with a 1/1 slider and a circle? i know. but i dont wanna raise sd
01:02:547 (1) - extend the spinner to 01:04:547 . or don't make the spinner audioable. RC
01:09:880 (4,1) - this overlap weird. just subjective thing. keep
01:48:880 (2) - replace it with a circle. this is the only 1/2 slider in this diff and it seems a little inconsistent. and this always kill the beginner. the 1/2 sldier is last object. then i think beginners dont confuse it

gl~

- Frontier - wrote:

Hi! m4m from #modreqs
[General]
  1. Tick out "Widescreen Support" since your map has no storyboard
  2. You may tick out Enable Countdown because there is no countdown when you play.
  3. Asuka_-'s Hard uses default colour combo.


[Easy]
  1. 00:55:881 (4,1) - maybe nc at (4) and remove nc at (1). It's an 3/4 (waltz) beat here. (If you fix this, also add nc at 00:57:881 (3).) no


[Normal]
  1. 00:01:881 (1,1) - They're not perfectly blanket.
    00:27:214 (1,2) - ^ Maybe you could move a slider-tail to x:344 y:163 to make a perfect blanket
  2. 00:55:547 (4,1) - like in easy diff ;w; no ;w;


[Insane]
  1. 00:25:714 (1,4) - not perfectly blanket.
  2. 00:47:881 (3) - imo ctrl+g here is a good idea nooooo


Sorry for bad mod ;w;
GL~


no reply means fixed~
thank you both!

@とよさきまん
posted
general
00:53:881 - sounds like this should be 3/4 time signature until the next red line? not sure though but it seems better with drums
if you change time signature you might also want to change you nc usage to fit
00:43:214 - 01:23:880 (1) - missing finish // 01:42:547 -
seems like ^ also apply to gds


insane
00:07:214 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - bit weird to ignore all 1/4 here but then map them on 00:08:547 - I think you could add the 1/4 here too with less spacing or something
00:34:714 - I get what you are following in this part, but completely ignoring all these guitars felt so weird :c though it makes sense so I guess it's fine to keep
but 00:50:714 - should really be mapped cause you made this part much more dense and all other guitars are at least on sliderend/repeat. maybe just http://i.imgur.com/1bAZJW8.jpg ?

01:09:547 (2,3,4) - could probably be a bit more spaced? vocals seem more intense here to me
01:27:714 (6,1) - movement here is kinda awkward which doesnt fit well considering most of the map has comfortable movement into sliders. something like http://i.imgur.com/4sCNKrf.jpg could work
01:32:880 (5,1) - similar thing here


karen
00:13:881 (1,2) - stacks before had the stronger sound on the second beat, so this seems a bit unfitting. could maybe unstack completely or stack 00:14:047 (2,3) - instead? // 01:29:214 (1,2) - same here

00:30:547 (3) - kills momentum when you had the 3/4 gaps spaced before, how about http://i.imgur.com/YGe716E.jpg ?
00:43:214 (1,2) - bit similar to first point, I think these take away from your whole stack concept
01:05:214 (1) - 40% volume for this part seems really low o: might be a mistake cause 01:15:880 - is similar and 70% ?
01:48:047 (2,3) - maybe same stack thing as the others mentioned lol

-_
00:05:547 (4) - how about http://i.imgur.com/DYF51CZ.jpg would feel pretty intuitive to play with the 1/4 gaps before and match drums better
00:10:881 (4,1) - 00:21:547 (4,1) - can these be more consistent (like having 00:21:547 (4) - lead more into the next object for example). maybe like http://i.imgur.com/LTuG3Y6.jpg ?
00:50:214 (2) - same comment as on top diff here
01:10:714 (2) - stack seems unfitting with your other stack usage, could just space or stack 01:10:547 (1,2) - instead?
01:21:214 (1,2) - ^
01:27:547 (4,1) - would look cute if overlap was more centered http://i.imgur.com/jmXCzC9.jpg

normal
00:08:214 - bit too dense for this part, you could just make it a circle instead. right now it's more intensly mapped than the more intense part right after
00:20:047 (2) - could also just be a single circle cause you follow guitar here anyways // 01:35:380 (2) - same
01:03:880 (4,5) - might also be a bit too dense for this part, how about http://i.imgur.com/pMvO3Vl.jpg
01:47:880 (1) - http://i.imgur.com/bJbvoYL.jpg could try this rhythm? or http://i.imgur.com/OgP6uBw.jpgI think that makes the 1/2 things stand out more

easy
seems alright

call me back.
posted

Lasse wrote:

general
00:43:214 - 01:23:880 (1) - missing finish // 01:42:547 -

-_-
00:05:547 (4) - how about http://i.imgur.com/DYF51CZ.jpg would feel pretty intuitive to play with the 1/4 gaps before and match drums better
00:10:881 (4,1) - 00:21:547 (4,1) - can these be more consistent (like having 00:21:547 (4) - lead more into the next object for example). maybe like http://i.imgur.com/LTuG3Y6.jpg ?
00:50:214 (2) - same comment as on top diff here
01:10:714 (2) - stack seems unfitting with your other stack usage, could just space or stack 01:10:547 (1,2) - instead?
01:21:214 (1,2) - ^
01:27:547 (4,1) - would look cute if overlap was more centered http://i.imgur.com/jmXCzC9.jpg

all fixed!! Thanks!
upd
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188,331,101880,2,0,P|230:319|281:317,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,375,102214,1,8,0:0:0:0:
331,375,102380,1,0,3:2:0:0:
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351,121,103047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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213,42,105047,1,0,3:2:0:0:
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97,299,105880,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,247,106047,2,0,P|212:235|268:241,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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posted

Lasse wrote:

general
00:53:881 - sounds like this should be 3/4 time signature until the next red line? not sure though but it seems better with drums
if you change time signature you might also want to change you nc usage to fit hmm...i listened the part many times although i sound like 1/3 pattern is correct...?
00:43:214 - S:C3 finish sound dont fit on here imo
01:23:880 (1) - missing finish // 01:42:547 -
seems like ^ also apply to gds


insane
00:07:214 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - bit weird to ignore all 1/4 here but then map them on 00:08:547 - I think you could add the 1/4 here too with less spacing or something
00:34:714 - I get what you are following in this part, but completely ignoring all these guitars felt so weird :c though it makes sense so I guess it's fine to keep
but 00:50:714 - should really be mapped cause you made this part much more dense and all other guitars are at least on sliderend/repeat. maybe just http://i.imgur.com/1bAZJW8.jpg ?

01:09:547 (2,3,4) - could probably be a bit more spaced? vocals seem more intense here to me
01:27:714 (6,1) - movement here is kinda awkward which doesnt fit well considering most of the map has comfortable movement into sliders. something like http://i.imgur.com/4sCNKrf.jpg could work
01:32:880 (5,1) - similar thing here

normal
00:08:214 - bit too dense for this part, you could just make it a circle instead. right now it's more intensly mapped than the more intense part right after
00:20:047 (2) - could also just be a single circle cause you follow guitar here anyways // 01:35:380 (2) - same
01:03:880 (4,5) - might also be a bit too dense for this part, how about http://i.imgur.com/pMvO3Vl.jpg
01:47:880 (1) - http://i.imgur.com/bJbvoYL.jpg could try this rhythm? or http://i.imgur.com/OgP6uBw.jpgI think that makes the 1/2 things stand out more

easy
seems alright

call me back.


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