Sakura00:00:758 (1,2,3,4,5) - it would be cool if you add some emphasis to these, maybe distance or volume, maybe these two, vocals intensity is not the same through this section (i know that next slider have some distance increase but it isn't that noticeable)
00:07:279 (2,3) - maybe if you keep following vocals here it would be better, (2) can be missread, 00:07:932 (4) - this is fine because the player can get the beat better than before because he heard it 2 times, idk if i explained myself well:(
00:09:399 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - the same as before, you could add some emphasis, even if it's some directional change it would be good, intensity isn't the same through the stream
00:19:182 (5,6,7,8) - maybe increasing their distance gradually instead of a jump at the end? i think it could be better, like before intensity grows through the whole part
00:28:801 - this is a very personal opinion but i think you could put a circle here, this little gap breaks consistency, but there's nothing wrong tho, as i said before it's just my opinion
00:38:095 - ^ this is worse because it can be missread, but still nothing wrong with it, it's nice to add some reading difficulty
i see you made this a lot of times, probably it's something you wanted to be like that so i'll stop pointing it
00:42:823 (2,3) - this can be missread but it's fine for adding reading difficulty too
00:43:312 - you miss a beat, even if it's soft you could map it, a slider could fit nice here
00:47:062 - you could try to map this too, a slidertail could be nice, a circle works too, you miss the start of vocals
00:53:747 (7,1) - i really like this, ending a relatively fast section and making the player wait for the next note at the slider tail fits really nice
01:00:105 (7) - this should have the same distance from (6) and (1) imo, you emphasized (1) with a finish too so the jump between these should be high instead of short
01:06:301 (5) - hm this is too out of the playfield imo, try moving it up a bit
01:08:584 - maybe cut kiai here and start it again 01:10:703 - here?
01:20:486 (3,4) - i think these are too close together and they have the same intensity as the rest, maybe use a bit more of that corner
01:23:584 (6,1) - this jump could be higher too, intensity from (6) to (1) is higher than (5) to (6)
01:30:105 (6) - maybe emphasize this with a little jump
01:37:442 (5,6,7,8) - same as i said at the beginning
01:48:366 (1) - maybe open it, i think it looks a bit messy and doesn't fit overall:(
02:10:214 (5,6) - i think this jump is too big compared to the whole map, it's so easy to missread, also there's nothing to emphasize, you could try making the (5) slidertail point to the next circle
02:35:975 (2) - maybe move this to the middle of these sliders, just aesthetics
02:51:464 (1) - you could try to stack it on the previous slider tail so it doesn't get out of the playfield, it also looks better
02:53:258 (3) - i feel these could fit better with two circles
03:01:165 - you miss a sound here, try to put a circle or just extend previous slider
03:04:671 - you miss a sound here, on this red tick and the next one, maybe a slidertail fits nice
03:30:350 (2,3) - this is a bit awkward to play, doubles in general are awkward, it's mapped well so no need to change, i just wanted to point it
03:53:747 (1,2) - same as i said at the beginning, this could be missread, just let the player hear the beat twice and then add this pattern, maybe repeat this slider or make the circle out of it, this is a pretty personal one too
05:03:529 (6) - NC maybe
You could take a little recheck on emphasis, there are some notes that doesn't go that well with the song intensity
Also, personally i don't really like 00:15:595 (6,1) - these that much, they look a bit messy on this SV, but this is a personal opinion